Comments on community poems by BRIAN & ANGELA

• Silently Pray (Ternic73) Thanks TERESA for another beautiful poem in the form of a Prayer. I...
  September 13th, 2016 17:34
• Dear Future Husband (Taylerdk21) WELCOME TYLER ~ Thanks for sharing a lovely poem in Structure (replete...
  September 13th, 2016 16:37
• Mothers Milk (Just10) WELCOME "J" ~ and thanks for a well penned and philosophical first poem. I...
  September 13th, 2016 14:13
• #156-No Longer My Hero (Mads) WOW ANGEL ~ This really is a poem of two HALVES ? I the first half your...
  September 13th, 2016 14:05
• Non Awareness (Avigail) Thank you AVI ! You have the ability to encapsulate academic truth in a...
  September 13th, 2016 13:51
• The Sacrifice (Tony36) Greater Love has no Man than this that he lay down his life or his BROTHER...
  September 13th, 2016 13:23
• He (FruitfulSpirit) AMEN SISTER ~ A beautiful Poem ~ I agree with you HE is my everything !...
  September 13th, 2016 13:16
• Do you even notice (Stephanie Showers) Thank you STEPHANIE ~ you are an elegant poet and such a fragrant Lady ~...
  September 13th, 2016 11:11
• How to write a bad poem (Aa Harvey) Thanks HARVEY ~ Because Modern Poetry has no rules of rhyme rhythm or...
  September 13th, 2016 10:36
• Beckon (Augustus) A beautiful and concise Love Poem ~ perfection. Thanks BRIAN
  September 13th, 2016 07:58
• The invitation. (Camille) This is beautiful CAMILLE and of itself ~ libido raising ~ Thank you for...
  September 13th, 2016 07:56
• When I thought It Couldn\'t Get Any Worse (Petec) Thanks PETEC at 33 I am old enough go through what you are describing...
  September 13th, 2016 06:10
• Inside (SheWasTheSun) Thanks ANGEL for a very challenging poem. In my relationships with...
  September 13th, 2016 05:02
• conflicting path (Caroline-o) HI CAROLINE ~ We all face conflicting paths every day. The path we chose...
  September 13th, 2016 04:34
• Don\'t Breathe (Bookbag) WELCOME BB GREAT FIRST POEM ! True Love is elusive and so often (I'm 33...
  September 13th, 2016 04:04
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  September 13th, 2016 03:56
• He is (Rebekahmoses) Thanks for sharing REBEKAH ~ This is so so refreshing compared with so...
  September 13th, 2016 03:50
• #152-I Fought (Mads) Thanks for baring your soul for us ANGEL ~ I do understand we all have ups...
  September 13th, 2016 03:26
• how do you turn 20% into 100%? (Avigail) Thanks AVI ~ Basically in my experience the % approach to life is...
  September 12th, 2016 16:50
• 6 Word Memoir (Lexy7448) Thanks LEXY a great list of ELEVEN 6-word memoirs ! Mine is DO IT NOW ~...
  September 12th, 2016 16:33
• This is where I leave you (Stephanie Showers) WELCOME STEPHANIE ~ Thanks you for your first poem. There is a paradox...
  September 12th, 2016 16:20
• Daydream (Ebbsmillz) WELCOME EBBS ~ A beautifully crafted first poem in "free verse" but...
  September 12th, 2016 14:22
• The Machine (Tony36) Thanks you TONY ~ This is a perfect description of how the THIRD REICH...
  September 12th, 2016 14:16
• A Poem with No Name (Ternic73) Thank you TERESA for ~ Another Elegant poem ~ another sad sad Battle...
  September 12th, 2016 14:06
• Scattered Mind (Master Sora) WELCOME SORA ~ Thanks for sharing a very enigmatic poem. I'm 33 and I...
  September 12th, 2016 09:52
• Magical moments (Daniel dawes) "And I say to myself ~ What a wonderful World !". Daniel ~ thanks for...
