Comments on community poems by arqios
- Father-Son (Dean langmuir)
That tension and balance when we have teenage children, with this I can...
June 9th, 2022 16:51 - Awayness (Fay Slimm.)
That platform, in any town and any country… that moment of parting...
June 9th, 2022 08:45 - RELIEF (Robert Tilleard)
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June 9th, 2022 06:22 - THE DIVINE PROPORTION (Robert Tilleard)
Arithmetically and poetically coupled. Something to be enjoyed in the...
June 9th, 2022 06:19 - Four Together. (Goldfinch60)
A poem of the age. Those that remain are now gathering in reminiscing and...
June 9th, 2022 01:42 - when i\'m with you (Nkznoodles)
And that is how it becomes ok. We proclaim it with our words and our...
June 9th, 2022 01:07 - 4x2 (Blueledge)
There are centuries old trees and forests that are now laid waste. And...
June 9th, 2022 01:02 - Into Quietness (GON)
Hope she gets to read this! What with \'sanctuary\' and \'mist,\'...
June 8th, 2022 22:43 - Ysolla (A Boy With Roses)
Solid as the paragraph gives that concrete look the words give that...
June 8th, 2022 18:34 - drop in the ocean (Harry)
It\'s a constant nagging question. With 7B people on the planet at any...
June 8th, 2022 07:49 - Rain (Dane Kyle)
A touching poem and quite rare in that the rain is presented in the...
June 8th, 2022 05:23 - Time stamps of that night (Nicky903)
Doesn\'t get any stronger than this. It can truly make us physically ill....
June 8th, 2022 02:13 - You\'ll Never Understand (A Boy With Roses)
A potent poem. Thanks for sharing.
June 8th, 2022 01:58 - My birth (Blueledge)
Home birth, natural exit. That is idyllic, as some are born breech and...
June 8th, 2022 01:14 - here (Arqios)
Thanks, L.B. This is a summing up of sorts in poetry or a life dedicated...
June 7th, 2022 05:25 - Recalling (Fay Slimm.)
Love in any season has its shining moment and with it its unique...
June 6th, 2022 06:04 - the planes are flying again (GON)
So much sounds in the skies these days. The air lanes are starting up...
June 6th, 2022 05:33 - Little White Pills (Vaughn Walker)
Or the flat side of the blade. The numbness resulting from meds does not...
June 6th, 2022 05:30 - Nocturnal Creature (A Boy With Roses)
The image of sticking sea urchins is a sensory overload! Rhyming lichen...
June 6th, 2022 04:12 - Commendable Character (Orchidee)
Building of character is a great task, good thing Jesus gifted us with...
June 6th, 2022 04:06 - Promised Pentecost (Orchidee)
A message that fills the spirit and brings a perspective that spreads over...
June 5th, 2022 05:42 - Lasting (Fay Slimm.)
Rabid despair is quite a fearful thing. Thanks for sharing.
June 5th, 2022 03:06 - big shirt (GON)
awesome to see that, she floating within the shirt, probably using it as a...
June 3rd, 2022 08:15 - Heart Healing (Orchidee)
What\'s with stones this week! Everywhere I look its about stone wings and...
June 3rd, 2022 02:48 - Cotter Dam extension (Pearcemelville 兎敏)
Scat! More right angled than that of the eastern greys. If we only had...
June 3rd, 2022 01:43 - Rome (Tom Wood)
The See at various times no longer sees, its holiness lost to the striving...
June 2nd, 2022 21:11 - drifting and daydreaming (GON)
When your love takes you and where despair does likewise, we can be...
June 2nd, 2022 20:54 - Lightning Amidst Clear Skies (Rocky Lagou)
Crumpling is part of the process. Happens to the best of us. I’ve had to...
June 2nd, 2022 09:26 - Platinum Prosperity (Orchidee)
I got platypus prosperity. And the platypi are out of reach. So I\'ll go...
June 2nd, 2022 05:50 - Something... (Semi-deadpoet)
Like becoming deaf to each other. So deep. Thanks for sharing.
June 2nd, 2022 00:34 - Time At Play (Tommytoons)
Taken on board from such a quite persuasive and inspiring poem. Thanks for...
June 1st, 2022 21:12 - Persevering Plea (Orchidee)
Psalm of David. Nice orchi. Noice.
June 1st, 2022 02:25 - a sort of poet (Kevin Michael Bloor)
Cruisin along when not composin and vice versa. Living life is poetry in...
June 1st, 2022 01:42 - The gamer (Nicky903)
Poetry allows heartbreak a chance to get some back. Poet on!
