Comments on community poems by peto

• Autumn\'s Bow (Teddy.15) You capture it very well with so few words Hidden stars Whirling winds...
  October 2nd, 2023 10:24
• Credit (2781) Enjoyed the read When they press the reset button I hope to have some...
  October 2nd, 2023 10:19
• Asked Twice (Introverted Sage) This one reads like a long hard look at oneself \":helps me unload: \"...
  October 2nd, 2023 10:14
• Colors of a Silent Crush (GeekSusie) Absolutely love your rhyme and rhythm Fantastic flowing writing As for...
  September 30th, 2023 08:57
• First (Peto) You give me too much credit Christina I never know where I\'m going when...
  September 30th, 2023 08:53
• The Truth (Christina8) That scared kid seems long gone And in place here you stand Dealing...
  September 29th, 2023 13:53
• Retreat or Repeat: An American Quandary (GeekSusie) Sensational delivery Brilliant read Love the rhyme and rhythm Great...
  September 28th, 2023 15:29
• I am asking for it (Amysliterature) Keep sharing your literature Amy I for one enjoy reading it
  September 28th, 2023 14:22
• Earth and Gods (Goddess of the Mist) Can\'t believe I\'m first to view this Tremendous rhyme rhythm and flow...
  September 28th, 2023 13:32
• Poetic Suicide (Maria rk.) Perhaps a poetic LIFE is more your speed Very talented Strong message...
  September 28th, 2023 09:53
• Lillie\'s Gratitude (Laylemon) Welcome lemon Fantastic debut Pleasure to read Not surprised you get...
  September 28th, 2023 08:25
• An Ode To The Sandwich (Teddy.15) And served up on a plate Wire in Teddy
  September 28th, 2023 02:40
• Dream Affairs (Maria rk.) Welcome Maria Beautiful write Look forward to reading more from you...
  September 28th, 2023 02:37
• Senryu 1 (Teddy.15) Touche Teddy
  September 25th, 2023 12:48
• FOLLOW THE SMILE QUICK ROAD (Bobby O) Bobby You done it again boss No better place to start than the mirror...
  September 25th, 2023 12:44
• Seen (Introverted Sage) Keep reading between the lines sage But feel I\'m being allowed to do so...
  September 25th, 2023 12:34
• Cruelty (Christina8) Excellent writing Christina Love the rhyme format content All of it...
  September 25th, 2023 11:23
• All I ever wanted was for you to love me (Niki Oz) NIK Seems to have been written a while back Glad you now value yourself...
  September 25th, 2023 11:17
• Changeling (Introverted Sage) Another super write sage Felt a bit like a song I really enjoyed...
  September 25th, 2023 10:51
• I\'ll never understand (Poetic Dan) Great to see you writing Dan Always emotional Always real Maybe the...
  September 15th, 2023 18:14
• Our Secret (Introverted Sage) Shhhhhhhh I felt it You are a great writer sage Another belter
  September 15th, 2023 18:00
• Through the Eyes of Never Enough (GeekSusie) Tremendous write In a language I can understand For a change With my...
  September 15th, 2023 15:09
• Give thanks (BlessedbyGod) Your name suggests tremendous faith As do these words Strong message...
  September 15th, 2023 10:34
• The Whys of Jack and Jill (Pop64) Jack and jill Went up the hill To fetch a pail of water Jill forgot...
  September 15th, 2023 10:19
• FATED HERO FAKED (Bobby O) Great read Bobby Sounds really personal rather than historical Like a...
  September 15th, 2023 10:02
• Doggy Style (Teddy.15) Hi Teddy Want to buy a bag? It\'s the little things isn\'t it Great...
  September 15th, 2023 09:57
• No one (Justagirlinasadworld) Welcome Where your voice fails your pen shines Now you have the...
  September 14th, 2023 15:09
• MONK and MY AUNT (Bobby O) Such a unique delivery it captivates the reader Think parisab said it...
  September 14th, 2023 14:58
• Fire (Christina8) Yea Welcome back Christina And with a belter Missed your writing A...
  September 14th, 2023 14:08
• Look deeper (Niki Oz) Oh NIK This is dynamite The dying stars line is sensational Read and...
  September 14th, 2023 13:38
• The Sound of Darkness (Neville) I expected this to go in a completely different direction Going by the...
  September 14th, 2023 08:56
• The Death of Love (Teddy.15) I\'m struggling to comment on this Let\'s just say I\'m glad I can
  September 14th, 2023 08:53
• Magic (Peto) Many thanks Christina Always a pleasure to see you here And always so...
