Comments on community poems by peto
- In Silence and Disbelief (Teddy.15)
Empathy at it\'s finest Teddy
You are a world child
I can\'t really add...
September 9th, 2023 04:26 - TIRED (LIZ)
Obviously exhausting LIZ
Please don\'t give up on the hoping and caring...
September 8th, 2023 01:46 - Jungle Madness (Trin)
\"Survival presumes we have something to live for \"
You certainly do...
September 7th, 2023 16:47 - Lacrime (Teddy.15)
Bloodshot and teary
Says more than a million words could
Deepest...
September 7th, 2023 16:34 - Forget me nots (Alana dart)
Welcome Alana
Keep writing keep thriving
Looking forward to reading...
September 7th, 2023 14:51 - Whispered (Introverted Sage)
You keep getting better
No mean feat consideration previous writes
This...
September 7th, 2023 12:04 - Real (Peto)
Thank you sage
I really enjoy your insight
\"Other worldly magical...
September 7th, 2023 11:54 - ~MY FAV QUOTES (ChrisLyn🕊)
Enjoyed your take on these
One of my favs has to be
Give time...
September 7th, 2023 04:36 - The Fool (LynnBlackwell)
A brilliant read
Could almost hear the music
\"Without the glove...
September 7th, 2023 03:57 - Creep (Elle King)
Welcome Elle
Great start
Nice format
Keep writing and watch the...
September 6th, 2023 10:28 - Unprecedented (Doggerel Dave)
Great rhyme with even better content
The last 2 lines particularly...
September 6th, 2023 09:08 - A Sad Run (A.D. Small)
Although this is sad
I really enjoyed how you put it together
Also a...
September 6th, 2023 05:14 - Find Myself (Bella Shepard)
Oh i don\'t think you will have to look very far to find your soul
It...
September 6th, 2023 05:07 - My Destined Song (Destined Perspectives)
Uplifting positive
Unfortunately true for many
Great example...
September 6th, 2023 04:54 - My Me (Introverted Sage)
Top form yet again
I did wonder if it should have read
\"Human...
September 6th, 2023 04:47 - The whole enchilada (Hzugman)
I love your gratitude and zest for life
Hope this does not sound...
September 6th, 2023 04:36 - Invention of Laughter (Teddy.15)
I\'d go into the past an hour
Get back the time I\'ve already been...
September 6th, 2023 04:21 - Morning Breaks (Bella Shepard)
Rhyme rhythm and flow are tremendous
Well worth waiting for
Superb...
September 3rd, 2023 10:32 - ANY TIME (Suetah)
Welcome
Beautiful write
And I believe every word
Looking forward to...
September 3rd, 2023 09:38 - My girl, my girl, my girl (Hzugman)
Old school magic
You are a lucky man
And I\'m sure she is a lucky...
September 3rd, 2023 09:36 - Empty Sky (Teddy.15)
That is some memory Teddy
Haunts your dreams
So much said in such...
September 3rd, 2023 03:41 - A fault In my code (Onurb Azile)
I believe we all have our faults Azile
When we recognize them
We are...
September 3rd, 2023 02:19 - I Can Only Blame Myself (13LaurenD)
Love is blind Lauren
Can only look the other way for so long
You will...
September 3rd, 2023 01:14 - A change of heart (Kai-leah)
Welcome kai
Great debut
Look forward to reading more from you
September 3rd, 2023 00:51 - Apexed (Introverted Sage)
4th line 1st verse
You succeeded sage
Super write
0pleasure to read
September 3rd, 2023 00:37 - A Fallen Leaf (Cait3180)
Welcome to the site cait
Powerful emotional write
\"I can no longer go...
September 1st, 2023 14:45 - Resuscitating My Heart (Destined Perspectives)
Superb content once again
When in a similar situation it was only then I...
September 1st, 2023 11:01 - Turquoise and Indigo Spools of Thread (Destined Perspectives)
The first two lines really capture the reader making them want to continue...
September 1st, 2023 07:34 - Lunar (Peto)
Lol I took a couple of pics also
Not great results
Thanks for the...
September 1st, 2023 06:06 - Lunar (Peto)
Not the only one LIZ
Couldn\'t help but admire it
I don\'t know what...
September 1st, 2023 05:33 - Dear future me, (Sueellennicole)
This has a vibe of someone moving on but having to leave another...
September 1st, 2023 04:50 - MENTOR’s HONOR (Bobby O)
As a scot I\'ve always admired the pipes and drums
The magic created from...
September 1st, 2023 04:32 - Wandering (Introverted Sage)
Magical again
The 2nd last verse is stunning
A pleasure to read
August 31st, 2023 16:39 - Run Away (Cali Kittana)
Sad write
I\'m sure there is more to come from you regarding this...
