Comments on community poems by FredPeyer

• Twin Flames (Salem_B911) I like your love poem, especially the last four lines with the \"empire of...
  June 23rd, 2017 20:29
• Fight with me (Renzi) Cogito ergo sum (I think, therefore I am). In your case it should be: I...
  June 23rd, 2017 18:32
• Is midnight (Meno1972) Meno, thank you, we all have nights like that where reality rears its ugly...
  June 23rd, 2017 18:25
• THE PRISONER (Louis Gibbs) Thank you for sharing this with us, Grant. I can imagine that it has not...
  June 23rd, 2017 18:22
• Wilt (Grant Degnan) Grant, you are very gifted. And Robert is right...Beautiful
  June 23rd, 2017 18:17
• Yellow flowers (Thehippiepoet) Had to look up what the word \"betwixt\" means. Somebody once said that a...
  June 23rd, 2017 18:14
• mirage (Heather T) Heather, after reading this, I think you should not \"write a little\" as...
  June 23rd, 2017 18:08
• What if you can? (Roudan) Roudan, this is a great poem. I certainly would love to read more.
  June 23rd, 2017 18:04
• dessert (Heather T) I absolutely love it! One of my mantras is: Live is unpredictable, dessert...
  June 23rd, 2017 14:45
• spirit over matter (Avigail) Your poem spoke to me. A long long time ago my friends wanted to go out, I...
  June 23rd, 2017 14:39
• My One Hundred and Seventy Year old house...1847 (P.H.Rose) I like it, well written. Following your poems Grandmother and Grandfather,...
  June 23rd, 2017 14:35
• Its Scar Now Yours To Love (Blues Poem #12) (Kurt Philip Behm) A great thought provoking piece. Unfortunately too many of us scratch the...
  June 23rd, 2017 14:32
• Fantasy (Tony36) Made me think that even in our world we never know what is hiding just...
  June 23rd, 2017 14:26
• Cayla (Brandyngraham) Nice! Unfortunately some people wait all their lives.
  June 23rd, 2017 14:24
• Acting as hypocrites (Malubotelho) Malu, you very nicely expressed what all of us do every day: acting. At...
  June 23rd, 2017 14:22
• Sleeping Beauty (FredPeyer) Thank you all for your very much appreciated comments. It is kind of nice...
  June 23rd, 2017 14:03
• Trust in Nature. (Goldfinch60) Goldfinch, a beautiful description of trust. Reminded me of the trust a...
  June 23rd, 2017 12:21
• We Belong With Each Other (Krystal Brewington) Krystal, nice write. I think the only together pair you left out is...
  June 23rd, 2017 12:19
• KISSING DAY IN UK ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) Maybe we should start a movement to have kissing day at least once a week!
  June 23rd, 2017 12:15
• Runaway Train (Edthepoet) Ed, I really like your poem. It is very well written. You seem to be a...
  June 23rd, 2017 12:11
• Flourish (Baylee) I read this one today, then before commenting I looked at your other...
  June 23rd, 2017 12:06
• Even Between (Baylee) Very nicely said, great poem. And yes, broken just means it is not whole...
  June 23rd, 2017 12:03
• Graveyard (Baylee) This is so good! Four lines, one sentence really, and I was immediately...
  June 23rd, 2017 11:58
• Sleeping Beauty (FredPeyer) Thank you! I love watching her sleep.
  June 23rd, 2017 11:55
• Close minded elderly (Fayeisabee1) Fayeisabee, I said it in my last comment to you and have to say it again:...
  June 23rd, 2017 11:53
• Grandfather Green... (P.H.Rose) Just read Grandfather Green as you recommended. Never thought of trees as...
  June 23rd, 2017 11:31
• Channel (Jabberwocky) Nice poem, love the ending. Don\'t know what kind of channel I would be, ...
  June 22nd, 2017 18:51
• Grandmother White..... (P.H.Rose) This must be the most beautiful description of clouds I have ever read.
