Comments on community poems by arqios

• THE DEATH OF THE MUSE (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) A vision I’ve had now poetícesed marvellously. Also imagining how much ...
  May 20th, 2026 06:51
• The Palace (Katie B.) Quite an adventure that was one could gather in the reading🙏🏻🕊️
  May 20th, 2026 06:35
• Leak (Sorenbarrett) What eventually happens is what has been allowed and what has been allowed...
  May 20th, 2026 06:33
• Onions (Paul Bell) Who woulda known the humble onion makes for an interesting life journey or...
  May 20th, 2026 06:02
• Tethered Vessel (Thomas W Case) The tethering zooms us in and out, a tiny speck large only in our eyes.
  May 19th, 2026 20:09
• Ode to the salty tear (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽) A moving ode to a humble tear.
  May 19th, 2026 15:36
• Development (Sorenbarrett) Excellent metaphoric. Loving the images and movement of...
  May 19th, 2026 08:06
• sin/cerely (Tristan Robert Lange) Deep and incisive 🙏🏻🕊️
  May 19th, 2026 08:04
• FAMINE (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Outrageously sad 😔
  May 19th, 2026 07:18
• Harvest Harmony (Orchidee) Good hymn O🕊️🙏
  May 18th, 2026 21:18
• The Great Stink of 1858 (Kevin Hulme) not all stink and sludge is amenable to the sewage systems and technology....
  May 18th, 2026 21:17
• A riddle (2781) And for those on the fringes the key would be to realise that there is to...
  May 18th, 2026 21:11
• Diet of Carp (Tristan Robert Lange) The play on words both wax sharply! Brandishing and clashing...
  May 18th, 2026 10:06
• To The End Of The Book. (Goldfinch60) Completion, culmination and closure 🙏🏻🕊️
  May 18th, 2026 07:37
• I Want for Nothing (Katie B.) And that’s all we ever really need to live! 🙏🏻🕊️
  May 18th, 2026 06:29
• BUT DAINTILY (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) So many are that have gone that way. Brings back the memories...
  May 18th, 2026 06:28
• Open page (Sorenbarrett) The scuffs and damage record the history of decades; our lives written out...
  May 18th, 2026 06:26
• a little girl (FrasMac) Nice! we all need those moments. A sure fave FrasMac🙏🕊️
  May 17th, 2026 19:14
• The Waves Of Love. (Goldfinch60) TO the sea! 🕊️🙏
  May 17th, 2026 19:13
• Gingerbread men (Sorenbarrett) A powerful study in contrasts dear Soren🕊️🙏
  May 17th, 2026 06:05
• THIS LONELY STREET (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) A quite familiar street scene in expressive poetry🕊️🙏
  May 17th, 2026 06:00
• The Joy Of Old Age. (Goldfinch60) As Nana used to say, \"age with dignity.\" 🕊️🙏
  May 16th, 2026 21:30
• PREMONITION (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Powerful write, Norman🕊️🙏
  May 16th, 2026 21:29
• Late Harvest in Progress (Neville) Ah, isn\'t that always the case in that set of circumstances. Young love...
  May 16th, 2026 06:51
• Untitled (RSM0812) Beautiful rendering🙏🏻🕊️
  May 16th, 2026 06:28
• Inside Anxiety (Katie B.) Moving and relatable 🙏🏻🕊️
  May 16th, 2026 06:28
• Poets (Katie B.) Exactly! Most eloquently put 🙏🏻🕊️
  May 15th, 2026 06:05
• Hidden Like Rubbish (Friendship) A theme that has hovered about my writing for some time. Glad to see it...
  May 14th, 2026 16:39
• Falling down (Sorenbarrett) No bet\'s here, thanks 🕊️🙏
  May 14th, 2026 07:51
• Dying Rose (RSM0812) Much enjoyed read 🕊️🙏
  May 14th, 2026 07:46
• ONE TEAR (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) A moving piece dear friend 🕊️🙏
  May 14th, 2026 07:39
• What Holds Me (Katie B.) Let\'s keep voicing out what speech omits 🕊️🙏
  May 14th, 2026 07:37
• presence (Tristan Robert Lange) Let\'s keep ringing that bell! 🕊️🙏
  May 14th, 2026 07:35
• Don\'t you Hate it when... (Kevin Hulme) MAD magazine was banned in our house but I snuck a read from my youngest...
