Comments on community poems by GON
- Dump the Trump (Accidental Poet)
brilliant social commentary as always, i can see the kerouac...
April 10th, 2024 14:55 - Secret (Illia)
love the mysterious quality about this....could honestly use more lines,...
April 10th, 2024 13:25 - \"A Heart of Gold\" (Nicole H.)
i wanna live, i wanna give
April 9th, 2024 02:45 - Dump the Trump (Accidental Poet)
thought we were above this here...guess people can\'t resist the low...
April 9th, 2024 02:23 - Gone (Haleyalexis)
the pain you feel is very clearly expressed here, hope you find some...
April 8th, 2024 09:13 - Unbounded (Teddy.15)
Your diction is intoxicating. Love the scene it calls into my mind.
March 5th, 2024 04:57 - Veil of Sorrow (Cloie)
short answer, because you\'re 15
March 4th, 2024 05:29 - SUNSHINE (SAN2206)
Love the line \"AS HOT AS HELL.\" Very funny.
March 4th, 2024 05:28 - My Thoughts On Sexual Assault - Get Rid of Men (NinjaGirl)
I understand you said this is satire but it\'s just ridiculous that some...
March 2nd, 2024 14:16 - My Unknown Purpose (Cloie)
Reminds me of a certain Billie Eilish song. I like the way the words seem...
March 2nd, 2024 12:35 - My Unknown Purpose (Cloie)
Reminds me of a certain Billie Eilish song. I like the way the words seem...
March 2nd, 2024 10:14 - Echoes of Resilience (Cloie)
Love the hopeful spirit
February 29th, 2024 13:10 - Smile Anyway (Accidental Poet)
couldn\'t help but disagree, in good faith...
January 11th, 2024 09:24 - I like you. Do you like me? (Lil)
ha cute write, keep it up
December 29th, 2023 17:26 - Together (A thousand wishes)
this is fucking awesome, it absolutely radiates ecstatic love and joy....
September 24th, 2022 04:53 - Woe-man is me (Evergreen)
cute
September 24th, 2022 04:17 - Torn Between Two Worlds (Audraburwell)
your grip on form is absolutely solid, but your figurative language is a...
September 1st, 2022 20:22 - We write (another one for you all) (A thousand wishes)
write you are
August 25th, 2022 23:02 - like i used to (Scarlet poet)
good to see you back, this is sweet as hell
July 30th, 2022 04:17 - 5/22/22 (Wren)
would you take a look at my recent submission and tell me what you think?...
July 28th, 2022 23:32 - 5/22/22 (Wren)
your word-choice is sublime, i love the way it sounds just to say
July 28th, 2022 23:23 - Bewitched (Dove)
often too true
July 17th, 2022 16:10 - Let’s play a game. (Madalynsamantha)
damn, seems like you\'ve been through a hell of a time but you\'re using...
July 16th, 2022 20:48 - The China doll. (Madalynsamantha)
the china doll had to break sooner or later. better you to do it than some...
July 15th, 2022 16:46 - Slap to the face. (Madalynsamantha)
savage
July 14th, 2022 22:21 - What is it? (JudyStella)
oh now this is lovely, excellent word choice here
July 11th, 2022 12:10 - ... p.2 (Verona)
beautifully put verona
June 30th, 2022 13:56 - harvest (Arqios)
love to see your fruits bard :)
June 25th, 2022 08:15 - THE WHITE MAN (Turbo1904)
never seen such pure trash on this site before
June 22nd, 2022 15:26 - Prism of life (Kitty the naughty poet)
i like your words magic man
June 22nd, 2022 15:25 - Broken Promise (JudyStella)
Lovely write and I love the narrative!! Very cool to see on this site.
June 21st, 2022 13:54 - 18 (Evergreen)
reminds me of a five for fighting song... there\'s still plenty of life to...
June 15th, 2022 10:49 - Don\'t forget me yet (Sadkw33n)
best we can do is set a good example while we\'re here.
June 12th, 2022 11:58 - A little thought (JudyStella)
deep thoughts to have about a leaf. and to return to the soil to start...
