Comments on community poems by peto
- An Ode To The Sandwich (Teddy.15)
And served up on a plate
Wire in Teddy
September 28th, 2023 02:40 - Dream Affairs (Maria rk.)
Welcome Maria
Beautiful write
Look forward to reading more from you...
September 28th, 2023 02:37 - Senryu 1 (Teddy.15)
Touche Teddy
September 25th, 2023 12:48 - FOLLOW THE SMILE QUICK ROAD (Bobby O)
Bobby
You done it again boss
No better place to start than the mirror...
September 25th, 2023 12:44 - Seen (Introverted Sage)
Keep reading between the lines sage
But feel I\'m being allowed to do so...
September 25th, 2023 12:34 - Cruelty (Christina8)
Excellent writing Christina
Love the rhyme format content
All of it...
September 25th, 2023 11:23 - All I ever wanted was for you to love me (Niki Oz)
NIK
Seems to have been written a while back
Glad you now value yourself...
September 25th, 2023 11:17 - INSANE (MissD)
Hey miss
This really is a harrowing read
\"Blood seeping out with...
September 25th, 2023 10:59 - Changeling (Introverted Sage)
Another super write sage
Felt a bit like a song
I really enjoyed...
September 25th, 2023 10:51 - I\'ll never understand (Poetic Dan)
Great to see you writing Dan
Always emotional
Always real
Maybe the...
September 15th, 2023 18:14 - Our Secret (Introverted Sage)
Shhhhhhhh
I felt it
You are a great writer sage
Another belter
September 15th, 2023 18:00 - Through the Eyes of Never Enough (GeekSusie)
Tremendous write
In a language I can understand
For a change
With my...
September 15th, 2023 15:09 - Give thanks (BlessedbyGod)
Your name suggests tremendous faith
As do these words
Strong message...
September 15th, 2023 10:34 - The Whys of Jack and Jill (Pop64)
Jack and jill
Went up the hill
To fetch a pail of water
Jill forgot...
September 15th, 2023 10:19 - FATED HERO FAKED (Bobby O)
Great read Bobby
Sounds really personal rather than historical
Like a...
September 15th, 2023 10:02 - Doggy Style (Teddy.15)
Hi Teddy
Want to buy a bag?
It\'s the little things isn\'t it
Great...
September 15th, 2023 09:57 - No one (Justagirlinasadworld)
Welcome
Where your voice fails your pen shines
Now you have the...
September 14th, 2023 15:09 - MONK and MY AUNT (Bobby O)
Such a unique delivery it captivates the reader
Think parisab said it...
September 14th, 2023 14:58 - Fire (Christina8)
Yea
Welcome back Christina
And with a belter
Missed your writing
A...
September 14th, 2023 14:08 - Look deeper (Niki Oz)
Oh NIK
This is dynamite
The dying stars line is sensational
Read and...
September 14th, 2023 13:38 - The Sound of Darkness (Neville)
I expected this to go in a completely different direction
Going by the...
September 14th, 2023 08:56 - The Death of Love (Teddy.15)
I\'m struggling to comment on this
Let\'s just say I\'m glad I can
September 14th, 2023 08:53 - Magic (Peto)
Many thanks Christina
Always a pleasure to see you here
And always so...
September 14th, 2023 08:12 - Master of One (Introverted Sage)
10 out of 10
September 14th, 2023 05:01 - RED LIPSTICK (Purplecherry)
What your lipstick covers up
Your pen reveals
Also enjoyed the killer...
September 12th, 2023 05:42 - Doctor\'s Orders (Teddy.15)
Ah dr feelgood
Lifts your spirits and never let\'s you leave without a...
September 12th, 2023 01:14 - Be One This Day (9-11 rememberance) (Pop64)
This is such a heart wrenching read
Hopefully you find a little...
September 11th, 2023 17:23 - My Little Fantasy (Bella Shepard)
Lovely to read as per
But you leave us wondering what the fantasy could...
September 11th, 2023 15:31 - Mask Off (Introverted Sage)
Another great thought provoking read
\"Is it your heart or your weapons...
September 10th, 2023 17:22 - Knowing I Saw Enough (Teddy.15)
Maybe you could take some consolation knowing your words let the rest of...
September 10th, 2023 17:18 - The Human Heart (Buzzybee4you)
Hi buzzy
When you want to write do it
Look what came from this
A well...
September 10th, 2023 12:18 - Gone (Elle King)
Welcome Elle
Great debut
Got a song vibe to it
Very smooth
Title...
September 10th, 2023 09:03 - When We Are One (Bella Shepard)
Like it started with your dreams or wishes for the world
Then ended with...
September 10th, 2023 07:39 - Lost in Time (Introverted Sage)
Ah sage
It flows and rhymes so smoothly the reader is at the end almost...
