Comments on community poems by tallisman
- Changes (Jayasree)
It’s a nightmare. Good write, thanks for sharing😊
August 6th, 2022 12:08 - Someone very special ! (Justa_Geezer)
Inspiring! Good write
August 6th, 2022 04:01 - Fools Gold (Saxon Crow)
Hi Saxon, wow! Great write!
August 5th, 2022 15:21 - Breathe (Chris Duffy)
Hi Chris, really thought this was really good, and it’s one of those...
August 5th, 2022 00:54 - WORTH A SHOT (Raven333)
Wonderful, Raven, insightful,, very positive poetry. When I read it it’s...
August 5th, 2022 00:42 - Little Red Riding hood (That quiet girl)
Darn, I thought she would beat the wolf! Super write TQG !
August 3rd, 2022 00:45 - Love Laced With Poison (That quiet girl)
Well written good imagery, love this….
August 3rd, 2022 00:43 - I\'ve lost my smile (That quiet girl)
This was a good write, poet. Enjoyed this….
August 3rd, 2022 00:40 - 7/6/22 (Wren)
We are all lonely at some level! I think, in the end, love finds you. ...
August 3rd, 2022 00:33 - Once Alive My Heart is Now Numb (Seabeequeen29)
A deep and dark but effective poem, well written!
August 2nd, 2022 15:19 - Ouch! (Hzugman)
Funny! Lol!
August 2nd, 2022 13:01 - MY SECOND TRUE LOVE...LOST ! (Justa_Geezer)
What a tragic story, so sad…
August 2nd, 2022 12:58 - pact (Arqios)
Lovely words…
August 2nd, 2022 12:55 - Ghost Girl (FallingAwake2)
There is something about this I really like, even though I am confused by...
August 2nd, 2022 00:45 - Why doesnt the sun rise anymore (Tallisman)
August 1st, 2022 15:22 - On friendship (NafisaSB)
A lovely thought and poem!
August 1st, 2022 14:45 - GRASPING TIGHTLY (Raven333)
Really good Raven,, you are really getting into the swing now! Brilliant!
August 1st, 2022 14:43 - 22.05.31 hope (Lovebrigita)
Eloquent writing, kind of sad. Thank you for sharing….
August 1st, 2022 00:50 - Let Me (Jayasree)
Beautifully written!
July 31st, 2022 15:48 - LOST LOVE (Raven333)
Loved this. Enjoy those memories. Some will live forever in our
July 31st, 2022 15:24 - Star struck 🤩 (Domilla)
Sweet!
July 31st, 2022 15:21 - Destined. (Tallisman)
Maybe tomorrow.! Glad you liked it It’s always good to find a light...
July 31st, 2022 10:59 - Love can be hurtful ! (Justa_Geezer)
JG, really well put together! Enjoyed this!
July 31st, 2022 02:23 - Unrequited (Tallisman)
Glad you enjoyed it!
July 29th, 2022 15:56 - poetry (NafisaSB)
That’s true! Hope you ok! Good write …
July 29th, 2022 00:51 - Tenderness (MendedFences27)
Superb, thank you.l
July 29th, 2022 00:31 - Not gonna turn out well… (Tallisman)
The highest praise possible, I thank you Shamrocker 😁
July 29th, 2022 00:27 - SHADOWS (Jayasree)
People forget that they are part of it, but it is wonderful that you have...
July 28th, 2022 00:55 - been (Jon Nakapalau)
It’s a journey!
July 28th, 2022 00:43 - if i were a flower (Dusk arising)
Powerful statement! Really good. Thanks.
July 28th, 2022 00:31 - SLENDERMAN the TALLMAN the BOOGEYMAN (Raven333)
Yikes! Oh…Tallman, I thought you said Tallisman for a minute! Good...
July 27th, 2022 15:28 - Two Whales ! (Justa_Geezer)
Really funny, well done! Still laughing!
July 27th, 2022 14:49 - The Field (A.D. Small)
And she’s back! Lovely write, AD!
