Comments on community poems by Pop64 at My poetic side

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October 17th, 2023 06:52
No one (Sorenbarrett) A person who has seen and done so much, Wonderfully descriptive write
October 17th, 2023 06:44
Cinnamon Candle~Haiku (Arastu Goyal) Perfect haiku form with great visuals (and scent)
October 17th, 2023 06:43
Mistakes (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) A message worth printing. Beautiful in its delivery and strong in the...
October 17th, 2023 06:39
Every Part of Your Body Betrays You (Zeraprinc) A wonderful composed direct communication to that person that may deny,...
October 17th, 2023 06:37
List (AuburnScribbler) Get better? With the leaders of today not demonstrating power for the...
October 16th, 2023 12:24
Starry Dream (LonPoet(Pseudonym)) While this can be sad, your last line infers a bit of happiness, as...
October 16th, 2023 11:34
Sheep Safety (Orchidee) I certainly hope the Lord allows the meek to truly inherit the earth. T...
October 16th, 2023 11:12
Into The Wrinkles of The Great Moon. (Teddy.15) First off, I love the expression \"Wrinkles of the great moon\", that\'s...
October 16th, 2023 09:52
Tears Like Rain (Dev Parth) You summed this up in that lst line, love never ends, we can\'t just drop...
October 16th, 2023 09:49
Ethereal Riff (John Prophet) This so well allows the reader to identify that there really are so many...
October 16th, 2023 08:42
Internal Articulation (Introverted Sage) This has the wonderful message of survival or overcoming, something ew all...
October 16th, 2023 08:12
The beauty of Becoming (Daye Writes) A wonderful message in this piece, that speaks of strength despite...
October 16th, 2023 07:54
Unexpected love (Gg_a_poet) Sometimes it\'s that unexpected, never looking for, love that turns out to...
October 16th, 2023 07:40
Heartbreak Day (Kevin Michael Bloor) You can feel the torment of the heart breaking in this write. Time offers...
October 16th, 2023 07:19
Judging (2781) As I\'ve told my kids, better to act than to react. It\'s those reactions...
October 16th, 2023 07:17
Dolce vita (Lorenz) A creation of beauty. To read it is as if to dance with a gentleness upon...
October 16th, 2023 07:02
Significant, We (L. B. Mek) We all have significance, have value. Your piece truly sums it neatly...
October 16th, 2023 06:28
Lyrics on Love (Orchidee)
October 13th, 2023 10:28
That Afterwards Feeling (Neville) What a feeling to read this! It reminds me of moments, some special, some...
October 13th, 2023 07:30
Lamb (Peto) This is a complete story with clear details and what appears to he a self...
October 13th, 2023 07:17
Bird Feather~Haiku (Arastu Goyal) A stunningly visual display, I can see it all
October 13th, 2023 07:14
Hilary Limerick. (Goldfinch60) Love the rhyme and humor in this well executed limerick. I, too, spend...
October 12th, 2023 13:40
It May Blow Me In The Right Direction (Teddy.15) This inspiring breath of fresh air allows all of us to just take all the...
October 12th, 2023 12:47
Whispers of Serenity (Kschenk) This reads with a genuine sense of hope and simultaneously provides...
October 12th, 2023 12:14
Haiku\'s of Concern (Mystery\'s Creation) Strong message in a well formatted write.
October 12th, 2023 08:26
Quiet Night ~ Haiku (Arastu Goyal) Terrific form and vivid imagery.
October 12th, 2023 07:08
I\'d give you the blood of my heart (Pop64) Thank you, love like this is for friends too
October 12th, 2023 06:48
Moon (Miss_Dreamer) To address the subject, the moon offers as much visual beauty and...
October 6th, 2023 11:59
Starved (Gary Edward Geraci) This really makes one feel or rather see the subject matter, the reality...
October 6th, 2023 07:18
How Old! (Goldfinch60) Sounds like you had and still have a wonderful life. Sadness comes and...
October 6th, 2023 06:14
Unrevealed secrets (Chiki1601) A beautiful piece that so well paints the picture of the secrets only the...
October 6th, 2023 06:09
Prayers ARE Answered (Saxon Crow) God listens and always answers, it is us that do not always hear....
October 6th, 2023 05:56
My room\'s window (Sonal monhyung) A beautiful view from that window, a lovely experience written into this...
October 6th, 2023 05:54
Tears of mercy (Sorenbarrett) Death is so often mislabeled, while we here suffer a a loss, the one who...
