Comments on community poems by orchidee
- SHADES OF GREEN ~ ANGELA ~ A BLANK VERSE SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Yes, lovely - green the colour symbolic of grace too. Maybe because...
September 30th, 2020 01:59 - lies to kill for (Dusk arising)
Yes, I agree, \'religion\' is the cause of many troubles. I don\'t mean...
September 30th, 2020 01:55 - ODE TO~SPIDER~WEB ~ AN ACROSTIC 3 2 6 3 SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Good write and clip B&A.
Yes, I saved a big green grasshopper thingy. Too...
September 29th, 2020 05:47 - Together (Fay Slimm.)
Good write Fay.
September 29th, 2020 05:45 - Circle of the Stove (MendedFences27)
I shall have to read this \'book\' when havign bit more time!
September 29th, 2020 02:08 - Dispirited hope (RiverJordan)
I never knew there was so much involved in being dispirited. Well, I know...
September 29th, 2020 01:51 - Shallow Brown. (Goldfinch60)
\'If music be the food of love, play on...\' About the only line of...
September 29th, 2020 01:50 - Come-a-Day (Neville)
Good write Neville. I wish the day-would-a-come that I give up singing!...
September 29th, 2020 01:49 - GINGERBREAD~MAN~BLUES A TRIOLET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
But aww! They got called \'Ginger Nuts\' in me school days. \'Nut\'...
September 28th, 2020 05:27 - Making His Way Home (Neville)
Good write Neville.
September 28th, 2020 05:25 - GINGERBREAD~MAN~BLUES A TRIOLET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
This is all too much for Fido and I - swoon! heehee.
September 28th, 2020 05:24 - Take One (Fay Slimm.)
A fine write Fay. I will \'take one\'read, and \'take two\' in fact, by...
September 28th, 2020 02:12 - A Day of Reckoning (Gerrylegister)
Yes, there is the offer of salvation to all, but also - we\'ve all got to...
September 28th, 2020 02:02 - Will She Sing to Me? (Goldfinch60)
Yes, I\'m sure she will. And she will drown me out too, or else you will...
September 28th, 2020 02:00 - “ Promises of Vows (Dove)
I dunno if it\'s a Triolet either - well, it\'s not a Toilet! lol. A fine...
September 27th, 2020 10:25 - Enmeshed (Fay Slimm.)
Yes, I don\'t like to destroy spider\'s webs, after all the time they\'ve...
September 27th, 2020 05:19 - Discarded 2 (Neville)
You knows I won\'t forget ya! lol.
Pity I shall be remembered for my...
September 27th, 2020 05:17 - SO IT\'S SUNDAY (Michael Edwards)
Good write and pic M.
What year was this? Something actually closed on a...
September 27th, 2020 05:15 - Words (MendedFences27)
Good write.
September 27th, 2020 02:08 - Salvation Seasons (Orchidee)
It\'s that same church again, Gold. You know it!
September 27th, 2020 02:08 - Hope is There. (Goldfinch60)
Good write Gold.
I got it wrong. Erm, I hoped for the worst, and prepared...
September 27th, 2020 01:55 - While On Our Way to Ouray (Gary Edward Geraci)
Good write Gary.
September 27th, 2020 01:53 - ON THE WINGS OF A DOVE ~ A PANTOUM SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A fine write B&A.
September 27th, 2020 01:53 - “Palindrome” Passion (Dove)
Good write RB, and I\'m glad some one(s) having fun here. Fido is fanning...
September 26th, 2020 11:03 - Transmutation (Laura🌻)
Good write Laura, also read by Brian and Angela\'s cat (Smokey) and my...
September 26th, 2020 11:02 - Compromise (Fay Slimm.)
Good write Fay.
September 26th, 2020 06:06 - Love (Everlong)
Good write Ever.
September 26th, 2020 01:43 - This World (Gerrylegister)
A fine write Gary.
I may need to post your poem in two parts - your...
September 26th, 2020 01:42 - Cheese Straws. (Goldfinch60)
A tasty write Gold.
September 26th, 2020 01:39 - GWYNEDD (Michael Edwards)
Yes, lovely write M.
Is it like Burlington? (Lord Berle-Ington\'s...
September 26th, 2020 01:38 - The Flowers of Zion (Gavin)
A fine write Gavin.
September 25th, 2020 10:47 - “a kyrielle “ New Start (Dove)
Good write RB.
A thousand times I said Hello - Hello, Hello, etc....!...
September 25th, 2020 10:42 - One Summer’s Day (Dove)
Good write of happy days RB.
September 25th, 2020 02:02 - Adonai (Gavin)
Yes, good write. Maybe we don\'t often think of \'What are God\'s names\'?