September 10th, 2023 07:20 - Even a Clueless Squirrel May Climb (Bobby O)
Great memory Bobby
Thanks for sharing such a beautiful write
The one...
September 10th, 2023 07:16 - HAUNTED (LIZ)
\"You feed a crave i have\'
Hints at addiction
Your writing is...
September 10th, 2023 07:08 - uncertain and uncomfortable but also blissful and serene (Poetic Dan)
Dan THE man
You have always been a tremendous example
Given it away to...
September 9th, 2023 05:15 - Eat me away (Anonymous_Poet)
Welcome
Don\'t understand the apology
Fantastic start
Looking forward...
September 9th, 2023 05:01 - The Girl in the Chain Mail Dress (Houchins.linda)
Tremendous rhyme and flow
Superb debut
Looking forward to reading more...
September 9th, 2023 04:44 - Empty (Miss_Dreamer)
Tremendous write
I think we have all felt that way at some point
Almost...
September 9th, 2023 04:36 - What Does it Take (Introverted Sage)
You really are on fire
Superb write
Amazing rhyme
The content...
September 9th, 2023 04:31 - CONNECTION (Bobby O)
Didn\'t think you could top the picture
Then you lifted your pen
September 9th, 2023 04:28 - In Silence and Disbelief (Teddy.15)
Empathy at it\'s finest Teddy
You are a world child
I can\'t really add...
September 9th, 2023 04:26 - TIRED (LIZ)
Obviously exhausting LIZ
Please don\'t give up on the hoping and caring...
September 8th, 2023 01:46 - Jungle Madness (Trin)
\"Survival presumes we have something to live for \"
You certainly do...
September 7th, 2023 16:47 - Lacrime (Teddy.15)
Bloodshot and teary
Says more than a million words could
Deepest...
September 7th, 2023 16:34 - Forget me nots (Alana dart)
Welcome Alana
Keep writing keep thriving
Looking forward to reading...
September 7th, 2023 14:51 - Whispered (Introverted Sage)
You keep getting better
No mean feat consideration previous writes
This...
September 7th, 2023 12:04 - Real (Peto)
Thank you sage
I really enjoy your insight
\"Other worldly magical...
September 7th, 2023 11:54 - ~MY FAV QUOTES (ChrisLynđź•Š)
Enjoyed your take on these
One of my favs has to be
Give time...
September 7th, 2023 04:36 - The Fool (LynnBlackwell)
A brilliant read
Could almost hear the music
\"Without the glove...
September 7th, 2023 03:57 - Creep (Elle King)
Welcome Elle
Great start
Nice format
Keep writing and watch the...
September 6th, 2023 10:28 - Unprecedented (Doggerel Dave)
Great rhyme with even better content
The last 2 lines particularly...
September 6th, 2023 09:08 - A Sad Run (A.D. Small)
Although this is sad
I really enjoyed how you put it together
Also a...
September 6th, 2023 05:14 - Find Myself (Bella Shepard)
Oh i don\'t think you will have to look very far to find your soul
It...
September 6th, 2023 05:07 - My Destined Song (Destined Perspectives)
Uplifting positive
Unfortunately true for many
Great example...
September 6th, 2023 04:54 - My Me (Introverted Sage)
Top form yet again
I did wonder if it should have read
\"Human...
September 6th, 2023 04:47 - SHE...OLD ME (MissD)
I\'ve got a feeling she is still many of these things
Great read...
September 6th, 2023 04:42 - The whole enchilada (Hzugman)
I love your gratitude and zest for life
Hope this does not sound...
September 6th, 2023 04:36 - Invention of Laughter (Teddy.15)
I\'d go into the past an hour
Get back the time I\'ve already been...
September 6th, 2023 04:21 - Morning Breaks (Bella Shepard)
Rhyme rhythm and flow are tremendous
Well worth waiting for
Superb...
September 3rd, 2023 10:32 - ANY TIME (Suetah)
Welcome
Beautiful write
And I believe every word
Looking forward to...
September 3rd, 2023 09:38 - My girl, my girl, my girl (Hzugman)
Old school magic
You are a lucky man
And I\'m sure she is a lucky...
September 3rd, 2023 09:36 - Empty Sky (Teddy.15)
That is some memory Teddy
Haunts your dreams
So much said in such...
September 3rd, 2023 03:41 - A fault In my code (Zaeli)
I believe we all have our faults Azile
When we recognize them
We are...
September 3rd, 2023 02:19 - I Can Only Blame Myself (13LaurenD)
Love is blind Lauren
Can only look the other way for so long
You will...
September 3rd, 2023 01:14 - A change of heart (Kai-leah)
Welcome kai
Great debut
Look forward to reading more from you
September 3rd, 2023 00:51 - COLD IN MY BONES (MissD)
Nicely done mrs
Although the last line in your notes chilled me to the...
