Comments on community poems by peto
- O, Brother! (Christina8)
You don\'t miss and hit the wall do you???
Nice to see a bit of passion...
June 17th, 2023 10:05 - Fighting Spirit (Christina8)
Excellent write chrissy
And relevant to myself and I\'m sure many others...
March 21st, 2022 07:27 - where do we go (Blackstar)
Did you get your name from Radiohead song?
1st read from you
Thought...
March 17th, 2022 06:03 - arm bite (Ghosti)
What started as a hickie, ends up quite a chunk taken from you....
January 21st, 2022 15:23 - Her fate? (Haritu09)
Welcome
You take your readers to a dark place with this
It almost...
July 14th, 2021 15:07 - Story to the Cover (Apete90)
Welcome
Bit of a cryptic start
I enjoyed it
So will look out for the...
July 14th, 2021 14:58 - FOREVER MINE (AzaleaTruth)
Welcome to the site
Powerful start
I like that you have truth in your...
July 14th, 2021 14:50 - That’s Not Me Anymore (Kim C.)
Tremendous debut kim
Full of experience and emotion
Loved the structure...
July 14th, 2021 14:43 - Would you? (Sandra)
I\'ve been there
So no
I wouldn\'t
Keep writing it out sandra...
June 13th, 2021 03:14 - I\'ve Never Told (Christina8)
There is indeed a book in this
Good luck with it all
Brave inspiring
January 3rd, 2021 07:22 - Changing the Ending. (Goldfinch60)
Great advice as always Goldfinch
Can\'t change the beginning
Can build...
December 16th, 2020 07:55 - Changing times & still a need to rhyme! (Poetic Dan)
Well said Dan
Powerful message
No need to do unto others what was done...
December 16th, 2020 07:51 - Hmmm (Sylviasearcher)
Hmmm, do you know what it means
For I do not
Great to see you writing...
December 16th, 2020 07:48 - Spring (Christina8)
Shows how far you have come Christina
From the hopelessness felt when...
December 13th, 2020 18:20 - The Village Ghost. (Goldfinch60)
Never saw you write in this style before Andy
Hope you do again
Super...
December 11th, 2020 04:01 - I am a woman, I am the darkness. (CaitEva)
Medusa? Is that her with snakes as hair?
Look at her and turn to stone....
December 10th, 2020 12:38 - Do unto me (Rebecca Anne)
Loved the rhyme, format , and content
Impressive writing
December 10th, 2020 12:34 - You can tell everybody, this is my song (Sylviasearcher)
Well
The chorus was
I\'m ok ta
Hope same with your good self
October 6th, 2020 10:07 - You can tell everybody, this is my song (Sylviasearcher)
brilliant sylvia
Not exactly a catchy wee number
But
Superbly written...
October 6th, 2020 08:40 - But At Least (Whimsical_1)
Thoroughly enjoyed
When we can live with the least life has to offer...
October 6th, 2020 08:34 - For A While (Lorna)
Love how you wrote this one
Full of emotion
Won\'t go all cliche on...
October 6th, 2020 08:30 - Please may someone correct this for me? (Ettolrahc)
It\'s from the heart Charlotte
Couldn\'t ask for more than that
October 6th, 2020 08:25 - Birth-day (Sylviasearcher)
Brilliant writing once again sylvia
July 25th, 2020 09:38 - Heaven and Back (Xlayla55x)
Nothing stained in the creativity here
Could almost hear the tune
Nicely...
July 25th, 2020 09:36 - “Do You have The Time...” (Sheridan Hauf)
If you have the words
We have the time to read them
Keep them coming...
July 20th, 2020 05:35 - I See Ghosts (Lutalican)
Easy to read
Enjoyed
Possibly a hint of addiction in it
July 18th, 2020 07:30 - No Separation. (Goldfinch60)
Glad to see you still here for us
July 18th, 2020 07:28 - Message in a bottle (Songbird)
Thoroughly enjoyed this read
Painfully beautiful
July 18th, 2020 07:26 - Little Darling (MelissaJA)
Excellent
July 18th, 2020 07:24 - To an old friend (Benevolentbluebabe)
Hope you let them read this
July 18th, 2020 07:23 - 5 minutes (GON)
Glad I took the 5 mins to read this
July 18th, 2020 07:21 - You\'re a Homewrecker (TWENTY3)
Can\'t beat real for me
Great write
July 18th, 2020 07:20 - Quality Control: FAIL (DianeKey6)
Only advice I\'d give on rhyme
Is
Keep at it
Personally
I think it...
