Comments on community poems by arqios

• Of Petrarchan Love (Triolet) (Kevin Hulme) The repentant the rhyming scheme makes these exquisite lines pop out!...
  January 26th, 2025 04:43
• The talking song. (David Wakeling) It can also be a talking dance as well. 👍🏻🙏🏻🕊
  January 26th, 2025 04:20
• It Was God (Targeted)  (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Sharpshooter 🎯
  January 26th, 2025 04:18
• Golden Moon (Reynaldo Casison) Quite expressive with vibrant images 👍🏻🙏🏻🕊
  January 26th, 2025 04:18
• Daily Sensuality. (Goldfinch60) Explosive shower! Humour in an otherwise matter of fact part of the house.
  January 26th, 2025 04:17
• This is s song... Lyrics that I wrote Idk what to name it (Hopeless/the problem) “Morning coffee dream”?
  January 25th, 2025 20:26
• Can\'t Stop (Alex PB) Powerful wording. An exquisite obsessional anguish. 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
  January 25th, 2025 18:49
• But Mostly Poetry Fills Me (Gray0328) Beautifully said 👍🏻🙏🏻🕊
  January 25th, 2025 17:47
• Beach (Avi) Now there’s a poem that looks like a poem!
  January 25th, 2025 17:46
• Evening Interlude. (Davidbrailsford) Liked how reality slips in and out like sunlight dappling from the leaves.
  January 25th, 2025 17:44
• ~> Each Full Moon, (Thad Wilk) Now there’s another corner that your pen is at ease with inking!...
  January 25th, 2025 16:35
• There Will Come Soft Rains (Mgentabumi) Welcome to MPS 👍🏻🙏🏻🕊
  January 25th, 2025 16:31
• The Song You Taught Me (Tristan Robert Lange) Faith is interconnected and sometimes we travel at different speeds and...
  January 25th, 2025 08:44
• Field of flowers (RSM0812) A beautiful scene unfolding! 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
  January 25th, 2025 08:40
• The Owl (Tony36) A refreshing change from the parrot and lorikeet! 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
  January 25th, 2025 08:38
• Is it a Phenomenon? (Emile Dubois) It’s like a moulting when our becoming and leaving transits across...
  January 25th, 2025 07:47
• Winter\'s Embrace ([email protected]) A much cherished place, indeed!🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
  January 25th, 2025 07:45
• Satan\'s Short Season (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) First trip please!
  January 25th, 2025 07:15
• skylark song (Jim56) Must be like an aviary where you’re at! We have crows and plovers and...
  January 25th, 2025 07:08
• Rainbows in a Dew Drop (Salvia.S) All the cosmos in such a tiny drop! Magnificent!🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
  January 25th, 2025 06:21
• The Power of the Sea (Philip) The magnificent Sea! And a magnificent poem for Her....
  January 25th, 2025 06:20
• A Piece by Paul (Orchidee) I remember the hymnal version of this! Not of works, not of works, not of...
  January 25th, 2025 06:18
• Dinner with an old friend (Sorenbarrett) Much like a dinner for one facing a reflective surface. This friend...
  January 25th, 2025 06:17
• The Rich Man\'s Sidewinder (Tristan Robert Lange) Nine, ten, a big fat hen! Then we’ll all ah-tishoo and all fall down…...
  January 25th, 2025 06:12
• Every MidNight (Reynaldo Casison) Oh to be in love! 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
  January 25th, 2025 06:10
• Temporary Living. (Goldfinch60) Such a good way of thinking and navigating life. Reminds me off the well...
  January 25th, 2025 06:09
• The Little Girl who learned to love Lightening. (David Wakeling) During storms My siblings and I would be like the Darling kids playing...
  January 25th, 2025 06:08
• Old Man Winter (senryu) (Teddy.15) So many old men, it’s a wonder they haven’t totally faded away,...
  January 25th, 2025 06:04
• Life (Spencer Wilhelm) I like it as it is. But should you seek further consideration, here are a...
  January 24th, 2025 21:57
• On Writing (Tom Dylan) Indeed it is. And it will never fail you. 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
  January 24th, 2025 20:38
• Only People (Kevin Hulme) Amen! To the people, that we are. 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
  January 24th, 2025 20:36
• Remembering Me (ShaWritesPoetry) Welcome to MPS! 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
  January 24th, 2025 20:35
• Soulful Collide (Salvia.S) Love that rhymes!
  January 24th, 2025 09:33
• ~> The Bluebird Of Happiness! - Sonnet - (Thad Wilk) Now that has more umph than the Angry Birds franchise!
