Comments on community poems by arqios

• just say it (Rengoku) Brave, yes... tearless... mmm... that\'s a tall order! But win you shall!
  December 21st, 2024 21:31
• Go and get it (𓆩Mase𓆪) Your challenge to the idea that understanding comes with age is...
  December 21st, 2024 21:29
• Moors (Hamdagohar) Very atmospheric. Brings me back to an era and feel. Hope you post more!
  December 21st, 2024 21:24
• I Hate to see you cry (Kevin Hulme) I see/read/feel what you mean! Part of my posting process these days is to...
  December 21st, 2024 20:16
• Riches (Hzugman) Refreshingly enjoyable. Thanks for sharing! That is truly what makes us...
  December 21st, 2024 14:58
• My Way (The Fife Wanderer) Exactly what I feel. So, my way and my highway. 👍🏻
  December 21st, 2024 13:54
• Bloom (Finley Oaktree) Quite beautiful in its succinctness.
  December 21st, 2024 13:52
• Why? (Tristan Robert Lange) Been there, done a variation of that; what sticks with me at this junction...
  December 21st, 2024 09:12
• Dang Tree! (Orchidee) Haha! So good 😊
  December 21st, 2024 09:07
• The Ride (Tony36) Don’t forget the smell of fumes and fuel ⛽️!
  December 21st, 2024 08:45
• They Are Not DRONES In The Sky! (Thad Wilk) Both clever and amusing, and a barb for someone somewhere in there!...
  December 21st, 2024 07:47
• The Christmas Wraith (Tristan Robert Lange) A powerful tale of hypocrisy and a judgement and reckoning. Man, you laid...
  December 21st, 2024 07:44
• The book (2781) On a cognitive stand point: “who can know it?” referring to the...
  December 21st, 2024 07:40
• God\'s Christmas (Sorenbarrett) Hey Soren, this poem is a profound and thought-provoking reflection on the...
  December 21st, 2024 06:05
• Signs of The Times x5 (Neville) Hey Neville, this poem offers a poignant and insightful commentary on the...
  December 21st, 2024 06:03
• Longest Night Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) Hey Andy, this poem beautifully captures the essence of the solstice as a...
  December 21st, 2024 06:01
• God`s Gift To Us (TobaniNataiella) This poem powerfully conveys a sense of urgency and despair regarding the...
  December 21st, 2024 05:59
• AND THE PAST TENSE IS: AWAKE (Michael Edwards) This poem\'s conversational and relatable tone, combined with the...
  December 21st, 2024 05:56
• With Christmas rain delights become confessions... (Cellinic) This poem\'s hopeful tone anticipates the incoming year is so uplifting!
  December 21st, 2024 05:54
• Shaun (Eugene S.) A very moving tribute to friendship and its depth of connection through...
  December 21st, 2024 05:51
• My name is... (Kevin Hulme) Hope is in many cases what we need, but not false hope and definitely not...
  December 21st, 2024 05:47
• The Train to Treblinka. (David Wakeling) Holocaust narratives are both harrowing and cleansing. I am glad that...
  December 21st, 2024 05:42
• Strong Enough (Tony36) A poem that powerfully explores the theme of resilience and...
  December 20th, 2024 08:05
• When nature calls.. (NafisaSB) The contrasts you draw between city life and the serenity of nature are...
  December 20th, 2024 07:56
• The Good don’t die young. (David Wakeling) A woven contrast of the legacies of the \'good\' the \'nice\' and the...
  December 20th, 2024 07:54
• If they had lived (Kevin Hulme) The unfulfilled potential of young lives cut short is such a moving topic....
  December 20th, 2024 07:46
• Love of a father (Sorenbarrett) Profoundly moved: never connected a rosebush with fatherhood.. wow!!! I...
  December 20th, 2024 07:33
• Coffee#1 Christmas Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) It\'s awesome to have a regular or periodic watering hole!
  December 20th, 2024 07:26
• Come On It`s Christmas (TobaniNataiella) I think you more than clearly got that message across!
  December 20th, 2024 07:24
• 12/17/24 (Wren) This poem captures powerfully the intense and unsettling nature of...
  December 20th, 2024 07:22
• Life cause (Cellinic) A beautiful blend of emotion, spirituality, and creativity. Its rich...
  December 20th, 2024 07:16
• Heaven Waits (RSM0812) This poem beautifully captures the themes of life, death, and redemption...
  December 19th, 2024 04:46
• Voice (Cellinic) Hopefully speaking of a voice that accompanies a transformative journey...
  December 19th, 2024 04:36
• Inflation def. noun- blowing up the economy (Sorenbarrett) They got it the wrong way around and gradually they’re bringing us back...
