Comments on community poems by peto
- Letting Go (CaitlinKCarter)
Drinking in these circumstances is like pouring petrol in an already...
July 7th, 2023 13:23 - Tech (Peto)
Matters not how you say it
Appreciate it very much
Thank you Bobby
July 7th, 2023 13:16 - CONNECTION (Bobby O)
It\'s also a privilege to read your words Bobby
Really enjoyed this one...
July 7th, 2023 13:13 - The Way Only You Can (Garth Rakumakoe)
On fire at the moment Garth
I feel a sense of loss in it
Yet also
A...
July 7th, 2023 03:48 - To my children (My lonely side)
Really harrowing yet extremely brave write
So much genuine emotion...
July 7th, 2023 03:39 - Sea Faring (Introverted Sage)
This is a classic the rhyme is superb
First verse in particular is...
July 7th, 2023 03:33 - Messenger (my Raven) (Teddy.15)
Getting a very spiritual vibe from this
And believe every word
Happy...
July 7th, 2023 03:24 - CORRECTION (Bobby O)
Great to see you found your pen
Back with a bang
Keep em coming
July 7th, 2023 03:16 - Drugs and Men (Yael)
Welcome
Very hard on yourself
We all experiment when young
You...
July 6th, 2023 07:12 - Jazz State Of Mind (Garth Rakumakoe)
A wonderful way with words
Hope you don\'t mind a punk on this page
You...
July 6th, 2023 07:02 - My Angel (Teddy.15)
Your untouchable angel is definitely touching your good self
Cant help...
July 6th, 2023 03:57 - Failure (EMB)
Grass always seems greener on the other side
until we realise what we...
July 5th, 2023 14:43 - Nightly Theatre (Teddy.15)
Great dreams
With killer last line
enjoyed and laughed at end
July 5th, 2023 14:38 - My love (Natalie Heisey)
Long may it continue
Positive happy write
Enjoyed the rhyme also
July 5th, 2023 14:35 - Words That Cost (Introverted Sage)
Sounds like a decision has been made
When you can see a soul you gotta...
July 5th, 2023 14:29 - Free (Christina8)
You keep getting better Christina
The \"what\'s wrong with the way I...
July 5th, 2023 06:15 - Who said that? (Hzugman)
Always worth a read
Love the wisdom in your writing
Another powerful...
July 4th, 2023 17:40 - Simon V. (EMB)
Welcome
Great debut
Easy to read
Enjoyed
Look forward to reading...
July 4th, 2023 17:31 - You Got This (13LaurenD)
Brilliant Lauren
Keep them coming
The forgive myself line is vital
I...
July 4th, 2023 14:18 - Portrait of Truth (Teddy.15)
A big worth catching
It\'s all been said
Beautiful write
July 4th, 2023 13:56 - Magic (Natalie Heisey)
Title says it all
Magic write
July 4th, 2023 13:49 - Brace (Introverted Sage)
Although a sad vibe
This is beautifully written
You can defo stand as...
July 4th, 2023 13:45 - Radiate (Peto)
Bobby
Thanks man
Your last line was a belter
Truly appreciate...
July 4th, 2023 05:40 - ZzZzZ (Wyster)
Good night
Great write
The rhyme and flow are bang on point
Smashing...
July 3rd, 2023 09:20 - I\'m tired (Star hunter)
Chase that goal
You will reach it
When you do, it will revitalize you...
July 3rd, 2023 09:04 - Where does inner peace come from? (Sophenia)
Hint of recovery in this
Which steps to take
And the letting go line is...
July 3rd, 2023 08:44 - It\\\\\\\'s ok (Amber D. Petty Patrick)
Enjoyed the read throughout
The 1st line is perfect
When in love give...
July 3rd, 2023 08:33 - The Devil I\'m Fighting (Introverted Sage)
Enjoyed the rhyme in this one
The fact you are writing about
Leads me...
July 3rd, 2023 08:07 - Let the soul glow (Poetic Dan)
Dan
She is as lucky to have you as you are her
Can\'t beat a write from...
July 3rd, 2023 08:01 - Note (Peto)
Should that so read 2?
We all do what we think is right
Triumphs as well...
July 2nd, 2023 15:39 - Cheated (Chris Duffy)
Excellent
The pocket rockets in the hole pictures made me want to read...
July 2nd, 2023 14:23 - The space between the lines (Hzugman)
I\'m not even attempting to interpret the meaning after that last line...
July 2nd, 2023 10:00 - Lady (Peto)
And that comment is a lovely way to start my day
Thank you Violet
Much...
July 2nd, 2023 04:36 - No Remorse (Christina8)
A tough read so can only imagine what it took to write
The \"fuck him\"...
