Comments on community poems by arqios

• This Is My City (Tom Dylan) Reminds me of a poem I wrote once about Chicago which was patterned after...
  December 12th, 2024 03:49
• Undeserving (Sorenbarrett) For me this poem captures the frustration of life\'s fleeting joys and the...
  December 12th, 2024 03:47
• 354 Presents - Doing the Maths! (Orchidee) And altogether they add up to \"CHRISTMAS\" and then everything goes back...
  December 12th, 2024 03:42
• Humanoid (Rin) Inversion is a powerful concept that may represent opposite ends of a...
  December 12th, 2024 03:37
• Mothers Tears in There Eyes (Poetic Licence) Not many get a happy ending. Glad this one did!
  December 12th, 2024 03:25
• 3: Holy Trinity  (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) At times its connections like these that take us through our toughest and...
  December 12th, 2024 03:09
• Winds Turning Common Men (Dan Williams) So much of misuse of power goes under the rug. Glad that this poem deals...
  December 12th, 2024 03:03
• Raining For Peace. (Goldfinch60) Here, here!
  December 12th, 2024 02:58
• LIMERICK 133 (Michael Edwards) oh dear... fun but also tragic circumstances... Much enjoyed! On to the...
  December 12th, 2024 02:55
• Mist (Sorenbarrett) I am loving the ephemeral beauty of a misty morning, where the interplay...
  December 12th, 2024 02:45
• Repentant Readiness (Orchidee) I\'ve experienced winnowing on the field at harvest time, now that and...
  December 12th, 2024 02:37
• American Sport & English Poetry (Tom Dylan) There is a richness in diverse interests that attests to the complexity of...
  December 12th, 2024 02:36
• Holding Back the Smile (Neville) In situations of tension and restraint, we all need to retain a modicum of...
  December 12th, 2024 02:33
• Little Lamb (Sebastian.) Welcome to MPS! Poetry indeed is a freeing experience, which leads to...
  December 12th, 2024 02:25
• A Dance With Death (Tristan Robert Lange) Now that\'s a wow! I guess we all have to fill in the hollowness of...
  December 12th, 2024 02:21
• Hot Sauce of Love (Tony36) Something for the wintery weather, for Christmas even, or both.
  December 12th, 2024 02:18
• The rapture! (2781) What a rich tapestry of spiritual contemplation and prophetic...
  December 12th, 2024 02:16
• `~ Read My Lips! ~` (Thad Wilk) Now we know who\'s boss! Repeating phrases like \"Don\'t try that pup\"...
  December 12th, 2024 02:10
• Martha (Cassie58) Hey Cassie! Such an ephemeral nature of life and memory, and the way...
  December 12th, 2024 02:04
• Tomorrow (Neil Higgins) Exudes an ethereal and uplifting quality, evoking a sense of journey and...
  December 12th, 2024 02:01
• Charity Rose (Kevin Hulme) Oh of her nature so fleeting and insincere affection! The poem as a whole...
  December 12th, 2024 01:56
• Not enough colours (David Wakeling) I agree! There are so many different colourful things to colour in!
  December 12th, 2024 01:50
• Expose\' (Kurt Philip Behm) I could hear the final screams “Mission abort! Mission abort!”
  December 10th, 2024 19:47
• Not Special (Joesph Kwolski) A sobering message that keeps us grounded and levelled together.
  December 10th, 2024 06:53
• a lifeless man (Joesph Kwolski) Welcome to MPS!
  December 10th, 2024 06:51
• Imagianary Friends (Voices In My Head) (Poetic Licence) I find writing gives this voices a venue to speak their piece thereby...
  December 10th, 2024 05:37
• Words of the prophets (Sorenbarrett) Poets often fall under the category of drunken buffoons… and I don’t...
  December 10th, 2024 05:33
• Transitory Existence (Eugene S.) A tranquil exploration that is poignant and thought-provoking. It reminds...
  December 10th, 2024 05:31
• Reading Poetry (Tom Dylan) And once again and yet again. A position that I shift toward every chance...
  December 10th, 2024 05:25
• The Gods of Sydney Town. (David Wakeling) Been there, done that, oh so glad to be rid of grease and grass stains...
  December 10th, 2024 05:23
• Reflections Of Pissmas (Teddy.15) Christmas Day is quite a different sort of hangover, dusted with cinnamon...
  December 10th, 2024 05:19
• Strategically Lost (Neville) Strategy some say is half the game!
  December 10th, 2024 05:17
• Living in Epicaricacy (Demar Desu) Powerful in its brevity!
