Comments on community poems by arqios

• Glimpses (Sorenbarrett) This poem captures the fleeting dance between light and darkness, where...
  August 11th, 2025 04:06
• For my lovely Jeannette (MichaelH) Welcome to MPS 🙏🏻🕊
  August 10th, 2025 22:32
• Sunday Fun-Day: \"Dawn\" (Arqios) This poem invites readers into a world where digital silence awakens...
  August 10th, 2025 07:41
• Dandelion Clocks (Kevin Hulme) What an excellent concept! 🙏🏻🕊️
  August 10th, 2025 07:37
• Seven Lines to Burn (Tristan Robert Lange) Ah thanks for this christening backstory (to Salvia as well) and these...
  August 10th, 2025 07:36
• \"flight mode\" (Arqios) Here\'s a response to the poem from a fellow poet on another site: \"Good...
  August 10th, 2025 02:28
• Taking Time (Jerry Reynolds) This is so soothing to read! Much enjoyed🕊️🙏🏻
  August 9th, 2025 06:50
• \"flight mode\" (Arqios) Perhaps it allows us to reconsider our definitions of success. It could...
  August 9th, 2025 06:48
• Afraid to Love (Tristan Robert Lange) Will listen to this when I get off work. How exciting!
  August 8th, 2025 21:38
• The Heart\'s Promise. (Goldfinch60) Complete bliss.
  August 8th, 2025 17:31
• Waiting for Godfrey (Kevin Hulme) Waiting on Wednesday!
  August 8th, 2025 17:30
• Painted On (Teddy.15) Striking truth
  August 8th, 2025 17:28
• Writing through Storms (Thomas W Case) So it is, thus it shall ever be🙏🏻🕊
  August 8th, 2025 17:26
• choirside (Arqios) Thanks for the Face @Damaso.🙏🏻🕊🪶
  August 8th, 2025 17:22
• Remarking on A Flight of Fancy (Neville) Your poem carries a mournful wisdom, gently cautioning against hubris...
  August 8th, 2025 08:08
• Nothing anymore (Sorenbarrett) That’s hauntingly beautiful poem is rich in imagery and layered with...
  August 8th, 2025 07:59
• All because of him (V1RU$) Welcome to MPS🕊️🙏🏻
  August 8th, 2025 05:31
• remembrance (Phragmidium) Welcome to MPS 🕊️🙏🏻
  August 8th, 2025 05:30
• NU (2781) Bran nu day
  August 7th, 2025 06:43
• 55 INCH SCREEN (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Your poem beautifully captures how music can become a vessel for memory,...
  August 7th, 2025 06:06
• Storm Over Gaza (Tony Grannell) It is indeed a storm. 🙏🏻🕊️
  August 7th, 2025 06:02
• Wiped clean (Sorenbarrett) “Wiped clean” carries such a gentle power; each stanza feels like a...
  August 7th, 2025 06:00
• a type of mental inclination (Wordsinclined) Welcome to MPS🕊️🙏🏻
  August 7th, 2025 05:53
• Elder Respect. (Goldfinch60) It\'s a sad thing that this among other things have gone by the side
  August 7th, 2025 05:52
• His Perfect Timing. (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) Amen🙏🏻
  August 7th, 2025 05:50
• \"before the next breath\" (Arqios) ...a third from direct appeal, the jury is still out...
  August 7th, 2025 05:50
• The Necessary Lesson (Series on Liberals #1) (Gray0328) Just clocked off from a blended shift. 12 hours of madness. I am also not...
  August 7th, 2025 05:17
• Cheap Rooms and Love (Thomas W Case) Slice of life, raw and true.
  August 6th, 2025 16:38
• Go on a adventure (Tony36) Yes, let\'s go! Thanks Tony🕊️🙏🏻
  August 6th, 2025 07:00
• Are they listening? (2781) The poem’s strength lies in its honest questioning and its faith in...
  August 6th, 2025 06:10
• “spark of now” (Arqios) Is it really a case of what you see is what you get?
  August 6th, 2025 06:07
• Filling Gaps (Neville) So true N🙏🏻🕊️
  August 6th, 2025 05:10
• Naughty! (Orchidee) That’s too funny O🤪
  August 6th, 2025 05:09
• “spark of now” (Arqios) So this is the more permanent posting that can be filed away for future...