July 2nd, 2023 04:12 - Your Pain (Amber D. Petty Patrick)
Begins with a heart in the abyss
You appear to be dealing with not only...
July 2nd, 2023 04:07 - Empty Heart, Full Stomach (Zhangyuyouyu)
So
What is it your heart is missing?
Hopefully figure that out soon...
July 1st, 2023 15:26 - Chimeric illusions of grandeur (Rew4er2nail)
I\'ve read a lot from you over time
This is devastating
We are all...
July 1st, 2023 12:14 - THE NASCAR LOOP (Bobby O)
Bobby pitstop
Think i know your sis Penelope
Great last verse stopped me...
July 1st, 2023 11:13 - If You Leave (Roselyn)
Emotional read
Very powerful content
Beautifully written
Word choice...
July 1st, 2023 05:17 - novo amor (Llama)
Welcome
Show him this and he\'s yours
Look forward to reading more
July 1st, 2023 05:12 - Keep Moving Forward (13LaurenD)
Feel it Lauren
Frothy emotional appeal seldom suffices
It takes one to...
June 30th, 2023 17:46 - Breath of life ... (Mystica)
Great write
Last verse is particularly good
Enjoyed the emotional...
June 30th, 2023 16:46 - plum cake (Coffee & cigs)
Let your pen do your screaming from now on
Your voice is loud and clear...
June 30th, 2023 14:07 - My cheetah (Hzugman)
Lol
Loved it
June 30th, 2023 14:04 - My scar (Peripheralhearing)
A + teach
Great write and project
Enjoy marking those up
Flows well...
June 30th, 2023 13:53 - The Power of Being While Doing (Sophenia)
Always to thine own self be true
Welcome back
Positive message
Loved...
June 30th, 2023 09:05 - mid of the story 6/30/2023 (Copacabana)
Welcome copa
Caring for others takes its toll
Never forget yourself (so...
June 30th, 2023 09:01 - SAM COOKE STILL NO. 1 (Bobby O)
Bobby you send me
Honest you do
Fantastic tribute
June 30th, 2023 08:35 - Lament of a Cricket Widow (Elspeth Mary)
Your friends are right
Keep em coming
Great start
June 30th, 2023 07:34 - \"I Awakened\" (Inkerbell)
What a journey
Thanks for the ticket
Looking forward to reading more...
June 30th, 2023 07:27 - Reincarnate (Lettersofminee)
This episode appears to have reincarnated your writing ability
Very...
June 29th, 2023 19:23 - Fated Flying (Introverted Sage)
Thoroughly enjoyed
\"True living is done on the breeze \"
And killer...
June 29th, 2023 18:35 - Carrying Water (Garth Rakumakoe)
I read this yesterday Garth
Couldn\'t find the words to comment
Same...
June 29th, 2023 10:22 - POUNDING ON THAT ANVIL OF FATE (Bobby O)
Great read
Very musical vibe not because of named musicians
Super...
June 29th, 2023 09:13 - I don\'t know what to say, I\'m sorry... (Peal)
There is a line in a fav song of mine
\" stop apologising for the things...
June 29th, 2023 08:44 - I hate (Ekh)
You have a style of writing that allows a nice flow for the reader...
June 28th, 2023 12:21 - Mum (Nikki1990)
Lovely tribute to get you started
Such a loss must be felt
Sure she is...
June 28th, 2023 12:08 - Haunting (Christina8)
A nervy scary write with perfect title
1st line?
We only know if you...
June 28th, 2023 10:31 - Bachelor Girl (Sassy Lou)
A step back?
Usually finds us when least expected
Well named
Words...
June 28th, 2023 03:44 - Milton Keens (A Gig-Goer\'s Poem) (AuburnScribbler)
Saw simulation theory tour in 2019
In brum
Hoping to catch this one in...
June 27th, 2023 12:33 - Numbness (Aimanpashtun)
Do exactly that,,, stay here
Your way out of that maze is your...
June 27th, 2023 11:37 - Numbness (SeaHydrangea)
Wow
This write will help many
So emotional
Stay here
Find the peace...
June 27th, 2023 11:18 - Lone Purple (Garth Rakumakoe)
I almost saw a painting form from these words
Enthralling read
Absolute...
June 27th, 2023 11:06 - sidewalk - tw sh (Imokaysometimes)
Welcome
Glad you found the platform to fight it
If fed up
Keep writing...
June 27th, 2023 08:40 - Is it wrong? (Ekh)
Doesn\'t sound wrong to me
Welcome
Thoroughly enjoyed reading
As I...
June 26th, 2023 12:03 - Keep some cash (2781)
Gotta be holding the folding
I believe your prediction to be in the...
