Comments on community poems by orchidee
- your the one (Crowns4Christ)
If ya had not have told us who this was for, we woudl never have known -...
October 30th, 2020 02:47 - And So the Waves Whispered... (Dove)
A fine write RB.
I whispered - or yelled - \"Cooeeeee! Do ya hear me?!\"...
October 30th, 2020 02:28 - Summit of Life. (Goldfinch60)
A fine write Gold.
I stumbled in 1066 and never recovered - or did I?!...
October 30th, 2020 02:27 - This Time. (Fay Slimm.)
Good write Fay. As I say, not being near the sea, often I only get as far...
October 29th, 2020 02:59 - Language and Music. (Goldfinch60)
Good write and clip Gold.
October 29th, 2020 02:57 - UNSAME (2) (Michael Edwards)
Lol - Good writes and pic M.
October 29th, 2020 02:56 - Memento Mori (Gary Edward Geraci)
A fine write Gary.
Or - They looked inside my head, And found but three...
October 28th, 2020 11:15 - Innerness (Neville)
Could I meet her, or is she all yours? I barge in without asking...
October 28th, 2020 05:17 - Remainers (Fay Slimm.)
Good write Fay.
October 28th, 2020 05:16 - As If It Is Hard Enough To Have Good Friends Of The Opposite Sex (Gary Edward Geraci)
It\'s OK in loving, but not for extra slap and tickle. The response from...
October 28th, 2020 02:45 - Tides of Fortune. (Goldfinch60)
Good wite Gold. Aww - they wish the tide had turned, and brought my ship...
October 28th, 2020 02:41 - ARBOUR RHYMES WITH BARBER (Michael Edwards)
A previous Vicar said \'On no, it\'s not Chewsday, it\'s Toosday\' (for...
October 28th, 2020 02:39 - Changing (Fay Slimm.)
Good write Fay.
October 27th, 2020 11:47 - Hiding Behind New Dust (Neville)
A fine write Neville.
Blame me teacher - one said to us \'Sing loud, so...
October 27th, 2020 08:58 - Restoration Reassurances - Isaiah Series (12) (Orchidee)
Thanks Amon.
October 27th, 2020 08:54 - Endeavouring Elucidations (Orchidee)
The original hymn was written by a former Poet Laureate.
October 27th, 2020 03:10 - One with Nature (Dove)
Good write RB.
October 27th, 2020 02:58 - My Place of Dreams. (Goldfinch60)
Yes, country/river walks can be inspiring, as here!
October 27th, 2020 02:56 - Tall Tales (Fay Slimm.)
Doh! It\'s the duck pond for me. I never get as far the sea, not being...
October 26th, 2020 06:23 - Unruly (L. B. Mek)
Oohh, I must have me metres (usually) and me melodic whims.
They\'re only...
October 26th, 2020 06:21 - becalmed beyond escape (Dusk arising)
Was you at Trafalgar in 1805 on one of them boats? Did ya meet Nelson?!
October 26th, 2020 02:41 - Time Restabled. (Goldfinch60)
We\'re in the darker nights now!
Erm, aren\'t they always dark? And...
October 26th, 2020 02:40 - Time Restabled. (Goldfinch60)
Good write Gold.
I\'m gonna waffle. We changed clocks in the houes - had...
October 26th, 2020 02:38 - fallen dreams (Dusk arising)
A fine write dusk.
October 25th, 2020 08:06 - Nostalgia. (Fay Slimm.)
A fine write Fay.
October 25th, 2020 08:05 - Borrowed Time (BoxMyHeart)
Good write Box.
You seem to be able to see both sides in this, summarised...
October 25th, 2020 03:13 - Tongues In Abstract (Gary Edward Geraci)
Good write Gary.
Are you of the \'you all\' or \'y\'all\' variety?
The...
October 25th, 2020 02:58 - Darkness to Light. (Goldfinch60)
Good write Gold.
Doh! We\'re moving into the darkness, the evenings, that...
October 25th, 2020 02:52 - Beyond Broke (Neville)
Where ya meeting all these gals? Or is the same gal each time?! lol. I...
October 24th, 2020 11:09 - a executive order (Lucifer very very very 1st)
Yes, it\'s OK as \'poetic licence\', I feel, the non-capitals thing.
So -...
October 24th, 2020 02:09 - I KID YOU NOT AT ALL (Michael Edwards)
Erm, yes, they cannot rename it Whitepool!
And following Goldie - Miss...
October 24th, 2020 02:06 - In The Last Century. (Goldfinch60)
Why, yes, being born in the 20th Century, and now it\'s the 21st...
October 24th, 2020 02:03 - Commitment (Fay Slimm.)
A fine write Fay.
October 23rd, 2020 05:39 - Awash With Sunlight. (Goldfinch60)
Good write Gold.
