Comments on community poems by Tristan Robert Lange
- The new era (Lorenz)
Lorenz, this is delightfully chaotic in the way only your poems can be. It...
May 30th, 2026 10:18 - WITHOUT SUITCASES (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS)
Carlos, this feels like a declaration of independence...not from the world...
May 30th, 2026 10:18 - \'Living\' Without (+2) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Kurt, this is wonderfully concise. Each pairing feels like a small...
May 30th, 2026 10:17 - A better man (2781)
Valiantstar, I like how this feels unfinished in the best possible way....
May 30th, 2026 10:16 - Purple (Janey_Boo)
Janey, this is devastating in its simplicity. The repeated “My favorite...
May 30th, 2026 10:15 - backward-facing carriage (Arqios)
My friend, what struck me most is the poem\'s quiet resistance to...
May 30th, 2026 10:14 - Outlived (Sorenbarrett)
Soren, this is a heartbreaking portrait of aging and abandonment. The old...
May 30th, 2026 10:13 - THE SLENDER ROPES (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
Norman, this resonated with me. The idea of poetry as both refuge and...
May 30th, 2026 10:13 - An Anomaly (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Shaun, this is one heck of a vent. The poem doesn\'t hide its feelings for...
May 30th, 2026 10:12 - Grace Upon Grace (Orchidee)
My friend, “grace upon grace in this” really stood out to me. It...
May 29th, 2026 23:30 - With the breeze (Caring dove)
My friend, I really loved “accepted for what it is in the world.”...
May 28th, 2026 20:55 - Epitaph for a love (Lorenz)
Lorenz, this feels drenched in longing and memory. The speaker seems...
May 28th, 2026 20:54 - Humanity (Fränz Müller)
Fränz, this is sharp, angry, and unflinching. I like how the poem...
May 28th, 2026 20:53 - The pills on the table (Part 2) (Lorena1)
Lore, this is heartbreaking because it refuses to simplify grief. The...
May 28th, 2026 20:52 - Cheshire Grinning (Kurt Philip Behm)
Kurt, this feels like a classic cautionary nursery rhyme…simple on the...
May 28th, 2026 20:50 - The Curse That Ended (Matthew R. Callies)
Matthew, even as someone who isn’t a Red Sox fan, I can feel the...
May 28th, 2026 20:48 - Cancel Cancel Culture (Part.2) (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
My friend, what stood out to me is how the poem is structured almost...
May 28th, 2026 20:47 - Changing Days (Paul Bell)
Paul, I love how this feels both apocalyptic and deeply personal. The poem...
May 28th, 2026 20:46 - Circles two (2781)
Valiantstar, I love the paradox here. It reads almost like a proverb or a...
May 28th, 2026 20:45 - Circles two (2781)
Valiantstar, I love the paradox here. It reads almost like a proverb or a...
May 28th, 2026 20:43 - leafy dapples (Arqios)
Arqios, this is lovely. “A morning of thinking slowly” feels like...
May 28th, 2026 20:41 - Split in Two (ThatsSoRavenn)
Raven, this broke my heart a little. “You made me write again” and...
May 28th, 2026 20:39 - Renewal (Sorenbarrett)
Soren, this feels vast and elemental. The whole poem moves like a tide...
May 28th, 2026 20:37 - STILL AT PLAY (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
Norman, “Five more minutes please” instantly transported me back. Such...
May 28th, 2026 20:36 - Acquitting Advocate (Orchidee)
My friend, this is a wonderfully faithful adaptation. The progression from...
May 28th, 2026 20:34 - होली है..... (Waiting for Silence)
My friend, I love how welcoming this feels. The playful chasing, the...
May 28th, 2026 20:27 - Fool Britannia : ( I See No Ships) (Kevin Hulme)
Kevin, this gave me a genuine grin. The dry British wit running through it...
May 27th, 2026 22:05 - Bright Spark (Teddy.15)
Teddy, this feels deeply freeing and quietly triumphant. The poem carries...
May 27th, 2026 22:04 - Phantasm (Fränz Müller)
Fränz, this carries such a quiet loneliness to it. The feeling of...
May 27th, 2026 22:03 - Caligula (Lorenz)
Lorenz, this is feverish, theatrical, and deeply unsettling in a way that...
May 27th, 2026 22:02 - to be black, blue and brown (Demar Desu)
Demar, this is sharp, confrontational, and painfully direct in exactly the...
May 27th, 2026 22:01 - The pills on the table (Lorena1)
Lore, this hit me hard. The child’s voice here feels painfully...
May 27th, 2026 22:00 - Dreams (+!) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Kurt, what a fascinating collection to sit with together. Your own pieces...
May 27th, 2026 21:59 - Our Children (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀)
Sharon, this carries a real ache for the younger generation and the...
