Comments on community poems by arqios

• Devilishly Dreadful: The Croaker (Tristan Robert Lange) This one reads like a dark fable about free speech. Jimmy keeps cracking...
  October 31st, 2025 08:31
• Could Not Afford You. (Goldfinch60) heritage listed, most likely! 🕊️🙏
  October 31st, 2025 08:23
• Halloween (2781) This one feels like a lament straight out of the prophets; its barren...
  October 31st, 2025 08:16
• Solo climbing (Sorenbarrett) This one really captures the stark beauty and danger of climbing, Soren;...
  October 31st, 2025 08:08
• Phoe-Nix (Mutley Ravishes) I like how this one feels like a cosmic riddle: Phoenix, Pyramid, and then...
  October 31st, 2025 07:59
• License Revoked (+2) (Kurt Philip Behm) This one made me grin: turning a DUI into a “Poet’s D.U.I.” is such...
  October 30th, 2025 20:36
• Taken Into A New World. (Goldfinch60) Nothing like live music at venues! 🕊️🙏
  October 30th, 2025 20:30
• Rain (Sorenbarrett) I like how this flips the usual idea of storms being violent or...
  October 30th, 2025 20:29
• WORDS UPON BREEZE (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) This one hit me with its quiet heaviness. I like how the imagery keeps...
  October 30th, 2025 20:23
• The House of Westenra (Tristan Robert Lange) Congratulations! Really enjoyed how this piece twists Stoker’s Dracula...
  October 30th, 2025 20:12
• The Inquiry (Paul Bell) You know, I’ve come to the conclusion that the Sergeant isn’t actually...
  October 30th, 2025 18:52
• The Ghost of Babel (Tristan Robert Lange) I so love this! And I have tramped around a bit to have had an adjacent...
  October 29th, 2025 07:42
• Walking To Eternity. (Goldfinch60) Going to the doctors for test results on my bung feet. Looking toward a...
  October 28th, 2025 05:22
• The warm sun (RSM0812) ...it gives and it also takes away. What a mighty source it is....
  October 28th, 2025 05:19
• Goodbye (Sorenbarrett) An excellent way to perpetualise friendship gone to years. Perhaps one day...
  October 28th, 2025 05:16
• ODD AND ODDER (1) (Michael Edwards) ...and an odd mistress our language is! 🙏🕊️
  October 28th, 2025 05:12
• NO PRINCESS (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) This is a really moving piece. The imagery of the earth as a green carpet...
  October 28th, 2025 04:33
• Lord Of Life (Orchidee) Good one O 🙏🕊️
  October 28th, 2025 03:33
• Devilishly Dreadful: The Undying Count (Tristan Robert Lange) ooh, so deliciously dark! 🕊️🙏
  October 27th, 2025 07:27
• Reaper (Sorenbarrett) Oh, that struck home quite solidly! A superb poem here, Soren! 🙏🕊️
  October 27th, 2025 05:28
• Rejoicing Refreshment (Orchidee) Now this is so celestially written🙏🕊️
  October 27th, 2025 02:07
• The Mural (Paul Bell) Reminds me of someone I used to know! 🕊️🙏🏻
  October 26th, 2025 14:03
• the corkscrew (Arqios) Thanks for the Fave 🤩 @Devender Kumar 🙏🏻🕊️
  October 26th, 2025 14:01
• My Chopin Liszt. (Goldfinch60) Then do some cooking on the stovetop and bakin’ in the itsy bitsy...
  October 25th, 2025 15:11
• Guy Fawkes. (Poetic Licence) What! I missed the cut-off again!? It has to be the time zones. It truly...
  October 24th, 2025 22:39
• Comforter Consolings (Orchidee) Timely, there is so much need for/of consoling. Cheers O🕊️🙏
  October 24th, 2025 18:46
• A Moth (FrasMac) What a moving piece. The image of the moth clinging to the windscreen...
  October 23rd, 2025 20:24
• The Bench (Simply streckle) welcome to MPS🕊️🙏
  October 23rd, 2025 06:15
• The Sound Of Silence Tanka. (Goldfinch60) Like rests in a musical composition, full of meaning and part of what can...
  October 23rd, 2025 06:13
• in the waning light (Arqios) @Karoline —Thanks for the Fave 🤩🙏🏻🕊️
  October 22nd, 2025 12:06
• Theotokos\'s Trap (Tristan Robert Lange) When mystery is caged in doctrine, faith hardens — a paradox turned...
