Comments on community poems by arqios

• Halfway to Hanoi (Neville) Sometimes we get stuck into it and other times we’re just plain stuck!
  October 26th, 2024 08:08
• The Miracle. (David Wakeling) All of life is quite the sacred dance, it’s probably when we ‘wake’...
  October 26th, 2024 06:13
• Sixty Minute Slumberbash (Teddy.15) Same thoughts here, although the banks and the powers that be are far from...
  October 26th, 2024 06:10
• When Love Runs So Deep (Accidental Poet) Biding time in wait for the collection of poems for and to Sharon.
  October 26th, 2024 06:07
• A nursery rhyme for us mature children (Sorenbarrett) That about sums it up in every castle 🏰 to which the king does...
  October 26th, 2024 06:06
• The Sibilance Of Showers. (Goldfinch60) It is quite the original orchestra both of sight and sound, it’s music...
  October 26th, 2024 06:04
• Fake ID (Teddy.15) Sometimes society around us pushes us to weird extremes, some people do...
  October 25th, 2024 08:00
• The Child (Tony36) More than a few of us like this these days, more the norm now than the...
  October 25th, 2024 07:57
• Turning to Song? (Orchidee) Good write O.
  October 25th, 2024 07:56
• Home We Will Come Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) It seems that sea is something to return to, but the company taken along...
  October 25th, 2024 07:54
• Inaudible Sounds (Neville) Inaudible reminds me of the range at which canines hear what we don’t; a...
  October 25th, 2024 07:51
• avalanche (Tristan Robert Lange) As scary as it can get, our inner mental/emotional state is precious and...
  October 24th, 2024 20:40
• Love That Goes the Distance (Accidental Poet) I suspect that should each of us slow right down and see each nook and...
  October 23rd, 2024 05:44
• Trick or treat (Sorenbarrett) Masks we permanently bear! Oh wow 🤩
  October 23rd, 2024 05:41
• Poet (Teddy.15) I also believe this to be the main truth about poems and poetry! Good...
  October 23rd, 2024 05:40
• Some of The Things I Just Can’t Do (Neville) That is a bind many get caught in and try as hard as I might could not...
  October 23rd, 2024 05:38
• Canvas In Our Imagination. (Goldfinch60) When I was growing up we were made to think of songs as poems that are put...
  October 23rd, 2024 05:36
• In the Beginning of Our Forever (Neville) ….‘longevity’; now there’s a word that never concerned me much,...
  October 21st, 2024 06:19
• Nursery rhyme just horsing around (Sorenbarrett) Very playful and funny!
  October 21st, 2024 06:14
• Tell me a story (Tony36) We all love an unfolding tale, stories are life!
  October 20th, 2024 17:30
• Fear (2781) The finality of the second death is a knell that rings loud and clear!
  October 20th, 2024 17:28
• Smoke (Sorenbarrett) Up in smoke we go one day!
  October 20th, 2024 06:22
• Rough Justice (Neville) Making it out alive in one piece however tattered was the prime goal of...
  October 20th, 2024 04:17
• Dinner With Friends Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) Such a natural flow of word and line, thought and rhyme!
  October 20th, 2024 01:34
• TO RESCUE WITH VALOR (Bobby O) Loyalty is an essential element to any good friendship!
  October 20th, 2024 01:31
• Covid Visit (Doggerel Dave) Here’s to many more good returns and most of not all for less grueling...
  October 20th, 2024 01:29
• Mystery Girl (Tony36) The hints should never be inscrutable to us but that is quite often where...
  October 20th, 2024 01:27
• Welcoming Light. (Goldfinch60) I haven’t driven in fog recently, the type where someone has to walk in...
  October 19th, 2024 07:07
• Short Changed on A Long Greek Island (Neville) How many bowls of olives 🫒 can one digest in the span of three weeks!
  October 19th, 2024 07:04
• The Lion and The Lily. (David Wakeling) One could romp in these verses all day!
  October 19th, 2024 07:03
• Patriotism (Doggerel Dave) Not much less as riding a pumpkin making us Cinderella! I’d say...
  October 19th, 2024 06:57
• Halloween (Sorenbarrett) A sad tale worthy of any day of celebration, always someone not present...
  October 19th, 2024 06:54
• Give peace a chance (Tony36) Chances are we end up in more than one piece… strange how we pull for...
