Comments on community poems by jarcher54

• I am Creation (Gesenia Burley) I am not religious, but your faith translates beautifully. Retelling the...
  February 22nd, 2021 02:17
• Poem, The Night We Met (AwHec8) Take me forward to the innocent past... a very bittersweet way of saying...
  February 20th, 2021 12:42
• Natural Selection (Samer Amin) Bees are among the most intriguing creatures. I can watch them for hours...
  February 20th, 2021 12:26
• T-Town (Jerry Reynolds) I was thinking a little Poe inspiration, but also a little Dickensian. ...
  February 20th, 2021 12:13
• the sun tomorrow (Dusk arising) Here in Texas we have forgotten tales of warmth. I deeply enjoyed this...
  February 20th, 2021 12:02
• Piss-Poor Poems (Kevin Michael Bloor) Most of us write for ourselves, but we hope someone else appreciates, or...
  February 20th, 2021 11:36
• Dream (Nishant kumar soni) Yes, a dream can bring the dead back to life, if only for a moment. And...
  February 18th, 2021 14:10
• L.A. Sex (A Boy With Roses) Ah, misguided youth! This made me blush!
  February 18th, 2021 13:58
• Jailed in an uncompleted building (Ifeanyichukwu) This is like a fist to the stomach. Wishing you and those under this...
  February 18th, 2021 13:49
• Like my pen (Nishant kumar soni) I love reading your little poem. It is full of personal intense feelings...
  February 18th, 2021 10:04
• Unconfined (Fay Slimm.) Ah, maybe what I thought was a typo in the title is a subtle message......
  February 17th, 2021 06:22
• Mysterious. (Fay Slimm.) I pasted this over the definition of rainbow in my old Webster\'s. I...
  February 17th, 2021 05:59
• Gratitude to God for gratis blessings (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽) From one who does not pray or practice any religion, and who (fortunately)...
  February 17th, 2021 05:29
• When life was really child\'s play (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽) The innocence you project with this simple, rich, memory-inducing verse...
  February 17th, 2021 05:20
• Soft Violins (A Boy With Roses) angels playing prehistoric airs in your ears beats the heck out of...
  February 11th, 2021 22:28
• Duality (A Boy With Roses) Very deft phrase, the mind\'s asylum. Why didn\'t I think of that? It\'s...
  February 11th, 2021 22:12
• meaningfulness (Dusk arising) Real art shows courage. It was pretty brave of you to be so candid. ...
  January 21st, 2021 22:41
• Weaponry (Fay Slimm.) You are so right. Many photos of violence, natural or other, seem as if...
  January 20th, 2021 11:12
• THE CARNAGE OF THE TIME (Thomas J. Dooley) Quite the optimist there Tommy! I\'m doing my part to stamp out the...
  January 20th, 2021 11:07
• Reasons for Leaving (Neville) There\'s a story there... or do we each imagine we know what this refers...
  January 20th, 2021 11:05
• Alone (Jerry Reynolds) I love how you broke heartache into two clean independent words. This is...
  January 20th, 2021 11:02
• My world (Thomascumm) Everyone has a \"my world\" but we don\'t always visit our own world with...
  January 20th, 2021 11:00
• Infinite Atoms (A Boy With Roses) Bite marks indeed! Your outpourings are almost overwhelming! I think I...
  January 20th, 2021 10:56
• Inauguration Day (Jerry Reynolds) Happy New Year! New feathers indeed.
  January 20th, 2021 10:54
• When Once I was Ten (Alan .S. Jeeves) Thanks giving us all an excuse to look back. Playful, sincere, and yet...
  January 20th, 2021 10:48
• Tough Love (Kevin Michael Bloor) Wait, I thought Rudyard Kipling was deceased? Very witty! Thanks.
  January 20th, 2021 10:43
• Her Ride (Goddess of the Mist) I\'ve known a few gals with a hint of petrol in their hair but never put...
  December 23rd, 2020 01:24
• You (Stephanieh1996) Your devotion is a brave and beautiful thing. It overflows the page, and...
  December 20th, 2020 03:11
• That Point in my Life (FredPeyer) I bet you aren\'t really very grouchy. The rest I can tell from...
  December 20th, 2020 03:01
• A PAIR OF ANTIQUES (Michael Edwards) Did you wear them? Or are you a collector???
  December 20th, 2020 02:55
• Burn Like the Sun (Goddess of the Mist) On first reading this seemed almost impenetrable. On second reading it...
  December 20th, 2020 02:53
• Grave Concern (Dlherrmann) Watch your step, as more and more coffins are biodegradable! You slyly...
  December 17th, 2020 02:18
• Mastication (Neville) Oh, MASTICATED... my bad
  December 16th, 2020 23:01
• Marital covenant chaste away errant infidelity (Rew4er2nail) Goodness! I forgive you --I think! (-:
  December 16th, 2020 22:59
• The Meaning in Nothing (Nicholas Browning) A very fine, subtle tour de force. I appreciate the simple descriptive...
