Comments on community poems by BRIAN & ANGELA
- Darkness is the place I lay (Coryjarbeau)
Thanks CORY for another vey poignant poem sharing with us all just how you...
September 15th, 2016 03:48 - Darkness is the place I lay (Coryjarbeau)
Thanks CORY for another vey poignant poem sharing with us all just how you...
September 15th, 2016 03:48 - I WILL NOT (Stephanie Showers)
HI STEPH ~ LOVE YOUR PICTURE ! When i read all these stories about MEN on...
September 14th, 2016 16:11 - Everyone has a story or something to share... (Queen Ali)
HI QUEEN ~ Your story is so so sad ~ I'm thinkin' of you and prayin' for...
September 14th, 2016 15:58 - Terror At KFC (Tony36)
As you know Tony our Creator God placed the responsibly for PLANET EARTH...
September 14th, 2016 15:44 - Letting Go (Taylerdk21)
BEST DECISION TAYLER ~ Some men fell they can play with Girls like Dolls. ...
September 14th, 2016 15:32 - Innocence (Semicolon01)
Thanks SC for posting your first poem. It is a beautifully constructed...
September 14th, 2016 12:33 - First Love (Semicolon01)
Thanks for sharing SC ~ a great topic FIRST LOVE and a great opening poem....
September 14th, 2016 12:17 - coherence , beer and potato chips (Avigail)
SWEETHEART ~ I can see why I love you so so much. I love intellectual...
September 14th, 2016 09:14 - I\'M ON MY WAY TO BUTTE MONTANA (Summersounds68)
Thanks for sharing SS ! I love The American West ~ Cowboy Country and the...
September 14th, 2016 05:16 - Read it from the top to the bottom, then read it from bottom to top (TheWritingInstrument)
Thank you for sharing ANGEL. This is an unusual poem because when one...
September 13th, 2016 18:31 - Silently Pray (Ternic73)
Thanks TERESA for another beautiful poem in the form of a Prayer. I...
September 13th, 2016 17:34 - Dear Future Husband (Taylerdk21)
WELCOME TYLER ~ Thanks for sharing a lovely poem in Structure (replete...
September 13th, 2016 16:37 - Mothers Milk (Just10)
WELCOME "J" ~ and thanks for a well penned and philosophical first poem. I...
September 13th, 2016 14:13 - #156-No Longer My Hero (Mads)
WOW ANGEL ~ This really is a poem of two HALVES ? I the first half your...
September 13th, 2016 14:05 - Non Awareness (Avigail)
Thank you AVI ! You have the ability to encapsulate academic truth in a...
September 13th, 2016 13:51 - The Sacrifice (Tony36)
Greater Love has no Man than this that he lay down his life or his BROTHER...
September 13th, 2016 13:23 - He (FruitfulSpirit)
AMEN SISTER ~ A beautiful Poem ~ I agree with you HE is my everything !...
September 13th, 2016 13:16 - Do you even notice (Stephanie Showers)
Thank you STEPHANIE ~ you are an elegant poet and such a fragrant Lady ~...
September 13th, 2016 11:11 - How to write a bad poem (Aa Harvey)
Thanks HARVEY ~ Because Modern Poetry has no rules of rhyme rhythm or...
September 13th, 2016 10:36 - Beckon (Augustus)
A beautiful and concise Love Poem ~ perfection. Thanks BRIAN
September 13th, 2016 07:58 - The invitation. (Camille)
This is beautiful CAMILLE and of itself ~ libido raising ~ Thank you for...
September 13th, 2016 07:56 - When I thought It Couldn\'t Get Any Worse (Petec)
Thanks PETEC at 33 I am old enough go through what you are describing...
September 13th, 2016 06:10 - Inside (SheWasTheSun)
Thanks ANGEL for a very challenging poem. In my relationships with...
September 13th, 2016 05:02 - conflicting path (Caroline-o)
HI CAROLINE ~ We all face conflicting paths every day. The path we chose...
