Comments on community poems by arqios
- Sanctioned Space (or: How to Disappear While Still Being Marked Present) (Jeron Arendse) 
Welcome to MPS๐๐ป๐๏ธ
June 23rd, 2025 19:11 - Thank you  (Tony36) 
Thank you from my family and community as well๐๏ธ๐๐ป
June 23rd, 2025 07:32 - The Corpse\'s Creed (Tristan Robert Lange) 
Brought me back to my Granโs anatomy lab. Vivid writing๐๐ป๐๏ธ
June 23rd, 2025 07:32 - Slow Day (Jerry Reynolds) 
small crowd, slow day; superb entertainment ๐๏ธ๐๐ป
June 23rd, 2025 06:11 - cluEleSs (Arqios) 
Thanks for the Fave @Cheeky Missy
June 23rd, 2025 06:08 - The Human Fabric (Mottakeenur Rehman) 
This poem is a tapestry woven with solemn fire; bold, fearless, and lit...
June 23rd, 2025 05:02 - cluEleSs (Arqios) 
Thanks for the Fave @Sorenbarrett
June 23rd, 2025 04:26 - cluEleSs (Arqios) 
And there is goes... 4 without, now that\'s quite stunning.
June 23rd, 2025 04:19 - light between shadows (Arqios) 
Thanks for the Fave @Mutley Ravishes
June 23rd, 2025 04:17 - Is something there? (Sorenbarrett) 
  Your poem stirs like breath on a mirrorโuncertain, intimate, and...
June 23rd, 2025 04:11 - Feeding The Squirrels (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) 
Ain\'t that the way of all things!๐๏ธ๐๐ป
June 23rd, 2025 04:09 - Poetry (Doggerel Dave) 
Oh, I quite like the mischievous shrug in your poemโhalf declaration,...
June 23rd, 2025 03:20 - Artsy gypsies (Reynaldo Casison) 
Enjoyable read๐๐ป๐๏ธ
June 23rd, 2025 03:18 - You Just Know (Thomas W Case) 
Tremendous.
June 23rd, 2025 03:17 - Can\'t get out! (Orchidee) 
Ah, the comic claustrophobia and cheeky regret of it all; this poem dances...
June 23rd, 2025 03:16 - I Was Not Born a Ghost (The Eternal Cry of the Unbroken) (Mottakeenur Rehman) 
Here is a cry carved from the marrow of history; a poetic reckoning with...
June 23rd, 2025 03:11 - The Village Ghost. (Goldfinch60) 
A marvellous entry in your growing anthologyโa piece that rustles with...
June 23rd, 2025 03:04 - The 9 o\'clock News (Mutley Ravishes) 
This poem\'s got a deadpan charmโabsurdity delivered with the calm...
June 23rd, 2025 03:00 - Marriage Advice For Men (Chuckles Week Part 1). (Poetic Licence) 
Your humour is quite a feature of your personality and writing. This...
June 23rd, 2025 02:42 - DREAM OF SARA (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) 
This poem drips with memory and longing, soaked in the atmosphere of a...
June 23rd, 2025 02:39 - Dreams beyond the cage (Elizabeth Ross 4) 
Welcome to MPS ๐๐๐ป
June 22nd, 2025 23:51 - Monรณlogo del Viento (Aravena B.) 
Welcome to MPS๐๐ป๐๏ธ
June 22nd, 2025 15:29 - The Flash (Jerry Reynolds) 
Beautiful movement here Jerry๐๐๐ป
June 22nd, 2025 09:29 - survive in front of the mirror (Lore) 
Welcome to MPS ๐๐๐ป
June 22nd, 2025 06:59 - sometimes  life is hard (Jim56) 
Feel good poem, nice.๐๐๐ป
June 22nd, 2025 06:59 - Made with love  (BlessedbyGod) 
Thatโs the kind of kitchen worth going home to! ๐๐๐ป
June 22nd, 2025 06:39 - The Stranger\'s Truth (Tristan Robert Lange) 
Sometimes our strange is not what makes us strangers to others but the...
June 22nd, 2025 06:36 - Campfire  (Tony36) 
Brings back so many fun memories! ๐๐๐ป
June 22nd, 2025 06:35 - light between shadows (Arqios) 
Thanks @Cheeky Missy for the Fave๐๏ธ๐๐ป
June 22nd, 2025 05:16 - WHAT IF (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) 
Awesome sense of humour ๐๏ธ๐๐ป
June 22nd, 2025 03:57 - To Jail He Went. (Goldfinch60) 
Pass Start and collect $200๐๏ธ๐๐ป
June 22nd, 2025 03:30 - Now (Sorenbarrett) 
Indelible etchings on the soul๐๏ธ๐๐ป
June 22nd, 2025 03:29 - Wise Man Say (17) (Poetic Licence) 
So close to instalment #20! Keep โem coming ๐๏ธ๐๐ป
June 22nd, 2025 03:28 - 4 blue walls  (Leah Bess) 
Welcome to MPS ๐๏ธ๐๐ป
June 21st, 2025 23:54 - I Watch (Vanna) 
Welcome to MPS ๐๐๐ป
June 21st, 2025 05:32 - unyielding eyes (Arqios) 
MPS is an excellent venue for freedom of expression, as far as it has been...
