Comments on community poems by BRIAN & ANGELA

• BABY FLY (Berthold Lippel) The dying fly is a popular dance move in the UK ! One lies on ones back...
  May 30th, 2016 16:32
• George (Lysistrata) Thanks for sharing LYSIS - Love the pathos in a perfectly structured poem....
  May 30th, 2016 09:36
• Rita Rejected (Ola89) WELCOME OLA - Thanks for an awesome first poem straight from your wounded...
  May 30th, 2016 08:18
• Angel Wings (Therainking) WELCOME RAINKING (great name) - Love your first poem - full of ansgt and...
  May 30th, 2016 03:20
• Restless : exhausted (Sarahsuebearah) YOU ARE LOVELY SARAH - Someday your Prince will come ! This is a lovely...
  May 30th, 2016 03:10
• Strange (Ingrid) Thanks INGRID - Great poem ! We all get stuck in a cage some time - but...
  May 29th, 2016 15:50
• Fresh (Hitbraker) WELCOME - Love your first poem so so FRESH ! True love is always so so...
  May 29th, 2016 11:39
• IDK (OnMySoul) WELCOME OMS - THANKS FOR BEAUTIFUL FIRST POEM ! Check my poems and you...
  May 29th, 2016 09:57
• Do I give up? (Mwrites) THANKS "M" for a beautifully penned poem - but the content is so so...
  May 29th, 2016 09:31
• Mummy\'s dirty secret (Lysistrata) Oooooooooh LYSIS - the dreaded Morning Sickness another little...
  May 29th, 2016 07:32
• Birthdays and friends (Sugarattack) Thanks for sharing SUGAR ! I agree when I reached 30 (I'm 33) I had a big...
  May 29th, 2016 04:00
• Motivation (Paulamcnealy) WOW PAULA - Lovely lyrics - very exotic and explicit. Thanks for sharing...
  May 29th, 2016 03:47
• SECRETS OF THE DARK & EVIL (Paulamcnealy) HELLO PAULA - Thanks for caring and sharing. All children are vulnerable...
  May 28th, 2016 08:42
• God Removes every Hazard (Mvvenkataraman) BEAUTIFUL THOUGHTS - on the power of prayer ! Whisper a prayer in the...
  May 28th, 2016 06:47
• Suns out guns out (Ingrid) Thanks INGRID - A great poem with great structure pulsating with rhyme &...
  May 28th, 2016 06:43
• You turned and walked away (Mom) (Paulamcnealy) WELCOME PAULA - For a very powerful and poignant first poem. - straight...
  May 28th, 2016 03:17
• Poems by me (Sugarattack) WELCOME SUGAR - Love the structure and content of yuor first poem and I...
  May 28th, 2016 02:11
• 3 months. (Honeytreescoconutleaves) WELCOME HONEYTREES - I love your first poem - thanks for sharing. Even...
  May 28th, 2016 02:05
• Loveless (Izzi Lynn) BEAUTIFUL POEM - SILVER - Thanks for sharing. Girl on Girl bonding is...
  May 27th, 2016 16:49
• The feeling you will recognize, but wont admit (Ingrid) WELCOME INGRID - WOW - Great first poerm bursting with agreeson and angst...
  May 27th, 2016 09:30
• Grey color is gone (Sadia Tuba) WELCOME SADIA - Thanks for a very haunting first poem. Grey is the colour...
  May 27th, 2016 02:45
• The storm keeper (Metal's mistake) WELCOME MM - Beautiful first poem - I love all poems about Nature and...
  May 27th, 2016 02:36
• Upabove (LibetBerner) WELCOME LIBET - Thanks for your first poem and its unique focus ! We...
  May 26th, 2016 13:09
• Monstrosities (ReloadTheWorld) WELCOME DARK SUN - Love your first poem. It is so so dynamic pulsating...
  May 26th, 2016 10:08
• Mobile phones (Nataliehughes) THE FOBILE MOAN OF A MOBILE PHONE ! Loved your poem NATALIE it echos my...