September 13th, 2016 04:34 - Don\'t Breathe (Bookbag)
WELCOME BB GREAT FIRST POEM ! True Love is elusive and so often (I'm 33...
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HO HO HO ~ work on it Colin but I don't think it will be Christmas No. 1. ...
September 13th, 2016 03:56 - He is (Rebekahmoses)
Thanks for sharing REBEKAH ~ This is so so refreshing compared with so...
September 13th, 2016 03:50 - #152-I Fought (Mads)
Thanks for baring your soul for us ANGEL ~ I do understand we all have ups...
September 13th, 2016 03:26 - how do you turn 20% into 100%? (Avigail)
Thanks AVI ~ Basically in my experience the % approach to life is...
September 12th, 2016 16:50 - 6 Word Memoir (Lexy7448)
Thanks LEXY a great list of ELEVEN 6-word memoirs ! Mine is DO IT NOW ~...
September 12th, 2016 16:33 - This is where I leave you (Stephanie Showers)
WELCOME STEPHANIE ~ Thanks you for your first poem. There is a paradox...
September 12th, 2016 16:20 - Daydream (Ebbsmillz)
WELCOME EBBS ~ A beautifully crafted first poem in "free verse" but...
September 12th, 2016 14:22 - The Machine (Tony36)
Thanks you TONY ~ This is a perfect description of how the THIRD REICH...
September 12th, 2016 14:16 - A Poem with No Name (Ternic73)
Thank you TERESA for ~ Another Elegant poem ~ another sad sad Battle...
September 12th, 2016 14:06 - Scattered Mind (Master Sora)
WELCOME SORA ~ Thanks for sharing a very enigmatic poem. I'm 33 and I...
September 12th, 2016 09:52 - Magical moments (Daniel dawes)
"And I say to myself ~ What a wonderful World !". Daniel ~ thanks for...
September 12th, 2016 07:51 - He/She. (Love poem, about a female or male.) (Pierce_The_Ky)
Thanks KY for a very loving poem. When I'm in College (as a Tutor) or just...
September 12th, 2016 07:47 - Compression (Phoenixsky2020)
Great song and a Perfect Poem ~ Thanks for sharing PHOENIX ! We all have...
September 12th, 2016 07:37 - Devil on my shoulder (Rebekahmoses)
THANKS REBEKAH ~ For another fine piece of prose / poetry ~ straight form...
September 12th, 2016 07:24 - #153-Just Maybe (Mads)
Sorry you are still sad SWEETHEART ~ Whatever color yoiu paint your nails...
September 12th, 2016 04:50 - Her (Moonchild11)
WELCOME MOONCHILD ~ Thanks you for a very beautiful prose poem. You are...
September 12th, 2016 03:53 - Imperfect Canvas (Onyxowl333)
Ohhhhh OWL ~ cutting is so so cathartic ! One of my female students ...
September 12th, 2016 03:46 - We Will Never Forget (Ternic73)
Thanks for caring TERESA ! I was in America on 9/11 ~ Independence Iowa...
September 11th, 2016 16:15 - If Only (Night_Owl)
A very poignant poem Judy ~ thanks for sharing. I love the structure ~...
September 11th, 2016 16:02 - Loved but not forgotten (Coryjarbeau)
WELCOME CORY ~ Thank you for an excellent first Poem. It is a well penned...
September 11th, 2016 15:43 - The Ladder (Onyxowl333)
WELCOME ONYXOWL (intriguing name ~ I have one I bought in Puebla) I am...
September 11th, 2016 15:30 - Fragile perception and miscommunication (Avigail)
MUCHAS GRACIAS PROFESSORA ~ I am expecting to earn a credit for my Degree...
September 11th, 2016 12:18 - \"funny\" (Letstalkemotion)
It is FUNNY ~ ANGEL ~ but in my experience (33 years) Life is always like...
September 11th, 2016 09:55 - Your Love O Lord (Tony36)
The Love of God ~ is greater far than tongue or pen can ever tell ~ It...
