Comments on community poems by peto
- The Guy Who Waved (AuburnScribbler)
Fantastic read scribbler
A mob I\'m glad I\'m not a part of
The last...
March 7th, 2024 12:35 - seven kinds of death (Karley)
The necklace of rope is an amazing line
Dunno how much you changed but...
March 7th, 2024 09:11 - The Scamp (and the love of his life) (JulesBurnsit)
You use language in such a unique way
It\'s captivating
Thoroughly...
March 7th, 2024 08:51 - Questions (GiftedT17)
Such a sad write
And here was I thinking you were gifted
Loved the rhyme...
March 7th, 2024 08:43 - Mirror morgue (A.L.H)
Great write
From the haunting 1st line to the slab at the end
Rhyme...
March 6th, 2024 18:07 - Settled beside my own blood (GrotesqueEm)
Close to the knuckle writing
Absolutely loved it
For a moment whilst...
March 6th, 2024 17:54 - New Moon (JulesBurnsit)
This is brutal but magic at the same time
A definate talent
Raw and...
March 6th, 2024 17:30 - The Makings of a Poet (Accidental Poet)
Great write AP
I kept it quiet that I was trying to write from my mates...
March 6th, 2024 17:21 - Deepest feelings (Princesslove)
Welcome princess
Great start, loved the rhyme and content
Looking...
March 6th, 2024 17:12 - JUST (Holly Anne)
indeed
You are also a writer of fine poetry
Thoroughly enjoyed
Just...
March 6th, 2024 17:09 - “A MOTHER’S LOVE” (ChantellRyan2575)
Stunning debut
With rhyme flow and rhythm all spot on
Looking forward...
March 6th, 2024 17:01 - Was Meant (UniqueButterfly)
Welcome
You mention music
Very apt as this write is very tuneful...
March 6th, 2024 16:57 - Dancing with Doubt (Cloie)
I agree with AP
It\'s not a sprint cloie it\'s a marathon of we\'re...
March 6th, 2024 16:52 - Over Due (Introverted Sage)
As we say on Scotland
FREEDOM
March 6th, 2024 16:47 - How I Love (Introverted Sage)
Magical
It seems when you give of yourself it\'s all or nothing
Yet...
March 6th, 2024 16:31 - Hell or Heaven (Sunshine777)
\"We were real far from perfect \"
Great line
Enjoyed the read
Keep...
March 5th, 2024 20:23 - The Love I Deserve (13LaurenD)
Very emotional with stunning rhyme
Thoroughly enjoyed the read
March 5th, 2024 16:59 - The Waves, The Sand (Ashley25)
Great debut
I look forward to reading more from you
Welcome to the...
March 5th, 2024 15:49 - In the blink of an eye (Sophenia)
Good rhyme and excellent content
Glad to discover your writing
Looking...
March 5th, 2024 14:45 - I think (Bonnie)
She is lucky to have you
I did notice you managed to make her smile from...
March 5th, 2024 13:45 - Algebra of Love (Teddy.15)
Teddy
I love how you say so much with so few words
An artist of the...
March 5th, 2024 13:32 - Wild Eyes (GON)
Flow rhyme and rhythm are all spot on
Great read Gon
March 5th, 2024 13:29 - All Roads to Happiness (Accidental Poet)
Fantastic write and message
March 5th, 2024 12:53 - Tight (Introverted Sage)
Absolutely brilliant writing
\"New Crest on my chest yet I still failed...
March 5th, 2024 12:40 - Whispering Thoughts (GiftedT17)
Really enjoy the subtlety of your rhyme
I sometimes have to bite my...
March 5th, 2024 12:34 - Intended Release (Introverted Sage)
This is an epic
I can\'t believe the lack of views
This site is lucky...
March 5th, 2024 12:28 - A Light in the Night (Meera Mere)
Nicely done yet again meera
Keep em coming
You are honing your craft...
March 5th, 2024 12:17 - And suddenly... (Neilton)
Nice rhyme in this poem
Although sad it also has a feeling of moving...
March 5th, 2024 12:15 - Halloween (Peto)
Hi Dave
I\'m from Glasgow in Scotland
My little sister was born on...
March 3rd, 2024 16:40 - Art (Sunshine777)
Thanks for sharing your art with us
We all need a little sunshine...
March 3rd, 2024 14:23 - Among Poets (Rhmn_7)
I wouldn\'t claim to be a poet more of a Trier
However I\'ll try to...
March 3rd, 2024 13:30 - Edges of Silence (NikNak73)
Hi nik nak
This is really thought provoking
Though about a book 1st but...
March 3rd, 2024 13:24 - Tango (Gregoria)
That is some dance
Between what if and almost
Those words unspoken...