June 26th, 2023 10:48 - Just One Word (Firefall)
Magic
June 26th, 2023 10:44 - What I want (Niki Oz)
Need you to be you
Raw and emotional read
That was very enjoyable
June 25th, 2023 10:44 - A day without you (Achala)
Welcome
He and their love is now immortalized by your words
Very...
June 25th, 2023 09:31 - The One I Adore (Christina8)
On the ball Christina
We all need someone to confide in
Turn that frown...
June 25th, 2023 08:08 - Summer Feast (Parisab)
I wish I could see through eyes like that
A true poet with deep vision...
June 25th, 2023 07:47 - closings xii (Kinsey Peterson)
Captivating write
That ain\'t no friend you have visiting
Your pen...
June 24th, 2023 15:56 - Awakening (Billijo)
What a release
Like the blindfold has fallen from the eyes
Very poetic...
June 24th, 2023 14:40 - A dream from above (Hopeless lover)
Welcome hopeless
Enjoyed this clever debut
Never give up on the dream...
June 24th, 2023 13:04 - Tainted (Liberty_Shadows)
Quite the journey
Can\'t forget ourselves whilst pleasing everyone...
June 24th, 2023 03:14 - Gotta do (2781)
An epic
Loved the rhythm especially
And the \"above or underground \"...
June 24th, 2023 02:23 - Avoid park politics (Poetic Dan)
Animals with animals
They need trained up as well
\"Experts\" are...
June 24th, 2023 02:17 - Down the Rabbit Hole (HangingbyaHalo)
Magic
The verse between \"we\'re all mad here\"
And \"Alice reminds me\"...
June 23rd, 2023 17:10 - Keep Going (13LaurenD)
Nothing changes if nothing changes
To thine own self be true
Very...
June 23rd, 2023 13:42 - Is positivity really a thing! (Poetic Dan)
Is it really a thing?
You sir
Are positivity personified
Inspiring
June 23rd, 2023 12:55 - Loves expression (Jays)
Hope she has seen this
You got it good
Long may it continue
Uplifting...
June 23rd, 2023 12:51 - Misfortune II (Star Singer)
No longer alone
Welcome to mps community
With talent like that
You...
June 23rd, 2023 12:45 - Farewell (PaperFlowerFields)
Superb write
Could be straight from my guardian angel
Loved it
Verse 7...
June 23rd, 2023 12:24 - Ten Toes By Tiffany Pinera (Tiffanypinera)
Very harrowing read
Job done,, can see your pain
Although sad your...
June 23rd, 2023 09:50 - Ache (Nia_stargirl)
Fantastic debut Nia
Bit of a bowie vibe
Look forward to reading more...
June 23rd, 2023 09:30 - Goddess (Peto)
Sure is
As a scot I hope your ashes team are catchy next week
June 23rd, 2023 04:39 - Fallen Too Deep (Bambi_)
Definitely
Keep writing it out
I agree with previous comment re...
June 23rd, 2023 03:39 - Voracity (JasmineUK)
Say it as it is
You dont miss and hit the wall
Great content enhanced...
June 22nd, 2023 20:18 - YOU\'RE CHOSEN TO BE MINE (Grace100)
Beautiful sentiment Grace
Hope you have found yours
Enjoyed the read and...
June 22nd, 2023 17:00 - Pain (Poetrybylight)
Welcome light
Great start
Maybe you are destined to write about it
Look...
June 22nd, 2023 16:38 - Fluoroscopic Focus (Introverted Sage)
Genius
June 22nd, 2023 16:05 - I Was Here Before (Garth Rakumakoe)
Excellent writing
Thoroughly enjoyed throughout
2nd verse particularly...
June 22nd, 2023 12:53 - Goes down easier with a rhyme (Poetic Dan)
On the up and up Dan
Can\'t fail with your attitude
Inspiring
June 22nd, 2023 12:48 - Your Love Was a Myth (Serene)
Excellent rhyme serene
Great content
The last verse finished it of...
June 22nd, 2023 11:51 - 06/21/2023 (CLM)
Sounds like a great memory to hold onto
Enjoyed the read very much...
June 22nd, 2023 06:49 - Never to late (Poetic Dan)
Dan the man
Great to see you still writing
When you got ot you got...
June 21st, 2023 17:49 - A book without a cover (Emmalouise)
If the words inside are as good as these
No cover required
Great...
June 21st, 2023 17:39 - What happened (2781)
Great content
And rhyme
Enjoyed this read
June 21st, 2023 10:27 - Shivers (Christina8)
Shivers
Heaving with desire
Piercing eyes
Forbidden fire
You seem in...
June 19th, 2023 18:38 - Carry On (13LaurenD)
Got a vibe you may be 5 days into recovery (85 days line)
Loved the...
June 18th, 2023 12:05
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