Comments on community poems by peto

• The suicide (Juliette72) Welcome to the site Tremendous debut All 3 sections could stand alone...
  April 29th, 2024 09:58
• To The Above (Ajon4wheels) The sense of loss is so strong Your love shines through I doubt very...
  April 29th, 2024 09:45
• Rocking Worlds (Teddy.15) You are already a magnificent star Teddy You wanna add music Suits me...
  April 29th, 2024 09:40
• Shadowed (Introverted Sage) Rhyme and flow are immaculate Also really enjoyed this line \"Ten toes...
  April 28th, 2024 18:17
• I Miss You (Ajon4wheels) This almost brought me to tears Particularly the 4th verse Lovely...
  April 28th, 2024 11:22
• Shepherd\'s Watch (+2) (Kurt Philip Behm) I really enjoy how you write kurt Seldom comment but always read Another...
  April 28th, 2024 11:16
• Oath of October (Chiki1601) Couldn\'t agree more with last comment Tremendous rhyme
  April 28th, 2024 11:13
• Beginning and End (Sunshine777) Ah sunshine... Hope the middle bit was as good as the beginning and...
  April 28th, 2024 00:09
• Booze and Blues (Mirrorball) Rise and shine mirrorball You have a gift Keep using it Enjoyed...
  April 26th, 2024 07:22
• Antitechnology (2781) \"And when the powers out\" It\'s coming Great write
  April 26th, 2024 07:10
• My Vows on 4/24/24 (Haleyalexis) Tremendous flow to this tribute to love Thoroughly enjoyed
  April 26th, 2024 07:05
• Hidden Melancholy (Ladywithaquill) I don\'t think you are being melodramatic These subjects need a...
  April 26th, 2024 07:01
• poetry (Hyperlink) Welcome Great debut You hint at what your poetry holds Looking...
  April 25th, 2024 21:48
• ribs (Anemoia) Plenty of meat on those bones yet anemoia Exciting writing
  April 25th, 2024 21:45
• Happiness Is Here for You (Soph) Clever and enjoyable read Seemed the perfect scenario until that Killer...
  April 25th, 2024 21:42
• Heart Beats Fast (Arial) Nicely done arial Enjoyed the repetition Also ,\"let\'s see the...
  April 25th, 2024 21:40
• Sunshine (Nicole Pritchard) Beautiful write and tribute
  April 25th, 2024 21:34
• FraeMe (Introverted Sage) A true battler They may have 6taken your voice Dont ever let them near...
  April 25th, 2024 21:29
• Love Remains in Me (Sunshine777) A love warrior ..... perfect Loved this read full of hope and inspiration...
  April 25th, 2024 21:26
• Fallen (Introverted Sage) Even your short writes are amazing sage Super and inspiring
  April 10th, 2024 20:43
• You (Sunshine777) Ouch Keep writing it out sunshine Hopefully your Ray\'s shine again
  April 10th, 2024 20:19
• Changes (A.D. Small) I\'ll work on my procrastination tomorrow Really enjoyed this positive...
  April 3rd, 2024 15:23
• Now what? (NikNak73) Loved how you set this up Some gre6word choices It seems a pleasant and...
  March 17th, 2024 00:04
• Affections (Christina8) And just like that She lifts her pen and the magic happens Great to...
  March 15th, 2024 20:26
• Four (Its_siga) A fleeting but wonderful read On a great connection Looking forward to...
  March 10th, 2024 15:37
• This Ain\'t Life (Sunshine777) If only sunshine You are describing what would be paradise Really...
  March 10th, 2024 15:26
• Fishing (Thomas W Case) I\'ve never been fishing but know many enjoy it Even get competitive...
  March 10th, 2024 15:03
• A dream. (Calliope) You have a gift Gregoria Beautiful flow Easy to read Keep em coming
  March 10th, 2024 12:08
• Continuation (Zhangyuyouyu) It\'s never too late to learn And i doubt you need any advice on writing...
  March 10th, 2024 12:01
• Streets (A Succession of Haiku\'s) (Courlieth_aeolis) Love how you can bring the every day commute to life A writers eyes...
  March 10th, 2024 08:33
• Imagined Realities (Meera Mere) Your writing is getting tighter Great rhyme flow and content \"Weaving...
  March 10th, 2024 07:05
• I\'m my own demise (Veronica Achlys writes) Has a real feeling of self isolation Good thing about that is You know...
  March 10th, 2024 06:59
• Mirror (Sunshine777) Such a sad write I don\'t see how another\'s behaviour or actions should...
  March 9th, 2024 21:16
• The dream goes on... (Ellen Marsell) This is so visual \"Damp grass\" \"Dragons covered in gold and blood...