  May 14th, 2026 05:34
• what they see (FrasMac) The axe wielding did it for me 🕊️🙏
  May 13th, 2026 23:41
• PAINTED SKY (Katie B.) Much enjoyed 🕊️🙏🏻
  May 13th, 2026 15:20
• TOUCHES GROUND (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) A definite Fave here my fry🤩🙏🏻🕊️
  May 13th, 2026 11:44
• Darkness before dawn (Sorenbarrett) Hoping it isn’t about you going through that darkness🙏🏻🕊️
  May 13th, 2026 11:42
• Post-It Note (Doggerel Dave) No heart is where it’s at, ground zero of the mind.
  May 13th, 2026 08:33
• enjoy it! (Tristan Robert Lange) This may put me off peanut butter! haha 🕊️🙏🙃
  May 13th, 2026 07:08
• Falling through Gray (Thomas W Case) The dappling can go either way as well. A very engaging write, friend...
  May 12th, 2026 16:16
• The Ant and the Woodlouse (FrasMac) We\'ve been taught and learnt about ants from time immemorial, but a louse...
  May 11th, 2026 20:55
• MIDNIGHT WEPT (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Deeply moving, dear friend 🕊️🙏
  May 11th, 2026 20:47
• You are everything (Sorenbarrett) The poem and the reader are both encompassed! Fantastic dear friend...
  May 11th, 2026 20:45
• Daily Bread (Orchidee) Wow now that’s a full steak dinner… well it’s at Corinth and one...
  May 11th, 2026 17:09
• NSFW (Fränz Müller) Well put and well said 🙏🕊️
  May 11th, 2026 06:19
• Golden Fence (RSM0812) Most enjoyed read 🕊️🙏
  May 11th, 2026 06:13
• Darker Paint (RSM0812) Nice turn of phrase there, more than the nice, with the apples and the...
  May 11th, 2026 06:11
• Not To Worry… (Doggerel Dave) Our nature is the one to beat. Had we considered that more closely we...
  May 10th, 2026 22:16
• Happy Mother\'s Day (Tristan Robert Lange) Here we are remiss toward- the widowed, the orphaned and the othered.......
  May 10th, 2026 19:13
• Why (2781) Can\'t take any of it to the grave. And the amount of trouble we go...
  May 10th, 2026 19:09
• Before the River Rose (Katie B.) Oh wow, Clorox in a poem! It\'s quite horrid when it slimes over and fails...
  May 10th, 2026 19:08
• The Right Dishonourable Members (Kevin Hulme) Keep \'em coming! Pithy sayings and such. 🕊️🙏🤩
  May 10th, 2026 19:06
• Step On Mistakes. (Goldfinch60) Something to carry and practice every single day 🙏🕊️
  May 10th, 2026 19:05
• Lunacy in a bottle (Sorenbarrett) Firewater! Devil\'s brew. Lolly water, vintner\'s stew.
  May 10th, 2026 19:05
• Irony (Neville) Huzzzah!
  May 10th, 2026 18:55
• The Spirit Sent (Orchidee)
  May 10th, 2026 16:13
• The Spirit Sent (Orchidee) Ah, tharr she blows! Pentecost is coming and the gear up is rogating...
  May 10th, 2026 16:13
• THE ANGEL WHO FELL (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Quite epic in scope and delivery. Most enjoyed dear friend 🕊️🙏
  May 10th, 2026 05:13
• How they see me (William Hromada) For many the long while is worth the wait and most probably never too...
  May 9th, 2026 17:47
• R.I.P To The Bird I\'th Hand (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Our local pub changed hands and it is quite the thing getting used to the...
  May 9th, 2026 17:05
• A Sonnet For A Good Friend. (Goldfinch60) The music keeps the connection and the song going. Warm sympathies dear...
  May 9th, 2026 17:02
• BENEATH THE ARCH (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) We really need to dance more as a race. Thanks, Norman 🕊️🙏
  May 9th, 2026 17:01
• Take a Number (Katie B.) A very visceral read, Katie B. 🕊️🙏
  May 9th, 2026 17:00
• Feelings of loss (Sorenbarrett) Billion dollar question (inflation factored in) 🕊️🙏
  May 9th, 2026 16:59
• Obligation. (Friendship) Fine read, Friendship 🕊️🙏
  May 9th, 2026 16:57
• Even More Things Remembered (Neville) Now that just brough back memories of beach blonde hair between the ages...
  May 9th, 2026 16:56
• In The Rare Old Times (Mutley Ravishes) Now there is a real friend, quite useful too, in time of need...