August 31st, 2023 16:31 - Loves lost wars (Lostinfantasy)
Although the content is sad
The rhyme is great
Hopefully you found it...
August 31st, 2023 14:55 - DAYS by Phyllis Phipps ( Undertherainbow) (Undertherainbow)
Welcome to the site
Great debut
Such peaceful imagery
Looking...
August 31st, 2023 11:35 - Monster (Sueellennicole)
Welcome to the site
A fantastic debut with great content
The rhyme is...
August 31st, 2023 03:32 - Somewhere in the middle (Wazi)
Welcome wazi
I don\'t think we can be careful who we fall for
The heart...
August 30th, 2023 15:55 - one small thing a vulcano (Amysliterature)
\"Why should I ever feel proud of myself\"
Talent for writing is a good...
August 30th, 2023 14:05 - dear ember (Daizy_graham)
Welcome
An ember can burst into flames again at any moment
Extremely...
August 30th, 2023 12:09 - I need your love (Peto)
Christina
You really do give me a lift with such kindness
Couldn\'t do...
August 30th, 2023 09:15 - I\'ll Cry with the Angels (Pop64)
A beautiful tribute
To have this level of feeling is a gift
Though the...
August 30th, 2023 08:40 - Lonely Heroes (Buzzybee4you)
Excellent rhyme
Particularly enjoyed the skeleton lines
And the entire...
August 30th, 2023 05:15 - THE TRUTH IS (LIZ)
Truth in the first line
Dare in the last
Love oozes from your pen...
August 30th, 2023 05:09 - Tomboy (Destined Perspectives)
Read this a couple of times
Almost afraid to comment as I dread to think...
August 30th, 2023 05:03 - Being (Bella Shepard)
Are we human beings
Or human becoming
Short sharp and thought...
August 29th, 2023 13:06 - Inclucde every item (Hzugman)
Counting our blessings can\'t help but please ya
Thanks for the reminder...
August 29th, 2023 09:18 - Plastic Smile (SHELLY)
Such a sad situation
The 3rd verse is particularly telling
Great and...
August 29th, 2023 05:26 - NOT THE QUEEN (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
Tremendous write
Enjoyed the rhyme but it\'s the content that grabbed...
August 29th, 2023 05:22 - Beans (GillyFitz)
Super rhyme
I first started writing when a teacher in primary school put...
August 29th, 2023 05:05 - Standing Secret (Introverted Sage)
Keep dancing
Superb last verse
August 29th, 2023 04:57 - SCARS AND WOUNDS (MENTAL HEALTH) (PassionatePoetess)
Passionate indeed
When in this position I find it hard enough to get...
August 29th, 2023 04:54 - Sequenced (Introverted Sage)
Brilliant write
The rhymes work for the reader so hopefully for you...
August 22nd, 2023 08:17 - Inanna’s Descent (Vicecream)
This is a great read
Not sure what is holding you back
One day...
August 14th, 2023 18:05 - Burnt Out (PaperFlowerFields)
Although steeped in sorrow I see strength in here
As its burnt out theme...
August 14th, 2023 12:43 - Relatively speaking (Hzugman)
Couldn\'t agree more
Wise as ever
We don\'t know we are living nowadays...
August 14th, 2023 09:43 - Old Men of Steel (Parisab)
Oh you always have me thinking
If it\'s any consolation ( doubt it will...
August 13th, 2023 16:16 - Short-Circuit (Teddy.15)
Careful what you wish for Teddy
Ai couldn\'t write with such feeling as...
August 13th, 2023 13:52 - The moth that didn\'t know the way out (Skally)
This is a tremendous read skally
Felt like a true love story then a...
August 13th, 2023 06:02 - “Why Them Others?” (Laraib Fatima)
So many questions
Beautifully written
The killer ending I believe is...
August 13th, 2023 03:25 - unfound love (Lctc)
Welcome
Great start
The grass always seems greener on the other side...
August 13th, 2023 03:13 - Comfort zones (Onurb Azile)
Tremendous debut
Looking forward to reading more
Sounds far from...
August 13th, 2023 02:08 - Behind The Scene (Chinvks)
Read notes as well as poem
You must keep writing with such great results...
August 13th, 2023 02:02 - abandonment issues (Raxoon)
Welcome raxoon
Or
Keep writing it out and perhaps you can slowly rip...
August 12th, 2023 15:18 - Lost (Zhangyuyouyu)
When I read this I imagined it written by someone much older
Clever and...
August 12th, 2023 13:04 - The feeling of love (Nicolerobinson)
Not read from you in years nicole
Glad to see you still going strong...
