Comments on community poems by RDS
- Missed (Fay Slimm.)
There\'s no real match for the magnificence of an Oak, such a nice read...
January 28th, 2022 10:16 - Duality (A Boy With Roses)
Another fine poem Jordan. It seems to me more expansive and unrestrained...
February 12th, 2021 12:47 - First Glance (Simple-Man87)
A nice flow, strange how an instant can reflect a lifetime. Keep your eyes...
February 11th, 2021 17:40 - Solitude (FredPeyer)
A nice rhythmic essay of a poetic perspective. Many people might say they...
February 11th, 2021 17:29 - Rose Petals in Vaults (A Boy With Roses)
Simply beautiful Jordan, I am not so astonished you keep improving in...
January 22nd, 2021 17:21 - Paired (Fay Slimm.)
Not every poet can find the romantic sense of life but you Fay never fail...
January 22nd, 2021 16:54 - Calling And Choice (Orchidee)
That\'s a great poetic sense of faith orchidee, nicely done.
J
January 22nd, 2021 16:34 - How to Sell Newspapers (Neville)
Why not beautiful? I guess the mind of a narrator asks no questions, just...
January 13th, 2021 19:09 - Wild and Precious (M.E.M.)
Well that\'s no idle ability, unless you are blessed and just wandering...
January 13th, 2021 18:52 - In the Presence of a Mighty Storm (Samer Amin)
Beautiful evocative verses Samer, I really like some of your wordplay...
January 13th, 2021 18:39 - Old Laughter. (Goldfinch60)
Really rhythmical and thoughtful Andy, a tribute to the wisdom you were...
January 13th, 2021 18:31 - Stopped Clocks (Fay Slimm.)
Haha you write such beautiful vivid verses Fay and I get to the end and...
January 13th, 2021 18:27 - perfectionist (Caitlinn02)
Nice flow caitlinn, haha you use the same technique as me for dealing with...
January 9th, 2021 09:03 - A love undefined yet (Poetic Dan)
Nice poem Dan and tied up nicely on the last line. I\'ve met a lot of...
January 7th, 2021 20:44 - Love Through The Pages (Clara)
Finely worded to leave me thinking of love desired and love remembered....
December 24th, 2020 10:40 - Coming Back – Currently, The Seven Joker Guys... (Nafis Light)
Yes quirky! Great illusion/allusion...neat.
J
December 23rd, 2020 17:08 - Rejoice, He Reigns! (Orchidee)
A thumping hymn orchidee I almost did want to sing it!
J
December 23rd, 2020 17:01 - My River To Eternity. (Goldfinch60)
A potent sense you\'ve penned here Andy, with strength and tenderness,...
December 23rd, 2020 16:58 - Moon Before the Horizon (A Boy With Roses)
Another great poem Jordan. Our word flow stands on metaphorical tableaus\'...
December 23rd, 2020 16:29 - The Knowing. (Fay Slimm.)
Fay my dear poet friend that first line is fully loaded and draws me right...
December 23rd, 2020 16:06 - Imagine That (Shearonder1987)
Nice positive vibes and sweet pace to the rhymes. Good post.
J
December 23rd, 2020 16:03 - Strange Lady. (Goldfinch60)
Haha great write Andy, an observation many people will identify with,.I...
December 21st, 2020 18:31 - Be Proud of Being Called Old. (Trenz Pruca)
At fifty I\'m still actively old, which means doing my level best to stay...
December 19th, 2020 19:12 - Battling Diversity (Harry Atkinson)
And best shared thanks Harry, refreshing.
J
December 19th, 2020 19:06 - El Essentia (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Relative dreams Kurt, lost myself in your thoughts. Good artistry.
December 19th, 2020 19:04 - Freedom (Jerry Reynolds)
Those are great, the second made me laugh...I\'ve met those dogs.
December 19th, 2020 18:59 - Polar Over the Water (A Boy With Roses)
That\'s the best one so far, of your collection I\'m slowly digesting....
December 19th, 2020 17:47 - Value of respect (Shearonder1987)
Nice sentiments Shearonder, even having this presence of mind 6/10 times...
December 19th, 2020 17:33 - Sheep and Domestics (A Boy With Roses)
Another outstanding tour of thought Jordan. Some absolutely class...
December 12th, 2020 16:04 - Letter to my soul (Shearonder1987)
Good poem Shearonder nice strength in your words that ties the meaninf...
December 12th, 2020 14:21 - THE INCARNATION ~ AN ACROSTIC 3 11 SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Great acrostic Angela and Brian. Hope your seasonal spirit keeps flowing...
December 12th, 2020 14:15 - The Village Ghost. (Goldfinch60)
Haha good to fing a poem with some high-spirited humour cheers Andy.
J
December 12th, 2020 14:11 - Kingdom of Dreams (A Boy With Roses)
Another great work Jordan, the poetic flow adds drama to some bizzare...
December 8th, 2020 15:29 - The Sparrow and the Soup. (Dasim)
Nice imagery and poetry, a very pleasing read thanks.
