Comments on community poems by orchidee

• Duo Ballet. (Fay Slimm.) Good write and pic Fay.
  November 16th, 2020 10:50
• Keys Lost. (Goldfinch60) Good write Gold. Yes, we may forget something from 30 seconds ago, but be...
  November 16th, 2020 02:53
• WATERFALLS ~ A FLOW SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN) Good write A&B.
  November 16th, 2020 02:52
• GRANDMOTHER (Rose~) A lovely write Rose.
  November 15th, 2020 10:34
• A Hard Lesson Learned (Neville) Yes, I banged me toe on the table leg. That was a hard knock! C\'mon now,...
  November 15th, 2020 08:11
• Broken Perfectly (PoeticBiscuit) Meanwhile - I am perfect, not human! heehee (I wish I would shut up. lol).
  November 15th, 2020 03:37
• Yaupon Holly Holy (Gary Edward Geraci) Good write Gary. I\'m a bit un-cultured (lol). Erm, I\'m rather familiar...
  November 15th, 2020 03:36
• Decades Before A Smile (ForeverJesus7) Good write Forever. Yes, and \'meanwhile\' (in our earthly lifespan) we...
  November 15th, 2020 03:32
• A PATRIOT I (or A DOUBLE WHAMMY) (Michael Edwards) On a light note - aww, but the National Anthem is one of Miss Berles and...
  November 15th, 2020 03:29
• Here We Go!! (Goldfinch60) I think some of it (not all of it) is a judgement for our cruelty to...
  November 15th, 2020 03:26
• Here We Go!! (Goldfinch60) I agree too that \'organised religion\' is a farce. There is common sense...
  November 15th, 2020 03:23
• AS TIME GOES BY ~ A CLASSIC PANTOUM (ANGELA & BRIAN) Good write B&A. For Fido and Me - a decade 10 million years ago! lol.
  November 15th, 2020 03:19
• LIFETIME (Dove) Oohh, OK, I will then. I mght swoon though! heehee.
  November 14th, 2020 14:11
• Such a Good Start. (Goldfinch60) Good write Gold.
  November 14th, 2020 03:14
• Yellow Leaves (Dasim) A fine write Dasim.
  November 13th, 2020 02:43
• Where Did This Come From? (Goldfinch60) A fine write Gold. Fido will howl and drown me out if I start singng to...
  November 13th, 2020 02:41
• UK ADAPTABILITY ~ A FREE VERSE 2 12 ACROSTIC SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN) Surely it\'s got to be somewhat better, now that there are no dodgy...
  November 13th, 2020 02:40
• my dreams light (Dusk arising) Good write dusk.
  November 12th, 2020 10:01
• A THORN IN MY FLESH (Amon) A fine write Amon.
  November 12th, 2020 10:00
• Co-Existence (Fay Slimm.) Good write Fay.
  November 12th, 2020 05:12
• Winter Twilight (Dove) Now why didn\'t I write this fine poem about you, if the poem was about a...
  November 12th, 2020 02:39
• Sugar Coated. (Goldfinch60) A good write Gold. My poem goes: \'Each bit of ground covered in wet...
  November 12th, 2020 02:37
• to end all wars (Dusk arising) A fine write dusk.
  November 11th, 2020 09:50
• War-Usage (Fay Slimm.) A fine write Fay.
  November 11th, 2020 05:13
• Winning. (Goldfinch60) Good write Gold. And to bear in mind too: \'We may be wrong\' e.g....
  November 11th, 2020 02:56
• POEM FOR A WINTER\'S NIGHT (Michael Edwards) Good write and pic M.
  November 11th, 2020 02:53
• USA ~ SEVEN KEY ENVIRONMENTAL ISSUES ~ SEVEN RHYMING QUATRAINS (ANGELA & BRIAN) A fine write B&A. It would have become The Land of Tr*mpton Dodgy Barnet!
  November 11th, 2020 02:51
• withered shrub (Dusk arising) Depends on the motives, I suppose. Jesus called some people hypocrites,...
  November 10th, 2020 08:13
• Our Tune. (Fay Slimm.) A fine write Fay. I\'m on the gin - from the Co-op! lol.
  November 10th, 2020 08:11
• love is a pose of power (Lucifer very very very 1st) That\'s OK, as your unique style - no capitals. We may have to be more...
  November 10th, 2020 03:06
• Slug Trap (Syd) I\'m a bit uncultured. I might not be a Qanon anti vaxer, if I knew what...
  November 10th, 2020 03:03
• Cinema Paridiso. (Goldfinch60) Good write Gold. Yes, they weep at my singing too, but tears of agony!...
