Comments on community poems by arqios

• If they had lived (Kevin Hulme) The unfulfilled potential of young lives cut short is such a moving topic....
  December 20th, 2024 07:46
• Love of a father (Sorenbarrett) Profoundly moved: never connected a rosebush with fatherhood.. wow!!! I...
  December 20th, 2024 07:33
• Coffee#1 Christmas Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) It\'s awesome to have a regular or periodic watering hole!
  December 20th, 2024 07:26
• Come On It`s Christmas (Poetic Licence) I think you more than clearly got that message across!
  December 20th, 2024 07:24
• 12/17/24 (Wren) This poem captures powerfully the intense and unsettling nature of...
  December 20th, 2024 07:22
• Life cause (Cellinic) A beautiful blend of emotion, spirituality, and creativity. Its rich...
  December 20th, 2024 07:16
• Heaven Waits (RSM0812) This poem beautifully captures the themes of life, death, and redemption...
  December 19th, 2024 04:46
• Voice (Cellinic) Hopefully speaking of a voice that accompanies a transformative journey...
  December 19th, 2024 04:36
• Inflation def. noun- blowing up the economy (Sorenbarrett) They got it the wrong way around and gradually they’re bringing us back...
  December 19th, 2024 04:12
• The Day Music Died. (Goldfinch60) Brings back memories. Such tragedies, to persons, to history and to music....
  December 19th, 2024 03:30
• Mathematics of Imagination (Dan Williams) What we belief can prove unreliable and makes us question them. Things...
  December 19th, 2024 03:28
• Comes Life (Poetic Licence) What an orchestral Crescendo, layering and overlapping onto each other to...
  December 19th, 2024 01:56
• Song for Brian P. (DreamTiger) Nice one! Embracing both the light and the dark completes the picture....
  December 19th, 2024 01:30
• The Tree Of Life (The Fife Wanderer) Now there’s a thought always nascent and ever present: we breathe in...
  December 19th, 2024 01:27
• Clouds, Like Pink Petals (Thomas W Case) The sky has not fallen! To say the least. More rain to come.
  December 19th, 2024 01:22
• The Tome Beneath the Tinsel (Tristan Robert Lange) Just like its dynamic structure, this poem captures the tension between...
  December 18th, 2024 08:07
• Rain (Tony36) Yes! Now that’s what’s needed 👍🏻
  December 18th, 2024 08:01
• The fly (Sorenbarrett) Ah! Now that is a scary metaphor, it’s thousand googly eyes to boot!
  December 18th, 2024 03:47
• Gazania (David Wakeling) Oh beauty! I didn’t know what they were called. Had them to brighten the...
  December 18th, 2024 03:46
• I Must (Teddy.15) “Must” precisely put, the night I had to sleep, outdoors- locked out...
  December 18th, 2024 03:42
• Bound in Triumph (Job Welime) The stream goth and beauty melded together in poetry.
  December 18th, 2024 03:36
• Dark waters (Brian Otucho) Welcome to MPS! (If a bit belatedly 😊)
  December 18th, 2024 03:35
• Tale of the New Year (Kevin Hulme) This year is exciting in the sense that we all go in together through to...
  December 18th, 2024 03:29
• Chaos Starting (Dan Williams) And I am a realist of the cynical positivistic variety. So this poem is...
  December 18th, 2024 03:26
• Sleepless (Cellinic) I believe the sound of the guitar to be a great accompaniment to this...
  December 18th, 2024 03:19
• IT’S A’CUMMIN (Michael Edwards) All of that and yet it can be over all too soon. I notice annually how we...
  December 18th, 2024 03:14
• Pure Hearts. (Goldfinch60) And what it’s really all about brings us all together! Beautiful!
  December 18th, 2024 03:13
• Quick Fingers (Neville) And there are them with shorter fingers that do wonders it breaks the...
  December 18th, 2024 03:10
• Can You See (Poetic Licence) Oh, now here is a mantra of my being! It also sums up quite neatly a major...
  December 18th, 2024 03:08
• New York City (Demar Desu) Indeed, all cities and places have their distinct characters and...
  December 18th, 2024 03:04
• $0.01 in my bank account (Demar Desu) My balance has moved up lightly to $07.71, having crawled out of credit...
  December 17th, 2024 23:20
• Its bones (A.B. Jakobsen) This poem filled me with a sense of inexplicable alienation. Very moving...
  December 17th, 2024 19:58
• SongsThatMakeMeFeelAlive (Melancholic~Onion) Welcome to MPS!
  December 17th, 2024 19:27
• Love (Doggerel Dave) Well I for one love infatuations, so titillating!
