Comments on community poems by Pop64
- Rebirth (Kurt Philip Behm)
Such a smooth flowing read, filled with imagery and wisdom. Loved it!
September 27th, 2023 09:56 - The First Rose. (Goldfinch60)
No matter the season, there is always new or re-birth. As the seasons...
September 27th, 2023 09:00 - Good People. (Goldfinch60)
Friendships, relationships like these, are fantastic and can be rare, but...
September 27th, 2023 08:33 - The Death of Great Music (Teddy.15)
While their families remain the victims, we as appreciators of the music...
September 27th, 2023 08:31 - Blind poet (Sorenbarrett)
The travesty is that the poem ended. Subject matter to the poet is many...
September 27th, 2023 08:30 - Fly (Shallom_M)
The imagery in this write serves well for detailing the fact that despite...
September 27th, 2023 08:27 - And Write She shall (Teddy.15)
Sadness, I find, turns into more profound, deeper writes. These 3 short...
September 27th, 2023 08:05 - CRADLE (Nephilim56)
Your write hits home, as my daughters have discussed this with my wife and...
September 27th, 2023 08:02 - God\'s Plan (Angela Unique Raine)
A very strong message of faith set to smooth glowing rhyme.
September 27th, 2023 07:36 - Reminder (Sahildhobalepoetry)
A very simple but ever so eloquently stated truth.
September 26th, 2023 11:46 - You, Me, Everyone (The Fife Wanderer)
Damn, this is great! You clearly provide the true progression and then...
September 22nd, 2023 14:33 - Beneath The Veil (Kurt Philip Behm)
The rhyme is spot on, while the flow is so easy and both provide the...
September 22nd, 2023 14:02 - Paper Plane (Zozo)
15? wow! This write is an inspirational read and a remarkable lesson for...
September 22nd, 2023 12:03 - Music To Normality. (Goldfinch60)
I consider music to be life\'s inspirations. They can be energetic,...
September 22nd, 2023 11:12 - By\'r Lady! Love\'s Enchanted Garden (Petrichor of Love)
This poem reads with an Old English type of feel, from it\'s rhyme and...
September 22nd, 2023 10:41 - NO MANS LAND (Nephilim56)
The rhyme is terrific while the details of the write, the imagery and...
September 22nd, 2023 10:31 - Let\'s Eat! (Goldfinch60)
Ooh, this write has gotten me hungry! The wonderful easing into the dish,...
September 22nd, 2023 09:25 - Tropical interlude (Lorenz)
Your use of imagery through choice of words and careful subtle inferences,...
September 22nd, 2023 08:13 - A Symphony Of Resilience (Sharanya Rakeshi)
I believe the resilience, as titled, is the write itself, going against...
September 22nd, 2023 08:05 - Box (Introverted Sage)
That box can be both captor and the place to gain freedom, provided the...
September 22nd, 2023 08:02 - NO MUSE (Twizzle48)
The \'block\" can sometimes be so overwhelming, but in the case of this...
September 22nd, 2023 08:00 - The Dark Hour (Sakwa Franc)
Love the way you incorporated (briefly) the flow and rhyme of a Poe work,...
September 22nd, 2023 07:51 - A Very Brief Moment (Teddy.15)
Wow, love the imagery here and the reminders of other times, youthful new...
September 22nd, 2023 07:48 - Pieces (Violetskies)
It\'s like unloading burdens, we feel free when there\'s none left. Short...
September 22nd, 2023 07:45 - Sever (2781)
very sad truths provided here in this clever write. I enjoyed this.
September 22nd, 2023 07:44 - Choosing Wisely: The Garden of Existence (GeekSusie)
Very wise advise all offered in a flowing wonderfully rhyming piece. Very...
September 22nd, 2023 07:42 - If I..... (Mystery\'s Creation)
Love the flow of this read and the directness, as it speaks to that...
September 22nd, 2023 07:39 - Accumulations (Neville)
Wow, this is a complete detailed story in very few verses. Wonderfully...
September 22nd, 2023 07:03 - Screaming But No Sound (C.J. Murray)
The screaming in our heads, the voices, they can hold us captive, cloud...
September 21st, 2023 14:36 - How things are (Hzugman)
A well rhyming piece of truth. Message perfectly expressed.
September 21st, 2023 10:17 - Separating Sea (Kevin Michael Bloor)
I really enjoyed this read, the rhyme, flow, imagery and the subject,...
September 21st, 2023 08:21 - Prisoner (Miss_Dreamer)
We are so often prisoners to ourselves, seeing only the negative and...
September 21st, 2023 08:14 - So that you shall be blessed (Amy Michelle Mosier)
This reads as an unselfish blessing for someone intended, a very lucky...