  December 16th, 2020 22:31
• Afternoon Blues (A Boy With Roses) Such a flow. Felt swept along, breaking into that old school sliding down...
  December 16th, 2020 22:23
• TO VACCINATE OR NOT TO VACCINATE ? ~ A 7 4 3 SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN) You guys are a scream... a great inconvenience indeed!
  December 16th, 2020 03:27
• DAFTS I CALLS IT - COLLECTION 1 (3) (Michael Edwards) And in your drawing why is the man in the moon trying to set off a bomb...
  December 7th, 2020 02:21
• DAFTS I CALLS IT - COLLECTION 1 (3) (Michael Edwards) Ah, but I adore many of the contributions that are not easily understood. ...
  December 7th, 2020 02:19
• Hurt and Traumatized (JordanandThomas29) I was really moved when you said I am angry at me. Very insightful and...
  November 13th, 2020 02:34
• Circles (Dasim) I love the simplicity and fluidity of this piece. It starts out a little...
  November 12th, 2020 16:18
• they never leave you (revisited) (Dusk arising) So many of my family and friends\' veteran fathers and uncles and grandpas...
  November 8th, 2020 11:59
• War Poets (Kevin Michael Bloor) Great insight into the glorification and romanticizing of war through the...
  November 8th, 2020 11:51
• Peevish Poets (Kevin Michael Bloor) A perfect return to action for action\'s sake!
  November 2nd, 2020 15:27
• the world is and continues, my grandfather died (Conradconrad) This is priceless . . . so many stunning and haunting recollections,...
  November 2nd, 2020 15:19
• Silent as the Grave (A Poem on the Dourest of Halloweens (2020)) (AuburnScribbler) tart it up--we don\'t say it that way in the USA but I laughed. I wonder...
  November 1st, 2020 08:40
• On Tour. (Doggerel Dave) I am pretty sure the missus and I stayed at the same place in Levelland,...
  November 1st, 2020 02:42
• Tale of a Solemn Tombstone (Alex Arnot) I skipped Trick or Treat this year so as to not invite the Reaper to pass...
  November 1st, 2020 02:37
• Or Did It (Kurt Philip Behm) When I read old books that are largely neglected, I often wonder if I will...
  November 1st, 2020 02:12
• UNRELATED (1, 2, 3) (Michael Edwards) One should never ignore suspicions! Blends of catarrh? Sounds like some...
  November 1st, 2020 02:08
• becoming (Queer-with-a-pen) We should all be so loved as to have a beacon to show us the way home and...
  November 1st, 2020 01:09
• eleventh night (Ugwu Erochukwu Shedrach) I have not reconciled beauty and death, but I do think that beauty cannot...
  November 1st, 2020 00:54
• Gone Girl (Kevin Michael Bloor) Love your last couplet... I knew where you were headed and was ready for...
  October 31st, 2020 12:11
• I wish god would take my soul (Avivan) The world is inherently indifferent to us, but it is not inherently cruel....
  October 31st, 2020 12:06
• What to do When You’re Alone Again (Midnight drive) I appreciate the line You won\'t forget her when you are dead. Suicide...
  October 30th, 2020 02:05
• Pray For Those (ForeverJesus7) I would add, DO something for them...
  October 30th, 2020 02:01
• WORLD COURT ORDER (Joe Marcello) Clever title!
  October 30th, 2020 01:58
• It’s nothing personal (Aa Harvey) Damn, you figured us out.
  October 30th, 2020 01:55
• No Pain No Gain (Quemis) A good old Anglo-Saxon alliterative rune, fit to be carved on a mossy...
  October 30th, 2020 01:45
• Comatose (Quemis) Loss is the only promise made, well stated. Quite a litany of memorable,...
  October 30th, 2020 01:39
• Thoughts of a survivor (TheLonelyPoet90) You may feel alone in the little world that includes the perpetrator, but...
  October 26th, 2020 00:38
• Count down until E day (Germanamericanchurch) Methinks Midas touched his own face... thanks for the playful images...
  October 22nd, 2020 23:45
• SONG OF A FIST (Ifeanyichukwu) Your poems are so poignant, anytime, but especially now. We are thinking...
  October 22nd, 2020 01:41
• Chemistry of Love Acrostic. (Goldfinch60) Einsteinium indeed... fleeting and only exists on the path from one...
  October 20th, 2020 01:51
• Chrysalis (A Boy With Roses) I noticed the silence. This is a fine return to action! Isn\'t making a...
  October 20th, 2020 00:10
• \"Oh no - not your operation!\" (Doggerel Dave) Just the right amounts of light and heavy. Doggerel do!
  October 20th, 2020 00:05
• Absence by Inference (Dlherrmann) That row of cedar trees has a way of enduring longer than the wooden...
