Comments on community poems by peto
- I\'ll Sacrifice (Cloie)
I think I would show her this poem
It is full of emotion
The rhyme...
March 3rd, 2024 13:01 - I \"C\" You (Courlieth_aeolis)
And you will c him
At the ceremony
Welcome
Enjoyed the read
Looking...
March 3rd, 2024 12:51 - Unbounded (Teddy.15)
When you\'re good
You\'re good
Some great lines in here Teddy
The...
March 3rd, 2024 12:45 - Pieces Of Me (GiftedT17)
Got a more you give the more you get vibe
You did what you set out to do...
March 2nd, 2024 20:06 - The Eyes of Domestic Abuse (Melody Votoire)
Welcome
A fantastic debut
\"Finally agonisingly takes it\'s claws out...
March 2nd, 2024 14:48 - My Unknown Purpose (Cloie)
You appear to have already found your purpose
Self inventory at your age...
March 2nd, 2024 09:32 - Powerless (GiftedT17)
Hold on to your talent for writing
\"To survive my lie is a thought...
March 2nd, 2024 08:43 - Untitled (DD.)
Your WORST is enough for us DD
Keep writing it out
March 2nd, 2024 08:36 - The 8 year old’s whisper (Meera Mere)
Meera
Your word choices are excellent
The last line in particular is...
March 2nd, 2024 08:30 - New Start (Jessi)
Great rhyme and content
Not sure what \"kanna\" means
Apart from my...
March 1st, 2024 15:47 - Get Ready For Something Big (Angelia Lamar)
Very uplifting positive write
Thoroughly enjoyed reading
March 1st, 2024 14:17 - Quitting the fight (Gregoria)
Great rhyme and flow
And I learned a new word beshrew
Sad yet...
March 1st, 2024 14:06 - Slumberbashing with Raven (Teddy.15)
Ah dreams
Talking ravens and distant memories
So much to enjoy...
March 1st, 2024 14:03 - what have i done wrong? (Emptythoughts)
I have also at times took on undeserved blame/shame
Until I...
March 1st, 2024 13:52 - A Hazy Strange Winter (Parisab)
The imagery is stunning
Especially liked \"smiling fish\"
Only...
March 1st, 2024 13:41
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