Comments on community poems by Mutley Ravishes
- I Love This Bar (Tony36)
Their days maybe numbered. Lets enjoy them while we still have the chance.
March 6th, 2025 18:30 - The Success Of My Dreams. (Poetic Licence)
Parents. Who needs them?! Wait a second...
March 6th, 2025 05:40 - We Dream Of Rust-red Plains (Mohammad younus koul)
Now that\'s a poem!
I heard that long distance space travel is denied to...
March 5th, 2025 18:28 - Nuts (Sorenbarrett)
So you carried on testing the limits after departing childhood?! That\'s...
March 5th, 2025 18:21 - Regret\'s dark embrace (Nicole Pritchard)
Bullseye!
March 5th, 2025 00:47 - Modern Haiku (Naina Pandey)
I like it!
March 5th, 2025 00:42 - Did They Call THIS Having Fun? (Cheeky Missy)
Keener observation! Thanks for the reminder.
March 3rd, 2025 18:53 - Time Passes (NinjaGirl)
I heard a story about an old Taoist practitioner who, when he died, it...
March 3rd, 2025 18:47 - Swinger\'s Springtime Surprise (Tristan Robert Lange)
That inner Lucifer, working his socks off to tempt us! A hard taskmaster....
March 3rd, 2025 18:42 - Do you know? (Sorenbarrett)
Great questions, Soren. Don\'t let the world grind you down!
March 3rd, 2025 05:38 - Maybe if... (ᴷᵉᶻᵉˣˣᵉ)
Got so tired of singing
The same old song
So I quit dreaming of
And...
March 3rd, 2025 02:31 - you (Sheta)
Good and very good.
March 3rd, 2025 02:26 - ‘bear pottery’ (Arqios)
Well, I guess it takes one\'s mind off of salmon?!
March 3rd, 2025 02:24 - To Be Alone (Poetic Licence)
I recall a story where the teller recalls a book case seeming to come...
February 28th, 2025 06:59 - Too much (Sorenbarrett)
The last two lines, Soren. Really hit.
Life? I guess we all seen more...
February 28th, 2025 06:52 - The Tide Pool (Thomas W Case)
Yes, an albatross can fly
But you
Can do Kung Fu!
Or whatever
February 27th, 2025 19:06 - Arguing And Animosity (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
The last line is a good question. It\'s saddening, even infuriating, and...
February 27th, 2025 18:59 - sitting at the café (Tristan Robert Lange)
This one has atmosphere. Great work, Tristan.
February 27th, 2025 18:52 - Unbelievable (Tristan Robert Lange)
Twinkle, twinkle, little bat!
That was a fun (and challenging) read.
February 26th, 2025 18:25 - looking like crap (NinjaGirl)
Morihei Ueshiba once said, \"I am the universe.\" Now, that\'s not...
February 26th, 2025 18:19 - Sweet Succubus (Lambsacrificed)
Great write.
February 26th, 2025 18:17 - ( weighing in ) (Arqios)
Was it Rumi who said enlightenment is easy, just don\'t have any...
February 26th, 2025 06:26 - Eye See You (Steve Goldenfort)
Self-forgiveness is a challenge, isn\'t it? All those wretched things...
February 25th, 2025 21:04 - Okay, Okay, Just Pat My Silly Head (Cheeky Missy)
Sparrows always seem so joyful, don\'t they?
February 24th, 2025 22:02 - Pontiac (Tristan Robert Lange)
Great write, Tristan. I guess there\'s always two sides to a coin -...
February 24th, 2025 18:47 - Distance (Steve Goldenfort)
How did you let go, Steve?
February 24th, 2025 18:29 - to all poets (Sheta)
Thank you
Too!
February 23rd, 2025 04:43 - Night of dream dust (Sorenbarrett)
Here\'s the deal Mutley : You can be comfortable all the time, but you...
February 23rd, 2025 04:42 - Melbourne mosaic (Arqios)
Hi Melbourne!
Its your old enemy, Sydney
Shut your cakehole
And listen...
February 22nd, 2025 05:58 - The Adventures of Mary & Harry(1) (Poetic Licence)
Harry has balls like balloons
He\'ll be appearing in
A South Park...
February 22nd, 2025 05:39 - The Cult (Tristan Robert Lange)
\"Evil\" is working overtime to wake us up. In that sense you gotta admire...
February 21st, 2025 20:03 - desperation (NinjaGirl)
At one time I became so desperate to \"win,\" \"be great,\" or whatever...
February 21st, 2025 19:58 - I can’t breathe (David Wakeling)
I\'m supposedly
A cop
I and my \"colleagues\"
Let me
Be filmed...
February 21st, 2025 19:50 - The Love of Lichen (Demar Desu)
Awesome Haiku.