September 21st, 2023 07:15 - The Ephemeral Affair (Blair Stella Flynn)
ephemeral secret? forbidden maybe? But, a love so strong on your end, but...
September 21st, 2023 06:48 - Life Is Like A Song (Teddy.15)
This is not only a piece that makes one think deeply on the subject of...
September 21st, 2023 05:46 - Spirit And Song (Orchidee)
Your faith can be seen in all of your writing, as beautifully in this...
September 21st, 2023 05:43 - Sleep (Miss_Dreamer)
Aah, night, the hours where we do our deepest contemplating and doing that...
September 21st, 2023 05:41 - Have you ever (Sorenbarrett)
Such beautiful remarkable imagery you provide in a smooth flowing read....
September 20th, 2023 12:09 - Olivia Ran (Cynthiavkelly)
This is just so much fun and I can picture Olivia as a small girl playing...
September 20th, 2023 12:07 - An Elegy of The Fading Roses (Petrichor of Love)
I really enjoyed this more than beautiful write of love diminished and...
September 20th, 2023 10:32 - People (Laura902)
There\'s many people that suffer from social anxiety, overthinking things...
September 20th, 2023 09:24 - Failing Dreams (Tommytoons)
Love the irony you present at this end of this nice rhyming, questioning...
September 20th, 2023 08:21 - Nature\'s Artwork. (Goldfinch60)
It is a beautiful time of year. However, I rely on scent for the season...
September 20th, 2023 07:15 - In The Land Of The Blind (Duggantherhymer)
While the imagery in this is superb and the flow and rhyme, as well, I see...
September 20th, 2023 07:14 - Ladybird (Teddy.15)
Beauty, style and strength, a true lady! Nicely done and way to be!
September 20th, 2023 05:48 - Bodies and Brushes: A Tale of Artistic Intimacy (GeekSusie)
This is damn good! Written from the perspective of the person that poses,...
September 19th, 2023 14:38 - The value of trying (Hzugman)
very wise and profound all put together and displayed in a well rhyming...
September 19th, 2023 13:41 - My Captain~ (Beth K)
The flow and rhyme are pure joy, while the message within this poem is...
September 18th, 2023 14:34 - The Fragrance of What Was (Petrichor of Love)
A very sad, but ever so well written write! One of endless love. Excellent...
September 18th, 2023 12:37 - My Angel\'s in Heaven (Mystery\'s Creation)
A truly sad write, but clear in its delivery. The lines below really got...
September 18th, 2023 09:42 - The Joy Of Children. (Goldfinch60)
It\'s a sad subject, a painful one, when children get hurt in any way. To...
September 18th, 2023 07:08 - A Work of the Heart (Sorenbarrett)
It can be so often that writes from the heart are discarded or dismissed...
September 18th, 2023 06:31 - THE VOICE WITHIN (LIZ)
Truly wise advice wrapped in an outstanding, fluid read of a poem. Great...
September 18th, 2023 05:55 - Mamma\'s Winter Coat (Bella Shepard)
Absolutely beautiful and perfect in every way! Fantastic memory, imagery,...
September 18th, 2023 05:51 - Without Words (Teddy.15)
We so often regret not saying what was in our hearts until it\'s much too...
September 18th, 2023 05:42 - Through the Eyes of Never Enough (GeekSusie)
This has wonderful flowing rhyme and clearly speaks of those that never...
September 15th, 2023 14:32 - Hidden Love Behind Those Glasses (Shy silly soul)
This piece is expressive and so wonderfully clear in its intent. Your...
September 15th, 2023 13:45 - [haiku chain evening shadows] (Summersounds68)
Imagery is perfect as is the format of the haiku, nice write!
September 15th, 2023 13:09 - Replete (Christina8)
The sensuality and imagery come alive in the write, beautiful.
September 15th, 2023 13:06 - Smile (Thinkerbell)
A beautiful description of a smile and as well the need for a smile....
September 15th, 2023 07:55 - You Must Begin To End (DesertWords)
You eagerly teach all those who are willing to read. Lessons are welcomed...
September 15th, 2023 07:54 - What if... (DesertWords)
Not a pleasant world if only to have what ifs. Your write allows the...
September 15th, 2023 07:44 - A dark, scary poem, your soul declared. (KenganHazee)
The rhyme is perfect as the imagery is so clear and is reminiscent of a...
September 15th, 2023 07:40 - Golden Memories (Dove)
The rhyme and flow of this read are wonderful, as they convey the message...
September 15th, 2023 06:23 - Delights (Peto)
A lovely tribute, it seems, to a another poet, wordsmith, someone who...
September 15th, 2023 06:21 - Doggy Style (Teddy.15)
While this is a thought provoking write, it too is humorous. Love the...
