Comments on community poems by arqios

• Night spells (Sorenbarrett) Allied and almost mirrored experiences or in the least a variant in...
  September 7th, 2025 17:14
• Original Sin (Tristan Robert Lange) \"enkindled\" now there is a word and a half! An excellent start to the...
  September 7th, 2025 17:12
• The Sparsity of Sand (Tristan Robert Lange) I hear the stillness between your lines, where even the wind forgets its...
  September 7th, 2025 01:39
• And…. (Doggerel Dave) For now we be moved!
  September 6th, 2025 21:50
• an ill-fitting halo (Arqios) Thanks for the Fave 🤩 @Tittu @Soren
  September 6th, 2025 15:33
• “games we play” (Arqios) Thanks for the Fave @C.W. Bleu 🤩🙏🏻🕊️
  September 6th, 2025 06:18
• Today Is The Future (Israel McCorkle) Here\'s to being unstoppable! 🙏🏻🕊️
  September 6th, 2025 06:17
• Why? (Sorenbarrett) We are a strange society; vulgar displays can oftentimes be stomached and...
  September 6th, 2025 06:10
• an ill-fitting halo (Arqios) Now here\'s a meditation on the weight and wobble of what we carry above...
  September 6th, 2025 06:07
• Falling, Failing (Tristan Robert Lange) Hearing “Falling, Failing” as a song changes the feel completely....
  September 5th, 2025 23:58
• Search (Igor Vykhovanets) welcome to MPS 🕊️🙏🏻
  September 5th, 2025 07:06
• All the Nice Girls... (Kevin Hulme) Get that - some pseudonym cover for such spoutings. But I surmise this is...
  September 4th, 2025 19:02
• Metaphor Master (Doggerel Dave) Not very well, I suspect. Like many gamers and their real offline lives....
  September 4th, 2025 19:01
• Feathered Stone (Thomas W Case) Solid.
  September 4th, 2025 18:59
• To Death I Am Bound (Tristan Robert Lange) Sounds like many a day that I have lived through, barely getting by! That...
  September 4th, 2025 18:58
• Fair warning (Jerry Reynolds) Such an engaging read!!!
  September 4th, 2025 18:56
• Fear myths of the unknown (Sorenbarrett) At least we are fed! And sheltered.
  September 4th, 2025 18:56
• ALWAYS BOLD (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Learning from mistakes is a lifeskill hard to learn and harder to...
  September 4th, 2025 18:55
• Words Of Importance. (Goldfinch60) And coming from nothing we have that distinct privilege of becoming...
  September 4th, 2025 18:54
• PAINTED NAILS (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Memories are such powerful things! Reminds me of poor old Ms Havisham and...
  September 2nd, 2025 16:27
• War And Hate Gone Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) It’s a perhaps to be kept close to heart 🕊️🙏🏻
  September 2nd, 2025 16:25
• Plastic legacy (Sorenbarrett) Truly living in a world of grand delusion it would appear. We are such a...
  September 2nd, 2025 16:25
• The Obscuration of Salvation (Tristan Robert Lange) Oh , that brought me back to a gorge down south called Devil’s Kitchen!
  September 2nd, 2025 08:31
• mythic greenhouse / hinge of words (Arqios) So, the boundaries between myth and mechanism blur in a space where time...
  September 1st, 2025 04:18
• When to Listen Lightly (Neville) Listening lightly when breathing heavily; got it!
  August 31st, 2025 16:44
• Swarms Around Me. (Goldfinch60) They must be a tad better than Fiat Uno’s. 🚙🚘🚗🚐
  August 31st, 2025 15:24
• Little armor (Sorenbarrett) Chagas and leprosy, oh my! 🕊🙏🏻
  August 31st, 2025 15:22
• Be Present (Bella Shepard) Perfect expression. Sometimes just to show up makes everything move along...
  August 31st, 2025 05:00
• Flowers (Reverend) Welcome to MPS, Reverend 🕊️🙏🏻
  August 31st, 2025 03:17
• Holy People\'s Town (Tristan Robert Lange) Certainly not on my bucket 🪣 list 📝 to visit! So sorry you had to...
  August 30th, 2025 08:01
• the dam is breached (Arqios) Thanks for the Fave @CM 🕊️🙏🏻
  August 30th, 2025 05:51
• dogfight interlude (Arqios) That’s most likely a failure to launch 🚀
  August 30th, 2025 00:53
• Telly Detectives (Kevin Hulme) A cheeky nod to 1970s TV nostalgia, this light‑footed rhyme swaps...
  August 30th, 2025 00:50
• A BARE LIGHT BULB (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) This one drapes its imagery in loneliness and unease, moving through a...
