Comments on community poems by peto
- Feeling (Peto)
Many thanks Thomas
October 26th, 2023 05:00 - Day After Killing an Angel- The little warrior (Meera Mere)
You have a unique style of writing
Vivid imagery
Love the title
Like...
October 23rd, 2023 10:23 - Mission (Peto)
Thank you Christina
Thought it a bit gory for comments
Ta for braving...
October 23rd, 2023 08:56 - A FOREVER DOOM (Bobby O)
You don\'t miss and hit the wall Bobby
I enjoyed it as a whole but the...
October 23rd, 2023 05:17 - I Have You (Christina8)
Look who found her pen
I\'m sure he is just as glad
Great to see you...
October 23rd, 2023 05:02 - My Last Love Letter / Mocking Bird’s Last Flight (Maria rk.)
Super write Maria
Powerful and touching
As it says
There is something...
October 22nd, 2023 16:49 - That which is really valuable (Hzugman)
And can\'t rest without them
Truly enjoy your writing sir
Thank you my...
October 22nd, 2023 12:13 - Answers (Nicolerobinson)
You are on a roll nicole
So good to see you back writing
You were good...
October 22nd, 2023 11:44 - Old Friend Muse (Garth Rakumakoe)
And all without the jet lag
Great to see a write from you Garth
October 22nd, 2023 11:34 - Here’s Your Two Bloody Knocks (A Ghost’s Response) (AuburnScribbler)
Excellent write scribbler
I\'m also a fan of the season and day
My...
October 22nd, 2023 11:22 - A Night without stars (Meera Mere)
Super use of language
Welcome
I look forward to reading more from you
October 22nd, 2023 11:15 - What a life (Thomas W Case)
Great memories thanks for sharing them
And when we see such champions we...
October 22nd, 2023 11:12 - I ONLY WANTED YOU (Irislioness)
Lovely content
The flow rhyme and rhythm are spot on
Looking forward...
October 22nd, 2023 11:09 - The key (BlessedbyGod)
Very lucky lady
And my bet
He is every bit as fortunate
Beautiful...
October 22nd, 2023 11:05 - San Francisco’s Waiting (Teddy.15)
What a wonderful ending Teddy
Didn\'t see it coming
Beautiful write
October 22nd, 2023 11:01 - The fight within yourself you do not know if you can win. (Niki Oz)
I\'m glad you posted notes Niki
Your writing is so believable the reader...
October 15th, 2023 23:56 - Dear Friend, (NinjaGirl)
Show him this ninja
I\'m sure he would get some comfort from it
October 15th, 2023 13:19 - ON MY FINAL DAY☁️ (ChrisLyn🕊)
Your notes are very honourable
This leaves me wondering what your...
October 15th, 2023 13:17 - More Ways Than One (Elizabetttyyy)
Been there Betty
Welcome to the site
When you discover or face whatever...
October 15th, 2023 13:15 - Into The Wrinkles of The Great Moon. (Teddy.15)
Your word choices in this one are spectacular Teddy
Loved it
October 15th, 2023 13:11 - Spun (Introverted Sage)
I can\'t help but think this is work related
\" got a new peculiar bevel...
October 15th, 2023 13:08 - EVERYTHING IS MEANINGLESS (Cerry)
Perhaps we could use the time we have to try to help others in their...
October 15th, 2023 13:04 - Blue (Novaa)
Your mind seems sharp to me
Wouldn\'t dream of misleading it
Enjoyed the...
October 15th, 2023 13:01 - Seedy Town Blues (Thomas W Case)
Enjoyed the read
Nicely done
October 15th, 2023 12:54 - “You’re done, I wish” (Dropsofme)
Welcome drops
Great start
Nice rhyme and content
Looking forward to...
October 14th, 2023 09:00 - Orpheus Rebooted (Thomas W Case)
Great write Thomas
Really glad to discover your writing
Sounds like a...
October 14th, 2023 00:50 - Paper Waves (Introverted Sage)
Top form sage
I feel the pain but also your strength
Your rhyming is...
October 14th, 2023 00:40 - Deep Feeling (Introverted Sage)
You showing yourself sage
PERFECT
No more hiding
I really love...
October 14th, 2023 00:37 - Insidious Change (Sassy Lou)
The only constant is chance
Thoroughly enjoyed the read
October 13th, 2023 17:13 - A Letter From Dante To Me (Teddy.15)
I know how much you admire dante
So hardly a surprise he brought the best...
October 13th, 2023 15:43 - TALK (JimmyWriteOn)
Tremendous write Jimmy
Rhyme rhythm flow all spot on
Fantastic message...
October 13th, 2023 14:47 - Wordy hands (Elina Alamani)
Really enjoyed this debut
Welcome
If it was all about the hands they...
October 13th, 2023 13:36 - The Fig Tree and the Bird (Parisab)
Parisab
I always look forward to your writes
As they are always full of...
