Comments on community poems by Mutley Ravishes
- The invisible prison (Neilton)
\"Release (Hu)Man from all condemnation.\"
Isn\'t that one of the hardest...
July 2nd, 2024 18:55 - Gargoyle and or guard (EvenwheniLie)
Two salesmen, selling nothing! Playing out a script, it\'s...
July 2nd, 2024 18:43 - ``> Halloween Demon Bat (Thad Wilk)
Be careful of the succubus, Thad! Just sayin....
July 2nd, 2024 18:37 - The light (Bloodbat_Workshop)
Lol. Bloodbat, the day and the sunlight have always felt nice, you...
July 2nd, 2024 18:31 - ~` Autumn `~ (Thad Wilk)
I love Autumn too, Thad. Smooth flow to this rhyme, melodious like a...
July 2nd, 2024 00:33 - How? (Thomas W Case)
Thomas, I don\'t know
But then, I\'m very slow
I guess we\'re being...
July 2nd, 2024 00:26 - Sliver (Bloodbat_Workshop)
I\'m a sliver of sunlight
I\'m gonna ruin your night
Vampmire!
June 30th, 2024 22:37 - Be LIE ve (Peto)
Does the guy be-lie-ve that the Bible is to be read and understood...
June 30th, 2024 00:14 - Love & Lust (Saleh Ben Saleh)
Beautiful!
June 30th, 2024 00:04 - Poetry Interpretation (Tom Dylan)
Great work, Tom. You’re driving in your own lane. No one else can.
June 28th, 2024 22:47 - 3rd Time Down (Thomas W Case)
Cold showers, breathing exercises, good nutrition, keeping warm, not...
June 28th, 2024 22:41 - Embrace the Stillness (Gray0328)
Beautiful!
June 28th, 2024 18:43 - Does it end? (Neilton)
Every time the body feels tension
Work on relaxation
Every morning when...
June 26th, 2024 18:29 - Football Fever (Tom Dylan)
I guess the “we” part gives us a strong hint about identification.
June 25th, 2024 17:14 - Heart of a tiger (Poetic Dan)
Great write, Dan. \"None of us ever really knowing the joy to follow the...
June 25th, 2024 02:02 - Angst (Kurt Philip Behm)
Thanks for the reminder, Kurt!
June 24th, 2024 18:48 - George Floyd - never forget (Prettylady)
The perpetrator continued
Despite knowing
He was being videoed
All the...
June 24th, 2024 18:40 - Snowy Suicide (Neil.E)
Not cowardly. Why would life want to kill itself? Something in me too...
June 20th, 2024 18:30 - The machine (Sorenbarrett)
Right on the money, Soren.
Steiner and co saw this coming
All those...
June 20th, 2024 07:14 - ~*~ I Often, ~*~ (Thad Wilk)
Lol! I like a working cat, catching dinner, mice and the like.
June 19th, 2024 18:32 - ~> Sammy The Squirrel [ form Trijan Refrain ] (Thad Wilk)
Great flow and humor, Thad.
Squirrels, watch out for the neighborhood...
June 18th, 2024 23:51 - Minded (Introverted Sage)
A friend said that the mind is a terrible master, but a wonderful servant....
June 18th, 2024 01:26 - A Blue Heron Stands (Gray0328)
Life feeding on life. I guess we are all learning...something?
June 18th, 2024 01:15 - A Man Like Me (Tom Dylan)
Very funny, Tom! Nice work.
June 17th, 2024 19:26 - Last Canary (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Yes, spot on. Kurt, have you checked out an article on Kirkdurston.com...
June 17th, 2024 19:11 - ~> OMG! I Was Raped By an Alien (Thad Wilk)
Don\'t let her steal your water, Thad.
June 17th, 2024 03:46 - Tree Of Life (Tony36)
The sleeping fire at the root, just waiting to ignite!
June 16th, 2024 06:54 - garlic (Bloodbat_Workshop)
Lol! By the way,
I heard from someone
The the surface of the sun
Isn\'t...
