Comments on community poems by jarcher54

• Two Sisters (Neville) For interfering, say 10 Hail Marys.
  February 12th, 2024 23:35
• Fuck You (13LaurenD) Such a brilliant catalogue of insults, cheap shots, and boorish...
  January 29th, 2024 22:19
• Imagine Me (Transprodigalson) This was a brilliant and poignant idea... many thanks!
  January 28th, 2024 21:32
• Argh, I ne\'er got muffin top before - why now!? (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) By the end I was breathless following along with the dance... great fun,...
  January 27th, 2024 02:06
• Understanding Love? (Serene) If we understood it we might ruin it trying to copy or fix it! For a...
  January 26th, 2024 20:20
• Ex-lover of mine. (Debbie) Oh my... I\'m imagining what he said to you... and feeling your hurt... it...
  January 26th, 2024 20:17
• How Many More Planets (Neville) I\'m guessing 43.
  January 26th, 2024 20:13
• I Want to Die In Your Arms (A Boy With Roses) Oh Jordan... the first stanza-- no, the entire poem-- describes your...
  January 26th, 2024 20:11
• i have heard it all before (Ace_) Your dialogues are wickedly honest and compelling. You are witty and have...
  January 18th, 2024 02:07
• me against my head (Ace_) Courageous and a little fierce... take care of yourself and thanks for...
  January 18th, 2024 02:04
• Fragile threads  (Chiki1601) Yes, the tapestry of life is strong and resilient in places, but fragile...
  January 18th, 2024 02:01
• सपनों की दुनिया (Chiki1601) I have no Hindi (though I studied a little Sanskrit in grad school decades...
  January 18th, 2024 01:59
• Happiness Comes Quietly (Thomas W Case) Yes stuff rots and rusts... very obvious and beautiful observations. You...
  January 18th, 2024 01:53
• Amavasya (Kurt Philip Behm) Thoughtful and sharp observations... thanks for keeping me on my mental...
  January 16th, 2024 02:04
• A Taste of Hope (Neville) Wait, did Nev write this uplifting piece? I keep looking for the sarcasm,...
  January 16th, 2024 01:52
• Things I Wish I’d Said (Cassie58) Such a lucky one to be in the beam of your torch. Very old-fashioned...
  January 16th, 2024 01:49
• Rolling along (Hzugman) Driving on the roads without tires may create some firestones. Go slow...
  January 16th, 2024 01:44
• Me Myself and I (Narcisa) Oh, my, a lovely penetrating soliloquy. Yes you earned every good thing...
  January 15th, 2024 13:44
• The Death Of Janet Green (Mtrotter1) You bring Janet to life with this stunning incantation. It is an...
  January 15th, 2024 01:30
• Fail to Forget (PTSD v. 2) (FallingAwake2) You are wise and correct... real tragedy does not inspire. Your strength...
  January 14th, 2024 22:54
• Okinawa The 1st Poem (Kinsley Lee) In my mind, Okinawa is a lovely semitropical paradise, and a place of...
  January 14th, 2024 22:33
• nature (NinjaGirl) Fun to read, and the circling back (in literary terms this is \"ring...
  January 14th, 2024 22:21
• Blocking The Light (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Nice work, you halfwit writer you! Very visceral and musical too. Do you...
  January 14th, 2024 22:15
• Dreams of the Fish (Thomas W Case) Enigmatic and haunting. Like Teddy, I find this deeply sad, but it\'s...
  January 14th, 2024 22:12
• The Fig Tree and the Bird (Parisab) Your title evokes Aesop\'s fables... the Fox and the Grapes, the Lion and...
  November 19th, 2023 15:35
• Heavy Hearts and Dandelions (Parisab) They say there are no words... but you found the right ones. I recall as...
  November 19th, 2023 15:30
• Sillyness 101 (Hzugman) What a coincidence! I just read your latest poem not long after you...
  November 18th, 2023 23:14
• My Mom is Dying (Gray0328) Ah, Courtney, so relatable, so human. My mom died after a short intense...
  November 18th, 2023 20:00
• Lucifer\'s Flaw (Gray0328) A succinct and haunting description... you had me on the lookout, scanning...
  November 18th, 2023 19:57
• A Pocketful of Catacombs (ADarkerMind) Streets of London has inspired and haunted me for decades... one of my...
  November 18th, 2023 19:39
• an energy of change (ADarkerMind) Chilling... and HOW did you know June 14 is my birthday?
  November 18th, 2023 19:27
• My Thoughts (The Fife Wanderer) I appreciate the irony of one who can think of nothing to write composing...
  November 18th, 2023 19:24
• summer storm (Katdream) I love the ring composition... soldiers at the beginning and at the end,...
