Comments on community poems by arqios

• Holy People\'s Town (Tristan Robert Lange) Certainly not on my bucket 🪣 list 📝 to visit! So sorry you had to...
  August 30th, 2025 08:01
• the dam is breached (Arqios) Thanks for the Fave @CM 🕊️🙏🏻
  August 30th, 2025 05:51
• dogfight interlude (Arqios) That’s most likely a failure to launch 🚀
  August 30th, 2025 00:53
• Telly Detectives (Kevin Hulme) A cheeky nod to 1970s TV nostalgia, this light‑footed rhyme swaps...
  August 30th, 2025 00:50
• A BARE LIGHT BULB (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) This one drapes its imagery in loneliness and unease, moving through a...
  August 29th, 2025 19:28
• Live For Today Again. (Goldfinch60) This short, reflective poem distills a simple but powerful truth: the only...
  August 29th, 2025 19:27
• Let\'s Discuss My Awakeness Later (Cheeky Missy) Lets us feel the drifts between drowsy awakenings, small domestic rituals,...
  August 29th, 2025 19:24
• Words of destiny. (Friendship) The poem \"Remember\" reflects on a once-deep friendship forged through...
  August 29th, 2025 19:20
• Death Pact (Tristan Robert Lange) ...superb haunting skills and performance
  August 29th, 2025 19:14
• Rose (Teddy.15) Too short, can\'t begin to count the number of roses we\'ve enjoyed and...
  August 29th, 2025 19:12
• Friendly Response…. (Doggerel Dave) There are many games and far too many players... the world is in our...
  August 29th, 2025 19:11
• Beauty and thorns (Sorenbarrett) 🌹 Passion isn’t always love. Sometimes we grab the rose...
  August 29th, 2025 05:38
• Our Life. (Goldfinch60) A worthy admonition!
  August 28th, 2025 08:58
• The Window (Tristan Robert Lange) That has brought me back to certain recurring dreams that I thought had...
  August 28th, 2025 08:57
• Conflict (Damaso) Nice! Bringing to life that story in a powerful poem🕊️🙏🏻
  August 28th, 2025 08:51
• 28 August 2025 (Arqios) It’s less about counting days than letting days leave their mark,...
  August 28th, 2025 06:35
• Point of view (Jerry Reynolds) Splendid haiku, Jerry 🙏🏻🕊️
  August 26th, 2025 05:39
• Hitchhikers Guide. (Goldfinch60) It’s got that cheeky twist ending that completely reframes the ride you...
  August 26th, 2025 03:46
• gated folds (Arqios) These gated folds attempts to catch that fragile hour before movement;...
  August 26th, 2025 03:40
• hope (Jim56) I really did need to read this. Thanks for posting it. Good timing,...
  August 25th, 2025 06:11
• Pie (John Prophet) This has the feel of a creation myth told in the language of mathematics...
  August 25th, 2025 05:50
• Can Nature Survive. (Poetic Licence) Roots clutch the soil beneath a sky turned pale, storms carve the hills...
  August 25th, 2025 05:41
• Blood and bone (Sorenbarrett) Your poem reads like an oral epic rendered in bush‑ballad rhythm; a...
  August 25th, 2025 05:37
• Disillusioned (NafisaSB) Dear Safina, this poem carries with it the precision of a fable: short,...
  August 25th, 2025 05:34
• My Hungry Body Satisfied. (Goldfinch60) This poem unfolds like a love letter to music itself: sensual, devotional,...
  August 25th, 2025 05:32
• MANS LAST DAY (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Hey Norman, this poem reads like a stark, cinematic prophecy; the kind of...
  August 25th, 2025 05:30
• Portrait of Dora Lyse (Kevin Hulme) There’s a wry, noir‑tinged humour in this little portrait: the glamour...
  August 25th, 2025 05:27
• A Picture In My Mind (David Hopkins) Welcome to MPS, David 🕊️🙏🏻
  August 25th, 2025 05:25
• a clockwork orangerie (Arqios) Come and linger in its glass corridors longer than expected. Let the air...
  August 25th, 2025 05:11
• Summer Fun (Jerry Reynolds) They can’t help themselves🌞🌻🍉😎
  August 24th, 2025 07:49
• \"the question\" (Arqios) Thanks for the Fave 🤩 @Priya Tomar🕊️🙏🏻
  August 24th, 2025 07:48
• \"the question\" (Arqios) Thanks for the Fave @sorenbarrett🤩🕊️🙏🏻
  August 24th, 2025 05:12
• \"the question\" (Arqios) Thanks for the Fave @Salvia🤩🙏🏻🕊️
  August 24th, 2025 05:03
• \"the question\" (Arqios) There’s a certain kind of writing that isn’t about endings at all, but...
