Comments on community poems by Noah Malice

• Golden Hair (Omnimax47) Lean out your window
  January 4th, 2019 15:10
• Malign Acquantance (Nmchugh) verse 2 when
  January 4th, 2019 04:37
• Color of the sky (SarahBeth19) This is really something I dig. The rhyming is cool. 5 lines per stanza is...
  January 3rd, 2019 23:12
• Happy With You (Omnimax47) Derivative title, isn\'t it? Paul McCartney\'s new album has a track...
  September 27th, 2018 09:50
• Purple Shirt (Cali Kittana) Powerful write. You should post more.
  September 24th, 2018 14:18
• Hi all (Frogspoetry) Be back soon!
  July 6th, 2018 20:14
• Old House (Katielynn) It\'s simple but I love the comparisons.
  June 25th, 2018 22:45
• I hate myself (Lottierose) Studies have shown that people more depressed/anxious use the pronoun...
  June 25th, 2018 16:41
• Withered name (Michela Vismara) You seem to really like the flower thing haha. I think this is great. It...
  June 25th, 2018 16:14
• Prey at the table (Michela Vismara) I agree with hodgetiger, I wouldn\'t very much like sitting in at this...
  June 25th, 2018 10:06
• Society (Jacob Mead) We live in a s o c i e t y
  June 23rd, 2018 00:43
• Mirrors Shmirrors (Michela Vismara) Everything about this is just pure wit haha. The flow, the rhyming, the...
  June 21st, 2018 21:05
• Got Any Rope? (M. Mohon) Give any one species too much rope and they\'ll fuck it up
  June 20th, 2018 23:27
• Teardrop (SLR) Short, simple, but effective nonetheless. I love it.
  June 19th, 2018 22:07
• Blurring Lines (Anon-ii) Your style is great! Keep posting!
  June 19th, 2018 18:31
• can\'t write (Maura) beautiful
  June 19th, 2018 16:33
• Little Black Box (Bunnyluvsskullsandshit) Great submission, I hope to see more in the future
  June 19th, 2018 15:35
• Forever (JYNX) Potent stream of consciousness, interesting post
  June 18th, 2018 23:20
• Let it Be......... (Snowflake Incorrigable) When I find myself in times of trouble, Mother Mary comes to me...
  June 18th, 2018 20:37
• Void (Last Shadow) I think someone ought to keep an eye on you. Your username is dangerously...
  June 18th, 2018 20:35
• and why is my skin so important to you? (AmateurSomeone) I disagree that judgment rots the soul. Some judgment can be good, even...
  June 18th, 2018 20:32
• Bruised but not Broken (HangingbyaHalo) triumphant, right on
  June 17th, 2018 21:56
• Where did you go? (Lovemariah_45) Great first submission, Mariah. Welcome to MPS!
  June 17th, 2018 20:44
• The Testement (Francis) Welcome to the site!
  June 17th, 2018 20:42
• counting crows (Willyweed) There\'s reason to believe maybe this year will be better than the last.
  June 15th, 2018 11:10
• is there anybody out there (Willyweed) Is there anybody in there?
  June 15th, 2018 10:51
• DUMB (Mil57Man) Cute rhyming
  June 14th, 2018 17:21
• I Fear The Reaper (AmateurSomeone) I absolutely adore this. The flow is great, the message cuts into my soul,...
  June 14th, 2018 13:14
• Can You (+9) (Kurt Philip Behm) Nice write. There are a lot of people here who could use with a few of...
  June 14th, 2018 12:52
• Silently Suffering (HangingbyaHalo) Beautiful write. This articulated feelings I didn\'t know how to, and in...
  June 14th, 2018 10:19
• No Definition (Ashley J) I believe that your actions and manifested values define you. What exactly...
  June 13th, 2018 21:55
• Crushing (Michela Vismara) Haha this is hilarious. Maybe you can turn your awkward shyness into charm...
  June 13th, 2018 14:03
• the dream (Poetrygirl25) I think you may have the caps lock key stuck
  June 13th, 2018 12:36
• The Illusion (MrNobody40) The opening lines remind me of the Atlas myth, and I love that precisely...
  June 13th, 2018 11:24
• Life\'s Truths (Wordseven7) Title sets me up to be disappointed by the contents.
  June 12th, 2018 15:24
• Even nature gets insecure (Michela Vismara) You\'re absolutely right that this could be more developed. I think the...
  June 12th, 2018 15:15
• I Carved You a Highway (Alex Kay) Short and sweet. Very nice drawing between your heart and wilderness.
