Comments on community poems by arqios

• Crowing Time (Tristan Robert Lange) Your poem masterfully balances the tension between the healing power of...
  December 5th, 2024 08:19
• The Impossible (E Naughton) There may be things that seem impossible but together are achievable.
  December 5th, 2024 07:26
• santa dream (Jim56) Brings Christmas back in wondrous ways!
  December 5th, 2024 07:22
• Mother (Nerrith) This poem beautifully captures the intricate dance of emotions that come...
  December 5th, 2024 07:20
• Veils Of Mystique (Cassie58) A gale of truth blowing right at my cryptic tendencies.But the truth is...
  December 5th, 2024 07:09
• The 7 judges of Terrestria. (David Wakeling) Feeling the relentless barrage of judgement from all directions with death...
  December 5th, 2024 07:00
• Watched (Neville) Voyeuristic longing amplified! And bettering one’s equipment indicates...
  December 5th, 2024 06:54
• The Ghost of John Lennon (Teddy.15) I’m quite taken by the multifaceted possibilities of the word...
  December 5th, 2024 06:45
• The bee and the fox (Sorenbarrett) An interesting meeting of differing species, coated in humour and possibly...
  December 5th, 2024 06:42
• The Power Of Silence. (Goldfinch60) Used wisely can streamline the flow of each and every day!
  December 5th, 2024 06:39
• Plagiarised (2781) Now where’s that remote when you need it!?
  December 5th, 2024 06:37
• Creation of Life (Poetic Licence) Now that’s the story of my beginnings, a quite unplanned pregnancy on my...
  December 5th, 2024 06:33
• No More The Trenches (Kevin Hulme) That it does! Last of the classic, “romanticised” historical...
  December 4th, 2024 21:06
• \"The Devil\'s Waltz\" (Neil Higgins) Welcome to MPS!
  December 4th, 2024 21:04
• a poem for a friend (Jim56) An evocative ode eulogising one superb life called Miesha...
  December 4th, 2024 17:10
• Sponge (Tony36) Spongy shoulders, now there’s innovation in poetic expression and...
  December 4th, 2024 17:06
• Numbers (Tristan Robert Lange) The w8 was inconsistent with a4mentioned spect8ors’ f8. Top r8ting 4
  December 4th, 2024 17:05
• Sandra (David Wakeling) Exquisitely crafted DW and dealing with the complexities of grief and...
  December 4th, 2024 07:18
• Who The Hell Stole Christmas? (Teddy.15) Seems the grinch was based of Tim Curry\'s features! Let the cheer...
  December 4th, 2024 07:11
• Lord of the earRing (Rin) Precious!!!!
  December 4th, 2024 07:10
• Evil time (2781) It would appear that social injustice is just a tip of the iceberg, a sign...
  December 4th, 2024 07:09
• Love Poem (Dan Williams) Nice DW, a poem that expresses the timeless and unwavering nature of love,...
  December 4th, 2024 05:18
• Mourn the morn (Sorenbarrett) This poem captures the essence of a world steeped in despair yet holding...
  December 4th, 2024 05:16
• Who reads this rubbish? (Orchidee) A batch of new line botox should get you in the good books!
  December 4th, 2024 05:12
• Close Shaves and Final Cuts (Neville) They used to put a mirror close to the nose just to check but a razor...
  December 4th, 2024 05:11
• Sitting By My River. (Goldfinch60) That is splendid Andy, I need my river, a river, any river badly! I\'ve...
  December 4th, 2024 05:10
• Children Of War (Poetic Licence) That is a searing and deeply disturbing news let alone reality. Thanks for...
  December 4th, 2024 05:03
• happy song (Jim56) Happy songs, now there\'s a way to our happy place, sometimes we aren\'t...
  December 3rd, 2024 23:32
• I’m Not Quite Sure What This Poems About (Kevin Hulme) This poem delightfully captures the perplexity and charm of trying to...
  December 3rd, 2024 21:31
• Insulting KP Again? (Orchidee) Fame has its benefits and its challenges!
  December 3rd, 2024 14:43
• ~> MONKEY BUSINESS! (Thad Wilk) Now that is the epitome of far too many a tale of woe. Epilators are...
  December 3rd, 2024 14:35
• Tugged (Abdullah123) Compelled reading, better direction given than a film script. Like riding...
  December 3rd, 2024 14:13
• You\'re Own Path (Tony36) Inspiring, like a call to arms! Also quite reaffirming and validating.
  December 3rd, 2024 08:59
• Precious Days Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) Simple words but powerful impact, uplifting and inspiring, embracing life...
  December 3rd, 2024 05:50
• When Love Takes Its Final Bow (Teddy.15) Superlatively charged depiction of the end of love often necessitating...
