Comments on community poems by jarcher54
- Flashback Forward (Michaelpoet)
PS I think you mean serf! (-:
August 20th, 2023 10:58 - Flashback Forward (Michaelpoet)
Yes, the hardscrabble life of the working class, which now includes many...
August 20th, 2023 10:57 - Little princess (Reese Bailey)
This left me breathless. Intense and painfully lovely. Seeing the sky as...
August 19th, 2023 10:46 - Is it not? (Nicolerobinson)
You clearly have things to say, my dear. We all feel a little like we are...
August 19th, 2023 10:44 - Kingfishers Eyes (ADarkerMind)
I love it but haven\'t figured it all out! But that my friend is a good...
August 19th, 2023 10:40 - Both teams to score before half time (Edthepoet)
Here I am watching Bournemouth v Liverpool with the sound off while I...
August 19th, 2023 10:37 - Love Pains (SHELLY)
Lovely soliloquy, a nice variation on a universal theme... but we all...
August 19th, 2023 10:35 - Love Pains (SHELLY)
Lovely soliloquy, a nice variation on a universal theme... but we all...
August 19th, 2023 10:35 - Self-Worth=Schoolwork (Ajax (he/xe))
PS I adore you grading your own paper in advance. What a brilliant idea!
August 19th, 2023 10:33 - Self-Worth=Schoolwork (Ajax (he/xe))
Thank you for sharing this all-too-familiar yet artfully described mania. ...
August 19th, 2023 10:32 - Better goals (Hzugman)
Wise words... I am a perfectionist of my own work, but try hard to be...
August 19th, 2023 10:28 - No Earthly Reward (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Negative inspiration can be a flame beneath our boiling pot. Fine words,...
August 19th, 2023 10:26 - EVENTS (Finchy)
Lovely images, and lovely thoughts. I appreciate keeping our openness for...
August 19th, 2023 10:21 - MOTHERS SPECIAL BEAUTY (Finchy)
Thanks for this... my mom is long long, but I go through my own version of...
August 19th, 2023 10:19 - In blood, we write great poetries (Alex Praw)
Intense piece. I enjoy working through the Russian, of which I have no...
August 19th, 2023 10:16 - Memory1 (Longingforheart)
PS The title suggests more to come... I\'ll be watching.
August 19th, 2023 10:07 - Memory1 (Longingforheart)
Oh my... so right... very erotic in the sweetest way.
August 19th, 2023 10:07 - Wasting Time (Gary Edward Geraci)
As a nonbeliever, I appreciate you suggesting god does not overlook any of...
August 19th, 2023 10:05 - ARC (Soumya Singh)
A compelling tour de force. Nice experiment if that\'s what it was. But...
August 19th, 2023 10:04 - CURRENCY (Nephilim56)
The riddle poem is as old as the earliest Greek papyri and the tattered...
August 19th, 2023 09:58 - The Universe (Carpe4diem)
I am not religious, but respecting and yes embracing the faith of others...
August 19th, 2023 09:54 - The Morning After (AuburnScribbler)
Nanny\'s my Mum... wow!
August 19th, 2023 09:49 - The Bully (Jane Frye)
You are quite adept at turning the informal into poetry! What appears to...
August 19th, 2023 09:47 - \"The panting ox\" ; India ; 19 August, 2023 (Soman Ragavan)
Lovely message... I don\'t think the ChatGPT adds anything... the message...
August 19th, 2023 01:14 - Sea of children (Florin Dragoș Minculescu)
Refugee children are the crime of humanity... thanks for sharing your...
August 19th, 2023 01:05 - The Witnessing (FallingAwake2)
PSS Your screen name is also perfect. Especially for this poem.
August 19th, 2023 01:03 - The Witnessing (FallingAwake2)
PS Lovely title... not unique I suspect, but perfect!
August 19th, 2023 01:02 - The Witnessing (FallingAwake2)
Thank you for the little intense tour de force, in this little sonnet , of...
August 19th, 2023 01:01 - Time travel (Florin Dragoș Minculescu)
My time travel is pretty mundane... I go from morn to night...but truly I...
August 19th, 2023 00:59 - I saw it on the Dr. Phil Show! (Jane Frye)
Now Janet.... love that line!
August 19th, 2023 00:55 - Would You Kindly Pass the Entonox Babe (Neville)
A breath of fresh air you are. Never heard of the stuff either (ether?). ...
August 19th, 2023 00:53 - T.A.A.Y.A.(Taaya) (Jerry Wayne Lawrence)
Quite a harem you seem to know!
August 19th, 2023 00:47 - L.L.E.J.L.A.(Llejla) (Jerry Wayne Lawrence)
Quite a pyramid you\'ve built there... oh my... I cannot handle her. But...
