Comments on community poems by jarcher54

• Today (Cassia DeSousa) Yes, the painful irony of your sweet little poem is hard to ignore these...
  April 15th, 2022 12:23
• Ode to Mother Nature (Goddess of the Mist) LB is right... this is simply majestic. You are overdue for something...
  April 15th, 2022 12:17
• Meadow Song (A Boy With Roses) JD, this may be your most haunting and coherently complex journey yet. ...
  April 15th, 2022 12:14
• ROSES ARE RED (Michael Edwards) Goodness, what\'s gotten into all the poet-posters today? Every poem I...
  April 5th, 2022 11:26
• Masculine - Feminine (Fadime) Oh my... made me blush, but wanting a little more!
  April 5th, 2022 11:20
• Those Days Are Long Gone (A Boy With Roses) You stunned me with \"Life is out of reach.\" Such a beautiful dark...
  April 5th, 2022 11:18
• lustfully greedily (Dusk arising) I depend on you for my porn poetry... Oh my.
  April 5th, 2022 11:15
• Brightest Of All Horizons (Charles Edward York) A very sobering and interesting description of a common experience. You...
  April 5th, 2022 11:13
• Brightest Of All Horizons (Charles Edward York) Happy birthday CEY!
  April 5th, 2022 11:10
• This Wonderful Place (Bella Shepard) Yes MPS is a sweet getaway indeed. And you\'ve really enriched the place.
  March 21st, 2022 01:17
• beneath the heavens (Dusk arising) Quite lovely and more poignant. One of the mot efficient uses of words I...
  March 21st, 2022 01:13
• Right Down Here (Charles Edward York) You had me right from \"the altitude of dirt.\" Bravo!
  March 11th, 2022 20:47
• Dead Flowers (A Boy With Roses) Sympathy is my downfall too... very keen observation! It\'s like you are...
  March 11th, 2022 20:38
• Waxen Wings (A Boy With Roses) Jordan, I am excited to see you returning to a veritable explosion of...
  March 11th, 2022 20:35
• One week and no speak (Alexander Pope III) My pen is losing words fast... stunning expression!
  February 19th, 2022 20:36
• Dear Fentanyl (StephanieAnn) So good to hear from you. Happy Birthday!! Your sense of liberation is...
  February 10th, 2022 23:05
• A Dark Journey (FallenAngel1🕊) All I can say is... gulp!
  January 30th, 2022 21:23
• Dreamclouds (A Boy With Roses) I think we\'ve all cried all night over a love that isn\'t gonna work, or...
  January 29th, 2022 23:25
• I Am Butterfly (GiftedT17) Love the way your lines wander and linger and take their sweet time before...
  January 29th, 2022 23:09
• Love and Battle in the North (Nicholas Browning) Fine craftsmanship and spirit to boot! A worthy contribution to the...
  January 22nd, 2022 10:50
• Unbeatable (Fay Slimm.) An intense, thoughtful exposition of the man v mountain confrontation. ...
  January 22nd, 2022 10:37
• If I See You Again (Charles Edward York) A lovely, haunting take on a universal emotion. As I read this, I was...
  January 22nd, 2022 10:33
• My Island of Peace (Goldfinch60) No need to join you... you\'ve brought the island to us! A precious...
  January 22nd, 2022 02:26
• Tortured Love (A Boy With Roses) Our angels, our warriors... a succinct, hard-hitting description......
  January 22nd, 2022 01:29
• The Ocean (GiftedT17) Your poem moves from little ripples to a pulsing surf. Your long couplets...
  January 22nd, 2022 01:18
• within the depths of beyond (Dusk arising) Heart-stopping images. Beautifully composed. Don\'t jump in just yet!
  January 22nd, 2022 01:13
• goodbye meat loaf (Jon Nakapalau) Meat Loaf was always true to himself, did not let fame mess him up or...
  January 22nd, 2022 01:09
• A Fateful Accident (Zhangyuyouyu) It sounds to me as if you are making the best of the situation. By...
  January 22nd, 2022 01:04
• Adomania (Quemis) You have such poignant, vivid images, always musical and inventive,...
  January 19th, 2022 23:49
• Church Bells (StephanieAnn) There\'s a little church about a mile from my house that rings the hours...
  January 13th, 2022 01:08
• Take Care, Stay Safe. (Doggerel Dave) I am with Dusk... there\'s a collective weariness, but you have always...
  January 13th, 2022 01:03
• Pain (Aryaa) Such a bittersweet sentiment... reveals a kind soul. Your little pieces...
  January 13th, 2022 01:00
• The Scavenger Vultures of Despair (Samer Amin) Samer, I quite enjoyed (or let\'s say appreciated!) this powerful tour de...