October 13th, 2023 10:12 - Make it stop (Niki Oz)
Such a painful read niki
If you ever figure that out
Please let me know...
October 12th, 2023 18:01 - JAZZ IS LIFE ( updated version) (Bobby O)
Your passion is felt Bobby
A great read with some classics mentioned
A...
October 12th, 2023 14:39 - Ode to the Derrière: A Cheeky Love Affair (GeekSusie)
Couldn\'t agree more
Ta for the giggle
Enjoy your writing
October 12th, 2023 14:32 - Just do it (Hzugman)
My daily dose of wisdom
Many thanks
October 12th, 2023 14:25 - Real love (BlessedbyGod)
Beautiful write
Long may it continue
October 12th, 2023 14:19 - I Rise Again in New Hope (Tanisha Aggarwal)
Sounds like the real deal
Take a chance maybe?
Glad to discover your...
October 12th, 2023 14:12 - It May Blow Me In The Right Direction (Teddy.15)
You lady
Are already heading in the right direction
Hope it doesn\'t...
October 12th, 2023 14:10 - Voices in the Corridor (Introverted Sage)
Keep sharing
It does help
Hell of a write
Got me wondering what the...
October 12th, 2023 14:07 - I am a boy (Anna_x_life)
Stunning write Anna
Rhyme and flow are spot on
Last 2 verses turn it...
October 11th, 2023 07:45 - When in Rome (Hzugman)
Many happy returns
I hope you had a great day
October 11th, 2023 07:37 - Autumnal Witherings (Carly)
This is a stunning debut Carly
Rhyme rhythm flow all immaculate
Looking...
October 2nd, 2023 11:58 - closer (Anji x)
Welcome anji
Great start
Walk on
Looking forward to reading more from...
October 2nd, 2023 10:53 - It\'s better to laugh than to cry (Hzugman)
Excellent write
Great message
Delivered so smoothly
October 2nd, 2023 10:47 - God has a plan (BlessedbyGod)
Almost like a modern day hymn
Inspiring
You got me writing for tomorrow...
October 2nd, 2023 10:43 - I float (prose poetry) (Weep little lion girl)
Stunning write
Keep sharing like this and be known completely
Or at...
October 2nd, 2023 10:33 - Autumn\'s Bow (Teddy.15)
You capture it very well with so few words
Hidden stars
Whirling winds...
October 2nd, 2023 10:24 - Credit (2781)
Enjoyed the read
When they press the reset button
I hope to have some...
October 2nd, 2023 10:19 - Asked Twice (Introverted Sage)
This one reads like a long hard look at oneself
\":helps me unload:
\"...
October 2nd, 2023 10:14 - Colors of a Silent Crush (GeekSusie)
Absolutely love your rhyme and rhythm
Fantastic flowing writing
As for...
September 30th, 2023 08:57 - First (Peto)
You give me too much credit Christina
I never know where I\'m going when...
September 30th, 2023 08:53 - The Truth (Christina8)
That scared kid seems long gone
And in place here you stand
Dealing...
September 29th, 2023 13:53 - Retreat or Repeat: An American Quandary (GeekSusie)
Sensational delivery
Brilliant read
Love the rhyme and rhythm
Great...
September 28th, 2023 15:29 - I am asking for it (Amysliterature)
Keep sharing your literature Amy
I for one enjoy reading it
September 28th, 2023 14:22 - Earth and Gods (Goddess of the Mist)
Can\'t believe I\'m first to view this
Tremendous rhyme rhythm and flow...
September 28th, 2023 13:32 - Poetic Suicide (Maria rk.)
Perhaps a poetic LIFE is more your speed
Very talented
Strong message...
September 28th, 2023 09:53 - Lillie\'s Gratitude (Laylemon)
Welcome lemon
Fantastic debut
Pleasure to read
Not surprised you get...
September 28th, 2023 08:25 - An Ode To The Sandwich (Teddy.15)
And served up on a plate
Wire in Teddy
September 28th, 2023 02:40 - Dream Affairs (Maria rk.)
Welcome Maria
Beautiful write
Look forward to reading more from you...
September 28th, 2023 02:37 - Senryu 1 (Teddy.15)
Touche Teddy
September 25th, 2023 12:48 - FOLLOW THE SMILE QUICK ROAD (Bobby O)
Bobby
You done it again boss
No better place to start than the mirror...
September 25th, 2023 12:44 - Seen (Introverted Sage)
Keep reading between the lines sage
But feel I\'m being allowed to do so...
September 25th, 2023 12:34 - Cruelty (Christina8)
Excellent writing Christina
Love the rhyme format content
All of it...
September 25th, 2023 11:23 - All I ever wanted was for you to love me (Niki Oz)
NIK
Seems to have been written a while back
Glad you now value yourself...
September 25th, 2023 11:17 - Changeling (Introverted Sage)
Another super write sage
Felt a bit like a song
I really enjoyed...