June 16th, 2024 02:01 - Hip hop hooray (Poetic Dan)
May he live his unique potential, totally & completely!
June 16th, 2024 01:54 - Election Night Special (Tom Dylan)
Once the public have cast their vote
The same old folks
Will be running...
June 14th, 2024 07:18 - She Was Still a Tyro in Pottery (Gray0328)
Sublime! Thanks for bringing a smile to my face.
June 13th, 2024 18:59 - To Know your Heart (Mase ♪)
Nice work, Mason.
What if we are being tempered,
And if we surrender...
June 13th, 2024 18:55 - My Eyes Were Closed (Dev Parth)
Great flow!
June 12th, 2024 22:09 - the sky will cry with you (NinjaGirl)
Christ in you, the hope of glory!
June 12th, 2024 22:00 - World so unkind (Shanzah)
Keep the flame burning! There are ways to make it burn ever brighter ....
June 12th, 2024 18:30 - ~*` When I Was Just A Little Lad `*~ (Thad Wilk)
Nice work, Thad. I often recall childhood memories too.
What if \'make...
June 11th, 2024 18:34 - Stabilizing live’s (EvenwheniLie)
What a rhyme! Great work.
Mineral>Plant>Animal>Human>?
Or back down the...
June 11th, 2024 18:30 - Never forgotten but everything moves on (Poetic Dan)
Try checking out the Wim Hof Method for help with Crohn’s.
June 11th, 2024 04:26 - ~` More Than Words Can Say `~ (Thad Wilk)
Even when you
Nag, bitch, and complain
My love for you will always be...
June 11th, 2024 00:37 - Lost Between (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Implanted - what a great write, Kurt. As within, so without!
June 10th, 2024 19:23 - Freefall (Peto)
Great work, Peto!
Water of Life
Smash the strife
June 10th, 2024 19:01 - Muse (Sneha SJ)
Beautiful and simple. Imagination taking flight!
June 9th, 2024 19:17 - ~`* My Muse *`~ (Thad Wilk)
Now that\'s a flow you got going on there, Thad!
June 9th, 2024 19:10 - Hail to the truck driver (Tony36)
\"The Road goes ever on and on
Down from the door where it began...\"
June 9th, 2024 18:56 - You do it to yourself (Peto)
Ain\'t that so!
June 7th, 2024 00:54 - Anger and Shame (CST)
Even if there\'s no
World War 3
Where on earth does
This present...
June 7th, 2024 00:42 - ~> \'Goofy\' Why? (Thad Wilk)
If I\'m out of it
On weed
With a pot belly
How on earth can I...
June 5th, 2024 21:17 - i dont feel safe in my body (NinjaGirl)
Dear Ninja Girl,
Try checking out the work Of Bob Gardener (The Freedom...
June 4th, 2024 23:43 - Full of confusion (Nicolerobinson)
This \"self\" has been bad
For my health!
All this struggle for...
June 4th, 2024 18:42 - Covid in 2020 (NafisaSB)
And the regular flu just seemed to disappear at that time. Perhaps it went...
June 4th, 2024 01:56 - I Miss Feel Good Hip-Hop (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Have you tried listening to Ren/NF/Dax/JamWayne etc? Not all their work is...
June 4th, 2024 01:49 - Clean, Clean, Clean (Thomas W Case)
Great piece, Thomas. All this obsession with cleanliness while a tsunami...
June 3rd, 2024 19:05 - Words to say someday; Well God (Sam.C)
Sam, have you tried listening to Ren\'s track \"Troubles,\" and NF\'s...
June 3rd, 2024 18:55 - C.H.A.L.I.N.K. (Cha-Link) (Jerry Wayne Lawrence)
Jerry, are you alluding to people\'s poor boxing skills when it comes to...
June 2nd, 2024 18:58 - Convulsion (John Prophet)
To have the heart of a lion
Or to be a cylon?
A life of fear is so...
June 2nd, 2024 18:55 - I\'m Very sorry (Mutley Ravishes)
As long as you catch them in the early stages of nest-building then...