  January 13th, 2022 00:52
• to all of the people who call girls pretty (Ghosti) I don\'t find that \"pretty\" is relevant any more. I have no idea if you...
  January 12th, 2022 01:12
• Guaraná (A Boy With Roses) Lots of choice images here. Your work is often like a puzzle, challenges...
  January 12th, 2022 01:06
• gently now withdrawn (Dusk arising) A delicately ferocious and unforgettable title.
  December 20th, 2021 11:17
• birth of a poet No2 (revised) (Dusk arising) The simplicity of the poem reflects the speaker\'s purported lack of...
  December 20th, 2021 02:28
• My Tears Flow Like Rivers (A Boy With Roses) The boy who never got to love is kind of your anthem. Short and sweet. ...
  December 9th, 2021 02:36
• The God of all Creation (Nicholas Browning) NB, I appreciate the ambiguous, Miltonian tone and inscrutable nature of...
  November 15th, 2021 03:35
• A torch in the Wind (Samer Amin) I really like your conceit of the noble knight within her heart. May we...
  November 15th, 2021 03:13
• Soundless Rest (Fay Slimm.) tender, timeless, and piercing. Dusk makes a keen observation, that the...
  November 15th, 2021 03:08
• Healing (Pacifique Niyitanga) I used to see scars on my wife, like on her knees, or on her back where...
  November 7th, 2021 14:32
• When A Vagabond Loves (Pacifique Niyitanga) Parts of this, like the beginning and the end, are a fresh take on the...
  November 7th, 2021 14:28
• Nautical (A Boy With Roses) I truly love \"born with no shield, raised to be knights.\" So much said...
  November 7th, 2021 03:23
• so quickly (Dusk arising) Your range continues to surprise. This is what MPS is for!
  November 7th, 2021 02:56
• DIBBLES AND DABBLES (8) (Michael Edwards) I think the main creation going on here is your pen and ink! I love the...
  November 4th, 2021 01:11
• Bard\'s Cant (Zemde) Blades in their sockets... that\'s gotta hurt! I don\'t know why I like...
  November 4th, 2021 01:05
• for love (Queer-with-a-pen) Very elegant, very poignant. Narrative enough to make me want to finish,...
  November 4th, 2021 00:59
• Grey (Andrew5yungk) The courage you exemplify here is palpable, your suffering is heavy and...
  October 26th, 2021 02:06
• Dad\'s Back. (Goldfinch60) My dad would play one of his few cherished classical records on the old...
  October 26th, 2021 01:59
• The Night\'s Play (Krutarth) I don\'t know what is more miraculous, stars or fireflies! Thanks for the...
  October 26th, 2021 01:44
• Breakfast Rituals (Neville) He? LOL
  October 26th, 2021 00:18
• whine (Robin jayne) I had those awkward tan lines from whole summers at the river... the only...
  October 26th, 2021 00:15
• Time! (The BlackShakespeare) We all try to trap time in a glass... but somehow it escapes through...
  October 26th, 2021 00:08
• Exit (Krutarth) A thoughtful sharing of your valuable experience. Glad you can retell it....
  October 26th, 2021 00:04
• New Life. (Paul Bell) It’s impolite to stare Sorry, I was undressing you Such black humor...
  October 26th, 2021 00:01
• AND PUPPETS DANCE (Michael Edwards) PS You suggest this doesn\'t fall into any genre you know of. I think...
  October 25th, 2021 23:57
• AND PUPPETS DANCE (Michael Edwards) A lot of your best ideas, techniques, and intuition came together in this...
  October 25th, 2021 23:55
• Hiding Beneath a Mask (Ajax (he/xe)) Moving and charming. A universal emotion very well described. Brava.
  September 30th, 2021 01:16
• Mellow Softness Inside (A Boy With Roses) A reason behind madness... this riddle may well drive me crazy! Nice...
  September 30th, 2021 01:03
• through a glass darkly (Dusk arising) You are so unpredictable. This is very nuanced, very intense... no fairy...
  September 14th, 2021 00:08
• The Absolute Essence (Samer Amin) I don\'t really understand your explanations, though your point is clear. ...
  September 13th, 2021 00:39
• Nostradamus (Doggerel Dave) The pessimist makes the best seer, because you are always right...
  September 13th, 2021 00:24
• A Pair of Men (Jay-Lee Jane) A lovely and lively view of the two men. To me, you were implying that...
  September 12th, 2021 23:56
• Wildblue Moonbeams (A Boy With Roses) When you mention the lying mirror, I am reminded of all the interesting,...
  September 12th, 2021 23:48
• Fablon (Neville) We don\'t call it Fablon over here stateside... but it can be just as...
  September 11th, 2021 20:16
• Temple (A Boy With Roses) A little indulgent, and a little too familiar to most of us, at least once...
