Comments on community poems by arqios
- Flowers and Powers. (David Wakeling)
These I have yet to properly learn having undergone an impoverished...
October 28th, 2024 07:05 - More than clay (Sorenbarrett)
It brings a thought about that we feed and tend and shear and spindle and...
October 28th, 2024 07:02 - Another Moment Lost (Neville)
Hesitations in hindsight are brought on by naivety, and the number of...
October 28th, 2024 07:00 - Just One Day. (Goldfinch60)
Now here are words to daily live by!
October 28th, 2024 06:58 - Whispers To The Ocean (Young Fella)
Superbly pleasant read and mental experience!
October 27th, 2024 18:05 - Medlar to Blet (Neville)
The image of the Coptic jar burns brightly into the ‘after image’ of...
October 27th, 2024 05:16 - I have seen, I have heard and I believe. (David Wakeling)
In most cases more than answers and logic; gentleness and listening...
October 27th, 2024 05:14 - A message (2781)
May the days always end in a safe and soft landing until the Return.
October 27th, 2024 05:10 - Ember (Sorenbarrett)
Life’s yolk, YES! Our lot is quite a think to deal with from day to day....
October 27th, 2024 05:08 - Cloud cover (2781)
It’s winning us over where the battle’s usually at.
October 26th, 2024 08:17 - amore tardius occidit (Thomas W Case)
Must be a dog-eared book as well… and the shock of a torn page sends...
October 26th, 2024 08:15 - Color Captivation (Tristan Robert Lange)
The colours are quite Halloweeny.
October 26th, 2024 08:13 - Books (Tony36)
Reminds me somehow of that wardrobe to Narnia and Eglentine’s...
October 26th, 2024 08:10 - Halfway to Hanoi (Neville)
Sometimes we get stuck into it and other times we’re just plain stuck!
October 26th, 2024 08:08 - The Miracle. (David Wakeling)
All of life is quite the sacred dance, it’s probably when we ‘wake’...
October 26th, 2024 06:13 - Sixty Minute Slumberbash (Teddy.15)
Same thoughts here, although the banks and the powers that be are far from...
October 26th, 2024 06:10 - When Love Runs So Deep (Accidental Poet)
Biding time in wait for the collection of poems for and to Sharon.
October 26th, 2024 06:07 - A nursery rhyme for us mature children (Sorenbarrett)
That about sums it up in every castle 🏰 to which the king does...
October 26th, 2024 06:06 - The Sibilance Of Showers. (Goldfinch60)
It is quite the original orchestra both of sight and sound, it’s music...
October 26th, 2024 06:04 - Fake ID (Teddy.15)
Sometimes society around us pushes us to weird extremes, some people do...
October 25th, 2024 08:00 - The Child (Tony36)
More than a few of us like this these days, more the norm now than the...
October 25th, 2024 07:57 - Turning to Song? (Orchidee)
Good write O.
October 25th, 2024 07:56 - Home We Will Come Sonnet. (Goldfinch60)
It seems that sea is something to return to, but the company taken along...
October 25th, 2024 07:54 - Inaudible Sounds (Neville)
Inaudible reminds me of the range at which canines hear what we don’t; a...
October 25th, 2024 07:51 - avalanche (Tristan Robert Lange)
As scary as it can get, our inner mental/emotional state is precious and...
October 24th, 2024 20:40 - Love That Goes the Distance (Accidental Poet)
I suspect that should each of us slow right down and see each nook and...
October 23rd, 2024 05:44 - Trick or treat (Sorenbarrett)
Masks we permanently bear! Oh wow 🤩
October 23rd, 2024 05:41 - Poet (Teddy.15)
I also believe this to be the main truth about poems and poetry! Good...
October 23rd, 2024 05:40 - Some of The Things I Just Can’t Do (Neville)
That is a bind many get caught in and try as hard as I might could not...
October 23rd, 2024 05:38 - Canvas In Our Imagination. (Goldfinch60)
When I was growing up we were made to think of songs as poems that are put...
October 23rd, 2024 05:36 - In the Beginning of Our Forever (Neville)
….‘longevity’; now there’s a word that never concerned me much,...
October 21st, 2024 06:19 - Nursery rhyme just horsing around (Sorenbarrett)
Very playful and funny!
October 21st, 2024 06:14 - Tell me a story (Tony36)
We all love an unfolding tale, stories are life!
October 20th, 2024 17:30 - Fear (2781)
The finality of the second death is a knell that rings loud and clear!
