Comments on community poems by arqios

• Effort to Sound Effortless (Version 2) (FallingAwake2) Most definitely. Brevity either works or requires more telling/showing. It...
  May 6th, 2026 20:33
• Pools (Sorenbarrett) Brings me memories of that type of silt that is light and fluffy which...
  May 6th, 2026 20:31
• Garden of Words (Ghoast) I remember that anime, school teacher and student, I think it was.
  May 6th, 2026 14:42
• The Cat Woman (Paul Bell) Oh my. Too strange to be fiction 🕊️🙏🏻🤩
  May 6th, 2026 06:42
• Red Star Sunblock Cream (Mutley Ravishes) arggh... there ye be, Mutley! Nothing dust-y about this at all. An...
  May 5th, 2026 19:13
• My Tender Feral Beast (Thomas W Case) What is it that they say about naming the beast, feral or otherwise...? A...
  May 5th, 2026 19:11
• Inkadelic element (Poetic Dan) An excellent journey with so great a promising destination 🕊️🙏
  May 5th, 2026 19:07
• The Lost Soul in the Still Silence (Salvia.S) So good when we realise that the heart can be found! 🕊️🙏
  May 5th, 2026 19:06
• Goodbye To Love (Kurt Philip Behm) The elusive yet sought after. Rousing read. 🕊️🙏
  May 5th, 2026 19:04
• A hand full and an eight second ride (Sorenbarrett) One of many, a growing breed of veritable bulls. Perhaps they need to...
  May 5th, 2026 19:03
• Mavericks Awaken (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) A real awakening keeps the restrainer from restraint. Patience runs thin...
  May 5th, 2026 19:01
• The ghost that saves. (David Wakeling) Albino panther, that\'s a spanner in the works! Locked in the beguiling...
  May 5th, 2026 19:00
• learning to linger (Tristan Robert Lange) Need those too. That’s so true. 🙏🏻🕊️💪🏻
  May 5th, 2026 18:12
• ETERNAL WINGS (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Epic imagery, Norman 🙏🏻🕊️
  May 5th, 2026 06:05
• A Heart\'s Beat (Katie B.) A sad and traumatic interlude which was someone else’s curtain call....
  May 5th, 2026 06:02
• They love to judge you. (Friendship) That’s what mom used to say to us that we can’t appear to be soft on...
  May 5th, 2026 05:59
• The plot (2781) That is where the best answers come, in the state of pure joy...
  May 5th, 2026 04:35
• the interruption of decay (Tristan Robert Lange) Hurray, I read it like the legend below, on the first go as well! Very...
  May 4th, 2026 18:28
• A MYSTICAL BREEZE (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) There is a transporting inspiration beyond ordinary experience into a...
  May 4th, 2026 18:26
• The Oasis. (Goldfinch60) A lived life always fills pages; good word Andy 🕊️🙏
  May 4th, 2026 18:16
• I don\'t know (Cerise456) Indeed, life should be lived so our leaving is unregretted and...
  May 4th, 2026 18:15
• Seaworthy (Katie B.) Striking visuals, Katie B🕊️🙏🏻
  May 4th, 2026 08:31
• When you have nothing left, they\'re done with you. (Friendship) Good write dear Friendship 🕊️🙏🏻
  May 4th, 2026 08:30
• After the fact (Sorenbarrett) The unknotting seems a Gordian dilemma, keep the Damocles sword away and...
  May 4th, 2026 07:22
• Let the Heart Heal What It Feels (Salvia.S) Very important 🙏🏻🕊️
  May 4th, 2026 05:54
• Goosefire Fortitude (Tristan Robert Lange) Beats me how manipulation and control are religious go tos and autopilot...
  May 3rd, 2026 07:10
• DISTANT WHISPER (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Distance and echo and trap all in one poem! Amazing...
  May 3rd, 2026 07:09
• Sometimes I hate myself (Demar Desu) We all do! And it is so freeing not that I myself have been totally freed...
  May 3rd, 2026 07:06
• They labeled me inappropriate! Then made me out to be the Bitchy-witch. (Friendship) Exciting read here, Friendship 🕊️🙏🏻
  May 3rd, 2026 07:05
• May (Katie B.) A wonderful May blessing🕊️🙏🏻🤩
  May 3rd, 2026 07:04
• Gone (Sorenbarrett) There is an immediate benefit from escaping one’s past and inner...
  May 3rd, 2026 06:13
• Faith (David Wakeling) At first; it felt like it was about the he rapture but this is close...
