Comments on community poems by Mutley Ravishes
- The Path (Tony36)
The road goes ever on, down from the .....!
October 21st, 2024 19:06 - Let go (Sorenbarrett)
You`ve weaved a beautiful poem here, Soren.
October 16th, 2024 21:13 - Life’s slight of hand (EvenwheniLie)
Great work. Are you thinking of setting it to some music?!
October 16th, 2024 20:57 - ~> Never Trust A Stoned Squirrel! ( Limericks ) (Thad Wilk)
My friend saw a cat eating a squirrel`s guts under a tree once upon a...
October 15th, 2024 18:41 - The Moment Without (Steve Goldenfort)
The effortless way!
October 15th, 2024 18:37 - A billion miles from Earth (Jeremy Leach)
Great work, Jeremy. And you never know just who you`ll meet out...
October 1st, 2024 18:51 - Life is but a dream (Sorenbarrett)
Wonderful write, Soren. You really packed a lot into this one.
September 30th, 2024 04:55 - THE AFRICAN QUEEN (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke)
Beautiful write.
I know nothing about the names you mentioned, but I hear...
September 29th, 2024 03:53 - No to racism, yes to respect (LP2187)
“They pin us against each other, then sit back and watch it happen.”
September 28th, 2024 01:29 - This Day Last Year (Tom Dylan)
Isn’t it something when words written by someone who died many years ago...
September 27th, 2024 04:48 - Africa # (Drone7)
John St.Julien Baba Wanyama is doing great work in Africa!
I have...
September 19th, 2024 18:33 - Bottom of the Sea. (TobaniNataiella)
To Natalia 2021, I`ve sent this letter back in time, which begs the...
September 19th, 2024 00:11 - Broken (Tristan Robert Lange)
Is awareness of being ever broken, Tristan?
September 16th, 2024 07:40 - Rise from the fire (Tony36)
Smaug roars
Up or down?
Oh, my Lord
September 16th, 2024 06:26 - The rusty nail (Sorenbarrett)
Some houses are held together without nails!
Great write, Soren.
September 12th, 2024 18:36 - Beneath the Wave (DLewis88)
Great write.
I was so afraid of the dark
I couldn`t even enter Noah`s...
September 11th, 2024 19:22 - On Patriots Day 9/11 (Accidental Poet)
Land of the brave
Home of the free
Who occupies thee?
A man in a cave...
September 11th, 2024 02:10 - The power of belief & They are only painted (Maplespal)
So many taking it all
Literally
Not looking at it
Symbolically
September 10th, 2024 18:49 - I can SEE it (Adnan it is)
How to break the rusty cage?
Guess I need to consult with a sage!
September 10th, 2024 18:44 - anger is better than peace (NinjaGirl)
I once got so angry
That someone started
Laughing at me!
September 9th, 2024 19:27 - I Am Not A Poet (Mase ♪)
You are not the poetry
The poetry is not you
It\'s just something
You...
September 8th, 2024 00:43 - ~ Bloody Red Riding Hood! (Thad Wilk)
Sometimes I catch them roaming freely
In my center of gravity!
Great...
September 2nd, 2024 18:42 - The Sell-Out Gig (Tom Dylan)
One and a half classic albums, Tom?!
Anyways, 500 quid
To see specks on...
September 2nd, 2024 18:35 - anxious (NinjaGirl)
Breathe like Wim Hof
It`ll help stop
The anxiety
September 2nd, 2024 01:56 - Up against a warmonger (EvenwheniLie)
Up against three warmongers?!
September 2nd, 2024 01:10 - Will the Real Poets, Please Stand Up? (DeadRose)
I don`t know what my real name is....yet.
August 29th, 2024 19:13 - Dear God (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Here`s something to contemplate, Shaun:
\"The sword of Manjushri is not...
August 29th, 2024 18:38 - ()
Hi Chuck. My name`s Lee. Bruce Lee.
Are you ready to fight me
In...
August 29th, 2024 18:30 - Definitely, maybe not (Tom Dylan)
Oh well. I thought Liam had something good going on there with John...
August 28th, 2024 18:37 - The Write Crowd (Tom Dylan)
Great storytelling, Tom.
August 28th, 2024 18:30 - I Don\'t Know Why (Sunshine777)
Have you checked out the work of John St Julien Baba Wanyama?
A mighty...
August 27th, 2024 19:17 - OM (Davyson F Santos)
Beautiful write.
Om Masi Padme Hum (no typos there).
August 26th, 2024 19:18 - the essence of imagination (DeadRose)
\"Our own wonderful human Imagination is.....?!\"
Thanks for the write.
