Comments on community poems by peto
- NOT THE QUEEN (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) 
Tremendous write 
Enjoyed the rhyme but it\'s the content that grabbed...
 August 29th, 2023 05:22
- Beans (GillyFitz) 
Super rhyme 
I first started writing when a teacher in primary school put...
 August 29th, 2023 05:05
- Standing Secret  (Introverted Sage) 
Keep dancing 
Superb last verse 
 August 29th, 2023 04:57
- SCARS AND WOUNDS (MENTAL HEALTH) (PassionatePoetess) 
Passionate indeed 
When in this position I find it hard enough to get...
 August 29th, 2023 04:54
- Sequenced (Introverted Sage) 
Brilliant write
The rhymes work for the reader so hopefully for you...
 August 22nd, 2023 08:17
- Inanna’s Descent (Vicecream) 
This is a great read 
Not sure what is holding you back
One day...
 August 14th, 2023 18:05
- Burnt Out (PaperFlowerFields) 
Although steeped in sorrow I see strength in here
As its burnt out theme...
 August 14th, 2023 12:43
- Relatively speaking (Hzugman) 
Couldn\'t agree more 
Wise as ever
We don\'t know we are living nowadays...
 August 14th, 2023 09:43
- Old Men of Steel (Parisab) 
Oh you always have me thinking 
If it\'s any consolation ( doubt it will...
 August 13th, 2023 16:16
- Short-Circuit  (Teddy.15) 
Careful what you wish for Teddy 
Ai couldn\'t write with such feeling as...
 August 13th, 2023 13:52
- The moth that didn\'t know the way out  (Skally) 
This is a tremendous read skally 
Felt like a true love story then a...
 August 13th, 2023 06:02
- “Why Them Others?” (Laraib Fatima) 
So many questions 
Beautifully written 
The killer ending I believe is...
 August 13th, 2023 03:25
- unfound love (Lctc) 
Welcome 
Great start 
The grass always seems greener on the other side...
 August 13th, 2023 03:13
- Comfort zones  (Onurb Azile) 
Tremendous debut 
Looking forward to reading more 
Sounds far from...
 August 13th, 2023 02:08
- Behind The Scene (Chinvks) 
Read notes as well as poem
You must keep writing with such great results...
 August 13th, 2023 02:02
- abandonment issues (Raxoon) 
Welcome raxoon 
Or
Keep writing it out and perhaps you can slowly rip...
 August 12th, 2023 15:18
- Lost (Zhangyuyouyu) 
When I read this I imagined it written by someone much older
Clever and...
 August 12th, 2023 13:04
- The feeling of love (Nicolerobinson) 
Not read from you in years nicole 
Glad to see you still going strong...
 August 12th, 2023 08:15
- Conserve The Earth  (Sunsetmet) 
The break between save and planet
Gives this a great art feel
Super...
 August 12th, 2023 07:11
- RINSE & REPEAT (Bobby O) 
Great to see a write from you Bobby 
Superb lines 
\"Self sentenced to...
 August 11th, 2023 11:32
- The Edge (Introverted Sage) 
Totally agree with scribbler 
I honestly believe your last few writes...
 August 11th, 2023 11:08
- One day (Idek.and) 
The more you write the closer that day will come 
Sad and emotional...
 August 10th, 2023 16:26
- Love Letter  (Teddy.15) 
Signed sealed delivered 
 August 10th, 2023 14:34
- Ice  (Peto) 
Aww Cheers parisa 
Bottoms up
Extremely grateful for your input
Always...
 August 10th, 2023 11:54
- April 10th (LyricNight) 
Welcome lyric 
Glad you have found the strength and place to share such...
 August 10th, 2023 08:39
- Like a Video (Parisab) 
I had to rewind and play again 
1st read had me imagine you singing in...
 August 9th, 2023 20:27
- What Do We Own? (AuburnScribbler) 
Always thought provoking 
Always socially aware and very relatable...
 August 9th, 2023 16:48
- Ink (Kayla Jackson) 
Perfect write
Says so much with so few words
Magic 
 August 9th, 2023 14:15
- I\'m okay (Bellbell_060609) 
Excellent rhyme and content 
Keep writing 
You have an obvious talent...
 August 9th, 2023 12:57
- Worn Out Shoes  (Teddy.15) 
Excellent as per
Enjoyed the twirl 
The repeat of\" Was\" rather than...
 August 9th, 2023 11:32
- Six Word Stranger (Introverted Sage) 
And what an answer you have given 
Loved the rhyme again 
Your writing...
 August 9th, 2023 11:15
- Spirit Does (Introverted Sage) 
\"Spirit writing on the walls\"
And all over this page
This is magical...
 August 9th, 2023 10:58
- Where is home? (Hollyv88) 
Looks like you found a key Holly 
Keep writing 
Looking forward to more...
 August 9th, 2023 10:52
- Another place (Idek.and) 
Your soul is already mending 
Reading between the lines 
Keep em coming...
