Comments on community poems by peto
- Never to late  (Poetic Dan) 
Dan the man
Great to see you still writing 
When you got ot you got...
 June 21st, 2023 17:49
- A book without a cover (Emmalouise) 
If the words inside are as good as these 
No cover required 
Great...
 June 21st, 2023 17:39
- What happened (2781) 
Great content 
And rhyme 
Enjoyed this read 
 June 21st, 2023 10:27
- Shivers (Christina8) 
Shivers 
Heaving with desire 
Piercing eyes
Forbidden fire
You seem in...
 June 19th, 2023 18:38
- Carry On (13LaurenD) 
Got a vibe you may be 5 days into recovery (85 days line)
Loved the...
 June 18th, 2023 12:05
- O, Brother! (Christina8) 
You don\'t miss and hit the wall do you???
Nice to see a bit of passion...
 June 17th, 2023 10:05
- Fighting Spirit (Christina8) 
Excellent write chrissy 
And relevant to myself and I\'m sure many others...
 March 21st, 2022 07:27
- where do we go  (Blackstar) 
Did you get your name from Radiohead song?
1st read from you
Thought...
 March 17th, 2022 06:03
- arm bite  (Ghosti) 
What started as a hickie, ends up quite a chunk taken from you....
 January 21st, 2022 15:23
- Her fate? (Haritu09) 
Welcome 
You take your readers to a dark place with this
It almost...
 July 14th, 2021 15:07
- Story to the Cover (Apete90) 
Welcome 
Bit of a cryptic start
I enjoyed it 
So will look out for the...
 July 14th, 2021 14:58
- FOREVER MINE  (AzaleaTruth) 
Welcome to the site
Powerful start
I like that you have truth in your...
 July 14th, 2021 14:50
- That’s Not Me Anymore (Kim C.) 
Tremendous debut kim
Full of experience and emotion 
Loved the structure...
 July 14th, 2021 14:43
- Would you? (Sandra) 
I\'ve been there
So no
I wouldn\'t 
Keep writing it out sandra...
 June 13th, 2021 03:14
- I\'ve Never Told (Christina8) 
There is indeed a book in this
Good luck with it all
Brave inspiring
 January 3rd, 2021 07:22
- Changing the Ending. (Goldfinch60) 
Great advice as always Goldfinch 
Can\'t change the beginning 
Can build...
 December 16th, 2020 07:55
- Changing times & still a need to rhyme!  (Poetic Dan) 
Well said Dan
Powerful message 
No need to do unto others what was done...
 December 16th, 2020 07:51
- Hmmm (Sylviasearcher) 
Hmmm, do you know what it means 
For I do not
Great to see you writing...
 December 16th, 2020 07:48
- Spring (Christina8) 
Shows how far you have come Christina 
From the hopelessness felt when...
 December 13th, 2020 18:20
- The Village Ghost. (Goldfinch60) 
Never saw you write in this style before Andy
Hope you do again 
Super...
 December 11th, 2020 04:01
- I am a woman, I am the darkness.  (CaitEva) 
Medusa? Is that her with snakes as hair?
Look at her and turn to stone....
 December 10th, 2020 12:38
- Do unto me (Rebecca Anne) 
Loved the rhyme, format , and content 
Impressive writing 
 December 10th, 2020 12:34
- You can tell everybody, this is my song  (Sylviasearcher) 
Well 
The chorus was
I\'m ok ta
Hope same with your good self 
 October 6th, 2020 10:07
- You can tell everybody, this is my song  (Sylviasearcher) 
brilliant sylvia 
Not exactly a catchy wee number 
But
Superbly written...
 October 6th, 2020 08:40
- But At Least (Whimsical_1) 
Thoroughly enjoyed 
When we can live with the least life has to offer...
 October 6th, 2020 08:34
- For A While (Lorna) 
Love how you wrote this one 
Full of emotion 
Won\'t go all cliche on...
 October 6th, 2020 08:30
- Please may someone correct this for me? (Ettolrahc) 
It\'s from the heart Charlotte 
Couldn\'t ask for more than that 
 October 6th, 2020 08:25
- Birth-day  (Sylviasearcher) 
Brilliant writing once again sylvia 
 July 25th, 2020 09:38
- Heaven and Back (Xlayla55x) 
Nothing stained in the creativity here
Could almost hear the tune
Nicely...
 July 25th, 2020 09:36
- “Do You have The Time...” (Sheridan Hauf) 
If you have the words 
We have the time to read them 
Keep them coming...
