Comments on community poems by jarcher54

• I saw it on the Dr. Phil Show! (Jane Frye) Now Janet.... love that line!
  August 19th, 2023 00:55
• Would You Kindly Pass the Entonox Babe (Neville) A breath of fresh air you are. Never heard of the stuff either (ether?). ...
  August 19th, 2023 00:53
• T.A.A.Y.A.(Taaya) (Jerry Wayne Lawrence) Quite a harem you seem to know!
  August 19th, 2023 00:47
• L.L.E.J.L.A.(Llejla) (Jerry Wayne Lawrence) Quite a pyramid you\'ve built there... oh my... I cannot handle her. But...
  August 18th, 2023 00:44
• All Bases Covered (Neville) Don\'t forget... you may see her image on the back of a pancake when you...
  August 18th, 2023 00:42
• Sétana (Bigguy) I read some Old Irish tales in college... this is such a wonderful...
  August 18th, 2023 00:29
• Blessed to Share (Bobby O) The older I get (and I\'m now 69), the more important sharing becomes. I...
  August 18th, 2023 00:26
• Ample Faith (Lheom) We all need motivation... but it\'s more motivating to know someone on the...
  August 18th, 2023 00:25
• Khushiya Laut Aayegi (Lheom) I cannot read Hindi but the sound is moving... and your smile is perfect...
  August 18th, 2023 00:23
• Be strong (David A Liebermann) Lovely thoughts. Sign of a lovely man.
  August 17th, 2023 23:59
• My Fault. (No_one) Taking the blame is the ultimate act of love, even if you don\'t realize...
  August 17th, 2023 23:56
• Cuts. (No_one) A vivid and coherent explanation for something most of us find...
  August 17th, 2023 23:54
• Speak. (No_one) You have an incredible gift for insight and eloquence. This made me cry.
  August 17th, 2023 23:52
• Childhood (No_one) So lovely... poignant... stunning... honest. You are a gift young lady. ...
  August 17th, 2023 23:51
• not in your image, but my own (Queer-with-a-pen) I forgot to say... wow
  August 17th, 2023 23:46
• not in your image, but my own (Queer-with-a-pen) Stunningly moving... maybe the most sincere thing I have read on these...
  August 17th, 2023 23:45
• Awakening (Sorenbarrett) PS check for typos... descent, it\'s... but yes the last line is...
  August 17th, 2023 23:37
• Awakening (Sorenbarrett) Bigguy nailed it... a lot of modern verse is so stuffed with images and...
  August 17th, 2023 23:33
• Hear (Terriblesoul977) Beautiful and painful. A very insightful account of those dark...
  August 7th, 2023 13:37
• Try (Terriblesoul977) There is nothing like a bittersweet love poem to make my day! ...
  August 7th, 2023 13:34
• I Am Woke (RL Randall) Resistance to wokeness stems from fear of facing the truth. We all know...
  August 6th, 2023 23:47
• Learn something new each day (Hzugman) I\'ll try brother, I promise!
  August 6th, 2023 23:23
• Loaded gun (Sorenbarrett) Sorry to disagree... when we were kids several of us all agreed to never...
  August 3rd, 2023 11:00
• A Girl in the Red Bowler Hat (Neville) My wife had an uncle who ran away in his mid-teens and joined the circus...
  August 3rd, 2023 09:13
• Calling Again The Forgotten Names (Kinsley Lee) Very moving and a good reminder!
  August 3rd, 2023 09:07
• Growing up (Stephwrites) You made this old man cry! Success!! More please!
  August 2nd, 2023 12:38
• Rise Above Lies (Sheikhspeare) Lovely! Share more please!
  August 2nd, 2023 12:36
• A warrior or worrier is always a choice. (Shruti14) PS Welcome to MPS. Your contributions are very appreciated. You are...
  August 2nd, 2023 12:35
• A warrior or worrier is always a choice. (Shruti14) Interesting analysis... but the worrier can USE those worriers as a...
  August 2nd, 2023 12:33
• When sunsets paint the canvas of the soul, Within, new chapters silently unroll (Shruti14) Lovely message, lovely imagery, and a steely-eyed look at reality. ...
  August 2nd, 2023 12:31
• Is honesty the best policy in a cruel world? (Shruti14) I really appreciate the sincerity of your poems. Walking us like a kind...
  August 2nd, 2023 12:26
• MORE SHORTIES (4-7) (Michael Edwards) Oh my... isn\'t the rule one poem a day? (-: Was her name by any chance...
  July 6th, 2023 20:41
• Life Reclaimed (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Well good morning to you too! (-:
  June 23rd, 2023 08:54
• \"Schooldays\" ; 23 June, 2023 (Soman Ragavan) I am a little intimidated by the AI analysis... lol. You know the...
