Comments on community poems by Mutley Ravishes
- Poetry Interpretation (Tom Dylan)
Great work, Tom. You’re driving in your own lane. No one else can.
June 28th, 2024 22:47
- 3rd Time Down (Thomas W Case)
Cold showers, breathing exercises, good nutrition, keeping warm, not...
June 28th, 2024 22:41
- Embrace the Stillness (Gray0328)
Beautiful!
June 28th, 2024 18:43
- I Can\'t Get Myself to Go Away (Mason Vollman)
Great write, Mason. How about this? If we believe we are the thoughts and...
June 28th, 2024 18:37
- Does it end? (Neilton)
Every time the body feels tension
Work on relaxation
Every morning when...
June 26th, 2024 18:29
- Football Fever (Tom Dylan)
I guess the “we” part gives us a strong hint about identification.
June 25th, 2024 17:14
- Heart of a tiger (Poetic Dan)
Great write, Dan. \"None of us ever really knowing the joy to follow the...
June 25th, 2024 02:02
- Angst (Kurt Philip Behm)
Thanks for the reminder, Kurt!
June 24th, 2024 18:48
- George Floyd - never forget (Prettylady)
The perpetrator continued
Despite knowing
He was being videoed
All the...
June 24th, 2024 18:40
- Snowy Suicide (Neil.E)
Not cowardly. Why would life want to kill itself? Something in me too...
June 20th, 2024 18:30
- The machine (Sorenbarrett)
Right on the money, Soren.
Steiner and co saw this coming
All those...
June 20th, 2024 07:14
- ~*~ I Often, ~*~ (Thad Wilk)
Lol! I like a working cat, catching dinner, mice and the like.
June 19th, 2024 18:32
- ~> Sammy The Squirrel [ form Trijan Refrain ] (Thad Wilk)
Great flow and humor, Thad.
Squirrels, watch out for the neighborhood...
June 18th, 2024 23:51
- Minded (Introverted Sage)
A friend said that the mind is a terrible master, but a wonderful servant....
June 18th, 2024 01:26
- A Blue Heron Stands (Gray0328)
Life feeding on life. I guess we are all learning...something?
June 18th, 2024 01:15
- A Man Like Me (Tom Dylan)
Very funny, Tom! Nice work.
June 17th, 2024 19:26
- Last Canary (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Yes, spot on. Kurt, have you checked out an article on Kirkdurston.com...
June 17th, 2024 19:11
- ~> OMG! I Was Raped By an Alien (Thad Wilk)
Don\'t let her steal your water, Thad.
June 17th, 2024 03:46
- Tree Of Life (Tony36)
The sleeping fire at the root, just waiting to ignite!
June 16th, 2024 06:54
- garlic (Bloodbat_Workshop)
Lol! By the way,
I heard from someone
The the surface of the sun
Isn\'t...
June 16th, 2024 02:01
- Hip hop hooray (Poetic Dan)
May he live his unique potential, totally & completely!
June 16th, 2024 01:54
- Election Night Special (Tom Dylan)
Once the public have cast their vote
The same old folks
Will be running...
June 14th, 2024 07:18
- She Was Still a Tyro in Pottery (Gray0328)
Sublime! Thanks for bringing a smile to my face.
June 13th, 2024 18:59
- To Know your Heart (Mason Vollman)
Nice work, Mason.
What if we are being tempered,
And if we surrender...
June 13th, 2024 18:55
- My Eyes Were Closed (Dev Parth)
Great flow!
June 12th, 2024 22:09
- the sky will cry with you (NinjaGirl)
Christ in you, the hope of glory!
June 12th, 2024 22:00
- World so unkind (Shanzah)
Keep the flame burning! There are ways to make it burn ever brighter ....
June 12th, 2024 18:30
- ~*` When I Was Just A Little Lad `*~ (Thad Wilk)
Nice work, Thad. I often recall childhood memories too.
What if \'make...
June 11th, 2024 18:34
- Stabilizing live’s (EvenwheniLie)
What a rhyme! Great work.
Mineral>Plant>Animal>Human>?
Or back down the...
June 11th, 2024 18:30
- Never forgotten but everything moves on (Poetic Dan)
Try checking out the Wim Hof Method for help with Crohn’s.
June 11th, 2024 04:26
- ~` More Than Words Can Say `~ (Thad Wilk)
Even when you
Nag, bitch, and complain
My love for you will always be...
June 11th, 2024 00:37
- Lost Between (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Implanted - what a great write, Kurt. As within, so without!
June 10th, 2024 19:23
- Freefall (Peto)
Great work, Peto!
Water of Life
Smash the strife
June 10th, 2024 19:01
- Muse (Sneha SJ)
Beautiful and simple. Imagination taking flight!
June 9th, 2024 19:17
- ~`* My Muse *`~ (Thad Wilk)
Now that\'s a flow you got going on there, Thad!
June 9th, 2024 19:10
- Hail to the truck driver (Tony36)
\"The Road goes ever on and on
Down from the door where it began...\"
June 9th, 2024 18:56
- Its the Possibility (Mason Vollman)
Great work, Mason! Yes, here to live our unique potential, totally and...
June 7th, 2024 16:57
- You do it to yourself (Peto)
Ain\'t that so!
June 7th, 2024 00:54
- Anger and Shame (CST)
Even if there\'s no
World War 3
Where on earth does
This present...
June 7th, 2024 00:42
- ~> \'Goofy\' Why? (Thad Wilk)
If I\'m out of it
On weed
With a pot belly
How on earth can I...
