Comments on community poems by BRIAN & ANGELA

• Inner Demon (MoonJem1989) "I hope you enjoy this poem" Ohhhhh JESS this is a great poem full of...
  June 15th, 2016 09:06
• A memory of discomfort (Amosj) WELCOME AMOS - Thanks for an interesting first poem with lots of rhythm...
  June 14th, 2016 14:12
• The Satrapy (Lysistrata) Thanks for sharing LYSI ! To some extent it reads like a bad month in my...
  June 14th, 2016 08:29
• Clarity (MoonJem1989) WELCOME JESS - Awesome first poem pulsating with rhyme and rhythm and hurt...
  June 14th, 2016 06:09
• 2 birds one stone (Jeff87333) WELCOME JEFF ~ Thanks for posting your very painful first poem - I trust...
  June 14th, 2016 03:33
• \"Let It Play\" (Marissaapril) WELCOME MARISSA - Thanks for posting such a haunting first poem ! Like...
  June 14th, 2016 03:16
• She\'s Happy (Samishere) THANKS FOR SHARING SAMI ~ It happens so I can empathise ! Trouble is...
  June 14th, 2016 03:03
• No Goodbyes (Survivor48) WELCOME FRIEND - A very very powerful opening poem. Beautifully crafted...
  June 13th, 2016 13:03
• ALASKAN PORTRAIT (Summersounds68) AWESOME SS - As you say people who have never visited ALASKA are amazed at...
  June 13th, 2016 10:57
• Three Boxes Of Tunes (Williammae) WOW WILLIAM - AN AWESOME POEM: So so sad and yet their memories so so...
  June 13th, 2016 10:02
• Fake (Eeva) Thanks EVA - I am who I am and you are who you are. I write from my heart...
  June 13th, 2016 09:58
• Prayers For Orlando. Here We Go Again! (DubbleDhee) Thanks for your tribute DD. This is hard news for us to take in the UK ~...
  June 13th, 2016 08:47
• Carved Into Trees (Samishere) WELCOME SAMI - For a very elegant first poem. Love the free verse flow and...
  June 13th, 2016 08:34
• Elegy (Standalane) WELCOME FRIEND - Thanks for your excellent first poem ELEGY - A lament...
  June 13th, 2016 08:12
• My Demon (KolomonSane) WELCOME KS - Thanks for an excellent first poem ! It is excellent in...
  June 13th, 2016 05:41
• Blank (Gertieisdabomb) WELCOME GERTIE - THANKS FOR AN INTRIGUING FIRST POEM. Self analysis is...
  June 13th, 2016 05:19
• Drowning... (Haileysmall24) WELCOME HAILEY - A powerful opener and a great cri de coeur ! I hope you...
  June 13th, 2016 05:10
• Morning (Isituorme) Thanks for sharing a perfect "Fantasies of the Night Poem". The noises of...
  June 12th, 2016 11:06
• LIBERATION (Kaychee) HI KAY - LOVE the visual and love the imagery in this poem and the...
  June 12th, 2016 10:51
• Invasion and Évasion (Lysistrata) WOW LYSI - I love all the genres appearing on MPS ~ Contempory - Fantasy...
  June 12th, 2016 10:41
• Deep Mind Sea (Maegan_Goza) WELCOME MAEGAN - Thanks for a lovely philosophical poem and a great visual...
  June 12th, 2016 03:33
• Turning the page (Niknak4186ukmanc) HI NICNAK - Glad you found your muse - or did your muse find you ? Love...
  June 12th, 2016 03:27
• Waiting To Be (Williammae) WELCOME FRIEND - Great first poem - love the denouement in the last line !...
  June 11th, 2016 10:06
• o\' africa (Opefolorunsho) WOW OPEFO - WELCOME and thanks for a very wonderful and personal first...
  June 11th, 2016 09:55
• His selfish love (Niknak4186ukmanc) WELCOME - Thanks for sharing such a personal poem but sad poem from such...
  June 11th, 2016 04:56
• The Trappéd Poet (ThePearlPoet) WELCOME PP - Lovely poem in style and language of yesteryear ! In the...
