Comments on community poems by Tristan Robert Lange

• Man not yet free (Georgia Watson) Georgia, this is stark and unrelenting...iron fist, empty words, walls...
  September 30th, 2025 17:40
• Cheated on a test or exam edition (Keyara S Trotman) Kiki, you blended forms here—poetic reflection laced with advice,...
  September 30th, 2025 17:37
• \"All Damn Thee Who Enter Here\" (Kurt Philip Behm) Ooh! Great question and...excellent flow and rhyme! A fave, my friend!...
  September 30th, 2025 17:34
• Opened mind. (Friendship) My friend, this flows with clarity…the open mind here feels less like...
  September 29th, 2025 15:21
• Fire & Smoke (Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice) This piece sears…the fire, the poison, the suffocation, and the belated...
  September 29th, 2025 15:19
• We Know (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) You write with such conviction, my dear friend.…naming the doubts,...
  September 29th, 2025 15:18
• Where my childhood died (Lore) Lore, this is quietly heartbreaking…the empty swing, the lost laughter,...
  September 29th, 2025 15:15
• The Answer Machine (Paul Bell) Paul, this is hilarious…the chaos of messages stacks up until it’s...
  September 29th, 2025 15:13
• parallel universe in truth (Arqios) Reading this felt like walking through ruins myself…each small step...
  September 29th, 2025 15:11
• No reason (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this piece is filled with quiet joy…rejecting the cages of...
  September 29th, 2025 15:09
• Destructo Mode (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Ooh so do I get Destructo Mode. Well done, mate!
  September 29th, 2025 15:03
• When will you............? (Orchidee) Who live in a Pineapple Down on the Sea?…Don’t answer that or we’ll...
  September 29th, 2025 15:02
• Love Fishing (Thomas W Case) Very relatable. Well done, Thomas. Powerful! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛
  September 29th, 2025 14:57
• Awww, no invite! (Orchidee) You know you want to! LOL! Popeye made me say that! LOL!
  September 28th, 2025 16:49
• Through the Darkest Nights (Lore) Not just a poem but a testimony…childhood as war, scars as map,...
  September 28th, 2025 16:48
• Destiny Forks (Kurt Philip Behm) All too true…and we all know where the wrong turns can lead! Well done,...
  September 28th, 2025 16:43
• Angels Among Us (Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice) This is tender and honest…light and shadow both carried in your lines....
  September 28th, 2025 16:42
• Waiting Patiently (William Hromada) William, this is serene and grounding. The slow drip of time, the...
  September 28th, 2025 16:40
• Honeytrap (Paul Bell) This is sharp and cinematicflirtation, tension, the reveal of Mojenta....
  September 28th, 2025 16:38
• 𝔈𝔫𝔱𝔦𝔠𝔢𝔡 𝔟𝔶 𝔱𝔥𝔦𝔰 \"𝔒𝔫𝔢\" 𝔍𝔢𝔰𝔲𝔰~ 𝔗𝔥𝔢 𝔇𝔦𝔰𝔤𝔲𝔦𝔰𝔢𝔡 (Keyara S Trotman) A Jesusaholic, now that is the kind of “aholic” I can dig being! This...
  September 28th, 2025 16:34
• My Mother. (Friendship) My mother is my rock too. This is so relatable and can only imagine...
  September 28th, 2025 16:32
• Nature (Sorenbarrett) This is raw and unflinching. The imagery of taking from the earth…her...
  September 28th, 2025 16:25
• graduated cylinder (Arqios) This is quiet brilliance, Arqios…memory aching in drops, silence...
  September 28th, 2025 16:24
• Is There a Fix?. (Poetic Licence) Thanks for bringing us all together in this, Tobani! A pleasure to...
  September 27th, 2025 22:29
• Eternal Fire (Lore) This is dark and apocalyptic, yet it glows with defiance. The abyss...
  September 27th, 2025 21:18
• Let The Dogs Out (Kurt Philip Behm) This is both raw and liberating...A call to stop performing and simply let...
  September 27th, 2025 21:15
• A fatal mistake - or con-fusion? (Orchidee) Con-Fucian? As in Confucius? Wait, the Fucians were cons? And, most...
  September 27th, 2025 21:10
• I\'m just finished. (Friendship) This lands with a haunting stillness. Every line exhales...like the final...
  September 27th, 2025 07:58
• Truth Hurts (William Hromada) Reading this felt like my own brushes with hard truths...painful,...
  September 27th, 2025 07:56
• Act (NafisaSB) This comes across as sharp and motivating. No fluff, just a call to act,...
  September 27th, 2025 07:55
• ℌ𝔞𝔯𝔪𝔬𝔫𝔦𝔠 (Keyara S Trotman) Kiki, this shines with love and humor encrypted in your style. From the...
  September 27th, 2025 07:55
• residue map (Arqios) This is quiet testimony...rings, stains, and silence all becoming proof of...
  September 27th, 2025 07:54
• Gently (Sorenbarrett) This is both haunting and merciful...death crawling in padded shadows,...
