Comments on community poems by arqios

• Fresh First Fruits (Orchidee) Good stuff!
  October 13th, 2025 00:01
• The Shape of Why (Tristan Robert Lange) Like a cryptic crossword, in the middle there. Excellent device...
  October 12th, 2025 23:58
• S.T.I. (Andrew Deaton) Welcome to MPS 🕊️🙏🏻
  October 11th, 2025 04:47
• Bed of My Beloved (Tristan Robert Lange) This piece is chilling and unforgettable and its refrain of “you...
  October 10th, 2025 20:25
• Peace Promise (Orchidee) Ooh! Saved by the bell 🔔 I was considering posting up a hymn or two but...
  October 10th, 2025 17:00
• Near sighted (Sorenbarrett) Reminds me of that Rupert Holmes song. But this poem is of much more depth...
  October 10th, 2025 16:57
• Better Day Today. (Goldfinch60) Here’s to many more fresh starts🕊️🙏🏻
  October 10th, 2025 16:39
• Milky Way ( Fun) (Poetic Licence) Most welcome reopening and a true experience of fun in a...
  October 10th, 2025 16:38
• squoting slugs (Tristan Robert Lange) Agree totally. It also closely mirrors not taking authority in vain....
  October 7th, 2025 07:48
• Some day (Sorenbarrett) What a powerful ending! “Toilet paper,” in contrast to the rest of the...
  October 6th, 2025 19:37
• Two Sevens Today. (Goldfinch60) Happy birthday, Andy! 🎉
  October 6th, 2025 03:22
• Is It Contagious?. (Poetic Licence) Yet whispers linger, soft as morning rain, That kindness, once planted,...
  October 5th, 2025 02:28
• Lost music of the forest (Sorenbarrett) That has happened to me as well on occasion, Soren. 🕊️🙏🏻
  October 2nd, 2025 16:02
• Playing The Clarinet. (Goldfinch60) Nice! Remember to press record some time 👍🏻🕊️🙏🏻
  October 2nd, 2025 16:00
• National Poetry Day 2025 (Tom Dylan) A play of words will suffice, methinks🕊️🙏🏻
  October 2nd, 2025 06:04
• New Pages. (Goldfinch60) The use of repetition is movingly effective here, Andy🕊🙏🏻
  October 1st, 2025 16:21
• KINTSUGI (Michael Edwards) Just beautiful!🕊🙏🏻
  October 1st, 2025 16:20
• gated folds (Arqios) Thanks for the Fave 🤩 @Soman
  October 1st, 2025 16:16
• Strange Horizon (Tristan Robert Lange) Your poem really captures that eerie shift from the comfort of autumn...
  October 1st, 2025 07:39
• Shaping (Sorenbarrett) Good stuff here, Soren! This poem turns the act of pruning into a gentle...
  October 1st, 2025 07:36
• Point Taken (Tom Dylan) Hope your fortnight goes well, Tom. Will be here at the ‘side when you...
  September 30th, 2025 18:59
• instant society (Gray0328) No there’s a title and a poem that exceeds its expectations!
  September 30th, 2025 18:57
• Indigestion (Sorenbarrett) Powerful brevity here, dear Soren! 🙏🏻🕊️
  September 30th, 2025 16:05
• Saint Sinner (Tristan Robert Lange) Made me remember driving through and staying at the so-called “Bible...
  September 30th, 2025 16:04
• Awww, no invite! (Orchidee) Apparently your friendship status must be active to participate with...
  September 28th, 2025 20:13
• The Mask (RaysThroughDarkness) Welcome to MPS🕊️🙏
  September 27th, 2025 05:53
• FIRST STEPS (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Now here is a place where that next journey can begin successfully...
  September 27th, 2025 05:16
• Nuts (Sorenbarrett) I don’t understand it either myself, dear friend 🙏🏻🕊️
  September 26th, 2025 08:04
• Coincidence. (Goldfinch60) Amazing routine and art life! 🙏🏻🕊️
  September 26th, 2025 08:02
• meningslösheter och slit (Håkan Renström) Is this an adequate translation? “meaninglessnesses and...
  September 26th, 2025 06:20
• the fountain (Arqios) Now 7 is a beautiful number. Just saying😂
  September 26th, 2025 00:34
• meningslösheter och slit (Håkan Renström) Welcome to MPS 🙏🕊️
  September 25th, 2025 23:08
• DESTRUCTION (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) That speaks deeply and illuminates the depths.
