Comments on community poems by James Michael
- just a kid (Queer-with-a-pen)
A father should guide you; a god should guide you. Your intelligent enough...
May 13th, 2022 22:40 - The Enslavement Of A Believer (FallenAngel1🕊)
Writing about religion is like writing about Pluto, it’s just a great...
May 6th, 2022 13:12 - a metaphor for something or other (Queer-with-a-pen)
Reminds me of a poem my son wrote for me a few years ago, “The...
April 29th, 2022 15:30 - Persistence and Brainwashing (an antidote to the preacher poets) (Dusk arising)
It seems as if your opponents have put up white flags. It’s unfortunate...
April 29th, 2022 10:33 - no blame to lay down here (Queer-with-a-pen)
Like the new pic. btw!
April 15th, 2022 17:01 - no blame to lay down here (Queer-with-a-pen)
Incredible poem in such a short time from the last. The sea and love is a...
April 15th, 2022 17:00 - home again, home again (Queer-with-a-pen)
Love can be a shelter that grows stronger the more it’s tested.
I...
April 11th, 2022 11:19 - Beautifully Broken (Crowns4Christ)
No bitterness here. A very uplifting poem. Thanks for sharing.
I...
March 26th, 2022 22:52 - Moth Scars (A Boy With Roses)
Quite a ride of imagery. Very well written with emotional power.
I must...
March 26th, 2022 21:01 - prayer (Dahlia)
Possibly a prayer that will never be answered. There certainly is a...
March 26th, 2022 20:44 - yearning, a noun (Queer-with-a-pen)
Bittersweet like a dark chocolate. Your style of writing is very effective...
March 23rd, 2022 20:30 - Booze. (Chris Duffy)
Great poem that many of us can relate to. Booze can be many things. In the...
March 14th, 2022 22:38 - for my siren, a letter (Queer-with-a-pen)
A stunningly romantic poem. Unfortunately I’m in a different place. Love...
February 20th, 2022 00:08 - On Fiery Path (Satishverma)
The puppet and no to answer the questions. The future is unanswerable....
January 22nd, 2022 22:36 - do i know you? (Queer-with-a-pen)
How can you know a father who really wasn’t there for you?
A...
January 13th, 2022 11:28 - LIMERICK 76 (Michael Edwards)
A good chuckle at night night time here in Colorado. Limericks are much...
January 7th, 2022 23:40 - Racing Thoughts (MDStone)
Very well written! Just remember not to let a doctor put a label on you....
January 7th, 2022 11:36 - Blame God? Really?! (Saxon Crow)
Good un!
January 6th, 2022 23:41 - Come follow, come follow (Saxon Crow)
Excellent rhythm & rhyme. A bittersweet ending to a spectacular...
January 6th, 2022 20:32 - soulmate (Dusk arising)
Great questions to ask oneself. Love surely is mysterious. Soulmates can...
January 6th, 2022 19:19 - belief (Queer-with-a-pen)
It took a few reads for clarity on this one. Once again you have expressed...
January 6th, 2022 18:11 - Kingly Kindlings (Orchidee)
Very uplifting. Great job G.P.D.! Have a blessed Christmas.
December 24th, 2021 20:17 - Serenity Haiku (Alta H Mabin)
A gift of a poem. Thanks! Good to see you’re still sharing your work...
December 24th, 2021 20:07 - The End (AnAlpaca)
The ending brings this well written poem together incredibly well....
December 24th, 2021 20:02 - HAPPY HOLIDAYS (Laura🌻)
A heartwarming poem and a great quote. Hope you have wonderful Christmas...
December 23rd, 2021 11:26 - Kerouac (Mdrogers)
Kerouac and Cassidy were bad-asses. I love how you captured that vibe. I...
December 9th, 2021 00:33 - HEROES CRY (HAPPY FACE)
Love will keep us strong.
Thank you for sharing this heartfelt poem.
December 9th, 2021 00:13 - a more definitive ending (Queer-with-a-pen)
Forgiveness is the key. A tender heart can be easily broken. Your honesty...
November 22nd, 2021 21:02 - If the Sun Didn’t Shine (Ake Matt)
A wonderful love poem. Welcome to this small, yet terrific site.
November 20th, 2021 19:29 - MOUNTAIN TRAIL (HAPPY FACE)
A picturesque and beautiful use of words. A bit of theology thrown in. A...
November 20th, 2021 19:24 - for love (Queer-with-a-pen)
An anthology possibly. The meaning of love for the ones who have touched...
November 5th, 2021 22:24 - Coincidence (Goldfinch60)
A nice addition to your daily writes.
Coincidence can be a perception...
October 27th, 2021 22:15 - The Storm In Sea (Satishverma)
One of your best.
October 27th, 2021 22:04 - reckless in love and other things (Queer-with-a-pen)
Such profound and succinct words. Keep being recklessly in love, your...
October 25th, 2021 00:55 - So Much More (A.H. Browning)
Great poem and a great song! Thanks for changing up your style a bit. It...
October 24th, 2021 15:00 - should i compare (Dusk arising)
Yes you should compare. Be well poetic brother.
October 22nd, 2021 11:05 - Nostradamus (Doggerel Dave)
A fine read if ever there was one. Chin up buddy.
October 17th, 2021 22:31 - it\'s hard to be the bard, baby (Queer-with-a-pen)
You have taught me something that is easily forgotten. Thank you my
October 17th, 2021 21:57 - to: simon (Queer-with-a-pen)
Written incredibly well in your unique style. The stats. are very real....
