Comments on community poems by arqios

• Today I went to the Valley of Erudition. (David Wakeling) We navigate all terrain and clime to where we’re at everyday through the...
  March 16th, 2025 02:42
• I\'m Already Dead (Molly Delaney) Welcome to MPS 🙏🏻🕊
  March 15th, 2025 19:04
• echoes of Babel (Arqios) Not 3nough going for this one it would seem…
  March 15th, 2025 18:59
• Love for losers (2781) And Truth shall set free, if we so chose.🙏🏻🕊
  March 15th, 2025 08:50
• The same (2781) Remaining and abiding, quite revolutionary and ever assuring🙏🏻🕊
  March 15th, 2025 08:38
• Gone (John Prophet) Love how the connotation of Humpty Dumpty figured in this stirring piece!...
  March 15th, 2025 07:51
• AN ANGELS NOTE (Nephilim56) Oh what a good thing that the note was finally read🙏🏻🕊hope that...
  March 15th, 2025 07:37
• Play (Tony36) Enjoyed this visit to fairytale land, haven’t been in a long while....
  March 15th, 2025 07:35
• Heart of Deception (Tristan Robert Lange) The shape of this poem is quite enticing 🙏🏻🕊📦💔
  March 15th, 2025 06:36
• Coat of dust (Tommy B Goode) Welcome to MPS 🙏🏻🕊would love to see the Nederlands version as...
  March 15th, 2025 06:34
• It\'s The Way It Is (DesertWords) Words and poetry of the way I’m feeling and living… not even a citizen...
  March 15th, 2025 06:08
• Leaves (Sorenbarrett) Sometimes I feel that one or both of us was grafted and replanted...
  March 15th, 2025 05:51
• Do Not Cut Corners (Poetic Licence) A square peg would fit is a larger circle to accommodate its unique...
  March 15th, 2025 05:39
• Life Is Ahead. (Goldfinch60) What could be changed should be altered into positives, smooth Andy, great...
  March 15th, 2025 05:37
• Vera and Harold. (David Wakeling) Reminds me of Nan and Gramps - very companionable but lacking any romantic...
  March 15th, 2025 05:36
• Life to Come (Kevin Michael Bloor) Now that’s a grieving poem if I ever did see one🙏🏻🕊Liked and...
  March 14th, 2025 20:47
• Sorry for the mess (CuriousWanderer) Having seen domiciles in such a state it can also be reverse...
  March 14th, 2025 19:53
• Looking, Shall We Say, Remarkably Innocent?! (Cheeky Missy) Madness is truly chameleon mindedness, a mastery sequestered in the...
  March 14th, 2025 18:37
• Now lookie here, humans (Orchidee) Good write O🙏🏻🕊a bit late in posting today?🕊🙏🏻
  March 14th, 2025 17:28
• Caged in Lilacs (Tristan Robert Lange) Everything matches, the rhyme, the mood, the image art! 🙏🏻🕊
  March 14th, 2025 09:14
• wide road of the exterior (Arqios) This has not appeared to have fared well. Oh well.
  March 14th, 2025 07:56
• Solitude my brother (Orions pen) This one speaks to me and Solitude nods in silent agreement 🙏🏻🕊
  March 14th, 2025 07:55
• Fishing (Tony36) Fishing to a T! Wonderful 🙏🏻🕊
  March 14th, 2025 07:53
• Random thought (Jerry Reynolds) Ah, that’s me when heading outdoors and misjudging the number of layers...
  March 14th, 2025 07:52
• Fartology (Mutley Ravishes) Better out than in! 🙏🏻🕊
  March 14th, 2025 06:47
• HOSPITAL (Nephilim56) Always wondered, outside of the legal process why we have to go away (to...
  March 14th, 2025 05:42
• Dark Corners of my Soul (Thomas W Case) Now this one is close to my heart, Thomas. I can’t explain it well at...
  March 14th, 2025 05:39
• Verses of dust (Sorenbarrett) Amazing 🤩 a vivid portrayal that I’ve myself experienced...
  March 14th, 2025 05:35
• We Met On A Crossing. (Goldfinch60) Where the seasons meet, a favored place to be at most times. Sort of like...
  March 14th, 2025 05:33
• Wendy meets Blind Brad at the Bus stop. (David Wakeling) Easy to forget the blind part, the sunnies don’t always give it away,...
  March 14th, 2025 03:03
• Blood Brothers (Poetic Licence) A case study on what is family, truly riveting 🙏🏻🕊️
  March 14th, 2025 03:01
• Stole my tent (Tony36) With the tent ⛺️ in place the starry night scape would’ve been...
  March 13th, 2025 07:55
• The Weight of Enlightenment (Neville) Wisdom takes it’s excruciating time to age within hearts and minds…...