March 3rd, 2024 13:09 - I\'ll Sacrifice (Cloie)
I think I would show her this poem
It is full of emotion
The rhyme...
March 3rd, 2024 13:01 - I \"C\" You (Courlieth_aeolis)
And you will c him
At the ceremony
Welcome
Enjoyed the read
Looking...
March 3rd, 2024 12:51 - Unbounded (Teddy.15)
When you\'re good
You\'re good
Some great lines in here Teddy
The...
March 3rd, 2024 12:45 - Pieces Of Me (GiftedT17)
Got a more you give the more you get vibe
You did what you set out to do...
March 2nd, 2024 20:06 - The Eyes of Domestic Abuse (Melody Votoire)
Welcome
A fantastic debut
\"Finally agonisingly takes it\'s claws out...
March 2nd, 2024 14:48 - My Unknown Purpose (Cloie)
You appear to have already found your purpose
Self inventory at your age...
March 2nd, 2024 09:32 - Powerless (GiftedT17)
Hold on to your talent for writing
\"To survive my lie is a thought...
March 2nd, 2024 08:43 - Untitled (DD.)
Your WORST is enough for us DD
Keep writing it out
March 2nd, 2024 08:36 - The 8 year old’s whisper (Meera Mere)
Meera
Your word choices are excellent
The last line in particular is...
March 2nd, 2024 08:30 - New Start (Jessi)
Great rhyme and content
Not sure what \"kanna\" means
Apart from my...
March 1st, 2024 15:47 - Get Ready For Something Big (Angelia Lamar)
Very uplifting positive write
Thoroughly enjoyed reading
March 1st, 2024 14:17 - Quitting the fight (Gregoria)
Great rhyme and flow
And I learned a new word beshrew
Sad yet...
March 1st, 2024 14:06 - Slumberbashing with Raven (Teddy.15)
Ah dreams
Talking ravens and distant memories
So much to enjoy...
March 1st, 2024 14:03 - what have i done wrong? (Emptythoughts)
I have also at times took on undeserved blame/shame
Until I...
March 1st, 2024 13:52 - A Hazy Strange Winter (Parisab)
The imagery is stunning
Especially liked \"smiling fish\"
Only...
March 1st, 2024 13:41 - •instead• (MamasDarkside)
Welcome
I noticed the date
Yet it still feels as raw and emotional...
February 29th, 2024 09:56 - NURSERY MIS-RHYMES (Michael Edwards)
Jack and jill went up the hill
To fetch a pail of water
Jill forgot to...
February 29th, 2024 06:23 - Love in Friends and Steam (Anabella Aiyanna)
The word choice and rhyme are spectacular
Congrats to you and Ben
Loved...
February 29th, 2024 06:19 - CHANGES (Qurrathul Ain)
Emotional and heartfelt
I think we all try to build a protective barrier...
February 28th, 2024 20:12 - Camille (1879) Monet (Cassie58)
Could almost picture her
Great writing
February 28th, 2024 16:55 - The unkind (Neilton)
Enjoyed the read
Glad to discover your writing
Looking forward to...
February 28th, 2024 16:52 - Change (Accidental Poet)
One thing that doesn\'t change is your ability to produce these...
February 28th, 2024 16:50 - Falsetto (Introverted Sage)
You are a fantastic writer
Loved it
February 28th, 2024 14:23 - Angel of Mine (Tash Naidoo)
A stunning tribute
Such strength and emotion in every word
Thank you...
February 28th, 2024 14:12 - thinking in the worst way (GON)
A blast from the past
Good to see you gon
Enjoyed reading this
February 28th, 2024 14:07 - Little black heart (Kitty the naughty poet)
Beautiful write kitty
Long may it continue
Enjoyed the read
February 28th, 2024 14:05 - When Pain is Unmanaged (M A R I A)
Welcome
Enjoyed the read
Looking forward to more from you
February 28th, 2024 14:02 - Bigger Picture (Teddy.15)
I want a ride on that bus route
Love how you view things and your...
February 5th, 2024 06:02 - Lighted Candle (Nubianpoet)
Long may it continue Nubian
I agree with the line
\"Maybe it\'s not for...
February 5th, 2024 05:43 - Hypocrites (Dayena)
Great writing
I completely agree with the sentiment
Those who quietly...
February 5th, 2024 02:10 - The Pebble in My Left Knee (YingranZ)
Another rhyming flowing gem
You have a gift
Keep em coming
February 5th, 2024 02:06 - The mozzie (2781)
Magic
We call them midges in Scotland
Kill one and 100 come to the...
February 5th, 2024 02:01 - Friendly Fire (MDStone)
Great rhyme and message
The repeated verse was also a bonus
Hammering...