July 27th, 2022 14:36 - silent glow (Arqios)
Superb and clever!
July 27th, 2022 14:30 - Look what I see (Hzugman)
New line…..And at my age we start to rust!!
July 27th, 2022 14:29 - the love years (Dusk arising)
Oh wow! Dusk, this really grabbed me…
July 26th, 2022 15:12 - Conquer the heights (NafisaSB)
Really good, thanks for sharing
July 26th, 2022 14:37 - A SMILE ! (Justa_Geezer)
Good job, well written and loved it!
July 26th, 2022 14:35 - Murder Suicide (Dont Talk To Strangers)
Great twist, good poem, really enjoyed this!
July 26th, 2022 14:33 - FINAL BREATH (Raven333)
Superb Raven, I can read your poems all day!
July 26th, 2022 13:43 - LESSONS IN LIFE (Raven333)
Well Raven, a great poem, a great message. You have really reached out...
July 26th, 2022 00:17 - An Old Man (Peppino)
I enjoyed this as well. Well written my friend!
July 24th, 2022 14:58 - Wishful dreams ! (Justa_Geezer)
Good write!
July 24th, 2022 14:55 - GETTING BURNED (Raven333)
As always the passion shows! It’s good to get it out and it’s really...
July 24th, 2022 14:52 - My Love (Zopo123)
Well written.!
July 24th, 2022 10:55 - a silly little rhyme (H. Jordan)
It works without the repetition, not sure what that attains, good write...
July 23rd, 2022 13:10 - Ode to Babylon (LalalaEulalie)
Though not a particularly religious man, the imagery this conjures and...
July 23rd, 2022 13:06 - Break the chain… (Tallisman)
Hi Lollly, I see myself as a storyteller! Don’t worry… thanks for...
July 23rd, 2022 12:18 - Stapled Better (Martina- L.B.)
Really good, actually. Love the stapled heart….
July 23rd, 2022 08:46 - Illusion (Sorenbarrett)
Wow! That’s good!
July 23rd, 2022 08:44 - NO LONGER (Raven333)
Brave stuff, well done,. There is a certain clarity about your writing I...
July 22nd, 2022 00:51 - WATCH YOUR MOUTH PLEASE (Raven333)
Hi Raven, I’ll be careful of what I say, honest!
Love the attitude,...
July 22nd, 2022 00:35 - Bottled Bruises (AL17)
Good poem Ali, well written..
July 22nd, 2022 00:27 - Love Drunk (LalalaEulalie)
Neat! Love it !
July 21st, 2022 00:34 - you (H. Jordan)
Ouch….quite an emotional storm in such a short piece, well done!
July 21st, 2022 00:32 - Be happy (NafisaSB)
Love this, very positive, great rhyming poem, thanks!
July 21st, 2022 00:29 - EVIL LURKING (Raven333)
Destruction he will bring?
Actually thought thi s was really good, Raven!
July 20th, 2022 12:22 - Blood on the water (Tallisman)
Hi Judy nice to see you again!nthanks for that!
July 19th, 2022 15:26 - Blood on the water (Tallisman)
Thanks Teddy, I would love to know the back story to this one!
July 19th, 2022 00:56 - when change is forced upon a guarded heart (H. Jordan)
Change is inevitable, and most painful on the cusp of adulthood. It’s...
July 18th, 2022 03:41 - NO ONE REALLY CARES (Raven333)
Lovely Raven, as always. Paul’s assessment was spot on! Wonderful...
July 18th, 2022 01:07 - Shall we? (Chris Duffy)
Superb Chris, here is another side to you!
July 18th, 2022 00:54 - Treasure in the shed. (Chris Duffy)
That was sooooo funny, thanks Chris 😂
July 16th, 2022 14:06 - Circles in the sand (Tallisman)
I’m impressed you all figured it out! Thanks for reading!
July 16th, 2022 14:03 - The Return of The Daughter of Night (Andrew Durbin)
I worthy follow up to the original!