  September 14th, 2023 08:12
• Master of One (Introverted Sage) 10 out of 10
  September 14th, 2023 05:01
• RED LIPSTICK (Purplecherry) What your lipstick covers up Your pen reveals Also enjoyed the killer...
  September 12th, 2023 05:42
• Doctor\'s Orders (Teddy.15) Ah dr feelgood Lifts your spirits and never let\'s you leave without a...
  September 12th, 2023 01:14
• Be One This Day (9-11 rememberance) (Pop64) This is such a heart wrenching read Hopefully you find a little...
  September 11th, 2023 17:23
• My Little Fantasy (Bella Shepard) Lovely to read as per But you leave us wondering what the fantasy could...
  September 11th, 2023 15:31
• Mask Off (Introverted Sage) Another great thought provoking read \"Is it your heart or your weapons...
  September 10th, 2023 17:22
• Knowing I Saw Enough (Teddy.15) Maybe you could take some consolation knowing your words let the rest of...
  September 10th, 2023 17:18
• The Human Heart (Buzzybee4you) Hi buzzy When you want to write do it Look what came from this A well...
  September 10th, 2023 12:18
• Gone (Elle King) Welcome Elle Great debut Got a song vibe to it Very smooth Title...
  September 10th, 2023 09:03
• When We Are One (Bella Shepard) Like it started with your dreams or wishes for the world Then ended with...
  September 10th, 2023 07:39
• Lost in Time (Introverted Sage) Ah sage It flows and rhymes so smoothly the reader is at the end almost...
  September 10th, 2023 07:20
• Even a Clueless Squirrel May Climb (Bobby O) Great memory Bobby Thanks for sharing such a beautiful write The one...
  September 10th, 2023 07:16
• HAUNTED (LIZ) \"You feed a crave i have\' Hints at addiction Your writing is...
  September 10th, 2023 07:08
• uncertain and uncomfortable but also blissful and serene (Poetic Dan) Dan THE man You have always been a tremendous example Given it away to...
  September 9th, 2023 05:15
• Eat me away (Anonymous_Poet) Welcome Don\'t understand the apology Fantastic start Looking forward...
  September 9th, 2023 05:01
• The Girl in the Chain Mail Dress (Houchins.linda) Tremendous rhyme and flow Superb debut Looking forward to reading more...
  September 9th, 2023 04:44
• Empty (Miss_Dreamer) Tremendous write I think we have all felt that way at some point Almost...
  September 9th, 2023 04:36
• What Does it Take (Introverted Sage) You really are on fire Superb write Amazing rhyme The content...
  September 9th, 2023 04:31
• CONNECTION (Bobby O) Didn\'t think you could top the picture Then you lifted your pen
  September 9th, 2023 04:28
• In Silence and Disbelief (Teddy.15) Empathy at it\'s finest Teddy You are a world child I can\'t really add...
  September 9th, 2023 04:26
• TIRED (LIZ) Obviously exhausting LIZ Please don\'t give up on the hoping and caring...
  September 8th, 2023 01:46
• Jungle Madness (Trin) \"Survival presumes we have something to live for \" You certainly do...
  September 7th, 2023 16:47
• Lacrime (Teddy.15) Bloodshot and teary Says more than a million words could Deepest...
  September 7th, 2023 16:34
• Forget me nots (Alana dart) Welcome Alana Keep writing keep thriving Looking forward to reading...
  September 7th, 2023 14:51
• Whispered (Introverted Sage) You keep getting better No mean feat consideration previous writes This...
  September 7th, 2023 12:04
• Real (Peto) Thank you sage I really enjoy your insight \"Other worldly magical...
  September 7th, 2023 11:54
• ~MY FAV QUOTES (ChrisLyn🕊) Enjoyed your take on these One of my favs has to be Give time...
  September 7th, 2023 04:36
• The Fool (LynnBlackwell) A brilliant read Could almost hear the music \"Without the glove...
  September 7th, 2023 03:57
• Creep (Elle King) Welcome Elle Great start Nice format Keep writing and watch the...
  September 6th, 2023 10:28
• Unprecedented (Doggerel Dave) Great rhyme with even better content The last 2 lines particularly...
  September 6th, 2023 09:08
• A Sad Run (A.D. Small) Although this is sad I really enjoyed how you put it together Also a...
  September 6th, 2023 05:14
• Find Myself (Bella Shepard) Oh i don\'t think you will have to look very far to find your soul It...
  September 6th, 2023 05:07
• My Destined Song (Destined Perspectives) Uplifting positive Unfortunately true for many Great example...
  September 6th, 2023 04:54
• My Me (Introverted Sage) Top form yet again I did wonder if it should have read \"Human...
