Comments on community poems by BRIAN & ANGELA

• Averaged 24 (Avigail) WONDERFUL FULL DIARY AVI ~ BUT ~ It's being so busy that keeps you looking...
  September 4th, 2016 09:50
• Not her fault (Bilikis2016) WELCOME BIL ~ Thanks for your first poem ~ powerful. I have found when...
  September 4th, 2016 09:47
• Not her fault (Bilikis2016)
  September 4th, 2016 09:43
• Acquiescent (Lucyring) WELCOME LUCY ~ Thanks for a great first poem. With me everything you say...
  September 4th, 2016 09:40
• As I Lay (Ternic73) Thank you ANGEL for a very moving and complete story in your poem. We all...
  September 4th, 2016 03:29
• #150-A Real Brother (Mads) Ohhhhhh ANGEL this makes me so so sad because it should not happen ! I...
  September 3rd, 2016 15:11
• Battling Anger (FruitfulSpirit) Thanks ANGEL for a great poem with a great message and lots of lovely...
  September 3rd, 2016 15:05
• Battling Anger (FruitfulSpirit) Thanks ANGEL for a great poem with a great message and lots of lovely...
  September 3rd, 2016 15:05
• The Street Preachr (Tony36) Let the redeemed of the Lord say so ~ those whom GOD has redeemed form the...
  September 3rd, 2016 08:21
• The plague (Codeman6311) WELCOME CODEMAN ~ Thanks for your first poem ~ elegant in style replete...
  September 3rd, 2016 05:57
• The Right Things (Doll in Wonderland) MY PERFECT DOLL ! Love Angel is not rational ~ this is why you love the...
  September 3rd, 2016 05:45
• paranoid about the earths crust (Giantgentlebear) WELCOME GGB (love the name !) MPS needs more peots like you whose poems...
  September 3rd, 2016 05:34
• Be happy (Thelostboy) HI TLB ~ Great second poem ~ bursting with hope and happiness ! Beat the...
  September 3rd, 2016 04:11
• A Burnt Journey And A Silent End (The New Cry Atlantic) WELCOME ATLANTIC ~ Thanks for your first poem ! Love the structure ~...
  September 3rd, 2016 04:08
• A Mild Start (Vinceau) WELCOME VINCEAU ~ Thanks for sharing your first poem.~ lovely in form and...
  September 3rd, 2016 04:00
• Sisters Through and Through (Eeva) Thanks EVA ~ Lovely tribute to your Sister and so true of the unspoken...
  September 2nd, 2016 16:51
• Projection (Doll in Wonderland) Ohhhh DOLL ~ this is so sad that a beautiful young lady like you should be...
  September 2nd, 2016 14:57
• Don\'t Judge a Book by it\'s Cover (Austin s. Twilley) WELCOME AUSTIN ~ Well written first poem (rhyme & rhythm !) and a great...
  September 2nd, 2016 14:43
• Ufo (Amal) Thanks AMAL ~ Sometimes we need an out of body and out of time and sense ~...
  September 2nd, 2016 14:38
• Seasons Change (Ternic73) BEAUTIFUL POEM ANGEL ~ Every season has its beauty and its compensations...
  September 2nd, 2016 14:33
• Hey bully (Thelostboy) WELCOME TLB THANKS ~ for your first poem which is bursting with pathos and...
  September 2nd, 2016 14:11
• Sound Vibrations Organism (Avigail) Yes AVI ~ making sounds and listening to sounds is a very human activity....
  September 2nd, 2016 14:02
• #148-That\'s When It Happened (Mads) Thanks for sharing a bit more of your life with us MADS. All Men want to...
  September 2nd, 2016 12:23
• THE EVERGREENS OF FORKS (Sinfullove) WELCOME SL ~ Thanks for your first poem ~ love HAIKU. This one is elegant...
  September 2nd, 2016 10:17
• Intruder (Janeeryl) WELCOME JANE ~ Thanks for a very enigmatic first poem. The structure...
