Comments on community poems by peto

• mid of the story 6/30/2023 (Copacabana) Welcome copa Caring for others takes its toll Never forget yourself (so...
  June 30th, 2023 09:01
• SAM COOKE STILL NO. 1 (Bobby O) Bobby you send me Honest you do Fantastic tribute
  June 30th, 2023 08:35
• Lament of a Cricket Widow (Elspeth Mary) Your friends are right Keep em coming Great start
  June 30th, 2023 07:34
• \"I Awakened\" (Inkerbell) What a journey Thanks for the ticket Looking forward to reading more...
  June 30th, 2023 07:27
• Reincarnate (Lettersofminee) This episode appears to have reincarnated your writing ability Very...
  June 29th, 2023 19:23
• Fated Flying (Introverted Sage) Thoroughly enjoyed \"True living is done on the breeze \" And killer...
  June 29th, 2023 18:35
• Carrying Water (Garth Rakumakoe) I read this yesterday Garth Couldn\'t find the words to comment Same...
  June 29th, 2023 10:22
• POUNDING ON THAT ANVIL OF FATE (Bobby O) Great read Very musical vibe not because of named musicians Super...
  June 29th, 2023 09:13
• I don\'t know what to say, I\'m sorry... (Peal) There is a line in a fav song of mine \" stop apologising for the things...
  June 29th, 2023 08:44
• I hate (Ekh) You have a style of writing that allows a nice flow for the reader...
  June 28th, 2023 12:21
• Mum (Nikki1990) Lovely tribute to get you started Such a loss must be felt Sure she is...
  June 28th, 2023 12:08
• Haunting (Christina8) A nervy scary write with perfect title 1st line? We only know if you...
  June 28th, 2023 10:31
• Bachelor Girl (Sassy Lou) A step back? Usually finds us when least expected Well named Words...
  June 28th, 2023 03:44
• Milton Keens (A Gig-Goer\'s Poem) (AuburnScribbler) Saw simulation theory tour in 2019 In brum Hoping to catch this one in...
  June 27th, 2023 12:33
• Numbness (SeaHydrangea) Wow This write will help many So emotional Stay here Find the peace...
  June 27th, 2023 11:18
• Lone Purple (Garth Rakumakoe) I almost saw a painting form from these words Enthralling read Absolute...
  June 27th, 2023 11:06
• sidewalk - tw sh (Imokaysometimes) Welcome Glad you found the platform to fight it If fed up Keep writing...
  June 27th, 2023 08:40
• Is it wrong? (Ekh) Doesn\'t sound wrong to me Welcome Thoroughly enjoyed reading As I...
  June 26th, 2023 12:03
• Keep some cash (2781) Gotta be holding the folding I believe your prediction to be in the...
  June 26th, 2023 10:48
• Just One Word (Firefall) Magic
  June 26th, 2023 10:44
• What I want (Niki Oz) Need you to be you Raw and emotional read That was very enjoyable
  June 25th, 2023 10:44
• A day without you (Achala) Welcome He and their love is now immortalized by your words Very...
  June 25th, 2023 09:31
• The One I Adore (Christina8) On the ball Christina We all need someone to confide in Turn that frown...
  June 25th, 2023 08:08
• Summer Feast (Parisab) I wish I could see through eyes like that A true poet with deep vision...
  June 25th, 2023 07:47
• closings xii (Kinsey Peterson) Captivating write That ain\'t no friend you have visiting Your pen...
  June 24th, 2023 15:56
• Awakening (Billijo) What a release Like the blindfold has fallen from the eyes Very poetic...
  June 24th, 2023 14:40
• A dream from above (Hopeless lover) Welcome hopeless Enjoyed this clever debut Never give up on the dream...
  June 24th, 2023 13:04
• Tainted (Liberty_Shadows) Quite the journey Can\'t forget ourselves whilst pleasing everyone...
  June 24th, 2023 03:14
• Gotta do (2781) An epic Loved the rhythm especially And the \"above or underground \"...
  June 24th, 2023 02:23
• Avoid park politics (Poetic Dan) Animals with animals They need trained up as well \"Experts\" are...
  June 24th, 2023 02:17
• Down the Rabbit Hole (HangingbyaHalo) Magic The verse between \"we\'re all mad here\" And \"Alice reminds me\"...
  June 23rd, 2023 17:10
• Keep Going (13LaurenD) Nothing changes if nothing changes To thine own self be true Very...
