Comments on community poems by jarcher54
- Struggle (Hutch2784)
It\'s hard not to wonder how much of a poem is personal and how much is...
January 29th, 2023 12:40 - thursday winds (Dusk arising)
Oh so sweet. You pretty much made me cry for those days. One exception...
January 29th, 2023 12:28 - Bloodletting (Euthyphro)
Ahhh... memories of donating plasma in my poor student days so so long...
January 29th, 2023 03:06 - Messy Desk (Euthyphro)
You say a lot in a few lines. Feelings are impossible to describe really....
January 29th, 2023 03:03 - You\\\\\\\'re the Man, Little Man (Euthyphro)
I\'m enchanted by this little mystery... so much speculation... who is...
January 29th, 2023 03:01 - Autohated (AuburnScribbler)
Should I print this out to read it?? No, I\'ll just copy it out longhand...
January 29th, 2023 02:59 - Before the Year is Out, A Poem on New Year’s Eve 2022 (AuburnScribbler)
Happy 2023 to you too! Love that opening salvo... I know you tried. This...
January 29th, 2023 02:56 - Men today, gods tomorrow (Sorenbarrett)
It is interesting how a list can become a poem, or a sculpture, and take...
January 28th, 2023 20:15 - Men today, gods tomorrow (Sorenbarrett)
There\'s a line missing. What rhymes with Barrett??
January 28th, 2023 20:13 - Flawed #2 (Neville)
If you\'ve made it this far with just 2 flaws, my dented hat off to you...
January 28th, 2023 20:11 - Don\'t be so sure (Hzugman)
I am CERTAIN this is witty and cute!
January 28th, 2023 20:07 - An old poet (Aa Harvey)
You got me to take a look... and comment! LOL were you begging? Thanks...
January 28th, 2023 20:04 - Wasted (Joakim Bergen)
An intriguing take on our relationship to the little things going on...
January 28th, 2023 20:02 - Sheena (Jerry Wayne Lawrence)
Her majesty must be a fierce individual! Was the husband an SOB?
January 28th, 2023 19:59 - 2 in the morning (Poeticminami)
I like the playful form and use of highlights. Thanks for sharing your 2...
January 28th, 2023 02:42 - Today. (Fay Slimm.)
Carping diem! You crack me up with your word-play!
January 28th, 2023 02:38 - Ignoring all logic (Differ)
Enchanting little soliloquy. Thanks for sharing your thoughts. I\'m...
January 28th, 2023 02:37 - Ageless Hippie. (Goldfinch60)
Remember when we all signed our notes and letters with phrases like...
January 28th, 2023 02:32 - Demon inside me (Gqam)
But you are not alone... I sense you are also a knight in shining armor...
January 28th, 2023 02:29 - Murder (Gqam)
Recognizing what you have done is the first step toward our freedom. ...
January 28th, 2023 02:26 - Ageless Hippie. (Goldfinch60)
I say never give up that idealism we uncovered within us in those heady...
January 28th, 2023 02:23 - At Last ([email protected])
Thank goodness for the adult warning!
January 28th, 2023 02:20 - Aight ([email protected])
I like it more every time I read it.
January 28th, 2023 02:18 - Does God Have Nipples ([email protected])
If we were made in God\'s image, he needs all the prayers we can muster.
January 28th, 2023 02:16 - At Last ([email protected])
Your final couplet is brilliant.
January 28th, 2023 02:13 - Aight ([email protected])
Beautiful depiction of humanity. I am thankful I stumbled on this piece. ...
January 28th, 2023 02:12 - closings iii (Kinsey Peterson)
Joan, you are really incredibly talented at hitting us where we live. ...
January 28th, 2023 02:08 - Fragile (Kinsey Peterson)
I won\'t forget this little piece. Dangerously fragile. Very witty and...
January 28th, 2023 02:03 - A letter to my soulmate (Domilla)
A lovely message full of familiar feelings so well expressed... the...
January 28th, 2023 02:00 - The magical eyes of.... (Pocev_Gjoshe)
Falling in love twice! Once for each eye... yes I know the feeling!
January 28th, 2023 01:56 - Mexico (Pocev_Gjoshe)
I am in Texas. Many of my dearest friends\' families came from Mexico. I...
January 28th, 2023 01:54 - Kitten \'23 (Jerry Wayne Lawrence)
I do enjoy how free you are with the keyboard. Your poems are sculpture...
January 28th, 2023 01:50 - Depression (Undreamed_friend)
I enjoy how you bring \"nature\" into the very end of the haiku as your...
January 28th, 2023 01:39 - musings-2 (NafisaSB)
The long tradition of poetry to pass on advice and wisdom continues! ...