  January 24th, 2025 09:32
• Bella (Tony36) What a harrowing experience! What would follow is a trauma survivor’s...
  January 24th, 2025 09:31
• Walk at dawn (NafisaSB) I’ve only ever had a dawn walk a few times each year, and they all have...
  January 24th, 2025 06:40
• Sweet Rain Hymn (Reynaldo Casison) Always loved the rain, this poem brings me to a higher plane....
  January 24th, 2025 06:39
• New Joy To The Choir. (Goldfinch60) Wow! Good to hear such excellent news Andy!
  January 24th, 2025 06:37
• Will you be ready (David Wakeling) How then shall the best man appear to herald the bridegroom’s return?...
  January 24th, 2025 06:36
• Mary and Jack (Night of Passion) (Poetic Licence) The funny thing is I know a couple named Mary and Jack. Now it will be a...
  January 24th, 2025 06:30
• robin friend (Jim56) If only it were 5he for me, the robins I’ve met were skittish around...
  January 24th, 2025 06:26
• No1 from JANUARY WRITES (Michael Edwards) Ahaha 🤣 know there’s an excellent play…. Very well played… had...
  January 24th, 2025 06:23
• When Dressed to Kill (Neville) Oh but there are creatures such as these, they do exist, and your poem...
  January 24th, 2025 06:19
• Deflowered (Sorenbarrett) Oh to be outdoors and free, be it in a humble back garden rose bed… the...
  January 24th, 2025 06:16
• Little Life (Orchidee) You are the minstrel of our hearts 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
  January 24th, 2025 06:15
• Thymus, Forgive Us (Mutley Ravishes) Oh, another gland poem! Must be in vogue these days 😊 this poem...
  January 24th, 2025 06:13
• I Was Blind (Thomas W Case) But now we See! 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
  January 23rd, 2025 22:20
• Satin Sheets (Tristan Robert Lange) Seems to call for a change of sheets, one for each mood and situation....
  January 23rd, 2025 20:52
• Arrival (Haiku) (Kevin Hulme) If there is but one Daisy left… there is hope!
  January 23rd, 2025 20:44
• Plea (Alex PB) There is such exquisite sadness in these words.
  January 23rd, 2025 19:44
• A country filled with poppies (Xqw) Always thought that interesting for a bloom of such representation to be...
  January 23rd, 2025 17:09
• Off the Dome (Manic diss) (Chad Carlson) Moving and lingering. A feeling that good poems possess innately....
  January 23rd, 2025 16:42
• Consumption (ᴷᵉᶻᵉˣˣᵉ) An anguished and well meditated plea 🙏🏻🕊
  January 23rd, 2025 16:39
• Dialogue (Spencer Wilhelm) Very moving and very visually appealing as well! 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
  January 23rd, 2025 16:37
• The Peel (Sebastian.) The peeling away of innocence could be seen as a cure of sorts for past...
  January 23rd, 2025 16:36
• Dart and Soul (Tom Dylan) Nice one Tom! The poems at times are darts themselves 🎯 awesome...
  January 23rd, 2025 16:28
• ~> I Was Born To Be Free! (Thad Wilk) A truly fun read! Good one, Thad 👍🏻🕊
  January 23rd, 2025 16:24
• At The Coffee Shop (Tony36) Sometimes it’s plain and simple as that 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
  January 23rd, 2025 07:57
• kindness (Jim56) Good write, Jim… as it should be.. kindness in every way...
  January 23rd, 2025 06:36
• \"What is Poetry?\" (Cirawrites01) Reading and writing is a journey that reveals Poetry every step of the...
  January 23rd, 2025 06:35
• Sensing (Cassie58) Oh wow, much like the scurrying about my sister and I did as school...
  January 23rd, 2025 06:10
• Young, but Once (Thomas W Case) Yet always young at heart, when we allow 😊👍🏻🕊
  January 23rd, 2025 04:45
• Dear Fiendess (Mutley Ravishes) It’ll take much more than Mylanta to sort this out! 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
  January 23rd, 2025 04:44
• Beach (Avi) All the words and feelings are there; even an effective natural use of...
  January 23rd, 2025 04:39
• Box Hill (Kevin Hulme) Oh the tension, wit, and underlying emotions of the characters involved....
  January 23rd, 2025 04:35
• Life in a… (Doggerel Dave) It came from you! Foetid cheese 🧀 periphery … indelibly printed...
  January 23rd, 2025 04:31
• Gustav Mahler Acrostic. (Goldfinch60) I feel that he is a tad underrated. Good to have him applauded as such....
  January 23rd, 2025 04:24
• The willow tree at the end of the road. (David Wakeling) If every child had such a tree! Hope you took photos of it before it’s...
