Comments on community poems by BRIAN & ANGELA

• book of life (Iggy666) WELCOME IGGY ~ Thanks for your very powerful first poem ! Your poem...
  July 16th, 2016 09:45
• SITTING ON THE FRONT PORCH IN THE EVENING SHADE (Summersounds68) PERFECTION ~ of structure and subject. Proper houses (in the South) have...
  July 16th, 2016 04:23
• ᴀ ʟᴏᴠᴇ sᴛᴏʀʏ (Bella cortez) GRACIAS BELLA ~ For an elegantly framed and delicately phrased perfect...
  July 16th, 2016 04:10
• The Greatest Alive (Kingpoetic) WELCOME KP ~ Thanks for a great tribute to TUPAC SHAKUR a Rap Artist who...
  July 15th, 2016 17:48
• Tears (Isituorme) THANK YOU ISITU ~ For a very sensitive poem on the horrific massacre in...
  July 15th, 2016 17:06
• Always Watching (Asilentpoetspeaks) Thanks SPS ~ for an elegant poem ~ rhyming couplets with great rhythm ~...
  July 15th, 2016 16:41
• Surreal Reality (Shahla Latifi) Thanks for sharing SHALA. Love the structure of the poem and its message ...
  July 15th, 2016 14:46
• Our Heroes in Blue (A poet) WELCOME TO MPS ~ Thanks for a beautifully written (rippling with rhyme &...
  July 15th, 2016 14:37
• Forbidden (Wilsonmark87) WELCOME MARC ~ Thank you for a very beautifully written and sensual first...
  July 15th, 2016 14:25
• My Phantom Matron (J. D. Quill) WELCOME JD ~ Thanks for your first poem ~ part fantasy ~ part lustful...
  July 15th, 2016 14:16
• ᴛʜᴇ ᴡᴀʀ ᴡɪᴛʜɪɴ ᴜs. (Bella cortez) WELCOME BELLA ~ Thank you for a classic first poem an awesome "Grito de tu...
  July 15th, 2016 13:58
• 100 Years Of War (Loveslost) WELCOME LL ~ Thanks for a very elegant and poignant poem as we remember...
  July 15th, 2016 11:10
• WILD (Thebettersideofme69) Don't fence me in ~ the song of all Wild Stallions ! Thanks for sharing ~...
  July 15th, 2016 10:37
• the whispering bell (Willyweed) THANKS WW ~ C'est la vie ! BRIAN
  July 15th, 2016 10:10
• Rapture (LIGHT WARRIOR) WELCOME JASON ~ Thank you for a very interesting first poem ~ exploring...
  July 15th, 2016 10:06
• love is... (Avigail) Thanks AVI ~ You are mega ~ the way you say so so much with so few words....
  July 15th, 2016 08:16
• Uncorrected World (TaeMarie93) BLACK is BEAUTIFUL MARIE ~ Believe it ! I'm white but for me all people...
  July 15th, 2016 04:56
• Tired (Emily_anne) It happens EMILY at all ages and all stages in life ! I'M TIRED ~ too...
  July 15th, 2016 04:39
• After (Jakebuck) WELCOME JAKE ~ Thanks for an interesting first poem ~ about an out of body...
  July 15th, 2016 04:31
• The abyss (Daniel) You strike both a negative and a positive note in this ABYSSMAL poem! ...
  July 15th, 2016 04:15
• Organs (Skye Marlene) THANKS SKYE ~ EVERY ORGAN IS VITAL ~ for our life and our quality of life...
  July 15th, 2016 02:10
• Organs (Skye Marlene) THANKS SKYE ~ EVERY ORGAN IS VITAL ~ for our life and our quality of life...
  July 15th, 2016 02:10
• For the Tree (Asilentpoetspeaks) WELCOME SILENT POET ~ Thanks for sharing such an elegant and melancholy...
  July 15th, 2016 01:47
• Color (Neaves15) Thanks NEAVES ~ Some people see the whole World of life and love in 50...
  July 14th, 2016 17:58
• You Can’t hold me down (Tony36) DON'T FENCE ME IN ! Thanks TONY it is a perennial cri de coeur all...