  March 13th, 2025 05:42
• My Parents & Poetry (Tom Dylan) They support you so much that’s plenty of poetry to go around in the...
  March 13th, 2025 05:40
• Thanatos night visitor (Sorenbarrett) Now I can’t pass up a poem where “gloom” features quite effectively...
  March 13th, 2025 05:37
• Today, Tomorrow, Last Year? (Orchidee) Nuttiness you can enjoy! Others can’t get away with it like you do, O…...
  March 13th, 2025 05:35
• The Water. (Poetic Licence) Wonderfully refreshing when these days only wishing thinking is available...
  March 13th, 2025 05:33
• The Moon Above. (Goldfinch60) A reliable witness moon by moon🙏🏻🕊
  March 13th, 2025 05:32
• Deirdre (David Wakeling) Oh my… so much like my journey… minus the cancer, thus far. Liked and...
  March 13th, 2025 05:30
• The Library (Kevin Hulme) Many prisons have libraries and that’s where (by force of circumstance)...
  March 13th, 2025 05:29
• Runaway engine (Cedrick) Getting it seems to be the main goal. 🙏🏻🕊
  March 12th, 2025 19:49
• Bee in your bonnet sonnet (Sorenbarrett) So commenced the crises of the no-longer-existent🙏🏻🕊
  March 12th, 2025 17:36
• DREAM RETURNING (Nephilim56) Recurring dreams are superbly interesting. Hope this isn’t too far off...
  March 12th, 2025 07:56
• Don\'t Call This A Come-Back (Tom Dylan) Most apt analogy… like muscle memory, the flow begins to loosen up and...
  March 12th, 2025 07:55
• Quantum Mix (John Prophet) A rhythm and tempo that is pure pleasure to read🙏🏻🕊
  March 12th, 2025 05:57
• There is a flower (Kevin Hulme) An image and movement that is worthy of meditation and enjoyment...
  March 12th, 2025 05:56
• Returns (Mutley Ravishes) The seeds asleep/awakening dynamic is so mystifying and engaging!...
  March 12th, 2025 05:54
• I Thought I saw You Standing There. (Poetic Licence) Yay! Welcome the centennial post… compliments to you. 🙏🏻🕊
  March 12th, 2025 05:51
• Buzzard. (Goldfinch60) Oh, so that’s what happened. Welcome back… reminds me of the vulture...
  March 12th, 2025 05:50
• Alone in the sea at night. (David Wakeling) Now that is much more convincing than just throwing the towel or even just...
  March 12th, 2025 05:48
• Tick or Tock? (Orchidee) Ah! Now I see our synchronicity 🙏🏻🕊️
  March 12th, 2025 05:09
• One More Open Verdict For the Road (Neville) Or falling in style… as some lovers are gifted with 🙏🏻🕊
  March 11th, 2025 04:58
• No, I\'ve Not Run Out of Excuses...Yet (Cheeky Missy) Was beginning to wonder where you’d gone off to 🙏🏻🕊Tristan as...
  March 11th, 2025 04:30
• Life Saver (Kevin Michael Bloor) You are so wonderfully blessed to have such support in poetry 🙏🏻🕊
  March 11th, 2025 04:27
• Poetry isn\'t for me (Tom Dylan) As it is for all! Thanks for the reminder Tom…idve left a long time ago...
  March 11th, 2025 04:26
• ? (Sorenbarrett) Now where you doing my poetry portrait? Save for the fact that I was her...
  March 11th, 2025 04:24
• Hang Your Head in Shame (Poetic Licence) No, not an easy read. And free moral agency is not something over the...
  March 11th, 2025 03:25
• The Wistful View of The Great Desecration. (David Wakeling) And here I find the poetic valediction on the life-death dynamic....
  March 11th, 2025 03:22
• Miss Mary Court (Kevin Hulme) Works wonders even more so in the literal as I return from an interment...
  March 11th, 2025 03:19
• Armored Vehicle (Mutley Ravishes) Hence the search for the soft underbelly, to pry open as a tin opener only...
  March 11th, 2025 03:17
• Queues (Neville) Oozes and breathes Holocaust, cloying toxic asphyxiation; almost like...
  March 11th, 2025 03:15
• I am only 85 (Hzugman) Life’s never too young for us! 🙏🏻🕊
  March 11th, 2025 03:11
• All Things Revealed in Him (Whats write for me) In Him there is no darkness🙏🏻🕊️
  March 10th, 2025 04:39
• Brief Encounter: Aisle 6: World Foods (Kevin Hulme) Usually get a clean up spill on Aisle 6 🙏🏻🕊️
  March 10th, 2025 03:50
• In school (Sorenbarrett) I had the very same textbooks and lessons 🙏🏻🕊️
  March 10th, 2025 03:44
• Rest and Renewal (Whats write for me) Blessed assurance!