  September 12th, 2016 07:51
• He/She. (Love poem, about a female or male.) (Pierce_The_Ky) Thanks KY for a very loving poem. When I'm in College (as a Tutor) or just...
  September 12th, 2016 07:47
• Compression (Phoenixsky2020) Great song and a Perfect Poem ~ Thanks for sharing PHOENIX ! We all have...
  September 12th, 2016 07:37
• Devil on my shoulder (Rebekahmoses) THANKS REBEKAH ~ For another fine piece of prose / poetry ~ straight form...
  September 12th, 2016 07:24
• #153-Just Maybe (Mads) Sorry you are still sad SWEETHEART ~ Whatever color yoiu paint your nails...
  September 12th, 2016 04:50
• Her (Moonchild11) WELCOME MOONCHILD ~ Thanks you for a very beautiful prose poem. You are...
  September 12th, 2016 03:53
• Imperfect Canvas (Onyxowl333) Ohhhhh OWL ~ cutting is so so cathartic ! One of my female students ...
  September 12th, 2016 03:46
• We Will Never Forget (Ternic73) Thanks for caring TERESA ! I was in America on 9/11 ~ Independence Iowa...
  September 11th, 2016 16:15
• If Only (Night_Owl) A very poignant poem Judy ~ thanks for sharing. I love the structure ~...
  September 11th, 2016 16:02
• Loved but not forgotten (Coryjarbeau) WELCOME CORY ~ Thank you for an excellent first Poem. It is a well penned...
  September 11th, 2016 15:43
• The Ladder (Onyxowl333) WELCOME ONYXOWL (intriguing name ~ I have one I bought in Puebla) I am...
  September 11th, 2016 15:30
• Fragile perception and miscommunication (Avigail) MUCHAS GRACIAS PROFESSORA ~ I am expecting to earn a credit for my Degree...
  September 11th, 2016 12:18
• \"funny\" (Letstalkemotion) It is FUNNY ~ ANGEL ~ but in my experience (33 years) Life is always like...
  September 11th, 2016 09:55
• Your Love O Lord (Tony36) The Love of God ~ is greater far than tongue or pen can ever tell ~ It...
  September 11th, 2016 09:14
• Metonymy (Augustus) WELCOME AUGUSTUS ~ Love the visual two persons in one embrace ~ awesome. ...
  September 11th, 2016 09:10
• Painful Memory (Jeff) A very tough poem JEFF ~ we all face the tragedy of DEATH in our extended...
  September 11th, 2016 03:58
• I Am Me Wholeheartedly (FruitfulSpirit) Thanks SWEETHEART for sharing an awesome video and an awesome poem ! You...
  September 10th, 2016 17:51
• Dancing Doll (Doll in Wonderland) Men are from MARS ~ Ladies are from VENUS ~ vive la differance ! Dolls...
  September 10th, 2016 14:33
• Remembering 911 (A poet) I was very moved by the MEMORIAL to the 3000+ victims of 911. I was in...
  September 10th, 2016 14:23
• The Evil In Us All (Jeff) Very true JEFF ~ Satan is a roaring LION seeking whom he may devour....
  September 10th, 2016 14:11
• The theory of collective cells consciousness (Avigail) Thanks for sharing AVI ~ we all need to be reminded just how wonderfully...
  September 10th, 2016 14:08
• coming Storm (Tony36) YOU ARE BLESSED TONY ~ Because you are a Farmer ~ You have to live and...
  September 10th, 2016 13:53
• THOUGHTS (Ternic73) THANKS YOU TERESA ~ You are so lovely. Another passionate and perfect...
  September 10th, 2016 10:39
• you fell in love with a memory (Ron parrish aka wordman) WELCOME RON ~ The question is ~ not how long you live ~ but how long you...
  September 10th, 2016 09:45
• Voices (Zack16) WELCOME ZACK ~ Thanks for a very powerful first poem (free verse). We all...