July 18th, 2020 07:11 - It\'s Your Road. (Goldfinch60)
Would you change anything Andy
July 11th, 2020 05:21 - being (Dusk arising)
You are rather profound this weather sir
Thoroughly enjoyed this read
July 11th, 2020 05:14 - Such Covert. (Fay Slimm.)
Always a price to be paid dear Fay
Beautiful
Double coupled...
July 10th, 2020 15:01 - Poet\'s Day. (Goldfinch60)
Well played sir
July 10th, 2020 14:56 - Juxtaposition (Sylviasearcher)
Brilliant writing as usual sylvia
Very painful though
I think someone...
July 10th, 2020 14:54 - Time will always seem frozen. (A passing lyric)
Great read
Thoroughly enjoyed the flow and rhyme
July 7th, 2020 09:01 - Mid Summer Meadow (Neville)
The moment you called her ma\'am
I feared the worst
Nicely done as...
July 6th, 2020 07:35 - Bewildering. (Fay Slimm.)
Very interesting Fay
A lot don\'t get the chance to choose
The decision...
July 6th, 2020 07:33 - Roller Coaster (Crazybabe72)
Hi crazy
I\'ve read the 3 you have posted so far
And the notes you...
July 6th, 2020 07:27 - Facebook... (Bragee)
I\'m one of the few who has never been on it, or ever intend to be
Ta...
July 3rd, 2020 11:49 - Control (Majben)
Welcome majben
I hope the next time you are bored
You write something...
July 3rd, 2020 11:41 - Hypnotized (Accidental Poet)
Enjoyed this
Had a bit of trouble with the maths though
Before i saw...
July 3rd, 2020 11:38 - forever judas? (Dusk arising)
Say what you really mean dusk
Lol
Gotta check this out
Ta for the...
July 3rd, 2020 11:32 - Heartache (Benevolentbluebabe)
Ouch
Very courageous
I do love reading but when it\'s real and raw it...
July 3rd, 2020 11:28 - Absorbing. (Fay Slimm.)
Soaked this up like a sponge
Super writing
July 3rd, 2020 05:27 - Sweet baby Nico (Misskay)
You did not fail
Far from it
Your love and care are what that baby bird...
July 3rd, 2020 05:08 - Annie Lennox (FineB)
First heard her when with the tourists
Ta for the memories
July 3rd, 2020 05:00 - thank you covid (Leaaa)
A constant battle for survival
Welcome to the war leaaa
Enjoyed the...
July 3rd, 2020 04:58 - Richness (Morgen Joy)
Welcome morgen
Super debut
Look forward to more
July 2nd, 2020 04:44 - Self-Hatred (MissileOfUncertainty)
I disagree with you there
When we recognize a problem we grasp it
Only...
June 29th, 2020 09:08 - I’m tired (WildMoonChild)
No changing or trying to fit in required
Your words have made a stranger...
June 25th, 2020 05:12 - With My Thoughts (Ternic73)
They will never win ternic
Your happy place is closer than you...
June 25th, 2020 04:57 - The Clique (Sylviasearcher)
Out
Everyone in a clique wishes they could be an individual
Like your...
June 25th, 2020 04:49 - S O C I A L 💛 D I S T A N C E 💛 A 6 8 ACROSTIC SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Controlling without the t
Is a simple typo
A fellow member is simply...
June 20th, 2020 05:38 - Enlightenment (Sylviasearcher)
Oh won\'t you?
Ever lower the superb standard of your writing
Hope
June 19th, 2020 14:20 - The girl with the painted face (WildMoonChild)
Horrible situation
Love that you are writing again
Tremendous
June 19th, 2020 14:17 - I’m Back (at least until my pen runs out of ink) (Accidental Poet)
The man who once tripped over a verse if memory serves
Great to see you...
June 19th, 2020 14:14 - Deception: A poem about anorexia (WildMoonChild)
Good to see you writing
Always enjoy the read
This one is particularly...
June 19th, 2020 14:12 - Dreamer In the Wind (MaddieJ)
Seemed a few memories are in amongst the dreams
You will see and...
June 12th, 2020 04:05 - Im Worthless (and that’s on me) (A__pott)
Changing it is possible Alex
And
Has begun with this write
Good to see...
