Comments on community poems by jarcher54

• It doesn\'t hurt to be lucky (Hzugman) You can be so subtle! Making love and dinners parallel puts love in...
  March 14th, 2023 10:09
• Grandma (Zhangyuyouyu) I felt that way more about my mom but I miss my grandmothers after decades...
  March 14th, 2023 10:05
• The Rhyme of Time (Thinkerbell) Songbirds are nature\'s time-keepers, but are of course not a clock. Not...
  March 14th, 2023 10:01
• Depends upon how you look at it (Hzugman) You get a like just for the humorous rhyme!
  February 23rd, 2023 15:06
• Black Seed (Kurt Philip Behm) Thanks for this most excellent verse, Dr. Doom.
  February 23rd, 2023 15:05
• Kindness Of Snow. (Goldfinch60) Here in Texas snow isn\'t very common... but it is a lovely metaphor for...
  February 16th, 2023 04:00
• A Kite\'s flight (Thinkerbell) I faved this so I can come back to it... a child\'s dream come true......
  February 16th, 2023 03:58
• Lost & Found (Drunk_on_poetry) An intriguing little scavenger hunt... I love the idea of putting things...
  February 16th, 2023 03:56
• A Kite\'s flight (Thinkerbell) A fine metaphoric flight... look out for lightning! The last two stanzas...
  February 16th, 2023 03:51
• The Cat in The Mist (Eileen Clark) You lovingly captured that feeling we all have wondering about that...
  February 16th, 2023 03:45
• The Rose Of Sharon(Mugunghwa) (Kinsley Lee) Even if it were not the national flower, this simple lovely piece about...
  February 15th, 2023 00:55
• THOUGHTS (OkumuRaven) Thanks for reminding us of that respect we owe our mothers, who get up...
  February 15th, 2023 00:52
• This is Love (Parisab) Sweet Valentine\'s Day treat!
  February 14th, 2023 23:14
• A Father’s Love (Martika Latay) PPS I love your last couplet: ... a heartache no one can heal, but...
  February 13th, 2023 00:37
• A Father’s Love (Martika Latay) This is touching on the anniversary of my father\'s death. We may not be...
  February 13th, 2023 00:36
• The great fall (EvenwheniLie) I assume your reference to the \"great fall\" also hints at the great loss...
  February 13th, 2023 00:33
• The great fall (EvenwheniLie) I enjoy your free flow of thought, heading in different directions,...
  February 13th, 2023 00:31
• Death by freedoms (EvenwheniLie) Ironically, I just read another poem on this site about captivity. ...
  February 13th, 2023 00:27
• Galaxies (Sumit Datta) Doc, thanks for sharing your wonder! Galaxies are almost too much for the...
  February 13th, 2023 00:24
• To my children (Kitty the naughty poet) Wait, are you psychic? My daughter and her husband spent 10 days with us...
  February 12th, 2023 21:29
• Tomorrow (Quemis) I second LB\'s statement... your poems are indispensable and have been...
  February 12th, 2023 21:19
• ARTHRITIS { Self Portrait } (Eileen Clark) Lovely poem, gutsy painting! As Oliver Twist was wont to plead, More...
  February 12th, 2023 16:01
• needless (Jon Nakapalau) This little puzzle poem is driving me crazy! In a good way of course!
  February 12th, 2023 02:07
• Dancing in the Street (Parisab) Yes, those cruelly patrolled, sterile streets paved with fear and now...
  February 12th, 2023 02:04
• Be \'the best\' (NafisaSB) A good lesson for us all!
  February 12th, 2023 02:00
• Salsa dreams (Reynaldo Casison) That\'s one kind of salsa dream I can appreciate. Being in Texas, I often...
  February 12th, 2023 01:59
• Smoking (2781) How you went from a late-day smoke to your faith was a little puzzling at...
  February 12th, 2023 01:56
• Arthur Remembered (Kurt Philip Behm) The first two lines stand alone, but a little too sentimental for you. ...
  February 12th, 2023 01:51
• I wanna grow old with you (Kitty the naughty poet) Not very naughty! But I\'ll take it. (-:
  February 12th, 2023 01:48
• My Lavender Chair (Eileen Clark) A sweet little poem. It is tangibly sincere in its lovingly described...
  February 12th, 2023 01:47
• The Photograph (Thinkerbell) A fine meditation on the interplay between photographs, reality, and time....
  February 9th, 2023 10:11
• THE ROOF OF THE MOUTH (Michael Edwards) I dunno... this seems pretty serious to me! I have had trouble uploading...
  February 9th, 2023 10:05
• Blood Moon (Parisab) Mahsa has been my screen saver since her death. The inhumanity of the...
