Comments on community poems by jarcher54
- Okinawa The 1st Poem (Kinsley Lee)
In my mind, Okinawa is a lovely semitropical paradise, and a place of...
January 14th, 2024 22:33 - nature (NinjaGirl)
Fun to read, and the circling back (in literary terms this is \"ring...
January 14th, 2024 22:21 - Blocking The Light (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Nice work, you halfwit writer you! Very visceral and musical too. Do you...
January 14th, 2024 22:15 - Dreams of the Fish (Thomas W Case)
Enigmatic and haunting. Like Teddy, I find this deeply sad, but it\'s...
January 14th, 2024 22:12 - The Fig Tree and the Bird (Parisab)
Your title evokes Aesop\'s fables... the Fox and the Grapes, the Lion and...
November 19th, 2023 15:35 - Heavy Hearts and Dandelions (Parisab)
They say there are no words... but you found the right ones. I recall as...
November 19th, 2023 15:30 - Sillyness 101 (Hzugman)
What a coincidence! I just read your latest poem not long after you...
November 18th, 2023 23:14 - My Mom is Dying (Gray0328)
Ah, Courtney, so relatable, so human. My mom died after a short intense...
November 18th, 2023 20:00 - Lucifer\'s Flaw (Gray0328)
A succinct and haunting description... you had me on the lookout, scanning...
November 18th, 2023 19:57 - A Pocketful of Catacombs (ADarkerMind)
Streets of London has inspired and haunted me for decades... one of my...
November 18th, 2023 19:39 - an energy of change (ADarkerMind)
Chilling... and HOW did you know June 14 is my birthday?
November 18th, 2023 19:27 - My Thoughts (The Fife Wanderer)
I appreciate the irony of one who can think of nothing to write composing...
November 18th, 2023 19:24 - summer storm (Katdream)
I love the ring composition... soldiers at the beginning and at the end,...
November 18th, 2023 19:18 - Guilt of Longing (Firefall)
A fine soliloquy, simple and honest, very universal. Those fading...
November 18th, 2023 19:14 - Sinking into Sadness (Firefall)
Your poems are consistently rewarding. Simple on the surface, sincere...
November 4th, 2023 20:36
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