Comments on community poems by arqios

• an orchard’s lament (Arqios) The usual 2/3 with eyes open wide and not much else…
  July 15th, 2025 06:42
• I Met a Man Whose Eyes Were Like the Sea (Samuel Maximilian) I love how this poem shows memory’s magic; turning plain blue eyes into...
  July 14th, 2025 23:41
• Both, and Neither (Mottakeenur Rehman) This tender ode feels like a heartfelt conversation with the weather; an...
  July 14th, 2025 22:24
• Can we talk (Tony36) That has brought to words what I have had experienced and felt. Good one...
  July 14th, 2025 22:12
• The Storm (Tristan Robert Lange) The song that goes: \"should I stay or should I go...\" is playing in my...
  July 14th, 2025 21:51
• Pretense, Eh? Go Figure (Cheeky Missy) Oh wow, cats on the bed... I wondered if I had already posted the...
  July 14th, 2025 21:30
• sun fun (Jim56) Fun in the sun was always the happiest and at times the scariest of times....
  July 14th, 2025 21:24
• The Other Woman (Kurt Philip Behm) Especially tragic when there is that other woman up the family tree! Hits...
  July 14th, 2025 12:52
• Crazy sonnet (Sorenbarrett) Too wild to be untrue, it’s elements a poem would not subdue but made to...
  July 14th, 2025 12:49
• The Last Slice (Aman 12) Welcome to MPS, Aman🙏🏻🕊
  July 14th, 2025 12:40
• Happy Birthday Dave. (Goldfinch60) Love doesn’t grow old but expand both roots and branches, beautiful!
  July 14th, 2025 12:39
• Over What Hill? (Tristan Robert Lange) We never said so ourselves but Peter Pan was every bit as cool as Peter...
  July 14th, 2025 12:35
• Based on Anton Chekhov\'s The House with the Mezzanine (Ksey_Gan) Been meaning to brush up on dear Anton but found my way to this beaute...
  July 14th, 2025 12:19
• Bound Beyond Time (Jainesh.D) It’s the building of worlds that transpire! 🙌 yes! 🙏🏻🕊
  July 14th, 2025 12:07
• “flight from self” (Arqios) Bleaker than dismal… but not unexpected
  July 14th, 2025 12:00
• “flight from self” (Arqios) Just hoping the extended version does not affect the enjoyment and...
  July 14th, 2025 06:20
• from the Archives of the Sunbeam (Arqios) Of the two versions, which is your preference?
  July 13th, 2025 08:28
• from the Archives of the Sunbeam (Arqios) Thanks for the Fave @Tristan, a lone light in dark beginnings, but still a...
  July 13th, 2025 08:25
• from the Archives of the Sunbeam (Arqios) Agreed. A day of rest and relaxation!
  July 13th, 2025 07:27
• Wise Man Say (20). (Poetic Licence) Glass slippers and glass hearts... and glass spectacles for those visually...
  July 13th, 2025 06:11
• The Queen of Dunes (Tony Grannell) Your poem is a rich, sensory journey; woven with romance, mystery, and...
  July 13th, 2025 06:10
• Oracle (Doggerel Dave) It\'s a very human longing, and an important one. Knowing who\'s one the...
  July 13th, 2025 05:39
• To Poetry (Samuel Maximilian) Welcome to MPS🕊️🙏🏻
  July 12th, 2025 22:35
• crossings (Arqios) Thanks for the Fave @Friendship 🕊🙏🏻
  July 12th, 2025 08:41
• The Catch (Tristan Robert Lange) Pocono sounds better in than Kokomo (sp.?)
  July 12th, 2025 07:58
• Father Time Is Undefeated. (Goldfinch60) Just as well since Time is indefatigable 🕊🙏🏻
  July 12th, 2025 07:09
• I never knew.... (Orchidee) And it’s still such a good write, O🙏🏻🕊
  July 12th, 2025 07:06
• Roasted Turkey. (Poetic Licence) Nice double entendre! Much enjoyed 🕊🙏🏻
  July 12th, 2025 07:05
• cancer evil (Jim56) Painfully relatable as that dread evil runs in our family’s genetic...
  July 12th, 2025 07:04
• Love yourself, (Friendship) A poem to run to when the world isn’t as it could be/should be....
  July 12th, 2025 06:59
• fairy garden (Jim56) Much enjoyed, Tony🙏🏻🕊
  July 12th, 2025 06:20
• crossings (Arqios) Thanks for the Fave @sorenbarrett🙏🏻🕊
  July 12th, 2025 06:20
• An Angler\'s Morn (Tony Grannell) Most wonderful poem Tony, absolutely somewhere anyone would want to be....