September 3rd, 2023 00:45 - Apexed (Introverted Sage)
4th line 1st verse
You succeeded sage
Super write
0pleasure to read
September 3rd, 2023 00:37 - A Fallen Leaf (Cait3180)
Welcome to the site cait
Powerful emotional write
\"I can no longer go...
September 1st, 2023 14:45 - Resuscitating My Heart (Destined Perspectives)
Superb content once again
When in a similar situation it was only then I...
September 1st, 2023 11:01 - Turquoise and Indigo Spools of Thread (Destined Perspectives)
The first two lines really capture the reader making them want to continue...
September 1st, 2023 07:34 - Lunar (Peto)
Lol I took a couple of pics also
Not great results
Thanks for the...
September 1st, 2023 06:06 - Lunar (Peto)
Not the only one LIZ
Couldn\'t help but admire it
I don\'t know what...
September 1st, 2023 05:33 - Dear future me, (Sueellennicole)
This has a vibe of someone moving on but having to leave another...
September 1st, 2023 04:50 - MENTOR’s HONOR (Bobby O)
As a scot I\'ve always admired the pipes and drums
The magic created from...
September 1st, 2023 04:32 - Wandering (Introverted Sage)
Magical again
The 2nd last verse is stunning
A pleasure to read
August 31st, 2023 16:39 - Run Away (Cali Kittana)
Sad write
I\'m sure there is more to come from you regarding this...
August 31st, 2023 16:31 - Loves lost wars (Lostinfantasy)
Although the content is sad
The rhyme is great
Hopefully you found it...
August 31st, 2023 14:55 - DAYS by Phyllis Phipps ( Undertherainbow) (Undertherainbow)
Welcome to the site
Great debut
Such peaceful imagery
Looking...
August 31st, 2023 11:35 - LOVE IS A DEAD ANGEL STUFFED WITH WINE AND BLOOD (MissD)
More wings
You are flying
\"Vodka slipped from her blue eyes\"
I enjoy...
August 31st, 2023 05:49 - Monster (Sueellennicole)
Welcome to the site
A fantastic debut with great content
The rhyme is...
August 31st, 2023 03:32 - Somewhere in the middle (Wazi)
Welcome wazi
I don\'t think we can be careful who we fall for
The heart...
August 30th, 2023 15:55 - one small thing a vulcano (Amysliterature)
\"Why should I ever feel proud of myself\"
Talent for writing is a good...
August 30th, 2023 14:05 - dear ember (Daizy_graham)
Welcome
An ember can burst into flames again at any moment
Extremely...
August 30th, 2023 12:09 - RAIN (MissD)
Welcome mrs.D
Some great lines in this
\" tied in black ribbons to hold...
August 30th, 2023 09:23 - I need your love (Peto)
Christina
You really do give me a lift with such kindness
Couldn\'t do...
August 30th, 2023 09:15 - I\'ll Cry with the Angels (Pop64)
A beautiful tribute
To have this level of feeling is a gift
Though the...
August 30th, 2023 08:40 - Lonely Heroes (Buzzybee4you)
Excellent rhyme
Particularly enjoyed the skeleton lines
And the entire...
August 30th, 2023 05:15 - THE TRUTH ISÂ (LIZ)
Truth in the first line
Dare in the last
Love oozes from your pen...
August 30th, 2023 05:09 - Tomboy (Destined Perspectives)
Read this a couple of times
Almost afraid to comment as I dread to think...
August 30th, 2023 05:03 - Being (Bella Shepard)
Are we human beings
Or human becoming
Short sharp and thought...
August 29th, 2023 13:06 - Inclucde every item (Hzugman)
Counting our blessings can\'t help but please ya
Thanks for the reminder...
August 29th, 2023 09:18 - Plastic Smile (SHELLY)
Such a sad situation
The 3rd verse is particularly telling
Great and...
August 29th, 2023 05:26 - NOT THE QUEEN (Nephilim56)
Tremendous write
Enjoyed the rhyme but it\'s the content that grabbed...
August 29th, 2023 05:22 - Beans (GillyFitz)
Super rhyme
I first started writing when a teacher in primary school put...
August 29th, 2023 05:05 - Standing Secret (Introverted Sage)
Keep dancing
Superb last verse
August 29th, 2023 04:57 - SCARS AND WOUNDS (MENTAL HEALTH) (PassionatePoetess)
Passionate indeed
When in this position I find it hard enough to get...
August 29th, 2023 04:54 - Sequenced (Introverted Sage)
Brilliant write
The rhymes work for the reader so hopefully for you...
August 22nd, 2023 08:17 - Inanna’s Descent (Vicecream)
This is a great read
Not sure what is holding you back
One day...
August 14th, 2023 18:05
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