  August 29th, 2025 19:28
• Live For Today Again. (Goldfinch60) This short, reflective poem distills a simple but powerful truth: the only...
  August 29th, 2025 19:27
• Let\'s Discuss My Awakeness Later (Cheeky Missy) Lets us feel the drifts between drowsy awakenings, small domestic rituals,...
  August 29th, 2025 19:24
• Words of destiny. (Friendship) The poem \"Remember\" reflects on a once-deep friendship forged through...
  August 29th, 2025 19:20
• Death Pact (Tristan Robert Lange) ...superb haunting skills and performance
  August 29th, 2025 19:14
• Rose (Teddy.15) Too short, can\'t begin to count the number of roses we\'ve enjoyed and...
  August 29th, 2025 19:12
• Friendly Response…. (Doggerel Dave) There are many games and far too many players... the world is in our...
  August 29th, 2025 19:11
• Beauty and thorns (Sorenbarrett) 🌹 Passion isn’t always love. Sometimes we grab the rose...
  August 29th, 2025 05:38
• Our Life. (Goldfinch60) A worthy admonition!
  August 28th, 2025 08:58
• The Window (Tristan Robert Lange) That has brought me back to certain recurring dreams that I thought had...
  August 28th, 2025 08:57
• Conflict (Damaso) Nice! Bringing to life that story in a powerful poem🕊️🙏🏻
  August 28th, 2025 08:51
• 28 August 2025 (Arqios) It’s less about counting days than letting days leave their mark,...
  August 28th, 2025 06:35
• Point of view (Jerry Reynolds) Splendid haiku, Jerry 🙏🏻🕊️
  August 26th, 2025 05:39
• Hitchhikers Guide. (Goldfinch60) It’s got that cheeky twist ending that completely reframes the ride you...
  August 26th, 2025 03:46
• gated folds (Arqios) These gated folds attempts to catch that fragile hour before movement;...
  August 26th, 2025 03:40
• hope (Jim56) I really did need to read this. Thanks for posting it. Good timing,...
  August 25th, 2025 06:11
• Pie (E.J. Waling) This has the feel of a creation myth told in the language of mathematics...
  August 25th, 2025 05:50
• Can Nature Survive. (Poetic Licence) Roots clutch the soil beneath a sky turned pale, storms carve the hills...
  August 25th, 2025 05:41
• Blood and bone (Sorenbarrett) Your poem reads like an oral epic rendered in bush‑ballad rhythm; a...
  August 25th, 2025 05:37
• Disillusioned (NafisaSB) Dear Safina, this poem carries with it the precision of a fable: short,...
  August 25th, 2025 05:34
• My Hungry Body Satisfied. (Goldfinch60) This poem unfolds like a love letter to music itself: sensual, devotional,...
  August 25th, 2025 05:32
• MANS LAST DAY (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Hey Norman, this poem reads like a stark, cinematic prophecy; the kind of...
  August 25th, 2025 05:30
• Portrait of Dora Lyse (Kevin Hulme) There’s a wry, noir‑tinged humour in this little portrait: the glamour...
  August 25th, 2025 05:27
• A Picture In My Mind (Iam1ItchyLizzard) Welcome to MPS, David 🕊️🙏🏻
  August 25th, 2025 05:25
• a clockwork orangerie (Arqios) Come and linger in its glass corridors longer than expected. Let the air...
  August 25th, 2025 05:11
• Summer Fun (Jerry Reynolds) They can’t help themselves🌞🌻🍉😎
  August 24th, 2025 07:49
• \"the question\" (Arqios) Thanks for the Fave 🤩 @Priya Tomar🕊️🙏🏻
  August 24th, 2025 07:48
• \"the question\" (Arqios) Thanks for the Fave @sorenbarrett🤩🕊️🙏🏻
  August 24th, 2025 05:12
• \"the question\" (Arqios) Thanks for the Fave @Salvia🤩🙏🏻🕊️
  August 24th, 2025 05:03
• \"the question\" (Arqios) There’s a certain kind of writing that isn’t about endings at all, but...
  August 24th, 2025 04:37
• Smashed Ice Cream Bars and Microwaved Meals (Cheeky Missy) Across this little odyssey of sonnets, daily life weaves itself from small...
  August 23rd, 2025 18:11
• Allures in Illusions (Salvia.S) A poem so delicate but edged: a warning distilled into three quick...
  August 23rd, 2025 18:09
• Mirrored pool of Hermes (Sorenbarrett) This ripples with alchemy; lightning etching mortal traces, language...
  August 23rd, 2025 18:06
• THE OLDEST FLAME (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) For me \"The oldest flame\" evokes a lone, golden‑crowned fire standing...