June 5th, 2024 21:17
- i dont feel safe in my body (NinjaGirl)
Dear Ninja Girl,
Try checking out the work Of Bob Gardener (The Freedom...
June 4th, 2024 23:43
- Full of confusion (Nicolerobinson)
This \"self\" has been bad
For my health!
All this struggle for...
June 4th, 2024 18:42
- Covid in 2020 (NafisaSB)
And the regular flu just seemed to disappear at that time. Perhaps it went...
June 4th, 2024 01:56
- I Miss Feel Good Hip-Hop (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Have you tried listening to Ren/NF/Dax/JamWayne etc? Not all their work is...
June 4th, 2024 01:49
- Clean, Clean, Clean (Thomas W Case)
Great piece, Thomas. All this obsession with cleanliness while a tsunami...
June 3rd, 2024 19:05
- Words to say someday; Well God (Sam.C)
Sam, have you tried listening to Ren\'s track \"Troubles,\" and NF\'s...
June 3rd, 2024 18:55
- C.H.A.L.I.N.K. (Cha-Link) (Jerry Wayne Lawrence)
Jerry, are you alluding to people\'s poor boxing skills when it comes to...
June 2nd, 2024 18:58
- Convulsion (John Prophet)
To have the heart of a lion
Or to be a cylon?
A life of fear is so...
June 2nd, 2024 18:55
- I\'m Very sorry (Mutley Ravishes)
As long as you catch them in the early stages of nest-building then...
June 2nd, 2024 07:16
- BIRDS UNLIKE US (Qurrathul Ain)
Birds are yet
To be equipped with
An intellect!
(I\'m not saying it\'s...
June 2nd, 2024 02:51
- REVERIES (Qurrathul Ain)
\"Therefore I say unto you, What things soever ye desire, when ye pray,...
June 1st, 2024 09:29
- Customise (2781)
From head to toe indeed. Every angle imaginable. The heat\'s being turned...
June 1st, 2024 01:21
- Cosmic Raps (Mutley Ravishes)
Thanks for the rappers’ names. I’ll check them out. I guess your dad...
May 31st, 2024 23:33
- your no man (Vividvoid14)
Have you checked out NF’s work?
This maybe hard to understand
But...
May 30th, 2024 18:22
- Cosmic Raps (Mutley Ravishes)
Thanks! Been listening to a lot of rap recently. I guess it’s paying
May 30th, 2024 18:13
- Another Lover (Thomas W Case)
Oh to be a woman
One minute all sweetness
The next, a fiendess!
What...
May 29th, 2024 18:37
- Sit and Think (Mason Vollman)
“Imagination is the real and eternal world of which this vegetable...
May 28th, 2024 21:57
- Unsolicited Sages (GeekSusie)
I hope no one finds out
I have absolutely no idea
What I’m talking...
May 27th, 2024 18:40
- Not the Rose But A Leaf (Meera Mere)
If you’re not “beautiful” then you’re more likely to meet your...
May 27th, 2024 00:01
- Cloning Tomorrow (Kurt Philip Behm)
How strange to be alive
As the Iron Age withers and dies.
Has the...
May 26th, 2024 23:53
- Judge Meet Executioner (BeatrixMacabre)
What if nearly all those
“Christians” are
Mistaken?
And...
May 26th, 2024 01:45
- What does AI mean? (Kering.karim)
Great work! What if the real AI is Awakened Imagination?
May 25th, 2024 03:57
- Finding The Courage (Accidental Poet)
When I quit spilling the water courage finally began to take hold of the...
May 24th, 2024 07:00
- The Tranquility Of Heart (Mohammad Younus)
The words flow out of you!
May 24th, 2024 06:54
- Resurrection of a slave (EvenwheniLie)
What if mankind has been here before? What if the present humanity is the...
May 23rd, 2024 18:28
- hope (Sc2000)
Great insight! A friend of mine said that lurking beneath hope is fear.
May 22nd, 2024 21:35
- Stoic (John Prophet)
I sometimes wonder what’s in the heart of someone who is intent on...
May 19th, 2024 18:42
- Mechanical song (Sorenbarrett)
They can try it on
But the future ain’t cylon!
A trillion...
May 18th, 2024 18:09
- Father Knows Best (Gary Edward Geraci)
I remember Joseph Campbell calling the father “the initiating priest “...
May 18th, 2024 18:04
- Rejoice O Sinner (Mohammad Younus)
Thank heaven for forgiveness. Without it, wouldn’t the whole thing be...
May 16th, 2024 18:27
- “The Storm” (Mlhurtub)
What if you are not the thoughts and feelings passing through your...
May 15th, 2024 22:00
- Odyssey (Mohammad Younus)
“The odyssey of love.”
Love it!
May 14th, 2024 04:26
- relapse (TW: SH) (NinjaGirl)
Fire in the water’s retention
A high ideal’s transmutation...
May 13th, 2024 20:49
- Haiku - I Am The Sunlight (Mohammad Younus)
Real Haiku!
May 12th, 2024 05:07
- Looking Into My Eyes, The Two Mirrors (Mohammad Younus)
Awesome poem, Mohammad! I have no words. All that comes to mind is this...
May 12th, 2024 05:05
- Fears (NafisaSB)
Almost none can assert
That fear has completely gone
Water into...
May 11th, 2024 17:41
- Too Drunk to Fuck (Thomas W Case)
Would the water have been turned into wine if this encounter had been...
May 10th, 2024 07:18
- Death spiral (2781)
The iron age is trial and a half isn\'t it?!
The struggle not to...
May 10th, 2024 07:07