  September 27th, 2025 07:53
• I Need To Write (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) AI Poetry? Not that I\'ve seen! 🤣 Some may try, but AI is the worst at...
  September 27th, 2025 07:50
• The Pretty Pea (Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice) Petra, this is soft, playful, and warm all at once. The pea bonding at the...
  September 27th, 2025 07:47
• The Room (Lore) A tragic poem and a parent\'s worst nightmare. Well done on this, my...
  September 27th, 2025 07:46
• My Mind\'s Been Hijacked! (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Excellent wording, as always, my friend. Fun read!...
  September 27th, 2025 07:44
• The Wait (Kurt Philip Behm) This is layered and resonant...the girl waiting in cold, the poem...
  September 27th, 2025 07:43
• The Vultures Dance (Paul Bell) This is war in its most savage truth. The vultures circling, the screams...
  September 26th, 2025 09:13
• Bad Week Breakdown (Tom Dylan) Tom, this is comic timing at its finest. The bad week, the shame, the...
  September 26th, 2025 09:12
• P.E.A.C.E (Keyara S Trotman) Keyara, this is spiritual through and through. From silence as a doorway...
  September 26th, 2025 09:11
• LIMERICKS 151, 152 & 153 (Michael Edwards) Michael, these are pure comic release. From tea leaves gone rogue to...
  September 26th, 2025 09:09
• the crooked compass (Arqios) Rock on, Rik! This feels alive in its quiet defiance. The clock, the...
  September 26th, 2025 09:06
• Nuts (Sorenbarrett) Reading this felt like sitting in a late-night debate where the lines...
  September 26th, 2025 09:05
• Echoes and Empty Spaces (Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice) Petra, this is scarred yet unbroken. The quiet echoes, the silence chosen...
  September 26th, 2025 09:03
• On the level (2781) Wow, this is both proclamation and poem. The sickle at harvest, the call...
  September 26th, 2025 09:02
• Heading Home (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, this is dream and warning at once. The slow steps past forever, the...
  September 26th, 2025 09:00
• The Toys (Lore) Lore, this is devastating in its quietness. The toys waiting, the...
  September 26th, 2025 08:59
• the fountain (Arqios) Arqios, this is haunting…the fountain folding into itself feels like...
  September 26th, 2025 08:56
• Therapy Helps Me Breathe (William Hromada) William, this poem breathes with truth…the storm, the chains, the keys...
  September 25th, 2025 16:29
• 𝒟ℯ𝓋ℴ𝓉𝒾ℴ𝓃𝒶𝓁𝓈 (Keyara S Trotman) Keyara, this piece moves with strength…the surrender, the boldness, the...
  September 25th, 2025 16:27
• Night images (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this piece floats between dream and shadow…the rainbow shards,...
  September 25th, 2025 16:25
• Cold and Raw (Thomas W Case) Excellent poem, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛
  September 25th, 2025 16:23
• Complete (2781) Reading this felt like a ride through both satire and scripture…the...
  September 25th, 2025 16:22
• Cactus (Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice) Reading this felt like holding something sharp in one hand and soft in the...
  September 25th, 2025 16:07
• Remembering Plato (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, this piece circles with elegance…the freedom into leisure, leisure...
  September 24th, 2025 07:28
• I Look for You in My Dreams (Lore) This folds memory and dream together so well…the child who learned loss...
  September 24th, 2025 07:27
• rusted edges, burning gears (Arqios) Rik, this piece gnashes and rusts in equal measure…the soot, the...
  September 24th, 2025 07:23
• The Whispers, The Shadows (Keyara S Trotman) Keyara, this carries the fire of intimacy and the warmth of...
  September 24th, 2025 07:20
• Degrees (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this spins with sharp tension…the questions stack until they...
  September 24th, 2025 07:18
• Rotting Alive (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) Reading this felt like standing in a room with the lights off…I know...
  September 24th, 2025 07:15
• life\'s a journey. (Friendship) This piece carries river and memory together, my friend…your dad’s...
  September 24th, 2025 07:12
• White Car (Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice) Petra, this caught me hard…the plainness of “White car, white car.”...
  September 24th, 2025 07:08
• Otherness (Boot) James, this piece hums with an otherworldly ache. The dreamlike drift, the...
  September 23rd, 2025 07:56
• Make a Wish (Keyara S Trotman) Keyara, such an honest and moving piece. The raw goodbye, the stark...
  September 23rd, 2025 07:54
• The Night Dancer (Paul Bell) Paul, what a piece. The beauty, the longing, the repetition...all...
  September 23rd, 2025 07:53
• between the hours (Arqios) My friend, you’ve bottled that in-between hour beautifully. The...
  September 23rd, 2025 07:52
• But Sleep Won\'t Come (Tom Dylan) Tom, this captures the restless mind so vividly, my friend. It feels like...
  September 23rd, 2025 07:47
• Ghosts (Sorenbarrett) Ghosts we are, indeed. Like wisps of clouds remnants...here one moment,...