  December 19th, 2024 04:12
• The Day Music Died. (Goldfinch60) Brings back memories. Such tragedies, to persons, to history and to music....
  December 19th, 2024 03:30
• Mathematics of Imagination (Dan Williams) What we belief can prove unreliable and makes us question them. Things...
  December 19th, 2024 03:28
• Comes Life (TobaniNataiella) What an orchestral Crescendo, layering and overlapping onto each other to...
  December 19th, 2024 01:56
• Song for Brian P. (DreamTiger) Nice one! Embracing both the light and the dark completes the picture....
  December 19th, 2024 01:30
• The Tree Of Life (The Fife Wanderer) Now there’s a thought always nascent and ever present: we breathe in...
  December 19th, 2024 01:27
• Clouds, Like Pink Petals (Thomas W Case) The sky has not fallen! To say the least. More rain to come.
  December 19th, 2024 01:22
• The Tome Beneath the Tinsel (Tristan Robert Lange) Just like its dynamic structure, this poem captures the tension between...
  December 18th, 2024 08:07
• Rain (Tony36) Yes! Now that’s what’s needed 👍🏻
  December 18th, 2024 08:01
• The fly (Sorenbarrett) Ah! Now that is a scary metaphor, it’s thousand googly eyes to boot!
  December 18th, 2024 03:47
• Gazania (David Wakeling) Oh beauty! I didn’t know what they were called. Had them to brighten the...
  December 18th, 2024 03:46
• I Must (Teddy.15) “Must” precisely put, the night I had to sleep, outdoors- locked out...
  December 18th, 2024 03:42
• Bound in Triumph (Job Welime) The stream goth and beauty melded together in poetry.
  December 18th, 2024 03:36
• Dark waters (Mortal357) Welcome to MPS! (If a bit belatedly 😊)
  December 18th, 2024 03:35
• Tale of the New Year (Kevin Hulme) This year is exciting in the sense that we all go in together through to...
  December 18th, 2024 03:29
• Chaos Starting (Dan Williams) And I am a realist of the cynical positivistic variety. So this poem is...
  December 18th, 2024 03:26
• Sleepless (Cellinic) I believe the sound of the guitar to be a great accompaniment to this...
  December 18th, 2024 03:19
• IT’S A’CUMMIN (Michael Edwards) All of that and yet it can be over all too soon. I notice annually how we...
  December 18th, 2024 03:14
• Pure Hearts. (Goldfinch60) And what it’s really all about brings us all together! Beautiful!
  December 18th, 2024 03:13
• Quick Fingers (Neville) And there are them with shorter fingers that do wonders it breaks the...
  December 18th, 2024 03:10
• Can You See (TobaniNataiella) Oh, now here is a mantra of my being! It also sums up quite neatly a major...
  December 18th, 2024 03:08
• New York City (Demar Desu) Indeed, all cities and places have their distinct characters and...
  December 18th, 2024 03:04
• $0.01 in my bank account (Demar Desu) My balance has moved up lightly to $07.71, having crawled out of credit...
  December 17th, 2024 23:20
• Its bones (A.B. Jakobs) This poem filled me with a sense of inexplicable alienation. Very moving...
  December 17th, 2024 19:58
• SongsThatMakeMeFeelAlive (Melancholic~Onion) Welcome to MPS!
  December 17th, 2024 19:27
• Love (Doggerel Dave) Well I for one love infatuations, so titillating!
  December 17th, 2024 19:26
• Future (Kenzie) The sun that couldn’t make up its mind!
  December 17th, 2024 17:50
• The Angel Message (Orchidee) Funny how précis is almost opposite to precise. Good write o.
  December 17th, 2024 17:48
• CALL OF THE SEA (Will Kevin) The big sound of the Ocean is a voice all its own! Wonderful 🌊
  December 17th, 2024 17:47
• Killer Zombie Clown! [ extended Sonnet ] (Thad Wilk) Reminds me of the clown crimes and copycats some decades ago. I think...
  December 17th, 2024 17:42
• Alien Nation (DreamTiger) Welcome to MPS! And what an evocative first offering! 👍🏻
  December 17th, 2024 08:52
• Warmth (Tony36) It must be well for that special someone, the feel of reciprocity is...
  December 17th, 2024 08:50
• Whispers of What Could Have Been (TheWanderer_and_his_Ms.Reverie) And a close relative of communication, conversation… perhaps to my mind...
  December 17th, 2024 08:49
• Call of the earth (Sorenbarrett) Liked and Faved. Part of me has days like that… now I’m nursing my...
  December 17th, 2024 08:28
• Giving up the fight (David Wakeling) Silly, white parrot… must be a cockatoo. The mirroring effect is staying...
