Comments on community poems by tallisman

•   True haiku trilogy ! (Justa_Geezer) Good, funny….I gather they are not haikus though! I am told that haikus...
  August 12th, 2022 13:48
• Upside-down seas (A.L.H) Wired is good! Great imagery!
  August 12th, 2022 13:43
• Sounds of the cosmos (A.L.H) I do enjoy it, well written, should have entered it! Good write!
  August 10th, 2022 14:50
• Why Can\'t the Sun Rise Twice? (FallingAwake2) Really well written!
  August 10th, 2022 14:48
• Poem for Christine ! (Justa_Geezer) Beautifully written, respect!
  August 10th, 2022 14:46
• WANTING TO LOVE (Raven333) Well done Raven, it’s good to write from your heart! I hope you can bite...
  August 10th, 2022 12:04
• Grannies gang. Revised (Tallisman) Hmmmmm.like the love island idea, not that I’ve ever watched it!
  August 10th, 2022 10:20
• Grannies gang. Revised (Tallisman) What an idea! It wasn’t intended to be ageist but of course it can be...
  August 10th, 2022 10:17
• SEIZE THE MOMENT (Markmonteiro) A good message well proposed, good rhyming thanks!
  August 9th, 2022 12:10
• In Life (Bella Shepard) All true. I’ve wasted my entire life just treading water and conforming...
  August 9th, 2022 12:08
• Step-by-Step (A.L.H) A positive message well rhymed! Love it!
  August 9th, 2022 12:04
• Castaway (A.L.H) Beautifully rhymed, good flow..and I’m intrigued!
  August 9th, 2022 12:01
• Taking My Shot (FallingAwake2) Interpretive poetry, like the play here, great stuff!
  August 9th, 2022 03:30
• My Best Mate\'s Sister ! (Justa_Geezer) Really funny! Enjoyed this!
  August 9th, 2022 03:01
• Falling Under Life’s Radar (Jenny Brav) We all think we want t be under the radar…but then we post on SM! Good...
  August 9th, 2022 02:58
• I still have a lot to learn (Hzugman) Cool! Like this…
  August 8th, 2022 14:32
• a river in egypt (Verona) Clever! …… and baffling!
  August 8th, 2022 13:32
• AM SORRY (Raven333) It’s sad how some things don’t work out. However there is always the...
  August 8th, 2022 03:12
• Beautiful Brokenness (A.L.H) Enjoyed this, thankyou
  August 7th, 2022 13:09
• Dancing with fate (A.L.H) This is good. Thanks for sharing!
  August 7th, 2022 13:07
• A picture paints a thousand words ! (Justa_Geezer) Bravo!
  August 7th, 2022 10:27
• The Last Romance (MendedFences27) A good write, thanks
  August 6th, 2022 13:56
• Birthday Blues (Paul Bell) Loved this!
  August 6th, 2022 12:20
• Choose (Hzugman) Ain’t that the truth!
  August 6th, 2022 12:14
• For A Friend (Kinsey Peterson) Lovely! Well done…
  August 6th, 2022 12:14
• My first love. (Chris Duffy) Very good! I was expecting a twist😄
  August 6th, 2022 12:11
• Changes (Jayasree) It’s a nightmare. Good write, thanks for sharing😊
  August 6th, 2022 12:08
• Someone very special ! (Justa_Geezer) Inspiring! Good write
  August 6th, 2022 04:01
• Fools Gold (Saxon Crow) Hi Saxon, wow! Great write!
  August 5th, 2022 15:21
• Breathe (Chris Duffy) Hi Chris, really thought this was really good, and it’s one of those...
  August 5th, 2022 00:54
• WORTH A SHOT (Raven333) Wonderful, Raven, insightful,, very positive poetry. When I read it it’s...
  August 5th, 2022 00:42
• Little Red Riding hood (That quiet girl) Darn, I thought she would beat the wolf! Super write TQG !
  August 3rd, 2022 00:45
• Love Laced With Poison (That quiet girl) Well written good imagery, love this….