  December 3rd, 2024 05:44
• Shanty (Neville) Oh, captures the rough-and-tumble life of sailors, bold and unapologetic...
  December 3rd, 2024 05:41
• Christmas May Pass Them By (Poetic Licence) A highly compelling piece that challenges readers to look beyond their...
  December 3rd, 2024 05:33
• Virgo boy (Eliaskayne) Welcome to MPS! Thanks for sharing something of yourself on your first...
  December 3rd, 2024 05:29
• Jewel discarded (Sorenbarrett) The notion that each poem contains a heartbeat underscores the emotional...
  December 3rd, 2024 05:19
• Maternal Love (Cassie58) Hey Cassie, this poem is a moving tribute to the enduring power of love...
  December 3rd, 2024 05:15
• Winter Has Just Phoned (Kevin Hulme) What a domineering winter as the seasons change, a guest perhaps not...
  December 2nd, 2024 23:04
• Haggis ghazal (FrasMac) It does seem that you had fun with this! It exudes of it.
  December 2nd, 2024 22:56
• Cryogenic Catharsis (Tristan Robert Lange) As long as they are red dancing shoes, however ill-fitting they may be,...
  December 2nd, 2024 22:53
• ~> OMG, I Needed A Job Fast! (Thad Wilk) oh wow... what\'s the hourly? and how does one rinse out their nostrils...
  December 2nd, 2024 22:52
• When the Sun Illuminates a Sapphire Sky (Cassie58) I imagine that as a reverse tree hug of sorts, having reclined against a...
  December 2nd, 2024 22:50
• A Hippie\'s Soul (Tony36) I grew up with hippies... toddling about in a bright sunny atmosphere.
  December 2nd, 2024 22:48
• Now (2781) The be opportunistic what to gain a winning vote and parasitic to remain...
  December 2nd, 2024 22:47
• She (Sorenbarrett) What eloquence in giving tribute to a figure embodying wisdom, resilience...
  December 2nd, 2024 06:10
• All a Glow (Teddy.15) Oh wow that took me for a ride!
  December 2nd, 2024 06:03
• A Hand Full of Ashes (Neville) Oh so deeply melancholic, of masks, isolation and most strikingly of...
  December 2nd, 2024 06:00
• Xmas and other stuff (Orchidee) Good one O!
  December 2nd, 2024 05:53
• Variety is the Spice……. (Doggerel Dave) Wow that\'s like 6 poems in one! The diversity can seem overwhelming but...
  December 2nd, 2024 05:53
• LIMERICK 131 (Michael Edwards) Oh my, what a day for a neutering!
  December 2nd, 2024 05:44
• The Three Noah\'s Arks (Rin) Now that is an interesting take on the story. Very creative.
  December 2nd, 2024 05:43
• Memories of the 70`s (Music Fans) (Poetic Licence) What what a songlist, gotta make a mixtape of this oh but perhaps just use...
  December 2nd, 2024 05:42
• To The Gym. (Goldfinch60) I was just considering that this week at work.. slower, more fatigued,...
  December 2nd, 2024 05:41
• Battered, Shattered and Scattered. (David Wakeling) Wow, powerful and captures the clash between expectation and reality in...
  December 2nd, 2024 05:36
• Beauty (Kevin Hulme) Perhaps we go so fast and forget life in the slow lane and the beauty that...
  December 2nd, 2024 01:54
• Time Resigns (Dan Williams) I must agree. Having choked reading through the first half. Letting out...
  December 2nd, 2024 01:41
• ~> Another Day At The Vets! (Thad Wilk) Hope Ralphie is doing ok! Which we could be certain of that he is in your...
  December 1st, 2024 18:50
• Never Give Up (Tony36) Won’t give up seeing as I’m being reminded constantly not to. Thanks...
  December 1st, 2024 10:38
• Hourglass (Tristan Robert Lange) Good one Tristan! Down to the shapely hourglass ⌛️ curves; and Yes...
  December 1st, 2024 10:35
• Countless Times Have I Loved You (Ishwar Chandra) Some people are just paired that way. Always good to find our match!
  December 1st, 2024 10:32
• I Should Have (Cassie58) Sounds like someone overslept or caught up with missed sleep or just...
  December 1st, 2024 10:30
• Once there was a time (Sorenbarrett) Ah, that is the typical day\'s panorama for many of my years. Have a...
  December 1st, 2024 06:27
• Signs of Things to Come (Neville) What did we identify as today... guess it doesn\'t really matter now that...
  December 1st, 2024 06:25
• Return Readiness (Orchidee) The organ blares but to me it has a calming effect, in the semi-darkness...