February 4th, 2024 20:00 - If (Nubianpoet)
Dreams can come true nubian
Enjoyed the read
Glad to discover your...
February 4th, 2024 19:35 - Impostor (Melancholia)
Really enjoyed reading
Rhyme and flow great
Self searching seems...
February 4th, 2024 18:18 - Affinity Boosts (The Dreamer)
I think most can relate to this write
Enjoyed how you put it together...
February 4th, 2024 17:28 - The River (YingranZ)
A stunning debut
Welcome to the site
I look forward to reading more...
February 4th, 2024 17:21 - My Anxiety (Christina8)
Look who found her pen
You turned a difficult subject into a great...
February 4th, 2024 17:20 - Offer a hand (Hzugman)
Love reading you
More great advice
Ta for sharing it
February 3rd, 2024 10:58 - senryu to Gaza (Teddy.15)
A difficult and emotional
Yet you managed to remain neutral
Very...
February 3rd, 2024 10:02 - It\'s all right (2781)
This one is beautifully constructed
Rhyme flow and content all spot on...
February 3rd, 2024 09:53 - As Easy as Breathing (Accidental Poet)
An extremely emotional and touching write
February 3rd, 2024 04:23 - Suicide is not for the weak (Yael)
I\'ve lost a couple of friends to this over the years
Question we are...
February 3rd, 2024 04:16 - Mirror, Mirror (Constant0123456789)
The rhyme and flow are both excellent
Thoroughly enjoyed the read
I\'m...
February 3rd, 2024 04:11 - Root (Introverted Sage)
It reminds me of a silent scream
As if
Don\'t get me started you will...
February 3rd, 2024 04:04 - Well Isn’t That Something? (Teddy.15)
Well if snoop dogg celebrates you
GO TREE
You have a unique style...
February 2nd, 2024 17:36 - Reassurance (Invisible Scars)
Your scars are beginning to show
So maybe your feelings will also
Keep...
February 2nd, 2024 04:47 - Life (Shahla Latifi)
This got me thinking
A challenge for most I guess
Can only speak for...
February 1st, 2024 21:18 - Whispers and Glances: Our Secret Serenade (GeekSusie)
Excellent rhyme and smooth flow
With great content
Long may it continue...
February 1st, 2024 20:29 - Monkeys (RavenaJane)
Tremendous message
Looking forward to reading more from you
February 1st, 2024 16:37 - What\'s in the Bag? (AuburnScribbler)
Superb writing scribbler
The rhyme is amazing and the chorus gives it a...
February 1st, 2024 16:35 - I\'ve Fallen (JuneM)
A fantastic write
How can it be in the mind or a dream if I feel every...
February 1st, 2024 16:18 - cursed lovers (Folklore)
Welcome folklore
A stunning debut
\"Eternal lovers fated to fall apart...
February 1st, 2024 16:08 - Diversity of Thought (Bella Shepard)
Love this write Bella
Full of wisdom with a killer last verse...
February 1st, 2024 15:57 - From The Underside Of The Wild Roses (Teddy.15)
Hi Teddy
That didn\'t really work
Apologies
Was questioning the work...
February 1st, 2024 15:28 - I want (Nicole Pritchard)
Hoping you get what you want
Enjoyed the read
February 1st, 2024 15:20 - From The Underside Of The Wild Roses (Teddy.15)
Ok
I\'ll ask before you snuff it
What does it mean?
Clever as always
February 1st, 2024 15:12 - dance (Lunarchloedip)
Keep dancing and writing
Great read
February 1st, 2024 15:04 - Thank You Love (Introverted Sage)
Super writing as always
Felt every word
Keep that hope
They did not...
February 1st, 2024 15:00 - Cardinals (Christina8)
Great to see a write from you Christina
Although tinged with sadness...
February 1st, 2024 14:49 - Growing. (Lunarchloedip)
Thanks for sharing your memories and growth lunar
Extremely talented for...
November 30th, 2023 08:03 - The Mind (Sam.C)
Great debut sam
Welcome
Looking forward to reading more from you
November 30th, 2023 08:00 - Trigger Warning (Jamiehiggins10)
You will fit in here no problem with such a talent for writing
Welcome...
November 26th, 2023 20:55 - Poet. (Lunarchloedip)
Welcome
You are a natural
Looking forward to reading more from you
November 26th, 2023 20:49 - The eternal pain, does not seem to end (Sealydg)
Welcome
Great though sad debut
Looking forward to reading more from...
November 26th, 2023 20:46 - Last Kiss (Clara)
Today may not seem like a good one
Many more better to come
Keep...
November 26th, 2023 20:44 - Crying eyes (Nicole Pritchard)
Perhaps you could show them this write
Beautiful
November 26th, 2023 20:42
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