 July 20th, 2020 05:35
- I See Ghosts (Lutalican) 
Easy to read
Enjoyed 
Possibly a hint of addiction in it
 July 18th, 2020 07:30
- No Separation. (Goldfinch60) 
Glad to see you still here for us
 July 18th, 2020 07:28
- Message in a bottle  (Songbird) 
Thoroughly enjoyed this read
Painfully beautiful 
 July 18th, 2020 07:26
- Little Darling (MelissaJA) 
Excellent 
 July 18th, 2020 07:24
- To an old friend (Benevolentbluebabe) 
Hope you let them read this 
 July 18th, 2020 07:23
- 5 minutes (Noah Malice) 
Glad I took the 5 mins to read this 
 July 18th, 2020 07:21
- You\'re a Homewrecker (TWENTY3) 
Can\'t beat real for me
Great write 
 July 18th, 2020 07:20
- Quality Control: FAIL (DianeKey6) 
Only advice I\'d give on rhyme 
Is
Keep at it
Personally 
I think it...
 July 18th, 2020 07:11
- It\'s Your Road. (Goldfinch60) 
Would you change anything Andy 
 July 11th, 2020 05:21
- being (Dusk arising) 
You are rather profound this weather sir
Thoroughly enjoyed this read 
 July 11th, 2020 05:14
- Such Covert. (Fay Slimm.) 
Always a price to be paid dear Fay 
Beautiful 
Double  coupled...
 July 10th, 2020 15:01
- Poet\'s Day. (Goldfinch60) 
Well played sir
 July 10th, 2020 14:56
- Juxtaposition (Sylviasearcher) 
Brilliant writing as usual sylvia 
Very painful though 
I think someone...
 July 10th, 2020 14:54
- Time will always seem frozen. (A passing lyric) 
Great read 
Thoroughly enjoyed the flow and rhyme 
 July 7th, 2020 09:01
- Mid Summer Meadow (Neville) 
The moment you called her ma\'am 
I feared the worst 
Nicely done as...
 July 6th, 2020 07:35
- Bewildering. (Fay Slimm.) 
Very interesting Fay 
A lot don\'t get the chance to choose
The decision...
 July 6th, 2020 07:33
- Roller Coaster  (Crazybabe72) 
Hi crazy 
I\'ve read the 3 you have posted so far 
And the notes you...
 July 6th, 2020 07:27
- Facebook... (Bragee) 
I\'m one of the few who has never been on it, or ever intend to be 
Ta...
 July 3rd, 2020 11:49
- Control (Majben) 
Welcome majben 
I hope the next time you are bored 
You write something...
 July 3rd, 2020 11:41
- forever judas? (Dusk arising) 
Say what you really mean dusk
Lol
Gotta check this out 
Ta for the...
 July 3rd, 2020 11:32
- Heartache (Benevolentbluebabe) 
Ouch
Very courageous 
I do love reading but when it\'s real and raw it...
 July 3rd, 2020 11:28
- Absorbing. (Fay Slimm.) 
Soaked this up like a sponge 
Super writing 
 July 3rd, 2020 05:27
- Sweet baby Nico (Misskay) 
You did not fail
Far from it
Your love and care are what that baby bird...
 July 3rd, 2020 05:08
- Annie Lennox  (FineB) 
First heard her when with the tourists
Ta for the memories 
 July 3rd, 2020 05:00
- thank you covid (Leaaa) 
A constant battle for survival 
Welcome to the war leaaa 
Enjoyed the...
 July 3rd, 2020 04:58
- Richness (Morgen Joy) 
Welcome morgen 
Super debut 
Look forward to more 
 July 2nd, 2020 04:44
- Self-Hatred  (MissileOfUncertainty) 
I disagree with you there
When we recognize a problem we grasp it
Only...
 June 29th, 2020 09:08
- I’m tired  (WildMoonChild) 
No changing or trying to fit in required 
Your words have made a stranger...
 June 25th, 2020 05:12
- With My Thoughts (Ternic73) 
They will never win ternic
Your happy place is closer than you...
 June 25th, 2020 04:57
- The Clique  (Sylviasearcher) 
Out
Everyone in a clique wishes they could be an individual 
Like your...
 June 25th, 2020 04:49
- S O C I A L 💛 D I S T A N C E 💛 A  6 8   ACROSTIC SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN) 
Controlling without the t
Is a simple typo
A fellow member is simply...
 June 20th, 2020 05:38
- Enlightenment  (Sylviasearcher) 
Oh won\'t you?
Ever lower the superb standard of your writing 
Hope
 June 19th, 2020 14:20
- The girl with the painted face  (WildMoonChild) 
Horrible situation 
Love that you are writing again 
Tremendous 
 June 19th, 2020 14:17
- Deception: A poem about anorexia  (WildMoonChild) 
Good to see you writing 
Always enjoy the read 
This one is particularly...
 June 19th, 2020 14:12
- Dreamer In the Wind (MaddieJ) 
Seemed a few memories are in amongst the dreams 
You will see and...