  September 25th, 2025 19:45
• On the level (2781) This refracts the imagery into a more contemporary, layered meditation: a...
  September 25th, 2025 19:39
• Where Did The Time Go? (Goldfinch60) Time flies when you’re having good fun!
  September 25th, 2025 16:38
• The Sky (Tristan Robert Lange) The “great fireball” feels like a metaphor for ultimate annihilation,...
  September 25th, 2025 16:37
• Night images (Sorenbarrett) Your poem feels like a meditation on the strange alchemy of night; how...
  September 25th, 2025 07:25
• Queen Selene (Tristan Robert Lange) Haha, this is brilliant; men strut around bragging about “landing” on...
  September 24th, 2025 06:14
• Ghosts (Sorenbarrett) I may be misreading this, but I love the last line; about leaving no scar...
  September 23rd, 2025 05:49
• Sometimes, We Slip (Thomas W Case) Wow, what a slippery day😯
  September 21st, 2025 17:45
• IN ORDER TO BE SANE (David Welch) Welcome to MPS! 🕊️🙏
  September 20th, 2025 18:24
• LIMERICKS 142, 143 & 144 (Michael Edwards) It’s been a while, Michael! Good to see/read those limericks...
  September 20th, 2025 05:09
• Jack [title] (Max Manley) Welcome to MPS🕊️🙏🏻
  September 19th, 2025 07:22
• Made of Wood (Orchidee) Wooden? 🤗
  September 18th, 2025 07:08
• Unread Poetry (Violet_Writes) A beautiful expression Violet_Writes worded exquisitely 🙏🏻🕊️
  September 17th, 2025 17:25
• \"the question\" (Arqios) Thanks for the Fave 🤩 @Violet_Writes 🕊️🙏🏻
  September 17th, 2025 16:30
• The Bristers. (Goldfinch60) What a chance meeting!
  September 17th, 2025 07:41
• Sorry, there are 6 poems (Maplespal) That’s one way to do it! And many at the site accept it willingly enough...
  September 17th, 2025 07:40
• Orchi\'s Own (Tristan Robert Lange) So much fun 🤩
  September 17th, 2025 07:38
• Coming Back To Poetry (Tom Dylan) The images and message here are truly close to the heart! 🕊🙏🏻
  September 16th, 2025 08:14
• Flowering tree (Sorenbarrett) That’s probably why it’s arguably the best time of year🕊🙏🏻
  September 16th, 2025 08:13
• INRI (Mark Barron) Welcome to MPS 🙏🕊️
  September 15th, 2025 23:59
• This\'ll Cheer Ya Up - Not! (Orchidee) And the days are beginning to draw out down under! How strange to be...
  September 15th, 2025 06:51
• More Wrong, Less Right (Dan Williams) Hey Dan! Good to see you and your now rare posts! Don’t be a stranger,...
  September 15th, 2025 06:07
• Hi & Bye (Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice) Feeling these lines and verse Fina🕊️🙏🏻
  September 15th, 2025 06:04
• Do not give advice.. (NafisaSB) Unsolicited advice tends to backfire not so much for the volatility of the...
  September 15th, 2025 06:04
• Home Again. (Goldfinch60) Welcome home and thanks for generously sharing with us of your...
  September 15th, 2025 06:02
• Fallen honor (Sorenbarrett) Still searching for the best poop cleaner or an effective poop umbrella!...
  September 15th, 2025 06:01
• the ember (Jasper) Welcome to MPS, Jasper🕊️🙏🏻
  September 15th, 2025 01:31
• The Games Some People Play… (Doggerel Dave) No it isn’t but there you go. Very relatable and resonates clearly....
  September 14th, 2025 16:06
• Lost paper thoughts (Sorenbarrett) Poems and persons alike it appears🕊️🙏🏻
  September 14th, 2025 15:58
• Hate\'s Finality (Tristan Robert Lange) This acrostic lands like a clenched jaw; brief, sharp, and unwilling to...
  September 14th, 2025 05:40
• Exsanguination Nation (Tristan Robert Lange) This poem is a relentless, looping meditation on mortality, where each...
  September 14th, 2025 05:33
• Moulding Life. (Goldfinch60) So much change and so much possibilities in life, Andy! 🕊️🙏🏻
  September 13th, 2025 14:18
• Haikus (Priya Tomar) Beautiful haiku, Priya🕊️🙏🏻
  September 13th, 2025 14:16
• Looking Out To Sea. (Goldfinch60) Beautiful!🕊️🙏🏻
  September 12th, 2025 06:57
• Angels (Fred1794) Welcome to MPS, Fred 🕊️🙏
  September 12th, 2025 05:43
• In This Land (Tristan Robert Lange) I must have jumped the gun on #tbt (throwback Thursday) with posting up...