  October 19th, 2025 15:42
• Ambiance (Neil Higgins) Much enjoyed 🕊️🙏
  October 19th, 2025 06:45
• Calligraphy (Priya Tomar) Now this speaks constellations! 🕊️🙏
  October 19th, 2025 06:44
• AUSTERITY BY ANOTHER NAME (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) This poem lays bare how austerity isn’t just economics but a quiet form...
  October 19th, 2025 06:43
• What is Forgiveness? (Friendship) An excellent read, Friendship 🕊️🙏
  October 19th, 2025 05:36
• Music Can Bring Peace. (Goldfinch60) It can and it has and it shall! 🕊️🙏
  October 19th, 2025 05:32
• Population explosion (Sorenbarrett) A poem that really hits hard as an allegory, here. The rats effectively...
  October 19th, 2025 05:30
• The Drake Havens (Mutley Ravishes) Here is a poem that feels like a fragment of pure energy. It\'s broken...
  October 17th, 2025 08:31
• No give in forgive, no get in forget (Sorenbarrett) A poem that uses nature to show the cost of holding onto pain. Making out...
  October 17th, 2025 08:28
• This Woeful Day (Tristan Robert Lange) I really like how this poem captures the intensity of self‑reflection....
  October 17th, 2025 08:24
• The Price of Instruction. (Friendship) This is close and deeply resonant to me. It really nails the difference...
  October 17th, 2025 08:19
• The Drake Havens 2 (Mutley Ravishes) This poem feels like a pressure cooker! It\'s volcanic imagery and clipped...
  October 17th, 2025 08:17
• Careful (2781) There is much value as this poem balances advice with self‑doubt. How it...
  October 17th, 2025 08:15
• With No Hint of An End (Neville) Amazing how this poem loops back on itself, Neville. How the imagery of...
  October 17th, 2025 08:13
• Mozart On Random. (Goldfinch60) It so good that genius can be shared and celebrated. 🕊️🙏
  October 17th, 2025 05:31
• What you want (Sorenbarrett) I like how this poem flips daydreaming into a call to action and the shift...
  October 17th, 2025 05:27
• Anthems Of My Generation (Dan Williams) This poem really captures the weight of disillusionment. And the way...
  October 17th, 2025 05:17
• Breath (RSM0812) Beautifully heartfelt. I\'m liking how the imagery moves from breath to...
  October 17th, 2025 05:12
• Masquerade (Sorenbarrett) This poem captures so well the way we hide our most fragile parts behind...
  October 14th, 2025 22:03
• Fresh First Fruits (Orchidee) Good stuff!
  October 13th, 2025 00:01
• The Shape of Why (Tristan Robert Lange) Like a cryptic crossword, in the middle there. Excellent device...
  October 12th, 2025 23:58
• S.T.I. (Andrew Deaton) Welcome to MPS 🕊️🙏🏻
  October 11th, 2025 04:47
• Bed of My Beloved (Tristan Robert Lange) This piece is chilling and unforgettable and its refrain of “you...
  October 10th, 2025 20:25
• Peace Promise (Orchidee) Ooh! Saved by the bell 🔔 I was considering posting up a hymn or two but...
  October 10th, 2025 17:00
• Near sighted (Sorenbarrett) Reminds me of that Rupert Holmes song. But this poem is of much more depth...
  October 10th, 2025 16:57
• Better Day Today. (Goldfinch60) Here’s to many more fresh starts🕊️🙏🏻
  October 10th, 2025 16:39
• squoting slugs (Tristan Robert Lange) Agree totally. It also closely mirrors not taking authority in vain....
  October 7th, 2025 07:48
• Some day (Sorenbarrett) What a powerful ending! “Toilet paper,” in contrast to the rest of the...
  October 6th, 2025 19:37
• Two Sevens Today. (Goldfinch60) Happy birthday, Andy! 🎉
  October 6th, 2025 03:22
• Is It Contagious?. (Poetic Licence) Yet whispers linger, soft as morning rain, That kindness, once planted,...
  October 5th, 2025 02:28
• Lost music of the forest (Sorenbarrett) That has happened to me as well on occasion, Soren. 🕊️🙏🏻
  October 2nd, 2025 16:02
• Playing The Clarinet. (Goldfinch60) Nice! Remember to press record some time 👍🏻🕊️🙏🏻
  October 2nd, 2025 16:00
• National Poetry Day 2025 (Tom Dylan) A play of words will suffice, methinks🕊️🙏🏻
  October 2nd, 2025 06:04
• New Pages. (Goldfinch60) The use of repetition is movingly effective here, Andy🕊🙏🏻
  October 1st, 2025 16:21
• KINTSUGI (Michael Edwards) Just beautiful!🕊🙏🏻
  October 1st, 2025 16:20
• gated folds (Arqios) Thanks for the Fave 🤩 @Soman
  October 1st, 2025 16:16
• Strange Horizon (Tristan Robert Lange) Your poem really captures that eerie shift from the comfort of autumn...