  June 23rd, 2023 13:42
• Is positivity really a thing! (Poetic Dan) Is it really a thing? You sir Are positivity personified Inspiring
  June 23rd, 2023 12:55
• Loves expression (Jays) Hope she has seen this You got it good Long may it continue Uplifting...
  June 23rd, 2023 12:51
• Misfortune II (Star Singer) No longer alone Welcome to mps community With talent like that You...
  June 23rd, 2023 12:45
• Farewell (PaperFlowerFields) Superb write Could be straight from my guardian angel Loved it Verse 7...
  June 23rd, 2023 12:24
• Ten Toes By Tiffany Pinera (Tiffanypinera) Very harrowing read Job done,, can see your pain Although sad your...
  June 23rd, 2023 09:50
• Ache (Nia_stargirl) Fantastic debut Nia Bit of a bowie vibe Look forward to reading more...
  June 23rd, 2023 09:30
• Goddess (Peto) Sure is As a scot I hope your ashes team are catchy next week
  June 23rd, 2023 04:39
• Fallen Too Deep (Bam) Definitely Keep writing it out I agree with previous comment re...
  June 23rd, 2023 03:39
• Voracity (JasmineUK) Say it as it is You dont miss and hit the wall Great content enhanced...
  June 22nd, 2023 20:18
• YOU\'RE CHOSEN TO BE MINE (Grace100) Beautiful sentiment Grace Hope you have found yours Enjoyed the read and...
  June 22nd, 2023 17:00
• Pain (Poetrybylight) Welcome light Great start Maybe you are destined to write about it Look...
  June 22nd, 2023 16:38
• Fluoroscopic Focus (Introverted Sage) Genius
  June 22nd, 2023 16:05
• I Was Here Before (Garth Rakumakoe) Excellent writing Thoroughly enjoyed throughout 2nd verse particularly...
  June 22nd, 2023 12:53
• Goes down easier with a rhyme (Poetic Dan) On the up and up Dan Can\'t fail with your attitude Inspiring
  June 22nd, 2023 12:48
• Your Love Was a Myth (Serene) Excellent rhyme serene Great content The last verse finished it of...
  June 22nd, 2023 11:51
• 06/21/2023 (CLM) Sounds like a great memory to hold onto Enjoyed the read very much...
  June 22nd, 2023 06:49
• Never to late (Poetic Dan) Dan the man Great to see you still writing When you got ot you got...
  June 21st, 2023 17:49
• A book without a cover (Emmalouise) If the words inside are as good as these No cover required Great...
  June 21st, 2023 17:39
• What happened (2781) Great content And rhyme Enjoyed this read
  June 21st, 2023 10:27
• Shivers (Christina8) Shivers Heaving with desire Piercing eyes Forbidden fire You seem in...
  June 19th, 2023 18:38
• Carry On (13LaurenD) Got a vibe you may be 5 days into recovery (85 days line) Loved the...
  June 18th, 2023 12:05
• O, Brother! (Christina8) You don\'t miss and hit the wall do you??? Nice to see a bit of passion...
  June 17th, 2023 10:05
• Fighting Spirit (Christina8) Excellent write chrissy And relevant to myself and I\'m sure many others...
  March 21st, 2022 07:27
• where do we go (Blackstar) Did you get your name from Radiohead song? 1st read from you Thought...
  March 17th, 2022 06:03
• arm bite (Ghosti) What started as a hickie, ends up quite a chunk taken from you....
  January 21st, 2022 15:23
• Her fate? (Haritu09) Welcome You take your readers to a dark place with this It almost...
  July 14th, 2021 15:07
• Story to the Cover (Apete90) Welcome Bit of a cryptic start I enjoyed it So will look out for the...
  July 14th, 2021 14:58
• FOREVER MINE (AzaleaTruth) Welcome to the site Powerful start I like that you have truth in your...
  July 14th, 2021 14:50
• That’s Not Me Anymore (Kim C.) Tremendous debut kim Full of experience and emotion Loved the structure...
  July 14th, 2021 14:43
• Would you? (Sandra) I\'ve been there So no I wouldn\'t Keep writing it out sandra...
  June 13th, 2021 03:14
• I\'ve Never Told (Christina8) There is indeed a book in this Good luck with it all Brave inspiring
  January 3rd, 2021 07:22
• Changing the Ending. (Goldfinch60) Great advice as always Goldfinch Can\'t change the beginning Can build...
  December 16th, 2020 07:55
• Changing times & still a need to rhyme! (Poetic Dan) Well said Dan Powerful message No need to do unto others what was done...
  December 16th, 2020 07:51
• Hmmm (Sylviasearcher) Hmmm, do you know what it means For I do not Great to see you writing...
