Comments on community poems by Tristan Robert Lange

• A Rotten Core (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Shaun, the line “X-Files, Fringe and Evil were more like docuseries”...
  May 23rd, 2026 10:34
• Compassion (Fränz Müller) Fränz, this hit me hard because of how quietly true it feels. The poem...
  May 23rd, 2026 10:32
• Our Country (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) Sharon, this comes from a deeply sincere place...and that sincerity is...
  May 23rd, 2026 10:31
• Despoiled Voices (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, this carries such a dark prophetic force through it...like a storm...
  May 23rd, 2026 10:30
• Tried. (Friendship) Friendship, this hit me hard. There’s no performance in this...just...
  May 23rd, 2026 10:29
• Multilingual (Lorenz) Lorenz, this feels like standing inside the noise of humanity...
  May 23rd, 2026 10:27
• A mega poem! (Orchidee) Orchi, hahaha...and there goes Fido again trying to staple reality back...
  May 23rd, 2026 10:24
• Reflectionz (Mutley Ravishes) Mutley, the way you break “dense- / -ly / De-elevated” apart visually...
  May 23rd, 2026 10:14
• Hábrók on the Wind (Matthew R. Callies) Matthew, this is one heck of a poem. The alliteration never feels...
  May 23rd, 2026 10:13
• Existence (Katie B.) Katie, this carries both ache and grace through it beautifully. The poem...
  May 23rd, 2026 10:12
• Farts 🤣 (Friendship) Friendship, hahaha...you took something utterly ridiculous and somehow...
  May 23rd, 2026 10:11
• IN THE CLOUDS (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS) My friend, this speaks to that feeling of living partly inside...
  May 23rd, 2026 10:10
• open doored corridors (Arqios) arqios, what a beautifully atmospheric piece this is. The hallway becomes...
  May 23rd, 2026 10:09
• Wicked Procedures (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Shaun, that line about reading “like my name is Ma$e” caught me...
  May 23rd, 2026 10:08
• The Evolution? (2781) My friend, this speaks to something I wrestle with often myself...how...
  May 23rd, 2026 10:07
• Finding one\'s way (Sorenbarrett) Soren, what a wonderfully immersive piece this is. The imagery keeps...
  May 23rd, 2026 10:06
• LETTER HOME (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Norman, what a powerful poem. There’s real fire in this...not just...
  May 23rd, 2026 10:05
• Ink (Cindy) Cindy, wow…this really hit me. The entire poem feels like writing itself...
  May 21st, 2026 10:51
• Forever Within (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, this really struck me. Short, sharp, and stripped down to...
  May 21st, 2026 10:51
• Cold (Katie B.) Katie, “Spacious rooms / That swallow” is the turn that really got me...
  May 21st, 2026 10:50
• The friend (2781) Valiantstar, this really fascinated me. There’s something earnest and...
  May 21st, 2026 10:49
• Things That Remember the Floor (Matthew R. Callies) Matthew, this is beautifully crafted. The poem turns a simple toy box into...
  May 21st, 2026 10:49
• streetlight uprising (Arqios) Rik, this is one heck of a poem. The entire piece feels electrically...
  May 21st, 2026 10:48
• Road kill (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this moved me deeply. The poem never tries to romanticize death,...
  May 21st, 2026 10:47
• Missing You (Teardrop) My friend, I know that feeling of grief turning the simplest thing…like...
  May 21st, 2026 10:45
• NICOTINED FINGERS (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Norman, this really moved me. The whole poem feels like a room still...
  May 21st, 2026 10:44
• My real prayer (Marissa) Marissa, this feels very raw and sincere to me. There’s a sense...
  May 21st, 2026 10:41
• His gentle Love (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) Sharon, this carries such a calming and reassuring spirit through it. The...
  May 21st, 2026 10:38
• FLORID SKIN / PIEL FLORIDA (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS) Carlos, what a lush and intimate poem this is. The layering of moonlight,...
  May 21st, 2026 10:37
• Mister Catman (Lorenz) Lorenz...wow. This is one wild, intelligent, jazz-soaked ride of a poem....
  May 21st, 2026 10:36
• A Few Notes on A Feeding Frenzy (Neville) Neville, what a sharp and painfully observant poem this is. The retail...
  May 20th, 2026 13:38
• Ode to the Millionaire Within (Matthew R. Callies) Matthew, somewhere a French revolutionary just read this and got deeply...
  May 20th, 2026 13:36
• Featherweight Champion (Mutley Ravishes) Rik, what a quietly masterful poem this is. The atmosphere feels tangible...