October 20th, 2024 17:28 - Smoke (Sorenbarrett)
Up in smoke we go one day!
October 20th, 2024 06:22 - Rough Justice (Neville)
Making it out alive in one piece however tattered was the prime goal of...
October 20th, 2024 04:17 - Dinner With Friends Sonnet. (Goldfinch60)
Such a natural flow of word and line, thought and rhyme!
October 20th, 2024 01:34 - ALWAYS FRIENDS (Bobby O)
Loyalty is an essential element to any good friendship!
October 20th, 2024 01:31 - Covid Visit (Doggerel Dave)
Here’s to many more good returns and most of not all for less grueling...
October 20th, 2024 01:29 - Mystery Girl (Tony36)
The hints should never be inscrutable to us but that is quite often where...
October 20th, 2024 01:27 - Welcoming Light. (Goldfinch60)
I haven’t driven in fog recently, the type where someone has to walk in...
October 19th, 2024 07:07 - Short Changed on A Long Greek Island (Neville)
How many bowls of olives 🫒 can one digest in the span of three weeks!
October 19th, 2024 07:04 - The Lion and The Lily. (David Wakeling)
One could romp in these verses all day!
October 19th, 2024 07:03 - Patriotism (Doggerel Dave)
Not much less as riding a pumpkin making us Cinderella! I’d say...
October 19th, 2024 06:57 - Halloween (Sorenbarrett)
A sad tale worthy of any day of celebration, always someone not present...
October 19th, 2024 06:54 - Give peace a chance (Tony36)
Chances are we end up in more than one piece… strange how we pull for...
October 18th, 2024 07:43 - Have you? (Sorenbarrett)
Seems I have had some experience in varying degrees of depth and breadth...
October 18th, 2024 07:41 - Deep Secrets (Neville)
Brought me back to that one breakfast after, where the orchids on the...
October 18th, 2024 07:37 - The Heart. (David Wakeling)
There is that certain beauty that puts our wanting to rest! Spot on DW!
October 18th, 2024 07:34 - Knowingly Full Of Love. (Goldfinch60)
A moon in the daytime sky always brings cheer!
October 18th, 2024 07:32 - The Repatriation of Shards (Neville)
A mystical connection bridged by what we know and what was known however...
October 17th, 2024 05:51 - Pillar of support (Sorenbarrett)
If houses symbolised our person’s enveloping existence then the corner...
October 17th, 2024 05:48 - Pants (Neville)
It’s all the rage it seems more so with the low waisted over-pants lol!
October 17th, 2024 04:24 - I Spy With My Little Eye…… (Doggerel Dave)
How have I been oblivious to these goings on? Hope all gets smoothened out...
October 17th, 2024 04:16 - What No Internet! (Goldfinch60)
The one particular horror of the 21st century! Lack in of internet...
October 17th, 2024 03:52 - Scatter Sunshine. (Goldfinch60)
What a wonderful message this poem delivers! Truly uplifting 🙏🏻
October 17th, 2024 01:18 - Good Writes (Orchidee)
Just my luck! But better than nothing!
October 16th, 2024 06:59 - SPINNING CONCLUSION (Bobby O)
There’s always that slightest bit of a shift when jazz riffs hit the
October 16th, 2024 06:58 - Same Sky Different Rain. (David Wakeling)
A differing rain however the variance of method, for myself a ‘poetic...
October 16th, 2024 06:55 - Let go (Sorenbarrett)
Now that’s the way to go! Sign me up compadre!
October 16th, 2024 06:49 - Walking In Old Age Sonnet. (Goldfinch60)
That’s something to look forward to even as now having to shop around...
October 15th, 2024 05:04 - What Is Love? (Young Fella)
Let love lead each moment of each day!
October 15th, 2024 05:01 - Don\'t (Sorenbarrett)
Such an odd feeling washes over when we metaphorically bite our tongues- a...
October 15th, 2024 04:59 - Orchi And Goldie At Hastings Sonnet. (Goldfinch60)
Makes history come to life!
October 14th, 2024 01:58 - The Boy Sat On The Burning Deck. (Goldfinch60)
Now that will translate to film!
October 13th, 2024 03:12 - 1066 Reunion (Orchidee)
For a while there I thought you numbered your poems then I realised that...
October 13th, 2024 03:10 - Unknown self (Sorenbarrett)
‘Know thyself,” it has been said but not as easy as jam and bread!