  March 9th, 2024 14:37
• There are graveyards of people who\'re alive (Veronica Achlys writes) I\'m with mendedfences on this Keep coming back for another look It\'s...
  March 9th, 2024 12:09
• It\'s really up to you (Hzugman) Great little ditty With usual positive message and super rhyme
  March 9th, 2024 12:01
• When You Praise (Angelia Lamar) You seem very close to your god It shines in your writing If god seems...
  March 9th, 2024 06:53
• Aspects Of Light (Cassie58) And let there always always be A pen by your side Loved the weather and...
  March 9th, 2024 06:48
• A Rule Against Cherubic Letters (Weltschmerz) Writing it out will help with denial As a scot I loved the mention of...
  March 9th, 2024 06:30
• Reflecting (2781) I really hope it\'s not ending I enjoy your rhyme nowadays It adds so...
  March 9th, 2024 06:24
• \"Slave 4 Your Love\" (SkiesDaLimit) Welcome Eric Nice start Enjoyed the rhyme I look forward to reading...
  March 8th, 2024 21:17
• Rebel Nature (Introverted Sage) We should never have to beg for peace \"Tempers flaring \"...
  March 8th, 2024 17:37
• Hold Me (Nah Hannah) You offer yourself to be\" held in the heart \" \"The depths of the soul...
  March 8th, 2024 17:19
• Like River Grass (Cassie58) I love how you can look at the grass breeze clouds in such a way Then...
  March 7th, 2024 15:45
• The Guy Who Waved (AuburnScribbler) Fantastic read scribbler A mob I\'m glad I\'m not a part of The last...
  March 7th, 2024 12:35
• seven kinds of death (Karley) The necklace of rope is an amazing line Dunno how much you changed but...
  March 7th, 2024 09:11
• The Scamp (and the love of his life) (JulesBurnsit) You use language in such a unique way It\'s captivating Thoroughly...
  March 7th, 2024 08:51
• Questions (GiftedT17) Such a sad write And here was I thinking you were gifted Loved the rhyme...
  March 7th, 2024 08:43
• Mirror morgue (A.L.H) Great write From the haunting 1st line to the slab at the end Rhyme...
  March 6th, 2024 18:07
• Settled beside my own blood (GrotesqueEm) Close to the knuckle writing Absolutely loved it For a moment whilst...
  March 6th, 2024 17:54
• New Moon (JulesBurnsit) This is brutal but magic at the same time A definate talent Raw and...
  March 6th, 2024 17:30
• Deepest feelings (Princesslove) Welcome princess Great start, loved the rhyme and content Looking...
  March 6th, 2024 17:12
• JUST (Holly Anne) indeed You are also a writer of fine poetry Thoroughly enjoyed Just...
  March 6th, 2024 17:09
• “A MOTHER’S LOVE” (ChantellRyan2575) Stunning debut With rhyme flow and rhythm all spot on Looking forward...
  March 6th, 2024 17:01
• Was Meant (UniqueButterfly) Welcome You mention music Very apt as this write is very tuneful...
  March 6th, 2024 16:57
• Dancing with Doubt (Cloie) I agree with AP It\'s not a sprint cloie it\'s a marathon of we\'re...
  March 6th, 2024 16:52
• Over Due (Introverted Sage) As we say on Scotland FREEDOM
  March 6th, 2024 16:47
• How I Love (Introverted Sage) Magical It seems when you give of yourself it\'s all or nothing Yet...
  March 6th, 2024 16:31
• Hell or Heaven (Sunshine777) \"We were real far from perfect \" Great line Enjoyed the read Keep...
  March 5th, 2024 20:23
• The Love I Deserve (13LaurenD) Very emotional with stunning rhyme Thoroughly enjoyed the read
  March 5th, 2024 16:59
• The Waves, The Sand (Ashley25) Great debut I look forward to reading more from you Welcome to the...
  March 5th, 2024 15:49
• In the blink of an eye (Sophenia) Good rhyme and excellent content Glad to discover your writing Looking...
  March 5th, 2024 14:45
• I think (Bonnie) She is lucky to have you I did notice you managed to make her smile from...
  March 5th, 2024 13:45
• Algebra of Love (Teddy.15) Teddy I love how you say so much with so few words An artist of the...
  March 5th, 2024 13:32
• Wild Eyes (Noah Malice) Flow rhyme and rhythm are all spot on Great read Gon
  March 5th, 2024 13:29
• Tight (Introverted Sage) Absolutely brilliant writing \"New Crest on my chest yet I still failed...
  March 5th, 2024 12:40
• Whispering Thoughts (GiftedT17) Really enjoy the subtlety of your rhyme I sometimes have to bite my...