  July 11th, 2025 08:32
• Sea of Dreams (Tristan Robert Lange) Your song/poem carries a haunting sense of invitation—offering both...
  July 11th, 2025 08:21
• Arm Art. (Poetic Licence) Now this is a powerful piece—raw, confessional, and tender beneath its...
  July 11th, 2025 07:49
• drive on by (Arqios) Thanks @Cheeky_Missy for the Fave 🕊️🙏🏻
  July 11th, 2025 07:26
• Not too smart (Sorenbarrett) ...now that’s a gutsy yarn, served with a healthy dose of absurd bravado...
  July 11th, 2025 07:23
• drive on by (Arqios) thanks for that Fave @sorenbarrett
  July 11th, 2025 07:14
• starfall, freefall (Arqios) Thanks for the Fave @Damaso
  July 10th, 2025 17:08
• Chilling out (2781) Seems like Cloudflare is miffed at not having a poem written about them....
  July 10th, 2025 10:07
• Access Denied. (Poetic Licence) Much of us are quite befuddled by the afterlife 🕊️🙏🏻
  July 10th, 2025 09:58
• Lost art (Sorenbarrett) The mould has me transfixed and don’t know whether that is more...
  July 10th, 2025 09:51
• Stop Judging me (Tony36) An ailment of our time and day, surely🕊️🙏🏻
  July 10th, 2025 09:48
• The Storm (Tristan Robert Lange) Wow, my 15-year old self wrote mostly like a 12-year old inebriated on...
  July 10th, 2025 09:47
• Hyenas (Damaso) The last line strikes brilliantly, Damaso; capping up the poem...
  July 10th, 2025 09:43
• Following Thoughts (MendedFences27) Good one, Phil! Elementally encompassing.... love is their sum and more...
  July 9th, 2025 09:52
• nev (Arqios) thanks for the Fave @sorenbarrett and @Cheeky_Missy
  July 9th, 2025 09:30
• Between the Lines (Tristan Robert Lange) Oh dear, been there and have had that done to me in parallel forms....
  July 9th, 2025 08:46
• nev (Arqios) Was going to post this earlier but you did give us a sign, Nev. So...
  July 9th, 2025 08:41
• Some Kind of African Life (Neville) Ah, too long of a while! Good to have you back here🕊🙏🏻
  July 8th, 2025 19:09
• Cycles (Sorenbarrett) And sometimes it also seems like a journey in a spin cycle.
  July 8th, 2025 06:45
• Breath Hold (Mutley Ravishes) That is so scary and so descriptive of not only the physical perils of...
  July 8th, 2025 06:44
• vestibule (Arqios) Over half is better than dismal beginnings
  July 8th, 2025 05:47
• Doctor Doctor (2781) That punchline lands with delight: classic setup, sharp twist. \"Doctor,...
  July 7th, 2025 20:49
• At what point? (Sorenbarrett) Your poem walks bravely into the murky territory between tenderness and...
  July 7th, 2025 20:45
• The Influencer (Doggerel Dave) Me too and my poem/s on that remain unposted just in case they try...
  July 7th, 2025 05:49
• The Blank Page Is Before Me. (Goldfinch60) blank pages come and go; and there\'s more by the reams... but we shall...
  July 7th, 2025 05:40
• Butterfly. (Poetic Licence) The awesome beauty and symbolism of the butterfly, superbly...
  July 7th, 2025 05:38
• Breaking (Jennifer sanders) Welcome to MPS🕊️🙏🏻
  July 7th, 2025 05:06
• White piece of paper (Caring dove) Very interesting concept brought out in delightful verse; much enjoyed...
  July 7th, 2025 04:42
• to the forgotten poet (Arqios) 1/3 is minuscule in comparison. That\'s the way things are these days...
  July 7th, 2025 04:31
• to the forgotten poet (Arqios) Thanks @Soren for the Fave.
  July 7th, 2025 04:31
• Home Again (Bella Shepard) Welcome home! 🙏🏻🕊️
  July 6th, 2025 09:07
• Oh pretty wild flowers (Stephen Maibam) Welcome to MPS🕊️🙏🏻
  July 6th, 2025 08:33
• My Religion (Tristan Robert Lange) This poem can be read as a tender declaration: simple, steady, and quietly...
  July 6th, 2025 08:03
• Myths of Madness (MendedFences27) Phil, this poem charges through history, myth, and media with the force of...
