Comments on community poems by jarcher54
- We need (Sorenbarrett)
Very witty little piece!
May 6th, 2023 22:14 - Underground Poet (James Michael)
Rage on brother!
April 12th, 2023 23:46 - Is it true? (Hzugman)
Dark humor is always edgy. Good little aphorism!
April 11th, 2023 23:41 - Ghost Ship (A Song) (AuburnScribbler)
Fresh meaning to the term Ghost Ship. I approve. Very moving.
April 11th, 2023 23:39 - 16 (Kinsey Peterson)
The poems are always about me... what a beautiful painful statement. This...
April 10th, 2023 23:10 - Incredible India (Mottakeenur Rehman)
India is a magnificent conundrum. Your hopeful focus on its better side,...
April 10th, 2023 22:33 - Helpless. (NinjaGirl)
I hope the deep sadness you relate is largely in your imagination! But...
April 8th, 2023 12:33 - Periodically (Dakota)
Wonderful turns of phrase all through... you are very adept at this.
I...
April 7th, 2023 22:46 - A Train (Nafis Light)
Pleasant rhythm and rhyme... not overly heavy and regulated. The endings...
April 7th, 2023 22:43 - \"Little slut\" \"Princess\" \"Baby girl\" (NinjaGirl)
Well this story is beautifully told and I for one hope to never forget it....
April 7th, 2023 22:39 - Self Deception (Firefall)
A thoughtful description of one\'s inner thoughts!
April 7th, 2023 22:29 - 4-Given (Kurt Philip Behm)
Deeper and deeper... you are adept at narrating the life of the mind.
April 7th, 2023 22:27 - Not your Mother (Fae Amy)
A splendid rendition of internal thoughts... keep \'em coming OK?
April 7th, 2023 22:25 - Dear Poet (Dakota)
Honesty is your strong suit... I hate you! (-:
April 7th, 2023 22:22 - Existentialism emancipation proclamation manumission... (Rew4er2nail)
Hell of a proclamation! I absolutely adore the line \"clubbing with...
April 7th, 2023 19:26 - THE FIRST ROW (Drei Shakespeare)
Your cozy beautiful captivity is so relatable to many of us! I\'d say...
April 7th, 2023 18:21 - those (Jon Nakapalau)
Your economy to make such an expansive statement is so effective here. ...
April 7th, 2023 18:18 - When They Would Lose Their Shadows (Neville)
You brought that figure to life... a true gift my friend. This is moving...
April 7th, 2023 18:16 - Unsung (Fay Slimm.)
Thoughtful use of quiet words and calm rhythms. I appreciate how you can...
April 7th, 2023 18:10 - Yesterday I Loved You (A Boy With Roses)
Damn I missed you and your outpourings of mesmerizing imagery, pain and...
April 7th, 2023 01:37 - We should (Hzugman)
Maybe so, but I am much more likely to eyeball it and cut first! I am not...
April 7th, 2023 01:33 - J.E.E.T.R.A.(Jeetra) (Jerry Wayne Lawrence)
I think I registered her too!
March 17th, 2023 00:10 - Descartes Reborn (Kurt Philip Behm)
If consciousness dies in the forest, does anyone hear it die? ...
March 17th, 2023 00:05 - Sad Flowers Die Alone (Mr. Not)
Very un-haha on its face, but so blatantly so that you turn the sadness...
March 17th, 2023 00:01 - The Good don’t die young. (David Wakeling)
Lots of richly conflicting images but fun to read!
March 14th, 2023 11:25 - SO AM I WRONG? (Michael Edwards)
You\'re both right!
March 14th, 2023 11:00 - WITHIN (Michael Edwards)
Glad you included the witty sketch! As a daily cyclist I can never get...
March 14th, 2023 10:57 - Commonwealth Considerations (Orchidee)
Lots of colonial past comes flooding forth. This generation can overcome...
March 14th, 2023 10:53 - Beyond The Ether (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
A poet of few but efficient words. Thanks for this haunting and...
March 14th, 2023 10:49 - For Babunechka (Nathan711)
You use more traditional structure than maybe you are aware! Your...
March 14th, 2023 10:44 - Odes to Fog (Quemis)
Thanks for this contribution. Writing about writing is a fine old...
March 14th, 2023 10:36 - Winter Breeze (Jerry Reynolds)
Heck, inspired me too... the neighbors are suggesting I put pants on.
March 14th, 2023 10:10 - It doesn\'t hurt to be lucky (Hzugman)
You can be so subtle! Making love and dinners parallel puts love in...
March 14th, 2023 10:09 - Grandma (Zhangyuyouyu)
I felt that way more about my mom but I miss my grandmothers after decades...