  September 2nd, 2016 10:07
• A Living Proof (FruitfulSpirit) BEAUTIFUL SWEETHEART ! We need to cultivate God's Spirit and keep him...
  September 2nd, 2016 09:23
• I Think (Tony36) Thanks for sharing TONY we all need a bit of humour ! My advice to you is...
  September 2nd, 2016 06:57
• explore spirit dimension (Avigail) Thank you Professor ~ I love you and i always enjoy sitting at your feet'...
  September 2nd, 2016 06:51
• Consideration (DMC13) WELCOME DMC ~ Thanks you for your CONSIDERATION in joining MPS ~ and in...
  September 2nd, 2016 03:20
• Consideration (DMC13) WELCOME DMC ~ Thanks you for your CONSIDERATION in joining MPS ~ and in...
  September 2nd, 2016 03:20
• #142-I Like To Draw (Mads) NOW TO THE POEM ~ The problem of using your arms as a chopping board never...
  September 1st, 2016 18:41
• #142-I Like To Draw (Mads) HI ANGEL ~ Pleased you now have a supportive BF ~ You look good together...
  September 1st, 2016 18:35
• Worthless (Mummyb) WELCOME MUMMY B ~ Thanks for a very poignant and angst filled first...
  September 1st, 2016 18:27
• Ode To Opia (Thelostdaimon) WELCOME TLD ~ Thanks for a challenging first poem made me think about OPIA...
  September 1st, 2016 18:09
• paint me a picture (_Lily_fortune_) Thanks for sharing LILY ~ Love the poem and the message it brings. As you...
  September 1st, 2016 16:19
• Reflections of My Imperfections (FruitfulSpirit) Yes I have listened to the song and it is too too beautiful for words ! ...
  September 1st, 2016 16:02
• Reflections of My Imperfections (FruitfulSpirit) HI ANGEL ~ love you picture ~ You and your daughter are beautiful # just...
  September 1st, 2016 15:51
• Villa(i)n Elle (Lysistrata) Thanks LYSI ~ Poetic rules of form and function are always meant to be...
  September 1st, 2016 12:44
• JOURNEYS (Shadowhand) Thanks SH ~ Like so many Old Sailors ~ you have found (to your...
  September 1st, 2016 09:41
• #146-They \"Never Meant To\" (Mads) Very graphic video ANGEL and the picture of the arm with all the cuts...
  September 1st, 2016 09:33
• Strengh💚 (Lucy_willz1221) WELCOME LUCY (nice name) Thanks for your first poem short but very wise !...
  September 1st, 2016 09:13
• Of longing and dreams (JohnThomas) "LOVES LABOUR NOT QUITE LOST !" Love the ethereal visual very...
  September 1st, 2016 08:22
• Hunger (Elphaba993) There is redemption through he shedding of blood ! I know it gives you...
  September 1st, 2016 08:19
• 12 Roses (Tony36) Thanks for sharing TONY ~ very interesting ad a lovely heart tugger !...
  September 1st, 2016 08:11
• goodbye (Daniellemiller7) WELCOME DANIELLE (LOVELY NAME) ~ Thanks for your first poem on MPS ~ a bit...
  September 1st, 2016 04:39
• Release. (Camille) Ohhhhh CAMILLE ~ My heart aches with you ~ my heart aches for you. My...
  September 1st, 2016 04:22
• Breath (EstherActs) WELCOME ESTHER (lovely name) Thanks for your first poem ~ it raps well ~...
  September 1st, 2016 03:48
• Down at The Station (Moontigerntn) Great poem ~ Take the "A" Train (A = AMORE) Love the agony and ecstasy in...
  August 31st, 2016 16:56
• A Note of Suicide (FruitfulSpirit) Thanks SWEETHEART ~ there is a lot of angst in your poem and writing about...
  August 31st, 2016 16:01
• Like The Night (Arevalolo) WELCOME AREVA ~ Thanks you for a very elegant first poem ~ lovely...
