Comments on community poems by peto
- Moonlit Duality (-Iris-) 
Welcome 
Fantastic debut 
Rhyme flow and content all spot on
Look...
 July 8th, 2023 14:46
- Accolades and pans (Hzugman) 
Well said
The \"experts\" are so funny
Should read their own stuff
If...
 July 8th, 2023 09:49
-    ELIMINATE, ACCUMULATE , CELEBRATE (Bobby O) 
Put together beautifully 
This latest installment is magic
It\'s very...
 July 8th, 2023 07:54
- In The Line Of Fire  (Teddy.15) 
A cannon 
Well that\'s scrambled my brain
Excellent as per
Happy...
 July 8th, 2023 03:24
- Replete (Christina8) 
Oh Christina 
Sounds like you are in for a wonderful weekend 
This is...
 July 8th, 2023 02:44
- Till death do us part (E11iix) 
Welcome 
Very deep debut
Beautifully expressed 
Look forward to reading...
 July 7th, 2023 17:29
- Letting Go (CaitlinKCarter) 
Drinking in these circumstances is like pouring petrol in an already...
 July 7th, 2023 13:23
- Tech (Peto) 
Matters not how you say it
Appreciate it very much 
Thank you Bobby 
 July 7th, 2023 13:16
- CONNECTION (Bobby O) 
It\'s also a privilege to read your words Bobby 
Really enjoyed this one...
 July 7th, 2023 13:13
- The Way Only You Can (Garth Rakumakoe) 
On fire at the moment Garth 
I feel a sense of loss in it
Yet also
A...
 July 7th, 2023 03:48
- To my children (My lonely side) 
Really harrowing yet extremely brave write
So much genuine emotion...
 July 7th, 2023 03:39
- Sea Faring  (Introverted Sage) 
This is a classic the rhyme is superb 
First verse in particular is...
 July 7th, 2023 03:33
- Messenger (my Raven) (Teddy.15) 
Getting a very spiritual vibe from this 
And believe every word 
Happy...
 July 7th, 2023 03:24
- CORRECTION (Bobby O) 
Great to see you found your pen
Back with a bang
Keep em coming 
 July 7th, 2023 03:16
- Drugs and Men (Yael Olalde-Garcia) 
Welcome 
Very hard on yourself 
We all experiment when young 
You...
 July 6th, 2023 07:12
- Jazz State Of Mind (Garth Rakumakoe) 
A wonderful way with words
Hope you don\'t mind a punk on this page
You...
 July 6th, 2023 07:02
- My Angel  (Teddy.15) 
Your untouchable angel is definitely touching your good self
Cant help...
 July 6th, 2023 03:57
- Failure (EMB) 
Grass always seems greener on the other side
until we realise what we...
 July 5th, 2023 14:43
- Nightly Theatre (Teddy.15) 
Great dreams
With killer last line
enjoyed and laughed at end
 July 5th, 2023 14:38
- My love (Natalie Heisey) 
Long may it continue 
Positive happy write 
Enjoyed the rhyme also 
 July 5th, 2023 14:35
- Words That Cost  (Introverted Sage) 
Sounds like a decision has been made
When you can see a soul you gotta...
 July 5th, 2023 14:29
- Free (Christina8) 
You keep getting better Christina 
The \"what\'s wrong with the way I...
 July 5th, 2023 06:15
- Who said that? (Hzugman) 
Always worth a read
Love the wisdom in your writing 
Another powerful...
 July 4th, 2023 17:40
- Simon V. (EMB) 
Welcome 
Great debut
Easy to read 
Enjoyed 
Look forward to reading...
 July 4th, 2023 17:31
- You Got This (13LaurenD) 
Brilliant Lauren 
Keep them coming 
The forgive myself line is vital
I...
 July 4th, 2023 14:18
- Portrait of Truth (Teddy.15) 
A big worth catching 
It\'s all been said
Beautiful write 
 July 4th, 2023 13:56
- Magic  (Natalie Heisey) 
Title says it all
Magic write 
 July 4th, 2023 13:49
- Brace (Introverted Sage) 
Although a sad vibe 
This is beautifully written 
You can defo stand as...
 July 4th, 2023 13:45
- Radiate (Peto) 
Bobby
Thanks man
Your last line was a belter 
Truly appreciate...
 July 4th, 2023 05:40
- ZzZzZ (Wyster) 
Good night
Great write 
The rhyme and flow are bang on point 
Smashing...
 July 3rd, 2023 09:20
- I\'m tired (Star hunter) 
Chase that goal
You will reach it
When you do, it will revitalize you...
 July 3rd, 2023 09:04
- Where does inner peace come from? (Sophenia) 
Hint of recovery in this
Which steps to take
And the letting go line is...
 July 3rd, 2023 08:44
- It\\\\\\\'s ok (Amber D. Petty Patrick) 
Enjoyed the read throughout 
The 1st line is perfect
When in love give...
 July 3rd, 2023 08:33
- The Devil I\'m Fighting  (Introverted Sage) 
Enjoyed the rhyme in this one 
The fact you are writing about
Leads me...