  September 6th, 2023 04:47
• The whole enchilada (Hzugman) I love your gratitude and zest for life Hope this does not sound...
  September 6th, 2023 04:36
• Invention of Laughter (Teddy.15) I\'d go into the past an hour Get back the time I\'ve already been...
  September 6th, 2023 04:21
• Morning Breaks (Bella Shepard) Rhyme rhythm and flow are tremendous Well worth waiting for Superb...
  September 3rd, 2023 10:32
• ANY TIME (Suetah) Welcome Beautiful write And I believe every word Looking forward to...
  September 3rd, 2023 09:38
• My girl, my girl, my girl (Hzugman) Old school magic You are a lucky man And I\'m sure she is a lucky...
  September 3rd, 2023 09:36
• Empty Sky (Teddy.15) That is some memory Teddy Haunts your dreams So much said in such...
  September 3rd, 2023 03:41
• A fault In my code (Onurb Azile) I believe we all have our faults Azile When we recognize them We are...
  September 3rd, 2023 02:19
• I Can Only Blame Myself (13LaurenD) Love is blind Lauren Can only look the other way for so long You will...
  September 3rd, 2023 01:14
• A change of heart (Kai-leah) Welcome kai Great debut Look forward to reading more from you
  September 3rd, 2023 00:51
• Apexed (Introverted Sage) 4th line 1st verse You succeeded sage Super write 0pleasure to read
  September 3rd, 2023 00:37
• A Fallen Leaf (Cait3180) Welcome to the site cait Powerful emotional write \"I can no longer go...
  September 1st, 2023 14:45
• Resuscitating My Heart (Destined Perspectives) Superb content once again When in a similar situation it was only then I...
  September 1st, 2023 11:01
• Turquoise and Indigo Spools of Thread (Destined Perspectives) The first two lines really capture the reader making them want to continue...
  September 1st, 2023 07:34
• Lunar (Peto) Lol I took a couple of pics also Not great results Thanks for the...
  September 1st, 2023 06:06
• Lunar (Peto) Not the only one LIZ Couldn\'t help but admire it I don\'t know what...
  September 1st, 2023 05:33
• Dear future me, (Sueellennicole) This has a vibe of someone moving on but having to leave another...
  September 1st, 2023 04:50
• MENTOR’s HONOR (Bobby O) As a scot I\'ve always admired the pipes and drums The magic created from...
  September 1st, 2023 04:32
• Wandering (Introverted Sage) Magical again The 2nd last verse is stunning A pleasure to read
  August 31st, 2023 16:39
• Run Away (Cali Kittana) Sad write I\'m sure there is more to come from you regarding this...
  August 31st, 2023 16:31
• Loves lost wars (Lostinfantasy) Although the content is sad The rhyme is great Hopefully you found it...
  August 31st, 2023 14:55
• DAYS by Phyllis Phipps ( Undertherainbow) (Undertherainbow) Welcome to the site Great debut Such peaceful imagery Looking...
  August 31st, 2023 11:35
• Monster (Sueellennicole) Welcome to the site A fantastic debut with great content The rhyme is...
  August 31st, 2023 03:32
• Somewhere in the middle (Wazi) Welcome wazi I don\'t think we can be careful who we fall for The heart...
  August 30th, 2023 15:55
• one small thing a vulcano (Amysliterature) \"Why should I ever feel proud of myself\" Talent for writing is a good...
  August 30th, 2023 14:05
• dear ember (Daizy_graham) Welcome An ember can burst into flames again at any moment Extremely...
  August 30th, 2023 12:09
• I need your love (Peto) Christina You really do give me a lift with such kindness Couldn\'t do...
  August 30th, 2023 09:15
• I\'ll Cry with the Angels (Pop64) A beautiful tribute To have this level of feeling is a gift Though the...
  August 30th, 2023 08:40
• Lonely Heroes (Buzzybee4you) Excellent rhyme Particularly enjoyed the skeleton lines And the entire...
  August 30th, 2023 05:15
• THE TRUTH IS  (LIZ) Truth in the first line Dare in the last Love oozes from your pen...
  August 30th, 2023 05:09
• Tomboy (Destined Perspectives) Read this a couple of times Almost afraid to comment as I dread to think...
  August 30th, 2023 05:03
• Being (Bella Shepard) Are we human beings Or human becoming Short sharp and thought...
  August 29th, 2023 13:06
• Inclucde every item (Hzugman) Counting our blessings can\'t help but please ya Thanks for the reminder...
  August 29th, 2023 09:18
• Plastic Smile (SHELLY) Such a sad situation The 3rd verse is particularly telling Great and...
  August 29th, 2023 05:26