  December 10th, 2024 05:16
• If I Loved (Kevin Hulme) Some may even agree that unrequitedness is the true litmus test of genuine...
  December 10th, 2024 05:15
• Driving Ambition (Cassie58) The scale of such thoughts and processes are of a magnitude that takes...
  December 10th, 2024 05:14
• Words in Vain (Mr. Not) That type of interaction/person can be superbly annoying!
  December 9th, 2024 20:36
• ~> Ralphie Gets Even! ( Monorhyme ) (Thad Wilk) So you got a jealous one there. Lucky he just got his shots! We had a...
  December 9th, 2024 20:29
• Come On, Then! Do You Want Some? (Mutley Ravishes) A whole trove of meaning and existential intent in a grove of fun verse!
  December 9th, 2024 20:26
• The Last (Thomas W Case) My sentiments exactly. One of the toughest and most persistent questions...
  December 9th, 2024 20:25
• My Heart (Tony36) Now that brings so much to the awareness of connectedness. Moving...
  December 9th, 2024 20:24
• The Endless Spectator (Tristan Robert Lange) It still has its dark sparkle!
  December 9th, 2024 20:22
• christmas song (Jim56) The simple joys and pure traditions of Christmas is what brings its magic,...
  December 9th, 2024 07:32
• Granny (2781) Every town’s got one of those! Fortunate for you (or not so much) it...
  December 9th, 2024 06:45
• The Changes After 2020? (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) I can only agree. A clue too is how our referring to time seems off by 2...
  December 9th, 2024 06:20
• Paternity Test (Tom Dylan) Then loosens out the real opinions once the drinks have had their way.
  December 9th, 2024 06:18
• Holy beast (Rin) We can always try… and have tried and most possibly will continue to
  December 9th, 2024 06:16
• Extraordinary Unearth (Teddy.15) Ooh, nice one! 👍🏻 Right between the eyes 🎯
  December 9th, 2024 06:12
• Temple Message (Orchidee) Imagine the poet being struck dumb, 😱
  December 9th, 2024 06:08
• We are not in Control (Ad Man) (Poetic Licence) The spinner of tales, the town crier corrupted; bought out by those who...
  December 9th, 2024 05:53
• Sailing To Peace Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) It used to be that Christmastime was a brief reprieve, now we seem to be...
  December 9th, 2024 05:48
• Rest in pieces (David Wakeling) Yes, sadly, that’s the way it looks. My one didn’t take to the bottle...
  December 9th, 2024 05:46
• Tempus Fugit Once More (Kevin Hulme) Indeed, we tend to stay and hang on while hoping for what can be as well,...
  December 8th, 2024 08:37
• The perfect poem (Sorenbarrett) Ah!
  December 8th, 2024 05:23
• Tornado of Light (Teddy.15) Now that is a splendid twist on personification. Very effective in...
  December 8th, 2024 05:23
• Trinity (Rin) How interesting a concept which shall probably remain hypothetical,...
  December 8th, 2024 05:21
• Yours Truly A. Victim .. & Maybe Just Maybe (Neville) Just been there oh so recently... still fuming... two stacks on the...
  December 8th, 2024 05:19
• Dreams and Nighmares (Poetic Licence) It would be good to have a nice dream every now and again!
  December 8th, 2024 05:17
• The branches are bare. (David Wakeling) Oh the shift and twist followed by that take off! It got going pretty...
  December 8th, 2024 05:15
• In Amongst The Blackbirds. (Goldfinch60) I saw a trapped swallow die the other day, still moved by it. The poor...
  December 8th, 2024 05:13
• Nightstorm (Dan Williams) Getting an interlacing of themes of fate, change, and self-reflection;...
  December 8th, 2024 05:09
• ~> Our Garden Of Love (Thad Wilk) Brings to mind that old song (now) that goes “sowing the seeds of...
  December 7th, 2024 15:22
• Maria\'s Last Dance (Tristan Robert Lange) Like the echoes of a bell just rung or the after image of a candle’s...
  December 7th, 2024 15:17
• Above the hate (Tony36) Goodness and peace in our day… an increasingly costly and big ask these...
  December 7th, 2024 15:11
• Reaching (Cassie58) As long as there are no signs of it being “Animal Farm” it is all...
  December 7th, 2024 15:09
• Victory Venture (Orchidee) Oh, this reminds me it’s Sunday. A sacred space to give thanks and be...
  December 7th, 2024 15:07
• Points of light (Sorenbarrett) Liked and Faved 👍🏻👍🏻 Such a lyrical delight, not to mention...
  December 7th, 2024 15:05
• Something Only Part Remembered (Neville) I so hate the grinding of rings and them biting into flesh as fingers...