  March 10th, 2025 03:42
• Don\'t look outside for answers (Hzugman) Peaceful and reassuring 🙏🏻🕊️
  March 10th, 2025 03:41
• Roofing Conundrum (Doggerel Dave) That’s the existential angst personified in this generation’s reality.
  March 10th, 2025 03:35
• Mr Piecrust has a visitor. (David Wakeling) Too much negativity in the world narrows down a typical person’s thought...
  March 10th, 2025 03:31
• Hippowhatsitphobia Acrostic. (Goldfinch60) Time to bring ‘em back, I see🙏🏻🕊️
  March 10th, 2025 03:27
• Lost In a Snowstorm. (Poetic Licence) Now that is superbly rendered🙏🏻🕊️
  March 10th, 2025 03:21
• Will This Stop? (Orchidee) Too funny you are O🤪
  March 10th, 2025 03:20
• One last poem (Definitelymayank) Welcome to MPS 🙏🏻🕊
  March 9th, 2025 18:56
• I\'m Not Going To Cry About It Sorry I Lied (Hanible) Very powerful but subtle as well🙏🏻🕊
  March 9th, 2025 07:06
• Seasons of life (Tony36) And these cycles continue on schedule like clockwork! 🙏🏻🕊
  March 9th, 2025 06:54
• goodbye robin (Arqios) Sometimes it’s hard to tell.
  March 9th, 2025 06:24
• Journey Through the Unknown (Salvia.S) And looking down at our feet we realise where we’re at! Awesome read...
  March 9th, 2025 06:22
• Wrong Shoes (Distant View) One can feel that- just like a tie 👔 or a costume, the dress making the...
  March 9th, 2025 05:57
• Whatever his name is (2781) Amen 🙏🏻🕊
  March 9th, 2025 03:20
• Nature Reminds Me (Thomas W Case) Superb write, Thomas 🙏🏻🕊
  March 9th, 2025 03:19
• Tempting Times (Orchidee) Good write O.
  March 9th, 2025 03:14
• Who we are (Sorenbarrett) Boiled down to vapour can also be a case of a pot calling the kettle black...
  March 9th, 2025 03:05
• Fun On A Sunnier Sunday (Poetic Licence) An enjoyable read! And five times over🙏🏻🕊
  March 9th, 2025 03:00
• Blessed Be. (Goldfinch60) Our blessings are innumerable and of immeasurable value 🙏🏻🕊
  March 9th, 2025 02:21
• Sugar and Salt (David Wakeling) Is there mind reading or coincidences afoot!? Was thinking for several...
  March 9th, 2025 02:20
• How do you say goodbye (Tony36) Once a long time ago that farewell works better than goodbye. Now I’m...
  March 8th, 2025 08:04
• Release (Cassie58) A haunting release as wings unfurl- remembering that a few birds that will...
  March 8th, 2025 07:15
• Subordinates And Yes Men (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Pushing yes men only furthers their resolve to rubber stamp the prevailing...
  March 8th, 2025 06:12
• Presents from Penzance (Arqios) In whatever endeavour it is the waiting that always grates and kills…
  March 8th, 2025 05:52
• Anna Akhmatova. Creativity (Cellinic) Lovely translation! That brings her work to a wider audience 🕊🙏🏻
  March 8th, 2025 05:51
• pain (Sheta) Powerful message! The last 2 lines are a solemn warning. 🙏🏻🕊
  March 8th, 2025 04:53
• SECRET PLACE (Nephilim56) Speaks of wonders and miracles, like when a book brings the author and...
  March 8th, 2025 04:51
• A grip too tight (Sorenbarrett) Reminds me of the Conor Clapton toddler tragedy… “Tears in Heaven” ...
  March 8th, 2025 04:45
• Where Are All The Grassy Knolls When You Really Need One (Neville) But there are a dime a dozen Lee Harvey’s out there it appears… power...
  March 8th, 2025 04:38
• Half A Bag Of S... !!! (Poetic Licence) Being let down and letting others down can be some of life’s most...
  March 8th, 2025 04:35
• Alone Or With God. (Goldfinch60) Superlatively profound in style. Content and meaning! 🙏🏻🕊
  March 8th, 2025 02:20
• From a Window (Kevin Hulme) Quaint and vibrant🙏🏻🕊
  March 8th, 2025 02:05
• Sun Raid (Mutley Ravishes) So many possibilities of interpreting, so delicious in its appeal...
  March 8th, 2025 02:04
• My Librarian (Thomas W Case) Splendid work! My library is now mostly digital and a large part of it...
  March 8th, 2025 02:03
• Song for a toddler (David Wakeling) Ah, now this takes me back even further than I thought possible! My...
  March 8th, 2025 02:01