September 11th, 2016 09:14 - Metonymy (Augustus)
WELCOME AUGUSTUS ~ Love the visual two persons in one embrace ~ awesome. ...
September 11th, 2016 09:10 - Painful Memory (Jeff)
A very tough poem JEFF ~ we all face the tragedy of DEATH in our extended...
September 11th, 2016 03:58 - I Am Me Wholeheartedly (FruitfulSpirit)
Thanks SWEETHEART for sharing an awesome video and an awesome poem ! You...
September 10th, 2016 17:51 - Dancing Doll (Doll in Wonderland)
Men are from MARS ~ Ladies are from VENUS ~ vive la differance ! Dolls...
September 10th, 2016 14:33 - Remembering 911 (A poet)
I was very moved by the MEMORIAL to the 3000+ victims of 911. I was in...
September 10th, 2016 14:23 - The Evil In Us All (Jeff)
Very true JEFF ~ Satan is a roaring LION seeking whom he may devour....
September 10th, 2016 14:11 - The theory of collective cells consciousness (Avigail)
Thanks for sharing AVI ~ we all need to be reminded just how wonderfully...
September 10th, 2016 14:08 - coming Storm (Tony36)
YOU ARE BLESSED TONY ~ Because you are a Farmer ~ You have to live and...
September 10th, 2016 13:53 - THOUGHTS (Ternic73)
THANKS YOU TERESA ~ You are so lovely. Another passionate and perfect...
September 10th, 2016 10:39 - you fell in love with a memory (Ron parrish aka wordman)
WELCOME RON ~ The question is ~ not how long you live ~ but how long you...
September 10th, 2016 09:45 - Voices (Zack16)
WELCOME ZACK ~ Thanks for a very powerful first poem (free verse). We all...
September 10th, 2016 09:31 - Therapy (Eli)
WELCOME ELI ~ Memry is always therapeutic ~ It makes you feel ggod as...
September 10th, 2016 09:23 - Be Free (Tony36)
JESUS SAID ~ I AM THE WAY ~ The best path is to follow JESUS ~ AMEN ~
September 9th, 2016 17:03 - When Life is Bliss (Abi2511)
WELCOME ABI ~ Thanks for a very descriptive and emotive first poem ! I...
September 9th, 2016 16:25 - News experiment: (Avigail)
North East West South ~ All over the World the newsmen are moving ~...
September 9th, 2016 16:17 - Streets (Ternic73)
TANKS TERESA ~ Another great tribute to the Vets ~ The VIETNAM WAR was...
September 9th, 2016 16:07 - Political Justice (Jondoe909)
WELCOME JON ~ Thanks for a very powerful first poem and presented in BOLD...
September 9th, 2016 11:04 - Home (Doll in Wonderland)
HOME DOLL ~ Is where the cat is ! So at least there would be someone...
September 9th, 2016 09:32 - Truths (Katiepoo7447)
WELCOME KATIE ~ Thanks for sharing a very beautiful first poem. Short bu...
September 9th, 2016 01:34 - Gazing (More Medic)
WELCOME MM ~ Thanks for your first poem. GAZING is an apt title for a poem...
September 8th, 2016 17:16 - Stairs to Heaven (Ternic73)
WOW ~ This is really beautiful TERESA both to read and recite it has given...
September 8th, 2016 08:43 - The Voice (Tony36)
The voice of one crying in the Wilderness ~ Prepare ye the way of the LORD...
September 8th, 2016 07:58 - Darkness (Frances.Zacharias97)
WELCOME FRANCES ~ Thank you for a challenging poem. All our lives are a...
September 8th, 2016 06:23 - Late Nights (HappyMarii)
WELCOME MARI ~ Thanks for an intriguing first poem ! Sleep is so so...
September 8th, 2016 06:15 - Push and Pull (Mae_26)
WELCOME MAE ~ Thanks for a well written and well presented poem. We all...