October 23rd, 2020 01:51 - STAYCATION ~ HOLIDAY IN THE UK ~ ACROSTIC 7 2 3 2 SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Good write B&A.
October 23rd, 2020 01:50 - Humbly with Love (VPalmer)
Good write V.
October 22nd, 2020 13:21 - Silence (Last Shadow)
Good write Fish.
October 22nd, 2020 08:42 - you ask me why? (Dusk arising)
Good write Dusk.
October 22nd, 2020 02:12 - The Man From The Pru. (Goldfinch60)
Seen one - a milkman! In a 1970\'s comedy show.
My question is - When...
October 22nd, 2020 02:11 - The Man From The Pru. (Goldfinch60)
A fine write Gold.
I was a sort of Milkman\'s Assistant, even before my...
October 22nd, 2020 02:09 - Hold Hard. (Fay Slimm.)
We\'ll have to get up an hour early to see more daylight then - lighter...
October 21st, 2020 07:52 - R E S P O N S I B I L I T Y ~ AN ACROSTIC SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A fine write B&A.We can only do so much - the ridiculous and impossible:...
October 21st, 2020 01:43 - Lost Pictures. (Goldfinch60)
Good write Gold.
October 21st, 2020 01:40 - UNSAME 1 - 3 (Michael Edwards)
Good writes and pic M. Hum-Berle Pie. Miss B make it?
October 21st, 2020 01:39 - Joker44’s Side – For Others (Nafis Light)
Good write J.
October 20th, 2020 10:51 - The Way, The Truth, and The Life -- Triplet of Haikus on John 14:6 (BlueHeron77)
A fine write Blue.
October 20th, 2020 10:51 - Nebulous (Fay Slimm.)
Good write Fay.
October 20th, 2020 07:05 - Los Echoes (Neville)
Someone having fun? Glad someone is, cos Fido won\'t let me! lol.
October 20th, 2020 07:01 - Redemption Song (ForeverJesus7)
Good write Dion.
October 20th, 2020 07:00 - \"Oh no - not your operation!\" (Doggerel Dave)
Some say \'Oohh, tell me more. Gimme a blow-by-blow account! Some...
October 20th, 2020 01:58 - Chemistry of Love Acrostic. (Goldfinch60)
A fine write Gold.
October 20th, 2020 01:54 - A CURRY A WEEK ~ SAVES LIVES ! ~ TEN RHYMING DOUBLETS ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A fine write B&A.
I\'ve never liked the look of curries, let alone taste...
October 19th, 2020 10:29 - caring church minister. (Goldfinch60)
Oh dear, yes, you told us about this before in a similar poem.
I heard a...
October 19th, 2020 10:26 - Regret (Fay Slimm.)
Good write Fay.
October 19th, 2020 10:24 - History Has a Way of Living Twice (Steve Unruh)
A fine historical write Steve.Yes, rather like the Wheat and Weeds Bible...
October 19th, 2020 02:09 - Redemption Rejoicings - Isaiah Series (9) (Orchidee)
Keep marching on, but don\'t go round in circles!
October 19th, 2020 02:03 - NIGELLA (Michael Edwards)
Oh lol. fine write and pic M.
Some quirky lines get into comedy shows,...
October 19th, 2020 01:51 - go then (Dusk arising)
A good write Dusk.
October 19th, 2020 01:48 - CHESS (FineB)
Good write Fine.
October 18th, 2020 12:55 - bored through overkill (Dusk arising)
Yes, it can get boring. Then we may become common-place, forgetting simple...
October 18th, 2020 10:25 - Unity (Gary Edward Geraci)
Waht can one with such a dodgy barnet promise you there in the USA? You...
October 18th, 2020 09:26 - Blondie - A tribute to Debbie Harry (FineB)
Good write Fine.
October 18th, 2020 02:25 - Into Your Future. (Goldfinch60)
Good write Gold.
It would have been really old to psot Max Bygraves...
October 18th, 2020 02:20 - PEACE IN ADVERSITY ~ ANGELA 💛 BRIAN ~ A PANTOUM (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Good write B&A.
I dunno what the fuss is all about. It keeps the...
October 18th, 2020 02:19 - Waxing Poetic (Gary Edward Geraci)
Erm, you\'ve lost me, with this USA poem. lol.
I will do a UK one maybe -...
October 17th, 2020 10:55 - A NEW DOOR (Michael Edwards)
Yes, best wishes to you both :)
Well, I got a new door. It would have...
October 17th, 2020 02:32 - Idiomatic Incisiveness (Orchidee)
I will aim to explain more, if I can, if you are completely befuddled by...
October 17th, 2020 02:25 - The Kingdom (Crowns4Christ)
A true write blue.