  February 8th, 2023 22:38
• The Sins of Us (Parisab) This is enigmatic but offers some memorable images and reeks of mature...
  February 8th, 2023 22:35
• I am what I am (2781) Good questions... I\'ll withhold my opinions... for now!
  February 8th, 2023 22:31
• The Poetic Child (Andersson Sanchez) Thanks for this dense little meditation on innocence and the enigmatic...
  February 8th, 2023 22:28
• The Shedding Of Our Skin (KenyaMcghee) A heartfelt meditation on the hopefulness and apprehensions that come with...
  February 8th, 2023 22:24
• Naive (Andi) Yes, Eve\'s appearance blows the whole thing up into a mind blower!
  February 8th, 2023 22:12
• Pretty cats (Rainbow) The respect for cats, and the keen observations, are sweet. Playful and...
  February 8th, 2023 22:01
• Sirens (Sorenbarrett) LOL! Even gods don\'t stand a chance! A sweet subtle reference to...
  February 8th, 2023 21:59
• To beat the band (Ode to Lewis Carroll) (Sorenbarrett) OK, at first I was meh... but as I reread it, I decided it\'s damn clever!
  February 8th, 2023 21:56
• why so lonesome, cowboy? (Queer-with-a-pen) This piece is lovely and tender and fiercely moving... your details are...
  February 8th, 2023 20:45
• Alone (Zuzu) Zuzu, don\'t stop! It\'s good therapy, and your sincerity makes it moving...
  February 8th, 2023 20:21
• \"Unyielding Resolve: A Warrior\'s Anthem\" (Siranoben) Job well done!
  February 7th, 2023 23:13
• Mother Goose (Norman Flagtea) I like how you built this... it is full of suggestion and hints at lives...
  February 7th, 2023 23:11
• Waiting room (Norman Flagtea) This is delightful. A witty and imaginative piece, full of respect,...
  February 7th, 2023 23:08
• A Teacher (Esteven) Sweet little tribute to teachers... very clever and succinct. I...
  February 7th, 2023 23:05
• Happy 211th birthday Charles Dickens (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) This was fun and creative... and a fitting tribute to an author who...
  February 7th, 2023 22:57
• Me and she and the dog (Hzugman) Watch for rug burns!
  February 7th, 2023 10:47
• ***Your Love is not enough*** (Gurpreet Singh) Ah, what a painful piece of honesty! I will remember that last part: ...
  February 7th, 2023 10:03
• Daddy (Christina8) Love your honesty. You work through your thoughts so crisply.
  February 7th, 2023 10:00
• Icy Tundra (Christina8) Thanks for taking a break from nursing to nurse our little souls with your...
  February 7th, 2023 09:58
• Alone, alone. (NewWolf) Well-wrought meditation on the mystery of how to make \"us\" back into...
  February 7th, 2023 09:54
• Captive (Fay Slimm.) Your own compulsion to sing is a marvel of nature, and we are fortunate...
  February 7th, 2023 09:50
• The Existence Of Happiness (Lavenderlover) Your honesty is courageous and your poems are tender. They make my day...
  February 7th, 2023 09:41
• Someplace Where There Are Whales (Neville) Save a seat
  February 7th, 2023 02:18
• Chameleon (Thinkerbell) Very observant, and a witty translation of a natural phenomenon into and...
  February 5th, 2023 20:43
• Baptizing The Vacuum (Kurt Philip Behm) Many of our deepest enigmas fiercely and splendidly rendered into words,...
  February 5th, 2023 20:21
• Unconnected thoughts (Hzugman) Very creative way of cheating by submitting two (or three?) poems in one...
  February 5th, 2023 11:25
• HEREFORD ART GALLERY (Zyggy Corinthian) I always read the poem BEFORE reading the author\'s comment... of course...
  January 31st, 2023 11:08
• Poetry for everyone (Hzugman) High minded and lowbrow! LOL
  January 31st, 2023 11:02
• The Song of Nightmares Storm (Lavenderlover) A safety pin or an oncoming car... both such menaces in a dream! Fourteen...
  January 31st, 2023 11:02
• Witches Don\'t Burn (Lavenderlover) Fascinating thought... witches are confident and mysteriously powerful. ...
  January 31st, 2023 10:17
• three tabs (Poeticminami) how I exactly see you... I love the unexpected word order. \"Artifact...
  January 31st, 2023 10:13
• Charming but not Sincere (Jane Frye) Very playful, and very observant. OK, just a poem... yeah like we believe...
  January 31st, 2023 10:10
• Blue Eyes (Mr. Not) Very observant of you. Sweet little love song.
  January 29th, 2023 21:47
• I saw it on the Dr. Phil Show! (Jane Frye) One must watch at least one to understand why one avoids them. Like...
