Comments on community poems by peto
- When Pain is Unmanaged  (M A R I A) 
Welcome 
Enjoyed the read 
Looking forward to more from you 
 February 28th, 2024 14:02
- Bigger Picture (Teddy.15) 
I want a ride on that bus route
Love how you view things and your...
 February 5th, 2024 06:02
- Hypocrites  (Dayena) 
Great writing 
I completely agree with the sentiment 
Those who quietly...
 February 5th, 2024 02:10
- The Pebble in My Left Knee (YingranZ) 
Another rhyming flowing gem
You have a gift 
Keep em coming 
 February 5th, 2024 02:06
- The mozzie  (2781) 
Magic
We call them midges in Scotland 
Kill one and 100 come to the...
 February 5th, 2024 02:01
- Friendly Fire (MDStone) 
Great rhyme and message 
The repeated verse was also a bonus
Hammering...
 February 4th, 2024 20:00
- Impostor (Melancholia) 
Really enjoyed reading 
Rhyme and flow great 
Self searching seems...
 February 4th, 2024 18:18
- Affinity Boosts (The Dreamer) 
I think most can relate to this write 
Enjoyed how you put it together...
 February 4th, 2024 17:28
- The River (YingranZ) 
A stunning debut 
Welcome to the site 
I look forward to reading more...
 February 4th, 2024 17:21
- My Anxiety (Christina8) 
Look who found her pen
You turned a difficult subject into a great...
 February 4th, 2024 17:20
- Offer a hand (Hzugman) 
Love reading you 
More great advice 
Ta for sharing it 
 February 3rd, 2024 10:58
- senryu to Gaza  (Teddy.15) 
A difficult and emotional 
Yet you managed to remain neutral 
Very...
 February 3rd, 2024 10:02
- It\'s all right (2781) 
This one is beautifully constructed 
Rhyme flow and content all spot on...
 February 3rd, 2024 09:53
- Suicide is not for the weak (Yael Olalde-Garcia) 
I\'ve lost a couple of friends to this over the years 
Question we are...
 February 3rd, 2024 04:16
- Mirror, Mirror (Constant0123456789) 
The rhyme and flow are both excellent 
Thoroughly enjoyed the read 
I\'m...
 February 3rd, 2024 04:11
- Root  (Introverted Sage) 
It reminds me of a silent scream 
As if
Don\'t get me started you will...
 February 3rd, 2024 04:04
- Well Isn’t That Something? (Teddy.15) 
Well if snoop dogg celebrates you 
GO TREE
You have a unique style...
 February 2nd, 2024 17:36
- Reassurance (Invisible Scars) 
Your scars are beginning to show 
So maybe your feelings will also
Keep...
 February 2nd, 2024 04:47
- Life (Shahla Latifi) 
This got me thinking 
A challenge for most I guess 
Can only speak for...
 February 1st, 2024 21:18
- Whispers and Glances: Our Secret Serenade (GeekSusie) 
Excellent rhyme and smooth flow
With great content 
Long may it continue...
 February 1st, 2024 20:29
- Monkeys (RavenaJane) 
Tremendous message 
Looking forward to reading more from you 
 February 1st, 2024 16:37
- What\'s in the Bag? (AuburnScribbler) 
Superb writing scribbler 
The rhyme is amazing and the chorus gives it a...
 February 1st, 2024 16:35
- cursed lovers (Folklore) 
Welcome folklore 
A stunning debut 
\"Eternal lovers fated to fall apart...
 February 1st, 2024 16:08
- Diversity of Thought (Bella Shepard) 
Love this write Bella 
Full of wisdom with a killer last verse...
 February 1st, 2024 15:57
- From The Underside Of The Wild Roses  (Teddy.15) 
Hi Teddy 
That didn\'t really work 
Apologies 
Was questioning the work...
 February 1st, 2024 15:28
- I want  (Nicole Pritchard) 
Hoping you get what you want 
Enjoyed the read 
 February 1st, 2024 15:20
- From The Underside Of The Wild Roses  (Teddy.15) 
Ok
I\'ll ask before you snuff it
What does it mean?
Clever as always 
 February 1st, 2024 15:12
- dance (Lunarchloedip) 
Keep dancing and writing 
Great read 
 February 1st, 2024 15:04
- Thank You Love  (Introverted Sage) 
Super writing as always 
Felt every word 
Keep that hope 
They did not...
 February 1st, 2024 15:00
- Cardinals (Christina8) 
Great to see a write from you Christina 
Although tinged with sadness...
 February 1st, 2024 14:49
- Growing. (Lunarchloedip) 
Thanks for sharing your memories and growth lunar
Extremely talented for...
 November 30th, 2023 08:03
- The Mind (Sam.C) 
Great debut sam
Welcome 
Looking forward to reading more from you 
 November 30th, 2023 08:00
- Trigger Warning (Jamiehiggins10) 
You will fit in here no problem with such a talent for writing 
Welcome...