March 14th, 2023 10:05 - The Rhyme of Time (Thinkerbell)
Songbirds are nature\'s time-keepers, but are of course not a clock. Not...
March 14th, 2023 10:01 - Depends upon how you look at it (Hzugman)
You get a like just for the humorous rhyme!
February 23rd, 2023 15:06 - Black Seed (Kurt Philip Behm)
Thanks for this most excellent verse, Dr. Doom.
February 23rd, 2023 15:05 - Kindness Of Snow. (Goldfinch60)
Here in Texas snow isn\'t very common... but it is a lovely metaphor for...
February 16th, 2023 04:00 - A Kite\'s flight (Thinkerbell)
I faved this so I can come back to it... a child\'s dream come true......
February 16th, 2023 03:58 - Lost & Found (Drunk_on_poetry)
An intriguing little scavenger hunt... I love the idea of putting things...
February 16th, 2023 03:56 - A Kite\'s flight (Thinkerbell)
A fine metaphoric flight... look out for lightning! The last two stanzas...
February 16th, 2023 03:51 - The Cat in The Mist (Eileen Clark)
You lovingly captured that feeling we all have wondering about that...
February 16th, 2023 03:45 - The Rose Of Sharon(Mugunghwa) (Kinsley Lee)
Even if it were not the national flower, this simple lovely piece about...
February 15th, 2023 00:55 - THOUGHTS (OkumuRaven)
Thanks for reminding us of that respect we owe our mothers, who get up...
February 15th, 2023 00:52 - This is Love (Parisab)
Sweet Valentine\'s Day treat!
February 14th, 2023 23:14 - A Father’s Love (Martika Latay)
PPS I love your last couplet:
... a heartache no one can heal, but...
February 13th, 2023 00:37 - A Father’s Love (Martika Latay)
This is touching on the anniversary of my father\'s death. We may not be...
February 13th, 2023 00:36 - The great fall (EvenwheniLie)
I assume your reference to the \"great fall\" also hints at the great loss...
February 13th, 2023 00:33 - The great fall (EvenwheniLie)
I enjoy your free flow of thought, heading in different directions,...
February 13th, 2023 00:31 - Death by freedoms (EvenwheniLie)
Ironically, I just read another poem on this site about captivity. ...
February 13th, 2023 00:27 - Galaxies (Sumit Datta)
Doc, thanks for sharing your wonder! Galaxies are almost too much for the...
February 13th, 2023 00:24 - To my children (Kitty the naughty poet)
Wait, are you psychic? My daughter and her husband spent 10 days with us...
February 12th, 2023 21:29 - Tomorrow (Quemis)
I second LB\'s statement... your poems are indispensable and have been...
February 12th, 2023 21:19 - ARTHRITIS { Self Portrait } (Eileen Clark)
Lovely poem, gutsy painting! As Oliver Twist was wont to plead, More...
February 12th, 2023 16:01 - needless (Jon Nakapalau)
This little puzzle poem is driving me crazy! In a good way of course!
February 12th, 2023 02:07 - Dancing in the Street (Parisab)
Yes, those cruelly patrolled, sterile streets paved with fear and now...
February 12th, 2023 02:04 - Be \'the best\' (NafisaSB)
A good lesson for us all!
February 12th, 2023 02:00 - Salsa dreams (Reynaldo Casison)
That\'s one kind of salsa dream I can appreciate. Being in Texas, I often...
February 12th, 2023 01:59 - Smoking (2781)
How you went from a late-day smoke to your faith was a little puzzling at...
February 12th, 2023 01:56 - Arthur Remembered (Kurt Philip Behm)
The first two lines stand alone, but a little too sentimental for you. ...
February 12th, 2023 01:51 - I wanna grow old with you (Kitty the naughty poet)
Not very naughty! But I\'ll take it. (-:
February 12th, 2023 01:48 - My Lavender Chair (Eileen Clark)
A sweet little poem. It is tangibly sincere in its lovingly described...
February 12th, 2023 01:47 - The Photograph (Thinkerbell)
A fine meditation on the interplay between photographs, reality, and time....
February 9th, 2023 10:11 - THE ROOF OF THE MOUTH (Michael Edwards)
I dunno... this seems pretty serious to me! I have had trouble uploading...
February 9th, 2023 10:05 - Blood Moon (Parisab)
Mahsa has been my screen saver since her death. The inhumanity of the...
February 8th, 2023 22:38 - The Sins of Us (Parisab)
This is enigmatic but offers some memorable images and reeks of mature...
February 8th, 2023 22:35 - I am what I am (2781)
Good questions... I\'ll withhold my opinions... for now!