May 27th, 2026 21:57 - Don\'t push (2781)
Valiantstar, “The Spirit does the brawling” is the line that...
May 27th, 2026 21:56 - stay (Arqios)
Arqios, this is delicate and quietly intimate...a whisper someone leaves...
May 27th, 2026 21:55 - कुत्ते वालों से (Waiting for Silence)
Vimal, this is a sharp, layered, and deeply provocative social critique....
May 27th, 2026 21:53 - LIFES DECREE (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
Norman, “Its granite breath” is such a fantastic phrase. It gives the...
May 27th, 2026 21:50 - Beneath the Frozen Sky (Matthew R. Callies)
Matthew, this is beautifully atmospheric. The poem carries that immense...
May 27th, 2026 21:49 - Hope of Help (Orchidee)
Orchi, there’s something deeply comforting and sorrowful intertwined...
May 27th, 2026 21:48 - Hobbiton (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
My friend, this reminds me how some travel memories stay vivid not because...
May 27th, 2026 10:31 - He has only hate in his heart for me. (Friendship)
Friendship, this hit me like a punch to the chest. The betrayal woven...
May 27th, 2026 10:26 - Correction (Fränz Müller)
Fränz, this is bold, direct, and unapologetic in its argument. I...
May 27th, 2026 10:25 - Little flower (Caring dove)
Caring Dove, this feels wonderfully gentle and peaceful. The softness of...
May 27th, 2026 10:24 - Experiences of the Heart (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀)
Sharon, this carries a great deal of compassion and lived honesty. The...
May 27th, 2026 10:24 - The musician (Lorenz)
Lorenz, “I am in the outback of the nowhere . / Wrecked musician from a...
May 27th, 2026 10:23 - Invisible Battles 💚 (Lorena1)
Lore, this really moved me. The quiet exhaustion and hidden struggle...
May 27th, 2026 10:22 - Rocks & Hard Places (Kurt Philip Behm)
Kurt, this hit me hard...especially the opening section. That paradox of...
May 27th, 2026 10:15 - Beneath The Bruises (Neville)
Neville, “something / is awakening but / as yet, it / just stirs so...
May 27th, 2026 10:13 - Myday2626 (2781)
Valiantstar, this gave me a genuine grin while still carrying real grit...
May 27th, 2026 10:12 - A Whitechapel Haunting (Matthew R. Callies)
Matthew, this carries the feel of an old gothic serial unfolding chapter...
May 27th, 2026 10:12 - October Houses (Thomas W Case)
My friend, this brought back that exact feeling of childhood nights that...
May 27th, 2026 10:10 - Mrs. Ward (Katie B.)
My friend, this brought me right back to those rare teachers who don’t...
May 27th, 2026 10:10 - The Jesus Girl (Paul Bell)
Paul, this carries a sincere emotional weight from beginning to end. The...
May 27th, 2026 10:08 - workshop on the hill (Arqios)
Arqios, this feels deeply peaceful to me...not passive peace, but earned...
May 27th, 2026 10:07 - Half Lit Hallways (ThatsSoRavenn)
Raven, this really moved me. The ache of trying to stay gentle while...
May 27th, 2026 10:06 - Lockdown 2040 (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Shaun, “We’re prodded insects trying to dodge a spear” is the line...
May 27th, 2026 10:06 - Little one (Sorenbarrett)
Soren, what a heartbreaking piece. The quiet vulnerability of the little...
May 27th, 2026 10:02 - रौशनी की ओर (Waiting for Silence)
Vimal…this carries such fierce resilience through the pain. Even after...
May 26th, 2026 20:09 - Freewheelin’ (Fränz Müller)
Wow, powerful little poem, Fränz. This says so much with so few words....
May 26th, 2026 20:05 - The beat (2781)
Valiantstar, this carries a strong pulpit rhythm to it, my friend. It...
May 25th, 2026 16:16 - Monday Soundbites: 5-25-2026 (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Kurt, wow…there’s such a reflective weariness running through this...
May 25th, 2026 16:15 - First Class Ticket (Teddy.15)
Teddy…wow, this really moved me, my friend. There’s such a strange...
May 25th, 2026 16:14 - PATH / CAMINO (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS)
Carlos, wow…this is one powerful piece, my friend. The poem moves like...
May 25th, 2026 16:12 - तोहफ़ा (Waiting for Silence)
Vimal, wow…there’s such quiet devastation in this, my friend. The poem...
May 25th, 2026 16:09 - May\'s Last Monday (Katie B.)
This really moved me, my friend. There’s a sincere reverence running...
May 25th, 2026 16:08 - a younger poet\'s reply (Arqios)
Rik, wow…this carries such a calm and thoughtful wisdom, my friend. I...