  May 3rd, 2026 01:07
• Poetry\'s Children (Kevin Hulme) Hybrid poem- magnificent! 🕊️🙏
  May 2nd, 2026 21:30
• writing on sand (Arqios) Thanks for the Fave @RSM0812
  May 2nd, 2026 21:26
• Springboard (Mutley Ravishes) And rise from there 🕊️🙏
  May 2nd, 2026 21:25
• misfit (Tristan Robert Lange) This poem appears to revolve around identity and its being a fluid...
  May 2nd, 2026 20:44
• I’m tired, Mama (Friendship) Good write, Friendship 🕊️🙏
  May 2nd, 2026 08:03
• The Guillotine Must Fall. (David Wakeling) Emma would\'ve been twice depressed. Couldn\'t help thinking how what he...
  May 2nd, 2026 07:59
• All I can Say Is.... (Goldfinch60) a lovely love you two have... loverly... 🕊️🙏
  May 2nd, 2026 07:56
• THE LONESOME DREAM (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Railroad weed stood out to me, like those dandelions that grow through the...
  May 2nd, 2026 07:55
• God you only gave me ten (or I\'ll never do that again) (Sorenbarrett) A world like that is entirely possible. But who shall police and enforce...
  May 2nd, 2026 07:53
• Dressed with Might (Katie B.) Now that rings of truth. Perhaps Orchidee could put this to a hymn. Have a...
  May 2nd, 2026 07:51
• Letters (Paul Bell) Very curious and had some experience with such a cathartic exchange that...
  May 2nd, 2026 07:49
• Treading Water (Kevin Hulme) Of all water skills, treading was the most dreaded. Good stuff...
  May 1st, 2026 20:27
• writing on sand (Arqios) A poorly opener for the first of the month- pinch and a punch 🥊
  May 1st, 2026 18:22
• Sunset by the sea (NafisaSB) There is such an inherent potential for peace in sunsets🕊️🙏🏻...
  May 1st, 2026 18:21
• Now lookie here... (Orchidee) Home and Away🕊️🙏🏻🤩
  May 1st, 2026 18:20
• Salute (David Wakeling) Reminded me of Teddy Roosevelt charging up that hill (in Cuba, if memory...
  May 1st, 2026 18:19
• ALONE (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) They do slip away, and ever so gradually as well🙏🏻🕊️
  May 1st, 2026 18:17
• Ashes (Katie B.) Good write, Katie B🕊️🙏🏻
  May 1st, 2026 18:15
• Prophesy (2781) And many have gone silent but not as many as those whose tongues have...
  May 1st, 2026 18:14
• Addict to Ashes (Scraps~n~Scribbles) It’s solid read from beginning to end and even the other way around! A...
  May 1st, 2026 18:12
• Glugonomics (Tristan Robert Lange) Such a fun read, dear friend 🕊️🙏🤩
  May 1st, 2026 07:45
• Please stop! (Friendship) A tough deal and yet so real to what we face on a daily...
  May 1st, 2026 06:52
• writing on sand (Arqios) Thanks for that Fave, Friendship. And so early too🙏🕊️
  May 1st, 2026 05:56
• Hands (2781) Keeps us out of mischief, less idle hands for the devil\'s workshop!...
  April 30th, 2026 20:36
• A poem of epic length (Orchidee) Haha! Epic! Indeed! The presentation deserves a Fave for creativity, mate...
  April 30th, 2026 20:34
• Spring (Kevin Hulme) And let\'s carry on! Need this right now as autumn tightens its grip here...
  April 30th, 2026 20:33
• Health In Life. (Goldfinch60) Enjoy to enjoy life, enjoyed poem, Andy 🕊️🤩🙏
  April 30th, 2026 07:45
• Experience (Scraps~n~Scribbles) That last line is outstanding! 🤩🕊️🙏 Welcome to MPS!
  April 30th, 2026 07:23
• For Crying Out Loud (David Wakeling) Now that was intense and moving amigo🙏🏻🕊️
  April 30th, 2026 06:44
• Writing Is So Much Fun (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Well said, Shaun! Well said 🙏🏻🕊️
  April 30th, 2026 06:40
• The End (Sorenbarrett) Sometimes where it lands is where it ends🙏🏻🕊️
  April 30th, 2026 06:39
• My Canvas. (Friendship) This is wonderful, Friendship 🙏🏻🕊️
  April 30th, 2026 06:36
• Down this dark street. (David Wakeling) Powerful write amigo 🙏🏻🕊️
  April 29th, 2026 23:41
• When the mind is enhanced,it create a beautiful grome.🌹 (Friendship) A very fun read, Friendship🕊️🙏
  April 29th, 2026 21:58
• Bliss\' home (Sorenbarrett) Dare we prick our ears one more time to catch the siren\'s call! Excellent...