  May 26th, 2016 06:06
• Funeral (SheWasTheSun) Thanks for sharing an amazing Poem. As it happens I am going to a Friend's...
  May 26th, 2016 04:21
• Endless Cycle (Gabrielfuller9457) WELCOME GABRIEL - Thanks for your challenging first poem. Life is replete...
  May 26th, 2016 03:39
• Enemies (Grindbaby16) WELCOME GB - Love your first poem and the cool way you dealt with your...
  May 25th, 2016 15:33
• I\'m Free (John Lee) AMEN JOHN - If you allow the Son of God (Jesus) to make you free - You...
  May 25th, 2016 11:30
• I keep it inside (Nataliehughes) Oooooh NATALIE such a sad sad poem and so so much INSIDE INFORMATION. I...
  May 25th, 2016 09:32
• Lovers secret!!! (Meadowsprings) HAPPY BIRTHDAY - Love your poem ! It is a situation we often face in the...
  May 25th, 2016 04:20
• Open Book (SheWasTheSun) WELCOME TO MPS - Lovely first poem - love the metaphore of the OPEN BOOK ...
  May 25th, 2016 01:50
• Wounds (Kebiin) HI KEBIIN - Are you from SALEM MASS or OREGON ? Loved your poem and the...
  May 24th, 2016 14:37
• Broken (Nataliehughes) WELCOME NATALIE - Your first poem has elegant structure - I love rhyming...
  May 24th, 2016 10:46
• Flesh of the universe (Sarahsuebearah) BEAUTIFFUL BEAUTIFUL SARAH - We are at our most perfect when we are one...
  May 24th, 2016 03:13
• out of place (Laurenloveme4lifegodknowsall) THANKS LAUREN - Heaven is better than this - O my what joy and bliss -...
  May 23rd, 2016 16:46
• A Dog\'s Farewell (AMPLIFIED HEAT) THANKS AH - Beautiful photo ! As you say our PETS do break our hearts ! ...
  May 23rd, 2016 16:37
• WRONG (Lostinsidemyself) WELCOME FRIEND - MPS IS NOT GENDER CRITICAL ! A very powerful first poem...
  May 23rd, 2016 10:07
• A Love Prevented From Service (Justin010) WELCOME JUSTIN - Great first poem full of longing as all love poems should...
  May 23rd, 2016 04:46
• Raw Pleasure (Shahla Latifi) PERFECT LOVE POEM SHAHLA - Rhythmic sensuality awesome imagery ! ...
  May 23rd, 2016 04:35
• egg dance (Sarahsuebearah) POIGNANT POEM SARAH - Thanks for sharing ! "All the Kings horses and all...
  May 23rd, 2016 04:19
• Word Vomit (Samabama2324) GREAT FLOW POEM SAL - Bubbling with rhyme and rhythm for 34 unstoppable...
  May 22nd, 2016 16:03
• Adam And Eve. (IPsYcH0) WELCOME FRIEND - Thank you for a very challenging first poem. Because we...
  May 22nd, 2016 03:19
• S.O.S (X.x.jackysorto.x.x) WELCOME JACKY - I hope and pray that your Day is more happy than your sad...
  May 22nd, 2016 02:41
• Intergalactic Love (Samabama2324) THANKS SAL - another great poem ! In my experience LOVE is always...
  May 21st, 2016 16:40
• Life is Letting Go (Greyguy) WELCOME GG - Love the message in your first poem - the internal rhyme...
  May 21st, 2016 16:33
• Break Away (IAmJaz) Thanks JAZ for another beautiful poem to brighten our day ! Perfectly...
  May 21st, 2016 03:52
• A Message to My Friends (Kebiin) GREAT POEM - KEBIIN - Full of gratitude. It is only when we are down that...
  May 20th, 2016 15:42
• Look (Samabama2324) WELCOME SAL - Great first poem ! Love the flow and rhythm in your free...