  December 16th, 2020 07:48
• Spring (Christina8) Shows how far you have come Christina From the hopelessness felt when...
  December 13th, 2020 18:20
• The Village Ghost. (Goldfinch60) Never saw you write in this style before Andy Hope you do again Super...
  December 11th, 2020 04:01
• I am a woman, I am the darkness. (CaitEva) Medusa? Is that her with snakes as hair? Look at her and turn to stone....
  December 10th, 2020 12:38
• Do unto me (Rebecca Anne) Loved the rhyme, format , and content Impressive writing
  December 10th, 2020 12:34
• You can tell everybody, this is my song (Sylviasearcher) Well The chorus was I\'m ok ta Hope same with your good self
  October 6th, 2020 10:07
• You can tell everybody, this is my song (Sylviasearcher) brilliant sylvia Not exactly a catchy wee number But Superbly written...
  October 6th, 2020 08:40
• But At Least (Whimsical_1) Thoroughly enjoyed When we can live with the least life has to offer...
  October 6th, 2020 08:34
• For A While (Lorna) Love how you wrote this one Full of emotion Won\'t go all cliche on...
  October 6th, 2020 08:30
• Please may someone correct this for me? (Ettolrahc) It\'s from the heart Charlotte Couldn\'t ask for more than that
  October 6th, 2020 08:25
• Birth-day (Sylviasearcher) Brilliant writing once again sylvia
  July 25th, 2020 09:38
• Heaven and Back (Xlayla55x) Nothing stained in the creativity here Could almost hear the tune Nicely...
  July 25th, 2020 09:36
• “Do You have The Time...” (Sheridan Hauf) If you have the words We have the time to read them Keep them coming...
  July 20th, 2020 05:35
• I See Ghosts (Lutalican) Easy to read Enjoyed Possibly a hint of addiction in it
  July 18th, 2020 07:30
• No Separation. (Goldfinch60) Glad to see you still here for us
  July 18th, 2020 07:28
• Message in a bottle (Songbird) Thoroughly enjoyed this read Painfully beautiful
  July 18th, 2020 07:26
• Little Darling (MelissaJA) Excellent
  July 18th, 2020 07:24
• To an old friend (Benevolentbluebabe) Hope you let them read this
  July 18th, 2020 07:23
• 5 minutes (Noah Malice) Glad I took the 5 mins to read this
  July 18th, 2020 07:21
• You\'re a Homewrecker (TWENTY3) Can\'t beat real for me Great write
  July 18th, 2020 07:20
• Quality Control: FAIL (DianeKey6) Only advice I\'d give on rhyme Is Keep at it Personally I think it...
  July 18th, 2020 07:11
• It\'s Your Road. (Goldfinch60) Would you change anything Andy
  July 11th, 2020 05:21
• being (Dusk arising) You are rather profound this weather sir Thoroughly enjoyed this read
  July 11th, 2020 05:14
• Such Covert. (Fay Slimm.) Always a price to be paid dear Fay Beautiful Double coupled...
  July 10th, 2020 15:01
• Poet\'s Day. (Goldfinch60) Well played sir
  July 10th, 2020 14:56
• Juxtaposition (Sylviasearcher) Brilliant writing as usual sylvia Very painful though I think someone...
  July 10th, 2020 14:54
• Time will always seem frozen. (A passing lyric) Great read Thoroughly enjoyed the flow and rhyme
  July 7th, 2020 09:01
• Mid Summer Meadow (Neville) The moment you called her ma\'am I feared the worst Nicely done as...
  July 6th, 2020 07:35
• Bewildering. (Fay Slimm.) Very interesting Fay A lot don\'t get the chance to choose The decision...
  July 6th, 2020 07:33
• Roller Coaster (Crazybabe72) Hi crazy I\'ve read the 3 you have posted so far And the notes you...
  July 6th, 2020 07:27
• Facebook... (Bragee) I\'m one of the few who has never been on it, or ever intend to be Ta...
  July 3rd, 2020 11:49
• Control (Majben) Welcome majben I hope the next time you are bored You write something...
  July 3rd, 2020 11:41
• forever judas? (Dusk arising) Say what you really mean dusk Lol Gotta check this out Ta for the...
  July 3rd, 2020 11:32
• Heartache (Benevolentbluebabe) Ouch Very courageous I do love reading but when it\'s real and raw it...
  July 3rd, 2020 11:28
• Absorbing. (Fay Slimm.) Soaked this up like a sponge Super writing
  July 3rd, 2020 05:27