June 11th, 2022 17:47 - Dead (unfinished) (A thousand wishes)
my first thought is that i\'m wondering who you\'re talking to. what...
June 9th, 2022 10:10 - Jealousy (i know this is bad) (Idontknowwhatimdoing)
those last two lines are fire, keep it up
June 8th, 2022 13:59 - The red-eyed raven (A thousand wishes)
This is actually my favorite of yours so far. The form is great, the...
June 8th, 2022 11:30 - I know (A thousand wishes)
I especially love the two final stanzas. \"We had to fall before we...
June 6th, 2022 15:37 - Pain (A thousand wishes)
pain is the undeniable truth of life, but we can only hope there\'s...
June 5th, 2022 17:06 - A message for my daughter. (teen mom story) (Smitherins)
you have a good heart, and trying to be better is a good step not everyone...
June 4th, 2022 19:30 - Summer rain (Anny)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LNlzsqvS0ek
June 4th, 2022 19:28 - about dreams (Languale)
very synchronous moment you recommending me read this. i\'ve been reading...
June 2nd, 2022 14:49 - The gamer (Nicky903)
the game is on nicky
May 31st, 2022 19:19 - A Helium Ballon Can\'t Lift A Brick (IamUnicorn)
no but about 140 can
May 30th, 2022 20:08 - Days Gone By (Jeannie)
reads like a pleasant song, love to see it!
May 30th, 2022 11:19 - wishful thinking (Kevin Michael Bloor)
Lovely write Kevin. Carry those dreams into your waking life.
May 30th, 2022 11:16 - Flashback (A thousand wishes)
i like the rhythm in parts, particularly..
\"I had a flashback -
a...
May 29th, 2022 16:03 - Role Models (Merlin)
damn, i felt this one. sounds like you had to do a little role modeling on...
May 28th, 2022 18:53 - Absolute beginner (Illia)
lovely rhymes. speaking as someone who loves to learn new things, i\'ll...
May 28th, 2022 18:46 - Violet disaster (Anny)
sky = violet
birds die from ultraviolet
birds fly IN the sky
birds DIE...
May 28th, 2022 12:47 - POETRY IS CORNY (Ok Waleed)
poetry is not corny, poetry is BASED. love yourself and appreciate your...
May 28th, 2022 12:45 - Heaven knows (JudyStella)
i\'d love to add to this if you don\'t mind
May 28th, 2022 06:54 - Ask (Sariana)
love your words, keep posting!
May 22nd, 2022 09:30 - I Thought I Knew You... (Jaimeleigh)
can we ever really know anything at all or just cling to faith
May 22nd, 2022 09:08 - ilyt (Nizyix)
great first effort! welcome to the site and we hope to see more from you
May 22nd, 2022 08:37 - Jon Pertwee\'s Demise (Randyjohnson71)
i love pertwee
May 21st, 2022 06:42 - MY RENAISSANCE (Briana)
love it, very phoenix of you
May 15th, 2022 17:45 - Stage presence (Hoolihooli)
falling off the petal
just trying to settle...
good enough for me...
May 13th, 2022 20:05 - The street lamp (Hoolihooli)
weird comment maybe but i love the sort of amber vibe i get from this
May 12th, 2022 19:27 - Humble Abode (Aaliya J)
lovely sentiment and lovely poem, keep it up!
May 10th, 2022 14:04 - Sink into my mind (Hoolihooli)
best to face it bravely. lovely write hooli. i absolutely feel the energy.
May 8th, 2022 20:49 - Fall (Esey)
lovely
May 8th, 2022 16:47 - Mother\'s Day 2022 (Randyjohnson71)
no doubt she looks down on you with pride and joy
May 8th, 2022 10:56 - Crimson ink (Kitty the naughty poet)
nice form
May 7th, 2022 14:37 - Fatalist? (Bella Shepard)
short and sweet. brilliantly said.
May 7th, 2022 14:33 - Tin Man (Dove)
absolutely love your structure, this is my kind of poetry
May 7th, 2022 14:27 - Rain (Hoolihooli)
\"Except the rain falls onto the street
And I fall for you\"
I love...