May 31st, 2022 20:28 - The Game is On (GON)
Ready, Player One!
May 31st, 2022 20:27 - bad habit (Dusk arising)
“In what should be love,” indeed!
May 30th, 2022 19:54 - Her Him Them (Mr. Not)
When you look AT her, that is a description of your entire world. And...
May 30th, 2022 07:28 - Sometimes (Mr. Not)
Mad for all sorts of reasons, that\'s what we are. A whole litany of a...
May 30th, 2022 07:26 - Self Doubt (Mr. Not)
Oh, Mr.Not; this is a riveting read. The doubting of self is balanced by...
May 30th, 2022 07:24 - Holding Hands With a Stranger (Vaughn Walker)
A very moving piece to read. thanks for sharing.
May 30th, 2022 05:50 - Brave (Timothy Michael Douget)
Something to carry and activate within us each morning we wake and to...
May 29th, 2022 19:53 - I\'m still looking (Nobody.notices)
heartfelt and reaching.
May 29th, 2022 19:36 - Coming Home Late (GON)
That is so sadly beautiful. It immortalises and encapsulates many emotions...
May 29th, 2022 17:19 - Weathering the Storm (Cygnus X-1)
Any poem that can carry the word ‘onslaught’ effectively deserves...
May 29th, 2022 17:16 - The passion of romance (Jonas Robinson)
To have found the answer to our imperfections, that indeed is truly...
May 28th, 2022 19:25 - A Rose with Thorns (Aradhya)
An excellent poem to read. Just amazed how several rose 🌹 related poems...
May 28th, 2022 07:10 - You Need Me (MrNobody40)
Filled with so much feeling and so relatable. Thanks for sharing.
May 28th, 2022 06:57 - Every time (Mackwashere34)
Heart wrenching and filled with soul. Hope it all gets better for you....
May 27th, 2022 22:55 - A Fragment (Jarcher54)
Grieving is such a familiar stranger, like an unopen\'d book gathering...
May 27th, 2022 20:25 - Blackbird (A Boy With Roses)
Very liquidy and somewhat blue.
Quite fluidly moving in its hues.
May 27th, 2022 20:20 - Study in Watercolour (A Boy With Roses)
Reading it felt like a painting that one goes into. Kinda Mary Poppins...
May 27th, 2022 20:17 - Awaken (Tayama)
That is what we should be awakened to. Thanks for sharing. /Rik.
May 27th, 2022 10:41 - Prayer Possibles (Orchidee)
Sometimes the answer has been there all along. We just see with different...
May 27th, 2022 06:09 - Somewhere Down Turn Again Lane (Neville)
That is a lane that some only unwittingly walk into, and others boldly...
May 27th, 2022 05:19 - Sensing. (Fay Slimm.)
A rose by any other name... Such a tender piece but filled with such...
May 27th, 2022 04:49 - The Cowboy’s Deed (MDStone)
This brings alive the lore of the cowboy and the wild West. Brought to...
May 27th, 2022 04:43 - Neglect Not The Gift (Orchidee)
To be of service in the spirit of love and humility, in the fulfillment of...
May 24th, 2022 18:35 - to anybody out there (Sonnie)
How true! Making sense of our existence is half the coin, the other is...
May 23rd, 2022 21:38 - waking up is a struggle (De Suin)
An excellent read! Miss the church bells, haven\'t heard them or leaved...
May 23rd, 2022 08:27 - THe evaluation of our world (MR.apocalypse)
Good observations. These wedded with counsel of past observations and...
May 23rd, 2022 08:14 - Trust Through Troubles (Orchidee)
Restorative and peaceful. Thanks for sharing.
May 23rd, 2022 02:26 - Dungeon (ModernBard)
Silence of most vital things
Many and all us should learn.
In not so...
May 23rd, 2022 02:22 - The Mirror of Dawn (Rocky Lagou)
So wonderful and uplifting. The words racing and popping like carousel...
May 20th, 2022 08:39 - ODDITIES (1) (Michael Edwards)
The picture is the after image of the dance of the penguins with Ms. Mary...
May 19th, 2022 00:14 - Sad Day (Paul Bell)
Who\'s April?! And how did the poetic persona get out of this bind? May...
May 18th, 2022 04:11 - unfixable | fixable (Whispersaroundyou)
That is quite true and real, it can and does fix itself. Good read. Thanks...
May 16th, 2022 23:12 - Here I Stand (Vaughn Walker)
Welcome, and thanks for sharing! Your first offering here is very...
May 16th, 2022 19:32 - passive aggressive (GON)
Ain’t that the truth! Wonder if it ever gets across to the denser of...