February 8th, 2023 22:31 - The Poetic Child (Andersson Sanchez)
Thanks for this dense little meditation on innocence and the enigmatic...
February 8th, 2023 22:28 - The Shedding Of Our Skin (KenyaMcghee)
A heartfelt meditation on the hopefulness and apprehensions that come with...
February 8th, 2023 22:24 - Naive (Andi)
Yes, Eve\'s appearance blows the whole thing up into a mind blower!
February 8th, 2023 22:12 - Pretty cats (Rainbow)
The respect for cats, and the keen observations, are sweet. Playful and...
February 8th, 2023 22:01 - Sirens (Sorenbarrett)
LOL! Even gods don\'t stand a chance! A sweet subtle reference to...
February 8th, 2023 21:59 - To beat the band (Ode to Lewis Carroll) (Sorenbarrett)
OK, at first I was meh... but as I reread it, I decided it\'s damn clever!
February 8th, 2023 21:56 - why so lonesome, cowboy? (Queer-with-a-pen)
This piece is lovely and tender and fiercely moving... your details are...
February 8th, 2023 20:45 - Alone (Zuzu)
Zuzu, don\'t stop! It\'s good therapy, and your sincerity makes it moving...
February 8th, 2023 20:21 - \"Unyielding Resolve: A Warrior\'s Anthem\" (Siranoben)
Job well done!
February 7th, 2023 23:13 - Mother Goose (Norman Flagtea)
I like how you built this... it is full of suggestion and hints at lives...
February 7th, 2023 23:11 - Waiting room (Norman Flagtea)
This is delightful. A witty and imaginative piece, full of respect,...
February 7th, 2023 23:08 - A Teacher (Esteven)
Sweet little tribute to teachers... very clever and succinct. I...
February 7th, 2023 23:05 - Happy 211th birthday Charles Dickens (Rew4er2nail)
This was fun and creative... and a fitting tribute to an author who...
February 7th, 2023 22:57 - Me and she and the dog (Hzugman)
Watch for rug burns!
February 7th, 2023 10:47 - ***Your Love is not enough*** (Gurpreet Singh)
Ah, what a painful piece of honesty! I will remember that last part: ...
February 7th, 2023 10:03 - Daddy (Christina8)
Love your honesty. You work through your thoughts so crisply.
February 7th, 2023 10:00 - Icy Tundra (Christina8)
Thanks for taking a break from nursing to nurse our little souls with your...
February 7th, 2023 09:58 - Alone, alone. (NewWolf)
Well-wrought meditation on the mystery of how to make \"us\" back into...
February 7th, 2023 09:54 - Captive (Fay Slimm.)
Your own compulsion to sing is a marvel of nature, and we are fortunate...
February 7th, 2023 09:50 - The Existence Of Happiness (Lavenderlover)
Your honesty is courageous and your poems are tender. They make my day...
February 7th, 2023 09:41 - Someplace Where There Are Whales (Neville)
Save a seat
February 7th, 2023 02:18 - Chameleon (Thinkerbell)
Very observant, and a witty translation of a natural phenomenon into and...
February 5th, 2023 20:43 - Baptizing The Vacuum (Kurt Philip Behm)
Many of our deepest enigmas fiercely and splendidly rendered into words,...
February 5th, 2023 20:21 - Unconnected thoughts (Hzugman)
Very creative way of cheating by submitting two (or three?) poems in one...
February 5th, 2023 11:25 - HEREFORD ART GALLERY (Zyggy Corinthian)
I always read the poem BEFORE reading the author\'s comment... of course...
January 31st, 2023 11:08 - Poetry for everyone (Hzugman)
High minded and lowbrow! LOL
January 31st, 2023 11:02 - The Song of Nightmares Storm (Lavenderlover)
A safety pin or an oncoming car... both such menaces in a dream! Fourteen...
January 31st, 2023 11:02 - Witches Don\'t Burn (Lavenderlover)
Fascinating thought... witches are confident and mysteriously powerful. ...
January 31st, 2023 10:17 - three tabs (Poeticminami)
how I exactly see you... I love the unexpected word order. \"Artifact...
January 31st, 2023 10:13 - Charming but not Sincere (Jane Frye)
Very playful, and very observant. OK, just a poem... yeah like we believe...
January 31st, 2023 10:10 - Blue Eyes (Mr. Not)
Very observant of you. Sweet little love song.
January 29th, 2023 21:47 - I saw it on the Dr. Phil Show! (Jane Frye)
One must watch at least one to understand why one avoids them. Like...
January 29th, 2023 12:47 - V.E.L.G.R.A.(Velgra) (Jerry Wayne Lawrence)
If that\'s her name, I bet I can find her on google! I\'ll beware,...
January 29th, 2023 12:42
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