Comments on community poems by arqios
- Fresh First Fruits (Orchidee)
Good stuff!
October 13th, 2025 00:01 - The Shape of Why (Tristan Robert Lange)
Like a cryptic crossword, in the middle there. Excellent device...
October 12th, 2025 23:58 - S.T.I. (Andrew Deaton)
Welcome to MPS 🕊️🙏🏻
October 11th, 2025 04:47 - Bed of My Beloved (Tristan Robert Lange)
This piece is chilling and unforgettable and its refrain of “you...
October 10th, 2025 20:25 - Peace Promise (Orchidee)
Ooh! Saved by the bell 🔔 I was considering posting up a hymn or two but...
October 10th, 2025 17:00 - Near sighted (Sorenbarrett)
Reminds me of that Rupert Holmes song. But this poem is of much more depth...
October 10th, 2025 16:57 - Better Day Today. (Goldfinch60)
Here’s to many more fresh starts🕊️🙏🏻
October 10th, 2025 16:39 - Milky Way ( Fun) (Poetic Licence)
Most welcome reopening and a true experience of fun in a...
October 10th, 2025 16:38 - squoting slugs (Tristan Robert Lange)
Agree totally. It also closely mirrors not taking authority in vain....
October 7th, 2025 07:48 - Some day (Sorenbarrett)
What a powerful ending! “Toilet paper,” in contrast to the rest of the...
October 6th, 2025 19:37 - Two Sevens Today. (Goldfinch60)
Happy birthday, Andy! 🎉
October 6th, 2025 03:22 - Is It Contagious?. (Poetic Licence)
Yet whispers linger, soft as morning rain,
That kindness, once planted,...
October 5th, 2025 02:28 - Lost music of the forest (Sorenbarrett)
That has happened to me as well on occasion, Soren. 🕊️🙏🏻
October 2nd, 2025 16:02 - Playing The Clarinet. (Goldfinch60)
Nice! Remember to press record some time 👍🏻🕊️🙏🏻
October 2nd, 2025 16:00 - National Poetry Day 2025 (Tom Dylan)
A play of words will suffice, methinks🕊️🙏🏻
October 2nd, 2025 06:04 - New Pages. (Goldfinch60)
The use of repetition is movingly effective here, Andy🕊🙏🏻
October 1st, 2025 16:21 - KINTSUGI (Michael Edwards)
Just beautiful!🕊🙏🏻
October 1st, 2025 16:20 - gated folds (Arqios)
Thanks for the Fave 🤩 @Soman
October 1st, 2025 16:16 - Strange Horizon (Tristan Robert Lange)
Your poem really captures that eerie shift from the comfort of autumn...
October 1st, 2025 07:39 - Shaping (Sorenbarrett)
Good stuff here, Soren! This poem turns the act of pruning into a gentle...
October 1st, 2025 07:36 - Point Taken (Tom Dylan)
Hope your fortnight goes well, Tom. Will be here at the ‘side when you...
September 30th, 2025 18:59 - instant society (Gray0328)
No there’s a title and a poem that exceeds its expectations!
September 30th, 2025 18:57 - Indigestion (Sorenbarrett)
Powerful brevity here, dear Soren! 🙏🏻🕊️
September 30th, 2025 16:05 - Saint Sinner (Tristan Robert Lange)
Made me remember driving through and staying at the so-called “Bible...
September 30th, 2025 16:04 - Awww, no invite! (Orchidee)
Apparently your friendship status must be active to participate with...
September 28th, 2025 20:13 - The Mask (RaysThroughDarkness)
Welcome to MPS🕊️🙏
September 27th, 2025 05:53 - FIRST STEPS (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
Now here is a place where that next journey can begin successfully...
September 27th, 2025 05:16 - Nuts (Sorenbarrett)
I don’t understand it either myself, dear friend 🙏🏻🕊️
September 26th, 2025 08:04 - Coincidence. (Goldfinch60)
Amazing routine and art life! 🙏🏻🕊️
September 26th, 2025 08:02 - meningslösheter och slit (Håkan Renström)
Is this an adequate translation?
“meaninglessnesses and...
September 26th, 2025 06:20 - the fountain (Arqios)
Now 7 is a beautiful number. Just saying😂
September 26th, 2025 00:34 - meningslösheter och slit (Håkan Renström)
Welcome to MPS 🙏🕊️
September 25th, 2025 23:08 - DESTRUCTION (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
That speaks deeply and illuminates the depths.