  December 17th, 2024 19:26
• Future (ᴷᵉᶻᵉˣˣᵉ) The sun that couldn’t make up its mind!
  December 17th, 2024 17:50
• The Angel Message (Orchidee) Funny how précis is almost opposite to precise. Good write o.
  December 17th, 2024 17:48
• CALL OF THE SEA (Will Kevin) The big sound of the Ocean is a voice all its own! Wonderful 🌊
  December 17th, 2024 17:47
• Killer Zombie Clown! [ extended Sonnet ] (Thad Wilk) Reminds me of the clown crimes and copycats some decades ago. I think...
  December 17th, 2024 17:42
• Alien Nation (DreamTiger) Welcome to MPS! And what an evocative first offering! 👍🏻
  December 17th, 2024 08:52
• Warmth (Tony36) It must be well for that special someone, the feel of reciprocity is...
  December 17th, 2024 08:50
• Whispers of What Could Have Been (TheWanderer_and_his_Ms.Reverie) And a close relative of communication, conversation… perhaps to my mind...
  December 17th, 2024 08:49
• Call of the earth (Sorenbarrett) Liked and Faved. Part of me has days like that… now I’m nursing my...
  December 17th, 2024 08:28
• Giving up the fight (David Wakeling) Silly, white parrot… must be a cockatoo. The mirroring effect is staying...
  December 17th, 2024 08:25
• Like Butterflies in Snowstorms (Neville) The blizzard said it all… or did the deed! (Shivers) ❄️ 🦋 💀
  December 17th, 2024 08:21
• Love Is All Acrostic. (Goldfinch60) There are distinct moments when we believe love is all we need! Good on...
  December 17th, 2024 08:19
• Time Cannot Heal (Poetic Licence) That brought me to a choice, a summation that should we choose it, Time...
  December 17th, 2024 08:17
• To a Rainbow (Kevin Hulme) And the elation of a double rainbow! 🌈 🌈
  December 17th, 2024 08:13
• I\'m Going to Miss Jail (Thomas W Case) The eclectic mix of the book order is refreshing! In developed countries,...
  December 17th, 2024 08:12
• Little Things (Cassie58) I love such ‘little’ presents, they keep giving and giving, and almost...
  December 17th, 2024 08:10
• [ Our Sea Of Love ] (Thad Wilk) That’s a kind of “tickle” that those in the know, know and revel in!
  December 17th, 2024 08:08
• The mighty man of death (MR.apocalypse) Where I not as mighty would I succumb beneath that final curtain...stage...
  December 16th, 2024 21:01
• in the mood for love (Demar Desu) If only!
  December 16th, 2024 08:15
• Gave you my heart (Tony36) Powerful image and expression. Power dynamics in intimate relationships...
  December 16th, 2024 08:14
• Fortress of Mountains (Tristan Robert Lange) Remember driving around between there and the Appalachian, with Rocky Top...
  December 16th, 2024 08:12
• THE FINAL TIME (Nephilim56) Makes the heart race whilst reading. Very effective!
  December 16th, 2024 07:31
• Drink In the Sunrise (Dan Williams) The \"basket full of light\" jumps out at me and stays aloft in the...
  December 16th, 2024 06:17
• An Awful (Okay) Time of Year (Roland Graves) Welcome to MPS! And our routines thrown up until we pick them up again...
  December 16th, 2024 06:14
• Sorry Santa / The List (Poetic Licence) Oh, 3 in 1! Mighty generous today\'s post is.
  December 16th, 2024 06:12
• Trials (2781) It\'s so easy to forget the two-edged sword quality of our walk, in this...
  December 16th, 2024 06:11
• In Old Egypt (David Wakeling) A tragedy indeed. You spun that tale in verse so well DW!
  December 16th, 2024 06:10
• Into The New Year. (Goldfinch60) That is such a beautiful way to welcome the year and bless us as well....
  December 16th, 2024 06:08
• By Way of the Heart (Accidental Poet) Thank you for sharing this heartfelt and thought-provoking piece. It is a...
  December 16th, 2024 06:07
• A Christmas Unearth (Teddy.15) Clink!
  December 16th, 2024 06:04
• Ways of Falling Out of Love (Neville) Cold Turkey or no turkey at all... so true. Having experienced both ways...
  December 16th, 2024 06:04
• Poseidon\'s bones (Sorenbarrett) Thank you for sharing this thoughtful and evocative poem. It also serves...
  December 16th, 2024 06:03
• The Spirit Immersing the Waters of Passion... (Cellinic) Wow! The drive towards compassion amidst chaos speaks volumes about the...
  December 15th, 2024 20:58
• son of the sun (Sheta) Oh so many come to mind, Apollo, Ra or Helios, perhaps... LInk (Zelda),...