  June 10th, 2016 08:33
• Forsaken (Threeballx21) WELCOME FRIEND - Thanks for sharing a great first poem on a subject...
  June 10th, 2016 04:07
• Apathy (SheWasTheSun) Thanks for sharing - An awesome poem pulsating with poetic energy and the...
  June 10th, 2016 03:24
• Natural Details (Despina Nicole Cambosos) Love the imagery DESPINA. And another lovely mention of Sister Moon. One...
  June 10th, 2016 03:18
• Born Of God and the Virgin Mary (Moontigerntn) Thanks TIGER - Beautiful tribute to the LORD and the key part played by...
  June 9th, 2016 14:12
• Home Sweet Home (Eeva) GREAT POEM EVA - Love the sentiment of "Home Sweet Home". I find with...
  June 9th, 2016 14:06
• Mixed Fabrics (Despina Nicole Cambosos) HI NICOLE - TEXTILES ARE AWESOME - Love all those you mention and each one...
  June 9th, 2016 14:00
• Night ❤️ (Despina Nicole Cambosos) Beautiful haiku Nicole - Love the Moon - so pure Thanks - Yours BRIAN
  June 9th, 2016 13:47
• A NEW CAMPAIGN (Lysistrata) THANKS LYSIS - We Men are always up for A New Campaign ! We don't all...
  June 9th, 2016 11:14
• The Stanford Rapist (DubbleDhee) WOW DD very powerful sentiments. In my book all rapists should be...
  June 9th, 2016 06:03
• Open Your Door (ShanikiSmith) Thanks SHANIKI for a very interesting poem ! There are BAD MAMA JAMMAS...
  June 9th, 2016 05:58
• I Know (SheWasTheSun) Ohhhhhhhh Friend - The pain some Men inflict on beautiful Ladies sometimes...
  June 8th, 2016 15:53
• The Eye Of The Storm (Charl_mcg180) WELCOME CHARL - Thanks for an excellent first poem from your own...
  June 8th, 2016 15:40
• My Old Friend (Antivist) WELCOME ANTIVIST - This is an excellent first poem - direct from your own...
  June 8th, 2016 12:48
• A Vision of a New Kingdom (Lysistrata) Thank you LYSIS - Fantasy poems are easier to write than analyse. Love...
  June 8th, 2016 09:43
• GOP Needs to Stop Apologizing for Trump (DubbleDhee) MY SENTIMENTS EXACTLY ! Dump Trump - He's a Chump Vote CLINT-ON she's...
  June 8th, 2016 09:19
• Flooded (Landonthomson) LANDON - I now see English too ! The poem is a transliteration ROMAN...
  June 8th, 2016 07:37
• Limitless (Landonthomson) AFKARISTO - Landon a challenging way to present a poem - transliterating...
  June 8th, 2016 07:28
• GRADUATE SCHOOL (Berthold Lippel) Blood - sweat and tears Locked in a LAB for three long years Unravelling...
  June 8th, 2016 04:54
• Here with You (Night_Owl) Thanks for sharing JUDY - A very interesting poem written from the...
  June 8th, 2016 04:00
• You\'re Disrespect (QueenZ Lia Hall) Oooooooooh LIA - another beautifully structured but sad sad poem. The...
  June 8th, 2016 01:54
• Music box (Shiro) GREAT FIRST POEM SHIRO - Thanks for sharing. Love the structure -...
  June 7th, 2016 18:29
• Wishing for words: (ThomasKeaney) WELCOME THOMAS = Thanks for a very powerful first poem. We English all...
  June 7th, 2016 18:01
• Why can\'t you love me? (Katherinem7) Oooooh KATHERINE another "cri de coeur" I hope you find it cathartic !...
  June 7th, 2016 15:58
• Let Me (Eeva) Thanks for sharing EVA - Lovely poem in structure "Let me - I'm not"...
  June 7th, 2016 15:50
• knowing is not knowing at all (Skye Marlene) WELCOME SKYE And thanks for you first poem (and your explanation !) Your...