  August 24th, 2025 04:37
• Smashed Ice Cream Bars and Microwaved Meals (Cheeky Missy) Across this little odyssey of sonnets, daily life weaves itself from small...
  August 23rd, 2025 18:11
• Allures in Illusions (Salvia.S 🌹) A poem so delicate but edged: a warning distilled into three quick...
  August 23rd, 2025 18:09
• Mirrored pool of Hermes (Sorenbarrett) This ripples with alchemy; lightning etching mortal traces, language...
  August 23rd, 2025 18:06
• THE OLDEST FLAME (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) For me \"The oldest flame\" evokes a lone, golden‑crowned fire standing...
  August 23rd, 2025 18:04
• Monsoon musings (Priya Tomar) These monsoon musings unfurl like the first warm rain after a long,...
  August 23rd, 2025 18:02
• Porlock (Neville) I like the salt‑soft nostalgia in Porlock, like a postcard you can smell...
  August 23rd, 2025 17:59
• Stepping Stones Tanka. (Goldfinch60) There’s a quiet resolve in this tanka, Andy; the kind that doesn’t...
  August 23rd, 2025 17:57
• the damnedest destinations (Tristan Robert Lange) This poem snaps and spirals like a gust that can’t decide whether to...
  August 23rd, 2025 17:55
• When I Look At You (Louiray) Welcome to MPS, louiray 🕊️🙏🏻
  August 23rd, 2025 17:52
• Midnight Bleu ():<) Welcome to MPS, C.W.🙏🏻🕊
  August 23rd, 2025 16:17
• Change (Jerry Reynolds) Black moon tonight! The sky is so dark. 🙏🏻🕊
  August 23rd, 2025 07:50
• public square, Grote Markt Bruxelles (Arqios) It’s a bit on the vague surrealistic side but glad you’ve taken it...
  August 23rd, 2025 07:49
• The shadows of tyrant (Laurence Thompson) Welcome to MPS Laurence 🕊️🙏🏻
  August 22nd, 2025 18:17
• Whats for dinner (Jerry Reynolds) Everyone is someone else’s dinner, so it appears!
  August 22nd, 2025 08:26
• moreton mirror (Arqios) Half of none could be some in a dreamscape
  August 22nd, 2025 08:23
• moreton mirror (Arqios) Set on Brisbane’s river edge, Moreton Mirror drifts from a simple...
  August 22nd, 2025 07:02
• Traps (Sorenbarrett) Your poem coils with primal inevitability: a world where hunter and hunted...
  August 22nd, 2025 06:58
• The Day I Found Me (Teddy.15) Brings me back to my most favourite early childhood story, \"the ugly...
  August 22nd, 2025 06:53
• Priest Of Fishing. (Goldfinch60) Your poem drifts with the calm simplicity of fishing memories before...
  August 22nd, 2025 06:51
• YOU DEPARTED EAST (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Your poem captures the profound ache of betrayal, moving from the false...
  August 22nd, 2025 06:42
• Pity, Really Such A Dreadful Pity (Cheeky Missy) Steam curling from the mug Cats fed, leaves drifting gold Small griefs...
  August 21st, 2025 18:43
• Alone (Tristan Robert Lange) In the still between heartbeats A spark still glows unseen Even the...
  August 21st, 2025 18:39
• The Grave Digger (Tony Grannell) Soil swallows names Shadows remain Hands still ache From weight of
  August 21st, 2025 18:37
• Wind (Sorenbarrett) Whisper to roar Roots torn wide Her fury spent Sighs can\'t hide
  August 21st, 2025 18:37
• LITTLE PICTURES (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Ink can wound Or ink can hide Let\'s choose the page Where truth...
  August 21st, 2025 18:35
• Memories Brought Back (Goldfinch60) Sun on the green Echoes in my mind One against many And still, I...
  August 21st, 2025 18:33
• New World Slaughter (Mutley Ravishes) Steel in my stance Fire in my eyes One clean hit Your crown...
  August 21st, 2025 18:32
• Simple pleasures (Jerry Reynolds) And that whiff can extract one’s soul and sensibilities!
  August 21st, 2025 18:03
• Core (Tristan Robert Lange) The poem collapses language into feeling. Connection isn’t...
  August 20th, 2025 16:47
• we meet again, mid-sentence (Arqios) Thanks for the Fave @ Prius Tomar🕊️🙏🏻
  August 20th, 2025 06:38
• My brain is killing me. (T Merigold) Welcome to MPS🙏🏻🕊️
  August 20th, 2025 05:31
• Service Suspended. (Poetic Licence) ...here we. are waiting for a flicker of return. but health first and...