  November 18th, 2023 19:18
• Guilt of Longing (Firefall) A fine soliloquy, simple and honest, very universal. Those fading...
  November 18th, 2023 19:14
• Sinking into Sadness (Firefall) Your poems are consistently rewarding. Simple on the surface, sincere...
  November 4th, 2023 20:36
• Haiku # 3 (Norman Flagtea) Interesting how a few lines can create a whole imagined scene for the...
  October 26th, 2023 02:51
• Meet your new friend (Hzugman) I\'ll drink to that
  October 26th, 2023 02:47
• My Fall Loving Cat (Eileen Clark) I knew you were just a big pussycat at heart!
  October 26th, 2023 02:36
• Put My Ashes In A Coffee Can (Eileen Clark) I laughed so hard it hurt... thank you!
  October 26th, 2023 02:35
• The Boys (Quemis) Made my evening to see you post something... this is so true... it is so...
  October 19th, 2023 19:51
• Unholy Alliance (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) So much to ponder in so few words! I enjoyed the contra expectatio at the...
  October 9th, 2023 11:38
• Omphalos of Verisimilitude (A Boy With Roses) However you arrange your poems, they are clearly a moving (auto)biography....
  October 7th, 2023 18:31
• Poetic perfumery (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽) These days many people turn their noses up at strong perfumes. I...
  October 5th, 2023 19:56
• MIX NOT BUSINESS AND FUN (Bobby O) Oh wow... the parting image is so poignant. A lovely synecdoche... that...
  September 23rd, 2023 13:32
• Wants and needs (Hzugman) Love this little lesson, and how it ends with a little landslide of stuff!
  September 23rd, 2023 13:26
• Sunday Morning with Miss Etta James (Parisab) Wonderful share of your morning music reverie! Yes, she\'s a gem, and...
  September 23rd, 2023 13:24
• To a stranger who has died – (Amy Michelle Mosier) Lovely... I hope you leave some of them behind for us? (-:
  September 23rd, 2023 13:22
• Young Moon Killers (Parisab) Thank you... The state murders of Mahsa and all the other brave victims of...
  September 16th, 2023 20:49
• Ubuntu: I Am because We Are (Aloo Denish Obiero) Very moving and thoughtful... thanks for sharing! I have a couple dear...
  September 16th, 2023 18:36
• A Bizarre Naked Dance (Aloo Denish Obiero) Interesting story... thanks for introducing me to Karish and the Gangara...
  September 16th, 2023 18:34
• When All Said and Done it’s All Over (Neville) Not a hint of reality here I trust! Gee, thanks for passing on the kidney...
  September 16th, 2023 02:49
• The Sharon\'s Roses At The Gyeong-Ui Line Park (Kinsley Lee) You teach me something every day! We call it Altheia (Greek for...
  September 16th, 2023 02:14
• I\'ll never understand (Poetic Dan) Well, you are welcome in my space any time man. This is a little like an...
  September 16th, 2023 02:05
• visionary (Teddy.15) As the saying goes, one page at a time! A lovely little ponder.
  September 16th, 2023 02:00
• FATED HERO FAKED (Bobby O) I saw the courage before I read your comments.. bold and rough, rugged...
  September 16th, 2023 01:57
• Bouncy Clouds. (Goldfinch60) I am not sure it\'s poetry but I am sure you got me! (-:
  September 16th, 2023 01:51
• Pills (Miss_Dreamer) MD, hang in there... I adore this little soliloquy... thanks for letting...
  September 16th, 2023 01:48
• My lady kate (Lorenz) Very sensual, elusive, and rich with mesmerizing, mingling images and...
  September 16th, 2023 01:43
• Jacks And Jokers (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Tell us what you really think! I know you don\'t mean to be demeaning,...
  September 16th, 2023 01:37
• Beauty in ugly things (PKF) I am not religious, but I share the thought you explore here... to me...
  September 16th, 2023 01:33
• I am human (NafisaSB) Just when you think everything that can be said has been said! I suspect...
  September 16th, 2023 01:30
• that (Jon Nakapalau) OK, damn you... I might just cry
  September 16th, 2023 01:26
• you (Jon Nakapalau) John, I am both confused and amused, but I am also moved... I think I know...
  September 16th, 2023 01:25
• Bed of roses or thorns (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽) PS I miss your contributions!
  September 16th, 2023 01:17
• Bed of roses or thorns (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽) I don\'t agree with your premise but I understand what you feel... I\'m...
  September 16th, 2023 01:16
• Howling Winter Wolves (Eileen Clark) Very lovely poem Eileen. Ominous and moody, and I can feel both the icy...
  September 16th, 2023 01:11
• MORE OF THE DISSIMILAR (Michael Edwards) The pollen of course is the stuff that matters, that keeps it all going! ...