  June 7th, 2016 15:41
• My Lover (Lysistrata) WOW LYSIS - Such a powerful powerful poem ! Some Lover - some eye - some...
  June 7th, 2016 10:02
• At the trial (Bjoy) THANKS BJOY - For your first poem. Well structured - rhyme and rhythm but...
  June 7th, 2016 09:57
• I LOVE TO DO LAUNDRY (Berthold Lippel) YES BERTHOLD - There is something cathartic about washing clothes -...
  June 7th, 2016 03:42
• When In Rome (Moontigerntn) Grrrrrrrrrrrrr TIGER - You are in a frisky mood today ! Well structured...
  June 7th, 2016 03:34
• Cry and Die- warning has cursing (Izzi Lynn) Ooooooooooh SILVER a lot of angst in this poem. I know that poetry is...
  June 7th, 2016 02:17
• MIDNIGHT IN SITKA PARK (Summersounds68) AAAAAH YES - I remember it well - when we were young ! The pleasures of...
  June 7th, 2016 01:51
• Where Are You? (QueenZ Lia Hall) OOOOOOOOOOh LIA - Another sad Love Poem. Again perfect in it structure -...
  June 6th, 2016 17:35
• Girl, When We Put Our Hearts Together (Brooklyn6timesplus) BEAUTIFUL BROOKLYN - A perfect poetic interpretation of loving in my...
  June 6th, 2016 16:44
• Summer breeze (Katherinem7) BEAUTIFUL KATHERINE - Your describe the sensation of being loved by the...
  June 6th, 2016 14:51
• MAYBE...... (Lysistrata) MAYBE LYSIS ! I love imponderable poems which ask unanswerable questions...
  June 6th, 2016 10:09
• Escaping The greatest catch 22 (Jobrand) WELCOME JO - Thanks for a great first poem awash with rhyme & rhythm and...
  June 6th, 2016 07:48
• Cold-Hearted (QueenZ Lia Hall) Oooooooh LIA - I've had that experience and it is horrible when Love dies...
  June 5th, 2016 17:54
• ode to Alcohol (Germanamericanchurch) THANKS FOR SHARING GAM - An interesting ODE ! Ethyl Alcohol C2H5OH a...
  June 5th, 2016 16:52
• Choices (Night_Owl) Oooooooooooooooh JUDY - such a sad poem - especially the closing line. ...
  June 5th, 2016 16:19
• Drowning (Katherinem7) THANKS KATHERINE - A great "free verse" poem. I'm sure you don't want to...
  June 5th, 2016 16:08
• FORSAKENED (Tropicana) WELCOME TROPICANA - Thanks for a great first poem. The structure is...
  June 5th, 2016 15:52
• Pretty Lies (JustABird) Thanks for your second poem. Unfortunately most Men are liars and we lie...
  June 5th, 2016 11:08
• Girl In Search Of... (JustABird) WELCOME JAB - Thanks for a lovely first poem. Our Love Poems are often...
  June 5th, 2016 11:00
• Live Life, Take Chances (Amarea2016) WELCOME AMAREA - and thank you for a perfect first poem. Lovely structure...
  June 5th, 2016 10:43
• Ali Belongs To The Ages (DubbleDhee) Thanks DD for a splendid tribute to the GREATEST in rhyming couplets -...
  June 5th, 2016 08:42
• ALMOST..... (Lysistrata) THANKS LYSIS - for another very enigmatic poem and thanks for your comment...
  June 5th, 2016 08:38
• My Father\'s Daughter (SheWasTheSun) Thanks for sharing a lovely beautifully crafted modern "free verse" poem !...
  June 5th, 2016 03:13
• Hopeless (QueenZ Lia Hall) WELCOME LIA - THANKS FOR SHARIN' YOUR THOUGHTS ! Beautifully structured...
  June 4th, 2016 16:42
• I remember (Katherinem7) BEAUTIFUL POEM KATHERINE ! A symbiosis of despair and hope ! This is...
  June 4th, 2016 10:08
• She was the Sun (SheWasTheSun) WOW SUN-GIRL THIS REALLY IS A POEM ! Six perfect free verse quatrains -...