September 25th, 2020 02:00 - Where Am I. (Goldfinch60)
A lovley write Gold.
Where am I? Waiting at the bus stop for the No.7...
September 25th, 2020 01:58 - LITTER LOUTS ~A SALUTARY PANTOUM ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A fine write B&A. Yes, Fido bark furiously at any litter louts on his...
September 25th, 2020 01:54 - Sweetness. (Fay Slimm.)
I see a fine write Fay.
September 24th, 2020 05:50 - Just Supposing (Neville)
Well, I don\'t know. It don\'t seem apt to say \'A fine write/good...
September 24th, 2020 01:55 - Sex Saves Lives. (Goldfinch60)
Might have to swoon at this! Fido\'s ready to help me, in case I do. Well,...
September 24th, 2020 01:41 - “ Kyrielle Sonnet” Mountain Peaks (Dove)
Good write RB.
September 23rd, 2020 12:24 - Changeling. (Fay Slimm.)
Good write Fay.
September 23rd, 2020 09:55 - There it is (Andrew Charles Forrest)
Good write Andrew.
September 23rd, 2020 03:58 - In the Shades of Darkness (Dove)
A fine write RB. I\'m the weed between two roses. lol.
September 23rd, 2020 01:50 - In the Shades of Darkness (Dove)
A fine write RB. I\'m the weed between two roses. lol.
September 23rd, 2020 01:50 - Littered with Masks. (Goldfinch60)
A true write Gold. Any masks in 1066, so they would not recognise us?!
September 23rd, 2020 01:48 - DILLEMA OF DOWNSIZING ~ A SALUTARY TALE ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
I\'ve downsized for later on. It\'s an old tea chest from the Co-op for...
September 23rd, 2020 01:47 - Sister Mary (Gary Edward Geraci)
A fine write Gary.
September 22nd, 2020 01:44 - Rose Garden (Ron parrish aka wordman)
Good write Ron.
September 22nd, 2020 01:41 - The Queen of Sheba. (Goldfinch60)
A poignant write Gold of your Queen.
September 22nd, 2020 01:40 - HIGHEST MOUNTAINS IN THE UK ~ A PANTOUM ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Oohh, I\'ll get me coat and other necessary stuff then. I\'ll be going...
September 21st, 2020 02:00 - LEADERS IN CLERIHEWS (Michael Edwards)
Seems so at times anyway.
I thought you meant the Eiffel Tower - de...
September 21st, 2020 01:46 - Before Lockdown. (Goldfinch60)
Good write Gold.
I feel we will reach it, but some of it is prolonged...
September 21st, 2020 01:43 - Sedoka : Glow of Soft Moonlight (Dove)
Oohh, you mean me?! Or have delusions of grandeur again?
I might sing...
September 20th, 2020 12:14 - Bruises (Neville)
Did this poem disappear yesterday?!
September 20th, 2020 07:00 - Bruises (Neville)
Did this poem disappear yesterday?!
September 20th, 2020 07:00 - Hippie Am I. (Goldfinch60)
You growing your hair long then, even though we can get to the...
September 20th, 2020 01:48 - You’ve Rode Along (Gary Edward Geraci)
Now look. lol. That will teach me to get too \'deep\' (my comment...
September 19th, 2020 12:33 - You’ve Rode Along (Gary Edward Geraci)
A true write Gary.
Erm, a spanner in the works now?! I read a little. An...
September 19th, 2020 12:32 - SONG FOR SUNDAY ~ PEACE PERFECT PEACE ~ A PANTOUM ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A hugely comforting write and hymn B&A. Ahh, the 10.10. metre there!
Not...
September 19th, 2020 12:28 - The Testament (Gerrylegister)
It will take a while - it will be a long hymn! lol. But not that...
September 19th, 2020 12:23 - Stolen (Fay Slimm.)
A poignant write Fay. He surely had ups and downs physically (bodily, and...
September 19th, 2020 05:07 - OWN GOAL (Michael Edwards)
Oops! Erm, will they use it if anyone needs it?!
In dark humour, I said...
September 19th, 2020 01:47 - Venus Destroyed. (Goldfinch60)
We should know these space-things, you and I, cos we were on the Moon to...
September 19th, 2020 01:44 - LOCKDOWN FAMILY TALK ~ A PANTOUM (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Good write B&A. Did they chat about the price of fish too? How much is...
September 18th, 2020 09:50 - Compatible. (Fay Slimm.)
Good write Fay.
September 18th, 2020 04:37 - Dear Friend (L. B. Mek)
Good write LB.
September 18th, 2020 04:36 - The Testament (Gerrylegister)
Good write Gary.