May 7th, 2022 08:57 - The other side of clearing something up (Dusk arising)
lol you\'d do better to keep this to your dms.
May 5th, 2022 16:25 - Nightfall (M. Evermore)
lovely imagery evermore
May 5th, 2022 16:12 - Epiphany (Spamalicious)
lovely first post, and welcome to the site
April 30th, 2022 16:00 - Clearing something up (Crowns4Christ)
didn\'t know there was drama on mps
April 30th, 2022 15:55 - Worry not (Crowns4Christ)
if i don\'t have faith at least there\'s hope
comforting write blue
April 24th, 2022 08:36 - Unnoticed Self Harm (Anna Colette)
based
January 19th, 2022 16:56 - Flow (Rebmasters)
absolutely beautiful write, feelings i haven\'t been able to put into
August 19th, 2021 13:18 - Switch Off (Coyote)
the atmosphere is a vibe
August 19th, 2021 12:56 - Noah (the real story?) (Coyote)
Ok you got me good, this is an amazing write
August 14th, 2021 12:41 - 3 things in common (Kaunisdiana)
ooh i\'m digging that last couplet. the rhyme is nice. also, you have an...
April 25th, 2021 15:57 - Das fuhrer Donald Trump returns with a vengeance (Rew4er2nail)
truly a genius political commentary and not an irrelevant farce
April 11th, 2021 14:45 - In my house (Thelala)
I love your style! It\'s refreshing to see on the site
April 4th, 2021 16:27 - In the know (Olivia.)
it\'s very nice you\'re staying positive olivia, and refreshing to see...
March 29th, 2021 20:30 - Never Enough (Jerry Reynolds)
i feel the birds sometimes too jerry, cool write
February 23rd, 2021 09:31 - I am worth more (Olivia.)
yes you are, keep being true to yourself!
February 22nd, 2021 14:24 - Our Relief (Clara)
we are hardly ever more vulnerable than in these moments of pure intimacy...
December 22nd, 2020 02:01 - Fido Rant (Orchidee)
am i wrong to think this is hilarious
August 2nd, 2020 18:01 - rise and fall (GON)
haven\'t been submitting much lately due to the chaos of life but don\'t...
July 31st, 2020 09:36 - walk away (Dusk arising)
to draw the sword or cut the cord
July 22nd, 2020 12:18 - Crushed by your Hate (DianeKey6)
lol i wonder who this is about
July 19th, 2020 15:55 - Strange (Benevolentbluebabe)
ooh hit us with a second verse please
July 19th, 2020 09:20 - Convenient truth (Jeremy Leach)
mm, i think i dig the conceit here. personally, i believe in absolute...
July 19th, 2020 09:18 - I See Ghosts (Lutalican)
Wow, I think this is one of my favorites. Love how catchy it is, great...
July 18th, 2020 09:42 - You\'re a Homewrecker (TWENTY3)
I break a million hearts just for fun
July 17th, 2020 06:17 - I miss you (Benevolentbluebabe)
this really connects with me. so elegantly heartfelt.
July 12th, 2020 03:47 - Pretty woman. (Jorge serra)
nicely heartfelt
July 6th, 2020 03:37 - my breath (Dusk arising)
noice
June 20th, 2020 00:40 - Virgin... (Goutam)
LOL
June 12th, 2020 09:17 - Im Worthless (and that’s on me) (A__pott)
Was just listening to Just by Radiohead... Just remember in what ever you...
June 12th, 2020 09:15 - apathy begat genocide (Dusk arising)
Eh, I think it\'s unfair to judge like that.
June 6th, 2020 12:56 - Whar art mine fervent zeal for Marx Brothers? (Rew4er2nail)
bleh
May 31st, 2020 03:55 - Alive in every way (Annonymouswonder)
Congrats on your healing
May 23rd, 2020 03:05 - I Wish You Still Wrote (Evergreen)
hey! this is so nice.
April 24th, 2020 12:18
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