October 5th, 2023 14:35
Our Love (BlessedbyGod) A blessed love!
October 5th, 2023 13:50
The Green Eyed Sorcerer - Daisie-Lyn Fuller (Daisie-Lyn Fuller) I agree with darkfragrance, someone new, better will be there on a...
October 5th, 2023 13:35
Lost promise (Chiki1601) This has such a smooth flow to the read and while containing a subject of...
October 5th, 2023 13:23
GENTLE (Nephilim56) A very soft beautiful write.
October 5th, 2023 13:20
My Favorite Time of Year (Mystery\'s Creation) The haiku format served well for this more than descriptive and enjoyable...
October 5th, 2023 08:07
Briefly Interrupted by Sleep (Neville) Sleep, the intermission between our various acts. I really like the way...
October 5th, 2023 05:24
Caged Bird (Teddy.15) The picture and the image you created with your words are one and the same...
October 5th, 2023 05:12
Darkness (Chiki1601) The imagery and rhyme within this is truly beautiful. Love the line,...
October 4th, 2023 15:02
The Courage to Be: Embracing My Authenticity (GeekSusie) The rhyme and flow served well to deliver that last stanza and the...
October 4th, 2023 14:35
Gratefulness. (Goldfinch60) Beautiful write, seems you have so much,!
October 4th, 2023 12:36
Mute (Garth Rakumakoe) For the foolish man speaks while the wise man listens. Well said!
October 4th, 2023 11:51
A Poet Drenched in Rain (Petrichor of Love) Bravo! Bravo! This is masterful, a poetic masterpiece detailing the...
October 4th, 2023 11:37
Eternally Instant (Kurt Philip Behm) Your writing style is always soft and fluid, with its excellent rhyme....
October 4th, 2023 11:33
[my thoughts are sticky] (Summersounds68) Perfect in form and a lot said in such a short write.
October 4th, 2023 09:48
Reflection (Teddy.15) Poetry at its finest, we all see you!
October 4th, 2023 09:04
Untitled for a reason (AlitaOpal) Wonderful form and delivery in this write, all coming together well for...
October 4th, 2023 08:32
Killer (Cherry Blossom) Isn\'t it the truth, sometimes we must kill a part of us, maybe chip away...
October 4th, 2023 08:17
Rainbow Rooms Incorporated (Neville) Damn! This is a story, a compilation of a setting, cast, subject, finale,...
October 4th, 2023 07:40
A Mother’s Love (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) Beautifully written!
October 4th, 2023 07:35
Scent of our own (BlessedbyGod) You\'ve so well captured the many identities within the poems or rather...
October 4th, 2023 07:32
When it rains (JoyJoy) The reminders of a relationship of a past come through so vividly in this...
October 4th, 2023 07:30
Rules (Triolet Poem) (Janiselizabeth) Love the form to this write and can appreciate the underlying sentiment...
October 4th, 2023 07:28
Alarming Deception (GeekSusie) And I hope that curtain falls! Excellent, well rhymed, clear piece of the...
October 3rd, 2023 14:33
The greatest poem (Sorenbarrett) If only poetry could serve to influence the negative so it could be...
October 3rd, 2023 13:22
You Are (Janiselizabeth) This speaks so highly of that special someone and how we sometimes take...
October 3rd, 2023 13:20
An Ode To The Coffee Bean (Teddy.15) A nice hot black cup of coffee is is like a personal defibulizer for the...
October 3rd, 2023 09:47
AS I AM (LIZ) The power of YOU shines through on this piece. You are many faceted and...
October 3rd, 2023 07:28
Autumnal Witherings (Carly) The rhythm in this read is simply wonderful, as is the imagery you create...
October 2nd, 2023 12:10
A twisted game we play (Ekh) I can really empathize with this piece, as it returns me to my younger...
October 2nd, 2023 10:09
But For One ... (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) This is poignant, reaching into the reader, making them question,...
October 2nd, 2023 09:58
Progress (Sorenbarrett) Tech has done that to so many relationships. Ironic, the very thing...
October 2nd, 2023 07:43
An Ode To The Pizza Margherita (Teddy.15) One of my favorites, this is marvelous in the way it makes this reader...
October 2nd, 2023 06:36
Low on coffee (BlessedbyGod) Coffee, the needed cup of my morning sunshine. I hear ya on this. Hope you...