September 7th, 2016 18:01 - NOTHING (Cyborg.doll)
WELCOME DOLL ~ thanks for a beautifully written "free verse" poem with a...
September 7th, 2016 17:52 - The Path (Dmr90)
WELCOME FRIEND ~ Great first poem ~ dynamic free verse and (as you say)...
September 7th, 2016 13:07 - Every time (TheWritingInstrument)
So So sad ANGEL to be lost in space and time ~ Hope you find a release...
September 7th, 2016 12:59 - What am I going to do (Petec)
Thanks PETEC on essence one has to hold one hope and pray ! In a similar...
September 7th, 2016 12:55 - Freedon (Tony36)
Thanks TONY ~ If the SON (of GOD) willl make you free ~ you shall be free...
September 7th, 2016 10:35 - Self confidence (Avigail)
You are lovely AVI and your advice as always is so so sound ! Do you have...
September 7th, 2016 10:25 - Waiting Game (ShortDesire)
WELCOME SD Thanks for your first poem ~ elegant and so full of pathos....
September 6th, 2016 16:58 - RUNAWAY WITH ME. (Bella cortez)
Thanks BELLA fir sharing an elegantly structured "free verse" poem. Love...
September 6th, 2016 16:51 - BROKEN (Ternic73)
HI ANGEL ~ Thanks for posting another of your very elegant "War Poems" It...
September 6th, 2016 16:43 - My Pain (Petec)
Thanks PETEC for anothr great poem ~ straight from the heart. I'm not...
September 6th, 2016 08:47 - One Rose (Tony36)
Thanks TONY ~ A ROSE of the right shade !) is worth a thousand words ~...
September 6th, 2016 08:41 - Who is in the driver sit? (Avigail)
Thanks for caring and sharing SWETHEART ! WHO IS IN THE DRIVERS SEAT ? ~...
September 6th, 2016 08:35 - Honest Reflection (Emilyeaton101)
WELCOME EMILY ~ Lovely first poem in STRUCTURE (love rhyming couplets) and...
September 5th, 2016 19:45 - The Longevity in Seconds (SoFull ofClarity)
WELCOME SFOC ~ Thanks for your opening poem (more please) we don't get...
September 5th, 2016 18:49 - My Hobby (Eeva)
WOW EEVA ~ What is your instrument ? I play GUITAR. Being able to play...
September 5th, 2016 18:32 - Aquel hombre (Rrodriguez)
HOLA ROBERTO ~ Por favor lea y comentar a mi ultima poema d'amor ~...
September 5th, 2016 15:24 - Aquel hombre (Rrodriguez)
Gracias ROBERTO por una muy elegante pero muy melancolica poema ! THAT...
September 5th, 2016 15:18 - The Moment (Avigail)
Thank you PROF for another mind bender ! Our lives (in my philosophy) are...
September 5th, 2016 14:54 - misery (Caroline-o)
Ohhhh CAROLINE ~ such a sad poem from such a beautiful Young Lady with...
September 5th, 2016 14:31 - #151-I Thought (Mads)
COMPLICATED SITUATION ANGEL ! I've been in this situation ~ walking away...
September 5th, 2016 14:26 - Lifes Lessons (FruitfulSpirit)
Thanks ANGEL ~ I added a bit ~ hope you got that ! You poem and Video are...
September 5th, 2016 14:18 - Lifes Lessons (FruitfulSpirit)
THANK YOU ANGEL ~ For a a beautiful poem straight fom you aching heart. ...
September 5th, 2016 14:05 - My One and Only, My Lobster (Doll in Wonderland)
Better a LOBSTER than a MOBSTER ~ DOLL ! Thanks for another wonderful DIW...
September 5th, 2016 10:11 - outcast (Kasap89)
WELCOME KASA ~ Thanks for your first poem ! Love the modern "free verse"...
September 5th, 2016 10:04 - Obvious (Doll in Wonderland)
SO SAD DOLL ~ That a lovely Young Lady like you should have to write ~...
September 5th, 2016 07:18
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