  October 18th, 2024 07:43
• Have you? (Sorenbarrett) Seems I have had some experience in varying degrees of depth and breadth...
  October 18th, 2024 07:41
• Deep Secrets (Neville) Brought me back to that one breakfast after, where the orchids on the...
  October 18th, 2024 07:37
• The Heart. (David Wakeling) There is that certain beauty that puts our wanting to rest! Spot on DW!
  October 18th, 2024 07:34
• Knowingly Full Of Love. (Goldfinch60) A moon in the daytime sky always brings cheer!
  October 18th, 2024 07:32
• The Repatriation of Shards (Neville) A mystical connection bridged by what we know and what was known however...
  October 17th, 2024 05:51
• Pillar of support (Sorenbarrett) If houses symbolised our person’s enveloping existence then the corner...
  October 17th, 2024 05:48
• Pants (Neville) It’s all the rage it seems more so with the low waisted over-pants lol!
  October 17th, 2024 04:24
• I Spy With My Little Eye…… (Doggerel Dave) How have I been oblivious to these goings on? Hope all gets smoothened out...
  October 17th, 2024 04:16
• What No Internet! (Goldfinch60) The one particular horror of the 21st century! Lack in of internet...
  October 17th, 2024 03:52
• Scatter Sunshine. (Goldfinch60) What a wonderful message this poem delivers! Truly uplifting 🙏🏻
  October 17th, 2024 01:18
• Good Writes (Orchidee) Just my luck! But better than nothing!
  October 16th, 2024 06:59
• SPINNING CONCLUSION (Bobby O) There’s always that slightest bit of a shift when jazz riffs hit the
  October 16th, 2024 06:58
• Same Sky Different Rain. (David Wakeling) A differing rain however the variance of method, for myself a ‘poetic...
  October 16th, 2024 06:55
• Let go (Sorenbarrett) Now that’s the way to go! Sign me up compadre!
  October 16th, 2024 06:49
• Walking In Old Age Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) That’s something to look forward to even as now having to shop around...
  October 15th, 2024 05:04
• What Is Love? (Young Fella) Let love lead each moment of each day!
  October 15th, 2024 05:01
• Don\'t (Sorenbarrett) Such an odd feeling washes over when we metaphorically bite our tongues- a...
  October 15th, 2024 04:59
• Orchi And Goldie At Hastings Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) Makes history come to life!
  October 14th, 2024 01:58
• The Boy Sat On The Burning Deck. (Goldfinch60) Now that will translate to film!
  October 13th, 2024 03:12
• 1066 Reunion (Orchidee) For a while there I thought you numbered your poems then I realised that...
  October 13th, 2024 03:10
• Unknown self (Sorenbarrett) ‘Know thyself,” it has been said but not as easy as jam and bread!
  October 12th, 2024 19:43
• Harvest Thoughts (Orchidee) Harvest and harvest time brings so many pastoral memories to which this...
  October 12th, 2024 07:54
• The Bullfrog Dreams of Flying (Thomas W Case) Hope you had an excellent birthday?
  October 11th, 2024 07:48
• A drop (Sorenbarrett) Both powerful and fearsome, water is… as is this poem!
  October 11th, 2024 06:07
• Gaea’s Garden    (Neville) That She is, living proof of resurrection!
  October 10th, 2024 05:34
• Hurricane (Sorenbarrett) The imagery of battle and war is quite effective. Hope you are safe and...
  October 10th, 2024 05:33
• Fit For Purpose (Neville) There indeed is music to accompany proper drinking as there is music for a...
  October 10th, 2024 04:52
• Time and Dirt (Thomas W Case) Very visceral and bare-all in its poetic erudition. Indeed, time and dirt....
  October 9th, 2024 05:01
• Tears of night (Sorenbarrett) We’ve had a couple of late afternoons with ‘storm cells’ that caused...
  October 9th, 2024 04:58
• Stuck in Zagreb .. & A Few Notes to Self (Neville) Back to back - olives and purpose... there is yet hope still!
  October 9th, 2024 03:48
• Time To Grieve (Orchidee) Grieving is an essential life \'skill\' that we need to be trained in and...
  October 9th, 2024 03:45
• Just As Sunsets (Neville) Our imagination brings a spark, united vision fuels passion… sunsets are...
  October 8th, 2024 07:00
• A leaf (Sorenbarrett) The cadence and forward movement of this poem brings us along a journey,...