  September 10th, 2016 09:31
• Therapy (Eli) WELCOME ELI ~ Memry is always therapeutic ~ It makes you feel ggod as...
  September 10th, 2016 09:23
• Be Free (Tony36) JESUS SAID ~ I AM THE WAY ~ The best path is to follow JESUS ~ AMEN ~
  September 9th, 2016 17:03
• When Life is Bliss (Abi2511) WELCOME ABI ~ Thanks for a very descriptive and emotive first poem ! I...
  September 9th, 2016 16:25
• News experiment: (Avigail) North East West South ~ All over the World the newsmen are moving ~...
  September 9th, 2016 16:17
• Streets (Ternic73) TANKS TERESA ~ Another great tribute to the Vets ~ The VIETNAM WAR was...
  September 9th, 2016 16:07
• Political Justice (Jondoe909) WELCOME JON ~ Thanks for a very powerful first poem and presented in BOLD...
  September 9th, 2016 11:04
• Home (Doll in Wonderland) HOME DOLL ~ Is where the cat is ! So at least there would be someone...
  September 9th, 2016 09:32
• Truths (Katiepoo7447) WELCOME KATIE ~ Thanks for sharing a very beautiful first poem. Short bu...
  September 9th, 2016 01:34
• Gazing (More Medic) WELCOME MM ~ Thanks for your first poem. GAZING is an apt title for a poem...
  September 8th, 2016 17:16
• Stairs to Heaven (Ternic73) WOW ~ This is really beautiful TERESA both to read and recite it has given...
  September 8th, 2016 08:43
• The Voice (Tony36) The voice of one crying in the Wilderness ~ Prepare ye the way of the LORD...
  September 8th, 2016 07:58
• Darkness (Frances.Zacharias97) WELCOME FRANCES ~ Thank you for a challenging poem. All our lives are a...
  September 8th, 2016 06:23
• Late Nights (HappyMarii) WELCOME MARI ~ Thanks for an intriguing first poem ! Sleep is so so...
  September 8th, 2016 06:15
• Push and Pull (Mae_26) WELCOME MAE ~ Thanks for a well written and well presented poem. We all...
  September 7th, 2016 18:01
• NOTHING (Cyborg.doll) WELCOME DOLL ~ thanks for a beautifully written "free verse" poem with a...
  September 7th, 2016 17:52
• The Path (Dmr90) WELCOME FRIEND ~ Great first poem ~ dynamic free verse and (as you say)...
  September 7th, 2016 13:07
• Every time (TheWritingInstrument) So So sad ANGEL to be lost in space and time ~ Hope you find a release...
  September 7th, 2016 12:59
• What am I going to do (Petec) Thanks PETEC on essence one has to hold one hope and pray ! In a similar...
  September 7th, 2016 12:55
• Freedon (Tony36) Thanks TONY ~ If the SON (of GOD) willl make you free ~ you shall be free...
  September 7th, 2016 10:35
• Self confidence (Avigail) You are lovely AVI and your advice as always is so so sound ! Do you have...
  September 7th, 2016 10:25
• Waiting Game (ShortDesire) WELCOME SD Thanks for your first poem ~ elegant and so full of pathos....
  September 6th, 2016 16:58
• RUNAWAY WITH ME. (Bella cortez) Thanks BELLA fir sharing an elegantly structured "free verse" poem. Love...
  September 6th, 2016 16:51
• BROKEN (Ternic73) HI ANGEL ~ Thanks for posting another of your very elegant "War Poems" It...
  September 6th, 2016 16:43
• My Pain (Petec) Thanks PETEC for anothr great poem ~ straight from the heart. I'm not...
  September 6th, 2016 08:47
• One Rose (Tony36) Thanks TONY ~ A ROSE of the right shade !) is worth a thousand words ~...
  September 6th, 2016 08:41
• Who is in the driver sit? (Avigail) Thanks for caring and sharing SWETHEART ! WHO IS IN THE DRIVERS SEAT ? ~...