  August 3rd, 2022 00:43
• I\'ve lost my smile (That quiet girl) This was a good write, poet. Enjoyed this….
  August 3rd, 2022 00:40
• 7/6/22 (Wren) We are all lonely at some level! I think, in the end, love finds you. ...
  August 3rd, 2022 00:33
• Once Alive My Heart is Now Numb (Seabeequeen29) A deep and dark but effective poem, well written!
  August 2nd, 2022 15:19
• Ouch! (Hzugman) Funny! Lol!
  August 2nd, 2022 13:01
• MY SECOND TRUE LOVE...LOST ! (Justa_Geezer) What a tragic story, so sad…
  August 2nd, 2022 12:58
• pact (Arqios) Lovely words…
  August 2nd, 2022 12:55
• Ghost Girl (FallingAwake2) There is something about this I really like, even though I am confused by...
  August 2nd, 2022 00:45
• Why doesnt the sun rise anymore (Tallisman)
  August 1st, 2022 15:22
• On friendship (NafisaSB) A lovely thought and poem!
  August 1st, 2022 14:45
• GRASPING TIGHTLY (Raven333) Really good Raven,, you are really getting into the swing now! Brilliant!
  August 1st, 2022 14:43
• 22.05.31 hope (Lovebrigita) Eloquent writing, kind of sad. Thank you for sharing….
  August 1st, 2022 00:50
• Let Me (Jayasree) Beautifully written!
  July 31st, 2022 15:48
• LOST LOVE (Raven333) Loved this. Enjoy those memories. Some will live forever in our
  July 31st, 2022 15:24
• Star struck 🤩 (Domilla) Sweet!
  July 31st, 2022 15:21
• Destined. (Tallisman) Maybe tomorrow.! Glad you liked it It’s always good to find a light...
  July 31st, 2022 10:59
• Love can be hurtful ! (Justa_Geezer) JG, really well put together! Enjoyed this!
  July 31st, 2022 02:23
• Unrequited (Tallisman) Glad you enjoyed it!
  July 29th, 2022 15:56
• poetry (NafisaSB) That’s true! Hope you ok! Good write …
  July 29th, 2022 00:51
• Tenderness (MendedFences27) Superb, thank you.l
  July 29th, 2022 00:31
• Not gonna turn out well… (Tallisman) The highest praise possible, I thank you Shamrocker 😁
  July 29th, 2022 00:27
• SHADOWS (Jayasree) People forget that they are part of it, but it is wonderful that you have...
  July 28th, 2022 00:55
• been (Jon Nakapalau) It’s a journey!
  July 28th, 2022 00:43
• if i were a flower (Dusk arising) Powerful statement! Really good. Thanks.
  July 28th, 2022 00:31
• SLENDERMAN the TALLMAN the BOOGEYMAN (Raven333) Yikes! Oh…Tallman, I thought you said Tallisman for a minute! Good...
  July 27th, 2022 15:28
• Two Whales ! (Justa_Geezer) Really funny, well done! Still laughing!
  July 27th, 2022 14:49
• The Field (A.D. Small) And she’s back! Lovely write, AD!
  July 27th, 2022 14:36
• silent glow (Arqios) Superb and clever!
  July 27th, 2022 14:30
• Look what I see (Hzugman) New line…..And at my age we start to rust!!
  July 27th, 2022 14:29
• the love years (Dusk arising) Oh wow! Dusk, this really grabbed me…
  July 26th, 2022 15:12
• Conquer the heights (NafisaSB) Really good, thanks for sharing
  July 26th, 2022 14:37
• A SMILE ! (Justa_Geezer) Good job, well written and loved it!
  July 26th, 2022 14:35
• Murder Suicide (Dont Talk To Strangers) Great twist, good poem, really enjoyed this!
  July 26th, 2022 14:33
• FINAL BREATH (Raven333) Superb Raven, I can read your poems all day!
  July 26th, 2022 13:43
• LESSONS IN LIFE (Raven333) Well Raven, a great poem, a great message. You have really reached out...
  July 26th, 2022 00:17
• An Old Man (Peppino) I enjoyed this as well. Well written my friend!