  November 10th, 2020 03:02
• Ode to the snail (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽) You seeing more snails?! heehee.
  November 9th, 2020 15:14
• Poem, Original Sin? (AwHec8) I\'m not disagreeing with any of this. I say - there has to be some sort...
  November 9th, 2020 15:13
• The King (FineB) Good write Fine.
  November 9th, 2020 15:07
• Ode to the snail (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽) Yes, I like snails too. I will save them if I see them on paths in damp...
  November 9th, 2020 10:21
• Ode to the snail (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽) Good write Z.
  November 9th, 2020 09:58
• Back There (Fay Slimm.) Good write Fay.
  November 9th, 2020 09:57
• PRESIDENT OF USA ~ AN ACROSTIC 9 2 3 SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN) Good write A&B.
  November 9th, 2020 09:55
• Somewhere Between Trees (Neville) Good write Neville.
  November 9th, 2020 05:53
• The Unknown Is Out There. (Goldfinch60) And - how\'s the thinking going? Will it be dangerous?!
  November 9th, 2020 03:11
• The Unknown Is Out There. (Goldfinch60) Good write Gold. Erm, a hefty shower of rain is waiting for me, as I look...
  November 9th, 2020 03:10
• Poppy (An Acrostic for Remembrance Sunday) (AuburnScribbler) Good write AS.
  November 8th, 2020 10:19
• Unsung (Fay Slimm.) A fine write Fay.
  November 8th, 2020 10:18
• Nevafar (Neville) Oooh, I gotta meet her - this French lass! Will it so me any good?
  November 8th, 2020 10:17
• Clouds (Bay) Good write Bay.
  November 8th, 2020 06:50
• A Day Out in London Town (Alan .S. Jeeves) Good write Alan.
  November 8th, 2020 06:49
• they never leave you (revisited) (Dusk arising) A sensitive write dusk.
  November 8th, 2020 06:48
• SHORTLIES (2) (Michael Edwards) Good write M. It will be the last day of our life if there is a fire....
  November 8th, 2020 03:42
• The QUEEN (FineB) Good write Fine. The King plods on, a square at a time - well, except for...
  November 8th, 2020 03:40
• Revering Remembrance (Orchidee) I was ambivalent towards Remembrance in some of my school days. Some years...
  November 8th, 2020 03:35
• Happy Anniversary Joyce. (Goldfinch60) A poignant write Gold. A bit embarrassing with Ch...card list, if we may...
  November 8th, 2020 03:24
• 🧡 AMERICA 🤍 AMERICA 💙 ~ ACROSTIC 7 - 7 SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN) That dodgy barnet bloke is still arguing. He don\'t want to go!
  November 8th, 2020 03:21
• A Taxonomy of Knowledge Warren Gaston (Warren Gaston) Erm, I was so busy learning the rest of this, that me house burnt down by...
  November 7th, 2020 09:37
• MERRY CHRISTMAS (Last Shadow) Best wishes, if a bit early!
  November 7th, 2020 09:34
• The Bishop (FineB) Bishops in battles! \'God is on our side\' both sides say. Doh!
  November 7th, 2020 04:50
• The KNIGHT (FineB) Yes, a tricky piece - one straight and one diagonal in the same move -...
  November 7th, 2020 03:07
• Total Confusion. (Goldfinch60) Some hymn somehow kept missing out the first word of each line for some...
  November 7th, 2020 03:06
• Unity of Opposites (Neville) Good write Neville. No reason why I should get chalk and cheese mixed up,...
  November 7th, 2020 03:04
• Single Issue Voter (Gary Edward Geraci) You trusting someone with such a dodgy barnet? (hairstyle, that is - as we...
  November 7th, 2020 03:02
• Asking (Fay Slimm.) A fine write Fay.
  November 6th, 2020 10:23
• THE Rook (FineB) Good write Fine. There\'s the sneaky \'Castling\' move with the King too....
  November 6th, 2020 02:56
• Lockdown Once More. (Goldfinch60) You can go to different shops - the ones that are open, that is. You can...
  November 6th, 2020 02:54
• SHORTLIES (1) (Michael Edwards) Ohh, from a hymn \'Immortal love, forever full\' there is a line \'A never...
  November 6th, 2020 02:52
• SHORTLIES (1) (Michael Edwards) Ohh, from a hymn \'Immortal love, forever full\' there is a line \'A never...
  November 6th, 2020 02:52
• TOO CLOSE TO CALL ~ AN ACROSTIC 3 5 2 4 SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN) I still dunno if we can trust someone with such a dodgy barnet! Oops, I\'m...
  November 6th, 2020 02:50
• THE WONDERFUL CREATOR (Amon) Good write A.