  May 20th, 2016 15:34
• Spoon (IAmJaz) Thanks JAZ - great analogy ! Lots of people love to be spoon fed and...
  May 20th, 2016 08:27
• Trail (IAmJaz) WELCOME JAZ - and thanks for a great first poem ! We are NOT born equal we...
  May 20th, 2016 03:07
• Stone Butterflies (Izzi Lynn) WOW SW - Powerful image and lovely penned free verse poem. I get...
  May 19th, 2016 10:04
• Just a thought (Colorfades420) WELCOME CF - A stark first poem with a serious message. In my experience...
  May 19th, 2016 09:05
• Trapped Inside (Stacey-Leigh) WELCOME STACEY - A very powerful first poem full of angst and...
  May 19th, 2016 08:59
• FISH (Berthold Lippel) Thanks BL - Great poem and I too am a Water Baby and I relish in the 3D...
  May 19th, 2016 05:00
• The Deception (AMPLIFIED HEAT) Thanks AH for a very challenging poem ! As Christians "We have this...
  May 19th, 2016 04:35
• Don\'t Cry (Catherine Houston) THANKS CATHERINE - For a beautiful poem all about the vicissitudes of...
  May 18th, 2016 13:14
• HURT (Jacquize) WELCOME JACQUI - Hurting poems like your make me ashamed to be a MALE. As...
  May 18th, 2016 08:57
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  May 18th, 2016 08:50
• Kicking The Habit (Amber Hawken) Great poem AMBER with a great message - I love rhyming couplets ! There...
  May 17th, 2016 06:15
• Spider In The Bathroom (Sickmind666) WOW - Great poem - expressing how we all feel about SPIDER IN THE BATHROOM...
  May 17th, 2016 06:11
• For Soldier (Moontigerntn) THANKS FOR SHARING TIGER - A great tribute to our Service Men & Women many...
  May 16th, 2016 17:59
• Monsters (Amber Hawken) WELCOME AMBER - A beautifully written poem (I love rhyming couplets) but...
  May 16th, 2016 17:19
• Worthless (Mc4300) WELCOME MC ! A very sad but honest first poem ! Your poem is well...
  May 16th, 2016 05:25
• I am Sorry (Sinfullyliving) Thanks SL for a very moving prose poem. When I visit the USA (I'm from...
  May 15th, 2016 11:04
• What it is to Hide (Graeme_macphee) WELCOME GRAEME - Thanks for an interesting first poem. At night my diffuse...
  May 14th, 2016 13:37
• Burn Me (Lucyem) WELCOME LUCY - A well penned first poem - fast flowing and engulfed by...
  May 14th, 2016 13:25
• Polar (Kebiin) WELCOME KEBIIN - An interesting first poem. It's a "free verse" poem but...
  May 13th, 2016 10:20
• -rainy day dreams- (FriskCarris) WELCOME FRISK - Love the visual - love the poem - Acrostics are my fave...
  May 12th, 2016 04:15
• In me (Marianne333) WOW MARIANNE - Such a beautiful poem - like you full of lovely things. ...
  May 11th, 2016 18:20
• why (Laurenloveme4lifegodknowsall) WOW LAUREN ! Lots and lots of vective and angst in your poem. Was it...
  May 11th, 2016 05:27
• Life and Death go Hand in Hand (The Poet) WELCOME ! A very powerful first poem full of rhyme and rhythm. I love...
  May 10th, 2016 10:07
• Eunioa (Kalebh45) WELCOME KALEB -excellent first poem. Love the structure quatrains with...
  May 10th, 2016 09:59
• people (Laurenloveme4lifegodknowsall) VERY TRUE LAUREN ! Love the form of this poem - straight from your heart...
  May 9th, 2016 03:32
• BLUE (NMC1) WELCOME NMC - Nice first poem - plenty of rhyme and rhythm. Makes it easy...