  July 6th, 2025 06:26
• feasting you (Arqios) Originally written and posted with its first two stanzas. Thanks for your...
  July 6th, 2025 05:16
• Can ye not..... (Orchidee) Some do enjoy being shown the garden or merely to be taken through the...
  July 6th, 2025 03:03
• part savage, part human (Arqios) Thanks @Tristan for the Fave, first one today 🙏🏻🕊️
  July 5th, 2025 08:56
• Oh, Valiant Brigade  (Mottakeenur Rehman) Reading like a war hymn for the soul; stirring, defiant, and...
  July 5th, 2025 07:31
• Icelandic song of love (Cellinic) Here we are met with a sweeping, myth-laced hymn to Iceland,;a land where...
  July 5th, 2025 07:29
• What were they thinking? (Sorenbarrett) This poem plays with the irony and sting of names, where humour barely...
  July 5th, 2025 07:27
• Gaza (Help). (Poetic Licence) Each generation has its burden and its scars, for those that straddle the...
  July 5th, 2025 07:25
• Forward With Joy. (Goldfinch60) My mum\'s favourite album! Letting go and when and what to hold on to,...
  July 5th, 2025 07:24
• Free (2781) Your poem walks the tightrope between spiritual yearning and everyday...
  July 5th, 2025 07:20
• The Usual Please (Kevin Hulme) Indeed! That reputation goes before him🕊️🙏🏻
  July 5th, 2025 07:18
• It\'s Over There (Thomas W Case) Good write, Thomas🙏🏻🕊️
  July 5th, 2025 07:17
• part savage, part human (Arqios) The silent majority persists even into the latest century, mid-decade...
  July 5th, 2025 07:14
• Excremental (Doggerel Dave) Paddling through the filth we to navigate through to get to the other side...
  July 4th, 2025 21:50
• time\'s door (Arqios) Thanks for the Fave @Damaso
  July 4th, 2025 09:34
• time\'s door (Arqios) Thanks for the Fave @Poetic Licence
  July 4th, 2025 08:17
• time\'s door (Arqios) Thanks for the Fave @sorenbarrett
  July 4th, 2025 07:23
• time\'s door (Arqios) May this read feel like the hush before a revelation that may never...
  July 4th, 2025 07:02
• time\'s door (Arqios) Oh nice, first Fave of the day, thanks Friendship. 🙏🏻🕊️
  July 4th, 2025 06:56
• Redux - Child Care 14/5/25 (Doggerel Dave) Wow, a biting critique of modern working life and the childcare system...
  July 4th, 2025 06:40
• Curious Hank (Kevin Hulme) Such a witty limerick about an eccentric man whose miracle plant lotion...
  July 4th, 2025 06:38
• And The Choir Sang. (Goldfinch60) A celebration of the pure joy in communal music-making. It captures how...
  July 4th, 2025 06:31
• Fondly Remembered. (Poetic Licence) Reading this feels like an embrace; a gentle meditation on time, memory,...
  July 4th, 2025 06:29
• The Warrior’s Light  (Mottakeenur Rehman) Your noble poem is a rallying cry to inner strength and self-reliance. It...
  July 4th, 2025 06:27
• Turn out the lights (Sorenbarrett) “Turn out the lights” feels like a challenge to how we define...
  July 4th, 2025 06:25
• Unkown (Detlev) Welcome to MPS🕊️🙏🏻
  July 4th, 2025 06:22
• Ouroboros (Erendis) A very interesting poem that explores the idea that everything contains...
  July 4th, 2025 06:09
• closed windows (Arqios) Thanks for the Fave my fab friend @Tristan
  July 3rd, 2025 20:21
• baker’s gift (Arqios) Thanks for the Fave @Damaso
  July 3rd, 2025 20:17
• closed windows (Arqios) ...dismal in the absence of what’s meant to be present
  July 3rd, 2025 17:26
• The Cycle of a Dark Seed (Tristan Robert Lange) This poem strikes like a tempest, capturing the raw, untamed turbulence of...
  July 3rd, 2025 17:23
• I Stand (Tony36) So relatable Tony and empowering as well. 🕊🙏🏻
  July 3rd, 2025 17:19
• Hello or Goodbye. (Poetic Licence) Loving the rhyming and tempo🕊🙏🏻
  July 3rd, 2025 17:19
• For My Mary. (Goldfinch60) Beautiful words and sentiment, Andy🕊🙏🏻
  July 3rd, 2025 17:18
• Earth Shaking (Mutley Ravishes) Superbly put Mutley🕊🙏🏻
  July 3rd, 2025 17:17