Comments on community poems by jarcher54

• 𝓐 𝓡𝓸𝓼𝓮 𝓓𝓻𝓲𝔃𝔃𝓵𝓮𝓭 𝓲𝓷 𝓜𝓸𝓻𝓷𝓲𝓷𝓰 𝓓𝓮𝔀 (Dove) At first I thought... a little saccharine, a little predictable... but as...
  May 29th, 2021 02:07
• land of vended broken heart (Jon Nakapalau) What a portrait! Your little vignette is poignant in its simplicity and...
  May 29th, 2021 01:58
• Ode to my dear aunt (Subregi) I like the staccato, slightly unnatural artifice you built here. Did she...
  May 29th, 2021 01:52
• A recipe for hurt! (Sue.evans) A sweet little sort of short-line sonnet. Thanks for the hopeful \"new...
  May 23rd, 2021 10:23
• Let Go (Rebmasters) Advice we all consider and usually reject... things are so compelling! ...
  May 23rd, 2021 10:19
• You Don\'t Know Me (A Boy With Roses) You are brave enough to be morbid sometimes. I love you because you are...
  May 23rd, 2021 01:11
• The Little Was Big (Satishverma) I appreciate your little poems... they are dense, full of surprises, and...
  May 9th, 2021 00:48
• trail to sleep (Dusk arising) I will remember \"where no reasoning prevails\" above all the interesting...
  May 9th, 2021 00:43
• Haif- Promises (Satishverma) I\'m intrigued by your bold, simple juxtaposed images of despair. The...
  May 9th, 2021 00:38
• My little slice of heaven (Poetic Dan) The other night my 31-year-old daughter texted me that, as she was...
  May 9th, 2021 00:32
• Through the Lens of Drunk Eyes (A Boy With Roses) Hard not to burnish one\'s regrets... all that worrying about them makes...
  May 9th, 2021 00:28
• Depth (Dr. Strangelove) Thanks for reminding us that depth is essential... the world today is...
  May 9th, 2021 00:23
• Somewhere in Time (Ron parrish aka wordman) Nothing wrong with some wistful longing... if you find this place, please...
  May 9th, 2021 00:21
• Daddy, Can I Go Outside? (Lovedud) So intense and bitter it is haunting and beautiful and painful. Elusive...
  May 8th, 2021 01:05
• Incoherent Rendez-Vous (Dewypoetry) I can drink to this! Interesting twist on the haiku-like form...
  May 8th, 2021 00:54
• Body Song (Lovedud) This is very clever in a wonderful way! I am glad I stumbled on it.
  May 8th, 2021 00:51
• The twinge of the poet\'s motherhood (Ashraf ul Alam Shikder) Thanks for shouting out silently in such a thoughtful form. Several...
  May 8th, 2021 00:39
• A recap and recount of pandemic lockdowns worldwide (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽) I love your thoughtful observations here... I fear most of us will return...
  May 7th, 2021 23:57
• A dream (Ashraf ul Alam Shikder) Haunting... I like the bare bones of this little revelry.
  May 7th, 2021 23:49
• Haiku- 47 (Ashraf ul Alam Shikder) Very thoughtfully crafted message... I like how you abandoned the...
  May 7th, 2021 23:46
• Phantom (Ashraf ul Alam Shikder) Dave is right... the last four lines are fascinating... human mass...
  May 7th, 2021 23:39
• The Girl I Love and Live For (Kevin Michael Bloor) I am not sure which of you is more blessed... but it\'s pretty clear you...
  May 7th, 2021 23:33
• Best Mans\' Speech (Andy Hunter) OK, you win. This is full of every trite tope of warnings and advice for...
  May 7th, 2021 23:30
• Thatch (Neville) Ha ha... and here I have wished I had a thatch roof all my life, just for...
  May 7th, 2021 23:16
• Take Pride in Liking (M.E.M.) Humorous subject, and I appreciate your candor! It\'s also very erotic in...
  May 7th, 2021 23:09
• Meditation (Fay Slimm.) Interesting, compelling stanza form... that last offset word waits like a...
  May 7th, 2021 22:41
• Blue of May (Myself and me) lovely.
  May 7th, 2021 22:35
• Rain (Myself and me) How did you do this? It\'s so understated, bare like a haiku, profound,...
  May 7th, 2021 22:31
• The Earth Worm-a sonnet  (Dove) Yes, they deserve THIS sonnet. It\'s not quite a classic sonnet, but it...
  May 7th, 2021 22:26
• The Boy That Lost His Hat (Harry Atkinson) Harry, I am still trying to figure out what I like about your poems. They...
  May 7th, 2021 22:17
• Sleep Deprived (A Boy With Roses) I have come to the unremarkable but little-acknowledged conclusion that...
  May 7th, 2021 22:10
• My Bank Holiday (Andy Hunter) Still pondering how \"bank holiday\" snuck into our poetical lexicon! ...