  May 8th, 2016 18:18
• I remember (Ellocin) WELCOME ELLOCIN - Nice first poem - memories are indeed made of this !...
  May 8th, 2016 18:10
• don\'t build her up just to bring her down (Ragingsapphire) WELCOME SAPPHIRE - Thanks for a very powerful first poem. It is well...
  May 8th, 2016 02:41
• Behind Glass (Eeva) WELCOME EEVA - LOVE YOUR FIRST POEM. It strikes a chord - to some extent...
  May 7th, 2016 16:15
• colors (Emywillow) WELCOME EMY - Great first poem - thanks for sharing ! The colors of LIFE...
  May 7th, 2016 16:09
• Blood (12/02/2016) (Mwrites) WOW MILLIE - A very challenging first poem ! Always remember "Our life is...
  May 7th, 2016 09:13
• A SEED (Yasu Na) Thanks YASU - an enigmatic poem ! I love seeds because they contain the...
  May 7th, 2016 08:59
• THE MIGHTY VICTORIA FALLS (Joelabowmansr) AMEN JOEL - Every Waterfall is an example of God's creative power. Planet...
  May 6th, 2016 17:22
• Friend (Amber Hawken) WELCOME AMBER (nice name) Even though it is tinged with sadness - love...
  May 6th, 2016 10:45
• starr (Starr) WELCOME STARR - WOW this is an awesome first poem ! I love the...
  May 6th, 2016 10:36
• Why, God? (Kaysknight) WELCOME KAYS - A challenging first poem ! It's a question we often ask ...
  May 6th, 2016 10:13
• Let the current take you (AR) WELCOME AR - Great first poem about the ups and downs and ins and outs of...
  May 5th, 2016 18:19
• Siren (Blacksparrow) WELCOME BLACKSPARROW - Love your first poem. In my experience SIRENS are...
  May 4th, 2016 16:49
• Barefoot (Aa Harvey) Thanks for sharing AA ! There are a lot of conundrums in this poem but...
  May 4th, 2016 11:14
• The Lonely Irish Hillside (A P McIntyre) WELCOME APM - Lovely first poem ! I was born and raised in Liverpool and...
  May 4th, 2016 09:26
• Sublime (Aabigailmarie) WELCOME ABIGAIL- Love your first poem. Thunderstorms and thunder and...
  May 3rd, 2016 15:10
• Infinite Excerpts (PossHazelEyes) WELCOME - and thanks for your first poem. So passionate and yet so dark....
  May 3rd, 2016 12:43
• Lost (Quin) WELCOME QUIN - Love your fist poem very enigmatic ! In my experience to...
  May 3rd, 2016 12:30
• Love? (Kc_h0ffman) WELCOME KC - Love the shape of your poem - like a tree ! Love the message...
  May 2nd, 2016 19:39
• Life (Marianne333) WELCOME MARIANNE - An awesome first poem bursting with rhyme and rhythm...
  May 2nd, 2016 15:53
• LET\'S KILL THE STIGMA! (A Poem About Mental Illness) (Joelabowmansr) Thanks for sharing JOEL. I have worked with people with mental disorders...
  May 2nd, 2016 15:46
• Crown Victoria Pantoum (Andrew1234) HI ANDREW - Great PANTOUM and a great subject. I'm acussed of treating...
  May 2nd, 2016 09:58
• Naughty Baby (Moontigerntn) WOW TIGER - YOU sure are purring in this sensuous poem ! There is a lot of...
  May 1st, 2016 15:26
• Memories (Izzi Lynn) WELCOME SILVERWOLF (Beautiful pen name) Thanks you for a perfect opening...
  May 1st, 2016 09:37
• Waltzed Right in (Blountchild) WELCOME BC - Love you first poem full of mystique ! It is true that the...
  May 1st, 2016 03:34
• If I could write poetry: (Louise17) WELCOME LOUISE - LOVE YOUR POEM AND YOUR PICTURE ! YES You can write...
  May 1st, 2016 02:59