  January 29th, 2023 12:47
• V.E.L.G.R.A.(Velgra) (Jerry Wayne Lawrence) If that\'s her name, I bet I can find her on google! I\'ll beware,...
  January 29th, 2023 12:42
• Struggle (Hutch2784) It\'s hard not to wonder how much of a poem is personal and how much is...
  January 29th, 2023 12:40
• thursday winds (Dusk arising) Oh so sweet. You pretty much made me cry for those days. One exception...
  January 29th, 2023 12:28
• Bloodletting (Euthyphro) Ahhh... memories of donating plasma in my poor student days so so long...
  January 29th, 2023 03:06
• Messy Desk (Euthyphro) You say a lot in a few lines. Feelings are impossible to describe really....
  January 29th, 2023 03:03
• You\\\\\\\'re the Man, Little Man (Euthyphro) I\'m enchanted by this little mystery... so much speculation... who is...
  January 29th, 2023 03:01
• Autohated (AuburnScribbler) Should I print this out to read it?? No, I\'ll just copy it out longhand...
  January 29th, 2023 02:59
• Before the Year is Out, A Poem on New Year’s Eve 2022 (AuburnScribbler) Happy 2023 to you too! Love that opening salvo... I know you tried. This...
  January 29th, 2023 02:56
• Men today, gods tomorrow (Sorenbarrett) It is interesting how a list can become a poem, or a sculpture, and take...
  January 28th, 2023 20:15
• Men today, gods tomorrow (Sorenbarrett) There\'s a line missing. What rhymes with Barrett??
  January 28th, 2023 20:13
• Flawed #2 (Neville) If you\'ve made it this far with just 2 flaws, my dented hat off to you...
  January 28th, 2023 20:11
• Don\'t be so sure (Hzugman) I am CERTAIN this is witty and cute!
  January 28th, 2023 20:07
• An old poet (Aa Harvey) You got me to take a look... and comment! LOL were you begging? Thanks...
  January 28th, 2023 20:04
• Wasted (Joakim Bergen) An intriguing take on our relationship to the little things going on...
  January 28th, 2023 20:02
• Sheena (Jerry Wayne Lawrence) Her majesty must be a fierce individual! Was the husband an SOB?
  January 28th, 2023 19:59
• 2 in the morning (Poeticminami) I like the playful form and use of highlights. Thanks for sharing your 2...
  January 28th, 2023 02:42
• Today. (Fay Slimm.) Carping diem! You crack me up with your word-play!
  January 28th, 2023 02:38
• Ignoring all logic (Differ) Enchanting little soliloquy. Thanks for sharing your thoughts. I\'m...
  January 28th, 2023 02:37
• Ageless Hippie. (Goldfinch60) Remember when we all signed our notes and letters with phrases like...
  January 28th, 2023 02:32
• Demon inside me (Gqam) But you are not alone... I sense you are also a knight in shining armor...
  January 28th, 2023 02:29
• Murder (Gqam) Recognizing what you have done is the first step toward our freedom. ...
  January 28th, 2023 02:26
• Ageless Hippie. (Goldfinch60) I say never give up that idealism we uncovered within us in those heady...
  January 28th, 2023 02:23
• At Last ([email protected]) Thank goodness for the adult warning!
  January 28th, 2023 02:20
• Aight ([email protected]) I like it more every time I read it.
  January 28th, 2023 02:18
• Does God Have Nipples ([email protected]) If we were made in God\'s image, he needs all the prayers we can muster.
  January 28th, 2023 02:16
• At Last ([email protected]) Your final couplet is brilliant.
  January 28th, 2023 02:13
• Aight ([email protected]) Beautiful depiction of humanity. I am thankful I stumbled on this piece. ...
  January 28th, 2023 02:12
• closings iii (Kinsey Peterson) Joan, you are really incredibly talented at hitting us where we live. ...
  January 28th, 2023 02:08
• Fragile (Kinsey Peterson) I won\'t forget this little piece. Dangerously fragile. Very witty and...
  January 28th, 2023 02:03
• A letter to my soulmate (Domilla) A lovely message full of familiar feelings so well expressed... the...
  January 28th, 2023 02:00
• The magical eyes of.... (Pocev_Gjoshe) Falling in love twice! Once for each eye... yes I know the feeling!
  January 28th, 2023 01:56
• Mexico (Pocev_Gjoshe) I am in Texas. Many of my dearest friends\' families came from Mexico. I...
  January 28th, 2023 01:54
• Kitten \'23 (Jerry Wayne Lawrence) I do enjoy how free you are with the keyboard. Your poems are sculpture...
  January 28th, 2023 01:50