  December 15th, 2024 20:34
• What\'s My Heart For? (MendedFences27) Feeling that bereft-ness and it does seep into anything and everything....
  December 15th, 2024 20:24
• Be Time full (Cedrick) Oh wow, the gift, the cost, and the punishment of Time- the whole...
  December 15th, 2024 20:22
• In which the Blackbird Ponders on the What and the Why (Kevin Hulme) And we all think without a thought that we know so much and that much more...
  December 15th, 2024 20:18
• Busy A Gut (Tony36) We need more mirth and laughter in our days! Thanks for sharing Tony :-)
  December 15th, 2024 20:02
• `~ Love Is In The Air -Limericks Chain- (Thad Wilk) So there, it’s settled… a dog’s best friend is bacon 🥓 or a...
  December 15th, 2024 18:29
• Demons (Tristan Robert Lange) I’ve been through Valhalla with a corpse with no name… it’s so good...
  December 15th, 2024 18:27
• Before Spill Kits and DNA Became a Thing (Neville) But the rug won’t stay up on a stained ceiling! So why not wear the...
  December 15th, 2024 18:24
• Another Choice. (Goldfinch60) Brings to mind the oft worn out phrase: ‘spoilt for choice.’ But do we...
  December 15th, 2024 18:21
• creature (Rin) Interesting interplay here; the dynamic between the creature and the...
  December 15th, 2024 18:18
• Mummy Tomorrow Will Be Better (Poetic Licence) That is so touching. My story is the reverse where Mum got between myself...
  December 15th, 2024 08:22
• Ripped off again (2781) I feel this quite distinctly, technology is the windmill army of this...
  December 15th, 2024 08:18
• Lillian Grace . A Ghost Story for Christmas. (Kevin Hulme) Very Gothic and emotionally gripping. A deeply moving tale of horror fit...
  December 14th, 2024 18:46
• Blind (2781) Very \"extraspective\" of the human condition and the challenges of being.
  December 14th, 2024 18:41
• Seasonal Mayhem (senryu) (Teddy.15) And of late a turkey jailbreak!
  December 14th, 2024 18:38
• Optimist or Pessimist? (Orchidee) Coming or going? Inside or out? Here or there? Neither the why nor
  December 14th, 2024 18:35
• Peace on earth, good will (Sorenbarrett) Like trees planted, extensions of who we are, what a reflection in the...
  December 14th, 2024 18:34
• mountain (Rin) Defiance does not aid transformation it only allows others to witness the...
  December 14th, 2024 18:31
• Fragile (Cassie58) There is such a fragility in our memories and all-encompassing are the...
  December 14th, 2024 18:27
• Today a person begged (Demar Desu) Terrible on either side of the negotiating. Hope it works out for you and...
  December 13th, 2024 21:51
• Give me a second chance.. (Ke3v) A truly invested write! Moved much by it 👍🏻
  December 13th, 2024 21:49
• Once Upon A Time! (Thad Wilk) Extended indeed to the fullest extent it would seem. Lock and key was the...
  December 13th, 2024 21:47
• DUSK. (David Wakeling) Love me a nature metaphor! 👍🏻
  December 13th, 2024 18:30
• Gamera taking a camera (Rin) Coming back to life, there is that innate spark that ignites!
  December 13th, 2024 09:13
• Grey Day Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) Impregnable!
  December 13th, 2024 09:11
• Afterwards #2   (Neville) Hunter-gatherer… prisoner-jailer… the chase scene over and after….
  December 13th, 2024 09:09
• Thaw (Tony36) Should everyone meet their specific thawer in their lifetime we all would...
  December 13th, 2024 09:04
• One Out of Five (Tristan Robert Lange) Somehow brought me back to thoughts of the Vietnam War and all other such...
  December 13th, 2024 09:01
• Now (2781) Distraction and struggle are a regular thing here, what with uncooperative...
  December 12th, 2024 04:20
• It Took Years (Thomas W Case) It\'s really kind of a long and winding road, isn\'t it; life\'s journey.
  December 12th, 2024 04:12
• M\"mmm !!! (Poetic Licence) Sometimes we fill our communication with these words to buy more time to...
  December 12th, 2024 04:07
• The Shadows. (Goldfinch60) Time to revisit that era and make a real go of it. I was toddling along as...
  December 12th, 2024 04:04
• Living Like This (Exorcise) (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Modern living is so marked by disconnectedness, apathy and internal...
  December 12th, 2024 04:01
• Dementia’s Cruel Kiss (Neville) That has rammed its way close to home. I\'ve still to process some moments...
  December 12th, 2024 03:56