  September 11th, 2025 18:51
• the shapeshifter (Cody James) Welcome to MPS 🙏🕊️
  September 10th, 2025 07:11
• How is it....? (Orchidee) So blessed! 🕊️🙏🏻
  September 9th, 2025 15:56
• week in a wink (Arqios) Thanks for the Fave 🤩 @Jainesh D. 🕊️🙏🏻
  September 9th, 2025 15:55
• The Usurper\'s Call (Tristan Robert Lange) Nice one! With Grace as a horse, how would we handle her and for how long?...
  September 8th, 2025 07:29
• No worries (Sorenbarrett) The safe lizards are the ones with the longest lives and tails… they...
  September 8th, 2025 05:58
• Dawns Moon. (Goldfinch60) Quite the classic there in my childhood home! The moon is almost full here...
  September 8th, 2025 05:56
• Child, ONE CHILD (Arqios) Thanks for the Fave 🤩@C.W.Bleu much appreciated 🕊️🙏🏻
  September 8th, 2025 05:54
• Unlearning Touch (Nami) Deeply moving!
  September 7th, 2025 23:15
• Watch (2781) ...watch prayerfully, and see!
  September 7th, 2025 17:37
• Don\'t Look Down (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) +1! do I ever!
  September 7th, 2025 17:36
• And…. (Doggerel Dave) It\'s a literary sleight of hand should we choose it to be... clever but...
  September 7th, 2025 17:35
• Fear of Word Blindness (Neville) ...\"ivorine,\" such an excellent word, Nev! I remember as a preschoooler...
  September 7th, 2025 17:33
• Painting Music (Goldfinch60) Now that is perfection!
  September 7th, 2025 17:27
• On life (NafisaSB) In life\'s many phases we learn, grow, lose, find.
  September 7th, 2025 17:26
• This also has to stop (Orchidee) Round and round it goes and where it stops nobody knows!
  September 7th, 2025 17:22
• Breathe (Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice) ah.... breathe!
  September 7th, 2025 17:20
• The Tangerine Sky (Thomas W Case) Sublime!
  September 7th, 2025 17:16
• Night spells (Sorenbarrett) Allied and almost mirrored experiences or in the least a variant in...
  September 7th, 2025 17:14
• Original Sin (Tristan Robert Lange) \"enkindled\" now there is a word and a half! An excellent start to the...
  September 7th, 2025 17:12
• The Sparsity of Sand (Tristan Robert Lange) I hear the stillness between your lines, where even the wind forgets its...
  September 7th, 2025 01:39
• And…. (Doggerel Dave) For now we be moved!
  September 6th, 2025 21:50
• an ill-fitting halo (Arqios) Thanks for the Fave 🤩 @Tittu @Soren
  September 6th, 2025 15:33
• “games we play” (Arqios) Thanks for the Fave @C.W. Bleu 🤩🙏🏻🕊️
  September 6th, 2025 06:18
• Today Is The Future (Israel McCorkle) Here\'s to being unstoppable! 🙏🏻🕊️
  September 6th, 2025 06:17
• Why? (Sorenbarrett) We are a strange society; vulgar displays can oftentimes be stomached and...
  September 6th, 2025 06:10
• an ill-fitting halo (Arqios) Now here\'s a meditation on the weight and wobble of what we carry above...
  September 6th, 2025 06:07
• Falling, Failing (Tristan Robert Lange) Hearing “Falling, Failing” as a song changes the feel completely....
  September 5th, 2025 23:58
• Search (Igor Vykhovanets) welcome to MPS 🕊️🙏🏻
  September 5th, 2025 07:06
• All the Nice Girls... (Kevin Hulme) Get that - some pseudonym cover for such spoutings. But I surmise this is...
  September 4th, 2025 19:02
• Metaphor Master (Doggerel Dave) Not very well, I suspect. Like many gamers and their real offline lives....
  September 4th, 2025 19:01
• Feathered Stone (Thomas W Case) Solid.
  September 4th, 2025 18:59
• To Death I Am Bound (Tristan Robert Lange) Sounds like many a day that I have lived through, barely getting by! That...
  September 4th, 2025 18:58