  September 6th, 2016 08:35
• Honest Reflection (Emilyeaton101) WELCOME EMILY ~ Lovely first poem in STRUCTURE (love rhyming couplets) and...
  September 5th, 2016 19:45
• The Longevity in Seconds (SoFull ofClarity) WELCOME SFOC ~ Thanks for your opening poem (more please) we don't get...
  September 5th, 2016 18:49
• My Hobby (Eeva) WOW EEVA ~ What is your instrument ? I play GUITAR. Being able to play...
  September 5th, 2016 18:32
• Aquel hombre (Rrodriguez) HOLA ROBERTO ~ Por favor lea y comentar a mi ultima poema d'amor ~...
  September 5th, 2016 15:24
• Aquel hombre (Rrodriguez) Gracias ROBERTO por una muy elegante pero muy melancolica poema ! THAT...
  September 5th, 2016 15:18
• The Moment (Avigail) Thank you PROF for another mind bender ! Our lives (in my philosophy) are...
  September 5th, 2016 14:54
• misery (Caroline-o) Ohhhh CAROLINE ~ such a sad poem from such a beautiful Young Lady with...
  September 5th, 2016 14:31
• #151-I Thought (Mads) COMPLICATED SITUATION ANGEL ! I've been in this situation ~ walking away...
  September 5th, 2016 14:26
• Lifes Lessons (FruitfulSpirit) Thanks ANGEL ~ I added a bit ~ hope you got that ! You poem and Video are...
  September 5th, 2016 14:18
• Lifes Lessons (FruitfulSpirit) THANK YOU ANGEL ~ For a a beautiful poem straight fom you aching heart. ...
  September 5th, 2016 14:05
• My One and Only, My Lobster (Doll in Wonderland) Better a LOBSTER than a MOBSTER ~ DOLL ! Thanks for another wonderful DIW...
  September 5th, 2016 10:11
• outcast (Kasap89) WELCOME KASA ~ Thanks for your first poem ! Love the modern "free verse"...
  September 5th, 2016 10:04
• Obvious (Doll in Wonderland) SO SAD DOLL ~ That a lovely Young Lady like you should have to write ~...
  September 5th, 2016 07:18
• Little Children (Tony36) UNFORGIVABLE TONY ~ Better that a millstone were hung round their neck and...
  September 5th, 2016 07:01
• #141-If I Jump... (Mads) Ohhhhhhhhh ANGEL you have so so much to live for ! If you do jump I'll be...
  September 4th, 2016 18:08
• It\'s Football Time (A poet) HI POET ~ Thanks for sharing. FOOTBALL in England is a religion and the...
  September 4th, 2016 17:38
• Dynamic Balance (Avigail) I apologise for a second comment but my first was unfinished and jumped...
  September 4th, 2016 15:48
• Dynamic Balance (Avigail) AIR ~ EARTH ~ FIRE ~ WATER were the elements of antiquity equating to the...
  September 4th, 2016 15:21
• Just wanted us to grow (Quietstorm_Dru) There is always a danger of overreaction DRU ~ when we let the HEART take...
  September 4th, 2016 15:13
• We\'re In God\'s Army (Tony36) Thanks TONY ~ great poem about our role in the ARMY of the LORD. Please...
  September 4th, 2016 13:12
• God\'s Rainbow (Rrodriguez) BEAUTIFUL POEM ~ God is very generous and uses the whole palette to paint...
  September 4th, 2016 13:09
• GUNNER (Ternic73) Thanks for sharing ANGEL and reminding us to think of and pray for those...
  September 4th, 2016 13:02
• I\'m Glad You\'re Gone (Pterodactyl) THANKS FRIEND ~ Thanks for your first poem ~ We can all relate to the...
  September 4th, 2016 12:58
• Dance Your Sorrow\'s Away (Eileen71) WELCOME EILEEN ~ Lovely lively first poem ~ thanks for sharing ! We love...
  September 4th, 2016 12:46