  April 29th, 2026 19:39
• On a Road to Knossos (Neville) Even the bare beauty would transport the seeing eye! Goos show,...
  April 29th, 2026 19:37
• rest in peace to my cat (Demar Desu) ...sympathies, dear Demar. brings back memories of lost felines over the...
  April 29th, 2026 19:35
• with pulp please (Demar Desu) Very delectable! 🕊️🙏
  April 29th, 2026 07:27
• King of the world (Sorenbarrett) Love that thrown sounds like throne. 🕊️🙏🤩
  April 28th, 2026 19:03
• One Days (Mutley Ravishes) Solid 🪨🕊️🙏
  April 28th, 2026 19:02
• In the End (Katie B.) A definite Fave. Most enjoyable, Katie B. 🕊️🙏
  April 28th, 2026 18:50
• Back Home (Thomas W Case) ...the shape of this poem is a travel companion both to the mind and the...
  April 28th, 2026 17:35
• August goes to the garden (David Wakeling) Who were we before and who were we after, younglings in a larger arena?...
  April 27th, 2026 17:07
• 3:17am (RCx_Vortex) I’ve got two water bottles by my bedside, lol and still get up and pour...
  April 27th, 2026 02:21
• Better Burned (Tristan Robert Lange) A rapidly forming litany of scorched Sundays! Looking forward to the...
  April 26th, 2026 19:48
• Another Fine Mess (Kevin Hulme) A centrifugal trajectory of effluent projectiles! Not to take lightly the...
  April 26th, 2026 19:35
• Dry season (Japetus) Sun, soul, rain - all that’s needed is the will and the grain 🌱...
  April 26th, 2026 17:34
• Hardening (Sorenbarrett) The metaphor of witness and the passing of time bring so much meaning to...
  April 26th, 2026 06:17
• HOUSE (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Yes, quite so. The old family house stood for generations and spoke even...
  April 26th, 2026 06:15
• Calming Rest (RSM0812) Good write! 🕊️🙏
  April 26th, 2026 06:14
• Tiny Blue Moments (Neville) Something shared, breathed in and threaded through so beautifully...
  April 26th, 2026 06:11
• Wisdom (Katie B.) It\'s always been a prayer of mine to earn those silvery wisps of hair...
  April 26th, 2026 05:56
• SECLUSION (David Wakeling) Wow, out of sync and kept apart by a plethora of factors. That is the...
  April 26th, 2026 05:46
• Pervy Jackson and the Kingdom of the Crystal Ego (Tristan Robert Lange) Editorial caricaturing is alive and well! Very crispy, Tittu 🕊️🙏
  April 25th, 2026 22:34
• Mia tries to stop her baby Aurora from Crying. (David Wakeling) The sadness pervades the reading heart... sure there are those that have...
  April 25th, 2026 22:21
• Is this the best you got? (Sorenbarrett) Herein is a succinct encapsulation of man. 🕊️🙏
  April 25th, 2026 22:19
• The Hanging (RSM0812) Lynchings do come around in vogue 🙏🏻🕊️
  April 24th, 2026 09:43
• Witch Weaving (Tristan Robert Lange) Counterpulse; interesting!🙏🏻🕊️
  April 24th, 2026 09:40
• The imagination of a child\'s mind. (Friendship) My childhood imagination was too much to cohabit with. Probably a big...
  April 24th, 2026 08:11
• BUT QUIETLY (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) It great to be lost in certain moments 🙏🏻🕊️
  April 24th, 2026 08:03
• The Past (Paul Bell) Sometimes the past that we left piggybacks without our noticing....
  April 24th, 2026 08:02
• Thar she blows (Sorenbarrett) Something or someone, even that literal read brings all faculties to the...
  April 24th, 2026 08:01
• Ask (Katie B.) I tend to ask myself these couple of questions- is it saying what I want...
  April 24th, 2026 07:54
• So now you call me grossly insulting (Friendship) Good write, Friendship 🕊️🙏
  April 23rd, 2026 06:51
• Helios (Sorenbarrett) Breathtaking work, Soren. How did I miss this one!? Must be getting old....
  April 23rd, 2026 06:12
• I PAINTED A PICTURE (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Another favourite, Norman. I will visit the gallery in summertime, the...
  April 23rd, 2026 06:10
• The house (Sorenbarrett) Very relatable, had several days like this at different times/years. We...
  April 23rd, 2026 05:48
• Blood Taxi 2 (Mutley Ravishes) My blood pressure is well maintained by my GP. It’s hard to be excited...
  April 23rd, 2026 05:38