May 25th, 2026 16:06 - Unsent (ThatsSoRavenn)
Raven, wow…there’s such a quiet heartbreak in this piece, my friend....
May 25th, 2026 15:32 - The chase (Sorenbarrett)
Soren, wow…this one runs on pure sound and momentum, my friend. The...
May 25th, 2026 15:30 - WINGED MESSENGER (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
Norman, wow…this is one hauntingly beautiful piece, my friend. The poem...
May 25th, 2026 15:29 - Fields without Footsteps (Matthew R. Callies)
My friend, this reminds me why Memorial Day always feels heavier than...
May 25th, 2026 15:27 - Dealing With The Devil (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Shaun…do we have to deal with that dick? 🤣🤷♂️ Well, if we...
May 25th, 2026 15:25 - Tongues of Fire (Fränz Müller)
Fränz, this feels like the perfect Pentecost poem, my friend. A reminder...
May 25th, 2026 14:58 - AUREAL BEAUTY / MOMENTO AUREO (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS)
Carlos, this is one beautiful poem, my friend. The way beauty and...
May 25th, 2026 14:56 - I fear you. (Friendship)
Wow, powerful poem, Friendship. This unfolds like a slow realization...
May 25th, 2026 08:01 - Dreams End (Teddy.15)
Teddy…this really hit me hard. The simplicity of it makes the ache feel...
May 24th, 2026 13:32 - The art of being alone (Isa)
Isa…there’s something quietly thoughtful about this piece that I...
May 24th, 2026 12:27 - Entangled macchiato (Lorenz)
Lorenz…this feels like an espresso-fueled nervous breakdown written with...
May 24th, 2026 12:27 - Alive & Sustaining (Kurt Philip Behm)
Kurt…this feels remarkably centered and distilled. The poem carries a...
May 24th, 2026 12:25 - Peculiar (2781)
My friend, this reminded me of the tension many spiritual people wrestle...
May 24th, 2026 12:24 - The Emaciation of Life (Thomas W Case)
My friend, this captures something many people feel but rarely articulate...
May 24th, 2026 12:23 - I Know Her (Katie B.)
My friend, this reminded me of how certain people can only really be...
May 24th, 2026 12:22 - an older poet\'s advice (Arqios)
arqios…this feels less like a poem and more like wisdom slowly distilled...
May 24th, 2026 12:20 - Blotting Out The Naysayers (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
My friend, I deeply relate to this too. Sometimes when you live openly,...
May 24th, 2026 12:19 - Cold (Sorenbarrett)
Soren…there’s a real mastery of atmosphere in this piece. Every image...
May 24th, 2026 12:17 - SPOKEN FROM LIPS (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
My friend, this reminded me of those relationships or moments that slowly...
May 24th, 2026 12:15 - Chipin Pulse (Matthew R. Callies)
My friend, this made me laugh because my brother-in-law has a Chiweenie...
May 24th, 2026 12:13 - फ़ना (Waiting for Silence)
Vimal…this feels devastatingly theatrical in the best way...
May 24th, 2026 12:11 - The Burning Bones (Fränz Müller)
Fränz…this burns with a sharp, compact intensity. The progression from...
May 24th, 2026 12:09 - There is a Tree (Kevin Hulme)
Kevin…there’s a real gothic tenderness in this piece that I enjoyed a...
May 24th, 2026 12:03 - Pentecost Promise (Orchidee)
My friend, this reminded me of those hymns that somehow feel both ancient...
May 24th, 2026 12:01 - Joined In Disjunction (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
My friend, this reminds me of those moments in life where choices feel...
May 23rd, 2026 10:44 - What if (2781)
Valiantstar, “If the winners were the losers” is such a strong pivot...
May 23rd, 2026 10:43 - Reflectionz (Mutley Ravishes)
My friend, I think many people carry this exact quiet wish inside...
May 23rd, 2026 10:43 - kate moss and me (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱)
hayleigh, this hits with brutal honesty. The short, direct lines make...
May 23rd, 2026 10:41 - Rejuvenate our land (NafisaSB)
Safina, this carries such genuine care and urgency through it. The poem...
May 23rd, 2026 10:40 - It Resides in Me (Katie B.)
Katie, this is quietly heartbreaking and deeply beautiful. The tenderness...
May 23rd, 2026 10:39 - jeong (Arqios)
Rik, this is quietly devastating in the most restrained and human way...
May 23rd, 2026 10:37 - THERE ARE TIMES (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
Norman, this feels full of wonder and danger at the same time...like...
May 23rd, 2026 10:35 - Ramanujan (Sorenbarrett)
Soren, this is fascinating. You capture Ramanujan not merely as a...
May 23rd, 2026 10:34
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