July 15th, 2022 01:13 - Lady by the hour. (Chris Duffy)
Brilliant Chris
July 15th, 2022 01:12 - THE RHYMER (Raven333)
Strangely I have tried free verse and I can’t do it, so nothing but...
July 15th, 2022 00:40 - THE RHYMER (Raven333)
Rhymes forever! We need T shirts people! We will have to form a band of...
July 15th, 2022 00:38 - Pocket (A.D. Small)
Hi AD, nice to see you! Hope all ok with you?
July 15th, 2022 00:28 - Road trip (Tallisman)
Hi Sadq, there will always be more!
July 14th, 2022 11:52 - THE END (Raven333)
Really good. You write so passionately about your feelings, and they come...
July 13th, 2022 00:38 - Stay strong (Sophenia)
I hope you do too, and may your wishes become true!
July 12th, 2022 00:43 - LOOKING AT MYSELF (Raven333)
Beautifully written!
July 12th, 2022 00:26 - Apologies. (Chris Duffy)
Superb poem, really well constructed, a natural rhythm..really good!
July 12th, 2022 00:23 - LOVE IN BETWEEN (Raven333)
A beautiful poem and sentiment!
July 12th, 2022 00:20 - Road trip (Tallisman)
Thanks Raven,, glad you enjoyed it , my friend. Would that we could turn...
July 11th, 2022 00:32 - A Darkness in the heart (Tallisman)
Thank you Raven, much appreciated!
July 11th, 2022 00:27 - Marvelous (A thousand wishes)
Your next challenge is to do it in rhyme!
July 10th, 2022 15:54 - Marvelous (A thousand wishes)
It’s er…. Marvellous!
July 10th, 2022 15:54 - Harriet (A.D. Small)
Took me ages to work that out!
July 10th, 2022 05:22 - I found (A thousand wishes)
Wonderful words an sentiments!
July 10th, 2022 05:20 - Emotions (Kim12)
Actually this is good, enjoyed this, good flow!
July 9th, 2022 10:51 - Suspense (NafisaSB)
Love this! Really well composed, thanks T
July 9th, 2022 02:45 - 22.05.15 pause (Lovebrigita)
We all wish for a pause or rewind button! Just enjoy the moment…… I...
July 9th, 2022 02:42 - Angels and rainbows (Kitty the naughty poet)
That’s quite a visual! Really good, T
July 9th, 2022 02:39 - Where the hell is it! (Tallisman)
Why thank you!
July 8th, 2022 15:22 - Too Late (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
I really enjoy your work, superb.
July 8th, 2022 13:49 - School reunion (Sadkw33n)
Give them hell Sadq, I suffered at school as well… if I could turn back...
July 8th, 2022 13:46 - What is it? (JudyStella)
Darn, not curry then!
July 8th, 2022 11:36 - Again the lines blur (A thousand wishes)
Wondered what happened to you! I like the way you kinda moved full circle,...
July 8th, 2022 00:27 - Where the hell is it! (Tallisman)
Ok I’ve lost the darn thing…..again!
July 7th, 2022 15:58 - Many worlds (Blueledge)
Really neat! Thanks for sharing..
July 7th, 2022 00:58 - SCARED (Raven333)
Hi Raven, this was good, gave me goosebumps! Good job I didn’t read it...
July 7th, 2022 00:52 - its day and night (H. Jordan)
Imaginative, really good write T
July 6th, 2022 01:04 - Love (Blueledge)
Straight forward, short and to the point! Packed a punch that could have...
July 6th, 2022 01:03 - A Very Sudden Realisation (Neville)
Enjoyed that!
July 6th, 2022 01:00 - Summer Fruit (A.D. Small)
I like kiwi! Nice write… hope all good with you T
July 6th, 2022 00:53 - MY INSPIRATION (Raven333)
Raven beautiful words, well put together! I enjoyed this!
July 6th, 2022 00:51 - Crying out for hope (Tallisman)
Hi Raven, I’m glad you both liked it, depression is a terrible thing...
July 6th, 2022 00:41 - Crying out for hope (Tallisman)
Thanks Judy,!
July 5th, 2022 14:18
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