Comments on community poems by Pintu Mahakul

• Achilles\' Heal (WriteBeLight) It was tough to do but I stood up with courage. Over time I felt their...
  March 14th, 2017 06:26
• on a winters day (Willyweed) Winter day has given nice way of love and imagery drawn here amazes mind....
  March 14th, 2017 06:24
• Cutting Free. (Fay Slimm.) Every starting we see with freshness although time moves remorseless. We...
  March 10th, 2017 22:10
• Spring Knows. (Fay Slimm.) Snow mottles cloud. Winter dazes with patches. Dream of times full of...
  March 10th, 2017 22:05
• Time\'s Needle. (Fay Slimm.) A sun crouches to one more empty circle of dark\'s hollowed pouches . What...
  March 10th, 2017 22:01
• Love\'s Due. (Fay Slimm.) Love chooses wonderfully love and love becomes blind with many weaknesses....
  March 2nd, 2017 17:40
• Forsaken. (Fay Slimm.) Poverty provokes thought and brings sorrow in mind and spirit. We fear for...
  March 2nd, 2017 17:33
• Coveted. (Fay Slimm.) Clutching large seeds of glimmery gold they have brought half of this...
  March 2nd, 2017 17:25
• Live Silver. (Fay Slimm.) Primitive gulls are riding very high with waves of life. There is storm on...
  March 2nd, 2017 17:09
• Still Climbing. (Fay Slimm.) Legacy of light\'s departure confronts the tail-end of innocence and...
  March 2nd, 2017 16:58
• Sharing. (Fay Slimm.) Nature is taken in a course. Exchanging nods in wind\'s vibration...
  February 26th, 2017 06:16
• Being Fickle. (Fay Slimm.) All growth becomes riddled with desire for warmth. Spring drips here...
  February 26th, 2017 06:11
• Three Faces. (Fay Slimm.) Perception does magic here. Verse is a face and self is a face. These two...
  February 26th, 2017 06:10
• Crescented Magic. (Fay Slimm.) Post-shower Rainbow has fallen here to do magic with wonderful imagery. We...
  February 26th, 2017 06:05
• New Depths. (Fay Slimm.) Edges are unseen but still there is hope of union and this union we feel...
  February 26th, 2017 06:04
• deluged in epiphany (Janetaylor) In epiphany that means at the moment of sudden and great revelation I...
  February 19th, 2017 18:49
• utah (Janetaylor) My heart flutters with wild anticipation. Returning to this place is very...
  February 9th, 2017 16:14
• gods in motion (Janetaylor) You see glory everywhere even in morning tea. Very interesting and amazing...
  February 9th, 2017 16:09
• looking glass (Janetaylor) Taking a decision to enter an ominous existence is amazing. Holding motion...
  February 9th, 2017 16:07
• walking into the light (Janetaylor) Colorful lines sometimes float on jagged edges. Words of paintings awaken...
  February 9th, 2017 16:04
• trapped (Janetaylor) Yes, you are true. The reality is within self. On awakening we find this....
  February 9th, 2017 16:02
• RELEASE (Michael Edwards) This poem amazingly attracts attention of readers. This is really very...
  February 4th, 2017 05:09
• Timeless (Philip) This very amazing poem that mesmerizes mind of a reader. Really this is...
  January 28th, 2017 08:48
• Glue To Heal The Blues (WriteBeLight) This poem is really very wonderful. Color reflects emotion with extra...
  January 28th, 2017 08:47
• Screaming at the wind (Aa Harvey) Hidden secrets whisper here in this poem very wonderfully. An amazing poem...
  January 28th, 2017 07:26
• MAMMOUTH CAVE KENTUCKY (BRIAN & ANGELA) Stand-stone is layered with marginal imagination of reality. More things...
  January 28th, 2017 07:25
• SQUATER\'S RIGHTS (Michael Edwards) I am always telling you and you guess this very well. No matter what the...
  January 28th, 2017 01:12
• The Final Act (Lovett4166) The annexation of life and death is very wonderful. Wise expression makes...
  January 28th, 2017 01:10
• Where Thunder Begins (Kurt Philip Behm) The moon bringing shadows, the wind bringing liars. Very amazing drafting...
  January 28th, 2017 01:09
• My Beautiful Dove (Rrodriguez) I love Dove very much. Pleasant flow of this poem blows mind with...
  January 28th, 2017 01:07
• To Gary (Augustus) Sadness is wonderfully expressed in this poem. This mesmerizes mind more....
  January 28th, 2017 00:33
• whispers (Janetaylor) This is very pleasing poem shared here. The chill in the frigid night...
  January 28th, 2017 00:16
• 27 January 2017 (Severus Alexander) Images are unseen. But dream takes us away. Very interesting poem is...
  January 28th, 2017 00:12
• Another One (Jmcg) Where do you go I do not care. You sit still and think more. Amazing...
  January 28th, 2017 00:11
• ALIVE (Tristan Robert Lange) There is illusive darkness everywhere and we search for intense light....
  January 28th, 2017 00:09
• Blackrock. (Fay Slimm.) Time-blackened by relentless breakers. Granite was with rare take up....
  January 27th, 2017 23:47
• Effaced. (Fay Slimm.) Amen! Ancient stones with interesting history have come in wonderful...
