Comments on community poems by arqios

• Pity, Really Such A Dreadful Pity (Cheeky Missy) Steam curling from the mug Cats fed, leaves drifting gold Small griefs...
  August 21st, 2025 18:43
• Alone (Tristan Robert Lange) In the still between heartbeats A spark still glows unseen Even the...
  August 21st, 2025 18:39
• The Grave Digger (Tony Grannell) Soil swallows names Shadows remain Hands still ache From weight of
  August 21st, 2025 18:37
• Wind (Sorenbarrett) Whisper to roar Roots torn wide Her fury spent Sighs can\'t hide
  August 21st, 2025 18:37
• LITTLE PICTURES (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Ink can wound Or ink can hide Let\'s choose the page Where truth...
  August 21st, 2025 18:35
• Memories Brought Back (Goldfinch60) Sun on the green Echoes in my mind One against many And still, I...
  August 21st, 2025 18:33
• New World Slaughter (Mutley Ravishes) Steel in my stance Fire in my eyes One clean hit Your crown...
  August 21st, 2025 18:32
• Simple pleasures (Jerry Reynolds) And that whiff can extract one’s soul and sensibilities!
  August 21st, 2025 18:03
• Core (Tristan Robert Lange) The poem collapses language into feeling. Connection isn’t...
  August 20th, 2025 16:47
• we meet again, mid-sentence (Arqios) Thanks for the Fave @ Prius Tomar🕊️🙏🏻
  August 20th, 2025 06:38
• My brain is killing me. (T Merigold) Welcome to MPS🙏🏻🕊️
  August 20th, 2025 05:31
• Cold As Hell (Tristan Robert Lange) This poem drips with visceral intimacy and emotional precision; love not...
  August 19th, 2025 19:54
• Therapists Lament (Randy Carter) Hey Randy, welcome to MPS 🕊️🙏🏻
  August 19th, 2025 19:49
• Wordless music talks (Poetic Dan) Music without words speaks in frequencies we forget we understand; like...
  August 19th, 2025 19:25
• simple sample (Arqios) From lamplight scribbles to flickering screens, our relationship with...
  August 19th, 2025 05:18
• simple sample (Arqios) Thanks for the Fave 🤩 @Poetic Dan 🕊🙏🏻
  August 19th, 2025 05:13
• Is Poetry Salvation (Tooway) Your poem reads like a wandering hand brushing through a crowd —...
  August 18th, 2025 23:32
• Losing my mind; (ꜱʏʟᴠᴀ) Shadows creep closer with whispers they weave Tangled in threads I can...
  August 18th, 2025 22:46
• Top Drawer (Teddy.15) Got one or two myself, just like it in my abode! 🕊️🙏🏻
  August 18th, 2025 20:51
• National Bad Poetry Day (Spencer Wilhelm) I’ve looked in the mirror 🪞 far too many times over the internet...
  August 18th, 2025 20:49
• Hindsight (Keeter C) Sublime!
  August 18th, 2025 20:42
• clarity (Arqios) When sometimes it seems too little too late… haha
  August 18th, 2025 20:34
• Trapped. (Friendship) A tough one there. And the triumph of finding articulation, small...
  August 18th, 2025 20:16
• Facing Empire (Tony Grannell) To me this poem unfolds as a defiant stand that shifts into lament, with...
  August 18th, 2025 19:05
• To the Value of One (Kevin Hulme) For me, “The Value of One” is a meditation on the irreplaceable impact...
  August 18th, 2025 19:02
• clarity (Arqios) Sometimes you get the niggling feeling that welcome has been overstayed
  August 18th, 2025 18:57
• South of Me (Tristan Robert Lange) Superb poeticisation!
  August 18th, 2025 16:17
• Goodbye Terence Stamp (Randyjohnson71) Rest In Peace, Terence🙏🏻
  August 18th, 2025 16:17
• Burning Letters (Priya Tomar) Somehow brings to mind Hamelin and a sort of pied piper; surely a...
  August 18th, 2025 16:16
• It is What it is! (Friendship) True freedom, therein the spirit lifts!
  August 18th, 2025 16:15
• Scribed to my brain (Poetic Dan) A true inspiration!
  August 18th, 2025 16:15
• dreamer (Jim56) Now there’s a poem to sit with by the Fire on cold winter nights!
  August 18th, 2025 16:14
• Pretty Skies a Haiku in Flight Mode (Neville) Bird migration is both awe inspiring and reassuring, like all will be...