June 21st, 2025 05:24 - Be the first (NafisaSB) 
And firstly to show up, good stuff๐๏ธ๐๐ป
June 21st, 2025 02:43 - The Longest Day Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) 
And we have our shortest day today! Polar opposites๐๏ธ๐๐ป
June 21st, 2025 02:43 - Fido wants to know (Orchidee) 
Fun write O ๐๏ธ๐๐ป
June 21st, 2025 02:42 - I Don`t Have To Agree. (Poetic Licence) 
We agree to disagree to live and let live and no harm is no...
June 21st, 2025 02:41 - bridges (Arqios) 
Thanks for the Fave @Cheeky Missy๐๏ธ๐๐ป
June 21st, 2025 00:44 - Baby Babyโฆ (Doggerel Dave) 
Some people really want kids and go through expensive treatments to have...
June 20th, 2025 17:44 - Rusty Guitars and Runaway Trains (Kaelyn Jade) 
Beautiful. Reminds me somewhat of โPhotographs and Memoriesโ by Jim...
June 20th, 2025 16:05 - hobbitual  (Arqios) 
Thanks for the Fave๐คฉ @Kaelyn Jade๐๐๐ป
June 20th, 2025 15:55 - Campfire  (Tony36) 
First day of Sumner! Camping ๐๏ธ and outdoorsy stuff all around...
June 20th, 2025 07:39 - Will (E.J. Waling) 
This hits like a chiseled mantra; stark, compact, and reverberating with...
June 20th, 2025 06:53 - A strange guy (Sorenbarrett) 
 It is like being taken on a wild, surreal ride; a collage of...
June 20th, 2025 06:12 -                             ITS OKAY TO BE SELFISH TO LIVE IN A WORLD FULL OF MISCHIEFS (Nocturnal Soul) 
This poem urges the reader not to wait for rescue, but to shape their own...
June 20th, 2025 06:09 - velveteen quietude  (Arqios) 
Thanks for the Fave @Reynaldo Casison ๐๏ธ๐๐ป
June 20th, 2025 06:03 - While I Am (Mottakeenur Rehman) 
The poem\'s narrator appears to exist in the liminal space between...
June 20th, 2025 06:02 - Enchantments of her Pretty eyes (Reynaldo Casison) 
This poem has a delicious jazz-like rhythm to it, almost improvisational...
June 20th, 2025 05:59 - Untitled (RSM0812) 
The heart of this poem lies in the vivid, jarring remembrance of the...
June 20th, 2025 05:51 - A MOTHERS GRIEF (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) 
That would be the way any normal person would feel. Very moving poem and...
June 20th, 2025 05:46 - bridges (Arqios) 
Forgot to work on a reduced image to load up at posting. Here it is now.
June 20th, 2025 05:44 - The Longest Day. (Goldfinch60) 
A long day is ideal with joy sustaining it throughout its length and...
June 20th, 2025 03:13 - Gloomy Doom heehee (Orchidee) 
Good write O๐๏ธ๐๐ป
June 20th, 2025 03:11 - Live Life Like A Sponge (Senryu) Go On Read It , You Might Like It!!!. (Poetic Licence) 
Expansion is seen as a blessed life๐๏ธ๐๐ป
June 20th, 2025 03:11 - Skating (E.J. Waling) 
\"Figure eight\" a beautiful deliberate symbol of infinity looping atop a...
June 19th, 2025 18:38 - Three senryus about the state of he world -  June 11, 2025 (Norman Flagtea) 
One could but sigh at times like these
June 19th, 2025 18:31 - Swcond Chances (RSM0812) 
The title exemplifies the need for such a swcond (sic) chance ๐๐๐ป
June 19th, 2025 14:26 - One of my most favourite Questions?  (Teddy.15) 
I have as well! My favourite Martian and the visit to planet Earth were...
June 19th, 2025 14:23 - In Remembrance (Pete the poet) 
Welcome to MPS ๐๐๐ป
June 19th, 2025 14:21 - Got That Out (Tristan Robert Lange) 
  Here is a raw, primal, and defiantly honest poetic equivalent of a...
June 19th, 2025 08:09 - my poetic side (Arqios) 
Thanks for the like @Cheeky Missy ๐๏ธ๐๐ป
June 19th, 2025 08:02 - Dying Bird (Jerry Reynolds) 
The opening line is a marvellous doorstep to the poem; and the third and...
June 19th, 2025 07:28 - Without Depth (Frรคnz Mรผller) 
 This poem flows with a universal embrace, capturing the essence of...