October 13th, 2021 21:43 - O Sri Radha Krishna (Poemsbygajanyjeyan)
Wonderfully written! A warmth of peacefulness pours through this one.
I...
October 13th, 2021 21:10 - I Can\'t Remember What... (Kevin browne)
Should you remember? Why question things that have no answers in this...
October 4th, 2021 00:32 - steps to survival (Queer-with-a-pen)
A real wallop of a poem. Started out with words from many therapists’...
October 3rd, 2021 23:41 - Even Though You Hurt Me I\'d Never Hurt You (A Boy With Roses)
Very well put together and straight from the heart. Excellent!
October 3rd, 2021 23:21 - Mellow Softness Inside (A Boy With Roses)
Introspection is one of the best things to write about. Very well...
September 29th, 2021 21:50 - Lying to Oneself (Trenz Pruca)
A thinker, well done!
September 15th, 2021 22:45 - DOWNTOWN GIRL…09/11/2001 (Laura🌻)
I do remember this one, do you repost it every year? It’s written with...
September 15th, 2021 16:26 - I like it Red (Darkwriter)
Well written war song. Yes the blood flows. I wouldn’t call it...
September 13th, 2021 13:33 - A Wicked Scheme (Jack Cohen)
Very well written. A little criticism if I may. It needs to be tightened...
September 12th, 2021 21:52 - from the past (Queer-with-a-pen)
So much intense introspection in this one. It was surely therapeutic....
September 11th, 2021 21:39 - Cowardly Terrorists (Randyjohnson71)
Thank for sharing this information on such a horrific time in our lives....
September 11th, 2021 15:27 - War Song (Pawnee tribe North America) (James Michael)
This describes my emotions on that day. There are many theories about that...
September 11th, 2021 11:03 - Dance While You Can (A Boy With Roses)
‘breathe underwater’ excellent, I think that’s in a Morphine song....
September 10th, 2021 18:45 - Pursuing Peace (Orchidee)
Am I one of these trolls they talk about these days? I don’t give a …
September 10th, 2021 16:42 - Pursuing Peace (Orchidee)
I really like this one orchi. Sorry about being a foul mouth idiot...
September 10th, 2021 16:38 - Last Words (A Boy With Roses)
Too fucked up to make it through this one. Anyone ever tell you that you...
September 10th, 2021 00:11 - I See In Dark (Satishverma)
Great stuff, still can’t figure out what you mean. Are you a guru?...
September 10th, 2021 00:07 - i was a teenage lesbian (Queer-with-a-pen)
The sincerity and emotion of this is overwhelming. A true poem in the...
September 9th, 2021 19:55 - O Aspiring Poet (Doggerel Dave)
Hmmmmm? OK. Nice rant.
September 7th, 2021 20:58 - No Shave, Thanks - Just a Haircut! (Doggerel Dave)
Diggin’ this one Dave. Rhythm & rhyme is a great way to go. I bet you...
September 4th, 2021 21:00 - for the captain once again (Queer-with-a-pen)
Your love for the captain shines once again. A person who has ridden the...
September 1st, 2021 22:11 - one last time (Queer-with-a-pen)
Ouch! Bitterness exudes from this one. Luckily you were able to get out of...
August 18th, 2021 20:43 - no beauty/no romance (Queer-with-a-pen)
It gives me great relief to know that you’ve recovered from those days....
August 7th, 2021 18:41 - no beauty/no romance (Queer-with-a-pen)
I barely made it through this one. I’ll get back to you another time if...
August 5th, 2021 23:00 - an argument in support of foolishness in all matters of love (Queer-with-a-pen)
Wow! Such a romantic tale incredibly well written. The title is succinct...
July 29th, 2021 22:18 - becoming (Queer-with-a-pen)
A very soothing reminder of how love should be. “after all, every living...
July 26th, 2021 23:00 - hey there, captain (Queer-with-a-pen)
I don’t see unrequited love in your tales of the captain, only an...
July 21st, 2021 16:35 - sharps (Queer-with-a-pen)
The intensity of this one is incredibly real. This trauma you describe...
July 17th, 2021 21:46 - my lady of the ocean and the waves (Queer-with-a-pen)
A gorgeous tale. The siren is an entrancing character. The sea captain is...
July 12th, 2021 21:28 - return to me, my love, again and again (Queer-with-a-pen)
The captain will always belong to the sea. The lament over this will...
July 5th, 2021 20:57 - what of it? (Queer-with-a-pen)
Needs and wants, the two should be simple, yet become complex. The need...
July 4th, 2021 19:57 - lonely (Queer-with-a-pen)
I interpret this as children witnessing their parents sleeping in separate...
June 30th, 2021 15:21 - artist fingers (Queer-with-a-pen)
How can you be sure? The ugliness that dissuades others might be the...
June 26th, 2021 17:07 - hungering (Queer-with-a-pen)
An extremely odd one. I don’t know if I should feel nauseous or...
June 26th, 2021 16:56 - dad? (Queer-with-a-pen)
Heart wrenching to say the least. As a father, I know how difficult it is...
June 21st, 2021 21:33 - a conversation (Queer-with-a-pen)
Reminds me of The Little Prince by Antoine De Saint-Exupery. The bard and...
June 17th, 2021 16:07 - sometimes it hurts more than others (Queer-with-a-pen)
Straight from your heart and soul as always. You’re the only reason I...
June 6th, 2021 21:26
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