  August 18th, 2025 16:13
• The Long Day. (Goldfinch60) That’s always a beautiful end to a long live day!
  August 18th, 2025 16:12
• Pork Pies (Orchidee) Cabbages are a potent musical vege!
  August 18th, 2025 16:11
• What is greatness (Sorenbarrett) That is a woeful truth indeed!
  August 18th, 2025 16:09
• clarity (Arqios) Quarterly makes for measly returns…
  August 18th, 2025 11:34
• clarity (Arqios) Thanks for the Fave 🤩@CM
  August 18th, 2025 11:33
• Stargazing (YannickM) Welcome to MPS 🕊️🙏🏻
  August 18th, 2025 07:24
• LITTLE DOGGIE (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Here is a sharp, darkly funny burst of sleepless frustration, using the...
  August 18th, 2025 05:18
• clarity (Arqios) Sometimes we don’t get rid of the questions; we just learn to live...
  August 18th, 2025 05:15
• week in a wink (Arqios) Thanks for the Fave 🤩 @Eugene S.
  August 18th, 2025 05:02
• Confusion (Dan Williams) In a world where clarity is often demanded but rarely delivered,...
  August 17th, 2025 23:38
• The Neglected. (David Wakeling) Hey there David, good to see you back🕊️🙏🏻
  August 17th, 2025 21:38
• week in a wink (Arqios) Thanks for the Fave 🤩 @Damaso
  August 17th, 2025 18:59
• week in a wink (Arqios) Love how each day arrives with its own little cameo — trackpants and...
  August 17th, 2025 05:02
• week in a wink (Arqios) Thanks for the Fave 🤩 @CM
  August 17th, 2025 04:58
• There is A Crease in Everything (Neville) I like how this folds the flaw into the fabric of experience; that...
  August 17th, 2025 03:57
• The Best Children\'s Party. (Poetic Licence) The Treasure Hunt Under the gum trees’ dappled shade, maps were...
  August 17th, 2025 02:42
• \"our poetic sides\" (Arqios) Thanks for the Fave 🤩@Salvia. S
  August 17th, 2025 02:01
• You Recall that Childhood Game? (Cheeky Missy) There’s something irresistibly human in how these tumble from branded...
  August 16th, 2025 23:32
• 8-days in a gum-leaf blur (Arqios) Kookaburra sits on the old gum tree, Merry merry king of the bush is...
  August 16th, 2025 18:23
• 8-days in a gum-leaf blur (Arqios) …under half but struggling… a very curious state to be in
  August 16th, 2025 18:14
• 8-days in a gum-leaf blur (Arqios) Gum-Leaf, gum tree refer to the eucalyptus family of trees. Thanks Bella...
  August 16th, 2025 14:26
• 8-days in a gum-leaf blur (Arqios) Thanks for the Fave @Bella S. 🤩
  August 16th, 2025 14:24
• Fungi Have Feelings Too You Know (Neville) This is wonderfully unsettling, with the pairing of “crab eye stalks”...
  August 16th, 2025 08:44
• INDELIBLE (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) A beautifully framed keepsake in words; memory as touch, voice, and light,...
  August 16th, 2025 08:11
• Oscar Peterson. (Goldfinch60) A life scored in Peterson’s chords, you’ve bottled the swing, the...
  August 16th, 2025 08:01
• Death Wrapped (Tony Grannell) Your words cling like lichen to the bare season — weathered, faithful,...
  August 16th, 2025 07:57
• Poetic lightning (Sorenbarrett) Like lightning through the night sky, your words illuminate the fleeting;...
  August 16th, 2025 07:53
• The Open Door (Tristan Robert Lange) Stripped back yet resonant, this feels like a manifesto of light and love;...
  August 16th, 2025 07:50
• The Lost Idea. (Goldfinch60) A quiet, meta‑reflection on creativity’s elusive nature; the intended...
  August 15th, 2025 20:42
• Trek (Keeter C) A brief, contemplative meditation on choice, weariness, and the pull...
  August 15th, 2025 20:37
• Oh, You Know (Cheeky Missy) Whimsical and richly domestic, these paired sonnets stitch together the...
  August 15th, 2025 20:35
• To The Wind (Kurt Philip Behm) A stark, minimalist farewell; each clipped stanza sharp with restraint,...
  August 15th, 2025 20:33
• Sweet Forgiveness (Tony Grannell) This poem radiates healing; a journey from despair to redemption, where...