 August 9th, 2023 10:47
- Last September (NafisaSB) 
Great rhyme and flow
Does leave me wondering what did compel you to stay...
 August 9th, 2023 10:42
- The longing (A.L.H) 
Really enjoyed the rhyme scheme here
Longing to read more 
Very Much...
 August 2nd, 2023 16:35
- The Devil Within  (Lynda May) 
A tremendous debut 
Although devastating you Express the feeling so well...
 August 2nd, 2023 13:49
- Objectification  (Stephwrites) 
Brilliant writing 
Read a few times already 
Very raw from a talented
 August 2nd, 2023 12:26
- Mister System (AuburnScribbler) 
This is a belter scribbler 
Pleasure to read with killer ending 
Much...
 August 2nd, 2023 11:45
- Your cruel way (Laurajayne69) 
Another \"real\" read
Full of emotion almost vengeful 
Fav line...
 August 2nd, 2023 11:39
- Growing up (Stephwrites) 
Superb write 
The grass is always greener on the other side came to mind...
 August 2nd, 2023 05:40
- Coincidence (Introverted Sage) 
It\'s me again 
Love reading from you 
Got a certain unique style 
 August 2nd, 2023 05:20
- The Perfect Painting  (Teddy.15) 
If a picture paints a thousand words
Or 24
Your words do it justice...
 August 2nd, 2023 05:16
- Social Media Whore (Parisab) 
Loved this write 
Well worth the wait 
Different world from the one I...
 August 2nd, 2023 05:13
- Hugs (Holly Anne) 
Excellent read 
Particularly liked 
\"At times they can help fights...
 August 2nd, 2023 05:10
- Lost (Laurajayne69) 
Welcome Laura 
Horrible situation 
But what a powerful ending to the...
 August 1st, 2023 23:18
- Sorbet Sunset  (Sunsetmet) 
Great debut 
Welcome 
Looking forward to reading more from you 
 July 31st, 2023 15:12
- QUIXOTE  IMPOSSIBLE (Bobby O) 
Love reading Bobby
Think I\'d also like to HEAR this one
Has a strength...
 July 31st, 2023 02:21
- Legend of Love (Teddy.15) 
Teddy 
This is a great read
Particularly liked the mention of Scottish...
 July 31st, 2023 02:06
- True Sorcerer\'s Brew (Introverted Sage) 
Loved this one 
Especially the language used
Authenticated the...
 July 31st, 2023 02:02
- Pinocchio, deep in thought (Teddy.15) 
Tell the right lie and something else would grow
Cheers for the laugh 
 July 29th, 2023 09:01
- Oh What A Beautiful Morning! (Bella Shepard) 
Chanting away
Lovely way to start the day
 July 28th, 2023 01:15
- Lies (Anon.the.poet) 
We can\'t tar everyone with the same brush anon
Think the last line ...
 July 27th, 2023 10:05
- A hug from a sweet child (Arial) 
You captured a beautiful moment here
Thanks for sharing it 
 July 27th, 2023 04:39
- The World I Believe In (TradingMyWoundsForArt) 
I believe you  have a talent 
And message is very well delivered by using...
 July 27th, 2023 04:31
- Just Vertigo  (Teddy.15) 
Love,truth, blood,  violence,  agony
And an ending that left me dizzy...
 July 27th, 2023 04:19
- A Perfect World  (Introverted Sage) 
Loved it
From beginning to brilliant ending 
Top notch writing 
 July 26th, 2023 01:47
- The Red MG (Bella Shepard) 
Tremendous rhyme and flow as I\'ve come to expect from you 
It\'s the...
 July 25th, 2023 23:56
- Thank you MyPoeticSide (Hzugman) 
Love reading you daily
Keep them coming 
 July 25th, 2023 23:30
- Scars (Miss_Dreamer) 
Welcome 
Keep writing 
Begin healing 
Raw and emotional 
Looking...
 July 25th, 2023 23:26
- I’ve Got My Lanyard (A Song) to the rhythm of You Should be Dancing by The Bee Gees (AuburnScribbler) 
I\'ve put furniture and storage in many an office 
So have met many of...
 July 25th, 2023 08:17
- My Fault. (No_one) 
Can\'t fault this one
Keep em coming 
 July 25th, 2023 02:37
- Hold  (Peto) 
Such a kind review Christina 
Then again 
You always have encouraged...
 July 24th, 2023 14:44
- Isolated (Aradhya) 
Glad you found this platform 
No.longer isolated 
Their chatter is...
 July 23rd, 2023 07:17
- Hold  (Peto) 
Get what you give
Thanks very much LIZ
 July 22nd, 2023 17:41
- TRUE SIMPLE HEART (Bobby O) 
Superb quote 
Followed by your wonderful words
And my fav part
A...
 July 22nd, 2023 16:38
- Broken Light  (Introverted Sage) 
Ah but these words reflect the light 
A wee gem of a write 
Loved...
 July 22nd, 2023 16:29
- Stay on the path if you want to be happy (Hzugman) 
Been ages since I read a new limerick
Making me feel nostalgic 
Very...