  July 24th, 2022 14:58
• Wishful dreams ! (Justa_Geezer) Good write!
  July 24th, 2022 14:55
• GETTING BURNED (Raven333) As always the passion shows! It’s good to get it out and it’s really...
  July 24th, 2022 14:52
• My Love (Zopo123) Well written.!
  July 24th, 2022 10:55
• a silly little rhyme (H. Jordan) It works without the repetition, not sure what that attains, good write...
  July 23rd, 2022 13:10
• Ode to Babylon (LalalaEulalie) Though not a particularly religious man, the imagery this conjures and...
  July 23rd, 2022 13:06
• Break the chain… (Tallisman) Hi Lollly, I see myself as a storyteller! Don’t worry… thanks for...
  July 23rd, 2022 12:18
• Stapled Better (Martina- L.B.) Really good, actually. Love the stapled heart….
  July 23rd, 2022 08:46
• Illusion (Sorenbarrett) Wow! That’s good!
  July 23rd, 2022 08:44
• NO LONGER (Raven333) Brave stuff, well done,. There is a certain clarity about your writing I...
  July 22nd, 2022 00:51
• WATCH YOUR MOUTH PLEASE (Raven333) Hi Raven, I’ll be careful of what I say, honest! Love the attitude,...
  July 22nd, 2022 00:35
• Bottled Bruises (AL17) Good poem Ali, well written..
  July 22nd, 2022 00:27
• Love Drunk (LalalaEulalie) Neat! Love it !
  July 21st, 2022 00:34
• you (H. Jordan) Ouch….quite an emotional storm in such a short piece, well done!
  July 21st, 2022 00:32
• Be happy (NafisaSB) Love this, very positive, great rhyming poem, thanks!
  July 21st, 2022 00:29
• EVIL LURKING (Raven333) Destruction he will bring? Actually thought thi s was really good, Raven!
  July 20th, 2022 12:22
• Blood on the water (Tallisman) Hi Judy nice to see you again!nthanks for that!
  July 19th, 2022 15:26
• Blood on the water (Tallisman) Thanks Teddy, I would love to know the back story to this one!
  July 19th, 2022 00:56
• when change is forced upon a guarded heart (H. Jordan) Change is inevitable, and most painful on the cusp of adulthood. It’s...
  July 18th, 2022 03:41
• NO ONE REALLY CARES (Raven333) Lovely Raven, as always. Paul’s assessment was spot on! Wonderful...
  July 18th, 2022 01:07
• Shall we? (Chris Duffy) Superb Chris, here is another side to you!
  July 18th, 2022 00:54
• Treasure in the shed. (Chris Duffy) That was sooooo funny, thanks Chris 😂
  July 16th, 2022 14:06
• Circles in the sand (Tallisman) I’m impressed you all figured it out! Thanks for reading!
  July 16th, 2022 14:03
• The Return of The Daughter of Night (Andrew Durbin) I worthy follow up to the original!
  July 15th, 2022 01:13
• Lady by the hour. (Chris Duffy) Brilliant Chris
  July 15th, 2022 01:12
• THE RHYMER (Raven333) Strangely I have tried free verse and I can’t do it, so nothing but...
  July 15th, 2022 00:40
• THE RHYMER (Raven333) Rhymes forever! We need T shirts people! We will have to form a band of...
  July 15th, 2022 00:38
• Pocket (A.D. Small) Hi AD, nice to see you! Hope all ok with you?
  July 15th, 2022 00:28
• Road trip (Tallisman) Hi Sadq, there will always be more!
  July 14th, 2022 11:52
• THE END (Raven333) Really good. You write so passionately about your feelings, and they come...
  July 13th, 2022 00:38
• Stay strong (Sophenia) I hope you do too, and may your wishes become true!
  July 12th, 2022 00:43
• LOOKING AT MYSELF (Raven333) Beautifully written!
  July 12th, 2022 00:26
• Apologies. (Chris Duffy) Superb poem, really well constructed, a natural rhythm..really good!
  July 12th, 2022 00:23