  December 1st, 2024 06:23
• LIMERICK 130 (Michael Edwards) Limericks are always fun! And this one is no exception. Now eagerly...
  December 1st, 2024 06:21
• She Says Goodbye (Poetic Licence) Okay, so I double backed and went to the previous poem and our...
  December 1st, 2024 06:19
• Song of Life (David Wakeling) Shivers, my hair stands on end as those last lines punctuate and repeat:...
  December 1st, 2024 06:09
• Rescue (Teddy.15) Perhaps so, I often wonder that of myself. Just finished watching the new...
  December 1st, 2024 06:06
• I Now Say The Word. (Goldfinch60) Who was the first one today? Ah the tree\'s out and the lights are strung...
  December 1st, 2024 06:04
• November November (Kevin Hulme) Only once did Gene Kelly dance in the rain? I woulda thort we was more...
  December 1st, 2024 06:01
• Poor Eddie Van Patten (Thomas W Case) That is a sad tale. We had several of our schoolmates go on ahead younger...
  December 1st, 2024 06:00
• House of Scars (FrasMac) Tremble we may but there is a path that won’t dismay. Somehow hearing a...
  November 30th, 2024 22:49
• Tomorrow It Could Be You (Poetic Licence) So true and so aggravating to the inner spirit. Our empathy levels are...
  November 30th, 2024 07:56
• Flood (Cassie58) Some memories are tied in with the season and the seeming fickleness of...
  November 30th, 2024 07:46
• Amiable Andrew (Orchidee) It’s been a while O! Are he back for good? Fido is orchi ok?
  November 30th, 2024 06:36
• Omnipresent (Sorenbarrett) No good byes here, just farewell, and houroo!
  November 30th, 2024 06:34
• Heart on Ice. (David Wakeling) Oh man, DW, that has remained frozen. I hope the lower bill has not added...
  November 30th, 2024 06:34
• Music Time Machine. (Goldfinch60) Ah, as you know from previous conversations, so had my dad influenced me....
  November 30th, 2024 06:32
• Footy (Doggerel Dave) As with knights in jousting they must be preparing for some real...
  November 30th, 2024 06:27
• Shepherds (Ishwar Chandra) Welcome to MPS! Mingle and relish the ambient poetics from various parts!
  November 30th, 2024 06:19
• Still Art For Art’s Sake (Neville) Now the products of these efforts I genuinely love to see!
  November 30th, 2024 06:17
• That Which Takes (Nerrith) Welcome again, on your new account. I was fortunate enough to reaccess my...
  November 30th, 2024 06:15
• Strolling Down Christmas Lanes (Tristan Robert Lange) A bunch of oddities and contradictory traditions, that seems to be part...
  November 29th, 2024 09:29
• I want to dance with you (Tony36) Makes me wonder what to do next, the best move if the other wasn’t in...
  November 29th, 2024 08:54
• Angel (senryu) (Teddy.15) Now that says so much with such economy and beautiful lines....
  November 29th, 2024 08:52
• PRAYER OF THANKS (Bobby O) And may we not kill each other before dinner is over and the dessert has...
  November 29th, 2024 06:37
• Here (Doggerel Dave) Oh, that will fit with the most hated phrases that Orc was on about!...
  November 29th, 2024 06:35
• Hanging On by My Fingertips. (Poetic Licence) This is like that slow motion all happening at once scene where everything...
  November 29th, 2024 06:32
• God Pty Ltd (David Wakeling) I am at a point of agreement with Soren here. To go further would be...
  November 29th, 2024 06:26
• Gossip (NafisaSB) And a ‘running mouth’ is a well of trouble that never runs dry! Good...
  November 29th, 2024 06:18
• Buddha Says (Goldfinch60) Oh, how very interesting! My mind I think is somewhat nomadic, vacillating...
  November 29th, 2024 06:06
• Such a Waste of Fine Words (Neville) Oh man, to be on the other side of that, receiving such pronouncements!...
  November 29th, 2024 06:01
• My way (2781) Nothing ever goes my way, perhaps that is a good thing. But the perusal...
  November 29th, 2024 05:59
• Your Most Un-Favourite Saying (Orchidee) Not that comes to mind this instant. I’m sure if I hear it I’d go:...
  November 29th, 2024 05:58
• No sugar (Sorenbarrett) Technology seamlessly integrates into our lives, becoming both magical and...
  November 29th, 2024 05:57
• Tale of the Heike parody (Rin) I thought that name (Heike) sounded familiar. Must read up on them...
  November 29th, 2024 05:51
• Bake Day Beth (Cassie58) That makes me want to be invited over! No one really bakes anymore and...
  November 29th, 2024 05:49