Comments on community poems by James Michael
- Mellow Softness Inside (A Boy With Roses)
Introspection is one of the best things to write about. Very well...
September 29th, 2021 21:50 - Lying to Oneself (Trenz Pruca)
A thinker, well done!
September 15th, 2021 22:45 - DOWNTOWN GIRL…09/11/2001 (Laura🌻)
I do remember this one, do you repost it every year? It’s written with...
September 15th, 2021 16:26 - I like it Red (Darkwriter)
Well written war song. Yes the blood flows. I wouldn’t call it...
September 13th, 2021 13:33 - A Wicked Scheme (Jack Cohen)
Very well written. A little criticism if I may. It needs to be tightened...
September 12th, 2021 21:52 - from the past (Queer-with-a-pen)
So much intense introspection in this one. It was surely therapeutic....
September 11th, 2021 21:39 - Cowardly Terrorists (Randyjohnson71)
Thank for sharing this information on such a horrific time in our lives....
September 11th, 2021 15:27 - War Song (Pawnee tribe North America) (James Michael)
This describes my emotions on that day. There are many theories about that...
September 11th, 2021 11:03 - Dance While You Can (A Boy With Roses)
‘breathe underwater’ excellent, I think that’s in a Morphine song....
September 10th, 2021 18:45 - Pursuing Peace (Orchidee)
Am I one of these trolls they talk about these days? I don’t give a …
September 10th, 2021 16:42 - Pursuing Peace (Orchidee)
I really like this one orchi. Sorry about being a foul mouth idiot...
September 10th, 2021 16:38 - Last Words (A Boy With Roses)
Too fucked up to make it through this one. Anyone ever tell you that you...
September 10th, 2021 00:11 - I See In Dark (Satishverma)
Great stuff, still can’t figure out what you mean. Are you a guru?...
September 10th, 2021 00:07 - i was a teenage lesbian (Queer-with-a-pen)
The sincerity and emotion of this is overwhelming. A true poem in the...
September 9th, 2021 19:55 - O Aspiring Poet (Doggerel Dave)
Hmmmmm? OK. Nice rant.
September 7th, 2021 20:58 - No Shave, Thanks - Just a Haircut! (Doggerel Dave)
Diggin’ this one Dave. Rhythm & rhyme is a great way to go. I bet you...
September 4th, 2021 21:00 - for the captain once again (Queer-with-a-pen)
Your love for the captain shines once again. A person who has ridden the...
September 1st, 2021 22:11 - one last time (Queer-with-a-pen)
Ouch! Bitterness exudes from this one. Luckily you were able to get out of...
August 18th, 2021 20:43 - no beauty/no romance (Queer-with-a-pen)
It gives me great relief to know that you’ve recovered from those days....
August 7th, 2021 18:41 - no beauty/no romance (Queer-with-a-pen)
I barely made it through this one. I’ll get back to you another time if...
August 5th, 2021 23:00 - an argument in support of foolishness in all matters of love (Queer-with-a-pen)
Wow! Such a romantic tale incredibly well written. The title is succinct...
July 29th, 2021 22:18 - becoming (Queer-with-a-pen)
A very soothing reminder of how love should be. “after all, every living...
July 26th, 2021 23:00 - hey there, captain (Queer-with-a-pen)
I don’t see unrequited love in your tales of the captain, only an...
July 21st, 2021 16:35 - sharps (Queer-with-a-pen)
The intensity of this one is incredibly real. This trauma you describe...
July 17th, 2021 21:46 - my lady of the ocean and the waves (Queer-with-a-pen)
A gorgeous tale. The siren is an entrancing character. The sea captain is...
July 12th, 2021 21:28 - return to me, my love, again and again (Queer-with-a-pen)
The captain will always belong to the sea. The lament over this will...
July 5th, 2021 20:57 - what of it? (Queer-with-a-pen)
Needs and wants, the two should be simple, yet become complex. The need...
July 4th, 2021 19:57 - lonely (Queer-with-a-pen)
I interpret this as children witnessing their parents sleeping in separate...
June 30th, 2021 15:21 - artist fingers (Queer-with-a-pen)
How can you be sure? The ugliness that dissuades others might be the...
June 26th, 2021 17:07 - hungering (Queer-with-a-pen)
An extremely odd one. I don’t know if I should feel nauseous or...
June 26th, 2021 16:56 - dad? (Queer-with-a-pen)
Heart wrenching to say the least. As a father, I know how difficult it is...
June 21st, 2021 21:33 - a conversation (Queer-with-a-pen)
Reminds me of The Little Prince by Antoine De Saint-Exupery. The bard and...
June 17th, 2021 16:07 - sometimes it hurts more than others (Queer-with-a-pen)
Straight from your heart and soul as always. You’re the only reason I...
June 6th, 2021 21:26
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