February 21st, 2025 19:43 - I Can`t Hide It (Poetic Licence)
I once read that when anger is purified it leads to clarity.
You kept me...
February 21st, 2025 07:26 - Flies (Sorenbarrett)
The big fish eat the little ones!
That was a fun read, Soren.
February 21st, 2025 07:18 - Un Jour (NinjaGirl)
It\'s been said
The sexual energy
Has the power to enslave
And the...
February 19th, 2025 00:30 - In my dreams I’m a master (EvenwheniLie)
You’re on a roll!
February 18th, 2025 17:49 - Don\'t Force It (Thomas W Case)
I almost did myself in through forcing it back in the day. The effortless...
February 18th, 2025 17:46 - Trump the devil (2781)
I heard his work (along with the \"opposition\") is to prepare the ground...
February 17th, 2025 18:43 - Sixes (Tristan Robert Lange)
Tristan, I recently read a writer-teacher saying that most of this...
February 17th, 2025 18:37 - Confused and dying (EvenwheniLie)
Deep dive!
February 17th, 2025 18:25 - The World Holds It`s Breath (Poetic Licence)
Not holding my breath!
Taking the journey to the west!
February 17th, 2025 04:54 - ‘til all my breath is You (Arqios)
Good poison! For a moment there I thought you were going into self-pity!...
February 17th, 2025 04:50 - My Apologies, It IS Only...Nevermind (Cheeky Missy)
Yorkshire,
Barry\'s,
Even some Chimpanzee tea
Lovely!
February 17th, 2025 00:02 - Truck Driving Man (Tony36)
I used to drive a van as a courier once upon a time. One of my favorite...
February 16th, 2025 18:34 - Fishbowl Fatigue (Tristan Robert Lange)
Tristan, you\'ve asked a great question.
And don\'t forget all the...
February 16th, 2025 18:28 - Dear Winston ... (Kurt Philip Behm)
Winston
Just who were you?
Perhaps Mr.Chamberlain
Could\'ve told us
A...
February 15th, 2025 23:51 - Orange Man (James Michael)
Orange man\'s my
Right hand
Woke woman\'s
My left
I\'m a master...
February 15th, 2025 23:47 - Nobody In The World Bends To Your Threats (Mohammad younus koul)
Driven by hands unseen indeed. Great write.
February 15th, 2025 06:06 - ANXIETY (Tristan Robert Lange)
Anxiety
I guess you’re
Always gonna get me
Until this entity
I...
February 14th, 2025 17:36 - The Passion Has Gone (Poetic Licence)
We\'re being asked to dig deep.
The electricity
Never dies
It lies
In...
February 14th, 2025 07:33 - Naive (Sorenbarrett)
Great write, Soren. A long term relationship is a serious challenge,...
February 13th, 2025 19:31 - forever we shall be (Arqios)
I came across a writer saying that in one sense we have to rebel against...
February 12th, 2025 18:51 - A reflection from behind (EvenwheniLie)
Great flow.
I admit
I don\'t know
What you are saying
I\'ll re-read...
February 12th, 2025 18:42 - Search For The Truth (Poetic Licence)
I guess we nearly all have a little (or a lot) of the Starmer in us. I...
February 12th, 2025 18:33 - Just Shit (Teardrop)
Great flow
I can only belly laugh
When I let go
So.....!
February 12th, 2025 18:27 - Carpe diem without conscience (Sorenbarrett)
Wanting to exist until the end of time is our secret wish, isn\'t it? It...
February 11th, 2025 18:55 - companionable travelling (Arqios)
Kindred spirits are few and far between in this age of iron. Well, I guess...
February 11th, 2025 18:48 - surrender (NinjaGirl)
A person struggling with cravings is not forced to surrender to them. They...
February 10th, 2025 19:00 - When i vacationed in Hell (RSM0812)
I took myself into hell once upon a time. I don\'t want to go back. Or,...
February 8th, 2025 18:54 - War drums (Tony36)
Preach it, Tony!
February 8th, 2025 18:48 - they shall weep no more (Arqios)
Intriguing write. If the man (who is able to bring home the bacon each...
February 8th, 2025 07:45 - Smelly Sin (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
That\'s the spirit, Shaun!
Here\'s some words I read recently: \"Instead...
February 8th, 2025 03:46 - Secret of the hive (Sorenbarrett)
I was just thinking of honeybees, and then I come across this rhyme!...
February 8th, 2025 03:40 - The B.R.I.C.S (EvenwheniLie)
What if BRICS
Is just another
Trick?!
February 6th, 2025 18:48 - Will I have time ? (Lorenz)
Great write.
Thank heavens this universe is too vast for folks in tourist...