January 28th, 2023 01:37 - My Life (Noelle See)
It\'s compelling that being \"free\" to you is being with your family. ...
January 28th, 2023 01:35 - Peace (Undreamed_friend)
Such a delicate little poem. I found peace just reading it. Thank you. ...
January 28th, 2023 01:32 - What I see (L.Lewis24)
I love your take on the Whitman style, which shows through. A+
It...
January 28th, 2023 01:27 - The Mask (L.Lewis24)
We are somewhat naturally self-centered. It is hard to put yourself in...
January 28th, 2023 01:23 - Death Walks Among Man (M.E.M.)
I love your take on this. So many wonderful lines. This is sublimely...
January 27th, 2023 23:07 - I can’t trust my wife (Ok Waleed)
My wise late father instilled this in me... when things go off the rails,...
January 27th, 2023 22:45 - I’m a sex symbol (Ok Waleed)
Yikes. I like your bravado.
January 27th, 2023 22:41 - Valley of the Blue Moon (MJL)
This is exhilarating and exhausting. Such a dense tour de force full of...
January 27th, 2023 21:35 - Still Life (MJL)
Playful and fun. Thanks!!
January 27th, 2023 21:23 - Traumas (GabrielThePoet)
You remind me of me 50 years ago... I hope you left a little of the scars...
January 27th, 2023 21:21 - Why? (GabrielThePoet)
Why is the universal question. You appropriately did not speculate an...
January 27th, 2023 21:18 - Kam-Hong-Ro (Kinsley Lee)
I love how you created that nature-centric sensual tone and worked...
January 27th, 2023 21:14 - Becoming The Dream (Kurt Philip Behm)
More fluid and \"natural\" than your usual tight diction. I like them...
January 27th, 2023 21:12 - Missing (Kitty the naughty poet)
No one else on this site has me saying \"oh my!\" out loud like you do...
January 14th, 2023 21:19 - The bonds of friendship (Kitty the naughty poet)
Oh my! I hope this is at least partially a work of the imagination......
January 14th, 2023 21:16 - How Very Agincourt (Neville)
I did not laugh... but the smile lasted a while! I bow to your talent! ...
January 14th, 2023 14:06 - The Final Lie (Kurt Philip Behm)
Very compelling... the \"meaning\" sneaks up on you, you lose your track...
January 14th, 2023 14:01 - blood trail (Minki)
I think most of us know this feeling... very intense and compelling poem. ...
January 14th, 2023 13:52 - Art of living (NafisaSB)
A nice little throwback to those medieval didactic poems teaching people...
January 14th, 2023 13:02 - Seventy (NafisaSB)
I\'m just a couple years behind you... thanks for leading the way with...
January 14th, 2023 13:01 - Never Good Enough (Goddess of the Mist)
Well, you are certainly more than good enough when you express yourself...
January 13th, 2023 22:15 - Midnight in A Sullen Frame (A Boy With Roses)
I love following the subtle--and sometimes not-so-subtle--evolutions of...
January 13th, 2023 22:12 - the other me (A drop of mind)
Very intriguing play of words and thought... good work... by both of you!
January 13th, 2023 22:03 - I Miss Myself (Kalyani)
At the end of a busy day, I often say I miss myself. So your title got my...
December 12th, 2022 11:20 - The Cost of Living (Bella Shepard)
They say pain and broken hearts and sadness and fear and hunger and...
December 11th, 2022 23:04 - Artist And Puppets (Satishverma)
Thee past and future always connect at the present... a fine observation...
December 11th, 2022 23:01 - Crush (Zhangyuyouyu)
I love the final three lines... the connection is all that matters at that...
December 11th, 2022 22:59 - Alone (Zhangyuyouyu)
Very fine little soliloquy. Loneliness has been described a million...
December 11th, 2022 22:58 - The Chance (Poet-colette)
Not just tender! That little phrase brings in so much suggestion... women...
December 11th, 2022 22:55 - The Nightjar\'s Lament (A Boy With Roses)
Here in Texas we call the nightjar the nighthawk. Have you ever witnessed...
December 4th, 2022 03:10 - I Met A Griffin As He Prayed (Thomasine Dye)
Your poems are far from perfect, but they are perfectly wonderful. I am...
December 4th, 2022 02:57 - A Rhyme From A Lost Childhood (Thomasine Dye)
Your writing is very beautiful, very pregnant with emotion and thoughtful...
December 4th, 2022 02:49 - Eternal Strangers (Thomasine Dye)
I like this... it is over the top but sophisticated and mature at the same...