  December 17th, 2024 08:25
• Like Butterflies in Snowstorms (Neville) The blizzard said it all… or did the deed! (Shivers) ❄️ 🦋 💀
  December 17th, 2024 08:21
• Love Is All Acrostic. (Goldfinch60) There are distinct moments when we believe love is all we need! Good on...
  December 17th, 2024 08:19
• Time Cannot Heal (TobaniNataiella) That brought me to a choice, a summation that should we choose it, Time...
  December 17th, 2024 08:17
• To a Rainbow (Kevin Hulme) And the elation of a double rainbow! 🌈 🌈
  December 17th, 2024 08:13
• I\'m Going to Miss Jail (Thomas W Case) The eclectic mix of the book order is refreshing! In developed countries,...
  December 17th, 2024 08:12
• Little Things (Cassie58) I love such ‘little’ presents, they keep giving and giving, and almost...
  December 17th, 2024 08:10
• [ Our Sea Of Love ] (Thad Wilk) That’s a kind of “tickle” that those in the know, know and revel in!
  December 17th, 2024 08:08
• The mighty man of death (MR.apocalypse) Where I not as mighty would I succumb beneath that final curtain...stage...
  December 16th, 2024 21:01
• Around others (Caring dove) Oh that is quite the metaphor. It can be frightful to imagine what ‘cut...
  December 16th, 2024 08:52
• in the mood for love (Demar Desu) If only!
  December 16th, 2024 08:15
• Gave you my heart (Tony36) Powerful image and expression. Power dynamics in intimate relationships...
  December 16th, 2024 08:14
• Fortress of Mountains (Tristan Robert Lange) Remember driving around between there and the Appalachian, with Rocky Top...
  December 16th, 2024 08:12
• THE FINAL TIME (Nephilim56) Makes the heart race whilst reading. Very effective!
  December 16th, 2024 07:31
• Drink In the Sunrise (Dan Williams) The \"basket full of light\" jumps out at me and stays aloft in the...
  December 16th, 2024 06:17
• An Awful (Okay) Time of Year (Roland Graves) Welcome to MPS! And our routines thrown up until we pick them up again...
  December 16th, 2024 06:14
• Sorry Santa / The List (TobaniNataiella) Oh, 3 in 1! Mighty generous today\'s post is.
  December 16th, 2024 06:12
• Trials (2781) It\'s so easy to forget the two-edged sword quality of our walk, in this...
  December 16th, 2024 06:11
• In Old Egypt (David Wakeling) A tragedy indeed. You spun that tale in verse so well DW!
  December 16th, 2024 06:10
• Into The New Year. (Goldfinch60) That is such a beautiful way to welcome the year and bless us as well....
  December 16th, 2024 06:08
• By Way of the Heart (Accidental Poet) Thank you for sharing this heartfelt and thought-provoking piece. It is a...
  December 16th, 2024 06:07
• A Christmas Unearth (Teddy.15) Clink!
  December 16th, 2024 06:04
• Ways of Falling Out of Love (Neville) Cold Turkey or no turkey at all... so true. Having experienced both ways...
  December 16th, 2024 06:04
• Poseidon\'s bones (Sorenbarrett) Thank you for sharing this thoughtful and evocative poem. It also serves...
  December 16th, 2024 06:03
• The Spirit Immersing the Waters of Passion... (Cellinic) Wow! The drive towards compassion amidst chaos speaks volumes about the...
  December 15th, 2024 20:58
• son of the sun (Rengoku) Oh so many come to mind, Apollo, Ra or Helios, perhaps... LInk (Zelda),...
  December 15th, 2024 20:34
• What\'s My Heart For? (MendedFences27) Feeling that bereft-ness and it does seep into anything and everything....
  December 15th, 2024 20:24
• Be Time full (Cedrick) Oh wow, the gift, the cost, and the punishment of Time- the whole...
  December 15th, 2024 20:22
• In which the Blackbird Ponders on the What and the Why (Kevin Hulme) And we all think without a thought that we know so much and that much more...
  December 15th, 2024 20:18
• Busy A Gut (Tony36) We need more mirth and laughter in our days! Thanks for sharing Tony :-)
  December 15th, 2024 20:02
• `~ Love Is In The Air -Limericks Chain- (Thad Wilk) So there, it’s settled… a dog’s best friend is bacon 🥓 or a...
  December 15th, 2024 18:29
• Demons (Tristan Robert Lange) I’ve been through Valhalla with a corpse with no name… it’s so good...
  December 15th, 2024 18:27
• Before Spill Kits and DNA Became a Thing (Neville) But the rug won’t stay up on a stained ceiling! So why not wear the...
  December 15th, 2024 18:24