October 2nd, 2023 06:32
In the Comfort of a Stranger\'s Arms (Janiselizabeth) Your words clearly detail the road to the subject\'s salvation or...
October 2nd, 2023 06:29
Autumn\'s Bow (Teddy.15) A beautiful depiction of the season\'s change and all that comes with it....
October 2nd, 2023 05:52
BUSKER (Nephilim56) An enjoyable, respectful dedication to this busker. Nicely penned!
October 2nd, 2023 05:28
What it means to be black in America (Lexi) Your message is powerful and clear with the words you chose to pen here....
September 29th, 2023 12:41
Methinks! Love Echoes in the Halls of Time (Petrichor of Love) You tell the story with depth, clarity and a smooth rhyming flow. Very...
September 29th, 2023 11:51
Whispers In The Night (Sharanya Rakeshi) The imagery makes this real for the reader and the flow and rhyme make it...
September 29th, 2023 10:44
Dream Affairs (Maria rk.) Dreams can certainly foretell as I hope this one does for you. This is...
September 29th, 2023 07:10
Oh With You! (Novaa) A very passionate write that seems to be written for that special someone,...
September 29th, 2023 06:29
It\'s You (A.D. Small) A wonderful dedication to that destined one person that seems to have...
September 29th, 2023 05:37
On the edge of a dream (Sorenbarrett) Aah, this read is magical with its created tone, rhyme and flow as they...
September 29th, 2023 05:32
To Kiss a Wound (Daye Writes) A beautiful sentiment of honest love with the hopes that the recipient not...
September 29th, 2023 05:30
Processing the Process of Writing (FallingAwake2) The science of poetry writing. All very true and clearly conveyed.
September 28th, 2023 20:48
Adolescent Rapture (GeekSusie) This read echoes the truth that teens, especially, feel they must hide,...
September 28th, 2023 14:15
Retreat or Repeat: An American Quandary (GeekSusie) I really enjoyed this read. It speaks the truth of the present situation,...
September 28th, 2023 14:10
Unrequited Love (Anne Frances) this reads beautifully as a plea to return to the love that once was....
September 28th, 2023 13:24
Pat on the Back (AuburnScribbler) The rhyme and flow in this is perfect as you provide the truth of us, the...
September 28th, 2023 10:04
Poetic Suicide (Maria rk.) This reads with a sadness, but remains a well penned write. A poet\'s...
September 28th, 2023 09:55
None Of Us Would Be Poets. (Teddy.15) The ending of the poem, as stated, sums the truth of the write up with...
September 28th, 2023 09:47
Pedants (Kurt Philip Behm) Damn, this is truly succinct , delivering an impact so great and so very...
September 28th, 2023 09:27
You loved me in my dreams (MissD) Aah, this is beautiful! Dreams do so much and can be looked forward to, as...
September 28th, 2023 09:06
Mockingbird (Sorenbarrett) Then so be it, be a mockingbird and fill our ears with song and eyes with...
September 28th, 2023 09:03
Salvation Secured (Orchidee) And through Him, we will be with Him. Beautiful write!
September 28th, 2023 09:02
Fondest Regards... (Aradhya) This is a very captivating write. It reads with emotion and uses clear...
September 28th, 2023 08:49
Nature (Natalie Heisey) Though much of nature is sculpted by nature\'s wrath, it yet remains part...
September 28th, 2023 08:08
Lillie\'s Gratitude (Laylemon) This is a lovely write. It reminded me of my parents and my brother who...
September 28th, 2023 08:06
Gaining Greatness (Orchidee) You fill all your writes with your testament of faith. A lovely read.
September 28th, 2023 07:50
mental illness (Ace_) Mental illness is very real and something that takes self treatment as...
September 28th, 2023 07:36
Three Thoughts 💭 (Daye Writes) Wow, this write started out on a happy now, the possibility of something,...
September 28th, 2023 07:34
Keep Writing... (Sahildhobalepoetry) This is all so very true. You presented this with fact and accuracy that...
September 28th, 2023 07:14
An Ode To The Sandwich (Teddy.15) Everyone has their own taste, that\'s quite a sandwich! Enjoy it and...
September 28th, 2023 06:17
Orchard of delights (Lorenz) You use such marvelous imagery to convey the intent of the write. Truly a...
September 28th, 2023 06:15
In those Seasons (Hiciel) Oh, this is both sad and yet wildly romantic. Very smart to use the...
September 28th, 2023 06:13

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