  August 15th, 2025 20:25
• The Descendant of Dereliction (Tristan Robert Lange) This sixth vision in The Book of Tittu is searing and immediate; not a...
  August 15th, 2025 20:24
• THE NAKED FRAME (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) So true. A Fave 🕊️🙏🏻
  August 15th, 2025 06:27
• the cupboard light (Arqios) So glad that this came through within its first couple of hours.
  August 15th, 2025 06:26
• Falling for Icarus #2 (Neville) What are the chances of a similar theme! It’s one of those myths that...
  August 14th, 2025 06:10
• \"a former dream\" (Arqios) There, the font size has been adjusted👍🏻
  August 14th, 2025 06:05
• \"a former dream\" (Arqios) This piece invites you into a quiet reckoning; where flight meets...
  August 14th, 2025 05:24
• \"unspoken storms\" (Arqios) Less than half without them.
  August 13th, 2025 11:52
• \"unspoken storms\" (Arqios) May this poem turn our gaze inward, revealing the fierce turbulence that...
  August 13th, 2025 06:36
• The Maiden\'s Plight (Tony Grannell) This poem weaves a haunting tapestry of light and loss. Its archaic...
  August 13th, 2025 05:52
• \"our poetic sides\" (Arqios) Thanks for the Fave @CM🤩
  August 12th, 2025 07:00
• Life With Trash (Teddy.15) It’s bin night as I read this and that’s advice that could...
  August 12th, 2025 05:30
• Fido Ruling The Roost? (Orchidee) Sounds like a fun time with Fido around!🙏🏻🕊️
  August 12th, 2025 05:29
• The poet (Sorenbarrett) The wife’s last car was christened Pegasus, it was poetry when we...
  August 12th, 2025 05:25
• \'Twas Always Thus (Tony Grannell) And thus it shall always be…
  August 12th, 2025 05:22
• \"our poetic sides\" (Arqios) Surely, there are different approaches and experiences on this site… one...
  August 12th, 2025 05:21
• Who am I? (Gershon Wolf) Welcome to MPS🙏🏻🕊️
  August 12th, 2025 01:22
• Broken (Tristan Robert Lange) Sometimes the loudest voices in faith are the ones furthest from grace....
  August 11th, 2025 23:53
• a poetic lullaby (Arqios) A midnight desk, a restless pen, and the ache of chasing brilliance that...
  August 11th, 2025 04:24
• The Optimist. (Goldfinch60) This poem speaks with clear-eyed warmth about choosing to see joy and...
  August 11th, 2025 04:19
• Where Have All the Good Men Gone (Tony Grannell) I\'m vibing on the confessional weight to this piece; a fallen ruler...
  August 11th, 2025 04:11
• Glimpses (Sorenbarrett) This poem captures the fleeting dance between light and darkness, where...
  August 11th, 2025 04:06
• For my lovely Jeannette (MichaelH) Welcome to MPS 🙏🏻🕊
  August 10th, 2025 22:32
• Sunday Fun-Day: \"Dawn\" (Arqios) This poem invites readers into a world where digital silence awakens...
  August 10th, 2025 07:41
• Dandelion Clocks (Kevin Hulme) What an excellent concept! 🙏🏻🕊️
  August 10th, 2025 07:37
• Seven Lines to Burn (Tristan Robert Lange) Ah thanks for this christening backstory (to Salvia as well) and these...
  August 10th, 2025 07:36
• \"flight mode\" (Arqios) Here\'s a response to the poem from a fellow poet on another site: \"Good...
  August 10th, 2025 02:28
• Taking Time (Jerry Reynolds) This is so soothing to read! Much enjoyed🕊️🙏🏻
  August 9th, 2025 06:50
• \"flight mode\" (Arqios) Perhaps it allows us to reconsider our definitions of success. It could...
  August 9th, 2025 06:48
• Afraid to Love (Tristan Robert Lange) Will listen to this when I get off work. How exciting!
  August 8th, 2025 21:38
• The Heart\'s Promise. (Goldfinch60) Complete bliss.
  August 8th, 2025 17:31
• Waiting for Godfrey (Kevin Hulme) Waiting on Wednesday!
  August 8th, 2025 17:30
• Painted On (Teddy.15) Striking truth
  August 8th, 2025 17:28
• Writing through Storms (Thomas W Case) So it is, thus it shall ever be🙏🏻🕊
  August 8th, 2025 17:26
• choirside (Arqios) Thanks for the Face @Damaso.🙏🏻🕊🪶
  August 8th, 2025 17:22