June 19th, 2025 06:36 - robin lullaby (Jim56) 
Such beauty is eve4 sufficient to fill our days๐๐ป๐
June 19th, 2025 05:35 - The Eternal Tides (Mottakeenur Rehman) 
A poem that speaks to the timeless dance between art and existence, a...
June 19th, 2025 05:35 - The Scarlet Muse (Kevin Hulme) 
Oh, what a delightful chaos of wit and poetic frustration! This cleverly...
June 19th, 2025 05:30 - I Dreamed I Saw... (Rrodriguez) 
An Ed first attempt, very exciting imagery and movement ๐๐ป๐
June 19th, 2025 05:27 - my poetic side (Arqios) 
Thanks for the Fave @Soren๐๐ป๐๏ธ
June 19th, 2025 04:55 - Where Does Time Go? (Goldfinch60) 
Indeed, where does it go!? And thereโs so much of it still coming our...
June 19th, 2025 02:30 - Mammon`s Table. (Poetic Licence) 
Oooh, foreboding, ominous and apocalyptic even๐๐ป๐๏ธ
June 19th, 2025 02:29 - Marble statuesque  (Georgia Watson) 
Welcome to MPS๐๐ป๐๏ธ
June 18th, 2025 18:20 - Silver Threads (Firefall) 
As a child I had separation anxiety and abandonment issues, having been...
June 18th, 2025 17:36 - The poet\'s lament (Norman Flagtea) 
Had it senses
what had fallen
surely felt it!
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June 18th, 2025 17:32 - The Covenant of Eyes (Mottakeenur Rehman) 
Hey there! Now this applies to all aspects of life an living. We shall not...
June 18th, 2025 17:27 - Of An Unknown Poet  (Teddy.15) 
And one day we shall all adorn graveyards... I was so moved visiting...
June 18th, 2025 17:26 - Random Thoughts (MendedFences27) 
Thoughts of a day, everyday, Phil A. Priceless๐๐ป๐๏ธ
June 18th, 2025 17:09 - Still Human? (Orchidee) 
It felt a bit frustrating surfing the net for a bit there. Good rite O...
June 18th, 2025 13:10 - still the earth breathes (Arqios) 
Thanks heaps @Somam Fagavan for the Fave ๐คฉ๐๐ป๐
June 18th, 2025 13:06 - Regrets (Jerry Reynolds) 
Indeed! And quite a collection have I gathered over the...
June 18th, 2025 08:09 - still the earth breathes (Arqios) 
Thanks for the Fave ๐คฉ @Doggerel Dave๐๐ป๐
June 18th, 2025 07:25 - still the earth breathes (Arqios) 
Perhaps there shall still be hopeโฆ. 
June 18th, 2025 07:24 - The Unexpected Visitor  (Nocturnal Soul) 
Welcome to MPS ๐๐ป๐
June 18th, 2025 07:22 - Freely Dance  (Tony36) 
Sounds what true freedom feels like๐๐ป๐
June 18th, 2025 06:48 - Melanie (Frรคnz Mรผller) 
What a delightfully eerie and mischievous tale! Melanieโs flesh,...
June 18th, 2025 06:47 - BALCONY (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) 
This is the world and age that we live in; a familiar strangeness, no...
June 18th, 2025 06:44 - A Sad Day at the Track (Thomas W Case) 
Superb.
June 18th, 2025 06:40 - In the Legs of Loss (Tristan Robert Lange) 
   The poem evokes much more than a physical longing; it delves into...
June 18th, 2025 06:39 - My Friend (Sorenbarrett) 
It is good when we recognise friendships in unlikely places and even...
June 18th, 2025 06:32 - Poetry is My Present (Tom Dylan) 
Moreโs the pity for the gifts that are ignored and passed upon....
June 18th, 2025 06:28 - Do Not Be A Beaver. (Poetic Licence) 
And for us the walls do come crashing down at the right time an with the...
June 18th, 2025 06:27 - Daily List. (Goldfinch60) 
Care, devotion and consideration start with self and with those...
June 18th, 2025 06:26 - Wear a Smile (Uttara.gokhale1) 
Welcome to MPS ๐๐ป๐
June 18th, 2025 06:20 - hobbitual  (Arqios) 
Thanks for the Fave @Cheeky Missy
June 17th, 2025 06:52 - hobbitual  (Arqios) 
Go ye forth, where burrows lie deep, walls of earth hold warmth close,...
June 17th, 2025 04:54 - What a man is (Sorenbarrett) 
โโฆin his word,โ thatโs the way ๐๐ป๐
June 17th, 2025 04:35 - Evicted From Hell. (Poetic Licence) 
Awesome capturing of a life experience ๐๏ธ๐๐ป
June 17th, 2025 04:14 - A Wonderful Day Senryu. (Goldfinch60) 
Bright way to live each day!
June 17th, 2025 02:10 
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