December 4th, 2022 02:44 - holding pattern (Queer-with-a-pen)
Your first two lines are truly inspired! What a felicitous way to say...
December 4th, 2022 02:41 - Starry sky (Reynaldo Casison)
I love the first two lines... very felicitous way of saying it!
December 4th, 2022 00:56 - Learning To Let the Past Go (A Boy With Roses)
Don\'t be naive... there ARE monsters under the bed!
November 5th, 2022 19:28 - Coffee and Mornings (Ahhrey)
Fun is exactly what it is! Thanks!
November 5th, 2022 19:23 - Integrity Issue (Doggerel Dave)
Delightful doggerel!
November 3rd, 2022 21:07 - Nightingale (Athsfea)
Your slightly awkward English is charming and tells a lot about you! Your...
October 31st, 2022 22:23 - CORONAVIRUS19 (Anupam)
I can only imagine losing a brother to COVID. Strength to you. I can...
October 31st, 2022 22:18 - No more (Mary c)
Short and firm, like a boxer\'s jab. Clear but mysterious. What did they...
October 31st, 2022 22:15 - SHADOWS (Ninkasi)
I\'ll just say that this is breathtakingly lovely. It is gauzy and sounds...
October 14th, 2022 19:03 - Touch and Go Ache (A Boy With Roses)
I am enjoying your recent pieces for their apparent simplicity and...
October 14th, 2022 18:58 - Ngwana Mama (Garth Rakumakoe)
This piece is so personal and poignant I am privileged to read it. It is...
October 12th, 2022 12:09 - The Black Angel. (Paul Bell)
As we say in Texas when a state representative is elected up to the state...
October 12th, 2022 12:06 - The Potion. (Paul Bell)
Very thoughtful little reverie... so many possible meanings, none of them...
October 12th, 2022 12:04 - Little Red Riding hood (That quiet girl)
A fine retelling of the story... the sacrifice to the wolves is a...
September 17th, 2022 22:48 - Panic attack (That quiet girl)
You fooled me for a minute! I read classical Greek and started trying to...
September 17th, 2022 22:43 - Lost in Alzheimer\'s (Shavon Harrington)
A pithy commentary on the concept of fading away from yourself... we pray...
September 11th, 2022 00:41 - A HOME (Sabo30)
I love a good story. Your continuous, run-on self-narrative is haunting...
September 11th, 2022 00:35 - Love In Sadness (Robert Isaacs Chiwala)
Ain\'t it the truth! Sweet reminder of lost loves, never really gone.
September 11th, 2022 00:31 - Words of Heart (Dr. Soma)
It\'s interesting how we fall into patterns and architecture when...
September 11th, 2022 00:29 - Work Daze On Weak Ends (RickthePoetWarrior)
Thanks for a little laugh and for TRYING to make art out of bytes and...
September 9th, 2022 11:22 - A SWEET POISON (Raymond shawa)
OK, this is intriguing and a bit scary! I like the complexity of your...
September 9th, 2022 02:33 - Musings (Orchidee)
Interesting and thoughtful musings... to a doubter like me, so much (not...
September 9th, 2022 02:27 - a song (NafisaSB)
PS Your title is a double entendre, because \"song\" is both your subject...
September 9th, 2022 02:21 - a song (NafisaSB)
I am dubious of your final couplet, but I do appreciate your rendition of...
September 9th, 2022 02:20 - Sun Sighted but Otherwise Unassuming (Neville)
Self-portrait? I dunno but ya nailed me!
September 9th, 2022 02:15 - Devils bride revisited (Tallisman)
I do enjoy your spirited rhyming stories! I think I know this woman...
September 9th, 2022 02:14 - Gone! (Dusk arising)
You know it took her \"going\" to ensure her legacy. For a bloody royal,...
September 9th, 2022 02:07 - Bottled Spider (Garth Rakumakoe)
When I was a kid, we used to go catch scorpions and small rattlesnakes in...
September 9th, 2022 01:58 - September 8th 2022 ! (Justa_Geezer)
Young man, I see you in the King\'s Guard at the Palace. You would be an...
September 9th, 2022 01:48 - The Love I Have For You (Robert Isaacs Chiwala)
OK, now I know where to come for my daily fountain of youth. (-:
September 9th, 2022 01:44 - Is A Change Really Coming (Sultra)
PS \"Self check-out\" is so ambiguous... I laughed at that! Right before...
September 9th, 2022 01:41 - Is A Change Really Coming (Sultra)
Sultra, this piece is so vivid and sincere... the run-on form is so...
September 9th, 2022 01:39 - Autumnal ceremony (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽)
PS love those browny brownies!
September 9th, 2022 01:31
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