  October 1st, 2025 07:39
• Shaping (Sorenbarrett) Good stuff here, Soren! This poem turns the act of pruning into a gentle...
  October 1st, 2025 07:36
• Point Taken (Tom Dylan) Hope your fortnight goes well, Tom. Will be here at the ‘side when you...
  September 30th, 2025 18:59
• instant society (Gray0328) No there’s a title and a poem that exceeds its expectations!
  September 30th, 2025 18:57
• Indigestion (Sorenbarrett) Powerful brevity here, dear Soren! 🙏🏻🕊️
  September 30th, 2025 16:05
• Saint Sinner (Tristan Robert Lange) Made me remember driving through and staying at the so-called “Bible...
  September 30th, 2025 16:04
• Awww, no invite! (Orchidee) Apparently your friendship status must be active to participate with...
  September 28th, 2025 20:13
• The Mask (RaysThroughDarkness) Welcome to MPS🕊️🙏
  September 27th, 2025 05:53
• FIRST STEPS (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Now here is a place where that next journey can begin successfully...
  September 27th, 2025 05:16
• Nuts (Sorenbarrett) I don’t understand it either myself, dear friend 🙏🏻🕊️
  September 26th, 2025 08:04
• Coincidence. (Goldfinch60) Amazing routine and art life! 🙏🏻🕊️
  September 26th, 2025 08:02
• meningslösheter och slit (Håkan Renström) Is this an adequate translation? “meaninglessnesses and...
  September 26th, 2025 06:20
• the fountain (Arqios) Now 7 is a beautiful number. Just saying😂
  September 26th, 2025 00:34
• meningslösheter och slit (Håkan Renström) Welcome to MPS 🙏🕊️
  September 25th, 2025 23:08
• DESTRUCTION (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) That speaks deeply and illuminates the depths.
  September 25th, 2025 19:45
• On the level (2781) This refracts the imagery into a more contemporary, layered meditation: a...
  September 25th, 2025 19:39
• Where Did The Time Go? (Goldfinch60) Time flies when you’re having good fun!
  September 25th, 2025 16:38
• The Sky (Tristan Robert Lange) The “great fireball” feels like a metaphor for ultimate annihilation,...
  September 25th, 2025 16:37
• Night images (Sorenbarrett) Your poem feels like a meditation on the strange alchemy of night; how...
  September 25th, 2025 07:25
• Queen Selene (Tristan Robert Lange) Haha, this is brilliant; men strut around bragging about “landing” on...
  September 24th, 2025 06:14
• Ghosts (Sorenbarrett) I may be misreading this, but I love the last line; about leaving no scar...
  September 23rd, 2025 05:49
• Sometimes, We Slip (Thomas W Case) Wow, what a slippery day😯
  September 21st, 2025 17:45
• IN ORDER TO BE SANE (David Welch) Welcome to MPS! 🕊️🙏
  September 20th, 2025 18:24
• LIMERICKS 142, 143 & 144 (Michael Edwards) It’s been a while, Michael! Good to see/read those limericks...
  September 20th, 2025 05:09
• Jack [title] (Max Manley) Welcome to MPS🕊️🙏🏻
  September 19th, 2025 07:22
• Made of Wood (Orchidee) Wooden? 🤗
  September 18th, 2025 07:08
• Unread Poetry (A.N.) A beautiful expression Violet_Writes worded exquisitely 🙏🏻🕊️
  September 17th, 2025 17:25
• \"the question\" (Arqios) Thanks for the Fave 🤩 @Violet_Writes 🕊️🙏🏻
  September 17th, 2025 16:30
• The Bristers. (Goldfinch60) What a chance meeting!
  September 17th, 2025 07:41
• Sorry, there are 6 poems (Maplespal) That’s one way to do it! And many at the site accept it willingly enough...
  September 17th, 2025 07:40
• Orchi\'s Own (Tristan Robert Lange) So much fun 🤩
  September 17th, 2025 07:38
• Coming Back To Poetry (Tom Dylan) The images and message here are truly close to the heart! 🕊🙏🏻
  September 16th, 2025 08:14
• Flowering tree (Sorenbarrett) That’s probably why it’s arguably the best time of year🕊🙏🏻
  September 16th, 2025 08:13
• INRI (Mark Barron) Welcome to MPS 🙏🕊️
  September 15th, 2025 23:59