  June 22nd, 2017 18:47
• Been writing (Meno1972) This is what a writer is all about, what every writer hopes for. It is not...
  June 22nd, 2017 18:43
• within throughout (Onepauly) Your well written poem reminds me of tai chi, or eastern meditation. Thank...
  June 22nd, 2017 18:41
• The one with two faces (ShannonXx) A very nice poem about a jekyll and hyde type of person. Unfortunately...
  June 22nd, 2017 18:37
• Demon (Renzi) Renzi, an incredible poem again. You are so eloquent, your rhyming is...
  June 22nd, 2017 16:08
• This Damn Town. (Cara) Your writing sounds like a call for help, a deep desire for a change that...
  June 22nd, 2017 14:24
• Lost Mum. (Goldfinch60) You captured in a few words the whole sadness, despair, and pain dementia...
  June 22nd, 2017 14:18
• Ghost (Poetboy123) Love your poem. To see through the eyes of a ghost. And yes, the ending is...
  June 22nd, 2017 14:12
• DESERTED GRAVEYARD (Michael Edwards) I really liked the poem and the watercolor is beauiful too.
  June 22nd, 2017 14:08
• Gazing at the Stars (P.X. Vexxus) A beautiful poem. I especially like the part where he disappears. We all...
  June 22nd, 2017 14:06
• Anya (Brandyngraham) They say beauty is in the eye of the beholder. So is perfection I think....
  June 22nd, 2017 13:12
• Wild flower (Grant Degnan) Beautiful poem, great imagination, wonderful choice of words...you got...
  June 22nd, 2017 13:09
• Crazy Horse Calls (Kurt Philip Behm) I may be wrong, but what I see in your beautifully written poem is what is...
  June 22nd, 2017 13:04
• LADIES DAY ASCOT ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) Brian, you got your Acrostic Sonnet down pat! Love the picture, and you...
  June 22nd, 2017 12:57
• These two poems are DEDICATED TO ALL OF YOU! (FredPeyer) Thank you! Even though writing is a solitary art, I do not feel alone...
  June 22nd, 2017 12:43
• Memories of Last Night (FredPeyer) Thank you everybody! Your encouragement is very much appreciated.
  June 22nd, 2017 02:03
• In love with me? (Anora_aragon) Anora, I don\'t know if you are writing from experience or about an...
  June 22nd, 2017 00:00
• Tudor Trail (GeraldineTaylor) Geraldine, this is not only an astonishing work of art, but also a history...
  June 21st, 2017 21:05
• Computerised Smiles (Fayeisabee1) Fayeisabee, this is why you are writing such beautiful poems. It is true...
  June 21st, 2017 20:53
• Battle Lines. (Fay Slimm.) Every sunset is like a little death and every sunrise like a new birth....
  June 21st, 2017 20:46
• Anything Is Possible (Brooklyn6timesplus) We should read this every time we sit down at the computer to write.
  June 21st, 2017 20:33
• Summer Games Seducing Celestial Nights (WhisperingGlints) Blew me away. Just wish I could write like that.
  June 21st, 2017 20:32
• Oh Baby! (Bibbeck) It is a little bit dark, but good. And don\'t worry, I don\'t know where...
  June 21st, 2017 20:29
• Only If... (The Broken Vessel) And you should hold your head high, turning adversity into victory!
  June 21st, 2017 20:26
• good times (Onepauly) Yes, we are all living in the same boat, stuck into this little corner of...
  June 21st, 2017 20:20
• HEAT WAVE UK ~ ACROSTIC (BRIAN & ANGELA) Brian I can feel your pain Thankfully today we had some rain Otherwise...
  June 21st, 2017 15:49
• Whirlpools. (Cara) Short and to the point. Well written!
  June 21st, 2017 15:25
• He Wouldn\'t Make Room For Me (ApolloEnjolras) Great poem, very nicely written. Just remember, for every door you close,...