  July 14th, 2016 16:08
• Her promise.. (AlitaOpal) HI ALITA ~ Perfect picture ~ Perfect poem. Elegant structure and an...
  July 14th, 2016 12:52
• The London tube (Isituorme) THANKS ISITU ~ I OFTEN GO TO LONDON ~ and if I want to get from A (Acton...
  July 14th, 2016 07:22
• Society (Shawna) Thanks SHAWNA ~ Love the poem in both its form and function. Your...
  July 14th, 2016 04:40
• Dark December Day (Beachbum11) Thanks BECCA for such a beautifully written poem encapsulating such a sad...
  July 14th, 2016 04:29
• The Cop (Tony36) Thanks TONY ~ Criminal turned Cop ~ and he became a Good Cop too ~ AMEN ...
  July 13th, 2016 16:21
• It\'s Not Enough (Avigail) Thanks AVI ~ Your poems are short but always very sweet. I agree ~ mind...
  July 13th, 2016 16:18
• That\'s just Life (Dessy.23) WELCOME DESSY ~ Thanks for a very frank and graphic and personal first...
  July 13th, 2016 15:59
• The 2am kebab (Daniel) Thanks DANIEL ~ Lovely poem on an even more lovely subject ! The later...
  July 13th, 2016 10:48
• Silent scream. (Camille) Thanks CAMILLE ~ As always a beautifully presented poem. Neat quatrains...
  July 13th, 2016 10:37
• Heart Astray (BCR64) WELCOME BCR ~ Thanks for your first poem ! Love the structure ~ NINE neat...
  July 13th, 2016 03:59
• Are You Still Proud Of Me? (Beachbum11) WELCOME BB11 ~ Thanks for a beautifully penned poem (I love rhyming...
  July 13th, 2016 03:43
• I See You (Shawna) WELCOME SHAWNA ~ Thanks for a very elegant and loving first poem ~...
  July 13th, 2016 03:36
• darkness (Darka307) WELCOME DARKA ~ Thanks for for your first poem. YES ! "Our hearts and...
  July 13th, 2016 03:26
• Sick To My Stomach (Izzi Lynn) THANKS SILVER ~ For caring so so much and sharing such a painful poem ! ...
  July 12th, 2016 14:17
• Fighting angels (SilverXball) HI SILVER ~ As I go through live I meet many "Fallen Angels" From the Sky...
  July 12th, 2016 13:56
• DEMOCRACY IN ACTION (Berthold Lippel) HI BERTHOLD ~ Sounds like life in ARIZONA ! A great idea though ! ...
  July 12th, 2016 13:49
• Campfire (Tony36) THANKS for sharing TONY ~ It is a good an blessed thing ~ to sing ~ to...
  July 12th, 2016 13:40
• Going Through A Storm (Jburtv95) WELCOME JBURT # Thanks for an interesting first poem. Nice structure with...
  July 12th, 2016 13:33
• who am i , really? (Avigail) Well AVI ~ you live in a beautiful body based on the genes you inherited...
  July 12th, 2016 09:25
• Katharina III (Willyweed) HI WW ~ Thanks again for the third installment of KATHARINA ! The beauty...
  July 12th, 2016 07:18
• Unexpected Event (Teenageheartbreak) HI THB ~ Interesting experience ~ but it happens ~ thanks for sharing ! ...
  July 12th, 2016 05:13
• Hindsight (Daniel) Thanks for sharing DANIEL and the truth enshrined in your well penned...
  July 12th, 2016 05:01
• \"The Darkness\" (TheUnspokenPoet) WELCOME TUP ~ Thanks for a challenging first poem. We humans have a...
  July 12th, 2016 04:56
• Listening. (TheWritingInstrument) WELCOME ARIANA ~ Thanks for a very positive and elegant first poem. All...
  July 12th, 2016 04:50
• Will you hold me in your arms at night? (DD.) WELCOME KIT ~ Thanks for a beautiful first poem ~ but tinged with sadness...