 July 3rd, 2023 08:07
- Let the soul glow (Poetic Dan) 
Dan
She is as lucky to have you as you are her 
Can\'t beat a write from...
 July 3rd, 2023 08:01
- Note (Peto) 
Should that so read 2?
We all do what we think is right
Triumphs as well...
 July 2nd, 2023 15:39
- Cheated (Chris Duffy) 
Excellent 
The pocket rockets in the hole pictures made me want to read...
 July 2nd, 2023 14:23
- The space between the lines (Hzugman) 
I\'m not even attempting to interpret the meaning after that last line...
 July 2nd, 2023 10:00
- Lady (Peto) 
And that comment is a lovely way to start my day
Thank you Violet 
Much...
 July 2nd, 2023 04:36
- No Remorse (Christina8) 
A tough read so can only imagine what it took to write 
The \"fuck him\"...
 July 2nd, 2023 04:12
- Your Pain (Amber D. Petty Patrick) 
Begins with a heart in the abyss
You appear to be dealing with not only...
 July 2nd, 2023 04:07
- Empty Heart, Full Stomach (Zhangyuyouyu) 
So
What is it your heart is missing?
Hopefully figure that out soon...
 July 1st, 2023 15:26
- Chimeric illusions of grandeur (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) 
I\'ve read a lot from you over time
This is devastating 
We are all...
 July 1st, 2023 12:14
- THE NASCAR LOOP (Bobby O) 
Bobby pitstop
Think i know your sis Penelope
Great last verse stopped me...
 July 1st, 2023 11:13
- If You Leave (Roselyn) 
Emotional read
Very powerful content 
Beautifully written 
Word choice...
 July 1st, 2023 05:17
- novo amor (Llama) 
Welcome 
Show him this and he\'s yours 
Look forward to reading more 
 July 1st, 2023 05:12
- Keep Moving Forward (13LaurenD) 
Feel it Lauren
Frothy emotional appeal seldom suffices
It takes one to...
 June 30th, 2023 17:46
- Breath of life ... (Mystica) 
Great write 
Last verse is particularly good
Enjoyed the emotional...
 June 30th, 2023 16:46
- plum cake (Coffee & cigs) 
Let your pen do your screaming from now on
Your voice is loud and clear...
 June 30th, 2023 14:07
- My cheetah (Hzugman) 
Lol
Loved it
 June 30th, 2023 14:04
- My scar (Peripheralhearing) 
A + teach
Great write and project 
Enjoy marking those up
Flows well...
 June 30th, 2023 13:53
- The Power of Being While Doing (Sophenia) 
Always to thine own self be true 
Welcome back
Positive message 
Loved...
 June 30th, 2023 09:05
- mid of the story 6/30/2023 (Copacabana) 
Welcome copa
Caring for others takes its  toll
Never forget yourself (so...
 June 30th, 2023 09:01
- SAM COOKE STILL NO. 1 (Bobby O) 
Bobby you send me
Honest you do
Fantastic tribute 
 June 30th, 2023 08:35
- Lament of a Cricket Widow  (Elspeth Mary) 
Your friends are right 
Keep em coming 
Great start 
 June 30th, 2023 07:34
- \"I Awakened\" (Inkerbell) 
What a journey 
Thanks for the ticket 
Looking forward to reading more...
 June 30th, 2023 07:27
- Reincarnate  (Lettersofminee) 
This episode appears to have reincarnated your writing ability 
Very...
 June 29th, 2023 19:23
- Fated Flying  (Introverted Sage) 
Thoroughly enjoyed 
\"True living is done on the breeze \"
And killer...
 June 29th, 2023 18:35
- Carrying Water (Garth Rakumakoe) 
I read this yesterday Garth 
Couldn\'t find the words to comment 
Same...
 June 29th, 2023 10:22
- POUNDING ON THAT ANVIL OF FATE (Bobby O) 
Great read
Very musical vibe not because of named musicians 
Super...
 June 29th, 2023 09:13
- I don\'t know what to say, I\'m sorry... (Peal) 
There is a line in a fav song of mine
\" stop apologising for the things...
 June 29th, 2023 08:44
- I hate (Ekh) 
You have a style of writing that allows a nice flow for the reader...
 June 28th, 2023 12:21
- Mum (Nikki1990) 
Lovely tribute to get you started 
Such a loss must be felt
Sure she is...
 June 28th, 2023 12:08
- Haunting (Christina8) 
A nervy scary write with perfect title 
1st line?
We only know if you...
 June 28th, 2023 10:31
- Bachelor Girl  (Sassy Lou) 
A step back?
Usually finds us when least expected 
Well named 
Words...
 June 28th, 2023 03:44
- Milton Keens (A Gig-Goer\'s Poem) (AuburnScribbler) 
Saw simulation theory tour in 2019
In brum
Hoping to catch this one in...
 June 27th, 2023 12:33
- Numbness (SeaHydrangea) 
Wow
This write will help many
So emotional 
Stay here
Find the peace...