  August 6th, 2025 03:08
• unsending love (Arqios) so shall that day be marked that love was indent💔
  August 5th, 2025 23:23
• Trust? (🌻) Welcome to MPS 🙏🏻🕊️
  August 5th, 2025 23:22
• World (Keeter C) WE do need to learn quite a lot of things and continue on in lifelong...
  August 5th, 2025 21:20
• Um, Yeah, I Learned from Mary Poppins (Cheeky Missy) Funny how some things stay with us: like several generations that have...
  August 5th, 2025 19:04
• i am declaring WAR on ANYTHING HAPPY (not clickbait) (Highlighter) Welcome to MPS 🙏🏻🕊
  August 5th, 2025 19:02
• Conundrum (Kevin Hulme) Oh, there’s probably more than just the one needle in there!
  August 5th, 2025 19:01
• unsending love (Arqios) Thanks for the Fave @Friendship 🙏🏻🕊️
  August 5th, 2025 18:24
• unsending love (Arqios)
  August 5th, 2025 15:51
• Yamatorige - Feathers of A Copper Pheasant (Neville) A most impressive avian!
  August 5th, 2025 15:51
• Bebop. (Goldfinch60) Beauty of music in poem and vice versa, poetry of music.
  August 5th, 2025 15:49
• The character of a man (Sorenbarrett) Character on view 24/7, in many ways a daunting prospect in life....
  August 5th, 2025 15:48
• Confession (Dan Williams) Our sense of self is usually our sense of others, one reflects the other....
  August 5th, 2025 15:40
• unsending love (Arqios) There be other reasons…
  August 5th, 2025 15:36
• the road to here and there (Arqios) Thanks Damaso for the Fave 🤩
  August 5th, 2025 15:35
• unsending love (Arqios) It can be reimagined thusly: \"In one fleeting breath I held your name,...
  August 5th, 2025 05:13
• reader, read her (Arqios) Thanks for the Faves 🤩@Soman R. &!@ CM
  August 4th, 2025 07:06
• reader, read her (Arqios) It\'s the start of another work week. Hope everyone is doing well and may...
  August 4th, 2025 03:56
• Thought (Bella Shepard) A well-considered capacity is thought through thoroughly 🙏🏻🕊️
  August 3rd, 2025 15:59
• \"sunlit newsflash\" (happy poems weekend suite) (Arqios) Thanks for the Fave @Bella Shephard
  August 3rd, 2025 15:56
• \"sunlit newsflash\" (happy poems weekend suite) (Arqios) Thanks for the Faves @Friendship & @ CM 🤩
  August 3rd, 2025 09:30
• \"sunlit newsflash\" (happy poems weekend suite) (Arqios) Thanks for reading this one. So good to hear about your journey with this...
  August 3rd, 2025 09:27
• Tick tock (Sorenbarrett) This poem is rich with layered metaphor; time as both tormentor and muse,...
  August 3rd, 2025 05:55
• The One Who Still Holds the Key (KnightOfCups) A warm welcome to MPS🙏🏻🕊️
  August 3rd, 2025 05:51
• the road to here and there (Arqios) Hope either or both works in your reading!
  August 2nd, 2025 05:35
• the road to here and there (Arqios) Thanks for the Fave 🤩 @CM
  August 2nd, 2025 05:33
• Be Back Soon (Tristan Robert Lange) See you soon, stay safe🙏🏻🕊️
  August 2nd, 2025 00:22
• firefly tandem (Arqios) …sometimes two for one hardly makes a dent… curios.
  August 1st, 2025 08:18
• firefly tandem (Arqios) Two poems intertwining over a span of 15 years. Happy birthday to my...
  August 1st, 2025 04:59
• firefly tandem (Arqios) Thanks for the Fave 🤩 @CM
  August 1st, 2025 04:55
• My1st poem (Paul Ramnora) Well, why not! Welcome to MPS 🕊️🙏🏻
  July 31st, 2025 18:37
• “games we play” (Arqios) a fourth then a fifth then a sixth.... even an 8th and 16th... hahaha
  July 31st, 2025 05:52
• “games we play” (Arqios) Thanks for the Fave @sorenbarrett
  July 31st, 2025 05:51
• On Friendship (ElizabethMoroz) Now something to put our \'friendships\' against. Most...
  July 31st, 2025 05:49
• “games we play” (Arqios) … sharing a newish poem today that dives into our midnight exchanges and...
  July 31st, 2025 03:12
• What doesn\'t Fido know? (Orchidee) Not much that he doesn’t know!