  July 12th, 2016 04:43
• waking up (AlitaOpal) THANKS ALITA ~ Awesome visual and an awesome poem. You categorise it as...
  July 11th, 2016 17:26
• Sonnet 31: Okay to die. (Just.Dev) Thanks DEVANY ~ Great Sonnet ! You may catoragise it as ~ Fantasy ~ BUT...
  July 11th, 2016 17:21
• On Call (OliveSee) HI OLIVE ~ EMAILS ~ Extraordinary ~ Modern ~ Amazing ~ Ignorant ~...
  July 11th, 2016 13:51
• How are your mind clouds today? (Avigail) Thanks AVIGAIL ~ great poem. Because of the pace of life ~ we all live...
  July 11th, 2016 13:46
• Narrow gaze (Daniel) Thanks DANIEL ~ Open my eyes and let me see ~ you inside as you see thee...
  July 11th, 2016 10:59
• Beyond (Skye Marlene) THANKS SKYE ~ Reads like an interesting metamorphosis. We are creatures...
  July 11th, 2016 10:51
• Katharina II (Willyweed) THANKS WW FOR A VERY INTRIGUING FANTASY ! Satan & his Demons are...
  July 11th, 2016 10:41
• Abused (Tony36) THANKS TONY ~ The tragedy is ~ they suffer in silence ~ because no one ...
  July 11th, 2016 10:34
• Wasted time (Frankyflowmandella.nyc) WELCOME FFM~NYC _ Thanks for a great "confessional " first poem ! I love...
  July 11th, 2016 04:43
• The game of life & love (Thebettersideofme69) WELCOME FRIEND ~ Thanks for a well structured first poem pulsating with...
  July 10th, 2016 16:26
• An Old Tale (Dallmandaisies) Welcome DD and thanks for a great first poem ! Great structure and a...
  July 10th, 2016 16:05
• Blame (Tony36) Thanks TONY ~ We blame everyone and everything (religion ~ race etc) when...
  July 10th, 2016 15:52
• Torn (Bobo_the_bear) WELCOME BOBO ~ Great first poem ~ love the structure ~ one long torrent of...
  July 10th, 2016 09:44
• Extend your hand (Dsf) WELCOME DSF ~ FOR A VERY POWERFUL AND PRACTICAL FIRST POEM. Each of our...
  July 10th, 2016 03:40
• Just Breathe (Neaves15) WELCOME NEAVES ~ Wonderful first poem ~ full of "Power of Positive...
  July 10th, 2016 03:20
• Judgment (Daniel) Thanks DANIEL ~ Great poem for Sunday ! You worship the same God as I do...
  July 10th, 2016 02:38
• i hate it (Segolene) Thanks KATTY ~ There is a lot of truth in your poem ~ AND ~ in my...
  July 9th, 2016 15:42
• The way you leave me. (Jlhowell) WELCOME JL ~ thanks for your first poem "To a migraine". Nice structure...
  July 9th, 2016 15:38
• Self pity (Daniel) HI DANIEL ~ Sometimes when we look back ~ We only remember the rack ~...
  July 8th, 2016 15:40
• Past Her Limit (Izzi Lynn) Thanks SILVER ~ What you describe is true for all of us ~ M & F ~ because...
  July 8th, 2016 13:19
• I will be waiting (AlitaOpal) WELCOME ALITA ~ BEAUTIFUL VISUAL and equally beautiful first poem. I...
  July 8th, 2016 10:59
• Is this Harmony? (Avigail) NATURE AVI ~ As I am sure you are sure ~ Is always red in tooth and claw. ...
  July 8th, 2016 10:28
• BLACK LIVES MATTER (Kaychee) THANKS KAYCHEE ~ BLACK IS BEAUTIFUL ~ and in God's sight you are equally...
  July 8th, 2016 08:18
• Sticks & Stones (Teenage_misfit) WELCOME CEZANNE ~ Thanks for an excellent first poem. Great structure ~...
  July 8th, 2016 08:00
• Awaken (Stephon\'s Poetic side) WELCOME VP ~ Thanks for your first challenging poem. Churches can lead us...