September 15th, 2023 05:50 - If We Could (Jcnillepoetics)
Beautiful rhyme, flow and imagery.
September 14th, 2023 08:15 - Dust Laden Love Letters (Petrichor of Love)
This write is simply beautiful! The flow, rhyme, imagery all serve well to...
September 14th, 2023 06:15 - The Death of Love (Teddy.15)
The imagery you wrote into this leaves the reader with understanding,...
September 14th, 2023 05:54 - Ex-(..) (Me HUman)
Ooh, that last line just got to me. That\'s a very defining way to look at...
September 13th, 2023 14:57 - Finding Light in the Darkest Night (Sheikhspeare)
This write has wonderful meter and rhyme, all while teaching and offering...
September 13th, 2023 14:16 - Memories (Bella Shepard)
While a beautifully formatted and flowing read, it contains the maudlin...
September 13th, 2023 13:46 - It rained the day you left (Twistedmind97)
Such a sad excerpt presumably of your life. I felt like an intruder...
September 13th, 2023 13:22 - Sitting on a Cornflake (Summersounds68)
This takes me back to the late 60s, getting up early on Saturdays and...
September 13th, 2023 12:50 - With Eyes So Dim (Houchins.linda)
I love the message of this write and the rhyming scheme you incorporated...
September 13th, 2023 12:45 - Shadow Dance (Neville)
Your words describe an artful beauty of unity. Quite visual and simply...
September 13th, 2023 11:50 - CARE (Serhat Doğan)
Short, but a write of wisdom and truth. Well said!
September 13th, 2023 11:45 - Insomnia (Elle King)
So many times I wake up, possibly worried about the family, work, etc....
September 13th, 2023 11:28 - Belief (Shanzah)
It\'s painful when love can seem one-sided. We so often lose ourselves in...
September 13th, 2023 09:02 - You and me babe (Hzugman)
Short and sweet, often the most profound in delivery, as in this case....
September 13th, 2023 09:00 - Book (Cherry Blossom)
This write speaks to the soul. We so often give of ourselves, change...
September 13th, 2023 08:59 - Ghetto Girls (Neville)
It\'s a sad truth you write of here, but as I tell my kids, \"It is what...
September 13th, 2023 08:28 - Doctor\'s Orders (Teddy.15)
I\'ll drink to that! Slainte!
September 13th, 2023 08:25 - FACT (Serhat Doğan)
So very true! It\'s not riches of the penny left behind that make a...
September 13th, 2023 08:24 - My Little Fantasy (Bella Shepard)
Fantasies are marvelous as they let us all indulge in more often those...
September 13th, 2023 07:50 - sh (Ace_)
Upon reading this, I am reminded of the fact that we oftentimes wish...
September 13th, 2023 07:45 - Journey of Words (Sahildhobalepoetry)
Very wise, as it is true that once it\'s out there, it\'s out there and...
September 13th, 2023 07:40 - Violin Strings (Teddy.15)
You chose the violin for this write, not a guitar, oboe or standing bass,...
September 13th, 2023 05:52 - She is Gone (Elle King)
Such a sad write, but so heart wrenchingly clear. My prayers to you.
September 12th, 2023 08:30 - Forbidden Love (Stephwrites)
Quite a symbolic and most provocative write. Exudes imagery!
September 12th, 2023 08:08 - Missing (Peto)
Events and experiences are always better when shared or seen through a...
September 11th, 2023 14:42 - I Wish (Elle King)
As humans, we see our own flaws but not so much those of others, hence the...
September 11th, 2023 14:08 - When We Are One (Bella Shepard)
So very true. I hope and pray for unity, a lasting unity. I cannot wait...
September 11th, 2023 11:52 - What I, as a young author, know about 9/11 (Holy Onyx)
My father survived WWII in the Battle of the Bulge. I never knew what he...
September 11th, 2023 11:42 - Knowing I Saw Enough (Teddy.15)
A wish or desire, rather, for the masses, to be fulfilled before their...
September 11th, 2023 10:06 - Couleurs d\'automne (Ellen Marsell)
Beautiful, c\'est tres bien.
September 11th, 2023 07:56 - HAUNTED (LIZ)
To be haunted that way is magical and often times secretive which...
September 11th, 2023 06:35 - A Dance with Myself: Growing Older, Remaining Unique (GeekSusie)
Your rhyming is met with excellence while your imagery remains so clear...
September 8th, 2023 15:34 - A Taste of Tears (Bella Shepard)
Something I\'ve learned through my almost 60 years is that we do not need...
September 8th, 2023 14:57 - Empathy in a Digital Age (GeekSusie)
In the digital streaming age, this can be all too true and so often. The...
September 8th, 2023 14:20
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