  June 4th, 2016 04:01
• PLAYERS BE PLAYED (Paulamcnealy) OOOOOOOOH PAULA - Awesome poem and picture. Love is often just a game -...
  June 4th, 2016 03:44
• A Journey to Luna-cy (Lysistrata) THANKS FOR SHARING LYSIS - There is only a thin line between LUNACY and...
  June 3rd, 2016 16:41
• Trigger (Tedious) THANKS MISS "T" This is an important topic for a poem - GUNS ! I agree...
  June 3rd, 2016 16:32
• For a friend (Katherinem7) BEAUTIFUL LOVE POEM KATHERINE ! Love the rhythm and consistent rhyme...
  June 3rd, 2016 16:23
• Lost Destination (HylianLoftwing) CARPE PARDISIUM - Seize the Paradise. ! Thanks for sharing HYLIAN - A...
  June 3rd, 2016 14:06
• No Home (SheWasTheSun) HOME - is where the heart is ! BUT - If your home had no heart it is (as...
  June 3rd, 2016 13:13
• My Mistake (SheWasTheSun) Beautiful nostalgic Love Poem - thanks for sharing. Some of my best poems...
  June 3rd, 2016 03:58
• Satisfying Darkness (HylianLoftwing) WELCOME HYLIAN - Thanks for a very powerful first poem straight from...
  June 3rd, 2016 03:50
• Russian Roulette (Izzi Lynn) WOW WOLF - A very powerful and challenging poem. We all tempt fate from...
  June 3rd, 2016 03:43
• A girl washed up on the beach (Chaz2296) THANKS CHAZ - For sharing an excellent poem. Elegant in it structure -...
  June 2nd, 2016 17:47
• Etched in Starlight (Gebaird) WELCOME FRIEND - NICE FIRST POEM - In both form (balanced free verse)...
  June 2nd, 2016 16:46
• SMALL THINGS ARE ENOUGH (Berthold Lippel) THANKS BERTHOLD - BIG POEM about SMALL THINGS ! I'm 50 years younger...
  June 2nd, 2016 14:49
• Little Things (Tedious) BEAUTIFUL MISS "T" It is the little things in life that make it bearable...
  June 2nd, 2016 14:43
• My mind is hiding (Katherinem7) WELCOME KATHERINE - INTERESTING FIRST POEM - Good "free verse" structure...
  June 2nd, 2016 12:11
• Who is Responsible for Harambe\'s Death? (DubbleDhee) Thanks DD - love topical ODES ! PETA (People for the Ethical Treatment of...
  June 2nd, 2016 11:38
• Remembering the Island of Treason (Lysistrata) Thanks for sharing LYSIS - haunting poem and a trip into Greek...
  June 2nd, 2016 11:24
• Racing Thoughts (Anxiousandartsy) WELCOME FRIEND - A very interesting first poem - and it's always useful to...
  June 2nd, 2016 02:53
• Girl, When We Kiss (Brooklyn6timesplus) GREAT POEM BROOKLYN - Short - sweet - to the point ! It flows with rhyme...
  June 1st, 2016 16:35
• My Sweetie (Tedious) WELCOME TEDIOUS (nice pen name) I love your first poem ! An excellent...
  June 1st, 2016 16:28
• Wonderland. (IPsYcH0) Thanks IPSY CHO - Great Poem - I love ALICE and I love Wonderland - the...
  June 1st, 2016 13:00
• Take Me To Your Dealer (Amber Hawken) GREAT FANTASY POEM AMBER - Thanks for sharing. Sounds like an LSD Trip to...
  June 1st, 2016 11:07
• AromaTherapy (Lysistrata) WOW LYSIS - Some aroma - some therapy ! Thanks for sharing - YOURS BRIAN
  June 1st, 2016 08:50
• Silencing Cries (Pains_of-the_past) WELCOME - thanks for your first poem a real Teenage "Cri de Coeur". I...
  June 1st, 2016 02:57
• Dear Mother (Ccrees) WELCOME CC - Thanks you for an awesome poem straight from your heart. I...
  June 1st, 2016 02:49