  May 5th, 2021 09:15
• CHRISTMAS ~ FIVE HAPPY HAIKU ! (ANGELA & BRIAN) I miss your goofy eternal optimism. Hope you guys are doing well.
  April 23rd, 2021 01:04
• Robot Feelings (Mad Matt Rambles) I enjoyed the ramble... pretty clever tour de force... this stimulated...
  April 23rd, 2021 01:01
• ENJOY THE TRIP (Andy Hunter) Drat, I decided to look at one little harmless poem before I go to bed and...
  April 22nd, 2021 00:48
• Wrinkled Petals (Ifeanyichukwu) Such a powerful image of a beautiful people in crisis. I hear the...
  April 22nd, 2021 00:39
• Message to old me (Thelala) Sweet little pep talk. Like you found your own message in a bottle. Mind...
  April 10th, 2021 10:36
• My Body Is A Holy City (A Boy With Roses) You do indeed carve faces into trees, into pretty much everything! I love...
  April 10th, 2021 09:30
• The Dog is Out (Liam Power) Goodness, yes. One does find oneself pawing and whimpering at the door,...
  April 10th, 2021 02:31
• Humble (Pacifique Niyitanga) This poem is as humble--and as compelling--as the message it brings. Its...
  April 10th, 2021 02:26
• Daffodils (Kevin Michael Bloor) I was about to say what Goldfinch added... The daffodils are the herald of...
  April 10th, 2021 02:22
• \"Girl In Pieces\" (She_was_torture) \"Girl in Pieces\" is a haunting book... but it is as much about the will...
  April 10th, 2021 02:18
• The Human Beings (Kurt Philip Behm) Hunting what others fear takes some fortitude. I don\'t know if you meant...
  April 10th, 2021 02:00
• INEQUALITY BY TWO (Michael Edwards) Like OAP , I am a little unsure what you mean... then I slap myself and...
  April 10th, 2021 01:53
• Rush of Ecstasy (A Boy With Roses) Reason to live? Is this really you? Seriously, watching you move...
  April 10th, 2021 01:43
• MOURNING THE MORNING (Joe Marcello) Yes, I too don\'t know what a worm even looks like!
  April 10th, 2021 01:37
• hope (Dusk arising) A nice thought for spring time... like the old is new again! Maybe we...
  April 10th, 2021 01:35
• TAKING THE RISE (Michael Edwards) Thanks for the lift!
  April 4th, 2021 08:52
• inherent Truth (L. B. Mek) Could you repeat that?
  April 3rd, 2021 02:57
• Sappho\'s Isle of Dreams (Kevin Michael Bloor) Thanks... very smooth, melodious, and evocative. I was once a Greek...
  April 1st, 2021 21:50
• A WHITE CAR NATION (Joe Marcello) In my neck of the woods all the cars are silver-gray! But what I see when...
  March 26th, 2021 23:32
• Inside every living being (Poetic Dan) This picture is a treasure, a poem in itself. Growing up I liked two...
  March 26th, 2021 23:26
• on the precipice..... (SureshG) A powerful image, as Dave says, and for me a bit Miltonian, anticipating a...
  March 26th, 2021 23:15
• light of hope (Dusk arising) You seldom get gut-punched this hard by mere words... I don\'t know...
  March 26th, 2021 22:50
• Uncertainty (John Prophet) Ouch... no end game? I like how you can\'t see the end of this word-play...
  March 25th, 2021 22:46
• Last Romantic (A Boy With Roses) Wandering is exactly what you are doing here, wandering though images and...
  March 25th, 2021 22:42
• Jerry the fox terrier (Dusk arising) If your next poem is about a fox, we\'ll know who\'s channeling whom. ...
  March 9th, 2021 23:40
• The depths of my soul (Olivia.) An internal waterfall is a blessing. You made something palpable and...
  March 9th, 2021 23:31
• To a Friend (Jerry Reynolds) Perfect way to recycle that debris!
  March 9th, 2021 23:28
• Complex Simplicity (Netashi) Wonderful accounting of humdrum daily events rendered with wit and...
  March 9th, 2021 01:41
• Haiku #03082021 (Netashi) Ha ha, I evade perfection every day! Your clever haiku proves you wrong....
  March 9th, 2021 01:37
• Semiosis (A Boy With Roses) Four final words, very insightful and connecting your experience with your...
  March 9th, 2021 01:35
• Scented roses (a vote for kidney donation) (Ifeanyichukwu) I can only try to imagine how you must feel about this. You really have...
  March 8th, 2021 14:31
• Changing Times (A Boy With Roses) There is little as moving as revisiting scenes of one\'s less happy past. ...
  March 8th, 2021 01:42
• Still Frames (FredPeyer) The interplay between poetry/words and images is always tantalizing to...
  March 8th, 2021 01:34
• historys enemy (Dusk arising) Wonderful conceit here... I was taken from the state of Indiana as a small...