  June 23rd, 2023 00:20
• Fallen Too Deep (Bam) Please recover dear Bambi! I wish to hear more from you... I was moved by...
  June 23rd, 2023 00:16
• Painted in colours (The Dreamer) Very fine start!
  June 23rd, 2023 00:14
• In Memory Of Late Gen. Richard S. Witcomb (Kinsley Lee) I had heard the name but not the whole story....we need more people like...
  June 23rd, 2023 00:11
• Status Quo (FallingAwake2) The word \"sad\" is a poem all by itself, but your three stanzas are...
  June 23rd, 2023 00:06
• In Crevice (Garth Rakumakoe) A hard-hitting series of observations... these lines flow so naturally, so...
  June 22nd, 2023 02:56
• Waiting (FallingAwake2) This is truly haunting! A lovely thing to read as I turn off the lamp and...
  June 22nd, 2023 02:52
• FEEL (The Dreamer) I love your comment as much as your poem. Creation is a wondrous thing to...
  June 22nd, 2023 02:50
• Good Morning (Peter Gates) As I head to bed at 2:47 am I will drift away to sleep with your wise...
  June 22nd, 2023 02:48
• Afrikaner (EvenwheniLie) Powerful and thoughtful... sometimes what others need to do is just...
  June 22nd, 2023 02:35
• My Wonder Of Life. (Goldfinch60) A litany of the things we love is always consoling to write and moving to...
  June 22nd, 2023 02:30
• Just Judgement (Orchidee) No believer here but I know a proper and sincere hymn when I see it! A...
  June 22nd, 2023 02:26
• Goes down easier with a rhyme (Poetic Dan) Inspired observation... like a spoonful of sugar! But slightly fewer...
  June 22nd, 2023 02:23
• What is Wrong With This Tongue (Neville) We are delighted to have this latest offering... you are sort of necessary...
  June 22nd, 2023 02:18
• No More Blues for These Tired Eyes (Neville) We all need our occasional Neville fix... I\'m already getting the shakes....
  June 9th, 2023 02:05
• A Wounded Dog ... (Kurt Philip Behm) When you bring us a \"longer\" poem like this, the density of your...
  June 8th, 2023 15:53
• The Ode To The Unknown Patriotic Martyrs\' Grave At Hongju (Kinsley Lee) One heart, one grave. Very moving piece. Thanks for the history too!
  June 7th, 2023 22:16
• Modern Day Mystic (Introverted Sage) A creative description of a curious soul. Sigh.
  June 7th, 2023 12:08
• Unidentified extraterrestrial(s) willingly abducted me (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) I am not sure that was a dream... that\'s what they WANT you to think. ...
  June 7th, 2023 11:47
• of Inclusivity (L. B. Mek) So strange that some US states are outlawing \"diversity, equality. and...
  June 7th, 2023 11:45
• all in the name of love (Queer-with-a-pen) Whatever that name is, most of us have one we can chant in our quiet...
  June 7th, 2023 11:38
• Cut the Roots (A Boy With Roses) PS I am often reminded that the word \"regret\" is probably the most...
  June 7th, 2023 11:34
• Cut the Roots (A Boy With Roses) I think I was crying in that same coffee shop that day! Yes, been there...
  June 7th, 2023 11:32
• Birthrights In Limbo (+2) (Kurt Philip Behm) An out-and-out love poem! So even the great philosopher can be smitten...
  June 7th, 2023 11:28
• Gullible (Terriblesoul977) You are not the first to have made this mistake... bittersweet and...
  June 7th, 2023 11:24
• Don\'t isolate yourself (Hzugman) Awww. Another thoughtful ditty. You know this applies to you... I hope...
  June 7th, 2023 11:21
• A Diet for Our Eyes and Our Souls (AuburnScribbler) It is a challenge to \"turn it off\" so thanks for the encouragement. Our...
  June 7th, 2023 11:19
• Spellbound (Goddess of the Mist) You capture wistful universal human sensations and feelings so...
  June 7th, 2023 11:14
• Elegy to the memory of Anthony Bourdain (Parisab) Thank you for the reminder.
  May 12th, 2023 02:50
• To Helios (Joakim Bergen) This reminds me of the anonymous Greek hymns to the gods. I enjoyed the...
  May 11th, 2023 09:27
• Happenings (Fay Slimm.) The form of this little piece reinforces the density of its subject. Your...
  May 11th, 2023 09:19
• Coronation Kiss (Orchidee) Glad Fido made a friend. Fido is of course the best, most fitting doggie...
  May 7th, 2023 10:23
• Dark Effigy (Kurt Philip Behm) Both clever and thoughtful.