September 25th, 2025 19:45 - On the level (2781)
This refracts the imagery into a more contemporary, layered meditation: a...
September 25th, 2025 19:39 - Where Did The Time Go? (Goldfinch60)
Time flies when you’re having good fun!
September 25th, 2025 16:38 - The Sky (Tristan Robert Lange)
The “great fireball” feels like a metaphor for ultimate annihilation,...
September 25th, 2025 16:37 - Night images (Sorenbarrett)
Your poem feels like a meditation on the strange alchemy of night; how...
September 25th, 2025 07:25 - Queen Selene (Tristan Robert Lange)
Haha, this is brilliant; men strut around bragging about “landing” on...
September 24th, 2025 06:14 - Ghosts (Sorenbarrett)
I may be misreading this, but I love the last line; about leaving no scar...
September 23rd, 2025 05:49 - Sometimes, We Slip (Thomas W Case)
Wow, what a slippery day😯
September 21st, 2025 17:45 - IN ORDER TO BE SANE (David Welch)
Welcome to MPS! 🕊️🙏
September 20th, 2025 18:24 - LIMERICKS 142, 143 & 144 (Michael Edwards)
It’s been a while, Michael! Good to see/read those limericks...
September 20th, 2025 05:09 - Jack [title] (Max Manley)
Welcome to MPS🕊️🙏🏻
September 19th, 2025 07:22 - Made of Wood (Orchidee)
Wooden? 🤗
September 18th, 2025 07:08 - Unread Poetry (Violet_Writes)
A beautiful expression Violet_Writes worded exquisitely 🙏🏻🕊️
September 17th, 2025 17:25 - \"the question\" (Arqios)
Thanks for the Fave 🤩 @Violet_Writes 🕊️🙏🏻
September 17th, 2025 16:30 - The Bristers. (Goldfinch60)
What a chance meeting!
September 17th, 2025 07:41 - Sorry, there are 6 poems (Maplespal)
That’s one way to do it! And many at the site accept it willingly enough...
September 17th, 2025 07:40 - Orchi\'s Own (Tristan Robert Lange)
So much fun 🤩
September 17th, 2025 07:38 - Coming Back To Poetry (Tom Dylan)
The images and message here are truly close to the heart! 🕊🙏🏻
September 16th, 2025 08:14 - Flowering tree (Sorenbarrett)
That’s probably why it’s arguably the best time of year🕊🙏🏻
September 16th, 2025 08:13 - INRI (Mark Barron)
Welcome to MPS 🙏🕊️
September 15th, 2025 23:59 - This\'ll Cheer Ya Up - Not! (Orchidee)
And the days are beginning to draw out down under! How strange to be...
September 15th, 2025 06:51 - More Wrong, Less Right (Dan Williams)
Hey Dan! Good to see you and your now rare posts! Don’t be a stranger,...
September 15th, 2025 06:07 - Hi & Bye (Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice)
Feeling these lines and verse Fina🕊️🙏🏻
September 15th, 2025 06:04 - Do not give advice.. (NafisaSB)
Unsolicited advice tends to backfire not so much for the volatility of the...
September 15th, 2025 06:04 - Home Again. (Goldfinch60)
Welcome home and thanks for generously sharing with us of your...
September 15th, 2025 06:02 - Fallen honor (Sorenbarrett)
Still searching for the best poop cleaner or an effective poop umbrella!...
September 15th, 2025 06:01 - the ember (Jasper)
Welcome to MPS, Jasper🕊️🙏🏻
September 15th, 2025 01:31 - The Games Some People Play… (Doggerel Dave)
No it isn’t but there you go. Very relatable and resonates clearly....
September 14th, 2025 16:06 - Lost paper thoughts (Sorenbarrett)
Poems and persons alike it appears🕊️🙏🏻
September 14th, 2025 15:58 - Hate\'s Finality (Tristan Robert Lange)
This acrostic lands like a clenched jaw; brief, sharp, and unwilling to...
September 14th, 2025 05:40 - Exsanguination Nation (Tristan Robert Lange)
This poem is a relentless, looping meditation on mortality, where each...
September 14th, 2025 05:33 - Moulding Life. (Goldfinch60)
So much change and so much possibilities in life, Andy! 🕊️🙏🏻
September 13th, 2025 14:18 - Haikus (Priya Tomar)
Beautiful haiku, Priya🕊️🙏🏻
September 13th, 2025 14:16 - Looking Out To Sea. (Goldfinch60)
Beautiful!🕊️🙏🏻
September 12th, 2025 06:57 - Angels (Fred1794)
Welcome to MPS, Fred 🕊️🙏
September 12th, 2025 05:43 - In This Land (Tristan Robert Lange)
I must have jumped the gun on #tbt (throwback Thursday) with posting up...