This is true, apart from the entanglements of man has...
October 17th, 2020 02:11 - Driving Into Daylight. (Goldfinch60)
Good write Gold.
October 17th, 2020 02:07 - in fields of green (Dusk arising)
Good write Dusk.
October 17th, 2020 02:06 - Very,Very Fast Food. (Goldfinch60)
Oh lol, good write Gold.
October 16th, 2020 13:12 - Waving at Dolphins (Neville)
A fine write N.
October 16th, 2020 08:39 - a lass named michelle (Crowns4Christ)
It\'s cos I called Melissa \'Michelle\'. lol.
Yes. I\'m married to Katie...
October 16th, 2020 02:28 - Revitalize. (Fay Slimm.)
Good write Fay.
I tried this on a literal walk. I didn\'t quite get the...
October 16th, 2020 02:24 - Quarantine Senryu (Lorna)
Yes, not many more things more important that getting the pizzas in!...
October 16th, 2020 02:22 - Through The Storm (ForeverJesus7)
A fine write Dion.
October 16th, 2020 02:21 - of november fallen (Dusk arising)
A fine write Dusk.
October 16th, 2020 02:20 - WHAT IS THE PURPOSE OF WASPS ? ~ AN AFFIRMATIVE PANTOUM ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A fine write B&A.
I can\'t have figs. It\'s TMI (Too Much Info) to say...
October 16th, 2020 02:19 - Joker44’s Side – Life (Nafis Light)
Good write J.
October 15th, 2020 10:16 - Staying Alive (Lorna)
A fine write Lorna.
I shouldn\'t be alive. I tried holding my breath for...
October 15th, 2020 08:59 - Refreshing Renewal - Isaiah Series (7) (Orchidee)
This series goes on a bit! I\'ve not stopped at EVERY chapter in Isaiah...
October 15th, 2020 02:46 - Scarecrow Ode (Dove)
Good write RB.
I\'m going nuts! I felt sorry for a scarecrow out in a...
October 15th, 2020 02:35 - Left Behind. (Fay Slimm.)
Yes, some summer nights it hardly seemed to get dark at all. Good write...
October 15th, 2020 02:31 - Death Missed. (Goldfinch60)
Good write Gold.
I did a similar poem, including \'the last trump\'....
October 15th, 2020 02:30 - I was made for you (Crowns4Christ)
Good write Michelle.
October 14th, 2020 10:43 - The Sheets and Time (Lorna)
Good write Lorna.
Yes, \'Carpe Diem\', Seize The Day, as they say. But,...
October 14th, 2020 05:47 - Wasps (Neville)
Yes, I wouldn\'t swat a bee.
October 14th, 2020 04:06 - LIVERPOOL ~ SILENCED BY COVID 19 ~ AN ACROSTIC EULOGY (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A fine write B&A.
October 14th, 2020 04:06 - Goldie and Orchi at Hastings. (Goldfinch60)
I think we was both there too at Traflgar in 1805 (Oct 21st). Was it our...
October 14th, 2020 02:17 - Raptoring. (Fay Slimm.)
A fien write Fay. I\'m still waiting for the No.7 bus. Someone just passed...
October 14th, 2020 02:05 - Goldie and Orchi at Hastings. (Goldfinch60)
It\'s that day of madness again!
Note to other poets: It\'s all true you...
October 14th, 2020 02:03 - ode to a pizza (Crowns4Christ)
A tasty write Melissa. A hint of garlic too? But hardly any - or none at...
October 13th, 2020 14:17 - The Arrows of Time (Lorna)
Oh lol, the title. You know, do you, that Goldfinch and I were at The...
October 13th, 2020 07:36 - Bring us More Liquor (Neville)
Well, there\'s the line, not that I subscribe to it....... He got rid of...
October 13th, 2020 07:28 - Awayness (Fay Slimm.)
Where ya going?! Good write Fay.
October 13th, 2020 07:23 - The Four Letter Word (Lorna)
A four letter word - SING. OK, I will - for EVER. Another four letter word...
October 13th, 2020 02:06 - Sometime Life Happens. (Goldfinch60)
Good write Gold.
Yes, like literal paths or tracks through life. On...
October 13th, 2020 01:56 - EFFECT OF COVID 19 ~ A 6 3 5 LAMENT SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
That\'s more than can be said about MY singing Lorna! heehee. Me sell-by...
October 12th, 2020 12:56 - EFFECT OF COVID 19 ~ A 6 3 5 LAMENT SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Thanks B&A.
Why the disappointment? I couldn\'t turn up to sing at...
October 12th, 2020 09:03 - The Four Letter Word (Lorna)
A fine write Lorna, on a slightly drizzly mane here. We had \'proper...
October 12th, 2020 09:00
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