  June 21st, 2017 15:23
• As a poet (Tony36) What you put so nicely into words is exactly what is inside all of us....
  June 21st, 2017 14:22
• Darkest corners (Renzi) Renzi, thank you for this poem. As an answer I need to quote one of my...
  June 21st, 2017 14:15
• They say (Crow.) Klokat, you wrote a beautiful and very thought provoking poem. I...
  June 21st, 2017 14:08
• Just write. (Bella cortez) Bella, Charles Bukowski said this when he wrote about writing: “unless...
  June 21st, 2017 13:37
• Poison (P.X. Vexxus) An apt, uncomfortable, but possibly true description of our future if we...
  June 21st, 2017 13:27
• God\'s Words. (Goldfinch60) A very thoughtful poem. And you are right, all the words we write do come...
  June 21st, 2017 13:24
• My Forgotten Dream (Magic Maker) Your name is apt, you are creating magic with this poem. Nice writing, and...
  June 21st, 2017 13:13
• Got to Move On (Writingismything) Writing should be your thing! It is not easy to express deep feelings and...
  June 21st, 2017 13:09
• GILLIAN\'S MOOD SWING 1969 (Terry Collett) A great story, told very poetically, with an unexpected but great ending.
  June 21st, 2017 11:13
• To be you (Meno1972) I do like your poem. \"Wondering what it would be to be you\", isn\'t that...
  June 21st, 2017 11:00
• A Changing Stew (Kurt Philip Behm) A beautiful way to describe the changes we go through as we get older....
  June 21st, 2017 10:36
• The innocent never survive (Mybigmouth2017) Good poem with thought provoking content. I need to read more from you.
  June 21st, 2017 10:33
• A BAD REVIEW (Louis Gibbs) Louis, it is amazing that both you and Edthepoet happened to address the...
  June 21st, 2017 10:23
• Take Another Look Around (Edthepoet) Once in a while we do wake up, look at the French revolution for example....
  June 21st, 2017 10:14
• Memories of Last Night (FredPeyer) Thank you to all of you! I am glad you like it. And as far as subject...
  June 21st, 2017 10:02
• Karen... (P.H.Rose) A powerful declaration of love. I do like it.
  June 20th, 2017 23:33
• My Life (1) (Krystal Brewington) Krystal I read all your poems and they moved me. I do hope you can work...
  June 20th, 2017 21:50
• Cherry Tree (Jabberwocky) I like it. It reminds me so much of when as kids we \"raided\" the...
  June 20th, 2017 18:43
• Crazy Irish queen (Renzi) You may be crazy (even though that is more in the eye of the beholder),...
  June 20th, 2017 12:33
• Living for Loving (Renzi) Perfect, no other comment!
  June 20th, 2017 12:29
• Grab it (Renzi) Short and to the point again! You have an amazing gift.
  June 20th, 2017 12:21
• Happy feet (Renzi) I am blown away Renzi, you succeeded to make me happy with only four short...
  June 20th, 2017 12:18
• Love? (WG7) You expressed your emotions so much better than I could. Yes, love can be...
  June 20th, 2017 11:56
• It\'s changing... (WG7) WG7, your beautifully written poem describes the woes of this world very...
  June 20th, 2017 11:50
• Late years (Malubotelho) I like the way you write, and there are certainly days I feel the same....
  June 20th, 2017 11:41
• Abandoned (FredPeyer) Thank you Jeff and Harvey! Your encouragement helps to overcome all the...
  June 20th, 2017 11:31
• Fuel (Jeff) Jeff, many artists do their best work when deeply troubled. Somehow it...
  June 20th, 2017 11:28
• Alone Again (Jeff) That old saying that we have to hit rock bottom before we see the light is...
  June 20th, 2017 11:21
• Tomorrow\'s Dreams (Jeff) The more I read from you the more I like it. Your strong message is...
  June 20th, 2017 11:13
• All I Need (Jeff) Your well written poem sends a very powerful message about how important...
  June 20th, 2017 11:08