August 18th, 2023 00:44 - All Bases Covered (Neville)
Don\'t forget... you may see her image on the back of a pancake when you...
August 18th, 2023 00:42 - Sétana (Bigguy)
I read some Old Irish tales in college... this is such a wonderful...
August 18th, 2023 00:29 - Blessed to Share (Bobby O)
The older I get (and I\'m now 69), the more important sharing becomes. I...
August 18th, 2023 00:26 - Ample Faith (Lheom)
We all need motivation... but it\'s more motivating to know someone on the...
August 18th, 2023 00:25 - Khushiya Laut Aayegi (Lheom)
I cannot read Hindi but the sound is moving... and your smile is perfect...
August 18th, 2023 00:23 - Be strong (David A Liebermann)
Lovely thoughts. Sign of a lovely man.
August 17th, 2023 23:59 - My Fault. (No_one)
Taking the blame is the ultimate act of love, even if you don\'t realize...
August 17th, 2023 23:56 - Cuts. (No_one)
A vivid and coherent explanation for something most of us find...
August 17th, 2023 23:54 - Speak. (No_one)
You have an incredible gift for insight and eloquence. This made me cry.
August 17th, 2023 23:52 - Childhood (No_one)
So lovely... poignant... stunning... honest. You are a gift young lady. ...
August 17th, 2023 23:51 - not in your image, but my own (Queer-with-a-pen)
I forgot to say... wow
August 17th, 2023 23:46 - not in your image, but my own (Queer-with-a-pen)
Stunningly moving... maybe the most sincere thing I have read on these...
August 17th, 2023 23:45 - Awakening (Sorenbarrett)
PS check for typos... descent, it\'s... but yes the last line is...
August 17th, 2023 23:37 - Awakening (Sorenbarrett)
Bigguy nailed it... a lot of modern verse is so stuffed with images and...
August 17th, 2023 23:33 - Hear (Terriblesoul977)
Beautiful and painful. A very insightful account of those dark...
August 7th, 2023 13:37 - Try (Terriblesoul977)
There is nothing like a bittersweet love poem to make my day! ...
August 7th, 2023 13:34 - I Am Woke (RL Randall)
Resistance to wokeness stems from fear of facing the truth. We all know...
August 6th, 2023 23:47 - Learn something new each day (Hzugman)
I\'ll try brother, I promise!
August 6th, 2023 23:23 - Loaded gun (Sorenbarrett)
Sorry to disagree... when we were kids several of us all agreed to never...
August 3rd, 2023 11:00 - A Girl in the Red Bowler Hat (Neville)
My wife had an uncle who ran away in his mid-teens and joined the circus...
August 3rd, 2023 09:13 - Calling Again The Forgotten Names (Kinsley Lee)
Very moving and a good reminder!
August 3rd, 2023 09:07 - Growing up (Stephwrites)
You made this old man cry! Success!! More please!
August 2nd, 2023 12:38 - Rise Above Lies (Sheikhspeare)
Lovely! Share more please!
August 2nd, 2023 12:36 - A warrior or worrier is always a choice. (Shruti14)
PS Welcome to MPS. Your contributions are very appreciated. You are...
August 2nd, 2023 12:35 - A warrior or worrier is always a choice. (Shruti14)
Interesting analysis... but the worrier can USE those worriers as a...
August 2nd, 2023 12:33 - When sunsets paint the canvas of the soul, Within, new chapters silently unroll (Shruti14)
Lovely message, lovely imagery, and a steely-eyed look at reality. ...
August 2nd, 2023 12:31 - Is honesty the best policy in a cruel world? (Shruti14)
I really appreciate the sincerity of your poems. Walking us like a kind...
August 2nd, 2023 12:26 - MORE SHORTIES (4-7) (Michael Edwards)
Oh my... isn\'t the rule one poem a day? (-: Was her name by any chance...
July 6th, 2023 20:41 - Life Reclaimed (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Well good morning to you too! (-:
June 23rd, 2023 08:54 - \"Schooldays\" ; 23 June, 2023 (Soman Ragavan)
I am a little intimidated by the AI analysis... lol. You know the...
June 23rd, 2023 00:20 - Fallen Too Deep (Bambi_)
Please recover dear Bambi! I wish to hear more from you... I was moved by...
June 23rd, 2023 00:16 - Painted in colours (The Dreamer)
Very fine start!
June 23rd, 2023 00:14 - In Memory Of Late Gen. Richard S. Witcomb (Kinsley Lee)
I had heard the name but not the whole story....we need more people like...
June 23rd, 2023 00:11 - Status Quo (FallingAwake2)
The word \"sad\" is a poem all by itself, but your three stanzas are...