  May 9th, 2026 16:53
• A new song (2781) The new song is a heart song that springs forth from abiding and...
  May 9th, 2026 16:50
• Beyond the Rain (Salvia.S) Rain is a funny thing, sometimes soothing and at other times reminds us of...
  May 9th, 2026 16:45
• What Does It Matter? (Tristan Robert Lange) therefore: I think? more or less the summation? a summative existence? ...
  May 9th, 2026 16:44
• Who writes this rubbish?! (Orchidee) Ee-Ii, Ee- Ii- Oo!
  May 9th, 2026 16:42
• The Realm of Peace (Jamiano) Welcome to MPS🙏🕊️
  May 8th, 2026 23:05
• Television (Kevin Hulme) Same here, it\'s more part of the furniture and interior decoration....
  May 8th, 2026 22:58
• Happy End. (Doggerel Dave) ...and then entrances the Japanese washlet 🕊️🙏🚽
  May 8th, 2026 22:57
• A Poem by Fido (Orchidee) Truly enjoyed 🕊️🙏🏻
  May 8th, 2026 21:19
• Death to the king (Sorenbarrett) Partly, it could be conjectured that none are ever taught or trained to be...
  May 8th, 2026 20:53
• Squeaky Shoe (FrasMac) Had one of those so many years ago, patent leather I think it was made of....
  May 7th, 2026 23:54
• The Top of the Hill (Thomas W Case) A mirror of a fully lived soul 🕊️🙏
  May 7th, 2026 23:53
• CITY OF POETS (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) ...ooh, a city! Ann immediate favourite 🕊️🙏
  May 7th, 2026 06:36
• Different shades of love (Sorenbarrett) Beautifully penned out thinking and musing. Much enjoyed...
  May 7th, 2026 06:34
• a remnant\'s prayer (Tristan Robert Lange) An excellent plea in verse 🙏🤩✒️
  May 7th, 2026 06:25
• I Like These Walls (Katie B.) Beautifully expressed 🕊️🙏
  May 7th, 2026 06:22
• An Asymmetrical Truth (Salvia.S) Agreed. Been there before. 🕊️🙏
  May 7th, 2026 06:20
• Effort to Sound Effortless (Version 2) (FallingAwake2) Most definitely. Brevity either works or requires more telling/showing. It...
  May 6th, 2026 20:33
• Pools (Sorenbarrett) Brings me memories of that type of silt that is light and fluffy which...
  May 6th, 2026 20:31
• Garden of Words (Ghoast) I remember that anime, school teacher and student, I think it was.
  May 6th, 2026 14:42
• The Cat Woman (Paul Bell) Oh my. Too strange to be fiction 🕊️🙏🏻🤩
  May 6th, 2026 06:42
• Red Star Sunblock Cream (Mutley Ravishes) arggh... there ye be, Mutley! Nothing dust-y about this at all. An...
  May 5th, 2026 19:13
• My Tender Feral Beast (Thomas W Case) What is it that they say about naming the beast, feral or otherwise...? A...
  May 5th, 2026 19:11
• Inkadelic element (Poetic Dan) An excellent journey with so great a promising destination 🕊️🙏
  May 5th, 2026 19:07
• The Lost Soul in the Still Silence (Salvia.S) So good when we realise that the heart can be found! 🕊️🙏
  May 5th, 2026 19:06
• Goodbye To Love (Kurt Philip Behm) The elusive yet sought after. Rousing read. 🕊️🙏
  May 5th, 2026 19:04
• A hand full and an eight second ride (Sorenbarrett) One of many, a growing breed of veritable bulls. Perhaps they need to...
  May 5th, 2026 19:03
• Mavericks Awaken (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) A real awakening keeps the restrainer from restraint. Patience runs thin...
  May 5th, 2026 19:01
• learning to linger (Tristan Robert Lange) Need those too. That’s so true. 🙏🏻🕊️💪🏻
  May 5th, 2026 18:12
• ETERNAL WINGS (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Epic imagery, Norman 🙏🏻🕊️
  May 5th, 2026 06:05
• A Heart\'s Beat (Katie B.) A sad and traumatic interlude which was someone else’s curtain call....
  May 5th, 2026 06:02
• They love to judge you. (Friendship) That’s what mom used to say to us that we can’t appear to be soft on...
  May 5th, 2026 05:59
• The plot (2781) That is where the best answers come, in the state of pure joy...
  May 5th, 2026 04:35