  June 12th, 2018 12:27
• The Cycle (Trapazoid) There\'s a powerful message in here. I love it.
  June 12th, 2018 12:26
• My magic show (Scary-mary) I feel like this starts really strong but loses it on the last line due to...
  June 12th, 2018 09:37
• Dessert (Stan Rodriguez) Noice
  June 12th, 2018 09:23
• A Fire Must Be Born (Poetboy123) Rock and roll dude. Be that fire.
  June 11th, 2018 18:47
• lovers (Delilah) I wish I could read this.
  June 11th, 2018 18:45
• Grandad, (Michela Vismara) No doubt he\'d love this. Sorry for your loss.
  June 11th, 2018 17:37
• GOD IS MY PROTECTOR ~ AMEN ~ A 4 4 4 2 SONNET (BRIAN & ANGELA) I\'m still not convinced this isn\'t a troll spam account.
  June 10th, 2018 18:55
• Facts (Shana) Well done. Dab on the haters.
  June 9th, 2018 10:29
• My caged Heart (Michela Vismara) Interesting poem. Very submissive. I think I\'m having trouble...
  June 9th, 2018 10:28
• Wave the stars goodbye (Gemma) Great rhyming. If I could offer some constructive critique though, I\'d...
  June 9th, 2018 10:24
• If (PaParock68) Reminiscent of an old Floyd...
  June 8th, 2018 20:37
• Social Faces, Social Graces (Fox) I don\'t know if I agree with or even understand the conceit of the poem...
  June 8th, 2018 18:49
• You’re Beautiful (AlexHoy) The truth is that we aren\'t perfect, not even in our own ways. For some...
  June 8th, 2018 15:34
• crumble. (Ottxr18) There\'s something about this I really like.
  June 8th, 2018 15:15
• I am me! (Prettylittlepoet) Right on, we are our worst critics and I think the biggest mistake we make...
  June 8th, 2018 14:47
• The Wonder Of Whales (Jhe) You may have a point about oceanic pollution, and I\'m not critiquing that...
  June 8th, 2018 14:03
• Left Here (Cmize) Life goes on. Be happy for the loss because it makes you stronger and more...
  June 7th, 2018 10:45
• A Goodbye For Her and A Goodbye For Him (Writings From The Unknown13) This reads like you\'re insane.
  June 7th, 2018 10:39
• High-horse (Gemma) Sometimes it takes years of being an outsider to figure out how to be an...
  June 7th, 2018 01:25
• Lilith (Shana) Interesting experimentation with a narrative, but I think you\'d do better...
  June 7th, 2018 01:20
• True Love (Gabriella) Feels like I have that feeling too much really.
  May 2nd, 2018 14:16
• Don’t Read GQ! (Gary Edward Geraci) Haha, nice one
  April 28th, 2018 18:28
• Fucking Attention Seekers (RhysPieces) I cannot say I\'ve found anything artistic in any of your works. You seem...
  April 26th, 2018 20:41
• I am Non Binary (RhysPieces) hm.
  April 26th, 2018 20:37
• Why I\'m An Atheist (An Open Letter To God) (Silent Nights) Small-minded I think. Religion is a very powerful literary tool and it\'s...
  March 21st, 2018 21:42
• Light up floor (ShannonXx) Reminds me of a certain Lorde song
  March 20th, 2018 08:32
• The good old days no longer exist. (StormTheArsonist) You might actually write something good if it were properly informed or if...
  March 16th, 2018 23:12
• Here’s to the Boy... (T...) Cute
  March 16th, 2018 23:04
• Blind (Marlenawood) Your eyes remind me of Bowie
  March 16th, 2018 11:50
• Black Orchids (Eugene S.) Is the title a reference to Doctor Who?
  March 13th, 2018 22:42
• I’ve been played by love...💔 (Savvi) I think this is great, but I also think that it\'s us that play love...
  March 12th, 2018 16:20
• I do believe in meditation (Roudan) Regardless of what you think of meditation, it can be really helpful.
  March 10th, 2018 22:00
• My Time With you (EmiliasLillith) Sweet.
  March 8th, 2018 21:58
• Quarry (Edthepoet) Dark.
  February 25th, 2018 18:41
• InSaNiTy (Olivergreenwood19) Meh. I doubt you\'ve lost your mind. Besides, true insanity, or at least...
  February 20th, 2018 13:25
• Madness In The Air (DesertWords) Powerful stuff
  February 17th, 2018 18:31
• My heart, my soul (Jessica Tawney) Hi. First of all, if your life really is going to shit, I do recommend...
  February 12th, 2018 19:15