  November 5th, 2020 10:00
• Thoughts (TREDEUX) Good write T.
  November 5th, 2020 09:59
• THE PAWN (FineB) Good write Fine. Yes, a sideways confrontation. They cannot attack...
  November 5th, 2020 03:30
• Smiles Are Always There. (Goldfinch60) A good write Gold. I dunno - lockdown or not - no smiles from some shop...
  November 5th, 2020 03:17
• Numberless (Fay Slimm.) Good write Fay.
  November 4th, 2020 14:02
• SEASONS FOR ALL REASONS ~ FOUR BALANCED 575 HAIKU (ANGELA & BRIAN) Good write B&A. Re: Pope - a church ranted on when they made John Newman...
  November 4th, 2020 03:08
• Contrasts Considered (Orchidee) Well, it\'s \'modern\' for me, by my ratings - the author was born in
  November 4th, 2020 03:02
• Violence Solved? (Goldfinch60) Oh lol, good write Gold.
  November 4th, 2020 02:47
• ASSURANCE NURTURES JOY (Michael Edwards) Good wrtie and pic M. Miss Berles has her serious head on too. She asks...
  November 4th, 2020 02:46
• It Was Nothing Much (Ugwu Erochukwu Shedrach) Good write Ugwu.
  November 3rd, 2020 10:45
• COME WITH ME (Amon) Good write Amon.
  November 3rd, 2020 10:44
• Roosting (Neville) Do you keep chickens? You in that coop?! lol.
  November 3rd, 2020 06:13
• Self- Worth (Shahla Latifi) A fine write Shahla.
  November 3rd, 2020 03:01
• She Was Back Once More. (Goldfinch60) A fine write Gold.
  November 3rd, 2020 02:59
• Hunger (Fay Slimm.) Good write Fay.
  November 2nd, 2020 05:01
• My Demons Have Died (Markthetabor) Glad to hear it! Oohhh, we don\'t want demons. Not today, not any day,...
  November 2nd, 2020 03:02
• Everyday is Halloween (Arobot) I don\'t know if you live in the UK, or have an equivalent to Job Centres....
  November 2nd, 2020 02:50
• Survive Limerick. (Goldfinch60) A fine write Gold. I got in a muddle. The sheet hit the fan, and got all...
  November 2nd, 2020 02:44
• CHRISTMAS PRESENTS ~ CHRISTMAS SPENDING ~ SIX RHYMING QUATRAINS ! (ANGELA & BRIAN) \'All contributions gratefully received\' said the Vicar, as they passed...
  November 2nd, 2020 02:40
• Heydays (Fay Slimm.) Good write Fay.
  November 1st, 2020 10:30
• Little Shepherdesses (Neville) They having fun?! A roll in the hay? Glad some people are! Fido won\'t let...
  November 1st, 2020 05:33
• RAINDROPS - HOPE - STEAMDROPS (Aiyejinna Abraham O.) Good write A.
  November 1st, 2020 03:22
• WHY I LOVE THE LAKE. (Aiyejinna Abraham O.) Good write Aiyejinna.
  November 1st, 2020 03:21
• For the Holy Father’s Intentions (Gary Edward Geraci) A fine write Gary. Oops, I\'ve been reading about the Reformation. Some...
  November 1st, 2020 03:03
• Autumns Wonder. (Goldfinch60) A fine write and pic Gold. Yes, brightening up a sub-power station near us...
  November 1st, 2020 03:00
• UNRELATED (1, 2, 3) (Michael Edwards) Good writes and pic M. Sometimes though we might wish we had a bit of...
  November 1st, 2020 02:56
• I can’t let go (Kevin B.) Good write Kevin. I should never have let go of the rope when I was...
  October 31st, 2020 03:04
• The Witching Hours. (Goldfinch60) Good write Gold. It\'s a sort of plague, to be sure. Meanwhile I could...
  October 31st, 2020 03:02
• CHRISTMAS P R E S E N C E ~ A PANTOUM (ANGELA & BRIAN) Good write B&A.
  October 31st, 2020 02:58
• listen and lay back (Dusk arising) Good write dusk.
  October 30th, 2020 10:55
• The Queens Gambit (FineB) Also - the PC brigade won\'t like chess. The Queen rushes around in all...
  October 30th, 2020 05:05
• The Queens Gambit (FineB) A fine write FB. It struck me the other day, how chess is a battle game -...
  October 30th, 2020 05:03
• Be To Me. (Fay Slimm.) A fine write Fay.
  October 30th, 2020 05:01
• Depression (L. B. Mek) Good write LB.
  October 30th, 2020 05:01