June 2nd, 2024 07:16 - BIRDS UNLIKE US (Qurrat Al Ain)
Birds are yet
To be equipped with
An intellect!
(I\'m not saying it\'s...
June 2nd, 2024 02:51 - REVERIES (Qurrat Al Ain)
\"Therefore I say unto you, What things soever ye desire, when ye pray,...
June 1st, 2024 09:29 - Customise (2781)
From head to toe indeed. Every angle imaginable. The heat\'s being turned...
June 1st, 2024 01:21 - Cosmic Raps (Mutley Ravishes)
Thanks for the rappers’ names. I’ll check them out. I guess your dad...
May 31st, 2024 23:33 - your no man (Vividvoid14)
Have you checked out NF’s work?
This maybe hard to understand
But...
May 30th, 2024 18:22 - Cosmic Raps (Mutley Ravishes)
Thanks! Been listening to a lot of rap recently. I guess it’s paying
May 30th, 2024 18:13 - Another Lover (Thomas W Case)
Oh to be a woman
One minute all sweetness
The next, a fiendess!
What...
May 29th, 2024 18:37 - Unsolicited Sages (GeekSusie)
I hope no one finds out
I have absolutely no idea
What I’m talking...
May 27th, 2024 18:40 - Not the Rose But A Leaf (Meera Mere)
If you’re not “beautiful” then you’re more likely to meet your...
May 27th, 2024 00:01 - Cloning Tomorrow (Kurt Philip Behm)
How strange to be alive
As the Iron Age withers and dies.
Has the...
May 26th, 2024 23:53 - Judge Meet Executioner (Beatrix M)
What if nearly all those
“Christians” are
Mistaken?
And...
May 26th, 2024 01:45 - What does AI mean? (Kering.karim)
Great work! What if the real AI is Awakened Imagination?
May 25th, 2024 03:57 - Finding The Courage (Accidental Poet)
When I quit spilling the water courage finally began to take hold of the...
May 24th, 2024 07:00 - The Tranquility Of Heart (Mohammad Younus)
The words flow out of you!
May 24th, 2024 06:54 - Resurrection of a slave (EvenwheniLie)
What if mankind has been here before? What if the present humanity is the...
May 23rd, 2024 18:28 - hope (Sc2000)
Great insight! A friend of mine said that lurking beneath hope is fear.
May 22nd, 2024 21:35 - Stoic (John Prophet)
I sometimes wonder what’s in the heart of someone who is intent on...
May 19th, 2024 18:42 - Mechanical song (Sorenbarrett)
They can try it on
But the future ain’t cylon!
A trillion...
May 18th, 2024 18:09 - Father Knows Best (Gary Edward Geraci)
I remember Joseph Campbell calling the father “the initiating priest “...
May 18th, 2024 18:04 - Rejoice O Sinner (Mohammad Younus)
Thank heaven for forgiveness. Without it, wouldn’t the whole thing be...
May 16th, 2024 18:27 - “The Storm” (Mlhurtub)
What if you are not the thoughts and feelings passing through your...
May 15th, 2024 22:00 - Odyssey (Mohammad Younus)
“The odyssey of love.”
Love it!
May 14th, 2024 04:26 - relapse (TW: SH) (NinjaGirl)
Fire in the water’s retention
A high ideal’s transmutation...
May 13th, 2024 20:49 - Haiku - I Am The Sunlight (Mohammad Younus)
Real Haiku!
May 12th, 2024 05:07 - Looking Into My Eyes, The Two Mirrors (Mohammad Younus)
Awesome poem, Mohammad! I have no words. All that comes to mind is this...
May 12th, 2024 05:05 - Fears (NafisaSB)
Almost none can assert
That fear has completely gone
Water into...
May 11th, 2024 17:41 - Too Drunk to Fuck (Thomas W Case)
Would the water have been turned into wine if this encounter had been...
May 10th, 2024 07:18 - Death spiral (2781)
The iron age is trial and a half isn\'t it?!
The struggle not to...
May 10th, 2024 07:07
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