I could possibly adjust this to a hymn-poem, if you...
September 18th, 2020 02:17 - Stella. (Goldfinch60)
Oh lol, fine write and pic Gold.
We have a neighbour\'s cat - one of a...
September 18th, 2020 02:03 - a beautiful life (Crowns4Christ)
Good write blue.
September 17th, 2020 14:03 - Bonus. (Fay Slimm.)
Good write Fay.
September 17th, 2020 05:39 - WORK ~ HOME OR AWAY ? WHICH WOULD U CHOOSE ? (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Thanks B&A.
At least some boring \'Staff meetings\' can\'t be held in...
September 17th, 2020 01:47 - Touched by Literature. (Goldfinch60)
Good write Gold.
September 17th, 2020 01:45 - ONION (Michael Edwards)
Oops! Good write and pic M.
September 17th, 2020 01:44 - Abraham\'s tent (Gavin)
Good write Gavin. The OT people are not fairy tales. Let\'s hope these...
September 16th, 2020 10:22 - Souls Know. (Fay Slimm.)
Good write Fay.
September 16th, 2020 04:05 - GLASGOW MA IN FANTASY ~ IDEAL STUDY FOR RETIRED MEMBERS ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A fine write B&A.
September 16th, 2020 04:04 - The Invisible You (Gerrylegister)
Yes, we cannot tangibly see \'invisble\' things such as our wills,...
September 16th, 2020 02:07 - Through Divine Concurrence and Conservation God Does Govern Mankind (Gary Edward Geraci)
A fine write and pic Gary.I was reading a bit of \'common grace\' - given...
September 16th, 2020 02:05 - Pyotr Ilyich. (Goldfinch60)
A fine write Gold. Any words to it? Maybe not. I would only sing them and...
September 16th, 2020 02:01 - crossroads (Dusk arising)
Just let\'s not take the road that has a \'dead end\' sign by it!
September 16th, 2020 01:59 - Dichotomy (Gavin)
Good write Gavin.
September 15th, 2020 15:11 - Let me Serenade You (Dove)
Oohh yes, serenade me. Start singing before I do, or you\'ll never hear...
September 15th, 2020 11:01 - Intake. (Fay Slimm.)
Good write Fay.
September 15th, 2020 05:50 - ANYONE FOR TENNIS ? A PARODY ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Good write B&A. Who\'s Doger? Is he Dodger?!
September 15th, 2020 05:50 - Geographia (Neville)
Good write N.
September 15th, 2020 05:48 - Together. (Goldfinch60)
A poignant write Gold.
Did you see my \'Goldfinch\' poem from yesterday?!
September 15th, 2020 01:47 - wild horses (Dusk arising)
Good write dusk.
September 15th, 2020 01:45 - Nameless expression (RiverJordan)
I never knew all this happened in life. Well, I know now! That\'s a lot...
September 15th, 2020 01:45 - “Terzanelle” A Million Stars (Dove)
A sensitive write R.
September 14th, 2020 10:51 - PEACE PERFECT PEACE ! ~ A PANTOUM (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Good write and clip/pic B&A.
September 14th, 2020 10:15 - Given. (Fay Slimm.)
A fine write Fay.
September 14th, 2020 05:10 - Last Dayz (RiverJordan)
You hear that noise? It\'s me getting dictionary out of the cupboard!...
September 14th, 2020 01:51 - Opening and Shutting Doors. (Goldfinch60)
Good write Gold.
Maybe it\'s only right to shut that door if you\'re...
September 14th, 2020 01:49 - “ Villanelle “ Shall I call it Defeat? (Dove)
Good write R.
Ok, I\'ll come back. I\'ll stay. It won\'t be defeat. lol.
September 13th, 2020 14:25 - BEAUTY ~ PURPOS\\E ~ ORDER & DESIGN ~ LIFE ON PLANET EARTH ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Good write and true B&A.
Yes, at times I think on those aspects that dusk...
September 13th, 2020 09:31 - Flower Dust (Gary Edward Geraci)
Good write Gary.
Erm, we was rain-soaked early this year in the UK. I did...
September 13th, 2020 01:57 - Oxtail Stew. (Goldfinch60)
A fine write and tasty Gold.
September 13th, 2020 01:51 - “ A Kyrielle “ Contented Hearts (Dove)
A fine write R.
September 12th, 2020 13:26 - Poem, LOVE? (AwHec8)
Good write Don.
September 12th, 2020 10:55 - PROVERBS FOR POETS ~ AN ANTHOLOGY (ANGELA & BRIAN)
I dunno a definition - I\'m in this box, and can\'t get out. Can\'t see a...
September 12th, 2020 06:02
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