August 12th, 2023 08:15 - Conserve The Earth (Sunsetmet)
The break between save and planet
Gives this a great art feel
Super...
August 12th, 2023 07:11 - RINSE & REPEAT (Bobby O)
Great to see a write from you Bobby
Superb lines
\"Self sentenced to...
August 11th, 2023 11:32 - The Edge (Introverted Sage)
Totally agree with scribbler
I honestly believe your last few writes...
August 11th, 2023 11:08 - One day (Idek.and)
The more you write the closer that day will come
Sad and emotional...
August 10th, 2023 16:26 - Love Letter (Teddy.15)
Signed sealed delivered
August 10th, 2023 14:34 - Ice (Peto)
Aww Cheers parisa
Bottoms up
Extremely grateful for your input
Always...
August 10th, 2023 11:54 - April 10th (LyricNight)
Welcome lyric
Glad you have found the strength and place to share such...
August 10th, 2023 08:39 - Like a Video (Parisab)
I had to rewind and play again
1st read had me imagine you singing in...
August 9th, 2023 20:27 - What Do We Own? (AuburnScribbler)
Always thought provoking
Always socially aware and very relatable...
August 9th, 2023 16:48 - Ink (Kayla Jackson)
Perfect write
Says so much with so few words
Magic
August 9th, 2023 14:15 - I\'m okay (Bellbell_060609)
Excellent rhyme and content
Keep writing
You have an obvious talent...
August 9th, 2023 12:57 - Worn Out Shoes (Teddy.15)
Excellent as per
Enjoyed the twirl
The repeat of\" Was\" rather than...
August 9th, 2023 11:32 - Six Word Stranger (Introverted Sage)
And what an answer you have given
Loved the rhyme again
Your writing...
August 9th, 2023 11:15 - Spirit Does (Introverted Sage)
\"Spirit writing on the walls\"
And all over this page
This is magical...
August 9th, 2023 10:58 - Where is home? (Hollyv88)
Looks like you found a key Holly
Keep writing
Looking forward to more...
August 9th, 2023 10:52 - Another place (Idek.and)
Your soul is already mending
Reading between the lines
Keep em coming...
August 9th, 2023 10:47 - Last September (NafisaSB)
Great rhyme and flow
Does leave me wondering what did compel you to stay...
August 9th, 2023 10:42 - The longing (A.L.H)
Really enjoyed the rhyme scheme here
Longing to read more
Very Much...
August 2nd, 2023 16:35 - The Devil Within (Lynda May)
A tremendous debut
Although devastating you Express the feeling so well...
August 2nd, 2023 13:49 - Objectification (Stephwrites)
Brilliant writing
Read a few times already
Very raw from a talented
August 2nd, 2023 12:26 - Mister System (AuburnScribbler)
This is a belter scribbler
Pleasure to read with killer ending
Much...
August 2nd, 2023 11:45 - Your cruel way (Laurajayne69)
Another \"real\" read
Full of emotion almost vengeful
Fav line...
August 2nd, 2023 11:39 - Growing up (Stephwrites)
Superb write
The grass is always greener on the other side came to mind...
August 2nd, 2023 05:40 - Coincidence (Introverted Sage)
It\'s me again
Love reading from you
Got a certain unique style
August 2nd, 2023 05:20 - The Perfect Painting (Teddy.15)
If a picture paints a thousand words
Or 24
Your words do it justice...
August 2nd, 2023 05:16 - Social Media Whore (Parisab)
Loved this write
Well worth the wait
Different world from the one I...
August 2nd, 2023 05:13 - Hugs (Holly Anne)
Excellent read
Particularly liked
\"At times they can help fights...
August 2nd, 2023 05:10 - Lost (Laurajayne69)
Welcome Laura
Horrible situation
But what a powerful ending to the...
August 1st, 2023 23:18 - Sorbet Sunset (Sunsetmet)
Great debut
Welcome
Looking forward to reading more from you
July 31st, 2023 15:12 - QUIXOTE IMPOSSIBLE (Bobby O)
Love reading Bobby
Think I\'d also like to HEAR this one
Has a strength...
July 31st, 2023 02:21 - Legend of Love (Teddy.15)
Teddy
This is a great read
Particularly liked the mention of Scottish...
July 31st, 2023 02:06 - True Sorcerer\'s Brew (Introverted Sage)
Loved this one
Especially the language used
Authenticated the...
July 31st, 2023 02:02 - Pinocchio, deep in thought (Teddy.15)
Tell the right lie and something else would grow
Cheers for the laugh
July 29th, 2023 09:01 - Oh What A Beautiful Morning! (Bella Shepard)
Chanting away
Lovely way to start the day
July 28th, 2023 01:15
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