October 12th, 2024 19:43 - Harvest Thoughts (Orchidee)
Harvest and harvest time brings so many pastoral memories to which this...
October 12th, 2024 07:54 - The Bullfrog Dreams of Flying (Thomas W Case)
Hope you had an excellent birthday?
October 11th, 2024 07:48 - A drop (Sorenbarrett)
Both powerful and fearsome, water is… as is this poem!
October 11th, 2024 06:07 - Gaea’s Garden (Neville)
That She is, living proof of resurrection!
October 10th, 2024 05:34 - Hurricane (Sorenbarrett)
The imagery of battle and war is quite effective. Hope you are safe and...
October 10th, 2024 05:33 - Fit For Purpose (Neville)
There indeed is music to accompany proper drinking as there is music for a...
October 10th, 2024 04:52 - Time and Dirt (Thomas W Case)
Very visceral and bare-all in its poetic erudition. Indeed, time and dirt....
October 9th, 2024 05:01 - Tears of night (Sorenbarrett)
We’ve had a couple of late afternoons with ‘storm cells’ that caused...
October 9th, 2024 04:58 - Stuck in Zagreb .. & A Few Notes to Self (Neville)
Back to back - olives and purpose... there is yet hope still!
October 9th, 2024 03:48 - Time To Grieve (Orchidee)
Grieving is an essential life \'skill\' that we need to be trained in and...
October 9th, 2024 03:45 - Just As Sunsets (Neville)
Our imagination brings a spark, united vision fuels passion… sunsets are...
October 8th, 2024 07:00 - A leaf (Sorenbarrett)
The cadence and forward movement of this poem brings us along a journey,...
October 8th, 2024 06:49 - Still I Stand (Daniel Ryan Cotler)
Welcome to mps!
October 7th, 2024 00:22 - Piled logs (Sorenbarrett)
Solid and strong, Soren! Innate indelible beauty in pristine lines. So...
October 6th, 2024 23:09 - Masters of the universe? (Sorenbarrett)
Boneless fish would look like jellyfish minus the jelly and sea cucumbers...
October 6th, 2024 22:55 - Dust of a dream (Sorenbarrett)
Mighty images, familiar but filled with image and meaning. Resonates with...
October 6th, 2024 18:03 - A Matter of Faith (Orchidee)
Been mulling over of recent times about sacrifice, suffering and loss....
October 3rd, 2024 18:49 - ()
Found myself back in Dante’s nightmarish tableau. Delicious!
September 30th, 2024 03:47 - ()
Let all them splintered shadows brighten each and every succeeding day!
September 29th, 2024 18:13 - We All Fall Short (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
So have we all, a same boat situation that most would benefit from...
September 29th, 2024 17:46 - A warm meal (Sorenbarrett)
Makes one thing where we have arrived at that for some sustenance is...
September 29th, 2024 17:44 - What is man (2781)
….that You are mindful of him?
September 29th, 2024 17:41 - Shadow\'s reflection (Sorenbarrett)
What remains clings for but a flash! That is quite a formidable conclusion...
August 18th, 2024 20:34 - Slayer (2781)
Only too glad for human wisdom, strength, ingenuity can be such a let...
February 18th, 2024 06:37 - A Million Miles Apart (Neville)
Some interactions we have do have this result and effect. I for one feel...
February 18th, 2024 06:36 - Discarded (Sorenbarrett)
Sometimes we can feel like a discarded shoe. I may be taking the metaphor...
February 18th, 2024 06:34 - Paddy McGee (Teddy.15)
Lovely, lively, fun read! Thanks for featuring this on your ‘page!’
February 18th, 2024 06:33 - 21 Again - Ta-Dah! (Orchidee)
Three! Millions of threes… we’re the same age I see: 21 again! Happy...
February 18th, 2024 06:32 - A white crow on black snow (Sorenbarrett)
A white crow in white snow ❄️ like coal lump eyes would be the only...
February 14th, 2024 05:59 - Valentine (2781)
Toadie off the roadie
Or flat as a waffle you be.
February 14th, 2024 03:13 - No Comment (Neville)
Recognition recognized and passed onward.
February 14th, 2024 03:11 - You know Val? (Orchidee)
It’s that person and that day and that all encompassing emotion!
February 14th, 2024 03:10 - Prevarication (Sorenbarrett)
Delving into the depths in its brevity. These lines possess and regenerate...
February 13th, 2024 05:12
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