  May 6th, 2023 22:33
• Conspiracy Theory (MendedFences27) Witty and subtly poignant. A whole love story in a few couplets. Not a...
  May 6th, 2023 22:30
• Pomegranate (Parisab) Pomegranates are the sexiest of fruits. Your whole poem is full of heavy...
  May 6th, 2023 22:25
• My birthday tomorrow (Ok Waleed) Happy birthday... but one bit of bad news... you will not be fully...
  May 6th, 2023 22:22
• We need (Sorenbarrett) Very witty little piece!
  May 6th, 2023 22:14
• Underground Poet (James Michael) Rage on brother!
  April 12th, 2023 23:46
• Is it true? (Hzugman) Dark humor is always edgy. Good little aphorism!
  April 11th, 2023 23:41
• Ghost Ship (A Song) (AuburnScribbler) Fresh meaning to the term Ghost Ship. I approve. Very moving.
  April 11th, 2023 23:39
• 16 (Kinsey Peterson) The poems are always about me... what a beautiful painful statement. This...
  April 10th, 2023 23:10
• Incredible India (Mottakeenur Rehman) India is a magnificent conundrum. Your hopeful focus on its better side,...
  April 10th, 2023 22:33
• Helpless. (NinjaGirl) I hope the deep sadness you relate is largely in your imagination! But...
  April 8th, 2023 12:33
• Periodically (Dakota) Wonderful turns of phrase all through... you are very adept at this. I...
  April 7th, 2023 22:46
• A Train (Nafis Light) Pleasant rhythm and rhyme... not overly heavy and regulated. The endings...
  April 7th, 2023 22:43
• \"Little slut\" \"Princess\" \"Baby girl\" (NinjaGirl) Well this story is beautifully told and I for one hope to never forget it....
  April 7th, 2023 22:39
• Self Deception (Firefall) A thoughtful description of one\'s inner thoughts!
  April 7th, 2023 22:29
• 4-Given (Kurt Philip Behm) Deeper and deeper... you are adept at narrating the life of the mind.
  April 7th, 2023 22:27
• Not your Mother (Fae Amy) A splendid rendition of internal thoughts... keep \'em coming OK?
  April 7th, 2023 22:25
• Dear Poet (Dakota) Honesty is your strong suit... I hate you! (-:
  April 7th, 2023 22:22
• Existentialism emancipation proclamation manumission... (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) Hell of a proclamation! I absolutely adore the line \"clubbing with...
  April 7th, 2023 19:26
• THE FIRST ROW (Drei Shakespeare) Your cozy beautiful captivity is so relatable to many of us! I\'d say...
  April 7th, 2023 18:21
• those (Jon Nakapalau) Your economy to make such an expansive statement is so effective here. ...
  April 7th, 2023 18:18
• When They Would Lose Their Shadows (Neville) You brought that figure to life... a true gift my friend. This is moving...
  April 7th, 2023 18:16
• Unsung (Fay Slimm.) Thoughtful use of quiet words and calm rhythms. I appreciate how you can...
  April 7th, 2023 18:10
• Yesterday I Loved You (A Boy With Roses) Damn I missed you and your outpourings of mesmerizing imagery, pain and...
  April 7th, 2023 01:37
• We should (Hzugman) Maybe so, but I am much more likely to eyeball it and cut first! I am not...
  April 7th, 2023 01:33
• J.E.E.T.R.A.(Jeetra) (Jerry Wayne Lawrence) I think I registered her too!
  March 17th, 2023 00:10
• Descartes Reborn (Kurt Philip Behm) If consciousness dies in the forest, does anyone hear it die? ...
  March 17th, 2023 00:05
• Sad Flowers Die Alone (Mr. Not) Very un-haha on its face, but so blatantly so that you turn the sadness...
  March 17th, 2023 00:01
• SO AM I WRONG? (Michael Edwards) You\'re both right!
  March 14th, 2023 11:00
• WITHIN (Michael Edwards) Glad you included the witty sketch! As a daily cyclist I can never get...
  March 14th, 2023 10:57
• Commonwealth Considerations (Orchidee) Lots of colonial past comes flooding forth. This generation can overcome...
  March 14th, 2023 10:53
• Beyond The Ether (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) A poet of few but efficient words. Thanks for this haunting and...
  March 14th, 2023 10:49
• For Babunechka (Nathan711) You use more traditional structure than maybe you are aware! Your...
  March 14th, 2023 10:44
• Odes to Fog (Quemis) Thanks for this contribution. Writing about writing is a fine old...
  March 14th, 2023 10:36
• Winter Breeze (Jerry Reynolds) Heck, inspired me too... the neighbors are suggesting I put pants on.
  March 14th, 2023 10:10