February 6th, 2025 18:23 - ...How About, Yes? (Cheeky Missy)
You\'re from a different time
Those lines
Are fine!
February 6th, 2025 18:20 - Mindless Mindfulness (Demar Desu)
De ja vus?
Haven\'t me and you
Been through this experience...
February 6th, 2025 18:13 - lovesick (NinjaGirl)
That\'s the first \"love\" poem I\'ve read in an age.
Sick of love?...
February 5th, 2025 23:37 - The Gaza Plaza (Tristan Robert Lange)
Don Orange and Sleepy Joe
Put on a show
Called \"Triumphant Road to...
February 5th, 2025 18:32 - Heil trump (Boot)
I am a front man
I work for the Fam
Both sides played
Got you all...
February 4th, 2025 18:46 - Living Dead (Tony36)
Great write and observation, Tony. More and more laws, complications,...
February 4th, 2025 18:41 - Ants (Sorenbarrett)
I remember a certain author saying that ants are a fallen race.
Great...
February 2nd, 2025 18:30 - Is THIS Why They Call Me Crazy? (Cheeky Missy)
Blueberries with yoghurt and maple syrup
Make me chirrup
When I\'m...
January 31st, 2025 02:13 - Moments (Cassie58)
I remember reading in a Joseph Campbell book about a god pictured shedding...
January 30th, 2025 19:01 - Sonnett of an old man (Sorenbarrett)
It doesn\'t have to be this way.
A dead man was put in a cave
And came...
January 30th, 2025 18:50 - Taking Poetry Back (Tom Dylan)
\"Who gives a @?>$ about a goddamn poetry night?
Who gives a \"$%! about...
January 30th, 2025 18:42 - John Lennon Knew ... (Kurt Philip Behm)
.....about Billy?!
January 30th, 2025 18:36 - You (Tristan Robert Lange)
Have you heard the story of Hakuin (Japanese Zen priest) and the baby he...
January 28th, 2025 18:30 - I (Garth Rakumakoe)
\"Living in a new world, with an old soul,\" as Anthony sang it.
I...
January 25th, 2025 06:21 - Only People (Kevin Hulme)
For sure!
January 25th, 2025 00:56 - ~> The Bluebird Of Happiness! - Sonnet - (Thad Wilk)
I remember that scene in a movie where all the patients’ attention was...
January 24th, 2025 19:51 - What if? (Hey!)
This too shall pass.
What pulled me out of a downward spiral into the...
January 24th, 2025 19:47 - I Was Blind (Thomas W Case)
I was blind too
I better not waste the rest of my days
On the...
January 23rd, 2025 22:26 - Wake of a muse (Sorenbarrett)
Thanks heavens a wake will never be held for The Muse!
Some great lines...
January 23rd, 2025 06:17 - not for lack of trying (Arqios)
I remember seeing a video of a cat that was dreaming. It was making the...
January 23rd, 2025 06:07 - A Bit of Mischief for \"Flavour\"?! (Cheeky Missy)
So you have a thing
For spring?!
January 22nd, 2025 23:55 - disappointment (NinjaGirl)
It\'s been taught that when one thinks of another, if the person being...
January 22nd, 2025 23:45 - The Old Neighborhood (Tony36)
Can you imagine what things would look like 100 years from now
If they...
January 21st, 2025 20:27 - The Age of the Blissfully Ignorant (Gray0328)
Ignorance, the parent
Of aversion and craving
A whole lot of time...
January 21st, 2025 18:38 - When sleeping gods awaken (EvenwheniLie)
I sometimes wonder, if \"God\" is an all knowing Being then why would It...
January 20th, 2025 19:10 - Patience (Mohammad Younus)
A beautiful poem on patience and Imagination!
January 20th, 2025 18:54 - The Battle (Tony36)
Tolkien saw war
And the fall of Numenor
Great write, Tony.
January 20th, 2025 00:05 - new day (Arqios)
Hi, I\'m C3PO
A kinstugi android
Just letting you know!
Great work.
January 19th, 2025 23:49 - riverbeds (Tristan Robert Lange)
A cry for help
I hurt myself
Am I this way
Because I’m ready to...
January 18th, 2025 19:00 - Please, God - Save Me (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Behind it all is sexual energy. The strongest temptation by a country...
January 18th, 2025 18:40 - Tequila (Sorenbarrett)
Now I want to drink some Okinawan snake liqor!
January 18th, 2025 06:01 - Still ill (Tom Dylan)
Your a good storyteller, Tom!
January 17th, 2025 21:48 - time’s no friend (Arqios)
Mechanical time
Grinds
Us down
Effortlessly!
\"An unhurried force.\"...
January 16th, 2025 05:35
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