  January 27th, 2017 23:45
• Caught. (Fay Slimm.) Fire is worthy for living and fire also destroys. Importance of fire is...
  January 27th, 2017 23:42
• That Tree. (Fay Slimm.) There was no tree like this. The height of tree sincerely reflects hopes...
  January 27th, 2017 23:40
• returning west (Janetaylor) Chills reverberate up and down. Imagery is so strong with companion of...
  January 24th, 2017 02:51
• The Beautiful Human (Gerrylegister) There is mist in day and night. Emotion exists in partly at day and partly...
  January 22nd, 2017 14:09
• Crush On You (Jarid) Often in dream you come in my mind. I feel your sweetness and I hope you...
  January 22nd, 2017 14:04
• Bleed (Ron parrish aka wordman) Stab me slow, watch me bleed,,! What an amazing expression is shared here...
  January 22nd, 2017 14:01
• Silent Prayer (Garryd85) Amen; This silent prayer is very interesting. Humble self awakes faith to...
  January 22nd, 2017 13:59
• hints of ivory (Janetaylor) Preciousness of soul is well reflected in this poem. No earthly matter...
  January 22nd, 2017 13:57
• Sarsara The New Fable (Pintu Mahakul) Feedback received Lynda Robson: A very spiritual place you have written...
  January 21st, 2017 15:00
• Sarsara The New Fable (Pintu Mahakul) Feedback received from: Sylvia Frances Chan: AH....SARSARA that FAMOUS...
  January 21st, 2017 14:56
• Magical Hush. (Fay Slimm.) Damp grayish pearls forest air hangs here. Mysterious peace makes...
  January 21st, 2017 14:51
• Turns To Song (Kurt Philip Behm) From front to back words come together in our minds. Such coming amazes...
  January 20th, 2017 21:17
• Ballad of Jealousy (Edward_McLucky) While there is no love this takes you away. You smile and I go far....
  January 20th, 2017 21:10
• The Beginning (Christina8) Having feeling for each other initiates love. Love grows ever stronger...
  January 20th, 2017 21:04
• SIX JEWISH HAIKU ~ ENJOY (BRIAN & ANGELA) Wow..very amazing haikus you have composed and shared here. These are fun...
  January 20th, 2017 20:52
• Earth Suffers. (Kevin browne) Thais is very thought provoking that temperature boils atmospheric...
  January 20th, 2017 20:50
• Silence (Ron parrish aka wordman) Mind is just like a fast moving train. But silence rules over this to...
  January 20th, 2017 20:46
• THE SILENT VOICE (Illia) Silent message transfers love, light and laughter. Very amazing poem is...
  January 20th, 2017 20:41
• My Dearest Beloved (Natashalovely678) Having love for him forever is very nice. An interesting poem is shared...
  January 20th, 2017 20:37
• There is only God (Projectbeing) God is real and truth. Rest of the things which we see here are nothing...
  January 20th, 2017 20:35
• Lonesome Without You (Sefrin) Crimson flame does magic here. Wonderfully drafted poem is shared.
  January 20th, 2017 20:33
• Lovescape. (Fay Slimm.) In thine hands I am soft-sift. Moments of intimate fancy do magic in mind....
  January 20th, 2017 20:30
• Willow Tree (Tristan Robert Lange) Very amazing poem is composed in rhyme manner. With the weeping tears of a...
  January 20th, 2017 20:26
• NOT YET DEAD (Michael Edwards) This poem is very fun giving. Humor is wonderfully expressed in every...
  January 20th, 2017 03:50
• Never Again. (Fay Slimm.) Air of sharp crystalline will not again invade this exact skyline. Time\'s...
  January 20th, 2017 03:45
• Tenderness (Satishverma) The space shrinks very amazingly here. Wisely penned poem!
  January 20th, 2017 03:35
• Air (Naeners) Without fresh air life can never sustain. This is very thoughtful poem...
  January 20th, 2017 03:21
• CONVERGING PATHS (Michael Edwards) Leaving alone is so sad. But new direction is sought here. Relationship is...
  January 20th, 2017 03:19
• Winds of time (Ron parrish aka wordman) Wind is blowing very gently. This is telling many things from past memory....
  January 20th, 2017 03:16
• To You I Do Belong (Jarid) Grab hand and feel heart. You will find my love in each touch. Love...
  January 20th, 2017 03:14
• The Years Go By (Jarid) I sit and contemplate. I think how time passes and how days go by. This is...
  January 20th, 2017 03:11
• wildly homesick (Janetaylor) Subtle hint is glittering. Beautiful Imagery is drawn here. I stand and...
  January 20th, 2017 03:05
• A Single Tear (Ron parrish aka wordman) \"Tears roll down my face it seems i have fallen from your grace.\"...
  January 17th, 2017 19:25
• POEM FOR SUNDAY ~ GOD IS OUR STRENGTH ~ A Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) God has promised us to strengthen life and support us. Eternal love dwells...
  January 17th, 2017 19:22
• Asking. (Fay Slimm.) Knot of love is tightened and emotion has flown from true heart. Proving...
  January 17th, 2017 19:19
• crystals of light (Janetaylor) Night is still shining in the light. This has created a transfiguration of...
  January 17th, 2017 12:34