  January 23rd, 2025 04:19
• On The Outside Looking In (Poetic Licence) Very relatable and quite lyrical. Now to sit and reminisce...
  January 23rd, 2025 04:17
• Heaving Mountains on Still Days (Neville) The splash is different indeed, and a lot of the time they don’t even...
  January 23rd, 2025 04:14
• Meek Musings (Orchidee) Breathe, count to 10, slowly, and breathe! A hymn for these days…....
  January 23rd, 2025 04:12
• Wake of a muse (Sorenbarrett) That’s a hard striking poem, there, Soren. What’s left in the wake...
  January 23rd, 2025 04:09
• Value of Gifts (Poetic Licence) Yes! The extension of the heart pertains to the source of all outwardly...
  January 22nd, 2025 07:25
• Soul (Teddy.15) Hauntingly powerful and deeply moving. 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
  January 22nd, 2025 05:52
• Down this dark street. (David Wakeling) A compelling narrative that is a profound and haunting reflection on...
  January 22nd, 2025 05:49
• LIMERICKS 137, & 138 (Michael Edwards) Green sheen is in again! Scaling the scaly scales, those scalliwags....
  January 22nd, 2025 05:45
• Pleasant Praise (Orchidee) Good write O 🙏🏻🕊
  January 22nd, 2025 04:07
• Between heartbeats (Sorenbarrett) Such a glorious tension between the transient and the eternal, the...
  January 22nd, 2025 04:06
• I\'m Already Half Gone (Sheta) An exquisitely poignant expression of a human desire for connection and...
  January 22nd, 2025 04:02
• My Saving Grace. (Goldfinch60) Tranquil in my noisy mind, soothing poem. 🙏🏻🕊
  January 22nd, 2025 03:55
• For the People still call for Barabbas (Kevin Hulme) Che (Guevara) over chu (tutting/tsk-tsk) it would seem 👍🏻🕊
  January 22nd, 2025 03:54
• The Cruelest Moment (Rho1975) And the after moment when it all comes crashing back is quite the ride we...
  January 21st, 2025 17:34
• Nothing 🔥 (𓆩Mase𓆪) If it’s a lie than we lived well aiming for the best ideals, but if it...
  January 21st, 2025 17:31
• The Pull of the Streets (Thomas W Case) Powerful write TWC 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
  January 21st, 2025 17:27
• ~> The Mona Lisa CATastrophy! - Sonnet - (Thad Wilk) Now that is a distinctively original take and time travel poem! A true...
  January 21st, 2025 17:26
• Descent in D Minor (Tristan Robert Lange) And lingers quite a while still…. Sometimes even for decades…....
  January 21st, 2025 17:23
• The Old Neighborhood (Tony36) Oh yes! Quite resonant 👍🏻 In fact I have posted a poem or two in the...
  January 21st, 2025 17:22
• Sleep won\'t take me yet (SunflowerGoose) Welcome to MPS! 👍🏻🕊
  January 21st, 2025 17:20
• May The MidNights Soothe (Reynaldo Casison) a lovely tribute to the power of love and the beauty of nature,...
  January 21st, 2025 07:07
• Live For Today. (Goldfinch60) This I do but have to be reminded to do so everyday… easily distracted...
  January 21st, 2025 07:03
• Wind Chime Tree (Cassie58) Heart rending, where peace and tragedy connect; in essence, the dog and...
  January 21st, 2025 07:01
• From Mourning To Joy (Orchidee) So freeing! 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
  January 21st, 2025 06:55
• Nature\'s poem (Sorenbarrett) This is such a symphonic depiction of the profound harmony found in...
  January 21st, 2025 06:54
• The Tale of the Ahool (Matthew R. Callies) A mythical mystery of legendary proportions. 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
  January 21st, 2025 06:52
• writing therapy (Jim56) That has been true over the years. A therapeutic activity indeed!...
  January 21st, 2025 06:48
• Our Last Day of School (Accidental Poet) The past lives; I know. In 71 my aunt left for N.J. and I’ve only ever...
  January 20th, 2025 22:34
• choice? (NinjaGirl) It’s like part of us has been stolen away and there doesn’t seem a way...
  January 20th, 2025 22:28
• EN PLEIN AIR (Michael Edwards) Ah, can be the story of my creative life… oh the number of times that...
  January 20th, 2025 22:24
• BLUE (Nephilim56) Sometimes it’s only a while that we’ve got and when we take it all the...
  January 20th, 2025 22:22
• Negative Test (Matthew R. Callies) It rescan be a struggle at times! 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
  January 20th, 2025 22:19