September 11th, 2025 18:51 - the shapeshifter (Cody James)
Welcome to MPS 🙏🕊️
September 10th, 2025 07:11 - How is it....? (Orchidee)
So blessed! 🕊️🙏🏻
September 9th, 2025 15:56 - week in a wink (Arqios)
Thanks for the Fave 🤩 @Jainesh D. 🕊️🙏🏻
September 9th, 2025 15:55 - The Usurper\'s Call (Tristan Robert Lange)
Nice one! With Grace as a horse, how would we handle her and for how long?...
September 8th, 2025 07:29 - No worries (Sorenbarrett)
The safe lizards are the ones with the longest lives and tails… they...
September 8th, 2025 05:58 - Dawns Moon. (Goldfinch60)
Quite the classic there in my childhood home! The moon is almost full here...
September 8th, 2025 05:56 - Child, ONE CHILD (Arqios)
Thanks for the Fave 🤩@C.W.Bleu much appreciated 🕊️🙏🏻
September 8th, 2025 05:54 - Unlearning Touch (Nami)
Deeply moving!
September 7th, 2025 23:15 - Watch (2781)
...watch prayerfully, and see!
September 7th, 2025 17:37 - Don\'t Look Down (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
+1! do I ever!
September 7th, 2025 17:36 - And…. (Doggerel Dave)
It\'s a literary sleight of hand should we choose it to be... clever but...
September 7th, 2025 17:35 - Fear of Word Blindness (Neville)
...\"ivorine,\" such an excellent word, Nev! I remember as a preschoooler...
September 7th, 2025 17:33 - Painting Music (Goldfinch60)
Now that is perfection!
September 7th, 2025 17:27 - On life (NafisaSB)
In life\'s many phases we
learn, grow, lose, find.
September 7th, 2025 17:26 - This also has to stop (Orchidee)
Round and round it goes
and where it stops
nobody knows!
September 7th, 2025 17:22 - Breathe (Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice)
ah.... breathe!
September 7th, 2025 17:20 - The Tangerine Sky (Thomas W Case)
Sublime!
September 7th, 2025 17:16 - Night spells (Sorenbarrett)
Allied and almost mirrored experiences or in the least a variant in...
September 7th, 2025 17:14 - Original Sin (Tristan Robert Lange)
\"enkindled\" now there is a word and a half! An excellent start to the...
September 7th, 2025 17:12 - The Sparsity of Sand (Tristan Robert Lange)
I hear the stillness between your lines,
where even the wind forgets its...
September 7th, 2025 01:39 - And…. (Doggerel Dave)
For now we be moved!
September 6th, 2025 21:50 - an ill-fitting halo (Arqios)
Thanks for the Fave 🤩 @Tittu @Soren
September 6th, 2025 15:33 - “games we play” (Arqios)
Thanks for the Fave @C.W. Bleu 🤩🙏🏻🕊️
September 6th, 2025 06:18 - Today Is The Future (Israel McCorkle)
Here\'s to being unstoppable! 🙏🏻🕊️
September 6th, 2025 06:17 - Why? (Sorenbarrett)
We are a strange society; vulgar displays can oftentimes be stomached and...
September 6th, 2025 06:10 - an ill-fitting halo (Arqios)
Now here\'s a meditation on the weight and wobble of what we carry above...
September 6th, 2025 06:07 - Falling, Failing (Tristan Robert Lange)
Hearing “Falling, Failing” as a song changes the feel completely....
September 5th, 2025 23:58 - Search (Igor Vykhovanets)
welcome to MPS 🕊️🙏🏻
September 5th, 2025 07:06 - All the Nice Girls... (Kevin Hulme)
Get that - some pseudonym cover for such spoutings. But I surmise this is...
September 4th, 2025 19:02 - Metaphor Master (Doggerel Dave)
Not very well, I suspect. Like many gamers and their real offline lives....
September 4th, 2025 19:01 - Feathered Stone (Thomas W Case)
Solid.
September 4th, 2025 18:59 - To Death I Am Bound (Tristan Robert Lange)
Sounds like many a day that I have lived through, barely getting by! That...
September 4th, 2025 18:58
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