May 16th, 2022 19:29 - MOVING (Andy Hunter)
Leaving but probably not on a jet plane, and perhaps never to return...
May 16th, 2022 19:25 - Just Judgement (Orchidee)
Awesome and quite hopeful as I see judgement not in terms of punitive...
May 16th, 2022 07:18 - Haiku (James Michael)
And in the slow ending, we build our lives and sup of it. Such a broad...
May 16th, 2022 07:13 - Alone in the Night (Harrison03)
Liked how all the senses are involved in this experience of the night....
May 15th, 2022 07:38 - The Sun (Classicmister)
It would take 8 minutes at least for us to notice anything that could be...
May 15th, 2022 07:35 - The Child Has Gone (Paul Bell)
Oh wow. this is heartbreaking and probably written form something that...
May 15th, 2022 07:33 - muffled words (Empty vial)
The use of repetition here is quite effective and not annoying. It\'s...
May 14th, 2022 17:20 - That\'s too Weird! (Orchidee)
Ah, some good humor to start the weekend with! My cup is filled. Thanks,...
May 14th, 2022 10:21 - Surprise Goodbye (Charles Edward York)
The image of \'tumbleweed tumbling by\' remains as I read through the...
May 14th, 2022 02:59 - Let me kiss it better (0121_Pedro)
This gave me an imaginary scenario of a boy that witnessed the mother...
May 14th, 2022 02:18 - When a Man is Down and Out (Harrison03)
Yes, that\'s the ticket, really - enabled to face our fears! Right on....
May 13th, 2022 07:30 - Covid restrictions (Pocev_Gjoshe)
So begins my increasing collection of Covid poetry. This is the first I...
May 13th, 2022 04:04 - pad see yew (Pearcemelville 兎敏)
Makin me hungry there, mate!
May 13th, 2022 04:02 - That\'s too Weird! (Orchidee)
Ah, some good humor to start the weekend with! My cup is filled. Thanks,...
May 13th, 2022 03:18 - Tonight outside it’s cold (0121_Pedro)
\"Rich men do\'t get hungry\" boy, did that line get to me. Here\'s to...
May 13th, 2022 02:21 - Heavenly Help (Orchidee)
Was it meant the be The King instead of He King S1L2?
Wedding hymn and...
May 13th, 2022 02:05 - Let Your Light Shine (Cbdave)
This little light need the Big Light!
May 13th, 2022 00:30 - Old Friend (GON)
Sigh. And as the days go by we will ever wonder why. Most occasions the...
May 12th, 2022 23:39 - Warrior (Kurtis77)
An ode, it would be, to all the warriors out there. All is not lost....
May 12th, 2022 22:26 - Bad Moon Rises (MendedFences27)
Intensely riveting! You could almost see it all play out in your mind....
May 12th, 2022 22:17 - -Sung with passion- (Dean langmuir)
It is something like this when you hear someone before the sound of their...
May 12th, 2022 22:15 - RubyRae: The Light Seen with Closed Eyes (A Dedication to a Departed MPS Poet) (Rocky Lagou)
Being new to MPS, I hadn\'t the opportunity to \'meet\' RubyRae nor have...
May 12th, 2022 21:46 - Oh to be Young (Saxon Crow)
Youth finally shut out from the current day when I realised that for...
May 12th, 2022 08:21 - The Feast (Howard Gipstein)
What a delightful poetic personification. Thanks for sharing.
May 12th, 2022 07:48 - Nothing is for sure (0121_Pedro)
Nothing is for sure. Pretty much what can be summed up from observing what...
May 12th, 2022 05:37 - Too young to know yourself. (Calbreezy)
Been too young to know and scarier to be too old know any better. Probably...
May 12th, 2022 04:42 - a rhymester\'s life (Kevin Michael Bloor)
Here, here! That was a poem with ideas dear. For when you bring that...
May 12th, 2022 04:28 - Remember Hell (Makoto Maruyama)
Hello from Tokyo. It is a plan to go and see Hiroshima one day. I have...
May 12th, 2022 04:22 - Gehenna. (Chris Duffy)
The Valley of Hinnom and all that it stands for. Surely a wake up call....
May 12th, 2022 04:13 - ChasM (Pearcemelville 兎敏)
Haha! Been there, one that, LOL! Awesome putting them into words.
May 12th, 2022 00:03 - Scar (Spilleronsheet)
Our scars remind us that we lived another day. To survivor in us moves on....
May 11th, 2022 21:17 - -Colored Words- (Dean langmuir)
An excellent and clever poem! One worth emulating, at some stage. Almost...
May 11th, 2022 07:16
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