  October 8th, 2024 06:49
• Still I Stand (Daniel Ryan Cotler) Welcome to mps!
  October 7th, 2024 00:22
• Piled logs (Sorenbarrett) Solid and strong, Soren! Innate indelible beauty in pristine lines. So...
  October 6th, 2024 23:09
• Masters of the universe? (Sorenbarrett) Boneless fish would look like jellyfish minus the jelly and sea cucumbers...
  October 6th, 2024 22:55
• Dust of a dream (Sorenbarrett) Mighty images, familiar but filled with image and meaning. Resonates with...
  October 6th, 2024 18:03
• A Matter of Faith (Orchidee) Been mulling over of recent times about sacrifice, suffering and loss....
  October 3rd, 2024 18:49
• () Found myself back in Dante’s nightmarish tableau. Delicious!
  September 30th, 2024 03:47
• () Let all them splintered shadows brighten each and every succeeding day!
  September 29th, 2024 18:13
• We All Fall Short (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) So have we all, a same boat situation that most would benefit from...
  September 29th, 2024 17:46
• A warm meal (Sorenbarrett) Makes one thing where we have arrived at that for some sustenance is...
  September 29th, 2024 17:44
• What is man (2781) ….that You are mindful of him?
  September 29th, 2024 17:41
• Shadow\'s reflection (Sorenbarrett) What remains clings for but a flash! That is quite a formidable conclusion...
  August 18th, 2024 20:34
• Slayer (2781) Only too glad for human wisdom, strength, ingenuity can be such a let...
  February 18th, 2024 06:37
• A Million Miles Apart (Neville) Some interactions we have do have this result and effect. I for one feel...
  February 18th, 2024 06:36
• Discarded (Sorenbarrett) Sometimes we can feel like a discarded shoe. I may be taking the metaphor...
  February 18th, 2024 06:34
• Paddy McGee (Teddy.15) Lovely, lively, fun read! Thanks for featuring this on your ‘page!’
  February 18th, 2024 06:33
• 21 Again - Ta-Dah! (Orchidee) Three! Millions of threes… we’re the same age I see: 21 again! Happy...
  February 18th, 2024 06:32
• A white crow on black snow (Sorenbarrett) A white crow in white snow ❄️ like coal lump eyes would be the only...
  February 14th, 2024 05:59
• Valentine (2781) Toadie off the roadie Or flat as a waffle you be.
  February 14th, 2024 03:13
• No Comment (Neville) Recognition recognized and passed onward.
  February 14th, 2024 03:11
• You know Val? (Orchidee) It’s that person and that day and that all encompassing emotion!
  February 14th, 2024 03:10
• Prevarication (Sorenbarrett) Delving into the depths in its brevity. These lines possess and regenerate...
  February 13th, 2024 05:12
• The Narcissist Mindset (Accidental Poet) So relatable and exposes what many, myself included have had to deal with...
  February 13th, 2024 05:11
• Prepping (Neville) I hope so too, but there is this niggling within me as well!
  February 13th, 2024 05:08
• Hope of Help 4 (Orchidee) And our help allows others to witness Hope!
  February 13th, 2024 03:11
• Dragonfly (Sorenbarrett) Splendid haiku Soren! Just the other week I was caught in a trance by a...
  February 12th, 2024 06:33
• Sacrifice (2781) To know whom to approach and find our fullness is essential to everyday...
  February 12th, 2024 04:59
• Two Sisters (Neville) Oh, there is a consequent write then for the Bangkok scene!
  February 12th, 2024 04:57
• My cabin (Sorenbarrett) Log cabins are a rustic wonder!
  February 11th, 2024 06:43
• Stay (2781) The beauty of total dependence.
  February 11th, 2024 06:42
• A Feeling Found On a Hillside in Rio (Neville) Exhilarating! Gives a feel of transcendence.
  February 11th, 2024 06:41
• Pursuing Peace - Ye Olde Prayers series (19) (Orchidee) Peaceful pursuit succeeds!
  February 11th, 2024 06:40
• Transformation (Sorenbarrett) Before and after!
  February 4th, 2024 22:11
• It\'s all right (2781) Reminds me of that oldie but goodie “it is well with my soul.” So...
  February 3rd, 2024 07:21
• From time to time (Sorenbarrett) Verses of pastoral bliss. Enraptured here in this forest. Thanks Soren...
  February 3rd, 2024 06:33