  August 31st, 2016 15:49
• Am I A Poet? (Aylaviolet) Welcome AYLA thanks for your first elegant poem. It is sad but its also...
  August 31st, 2016 15:36
• A Note of Suicide (FruitfulSpirit) Ohhhh SWEETHEART ~ Spiritual Suicide is in someways worse than Physical...
  August 31st, 2016 15:31
• Passion Fruit (Notapoet) VERY 18+ NAP ~ I loved it ! I have written poems about every sense being...
  August 31st, 2016 11:27
• imagination (Avigail) IMAGINATION AVI ~ like so so many things is a good SERVANT but a bad...
  August 31st, 2016 11:20
• Love 2 (Tony36) Thanks TONY ~ The Love of a loving Lady changes things and makes life...
  August 31st, 2016 09:38
• Empty and Alone (Ternic73) Ohhhhh SWEETHEART ~ This poem is so so sad for me to read. You are a...
  August 31st, 2016 09:13
• Where Were You (Amarea2016) Lovely poem AMARE with a bitter sweet content `! All kids need a Daddy's...
  August 31st, 2016 08:33
• I\'m here. (Camille) YES CAMILLE ~ I do see love ~ behind you sad and beautiful eyes and...
  August 31st, 2016 08:26
• Sketches Out Of Time (JohnThomas) Very sensuous poem JOHN ~ Of all the Girls you've ever loved before ? I...
  August 31st, 2016 04:38
• MY LIGHTHOUSE (Shadowhand) WELCOME DAVID ~ Thanks for an elegant first poem # quatrains and a...
  August 31st, 2016 04:32
• Delirium (Elphaba993) Thanks ELPHA for another haunting and beautiful love poem. We all have...
  August 31st, 2016 03:11
• VANESSA VEGA (Quietstorm_Dru) Thanks DRU ~ A friend like Vanessa are worth their weight in GOLD. I'm...
  August 30th, 2016 16:21
• HIDING (Illia) Thanks NACTON ~ It's easy to hide but if we never come out in the open e...
  August 30th, 2016 13:48
• hands (TheWritingInstrument) The human hand ANGEL is one of the most beautiful and yet one of the most...
  August 30th, 2016 13:39
• Fairground (Camille) Thanks CAMILLE your poem is a thrilling roundabout ~ challenging. I'd...
  August 30th, 2016 13:30
• Messy (Elphaba993) NO ELPHA ~ You know how much i love your potential ~ However messy your...
  August 30th, 2016 13:20
• The story of a plastic bag and the universe. (Avigail) In my (Christian) Philosophy AVI we are all part of a continuum. You and...
  August 30th, 2016 11:20
• The Father (Tony36) Please check my poem ~ LIGHT A CANDLE ~ Thanks BRIAN
  August 30th, 2016 08:21
• Light (Ternic73) LIGHT a candle wherever you are ~ Let God's light shine out afar. A...
  August 30th, 2016 07:42
• The Father (Tony36) Very powerful and moving TONY ~ He did right ! Any Man who porks a ten...
  August 30th, 2016 07:36
• My significant other (FruitfulSpirit) WELCOME FRUITFUL SPIRIT (LOVELY NAME !) Thanks for sharing your first...
  August 30th, 2016 07:25
• You didn\'t notice (Tmtruhl) WELCOME TM ~ Thanks for sharing a beautiful and yet poignant poem straight...
  August 30th, 2016 03:47
• Tonight\'s Poetry (Elphaba993) Thanks ELPHA ~ Personally I find cutting and other forms of self-harming...
  August 29th, 2016 17:42
• Ruined (Adamwilliam) WELCOME ADAM ~ Thanks for a very passionate first poem dripping with...
  August 29th, 2016 17:04
• I LOVE ANGELS ~ GOD\'S MESSENGERS (BRIAN & ANGELA) Thanks to all those who contributed. ANGELS are a great subject and you...