August 26th, 2024 18:41 - Vision (Sorenbarrett)
I never thought of it that way. Thanks, Soren, and so poetically put.
August 26th, 2024 05:30 - A Nervous System (Elias H.F.)
This intellect
Can`t get
Me out of this self-created prison
It has its...
August 25th, 2024 22:05 - ``~ Guess Who! (Thad Wilk)
\"Spring, I was enjoying a nice, long sleep. Now you`ve gone and ruined...
August 25th, 2024 21:55 - Sin (Alan R)
What if love
Can be made
Without lust?
Doesn’t one
Lead to life...
August 22nd, 2024 18:33 - Dear Death (NinjaGirl)
It’s been said
That even more pain
Awaits a suicide
On the other...
August 21st, 2024 21:09 - The way it is (Tony36)
The iron is starting to melt! Is the wheat being sorted from the chaff?
August 21st, 2024 18:41 - God Revived (Helena Yonatan)
“Therefore I say to you, whatever things ye desire, when ye pray,...
August 21st, 2024 18:25 - the fear (Anouk)
Why not try researching about death and what happens during the process...
August 20th, 2024 19:18 - Restless vampires (Haritha H)
A bite I can handle
Infection mangles
August 20th, 2024 06:40 - Not what it seems (Sorenbarrett)
Leave it out, Marlene, I am skint!
August 20th, 2024 06:36 - The Joy of Losing Me (Gray0328)
The pain of all that grasping!
\"Love isn’t a thing to be captured ...
August 20th, 2024 00:20 - Shadow\'s reflection (Sorenbarrett)
Imagine how insane
We’d be
Without pain?!
Great write, Soren
August 18th, 2024 18:27 - Moon (John Prophet)
Dead Selene’s bright gaze, ancient days!
August 17th, 2024 23:51 - The Joy of Simply Being (Gray0328)
Preach! Great write. I sometimes wonder if it’s all the responsibility...
August 17th, 2024 23:45 - Infinite Light (RefugeInRain)
“Let the weak man say I AM strong .”
August 16th, 2024 21:12 - When Evil Knocks (Anti-establishment) (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Shaun, what if we were enclosed in bodies of limitation in order to awaken...
August 16th, 2024 08:51 - Pit (2781)
\"Allowing us to have our way, until there\'s nowhere left to move.\"...
August 16th, 2024 05:12 - Ripples (Sorenbarrett)
Beautiful poem, Soren. Water and memory!
August 16th, 2024 05:02 - Are You the Thought Are You the Feel? (Hollow Enigma)
Great questions.
August 15th, 2024 17:26 - Final Word Count (Tom Dylan)
Great questions, Tom. Thank heavens no one knows how many times a heart...
August 13th, 2024 06:44 - Try (2781)
I am glad
The Shepherd is
Slightly mad
August 9th, 2024 05:43 - The Beast Within (Cocamedo)
When fear catches the scent of transmutation it’s relentless pursuit...
August 9th, 2024 05:39 - Old fashioned political correctness (Sorenbarrett)
Thanks for the reminder, Soren!
August 9th, 2024 05:17 - The sword (2781)
How strange to be alive
As the Iron Age slides
Into……?!
August 7th, 2024 23:41 - Interesting Times (John Prophet)
Iron Age melting.
August 7th, 2024 23:38 - A Come to Jesus Moment (Gloria Denise)
The last two lines are really on it, Gloria! Thanks for the reminder.
July 30th, 2024 22:10 - It\'s In Me (13LaurenD)
Nothing like turning the attention inwards!
Now, can I release people...
July 30th, 2024 21:53 - Go Insane (MA-Q)
I enjoyed this!
July 30th, 2024 04:07 - Comercial music (Sorenbarrett)
I was talking to a tree recently.
I asked a leaf it had forgotten the...
July 29th, 2024 07:50 - My people (2781)
The iron age is melting. Thank God!
July 29th, 2024 07:44 - SUICIDE (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke)
Powerful work. Been so close to the edge myself like so many others. In...
July 28th, 2024 08:52 - Wine for the ear (Sorenbarrett)
I like it. And I\'d like to hear the sound that emanates from Ors. I\'ve...
July 28th, 2024 08:44 - Sleep Always Calls (Thomas W Case)
Maybe time is needed for things to ferment? I’m the meantime have you...
July 28th, 2024 04:51 - Scriptures (2781)
J.R.R Tolkien knew that an ancient civilization made war on The Creator....