  August 19th, 2025 20:46
• Cold As Hell (Tristan Robert Lange) This poem drips with visceral intimacy and emotional precision; love not...
  August 19th, 2025 19:54
• Therapists Lament (Randy Carter) Hey Randy, welcome to MPS 🕊️🙏🏻
  August 19th, 2025 19:49
• Wordless music talks (Poetic Dan) Music without words speaks in frequencies we forget we understand; like...
  August 19th, 2025 19:25
• simple sample (Arqios) From lamplight scribbles to flickering screens, our relationship with...
  August 19th, 2025 05:18
• simple sample (Arqios) Thanks for the Fave 🤩 @Poetic Dan 🕊🙏🏻
  August 19th, 2025 05:13
• Is Poetry Salvation (Tooway) Your poem reads like a wandering hand brushing through a crowd —...
  August 18th, 2025 23:32
• Losing my mind; (ꜱʏʟᴠᴀ) Shadows creep closer with whispers they weave Tangled in threads I can...
  August 18th, 2025 22:46
• Top Drawer (Teddy.15) Got one or two myself, just like it in my abode! 🕊️🙏🏻
  August 18th, 2025 20:51
• National Bad Poetry Day (Spencer Wilhelm) I’ve looked in the mirror 🪞 far too many times over the internet...
  August 18th, 2025 20:49
• Hindsight (Keeter C) Sublime!
  August 18th, 2025 20:42
• clarity (Arqios) When sometimes it seems too little too late… haha
  August 18th, 2025 20:34
• Trapped. (Friendship) A tough one there. And the triumph of finding articulation, small...
  August 18th, 2025 20:16
• Facing Empire (Tony Grannell) To me this poem unfolds as a defiant stand that shifts into lament, with...
  August 18th, 2025 19:05
• To the Value of One (Kevin Hulme) For me, “The Value of One” is a meditation on the irreplaceable impact...
  August 18th, 2025 19:02
• clarity (Arqios) Sometimes you get the niggling feeling that welcome has been overstayed
  August 18th, 2025 18:57
• South of Me (Tristan Robert Lange) Superb poeticisation!
  August 18th, 2025 16:17
• Goodbye Terence Stamp (Randyjohnson71) Rest In Peace, Terence🙏🏻
  August 18th, 2025 16:17
• Burning Letters (Priya Tomar) Somehow brings to mind Hamelin and a sort of pied piper; surely a...
  August 18th, 2025 16:16
• It is What it is! (Friendship) True freedom, therein the spirit lifts!
  August 18th, 2025 16:15
• Scribed to my brain (Poetic Dan) A true inspiration!
  August 18th, 2025 16:15
• dreamer (Jim56) Now there’s a poem to sit with by the Fire on cold winter nights!
  August 18th, 2025 16:14
• Pretty Skies a Haiku in Flight Mode (Neville) Bird migration is both awe inspiring and reassuring, like all will be...
  August 18th, 2025 16:13
• The Long Day. (Goldfinch60) That’s always a beautiful end to a long live day!
  August 18th, 2025 16:12
• Pork Pies (Orchidee) Cabbages are a potent musical vege!
  August 18th, 2025 16:11
• Vlad (My Friend)!!. (Poetic Licence) Perhaps a reason why poets aren’t quite welcome in their time, one of...
  August 18th, 2025 16:11
• What is greatness (Sorenbarrett) That is a woeful truth indeed!
  August 18th, 2025 16:09
• clarity (Arqios) Quarterly makes for measly returns…
  August 18th, 2025 11:34
• clarity (Arqios) Thanks for the Fave 🤩@CM
  August 18th, 2025 11:33
• Stargazing (YannickM) Welcome to MPS 🕊️🙏🏻
  August 18th, 2025 07:24
• LITTLE DOGGIE (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Here is a sharp, darkly funny burst of sleepless frustration, using the...
  August 18th, 2025 05:18
• clarity (Arqios) Sometimes we don’t get rid of the questions; we just learn to live...
  August 18th, 2025 05:15
• week in a wink (Arqios) Thanks for the Fave 🤩 @Eugene S.
  August 18th, 2025 05:02
• Confusion (Dan Williams) In a world where clarity is often demanded but rarely delivered,...
  August 17th, 2025 23:38
• The Neglected. (David Wakeling) Hey there David, good to see you back🕊️🙏🏻
  August 17th, 2025 21:38