  March 7th, 2021 01:06
• I Spend a Lot of Time with People that Don\'t Exist (Quemis) By the way, this is the most wonderful title to a poem on this site!
  March 7th, 2021 00:59
• I Spend a Lot of Time with People that Don\'t Exist (Quemis) I think your Author\'s Comment caused the most consternation here... your...
  March 7th, 2021 00:58
• Long Winter (Quemis) Sweet little study of the anticipation of spring. I call her Persephone!
  March 7th, 2021 00:52
• I am Creation (Gesenia Burley) I am not religious, but your faith translates beautifully. Retelling the...
  February 22nd, 2021 02:17
• Poem, The Night We Met (AwHec8) Take me forward to the innocent past... a very bittersweet way of saying...
  February 20th, 2021 12:42
• Natural Selection (Samer Amin) Bees are among the most intriguing creatures. I can watch them for hours...
  February 20th, 2021 12:26
• T-Town (Jerry Reynolds) I was thinking a little Poe inspiration, but also a little Dickensian. ...
  February 20th, 2021 12:13
• the sun tomorrow (Dusk arising) Here in Texas we have forgotten tales of warmth. I deeply enjoyed this...
  February 20th, 2021 12:02
• Piss-Poor Poems (Kevin Michael Bloor) Most of us write for ourselves, but we hope someone else appreciates, or...
  February 20th, 2021 11:36
• Dream (Nishant kumar soni) Yes, a dream can bring the dead back to life, if only for a moment. And...
  February 18th, 2021 14:10
• L.A. Sex (A Boy With Roses) Ah, misguided youth! This made me blush!
  February 18th, 2021 13:58
• Jailed in an uncompleted building (Ifeanyichukwu) This is like a fist to the stomach. Wishing you and those under this...
  February 18th, 2021 13:49
• Like my pen (Nishant kumar soni) I love reading your little poem. It is full of personal intense feelings...
  February 18th, 2021 10:04
• Unconfined (Fay Slimm.) Ah, maybe what I thought was a typo in the title is a subtle message......
  February 17th, 2021 06:22
• Mysterious. (Fay Slimm.) I pasted this over the definition of rainbow in my old Webster\'s. I...
  February 17th, 2021 05:59
• Gratitude to God for gratis blessings (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽) From one who does not pray or practice any religion, and who (fortunately)...
  February 17th, 2021 05:29
• When life was really child\'s play (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽) The innocence you project with this simple, rich, memory-inducing verse...
  February 17th, 2021 05:20
• Soft Violins (A Boy With Roses) angels playing prehistoric airs in your ears beats the heck out of...
  February 11th, 2021 22:28
• Duality (A Boy With Roses) Very deft phrase, the mind\'s asylum. Why didn\'t I think of that? It\'s...
  February 11th, 2021 22:12
• meaningfulness (Dusk arising) Real art shows courage. It was pretty brave of you to be so candid. ...
  January 21st, 2021 22:41
• Weaponry (Fay Slimm.) You are so right. Many photos of violence, natural or other, seem as if...
  January 20th, 2021 11:12
• THE CARNAGE OF THE TIME (Thomas J. Dooley) Quite the optimist there Tommy! I\'m doing my part to stamp out the...
  January 20th, 2021 11:07
• Reasons for Leaving (Neville) There\'s a story there... or do we each imagine we know what this refers...
  January 20th, 2021 11:05
• Alone (Jerry Reynolds) I love how you broke heartache into two clean independent words. This is...
  January 20th, 2021 11:02
• My world (Thomascumm) Everyone has a \"my world\" but we don\'t always visit our own world with...
  January 20th, 2021 11:00
• Infinite Atoms (A Boy With Roses) Bite marks indeed! Your outpourings are almost overwhelming! I think I...
  January 20th, 2021 10:56
• Inauguration Day (Jerry Reynolds) Happy New Year! New feathers indeed.
  January 20th, 2021 10:54
• When Once I was Ten (Alan .S. Jeeves) Thanks giving us all an excuse to look back. Playful, sincere, and yet...
  January 20th, 2021 10:48
• Tough Love (Kevin Michael Bloor) Wait, I thought Rudyard Kipling was deceased? Very witty! Thanks.
  January 20th, 2021 10:43
• Her Ride (Goddess of the Mist) I\'ve known a few gals with a hint of petrol in their hair but never put...
  December 23rd, 2020 01:24
• You (Stephanieh1996) Your devotion is a brave and beautiful thing. It overflows the page, and...
  December 20th, 2020 03:11
• That Point in my Life (FredPeyer) I bet you aren\'t really very grouchy. The rest I can tell from...
  December 20th, 2020 03:01
• A PAIR OF ANTIQUES (Michael Edwards) Did you wear them? Or are you a collector???
  December 20th, 2020 02:55
• Burn Like the Sun (Goddess of the Mist) On first reading this seemed almost impenetrable. On second reading it...
  December 20th, 2020 02:53