June 12th, 2020 03:59 - Lost (DesertWords)
I think it may be in your pen
Enjoyed the read
June 11th, 2020 09:17 - Never worth it (Peculiarly Lauren)
Super read Lauren
I feel this is just the beginning of what you have to...
June 11th, 2020 09:14 - How do I....... (Suresh)
How do I... answer
I can\'t
Good read though
June 11th, 2020 07:37 - * YOU THOUGHT WRONG * (Flamingo)
We are listening now flamingo
Keep writing it out
June 11th, 2020 07:32 - Voiceless. (Fay Slimm.)
June 11th, 2020 06:32 - Sun and the moon (Espy_lileye)
Welcome espy
Enjoyed the read and look forward to more from you
For...
June 10th, 2020 08:35 - Black lives matter (A passing lyric)
I agree with earlier comment
All lives matter
I do admire you for...
June 10th, 2020 05:10 - Destined. (Fay Slimm.)
Painful Fay
But beautifully so
June 10th, 2020 04:04 - Climax (Neville)
Yep
Just how it usually works for me
And over as quickly
Good fun
June 9th, 2020 09:46 - Dusky evening (Sindhuja)
As do your words
Nicely done
June 9th, 2020 09:32 - The Art of Giving a F*ck (SerenWise)
Your writing has always held weight seren
This was particularly strong...
June 9th, 2020 09:30 - the great healer (Dusk arising)
Excellent
June 9th, 2020 07:16 - Star Spangled Soul. (Goldfinch60)
Pointed, twinkly
Yep
You are a star, as was she
June 9th, 2020 06:54 - Dreamscape. (Fay Slimm.)
Dreamy write with your perfect delivery
June 9th, 2020 06:53 - Stench (Sylviasearcher)
Love how you question almost as much as you state when writing
Another...
June 9th, 2020 06:50 - Extended Life. (Goldfinch60)
A very welcome extension
June 8th, 2020 05:17 - Depression made me (Little_Write)
Hopefully you keep writing it out
This is well put together and lets the...
June 8th, 2020 05:12 - A pretty soul. (Samreen Chowdhury)
Powerful writing samreen
Always worth reading when you lift your...
June 8th, 2020 05:05 - Two Lonely Hearts (Ternic73)
Lovely
Great to see you still writing
June 7th, 2020 07:05 - Unrest and The END (Sylviasearcher)
Hope you enjoy what is left sylvia
It\'s torture when we can\'t pretend
June 2nd, 2020 06:15 - an era (Kalanigarcia)
Not nonsense k
Very real and possible
Good write
May 29th, 2020 05:40 - Listen (Saxon Crow)
Tuned in big chap
Nice write
May 28th, 2020 09:13 - MORE MONOSUCHS 3 (Michael Edwards)
Your brush appears more active than your pen lately Michael
Visually...
May 28th, 2020 09:11 - BEGONE...COVID-19 (Laura🌻)
Say what you really mean Laura
Powerful statement
May 28th, 2020 09:09 - How did the Sky look (Daisychain)
Excellent flowing read
May 28th, 2020 09:05 - Today I Feel UTTERLY FEDUP ! (Sue.evans)
This too shall pass
Hang in there sue
May 28th, 2020 09:04 - Alone (Vacancy)
Great read
No need to suffer in silence when you have the ability to...
May 28th, 2020 09:02 - Deadly. (Fay Slimm.)
Watched a kite do something similar this week
Lovely write
Fav...
May 28th, 2020 08:57 - * FEAR US * (Flamingo)
Seems to me you have already decided not to follow
So
Fear...
May 25th, 2020 05:16 - Connection. (Fay Slimm.)
Read this then wrote for 1st time in a while
Inspiring
Ta
May 25th, 2020 05:10 - In Memoriam (Laura🌻)
You don\'t say much Laura
But when you do
It\'s always worth the read...
May 25th, 2020 05:06 - Colour-Power. (Fay Slimm.)
Your writing is always colourful Fay
Unseen glows eh
At least now I...
May 25th, 2020 05:03 - Bells (Fay Slimm.)
Great picture
Super writing
Unusual to see you rhyming
Loved this...
May 3rd, 2020 06:35 - Sleeping (Sylviasearcher)
Wakey wakey sylvia
You never disappoint
May 2nd, 2020 04:45 - Status Quo. (Goldfinch60)
The original 3 chord wonders
Good to see you writing Goldfinch
May 2nd, 2020 04:42 - temporary things (Hazel Kaye)
Superb write
No probs relating
Talented
May 1st, 2020 21:48
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