  September 23rd, 2025 07:46
• Fresh Breeze (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) A walked out on a sunny day To feel the gentle, fall breeze, It was...
  September 23rd, 2025 07:39
• Bloody Foreigners… (Doggerel Dave) Dave, this cracked me up and stung at the same time. The satire’s sharp,...
  September 23rd, 2025 07:31
• Untitled #3 (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) Yay on your A\'s! Rock on Hayleigh!!! As for your poem, Ii sucks to...
  September 23rd, 2025 07:27
• Beloved & Enough (Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice) Petra, this is tender and steady, the dove image gives the poem its calm...
  September 22nd, 2025 20:59
• ℌ𝔢𝔯𝔢 𝔦𝔰 \"𝔬𝔫𝔢\'𝔰 𝔴𝔬𝔯𝔡𝔰❤️‍🔥 (Keyara S Trotman) Keyara, this lands as truth. The opening advice reads like a card, but...
  September 22nd, 2025 20:56
• What would it be no siblings to talk too! (Friendship) My friend, this is raw and lived...it is honest. That image of “absent...
  September 22nd, 2025 20:53
• For All who Are Lost (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) My friend, this reads like testimony turned into poetry. Worn roads,...
  September 22nd, 2025 20:48
• undertow (Arqios) Arqios, this pulled me under right away. The salt as memory…as...
  September 22nd, 2025 20:44
• Heaven\'s rain (Sorenbarrett) Soren, what a piece. It reads like a hymn to the inexplicable…a reminder...
  September 22nd, 2025 20:42
• You still Not Getting It? (Orchidee) How hot does a poem get before it scorches your, eyes? O\'l Tom want\'s to...
  September 22nd, 2025 20:14
• LIMERICKS 148, 149 &150 (Michael Edwards) Great limericks, my friend. And thank you too, Teddy!...
  September 22nd, 2025 20:12
• Patriotism (Doggerel Dave) Dave, this is razor-sharp. You frame patriotism not as pride but as...
  September 21st, 2025 22:05
• Reading Some Of Matthew 5, Keeps Me Alive (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) You and me both. In fact, all of Matthew 5-7. That Sermon on the Mount is...
  September 21st, 2025 18:55
• Poet (Teddy.15) Ooh...Is it named Teddy Lane? I guess that would be a bit too identifying!...
  September 21st, 2025 18:53
• Yard work. (Friendship) Friendship, this one is pure delight. You carry the strain straight...
  September 21st, 2025 18:50
• Vagabond Kings (Kurt Philip Behm) Profoundly thought-provoking and true. Well done!...
  September 21st, 2025 18:46
• 𝒲𝒽𝒾𝓁ℯ ℴ𝓃 𝒶 𝒸𝒶𝓁𝓁 𝓌𝒾𝓉𝒽 ℋ.ℰ.ℛ (Keyara S Trotman) My friend, I’ve sat with conversations like this ...where you name...
  September 21st, 2025 18:44
• the saga in the hall (Arqios) Arqios, this is remarkable. You turn the concourse into living text...the...
  September 21st, 2025 18:42
• A Rose for You (Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice) Petra, this is honest and sharp. You frame love as growth...needing daily...
  September 21st, 2025 18:37
• Greater love hath no man (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this is weighty and profound. The layers of sacrifice you...
  September 21st, 2025 18:36
• Try To.... (Orchidee) I know who can get you through, Orchi...Ah-gah-gah-gah-gah-gah!...
  September 21st, 2025 18:32
• Sometimes, We Slip (Thomas W Case) Sometimes we slip indeed! A wonderful write and all too true....
  September 21st, 2025 18:29
• Las Vegas & The Morning Blues (Teddy.15) I guess Senryus don\'t stay in Vegas! 🤣 Love this, dearest Teddy! Your...
  September 20th, 2025 19:48
• Short Stories Rated 18 + (Keyara S Trotman) Reading this felt like sitting with a story told straight — no soft...
  September 20th, 2025 19:42
• One Step (Kurt Philip Behm) Great one, Kurt.
  September 20th, 2025 19:41
• Just being happy with age. (Friendship) My friend, I love how you’ve turned the aches and silver hairs into...
  September 20th, 2025 19:26
• of silences (Arqios) Arqios, this tribute carries both weight and light. You frame silence not...
  September 20th, 2025 19:24
• LIMERICKS 142, 143 & 144 (Michael Edwards) I have missed your Limerick\'s, Michael. These did their job delightfully!...
  September 20th, 2025 19:20
• The Devil\'s Daughter (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Oooh...devilish is she? LOL! Fun poem, mate!
  September 20th, 2025 19:18
• Catinga was his name (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this piece is unforgettable. You build him from stench, stagger,...
  September 20th, 2025 19:16
• When will it end? (NafisaSB) Safina, dear friend, this is raw and urgent. The broken promises, bleeding...
  September 20th, 2025 19:15