  August 21st, 2021 23:46
• Creation is Love (Samer Amin) Samer, you are a thoughtful soul. I enjoy your vivaciousness, your...
  August 19th, 2021 23:33
• The Battle of Brandy Station (Jon Nakapalau) A fine action poem turned into a meditation on violence, human frailty,...
  August 19th, 2021 23:15
• Helpless (Arvy) Well done. Starts out like a love poem, but turns into something so much...
  August 12th, 2021 22:36
• Black Magick (HannahElisabeth) Hannah, the interpretation is ALWAYS up to the reader... But you know...
  August 9th, 2021 23:48
• \'our strips of stuff that tatter as we move\' (Jon Nakapalau) I had to catch my breath after this one. I picture the three Fates, one...
  August 9th, 2021 22:52
• to dream as an innocent (Dusk arising) I think what I like most about what you write is how unselfconscious you...
  August 9th, 2021 22:45
• Strategy And Timing (ForeverJesus7) The thing is, our opinions don\'t really matter. Our reasoning does. You...
  August 4th, 2021 01:41
• From the Corner (Jack Cohen) Glad you escaped... this time! Nice little adventure you took us on.
  July 26th, 2021 00:07
• masochist (Claudia) I THINK I understand... I enjoy the alliteration and the waiting for the...
  July 21st, 2021 01:22
• Constraint (Fay Slimm.) Seen that so many times, and sometimes the he is a she and/or the she is a...
  July 20th, 2021 12:02
• Happy Never Ending (A Boy With Roses) It is both beautiful and frightful that dark experiences, or at least the...
  July 20th, 2021 11:46
• Because it Got in the Way (Neville) The riddle being one of the oldest genres of literature (poetry?),...
  July 20th, 2021 11:39
• Because it Got in the Way (Neville) Yikes... I once spoke to a sniper who said they were sort of taught to do...
  July 20th, 2021 11:38
• A Bump (StephanieAnn) Stephanie, so self-aware and positive to come out and share your Bump...
  July 5th, 2021 14:10
• playground (Dusk arising) I am a sucker for short, sweet, mysterious, whimsical, wistful, and...
  July 5th, 2021 13:04
• Don\'t Wanna Think Anymore (A Boy With Roses) A moving, bittersweet love confession... a flood of fading emotions...
  July 5th, 2021 12:58
• charlie (Dusk arising) Wonderful!
  June 21st, 2021 23:21
• The Enabler (StephanieAnn) Your courage is palpable. I suspect many of us don\'t even know we are...
  June 14th, 2021 17:22
• If I Was Leader (Article)... (ForeverJesus7) The places with the lowest abortion rates are those where it is legal and...
  June 13th, 2021 02:35
• Sea-Dog (Kevin Michael Bloor) A sweet little piece but the photo is just as perfect!
  June 11th, 2021 22:01
• Poems for all Seasons (Kevin Michael Bloor) Your style and theme blend perfectly here. There are many really...
  June 11th, 2021 21:58
• Orchard Street (StephanieAnn) Your poems are ABOUT things. I like that! You bring Orchard Street to...
  June 4th, 2021 23:13
• The Crow (StephanieAnn) You have a delightful, playful bounce to your verses, and you weave your...
  June 4th, 2021 22:15
• Blue Yonder (Kurt Philip Behm) Fine statement of an essential quandary!
  June 1st, 2021 10:31
• You and I (Trenz Pruca) A fine, compassionate exploration of sameness/otherness, misunderstanding,...
  May 31st, 2021 22:21
• Last Straw (Kurt Philip Behm) You are a master of the abstract. Broad simple strokes, ideas, concepts,...
  May 31st, 2021 20:58
• I\'m Done (StephanieAnn) You hit the nail on the head with \"This poem is for my personal use.\" ...
  May 31st, 2021 20:50
• Igloo Wink (A Boy With Roses) You are truly the poet of the inner life of the mind, the heart, and the...
  May 31st, 2021 20:47
• days of the lost past (Dusk arising) A bittersweet exploration of memory and its loss. The past lives on only...
  May 31st, 2021 20:45
• The Demons Chokehold (StephanieAnn) This must have been hard to post, your sense of being on the edge of...
  May 31st, 2021 02:37
• My Choice of Poison (StephanieAnn) Love your long wandering lines, very confessional, sense of urgency to...
  May 31st, 2021 02:33
• Morning Fog (A Boy With Roses) Oh, X, you liar! You are an EXPERT at putting pain into words, and you...
  May 31st, 2021 02:26
• random lines [I] (Jon Nakapalau) Randomly interesting... your sketchbook is intriguing, your phrases are...
  May 31st, 2021 02:20