  July 8th, 2016 01:50
• who Who (Ae) WELCOME AE ~ Thanks for your first poem ~ well penned but too full of...
  July 8th, 2016 01:37
• Sonnet 1: For a friend (Just.Dev) WELCOME DEVANY ~ Thanks for a powerful first poem ~ I love Sonnets. We get...
  July 8th, 2016 01:25
• ROBOT-2 (Berthold Lippel) Thanks BERTHOLD ~ Love ~ SF ~ Robots and fantasy poems. Love the idea of...
  July 7th, 2016 18:28
• Girl, Why Do You Condone His Mess? (Brooklyn6timesplus) Thanks BROOKLYN ~ Good advice to any nice Girl who's saddled to a Bum ~...
  July 7th, 2016 18:22
• kiss the constellation of time (CW x) WELCOME CW ~ Thanks for an intriguing first poem. Time and lies are...
  July 7th, 2016 16:50
• I can\'t love (Segolene) WELCOME KATTY ~ Great first poem written ~ as you say ~ not from...
  July 7th, 2016 16:43
• When Waking Up Feels Meaningless (Survivor48) Thanks "S 48" ~ A great set of couplets which (if we are honest) we can...
  July 7th, 2016 14:02
• A Light Life (KLyman) WELCOME KLYMAN ~ Thanks for a challenging first poem ! Through our lives...
  July 7th, 2016 10:57
• The soul thief. (Camille) THANKS CAMILLE ~ The Good Book says "What shall it profit a Man if he...
  July 7th, 2016 09:50
• Philosophy in the bathroom (Avigail) WELL AVIAGAIL ~ We guys usually just say HI HANDSOME semi-naked in a full...
  July 7th, 2016 09:43
• Corazon (Willyweed) MUERTE EN CARAZON ~ A beautifully crafted tone poem of life and love. ...
  July 7th, 2016 09:31
• You Told Me (ThomasAndrewHitchen) OMG THOMAS ~ SUCH A BEAUTIFULLY PRESENTED POEM concealing such an awful...
  July 7th, 2016 08:37
• Britain Breaking (Gerrylegister) Thanks GERRY for a very well crafted poem ~ presented in five quatrains...
  July 7th, 2016 08:21
• Man of the Earth (Tony36) Thanks TONY ~ when we are in touch with the LORD it breaths magic into the...
  July 7th, 2016 07:38
• APATHEIA (Lysistrata) Thanks LYSI for sharing a very elegant poem in (structure & substance) on...
  July 7th, 2016 07:35
• Rampage (Izzi Lynn) THANKS SILVER ~ For sharing your experience and fears. My DAD is a kind...
  July 7th, 2016 04:16
• Dragon Love (Dandylion) THANKS DANDY ~ For caring and sharing ~ I hope you found it cathartic to...
  July 7th, 2016 04:09
• A poem for a girl who wasn\'t actually mine. (Tmehrer) WELCOME TMEHRER ~ Wonderful first poem ~ so poignant and so so true. In...
  July 7th, 2016 02:16
• Hell Storm (Anon) WELCOME ANON ~ Thanks for your very powerful "free verse" story. We all...
  July 7th, 2016 02:08
• Why try? (Celliehwyn89) WELCOME CELLIE ~ Thanks for a well written and powerful first poem. LOVE...
  July 6th, 2016 15:40
• Maze. (Salmaxx) Thanks SALMA as we get older we discover that LOVE and LIFE are both big...
  July 6th, 2016 13:15
• Don\'t Laugh At Me (Tony36) DONT LAUGH AT ME 'COS I'M A FOOL .................... This is a plea we...
  July 6th, 2016 10:30
• who is right? (Avigail) Thanks AVI your poems are short but they make me think. The difference...
  July 6th, 2016 09:11
• \"Poncho\" (Willyweed) THANKS WW ~ Echos of Pancho Villa the great Mexican Revolutionary. HS...
  July 6th, 2016 09:07
• Shadows (Eeva) THANKS EVA ~ Great poem ~ great concept. Reminded me of an old song ~ Me...
  July 6th, 2016 08:55