  July 30th, 2025 23:58
• Pink Elephants (Kevin Hulme) ...those indeed were the days!🕊️🙏🏻
  July 30th, 2025 20:01
• Flame Hope and Sorrow (Tony Grannell) As someone who remembers candlelit power cuts and mixtapes on cassette,...
  July 30th, 2025 08:41
• Under a Ladybug Moon (Jerry Reynolds) Hey Jerry, thank you for sharing this beautifully wrought journey through...
  July 30th, 2025 08:32
• The Acceptable Ways to Die (Tristan Robert Lange) (Aside: One day it would be awesome to discover the back story and origins...
  July 30th, 2025 08:29
• Clink (Tony36) Too much of anything... well, as Bella said before, as long as you\'re in...
  July 30th, 2025 08:24
• Feign Appearance (MooreRaynold) Wow, this poem really nails that universal tug-of-war between craving...
  July 30th, 2025 08:23
• epilogue: the seed beyond memory (Arqios) Thanks for the Fave🤩 @CM
  July 30th, 2025 03:02
• epilogue: the seed beyond memory (Arqios)
  July 30th, 2025 00:46
• epilogue: the seed beyond memory (Arqios) 🌱 “The Seed Beyond Memory” closes the Cherry Orchard Suite with a...
  July 30th, 2025 00:46
• Well Inclined (Neville) I’m struck by the way the poem balances playfulness (exotic animals!)...
  July 29th, 2025 20:45
• A Bridge of Quiet Strength (John mckay) Welcome to MPS 🕊️🙏🏻
  July 29th, 2025 20:39
• Rise up (Tony36) Oh, nice one Tony! 🕊️🙏🏻
  July 29th, 2025 07:28
• The Sixties, Was I There. (Goldfinch60) I was there as well, a much younger me and most of my impressions are ones...
  July 29th, 2025 04:23
• Memories (Sorenbarrett) This piece crackles with dark energy; mixing slapstick chemistry gags and...
  July 29th, 2025 04:19
• right here, right now (Arqios) Thanks for the Faves dears, @Cheeky Missy and @sorenbarrett
  July 29th, 2025 04:17
• right here, right now (Arqios) 2/3 - now this is beginning to look interesting... let\'s see where the...
  July 29th, 2025 04:13
• right here, right now (Arqios) I’m excited to share “right here, right now,” a poem about seizing...
  July 29th, 2025 02:55
• He (Tony36) I hear in his silent footsteps the brave pulse of a heart that refuses to...
  July 28th, 2025 08:13
• At the Very End of It All (Neville) ....it’s not a void but a gentle release from hunger, pain, and desire;...
  July 28th, 2025 08:11
• Imago Dei (Tristan Robert Lange) You are the architect of reality, infusing every moment with bold...
  July 28th, 2025 08:03
• Lattes and Faux Fur (Cheeky Missy) These playful sonnets transform dawn light, pumpkin-spice cravings, and...
  July 28th, 2025 07:33
• 6 Fir\'s Last Watch (Arqios) We may be looking at a moving of dates for the Epilogue of the cherry...
  July 28th, 2025 06:23
• Sneaking Through Your Window (Bmulk1) welcome to MPS 🙏🏻🕊️
  July 28th, 2025 06:21
• The Lake (Jerry Reynolds) What a vivid image and motion! Must be that time of year for fauna and...
  July 28th, 2025 06:20
• Ponder (Poet\'s Dream) I love how you catch that instant by the window; when rushing cars slow...
  July 28th, 2025 04:34
• 6 Fir\'s Last Watch (Arqios) It may not fare well but there is no resolve but to go through and...
  July 28th, 2025 04:19
• Misanthropic Melodies (ElizabethMoroz) This poem’s kaleidoscope of scientific marvels, political reckonings,...
  July 28th, 2025 04:16
• Vanity (Sorenbarrett) This vivid fable of a dapper cat undone by canine infatuation brilliantly...
  July 28th, 2025 04:09
• Old Fashioned Respect. (Goldfinch60) That\'s what we\'ve needed to rediscover for a long while now!
  July 28th, 2025 03:54
• 6 Fir\'s Last Watch (Arqios) Quite sure many will be happy this is over and done with. I may or may not...
  July 28th, 2025 02:30
• Endure (Xander_Kaine) Welcome to MPS 🕊🙏🏻
  July 28th, 2025 02:26