  March 5th, 2024 12:34
• Intended Release (Introverted Sage) This is an epic I can\'t believe the lack of views This site is lucky...
  March 5th, 2024 12:28
• A Light in the Night (Meera Mere) Nicely done yet again meera Keep em coming You are honing your craft...
  March 5th, 2024 12:17
• And suddenly... (Neilton) Nice rhyme in this poem Although sad it also has a feeling of moving...
  March 5th, 2024 12:15
• Halloween (Peto) Hi Dave I\'m from Glasgow in Scotland My little sister was born on...
  March 3rd, 2024 16:40
• Art (Sunshine777) Thanks for sharing your art with us We all need a little sunshine...
  March 3rd, 2024 14:23
• Among Poets (Rhmn_7) I wouldn\'t claim to be a poet more of a Trier However I\'ll try to...
  March 3rd, 2024 13:30
• Edges of Silence (NikNak73) Hi nik nak This is really thought provoking Though about a book 1st but...
  March 3rd, 2024 13:24
• Tango (Calliope) That is some dance Between what if and almost Those words unspoken...
  March 3rd, 2024 13:09
• I\'ll Sacrifice (Cloie) I think I would show her this poem It is full of emotion The rhyme...
  March 3rd, 2024 13:01
• I \"C\" You (Courlieth_aeolis) And you will c him At the ceremony Welcome Enjoyed the read Looking...
  March 3rd, 2024 12:51
• Unbounded (Teddy.15) When you\'re good You\'re good Some great lines in here Teddy The...
  March 3rd, 2024 12:45
• Pieces Of Me (GiftedT17) Got a more you give the more you get vibe You did what you set out to do...
  March 2nd, 2024 20:06
• The Eyes of Domestic Abuse (Melody Votoire) Welcome A fantastic debut \"Finally agonisingly takes it\'s claws out...
  March 2nd, 2024 14:48
• My Unknown Purpose (Cloie) You appear to have already found your purpose Self inventory at your age...
  March 2nd, 2024 09:32
• Powerless (GiftedT17) Hold on to your talent for writing \"To survive my lie is a thought...
  March 2nd, 2024 08:43
• Untitled (DD.) Your WORST is enough for us DD Keep writing it out
  March 2nd, 2024 08:36
• The 8 year old’s whisper (Meera Mere) Meera Your word choices are excellent The last line in particular is...
  March 2nd, 2024 08:30
• New Start (Jessi) Great rhyme and content Not sure what \"kanna\" means Apart from my...
  March 1st, 2024 15:47
• Get Ready For Something Big (Angelia Lamar) Very uplifting positive write Thoroughly enjoyed reading
  March 1st, 2024 14:17
• Quitting the fight (Calliope) Great rhyme and flow And I learned a new word beshrew Sad yet...
  March 1st, 2024 14:06
• Slumberbashing with Raven (Teddy.15) Ah dreams Talking ravens and distant memories So much to enjoy...
  March 1st, 2024 14:03
• what have i done wrong? (Emptythoughts) I have also at times took on undeserved blame/shame Until I...
  March 1st, 2024 13:52
• A Hazy Strange Winter (Parisab) The imagery is stunning Especially liked \"smiling fish\" Only...
  March 1st, 2024 13:41
• •instead• (MamasDarkside) Welcome I noticed the date Yet it still feels as raw and emotional...
  February 29th, 2024 09:56
• NURSERY MIS-RHYMES (Michael Edwards) Jack and jill went up the hill To fetch a pail of water Jill forgot to...
  February 29th, 2024 06:23
• Love in Friends and Steam (Anabella Aiyanna) The word choice and rhyme are spectacular Congrats to you and Ben Loved...
  February 29th, 2024 06:19
• CHANGES (Qurrathul Ain) Emotional and heartfelt I think we all try to build a protective barrier...
  February 28th, 2024 20:12
• Camille (1879) Monet (Cassie58) Could almost picture her Great writing
  February 28th, 2024 16:55
• The unkind (Neilton) Enjoyed the read Glad to discover your writing Looking forward to...
  February 28th, 2024 16:52
• Falsetto (Introverted Sage) You are a fantastic writer Loved it
  February 28th, 2024 14:23
• Angel of Mine (Tash Naidoo) A stunning tribute Such strength and emotion in every word Thank you...
  February 28th, 2024 14:12
• thinking in the worst way (Noah Malice) A blast from the past Good to see you gon Enjoyed reading this
  February 28th, 2024 14:07
• Little black heart (Kitty the naughty poet) Beautiful write kitty Long may it continue Enjoyed the read
  February 28th, 2024 14:05