J
December 8th, 2020 14:49 - Sleep to Forget (Tayama)
Thanks that was a good evocation of heartache, anguish and a quirky what...
December 8th, 2020 14:46 - Swansong (Neville)
Nice view Neville, slightly darkly through a funnily dry lens! I should...
December 8th, 2020 14:05 - Never too late, to reflect (L. B. Mek)
A great poem with deep reflections L. B. Yes a bully is fragile and...
December 8th, 2020 13:52 - Knowledge & unknown (Poetic Dan)
That\'s a great poem Dan, can tell it\'s a happy place to be. Knowledge is...
December 8th, 2020 13:36 - William (Fay Slimm.)
Your words paint a pretty, frozen picture Fay. A great tribute to a true...
December 8th, 2020 13:24 - Brubeck Lives On. (Goldfinch60)
Nice tribute Andy, never saw a wizened old Brubeck step up to his piano...
December 8th, 2020 13:13 - Sense Perception (Suresh)
Great lyrical journey thanks Suresh,
A good question too. Are we hostage...
December 5th, 2020 15:28 - December Sunset (Fay Slimm.)
Marvelously evocative Fay. A beautiful reflection of Cornish coastlines...
December 3rd, 2020 20:33 - A Song About a Song (Quemis)
Quemis this is beautiful thank you for such a well thought and flowing...
December 3rd, 2020 20:26 - random thoughts inspired on walks experiencing life through five senses (Jerry Reynolds)
A great little gem Jerry. I too just researched a lune (thanks L. B.)....
December 3rd, 2020 20:19 - RECALLING (Michael Edwards)
That\'s a lovely poignant piece Michael, time measured against place,...
December 2nd, 2020 13:01 - boys! vol.1 (Tylerintheclouds)
A fine stream it is, plenty of moral issues on and under the surface of...
December 2nd, 2020 12:44 - With Nature Once More (Goldfinch60)
Nice writing Andy, seems it\'s a day for Riverside walks and poetic...
December 2nd, 2020 12:02 - Broken chains, no more crying shame! (Poetic Dan)
A simple message neatly woven together bud. Yes we\'ve got to find our...
December 1st, 2020 18:38 - Foreclosure (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
The first sentence really struck a chord with me. A sudden realisation...
December 1st, 2020 16:07 - COVID 19 # DEADLY FOE # A TANKA 5 7 5 7 7 (ANGELA & BRIAN)
King Crimson were great. Probably just the right pace to read your Tanka....
December 1st, 2020 15:33 - Two Out Of Three (ForeverJesus7)
A great straight to the point poem ForeverJesus6. I can see it as you put...
December 1st, 2020 15:21 - Alignment (John Prophet)
A really good lament for anologue technogy and freedom. I get the same...
December 1st, 2020 15:15 - My resilient heart (Mrsthrall34)
Well MrsThrall that was no small contribution. I did like the shift...
December 1st, 2020 15:12 - CAD. (Goldfinch60)
Hahaha and a bounder too boot, most likely. Yes it is strange how such a...
December 1st, 2020 06:27 - I DREW (Michael Edwards)
Haha lovely. Remaining unclassified I can only surmise you\'re drawn in...
December 1st, 2020 00:57 - Noir (A Boy With Roses)
Titanic!
What an absolute epic that grips tighter the more I read. What...
November 30th, 2020 22:55 - 16. Humble B. Bumble : Beeloved? (Aa Harvey)
Ah, humble love. A really good page Aa. Hope the book is going sweet.
J
November 30th, 2020 16:40 - Remaining Span (Suresh)
A nice meditation on focus, effort and the tangled nature of time Suresh....
November 30th, 2020 16:34 - Coyote Crossing (Dlherrmann)
A nice simple poetic reminder of the connectedness we share. A really nice...
November 30th, 2020 15:47 - Deep within throes of writer\'s block cerebral cortex feels frozen to the core (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
A good bouncy read about some of the unreasonable ways of the world and...
November 30th, 2020 15:45 - Some Halters (Satishverma)
You write of universal mystery in such lovely poetry. It reflects the...
November 30th, 2020 15:37 - Once (Fay Slimm.)
A truly beautiful reveal of feminine wisdom and love known and fondly...
November 30th, 2020 15:00 - Mediators of life (Poetic Dan)
This really shows your spirit Dan, a lovely soulful song of peace and...
November 30th, 2020 13:27 - Children of nature (Poetic Dan)
A really good sentiment to bring to life with some lovely descriptive...
November 30th, 2020 13:18 - AUTUMN TO WINTER ~ AN ACROSTIC 6 2 6 SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Aye, some say it\'s grin up north but it sounds like you know the value of...
November 30th, 2020 13:09 - The Jetway (Lowkey)
Thanks a nice hit to the senses.
J
November 30th, 2020 13:01 - Perfect Women (Ezekiel Ian Hitt)
Hi Ezekiel, a nice potent rhythm of love budding, hope to read more in the...