  August 29th, 2016 16:33
• YOU. (Pierce_The_Ky) Ohhhh KY ~ we all experience the Ecstasy & Agony of LOVE so I can...
  August 29th, 2016 16:29
• Angel\'s eye (Reivax Camlost) BEAUTIFUL POEM REIVAX ~ It captures the essence of Angels and as you know...
  August 29th, 2016 16:23
• Our story (Amal) NICE POEM AMAL ~Thanks for sharing ~ it describes how Love really is ! ...
  August 29th, 2016 16:16
• Kamehameha Kiss (Ejvazquez17) THANKS ELIJAH ~ Lips on Lips is one of the most sensuous aspects of love...
  August 29th, 2016 14:12
• #122-I\'ll Be Gone (Mads) THANK GOD FOR THAT ANGEL ! When i first read it ~ I thought you were...
  August 29th, 2016 13:50
• Miracles do Happen (A poet) Thanks POET ~ I believe in Miracles ~ I've seen a Soul set free ~...
  August 29th, 2016 13:14
• Grounding Meditation (Avigail) GOOD AFTERNOON PROEFESSOR AVIGAIL ! Firstly thanks for the awesome poem...
  August 29th, 2016 11:17
• -My Days Without You (T-Akil-J) WELCOME AKIL ~ Thanks for your first poem ~ very poignant and it rings a...
  August 29th, 2016 11:04
• The Sun Is Out (Kilos505) WELCOME KILOS ~ Thanks for a challenging and personal first poem. I can...
  August 29th, 2016 04:12
• Treated (Skylarloveskats) WELCOME SKY ~ Thanks for a very poignant and personal first poem. When...
  August 28th, 2016 17:45
• #123-Finding Myself (for BRIAN and JOHN) (Mads) Thanks for this ANGEL ~ Love the video ~ very playful ! I am pleased that...
  August 28th, 2016 16:16
• Sustenance (Doll in Wonderland) Thanks for another great poem DOLL. Perfectly spaced free verse ~ full of...
  August 28th, 2016 10:45
• What if… questions... ideas... (Avigail) INTERESTING & CHALLENGING AVI ~ Trying to see life and its development for...
  August 28th, 2016 10:31
• Battle Cry (Tony36) AMEN TONY God is Sovereign and Satan is already defeated but until his...
  August 28th, 2016 07:02
• The Iron Cross (John Lee)
  August 28th, 2016 04:03
• The Iron Cross (John Lee) AMEN JOHN ~ Thanks for leading us back to HIS CROSS. Love the visual. "So...
  August 28th, 2016 04:03
• Perfection (MarisaGreen16) Thanks ALEX we all (if we are honest) seek PERFECTION internally (a...
  August 28th, 2016 03:44
• The Trouble with Being a Mermaid (Doll in Wonderland) YES DOLL ~ There is trouble with being a Mermaid and being "different" in...
  August 27th, 2016 16:46
• To Run (Tony36) Thanks TONY we all want to run away from the things that irk us most ! We...
  August 27th, 2016 16:15
• The Night of Pepper (GeorgieW) WELCOME GEORGIE ~ Thanks for sharing a very personal and poignant poem. ...
  August 27th, 2016 16:07
• Pandora boxes (Avigail) Thanks PROFESSOR for once again stiring our grey matter ! In all our...
  August 27th, 2016 15:53
• #34-Nobody Truly Knows (story) (Mads) Ohhhhh ANGEL another poem driping with pathos ! First let me counter your...
  August 27th, 2016 15:29
• A simple mystery. (Hharding23) WELCOME HARDING ~ THANKS FOR A CHALLENGING FIRST POEM ! For a maiden...
  August 27th, 2016 14:32
• Change (Kind.adolescent) HI KA ~ Last year ~ past year ~ send it off with a blast Dear ! Next year...
  August 27th, 2016 14:11
• One (UnSeen) WELCOME UNSEEN ~ Thanks for sharing an enigmatic poem. The message I...
  August 27th, 2016 03:32