June 23rd, 2023 00:06 - In Crevice (Garth Rakumakoe)
A hard-hitting series of observations... these lines flow so naturally, so...
June 22nd, 2023 02:56 - Waiting (FallingAwake2)
This is truly haunting! A lovely thing to read as I turn off the lamp and...
June 22nd, 2023 02:52 - FEEL (The Dreamer)
I love your comment as much as your poem. Creation is a wondrous thing to...
June 22nd, 2023 02:50 - Good Morning (Peter Gates)
As I head to bed at 2:47 am I will drift away to sleep with your wise...
June 22nd, 2023 02:48 - Afrikaner (EvenwheniLie)
Powerful and thoughtful... sometimes what others need to do is just...
June 22nd, 2023 02:35 - My Wonder Of Life. (Goldfinch60)
A litany of the things we love is always consoling to write and moving to...
June 22nd, 2023 02:30 - Just Judgement (Orchidee)
No believer here but I know a proper and sincere hymn when I see it! A...
June 22nd, 2023 02:26 - Goes down easier with a rhyme (Poetic Dan)
Inspired observation... like a spoonful of sugar! But slightly fewer...
June 22nd, 2023 02:23 - What is Wrong With This Tongue (Neville)
We are delighted to have this latest offering... you are sort of necessary...
June 22nd, 2023 02:18 - No More Blues for These Tired Eyes (Neville)
We all need our occasional Neville fix... I\'m already getting the shakes....
June 9th, 2023 02:05 - A Wounded Dog ... (Kurt Philip Behm)
When you bring us a \"longer\" poem like this, the density of your...
June 8th, 2023 15:53 - The Ode To The Unknown Patriotic Martyrs\' Grave At Hongju (Kinsley Lee)
One heart, one grave. Very moving piece. Thanks for the history too!
June 7th, 2023 22:16 - Modern Day Mystic (Introverted Sage)
A creative description of a curious soul. Sigh.
June 7th, 2023 12:08 - Unidentified extraterrestrial(s) willingly abducted me (Rew4er2nail)
I am not sure that was a dream... that\'s what they WANT you to think. ...
June 7th, 2023 11:47 - of Inclusivity (L. B. Mek)
So strange that some US states are outlawing \"diversity, equality. and...
June 7th, 2023 11:45 - all in the name of love (Queer-with-a-pen)
Whatever that name is, most of us have one we can chant in our quiet...
June 7th, 2023 11:38 - Cut the Roots (A Boy With Roses)
PS I am often reminded that the word \"regret\" is probably the most...
June 7th, 2023 11:34 - Cut the Roots (A Boy With Roses)
I think I was crying in that same coffee shop that day! Yes, been there...
June 7th, 2023 11:32 - Birthrights In Limbo (+2) (Kurt Philip Behm)
An out-and-out love poem! So even the great philosopher can be smitten...
June 7th, 2023 11:28 - Gullible (Terriblesoul977)
You are not the first to have made this mistake... bittersweet and...
June 7th, 2023 11:24 - Don\'t isolate yourself (Hzugman)
Awww. Another thoughtful ditty. You know this applies to you... I hope...
June 7th, 2023 11:21 - A Diet for Our Eyes and Our Souls (AuburnScribbler)
It is a challenge to \"turn it off\" so thanks for the encouragement. Our...
June 7th, 2023 11:19 - Spellbound (Goddess of the Mist)
You capture wistful universal human sensations and feelings so...
June 7th, 2023 11:14 - Elegy to the memory of Anthony Bourdain (Parisab)
Thank you for the reminder.
May 12th, 2023 02:50 - To Helios (Joakim Bergen)
This reminds me of the anonymous Greek hymns to the gods. I enjoyed the...
May 11th, 2023 09:27 - Happenings (Fay Slimm.)
The form of this little piece reinforces the density of its subject. Your...
May 11th, 2023 09:19 - Coronation Kiss (Orchidee)
Glad Fido made a friend. Fido is of course the best, most fitting doggie...
May 7th, 2023 10:23 - Dark Effigy (Kurt Philip Behm)
Both clever and thoughtful.
May 6th, 2023 22:33 - Conspiracy Theory (MendedFences27)
Witty and subtly poignant. A whole love story in a few couplets. Not a...
May 6th, 2023 22:30 - Pomegranate (Parisab)
Pomegranates are the sexiest of fruits. Your whole poem is full of heavy...
May 6th, 2023 22:25 - My birthday tomorrow (Ok Waleed)
Happy birthday... but one bit of bad news... you will not be fully...
May 6th, 2023 22:22 - We need (Sorenbarrett)
Very witty little piece!
May 6th, 2023 22:14 - Underground Poet (James Michael)
Rage on brother!
April 12th, 2023 23:46
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