November 30th, 2020 10:54 - Half (Brittany Jo)
Good work Brittany Jo, I second L. B. \'s comment. Rawly evokes loss and a...
November 30th, 2020 10:37 - Presidency Not The President (ForeverJesus7)
Nice thoughtful poem Dion, completely outlines the French chefs idea. I...
November 30th, 2020 05:56 - Song Of The Nightingale (+2) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Wistful and charming thank you Kurt this stanza \"... Today is but...
November 29th, 2020 12:07 - Lines composed on a summer\'s day walk in the Manifold Valley (Kevin Michael Bloor)
Nice contemplations and a good read Kevin. Yes it\'s clear you spent an...
November 29th, 2020 11:35 - chaos in every beauty (Payton_loves_poetry)
Nice insights and well rounded verse. It\'s tru all human relations are...
November 29th, 2020 10:05 - Continuing Communion (Orchidee)
Another rolling adoration you\'ve penned orchidee.
I imagine communion is...
November 29th, 2020 09:15 - I didn\'t know this until you came to exist (Poetic Dan)
Wow I am humbled thank you Dan, yes you\'re right the comments sometimes...
November 29th, 2020 07:35 - ...In The Eye of The Beholder (PoeticBiscuit)
Hahaha fine historic skit. I too catch my reflection hunched and...
November 29th, 2020 07:14 - My Beautiful Colour (Mizgeen Berzinari)
A nice dedication made atmospheric and emotionally charged. Thanks for...
November 29th, 2020 07:00 - Time is a Marriage (Quemis)
I really like the flow and rhythm in the rhyme of this.
Light disguised...
November 29th, 2020 06:58 - The way to your heart (Sadie)
A nice beat in the heart of this poem. Wistful and tentative like a shy...
November 29th, 2020 06:51 - HANDFUL OF RICE (Thomas J. Dooley)
Nice bit of social commentary in verse Thomas. People who don\'t know...
November 29th, 2020 06:46 - Quare (+2) (Kurt Philip Behm)
I do like your pithy journal like entries. Always good evocative ideas...
November 29th, 2020 06:40 - Homage to Yin, Yang, and Qui. (The moon, sun and all else) (Trenz Pruca)
Nicely evocative. I feel lost against the winter blanket. Half nose...
November 29th, 2020 06:37 - Love First (Tayama)
A nice reminder that Love is...unconditional if it truly is the pinnacle,...
November 29th, 2020 06:31 - Missing (Dave donovan)
Really emotive and filled with half-spoken anguish stoically navigated....
November 29th, 2020 06:22 - I just can\'t stop!! (Poetic Dan)
All neatly wrapped up in rhyme Poetic Dan. A reflection of you marathon...
November 29th, 2020 06:15 - Decisive (Fay Slimm.)
I second L. B. \'s appreciation of the immersive vivid dying of the light....
November 29th, 2020 06:12 - convert (Tylerintheclouds)
A really nice read of thoughts going up and down, maybe left then right...
November 29th, 2020 06:01 - If Forever was but a day... (PoeticBiscuit)
Haha tenderness made punchy and bold. I enjoyed it.
J
November 28th, 2020 18:45 - A soulful purge! (Poetic Dan)
Whimsically poetic story, haha Poetic Dan. Sounds like a bit of pinch your...
November 28th, 2020 18:18 - How Can You? (Dlherrmann)
Nice earthy tones all round!
November 28th, 2020 18:07 - 13. Humble B. Bumble : Friday night will bee our night for dancing (Aa Harvey)
Sam Shepard?
November 28th, 2020 17:59 - Clarity of Remembrance within Gratitude (L. B. Mek)
A beautiful and saddening history lesson wrapped in poetry. L. B.
Only...
November 28th, 2020 17:41 - My Lady Was a Poem (Neville)
A warm embrace of love through life. Nicely woven sentiments of memory and...
November 28th, 2020 15:52 - In the End (Neville)
Pithy.
Only that spectre at the end of the road is given immortal...
November 28th, 2020 15:40 - Solutions (Fay Slimm.)
A great poem from another who falls often into hopeless romanticism and...
November 28th, 2020 13:26 - Where Nobody Has Gone Before. (Goldfinch60)
That\'s a good deal for a bit of patching and a little paint. Feelings of...
November 28th, 2020 11:41 - Pretending I\'m Okay (A Boy With Roses)
XIdlepoetX fantastic epic, by typical shorter standards. Tense, moody and...
November 28th, 2020 07:34 - there and here (Dusk arising)
Lovely imagery and fusion between feelings and sensations flowing around...
November 28th, 2020 04:14 - 12. Humble B. Bumble : Bee ware (Aa Harvey)
Haha, only just read its a book. It\'s a really good storyline. If I\'m...
November 27th, 2020 21:00 - Memories (Rose~)
Thanks for the flowing reflection and moody sugestiveness you\'ve woven...
November 27th, 2020 20:48 - Lovey-Dovey (Harry Atkinson)
I loved that man, a teasing disorder then BANG it all comes together in...
November 27th, 2020 20:28
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