  October 19th, 2020 01:08
• go then (Dusk arising) I have three brothers, all like me getting up there in their 60\'s. Your...
  October 19th, 2020 01:04
• NIGELLA (Michael Edwards) Oh my... looking up Cooking Channel now...
  October 19th, 2020 01:01
• History Has a Way of Living Twice (Steve Unruh) Steve, a well-wrought catalog and argument. Very dense and interesting to...
  October 19th, 2020 00:45
• BULLET IN THE HEART OF EGWU EKE (inpursuit of national rebirth) (Ifeanyichukwu) Nigeria is not alone in need of unified rebirth, but it certainly is near...
  October 18th, 2020 03:05
• The Kingdom (Crowns4Christ) Blue, I respect your assurance and viewpoint, and the urge to sing it out....
  October 18th, 2020 02:06
• Let me back in (Down the rabbithole) Aching to be understood indeed! At the end of this exquisitely sensitive...
  October 18th, 2020 01:57
• Shadows Shadow (WL Schuett) Given all and moved on... that\'s as astute an observation as I can...
  October 18th, 2020 01:50
• Mere exist (Myself and me) Most of us have a wound or two like that. Quite an observant, tender...
  October 18th, 2020 01:45
• The Face (Dasim) Oh my!
  October 18th, 2020 01:42
• PEACE IN ADVERSITY ~ ANGELA 💛 BRIAN ~ A PANTOUM (ANGELA & BRIAN) Me and the missus kept one job and lost one, but feel beyond blessed to...
  October 18th, 2020 01:36
• Dropped to Earth (Goddess of the Mist) An angel must fall at least once to have any street cred. Being...
  October 18th, 2020 01:30
• bored through overkill (Dusk arising) ears bored... love it
  October 18th, 2020 01:19
• Making. (Fay Slimm.) You have been a good student and become a good master, all at the same...
  October 17th, 2020 13:32
• Joker44’s Side – Writing Poetry (Nafis Light) You are right, it isn\'t a hobby, it is sui generis, a compulsion for some...
  October 17th, 2020 13:27
• Joker44’s Side – Forever Together (Nafis Light) Nothing wrong with a sweet fantasy of eternal togetherness! Made me a...
  October 17th, 2020 13:09
• Quarantine Senryu (Lorna) I don\'t order pizza as much as I\'d like, must watch my girlish figure! ...
  October 17th, 2020 13:06
• A NEW DOOR (Michael Edwards) LOL is it you who are broken and warped? Front doors are things of great...
  October 17th, 2020 12:56
• Blondie - A tribute to Debbie Harry (FineB) Debby Harry, fierce and brave, talented and humble, my fantasy at every...
  October 17th, 2020 12:53
• VOICES IN CLENCHED FISTS (Ifeanyichukwu) Yes, what have our leaders been doing? Police chiefs, judges,...
  October 17th, 2020 12:42
• Grandfather\'s Road (Dlherrmann) Yes, as I revisit the land of my family where I grew up, I imagine all the...
  October 17th, 2020 12:05
• Waxing Poetic (Gary Edward Geraci) Having known a dozen hale and hearty folks who are now unexpectedly dead,...
  October 17th, 2020 11:49
• The Dent on my Pillow (Dove) Very touching... we\'ve pretty much all known that dent on the pillow. ...
  October 17th, 2020 11:40
• My Dreams (Sadia Risa Anika) I\'m nearer the end of my dream journey than the beginning. Your...
  October 17th, 2020 11:35
• My Memoir in honor of Taliesin (Trenz Pruca) As Goldfinch suggests, you\'ll be remembered as much as the greatest lords...
  October 17th, 2020 11:15
• Pascal\'s Wager (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) An interesting pairing of poems. While I find Pascal\'s wager to be a bit...
  October 17th, 2020 02:36
• of november fallen (Dusk arising) One continuous compelling sentence. As clever as it is touching.
  October 17th, 2020 02:26
• Waving at Dolphins (Neville) Yes, they do curtsy, what insight!
  October 17th, 2020 02:22
• Revitalize. (Fay Slimm.) Being a nonconformist in most every respect myself, I\'ll diverge from the...
  October 17th, 2020 02:16
• in fields of green (Dusk arising) A sadness always overcomes me when I reflect how those calling for peace...
  October 17th, 2020 01:56
• I Have Tried to Write an Epic (Steve Unruh) I fantasized a number of epics as a teen poet. They are still in the back...
  October 11th, 2020 23:50
• Addiction. (Fay Slimm.) You are clearly addicted to singing your passions!
  October 11th, 2020 23:35
• Chemicals (John McChord) John, you are observant beyond your years. I won\'t say wise for who is...
  September 26th, 2020 00:11
• Year Six (John McChord) A well-crafted example of that paradox. It\'s not exactly an ethical...
  September 25th, 2020 23:58