 November 26th, 2023 20:55
- Poet. (Lunarchloedip) 
Welcome 
You are a natural 
Looking forward to reading more from you 
 November 26th, 2023 20:49
- The eternal pain, does not seem to end (Sealydg) 
Welcome 
Great though sad debut 
Looking forward to reading more from...
 November 26th, 2023 20:46
- Last Kiss  (Clara) 
Today may not seem like a good one
Many more better to come 
Keep...
 November 26th, 2023 20:44
- Crying eyes (Nicole Pritchard) 
Perhaps you could show them this write 
Beautiful 
 November 26th, 2023 20:42
- Break ups (Hey!) 
An epic well worth the read 
Particularly enjoyed number 5
Keep lifting...
 November 26th, 2023 20:38
- Time Would Tell.. (AnnaB.) 
Give time time Anna 
Feels like hell at the time 
Que sera sera 
 November 26th, 2023 20:32
- Untouched  (Arial) 
Great format 
Touching and emotional 
 November 26th, 2023 20:30
- I think I\'m still in love with you. (Gracie.poetry) 
Ouch
At least it made for a great write
Their loss
Keep em coming 
 November 26th, 2023 20:27
- In The Hollow Of My Chest  (Elle King) 
Short sharp with a great flow 
Thoroughly enjoyed the read 
 November 26th, 2023 20:22
- Frozen Beauty  (Gray0328) 
The 1st verse is stunning and captures the reader 
Great read with...
 November 26th, 2023 20:20
- Me (The Thing) (Jaxxie) 
Loved the rhyme and flow 
Great read 
 November 26th, 2023 20:16
- Break  (Introverted Sage) 
Most telling line for me was
\"I think I should have continued the...
 November 26th, 2023 20:13
- Who gets helped (Hzugman) 
Give it away to keep it
It does 10 times for you what it does for them...
 October 27th, 2023 09:56
- S E L F (AnnaB.) 
Welcome Anna
Great start with a wonderful message 
Looking forward to...
 October 26th, 2023 23:00
- The Birth of Art (Thomas W Case) 
I can\'t create without it
Great descriptive writing 
 October 26th, 2023 15:07
- Senryu 1  (Teddy.15) 
Or hers
Millionaire 
 October 26th, 2023 05:38
- Grace (Introverted Sage) 
Go sage
Enjoy every second of it
I was wondering where you had gone...
 October 26th, 2023 05:36
- POETIC JUSTICE (LIZ) 
Well worth the wait 
A tremendous confession draped in rhyme 
Extremely...
 October 26th, 2023 05:32
- And All Before Our Awakening (Neville) 
Neville 
I hope you find some answers 
Dusk arising is always so kind...
 October 26th, 2023 05:09
- Feeling  (Peto) 
Many thanks Thomas 
 October 26th, 2023 05:00
- Day After Killing an Angel- The little warrior (Meera Mere) 
You have a unique style of writing 
Vivid imagery 
Love the title 
Like...
 October 23rd, 2023 10:23
- Mission  (Peto) 
Thank you Christina 
Thought it a bit gory for comments 
Ta for braving...
 October 23rd, 2023 08:56
- A FOREVER DOOM (Bobby O) 
You don\'t miss and hit the wall Bobby 
I enjoyed it as a whole but the...
 October 23rd, 2023 05:17
- I Have You (Christina8) 
Look who found her pen
I\'m sure he is just as glad 
Great to see you...
 October 23rd, 2023 05:02
- My Last Love Letter / Mocking Bird’s Last Flight (Maria rk.) 
Super write Maria
Powerful and touching 
As it says
There is something...
 October 22nd, 2023 16:49
- That which is really valuable (Hzugman) 
And can\'t rest without them 
Truly enjoy your writing sir
Thank you my...
 October 22nd, 2023 12:13
- Answers (Nicolerobinson) 
You are on a roll nicole 
So good to see you back writing 
You were good...
 October 22nd, 2023 11:44
- Old Friend Muse (Garth Rakumakoe) 
And all without the jet lag
Great to see a write from you Garth 
 October 22nd, 2023 11:34
- Here’s Your Two Bloody Knocks (A Ghost’s Response) (AuburnScribbler) 
Excellent write scribbler 
I\'m also a fan of the season and day
My...
 October 22nd, 2023 11:22
- A Night without stars (Meera Mere) 
Super use of language 
Welcome 
I look forward to reading more from you 
 October 22nd, 2023 11:15
- What a life (Thomas W Case) 
Great memories thanks for sharing them
And when we see such champions we...
 October 22nd, 2023 11:12
- I ONLY WANTED YOU (Irislioness) 
Lovely content 
The flow rhyme and rhythm are spot on 
Looking forward...
 October 22nd, 2023 11:09
- The key (BlessedbyGod) 
Very lucky lady
And my bet
He is every bit as fortunate 
Beautiful...
 October 22nd, 2023 11:05
- San Francisco’s Waiting (Teddy.15) 
What a wonderful ending Teddy 
Didn\'t see it coming 
Beautiful write 
 October 22nd, 2023 11:01
- The fight within yourself you do not know if you can win.  (Niki Oz) 
I\'m glad you posted notes Niki
Your writing is so believable the reader...