 July 15th, 2023 10:24
- The Last Goodbye  (Teddy.15) 
Happy new life 
Always a joy to read Teddy 
No change today 
 July 15th, 2023 10:20
- Ponder (2781) 
And sparkle you do
A star
 July 15th, 2023 04:53
- Just The Peaceful Silence of A Happy Day  (Teddy.15) 
Absolutely loved this
Rhyme flow spit on
And my fav on any write...
 July 15th, 2023 04:47
- One sided love  (Chiki1601) 
Flows so sweetly and great rhyme
They who can love are always the winners...
 July 15th, 2023 04:26
- Snowy cold (Selina) 
Welcome 
Hope you found it cathartic 
Seem ready to me
Looking forward...
 July 15th, 2023 04:01
- UNCERTAIN PLANNED (Bobby O) 
In for a penny in for a pound
Loved it Bobby
 July 15th, 2023 03:50
- My Path to Paradise Begins in Hell  (Teddy.15) 
Pity he is gone 
I\'m sure he would love your writing just as much
Take...
 July 14th, 2023 01:02
- The pain (Poemthroughemotions) 
Welcome 
Very emotional 
\"Fighting this battle I think I may...
 July 13th, 2023 09:07
- A THOUSAND WORDS  (LIZ) 
I think that you have just surpassed the very high standard of writing you...
 July 13th, 2023 08:44
- The Hummingbird Blues (PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :)) 
Welcome back 
Your red glasses have gone 
Lovely comeback 
I\'ll do my...
 July 12th, 2023 15:34
- Singing Blues  (Introverted Sage) 
This has a great flow
Almost like singing rather than reading 
Perfect...
 July 12th, 2023 15:03
- I Remember (Bella Shepard) 
Terrific writing 
Flow and rhyme are magnificent 
It\'s the content...
 July 12th, 2023 14:10
- Spellbound  (Teddy.15) 
Amazing 
Finding hell inspirational 
Enjoy your writing very much 
I\'m...
 July 12th, 2023 14:02
- Poetess  (Peto) 
Or maybe its the tiger/ libra thing 
A wonderful humbling comment Teddy...
 July 11th, 2023 13:15
- When it comes to love (Teddy.15) 
Can I decide for you 
Happy ever after all day long
\"Nowt\" I didn\'t...
 July 11th, 2023 12:32
- The Bigger They Are (Introverted Sage) 
Flows like a dream 
Each verse could stand alone as poem
The 1st is...
 July 11th, 2023 10:54
- I am not (2781) 
Rhythm flow rhyme all spot on
Content even better 
Loved this write 
 July 11th, 2023 10:25
- We’re Going On a Witch Hunt (A Parody of \"We’re Going on a Bear Hunt\" by Michael Rosen) (AuburnScribbler) 
So tuneful it bounces around the head
I would hate to be on that \" merry...
 July 11th, 2023 10:23
- Social Media (Garth Rakumakoe) 
Brilliant Garth
\"Catfish traffic lights \"
I\'m trying to deny any of...
 July 11th, 2023 10:15
- Chemoflage (Hzugman) 
Your wisdom now has a tremendous rhyme scheme 
Thanks for sharing it 
 July 11th, 2023 10:09
- I\'m A Woman  (Rebecca Langley Jensen) 
A stunning debut Rebecca
So glad to read of your recovery 
Keep em...
 July 10th, 2023 11:38
- My Nevada  (Teddy.15) 
Super write 
That spark returned,   I suspect pretty quickly just by your...
 July 10th, 2023 10:16
- Victory song!  (Natalie Heisey) 
A lot of fear mentioned here
But ends very positive 
I\'ll join in the...
 July 9th, 2023 18:32
- Set Back (13LaurenD) 
No such thing as a failure Lauren 
There is such a thing as a quitter...
 July 9th, 2023 13:59
- AWESTRUCK (Bobby O) 
Great title and tribute Bobby 
Norma Jean will never be forgotten...
 July 9th, 2023 10:31
- Unrequited (Nix :)) 
May I ask how you know?
The line \"my feelings are probably one sided\"...
 July 9th, 2023 10:23
- Resilience Unveiled : A Phoenix\'s Resurgence  (Nethra) 
Super positive write 
An example to all
Particularly liked 
\"Unfurling...
 July 9th, 2023 10:17
- Fate (Sophenia) 
Started with a fear of the unknown I think we all share
Ending very...
 July 9th, 2023 10:11
- Guided (Introverted Sage) 
You really have something special 
A bit of a change up in style...
 July 9th, 2023 04:55
- Ignorant bliss (Fionatr15) 
Welcome 
Great start 
Writing helped me with that \"ongoing battle with...
 July 8th, 2023 20:18
- Meghaltam-I am dead (Hailey Black) 
It translates extremely well 
Very impressive talent 
Not only are you...
 July 8th, 2023 19:35
- Dear Ane (Nik) 
Really enjoyed this debut Nik 
Looking forward to reading more from you 
 July 8th, 2023 16:22
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