September 25th, 2023 10:51 - I\'ll never understand (Poetic Dan)
Great to see you writing Dan
Always emotional
Always real
Maybe the...
September 15th, 2023 18:14 - Our Secret (Introverted Sage)
Shhhhhhhh
I felt it
You are a great writer sage
Another belter
September 15th, 2023 18:00 - Through the Eyes of Never Enough (GeekSusie)
Tremendous write
In a language I can understand
For a change
With my...
September 15th, 2023 15:09 - Give thanks (BlessedbyGod)
Your name suggests tremendous faith
As do these words
Strong message...
September 15th, 2023 10:34 - The Whys of Jack and Jill (Pop64)
Jack and jill
Went up the hill
To fetch a pail of water
Jill forgot...
September 15th, 2023 10:19 - FATED HERO FAKED (Bobby O)
Great read Bobby
Sounds really personal rather than historical
Like a...
September 15th, 2023 10:02 - Doggy Style (Teddy.15)
Hi Teddy
Want to buy a bag?
It\'s the little things isn\'t it
Great...
September 15th, 2023 09:57 - No one (Justagirlinasadworld)
Welcome
Where your voice fails your pen shines
Now you have the...
September 14th, 2023 15:09 - MONK and MY AUNT (Bobby O)
Such a unique delivery it captivates the reader
Think parisab said it...
September 14th, 2023 14:58 - Fire (Christina8)
Yea
Welcome back Christina
And with a belter
Missed your writing
A...
September 14th, 2023 14:08 - Look deeper (Niki Oz)
Oh NIK
This is dynamite
The dying stars line is sensational
Read and...
September 14th, 2023 13:38 - The Sound of Darkness (Neville)
I expected this to go in a completely different direction
Going by the...
September 14th, 2023 08:56 - The Death of Love (Teddy.15)
I\'m struggling to comment on this
Let\'s just say I\'m glad I can
September 14th, 2023 08:53 - Magic (Peto)
Many thanks Christina
Always a pleasure to see you here
And always so...
September 14th, 2023 08:12 - Master of One (Introverted Sage)
10 out of 10
September 14th, 2023 05:01 - RED LIPSTICK (Purplecherry)
What your lipstick covers up
Your pen reveals
Also enjoyed the killer...
September 12th, 2023 05:42 - Doctor\'s Orders (Teddy.15)
Ah dr feelgood
Lifts your spirits and never let\'s you leave without a...
September 12th, 2023 01:14 - Be One This Day (9-11 rememberance) (Pop64)
This is such a heart wrenching read
Hopefully you find a little...
September 11th, 2023 17:23 - My Little Fantasy (Bella Shepard)
Lovely to read as per
But you leave us wondering what the fantasy could...
September 11th, 2023 15:31 - Mask Off (Introverted Sage)
Another great thought provoking read
\"Is it your heart or your weapons...
September 10th, 2023 17:22 - Knowing I Saw Enough (Teddy.15)
Maybe you could take some consolation knowing your words let the rest of...
September 10th, 2023 17:18 - The Human Heart (Buzzybee4you)
Hi buzzy
When you want to write do it
Look what came from this
A well...
September 10th, 2023 12:18 - Gone (Elle King)
Welcome Elle
Great debut
Got a song vibe to it
Very smooth
Title...
September 10th, 2023 09:03 - When We Are One (Bella Shepard)
Like it started with your dreams or wishes for the world
Then ended with...
September 10th, 2023 07:39 - Lost in Time (Introverted Sage)
Ah sage
It flows and rhymes so smoothly the reader is at the end almost...
September 10th, 2023 07:20 - Even a Clueless Squirrel May Climb (Bobby O)
Great memory Bobby
Thanks for sharing such a beautiful write
The one...
September 10th, 2023 07:16 - HAUNTED (LIZ)
\"You feed a crave i have\'
Hints at addiction
Your writing is...
September 10th, 2023 07:08 - uncertain and uncomfortable but also blissful and serene (Poetic Dan)
Dan THE man
You have always been a tremendous example
Given it away to...
September 9th, 2023 05:15 - Eat me away (Anonymous_Poet)
Welcome
Don\'t understand the apology
Fantastic start
Looking forward...
September 9th, 2023 05:01 - The Girl in the Chain Mail Dress (Houchins.linda)
Tremendous rhyme and flow
Superb debut
Looking forward to reading more...
September 9th, 2023 04:44 - Empty (Miss_Dreamer)
Tremendous write
I think we have all felt that way at some point
Almost...
September 9th, 2023 04:36 - What Does it Take (Introverted Sage)
You really are on fire
Superb write
Amazing rhyme
The content...
September 9th, 2023 04:31 - CONNECTION (Bobby O)
Didn\'t think you could top the picture
Then you lifted your pen
September 9th, 2023 04:28
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