  December 7th, 2024 15:03
• Black feathers (Rin) Wow rin! That totally needed to be translated and shared. Liked and Faved....
  December 7th, 2024 14:59
• Music With Dad. (Goldfinch60) A shared joy, to be exact, the individual composition make it even more...
  December 7th, 2024 14:56
• Man With The Big Set of Keys (Poetic Licence) Heart rending truth and express of that truth. I know the can and I know...
  December 7th, 2024 14:55
• Maysie Hayseed (including Part 3) (David Wakeling) Ooh, and here’s part three! Apologies for the slight delay. Had a...
  December 7th, 2024 14:50
• Let Me In (Nerrith) A shadow, a mirror reflection, an imaginary companion. Something we...
  December 6th, 2024 18:56
• A Conversation (PARTS 1 AND 2) (Abdullah123) Quite enjoyed there!
  December 6th, 2024 15:13
• caring dove (Jim56) Their cooing and crooning is about the most elegant and peaceful of all...
  December 6th, 2024 15:07
• Silver and Gold (Thomas W Case) Sums up the bulk of my experience with silver and gold, it’s but a...
  December 6th, 2024 15:04
• Midterms (Spencer Wilhelm) Even scholastic overstimulation has a detrimental effect on quite every...
  December 6th, 2024 14:48
• Sunset and Wind Farms (Cassie58) Had they made them prettier in shape (not economically appealing to the...
  December 6th, 2024 14:46
• ~> My Mem\'ries Of A Tibetan Monastery (Thad Wilk) Oh Thad, those nails and nail lacquer make for an awesome metaphor as
  December 6th, 2024 14:43
• Steps (NafisaSB) Love the rhythmic forward positive validation and the one step back in...
  December 6th, 2024 14:37
• Sleep child (Sorenbarrett) Quite gruesome there and to the point. Had to double back and re-approach...
  December 6th, 2024 14:31
• Natural Art. (Goldfinch60) Nothing quite like natural art!
  December 6th, 2024 14:28
• Breakfast Wasn’t Over Easy (Bobby O) A well advised response. And a cuppa to save the morning! Good it wasn’t...
  December 6th, 2024 14:28
• Set you free (Tony36) In a world of pure imagination! Superb invitation Tony 👍🏻
  December 6th, 2024 14:25
• Silly (2781) Spewing too many antonyms as well, or is that the Anto-dote !?
  December 6th, 2024 14:24
• Bully me you, I exemplified archetypal scapegoat... (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) Bullying is never good in any train of thought, in any culture or any...
  December 6th, 2024 14:23
• Day Dawning (Orchidee) Nothing quite like the beauty of Dawn!
  December 6th, 2024 09:01
• Hidden in Sight (Neville) Poetry rarely hides, I find they lightly veil or curiously disguise or...
  December 6th, 2024 09:00
• The Gardner Walks Off Slowly (Dan Williams) May their garden grow that tend them well!
  December 6th, 2024 08:59
• Lady of The Night (Out of Need) (Poetic Licence) The first time we all ever worked at a job we didn’t like or couldn’t...
  December 6th, 2024 08:57
• Maysie Hayseed. (David Wakeling) Holding my breathe for Part-Three! I can even see a film version rolling...
  December 6th, 2024 08:55
• The Light and the Pain (R. Gordon Zyne) They say that light bends, that should be a good thing, right? And as for...
  December 5th, 2024 21:24
• Toast (Tony36) Love get togethers of this sort!
  December 5th, 2024 21:22
• ~> Grim Reaper\'s Not Lonely Anymore! (Thad Wilk) There’s quite an inescapable scaffolded symbolism in there!
  December 5th, 2024 21:21
• I Dreamed in Green (Thomas W Case) Now that’s the boyhood that I remember, not as well as I want to but...
  December 5th, 2024 21:20
• An Old Saw: (Doggerel Dave) Smart and prickly! Just as is should be DD, cheers 👍🏻
  December 5th, 2024 18:05
• That time i was There (Trighton) Glad to see this poem still up. Many happy returns 👍🏻
  December 5th, 2024 18:03
• Crowing Time (Tristan Robert Lange) Your poem masterfully balances the tension between the healing power of...
  December 5th, 2024 08:19
• The Impossible (E Naughton) There may be things that seem impossible but together are achievable.
  December 5th, 2024 07:26
• santa dream (Jim56) Brings Christmas back in wondrous ways!
  December 5th, 2024 07:22
• Mother (Nerrith) This poem beautifully captures the intricate dance of emotions that come...
  December 5th, 2024 07:20