  August 23rd, 2025 18:04
• Monsoon musings (Priya Tomar) These monsoon musings unfurl like the first warm rain after a long,...
  August 23rd, 2025 18:02
• Porlock (Neville) I like the salt‑soft nostalgia in Porlock, like a postcard you can smell...
  August 23rd, 2025 17:59
• Stepping Stones Tanka. (Goldfinch60) There’s a quiet resolve in this tanka, Andy; the kind that doesn’t...
  August 23rd, 2025 17:57
• the damnedest destinations (Tristan Robert Lange) This poem snaps and spirals like a gust that can’t decide whether to...
  August 23rd, 2025 17:55
• When I Look At You (Louiray) Welcome to MPS, louiray 🕊️🙏🏻
  August 23rd, 2025 17:52
• Change (Jerry Reynolds) Black moon tonight! The sky is so dark. 🙏🏻🕊
  August 23rd, 2025 07:50
• public square, Grote Markt Bruxelles (Arqios) It’s a bit on the vague surrealistic side but glad you’ve taken it...
  August 23rd, 2025 07:49
• The shadows of tyrant (Laurence Thompson) Welcome to MPS Laurence 🕊️🙏🏻
  August 22nd, 2025 18:17
• Whats for dinner (Jerry Reynolds) Everyone is someone else’s dinner, so it appears!
  August 22nd, 2025 08:26
• moreton mirror (Arqios) Half of none could be some in a dreamscape
  August 22nd, 2025 08:23
• moreton mirror (Arqios) Set on Brisbane’s river edge, Moreton Mirror drifts from a simple...
  August 22nd, 2025 07:02
• Traps (Sorenbarrett) Your poem coils with primal inevitability: a world where hunter and hunted...
  August 22nd, 2025 06:58
• The Day I Found Me (Teddy.15) Brings me back to my most favourite early childhood story, \"the ugly...
  August 22nd, 2025 06:53
• Priest Of Fishing. (Goldfinch60) Your poem drifts with the calm simplicity of fishing memories before...
  August 22nd, 2025 06:51
• YOU DEPARTED EAST (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Your poem captures the profound ache of betrayal, moving from the false...
  August 22nd, 2025 06:42
• Pity, Really Such A Dreadful Pity (Cheeky Missy) Steam curling from the mug Cats fed, leaves drifting gold Small griefs...
  August 21st, 2025 18:43
• Alone (Tristan Robert Lange) In the still between heartbeats A spark still glows unseen Even the...
  August 21st, 2025 18:39
• The Grave Digger (Tony Grannell) Soil swallows names Shadows remain Hands still ache From weight of
  August 21st, 2025 18:37
• Wind (Sorenbarrett) Whisper to roar Roots torn wide Her fury spent Sighs can\'t hide
  August 21st, 2025 18:37
• LITTLE PICTURES (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Ink can wound Or ink can hide Let\'s choose the page Where truth...
  August 21st, 2025 18:35
• Memories Brought Back (Goldfinch60) Sun on the green Echoes in my mind One against many And still, I...
  August 21st, 2025 18:33
• New World Slaughter (Mutley Ravishes) Steel in my stance Fire in my eyes One clean hit Your crown...
  August 21st, 2025 18:32
• Simple pleasures (Jerry Reynolds) And that whiff can extract one’s soul and sensibilities!
  August 21st, 2025 18:03
• Core (Tristan Robert Lange) The poem collapses language into feeling. Connection isn’t...
  August 20th, 2025 16:47
• we meet again, mid-sentence (Arqios) Thanks for the Fave @ Prius Tomar🕊️🙏🏻
  August 20th, 2025 06:38
• My brain is killing me. (T Merigold) Welcome to MPS🙏🏻🕊️
  August 20th, 2025 05:31
• Cold As Hell (Tristan Robert Lange) This poem drips with visceral intimacy and emotional precision; love not...
  August 19th, 2025 19:54
• Therapists Lament (Randy Carter) Hey Randy, welcome to MPS 🕊️🙏🏻
  August 19th, 2025 19:49
• Wordless music talks (Poetic Dan) Music without words speaks in frequencies we forget we understand; like...
  August 19th, 2025 19:25
• simple sample (Arqios) From lamplight scribbles to flickering screens, our relationship with...
  August 19th, 2025 05:18
• simple sample (Arqios) Thanks for the Fave 🤩 @Poetic Dan 🕊🙏🏻
  August 19th, 2025 05:13
• Is Poetry Salvation (Tooway) Your poem reads like a wandering hand brushing through a crowd —...
  August 18th, 2025 23:32
• Losing my mind; (ꜱʏʟᴠᴀ) Shadows creep closer with whispers they weave Tangled in threads I can...
  August 18th, 2025 22:46