  August 20th, 2023 11:11
• Firm Faithfulness (Orchidee) I can\'t help supporting you MPS old standards... when a poet\'s name...
  August 20th, 2023 11:07
• The seasons of a life (Sorenbarrett) Breathtaking and lovely in its modesty and packed with allusions that...
  August 20th, 2023 11:05
• Sonnets are Hard (Bigguy) Your modesty is as fun as your sonnet! Brave and bravo.
  August 20th, 2023 11:01
• Mendacium (Kurt Philip Behm) Could you use fewer words? (-: I appreciate the bare bones that don\'t...
  August 20th, 2023 11:00
• Flashback Forward (Michaelpoet) PS I think you mean serf! (-:
  August 20th, 2023 10:58
• Flashback Forward (Michaelpoet) Yes, the hardscrabble life of the working class, which now includes many...
  August 20th, 2023 10:57
• Little princess (Reese Bailey) This left me breathless. Intense and painfully lovely. Seeing the sky as...
  August 19th, 2023 10:46
• Is it not? (Nicolerobinson) You clearly have things to say, my dear. We all feel a little like we are...
  August 19th, 2023 10:44
• Kingfishers Eyes (ADarkerMind) I love it but haven\'t figured it all out! But that my friend is a good...
  August 19th, 2023 10:40
• Both teams to score before half time (Edthepoet) Here I am watching Bournemouth v Liverpool with the sound off while I...
  August 19th, 2023 10:37
• Love Pains (SHELLY) Lovely soliloquy, a nice variation on a universal theme... but we all...
  August 19th, 2023 10:35
• Love Pains (SHELLY) Lovely soliloquy, a nice variation on a universal theme... but we all...
  August 19th, 2023 10:35
• Self-Worth=Schoolwork (Ajax (he/xe)) PS I adore you grading your own paper in advance. What a brilliant idea!
  August 19th, 2023 10:33
• Self-Worth=Schoolwork (Ajax (he/xe)) Thank you for sharing this all-too-familiar yet artfully described mania. ...
  August 19th, 2023 10:32
• Better goals (Hzugman) Wise words... I am a perfectionist of my own work, but try hard to be...
  August 19th, 2023 10:28
• No Earthly Reward (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Negative inspiration can be a flame beneath our boiling pot. Fine words,...
  August 19th, 2023 10:26
• EVENTS (Finchy) Lovely images, and lovely thoughts. I appreciate keeping our openness for...
  August 19th, 2023 10:21
• MOTHERS SPECIAL BEAUTY (Finchy) Thanks for this... my mom is long long, but I go through my own version of...
  August 19th, 2023 10:19
• In blood, we write great poetries (Alex Praw) Intense piece. I enjoy working through the Russian, of which I have no...
  August 19th, 2023 10:16
• Memory1 (Longingforheart) PS The title suggests more to come... I\'ll be watching.
  August 19th, 2023 10:07
• Memory1 (Longingforheart) Oh my... so right... very erotic in the sweetest way.
  August 19th, 2023 10:07
• Wasting Time (Gary Edward Geraci) As a nonbeliever, I appreciate you suggesting god does not overlook any of...
  August 19th, 2023 10:05
• ARC (Soumya Singh) A compelling tour de force. Nice experiment if that\'s what it was. But...
  August 19th, 2023 10:04
• CURRENCY (Nephilim56) The riddle poem is as old as the earliest Greek papyri and the tattered...
  August 19th, 2023 09:58
• The Universe (Carpe4diem) I am not religious, but respecting and yes embracing the faith of others...
  August 19th, 2023 09:54
• The Morning After (AuburnScribbler) Nanny\'s my Mum... wow!
  August 19th, 2023 09:49
• The Bully (Jane Frye) You are quite adept at turning the informal into poetry! What appears to...
  August 19th, 2023 09:47
• \"The panting ox\" ; India ; 19 August, 2023 (Soman Ragavan) Lovely message... I don\'t think the ChatGPT adds anything... the message...
  August 19th, 2023 01:14
• Sea of children (Florin Dragoș Minculescu) Refugee children are the crime of humanity... thanks for sharing your...
  August 19th, 2023 01:05
• The Witnessing (FallingAwake2) PSS Your screen name is also perfect. Especially for this poem.
  August 19th, 2023 01:03
• The Witnessing (FallingAwake2) PS Lovely title... not unique I suspect, but perfect!
  August 19th, 2023 01:02
• The Witnessing (FallingAwake2) Thank you for the little intense tour de force, in this little sonnet , of...
  August 19th, 2023 01:01
• Time travel (Florin Dragoș Minculescu) My time travel is pretty mundane... I go from morn to night...but truly I...
  August 19th, 2023 00:59