 June 27th, 2023 11:18
- Lone Purple (Garth Rakumakoe) 
I almost saw a painting form from these words
Enthralling read 
Absolute...
 June 27th, 2023 11:06
- sidewalk - tw sh (Imokaysometimes) 
Welcome 
Glad you found the platform to fight it
If fed up
Keep writing...
 June 27th, 2023 08:40
- Is it wrong? (Ekh) 
Doesn\'t sound wrong to me
Welcome 
Thoroughly enjoyed reading 
As I...
 June 26th, 2023 12:03
- Keep some cash (2781) 
Gotta be holding the folding 
I believe your prediction to be in the...
 June 26th, 2023 10:48
- Just One Word (Firefall) 
Magic
 June 26th, 2023 10:44
- What I want (Niki Oz) 
Need you to be you 
Raw and emotional read
That was very enjoyable 
 June 25th, 2023 10:44
- A day without you (Achala) 
Welcome 
He and their love is now immortalized by your words
Very...
 June 25th, 2023 09:31
- The One I Adore (Christina8) 
On the ball Christina 
We all need someone to confide in
Turn that frown...
 June 25th, 2023 08:08
- Summer Feast (Parisab) 
I wish I could see through eyes like that
A true poet with deep vision...
 June 25th, 2023 07:47
- closings xii (Kinsey Peterson) 
Captivating write
That ain\'t no friend you have visiting 
Your pen...
 June 24th, 2023 15:56
- Awakening  (Billijo) 
What a release 
Like the blindfold has fallen from the eyes 
Very poetic...
 June 24th, 2023 14:40
- A dream from above  (Hopeless lover) 
Welcome hopeless 
Enjoyed this clever debut
Never give up on the dream...
 June 24th, 2023 13:04
- Tainted (Liberty_Shadows) 
Quite the journey 
Can\'t forget ourselves whilst pleasing everyone...
 June 24th, 2023 03:14
- Gotta do (2781) 
An epic
Loved the rhythm especially 
And the \"above or underground \"...
 June 24th, 2023 02:23
- Avoid park politics  (Poetic Dan) 
Animals with animals 
They need trained up as well 
\"Experts\" are...
 June 24th, 2023 02:17
- Down the Rabbit Hole  (HangingbyaHalo) 
Magic
The verse between \"we\'re all mad here\"
And \"Alice reminds me\"...
 June 23rd, 2023 17:10
- Keep Going (13LaurenD) 
Nothing changes if nothing changes 
To thine own self be true
Very...
 June 23rd, 2023 13:42
- Is positivity really a thing!  (Poetic Dan) 
Is it really a thing?
You sir
Are positivity personified 
Inspiring 
 June 23rd, 2023 12:55
- Loves expression (Jays) 
Hope she has seen this
You got it good
Long may it continue 
Uplifting...
 June 23rd, 2023 12:51
- Misfortune II (Star Singer) 
No longer alone 
Welcome to mps community 
With talent like that 
You...
 June 23rd, 2023 12:45
- Farewell (PaperFlowerFields) 
Superb write
Could be straight from my guardian angel
Loved it 
Verse 7...
 June 23rd, 2023 12:24
- Ten Toes By Tiffany Pinera  (Tiffanypinera) 
Very harrowing read
Job done,, can see your pain
Although sad your...
 June 23rd, 2023 09:50
- Ache (Nia_stargirl) 
Fantastic debut Nia
Bit of a bowie vibe
Look forward to reading more...
 June 23rd, 2023 09:30
- Goddess  (Peto) 
Sure is
As a scot I hope your ashes team are catchy next week 
 June 23rd, 2023 04:39
- Fallen Too Deep (Bam) 
Definitely 
Keep writing it out
I agree with previous comment re...
 June 23rd, 2023 03:39
- Voracity  (JasmineUK) 
Say it as it is
You dont miss and hit the wall
Great content enhanced...
 June 22nd, 2023 20:18
- YOU\'RE CHOSEN TO BE MINE (Grace100) 
Beautiful sentiment Grace
Hope you have found yours
Enjoyed the read and...
 June 22nd, 2023 17:00
- Pain (Poetrybylight) 
Welcome light
Great start
Maybe you are destined to write about it
Look...
 June 22nd, 2023 16:38
- Fluoroscopic Focus  (Introverted Sage) 
Genius
 June 22nd, 2023 16:05
- I Was Here Before (Garth Rakumakoe) 
Excellent writing 
Thoroughly enjoyed throughout 
2nd verse particularly...
 June 22nd, 2023 12:53
- Goes down easier with a rhyme  (Poetic Dan) 
On the up and up Dan
Can\'t fail with your attitude 
Inspiring 
 June 22nd, 2023 12:48
- Your Love Was a Myth (Serene) 
Excellent rhyme serene
Great content 
The last verse finished it of...
 June 22nd, 2023 11:51
- 06/21/2023 (CLM) 
Sounds like a great memory to hold onto 
Enjoyed the read very much...
 June 22nd, 2023 06:49
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