 June 12th, 2020 04:05
- Im Worthless (and that’s on me) (A__pott) 
Changing it is possible Alex
And
Has begun with this write
Good to see...
 June 12th, 2020 03:59
- Lost (DesertWords) 
I think it may be in your pen
Enjoyed the read 
 June 11th, 2020 09:17
- Never worth it  (Peculiarly Lauren) 
Super read Lauren 
I feel this is just the beginning of what you have to...
 June 11th, 2020 09:14
- How do I....... (Suresh) 
How do I... answer
I can\'t 
Good read though
 June 11th, 2020 07:37
- * YOU THOUGHT WRONG * (Flamingo) 
We are listening now flamingo
Keep writing it out 
 June 11th, 2020 07:32
- Voiceless. (Fay Slimm.) 
 June 11th, 2020 06:32
- Sun and the moon (Espy_lileye) 
Welcome espy 
Enjoyed the read and look forward to more from you 
For...
 June 10th, 2020 08:35
- Black lives matter  (A passing lyric) 
I agree with earlier comment 
All lives matter
I do admire you for...
 June 10th, 2020 05:10
- Destined. (Fay Slimm.) 
Painful Fay 
But beautifully so
 June 10th, 2020 04:04
- Climax (Neville) 
Yep
Just how it usually works for me
And over as quickly 
Good fun
 June 9th, 2020 09:46
- Dusky evening (Sindhuja) 
As do your words
Nicely done 
 June 9th, 2020 09:32
- The Art of Giving a F*ck (SerenWise) 
Your writing has always held weight seren 
This was particularly strong...
 June 9th, 2020 09:30
- the great healer (Dusk arising) 
Excellent 
 June 9th, 2020 07:16
- Star Spangled Soul. (Goldfinch60) 
Pointed, twinkly 
Yep
You are a star, as was she
 June 9th, 2020 06:54
- Dreamscape. (Fay Slimm.) 
Dreamy write with your perfect delivery 
 June 9th, 2020 06:53
- Stench  (Sylviasearcher) 
Love how you question almost as much as you state when writing 
Another...
 June 9th, 2020 06:50
- Extended Life. (Goldfinch60) 
A very welcome extension 
 June 8th, 2020 05:17
- Depression made me (Little_Write) 
Hopefully you keep writing it out
This is well put together and lets the...
 June 8th, 2020 05:12
- A pretty soul.  (Samreen Chowdhury) 
Powerful writing samreen 
Always worth reading when you lift your...
 June 8th, 2020 05:05
- Two Lonely Hearts (Ternic73) 
Lovely 
Great to see you still writing 
 June 7th, 2020 07:05
- Unrest and The END (Sylviasearcher) 
Hope you enjoy what is left sylvia 
It\'s torture when we can\'t pretend 
 June 2nd, 2020 06:15
- an era (Kalanigarcia) 
Not nonsense k 
Very real and possible 
Good write 
 May 29th, 2020 05:40
- Listen (Saxon Crow) 
Tuned in big chap
Nice write 
 May 28th, 2020 09:13
- MORE MONOSUCHS     3 (Michael Edwards) 
Your brush appears more active than your pen lately Michael 
Visually...
 May 28th, 2020 09:11
- BEGONE...COVID-19 (Laura🌻) 
Say what you really mean Laura 
Powerful statement 
 May 28th, 2020 09:09
- How did the Sky look (Daisychain) 
Excellent flowing read
 May 28th, 2020 09:05
- Today I Feel UTTERLY FEDUP ! (Sue.evans) 
This too shall pass
Hang in there sue 
 May 28th, 2020 09:04
- Alone (Vacancy) 
Great read
No need to suffer in silence when you have the ability to...
 May 28th, 2020 09:02
- Deadly. (Fay Slimm.) 
Watched a kite do something similar this week 
Lovely write 
Fav...
 May 28th, 2020 08:57
- * FEAR US * (Flamingo) 
Seems to me you have already decided not to follow 
So
Fear...
 May 25th, 2020 05:16
- Connection. (Fay Slimm.) 
Read this then wrote for 1st time in a while 
Inspiring 
Ta
 May 25th, 2020 05:10
- In Memoriam (Laura🌻) 
You don\'t say much Laura 
But when you do 
It\'s always worth the read...
 May 25th, 2020 05:06
- Colour-Power. (Fay Slimm.) 
Your writing is always colourful Fay 
Unseen glows eh
At least now I...
 May 25th, 2020 05:03
- Bells (Fay Slimm.) 
Great picture 
Super writing 
Unusual to see you rhyming 
Loved this...
 May 3rd, 2020 06:35
- Sleeping (Sylviasearcher) 
Wakey wakey sylvia
You never disappoint 
 May 2nd, 2020 04:45
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