July 28th, 2024 04:48 - The squirrel (Michael William Reid)
Squirrels can struggle on the ground. My friend saw her cat eating a...
July 26th, 2024 22:16 - Sex well done (Sorenbarrett)
Sujata, who is said to have fed Gautama Buddha a bowl of kheer, a...
July 23rd, 2024 19:29 - Happiness is a choice (NDOU ROLIVHUWA)
\"Our heart\'s sweet toil.\" Magic write!
July 22nd, 2024 22:47 - Step back, I’m a professional taster (EvenwheniLie)
Love it!
July 22nd, 2024 22:46 - The people outside the Ark (EvenwheniLie)
I know you can feel it too!
July 21st, 2024 18:42 - I Will Rise (Thomas W Case)
“This too shall pass.” Thank heavens for that, Thomas!
July 21st, 2024 02:53 - I wish my Fears would Migrate (Thomas W Case)
Great write, Tom. A friend said to me this thing we call our identity is...
July 19th, 2024 00:26 - Trump for president (EvenwheniLie)
Trump or Biden
Take your pick
If democracy isn\'t a scam
Then I am
July 19th, 2024 00:22 - Battle Royale (Kurt Philip Behm)
The power of that tempter within is frightening!
July 18th, 2024 18:28 - ~> It Was, A Female Fly (Thad Wilk)
Do girls spend more time talking about life than living it?! Do boys spend...
July 18th, 2024 18:24 - LUST (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke)
Good write.
Craving and aversion
Born of the ignorance
Of...
July 17th, 2024 05:03 - sunset (Regenoku)
Ors is waiting for you, Zelda!
July 12th, 2024 02:15 - Courage (Alan R)
The 3rd poem I\'ve read about courage in the last few days. Great work!
I...
July 10th, 2024 18:59 - ~> My Honeybun (Thad Wilk)
Lol, Thad! BTW, don\'t give up ALL your power, keep it in the temple.
July 10th, 2024 18:49 - Ode To Pandora (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
You say a lot in so few words, Kurt.
July 10th, 2024 18:38 - Trying To Be Righteous In An Unrighteous World (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
I saw Public Enemy 3 times live back in the late 80\'s/early 90\'s. They...
July 10th, 2024 05:27 - Tax time (2781)
Right on!!
July 10th, 2024 05:22 - Empty (Jordan)
Are you using \"I am..,\" instead of \"I want to be, I will be, I\'m going...
July 10th, 2024 02:14 - Empty (Jordan)
Jordan, you wrote a poem called \"Imagination.\" What if it can be...
July 9th, 2024 18:43 - I\'m Scared (13LaurenD)
Good write, Lauren. I\'ll pass on a quote to you from Bob Gardener (The...
July 9th, 2024 18:38 - Beyond The Clouds (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
I must fly to the moon
With a six-pack
And a low-cut top!
Got a movie...
July 9th, 2024 01:38 - Thanks to those who preceded us (Hzugman)
Household appliances are slavemasters! Down with them!
Electricity?...
July 8th, 2024 00:03 - courage (Regenoku)
Zelda, you’re on the narrow road! This is the second poem I’ve read...
July 7th, 2024 04:17 - Courage To Press On (DesertWords)
Awesome rhyme! A friend of mine said courage is the power that transmutes...
July 7th, 2024 04:13 - ~`` smile you\'re on camera (haiku) (Thad Wilk)
Lol, Thad! Nice photo too.
July 6th, 2024 19:39 - ``* Global Warming form Monotetra (Thad Wilk)
Smooth flow as usual, Thad! Great write. Have you considered that the...
July 5th, 2024 16:40 - What is gone is gone, they say (Arctic fox)
Thanks for the reminder, Fox.
July 5th, 2024 16:35 - UK OK? (Doggerel Dave)
I was listening to the NF song \"Oh Lord\" the other day. There\'s a line...
July 4th, 2024 18:39 - Just Stop Oil (Fakers) (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Good detective work, Shaun!
July 4th, 2024 04:30 - monster (Bloodbat_Workshop)
There\'s nothing to be afraid of
No need to give the immune system a...
July 3rd, 2024 21:25 - Enjoy the Ride (Tony36)
Curiosity, isn\'t that a \"superpower?!\"
July 3rd, 2024 21:19 - Sham(e) full travesty regarding fourth of July celebration (Rew4er2nail)
As within, so without
July 3rd, 2024 21:13 - my heart,my past (Regenoku)
All those burning regrets!
I need to let
Them go
Emotional attachment...
July 3rd, 2024 00:02
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