 October 15th, 2023 23:56
- Dear Friend, (NinjaGirl) 
Show him this ninja
I\'m sure he would get some comfort from it
 October 15th, 2023 13:19
- ON MY FINAL DAY☁️ (ChrisLyn🕊) 
Your notes are very honourable 
This leaves me wondering what your...
 October 15th, 2023 13:17
- More Ways Than One (Elizabetttyyy) 
Been there Betty 
Welcome to the site
When you discover or face whatever...
 October 15th, 2023 13:15
- Into The Wrinkles of The Great Moon. (Teddy.15) 
Your word choices in this one are spectacular Teddy 
Loved it 
 October 15th, 2023 13:11
- Spun (Introverted Sage) 
I can\'t help but think this is work related 
\" got a new peculiar bevel...
 October 15th, 2023 13:08
- EVERYTHING IS MEANINGLESS (Cerry) 
Perhaps we could use the time we have to try to help others in their...
 October 15th, 2023 13:04
- Blue (Novaa) 
Your mind seems sharp to me
Wouldn\'t dream of misleading it
Enjoyed the...
 October 15th, 2023 13:01
- Seedy Town Blues (Thomas W Case) 
Enjoyed the read 
Nicely done 
 October 15th, 2023 12:54
- “You’re done, I wish” (Dropsofme) 
Welcome drops 
Great start 
Nice rhyme and content 
Looking forward to...
 October 14th, 2023 09:00
- Orpheus Rebooted (Thomas W Case) 
Great write Thomas 
Really glad to discover your writing 
Sounds like a...
 October 14th, 2023 00:50
- Paper Waves  (Introverted Sage) 
Top form sage
I feel the pain but also your strength 
Your rhyming is...
 October 14th, 2023 00:40
- Deep Feeling  (Introverted Sage) 
You showing yourself sage 
PERFECT 
No more hiding 
I really love...
 October 14th, 2023 00:37
- Insidious Change  (Sassy Lou) 
The only constant is chance 
Thoroughly enjoyed the read 
 October 13th, 2023 17:13
- A Letter From Dante To Me  (Teddy.15) 
I know how much you admire dante
So hardly a surprise he brought the best...
 October 13th, 2023 15:43
- TALK (JimmyWriteOn) 
Tremendous write Jimmy 
Rhyme rhythm flow all spot on
Fantastic message...
 October 13th, 2023 14:47
- Wordy hands  (Elina Alamani) 
Really enjoyed this debut
Welcome 
If it was all about the hands they...
 October 13th, 2023 13:36
- The Fig Tree and the Bird (Parisab) 
Parisab
I always look forward to your writes
As they are always full of...
 October 13th, 2023 10:12
- Make it stop (Niki Oz) 
Such a painful read niki
If you ever figure that out
Please let me know...
 October 12th, 2023 18:01
- JAZZ IS LIFE ( updated version) (Bobby O) 
Your passion is felt Bobby 
A great read with some classics mentioned 
A...
 October 12th, 2023 14:39
- Ode to the Derrière: A Cheeky Love Affair (GeekSusie) 
Couldn\'t agree more 
Ta for the giggle
Enjoy your writing 
 October 12th, 2023 14:32
- Just do it (Hzugman) 
My daily dose of wisdom 
Many thanks 
 October 12th, 2023 14:25
- Real love (BlessedbyGod) 
Beautiful write 
Long may it continue 
 October 12th, 2023 14:19
- I Rise Again in New Hope (Tanisha Aggarwal) 
Sounds like the real deal 
Take a chance maybe?
Glad to discover your...
 October 12th, 2023 14:12
-   It May Blow Me In The Right Direction (Teddy.15) 
You lady
Are already heading in the right direction 
Hope it doesn\'t...
 October 12th, 2023 14:10
- Voices in the Corridor  (Introverted Sage) 
Keep sharing 
It does help
Hell of a write 
Got me wondering what the...
 October 12th, 2023 14:07
- I am a boy (Anna_x_life) 
Stunning write Anna
Rhyme and flow are spot on
Last 2 verses turn it...
 October 11th, 2023 07:45
- When in Rome (Hzugman) 
Many happy returns 
I hope you had a great day 
 October 11th, 2023 07:37
- Autumnal Witherings  (Carly) 
This is a stunning debut Carly
Rhyme rhythm flow all immaculate 
Looking...
 October 2nd, 2023 11:58
- closer (Anji x) 
Welcome anji 
Great start 
Walk on
Looking forward to reading more from...
 October 2nd, 2023 10:53
- It\'s better to laugh than to cry (Hzugman) 
Excellent write 
Great message 
Delivered so smoothly 
 October 2nd, 2023 10:47
- God has a plan (BlessedbyGod) 
Almost like a modern day hymn
Inspiring 
You got me writing for tomorrow...
 October 2nd, 2023 10:43
- I float (prose poetry) (Weep little lion girl) 
Stunning write 
Keep sharing like this and be known completely 
Or at...
 October 2nd, 2023 10:33
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