  May 20th, 2026 13:31
• waking lights (Arqios) Rik, this really pulled me in. The whole poem carries that quiet,...
  May 20th, 2026 13:29
• Onions (Paul Bell) Paul, what an incredible balancing act this is. The dark humor, military...
  May 20th, 2026 13:29
• यार, यारों से कभी नाराज़ नहीं होता (Waiting for Silence) Vimal, this is beautiful, my friend. The sincerity in this flows so...
  May 20th, 2026 13:28
• Leak (Sorenbarrett) This feels bigger than a roof to me...like those moments in life where...
  May 20th, 2026 13:27
• The Palace (Katie B.) Katie, what a sharp and quietly haunting poem this is. The starkness of...
  May 20th, 2026 13:26
• THE DEATH OF THE MUSE (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Norman, what a hauntingly beautiful poem this is. The angel imagery and...
  May 20th, 2026 13:25
• My First Gig Ever (Amy Winehouse) (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Shaun...this hit hard and close to home. I love Amy. There’s something...
  May 20th, 2026 12:22
• Blue Skies and Thunderstorms (Teddy.15) Teddy, this hit me in a deeply human way. The honesty in recognizing...
  May 20th, 2026 12:16
• Sting. Noun: A Sharp Biting Pain (Kevin Hulme) Kevin, this gave me a good laugh, my friend. I love how the poem builds...
  May 19th, 2026 20:18
• Hopeless blues (Lorenz) Lorenz, this feels like wandering through neon-lit spiritual exhaustion at...
  May 19th, 2026 20:17
• Inheritance (Abdullah123) Abdullah, I appreciated how this avoids pretending the speaker is innocent...
  May 19th, 2026 20:17
• Lessons From Neal (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, this really resonated with me. There’s something deeply honest...
  May 19th, 2026 20:16
• Tethered Vessel (Thomas W Case) Thomas, this captures the emotional texture of dreams incredibly...
  May 19th, 2026 20:15
• Robbing hoods (2781) Valiantstar, this carries a real weariness with modern power structures...
  May 19th, 2026 20:15
• Axis of Summer (Matthew R. Callies) Matthew, this is wonderfully crafted, my friend. The formal structure...
  May 19th, 2026 20:14
• where two currents meet (Arqios) arqios, this really grabbed me. The quietness of it is what makes it so...
  May 19th, 2026 20:13
• Resident Evil : Village (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Shaun, I really enjoy how these poems don’t just summarize the...
  May 19th, 2026 20:11
• Development (Sorenbarrett) Love this, Soren. What struck me most was the image of the fruit loosening...
  May 19th, 2026 20:10
• FAMINE (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Norman, this really hit hard. The poem carries such anger and sorrow...
  May 19th, 2026 20:09
• राष्ट्रमंदिर (Waiting for Silence) Vimal, I appreciated how this approaches faith, identity, and nationhood...
  May 19th, 2026 20:09
• The Great Stink of 1858 (Kevin Hulme) Kevin, this was both wonderfully informative and wonderfully biting, my...
  May 19th, 2026 20:05
• It\'s scared the shit out of me. (Friendship) Friendship, sorry, me and my family will move out right away!...
  May 19th, 2026 19:53
• Harvest Harmony (Orchidee) Also…I suspect somewhere deep in the archives of Glugminster Abbey there...
  May 19th, 2026 19:50
• Monday Sound Bites 5-18-2026 (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, I admire how you can compress large existential and moral ideas into...
  May 18th, 2026 12:35
• Resident Evil : Biohazard (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Shaun, this really captures the experience of survival horror games…the...
  May 18th, 2026 09:42
• I Wish (Janey_Boo) Janey, I think many people who have lived through emotional harm will...
  May 18th, 2026 09:41
• The Beret (Matthew R. Callies) Matthew, this really hit me. The poem feels elegant and restrained, yet...
  May 18th, 2026 09:41
• I Want for Nothing (Katie B.) Wow, Katie, what struck me most was the image of the grapes flooding the...
  May 18th, 2026 09:40
• the brew (Arqios) Rik, you got me with this one. The pacing and pauses absolutely sell the...
  May 18th, 2026 09:39
• BUT DAINTILY (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Norman, this really moved me. The quiet grief in this piece feels so...
  May 18th, 2026 09:39
• Open page (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this makes me think about how places absorb us over time whether we...
  May 18th, 2026 09:38
• अपनी पीड़ा समझा दो तुम (Waiting for Silence) Vimal, this really moved me. The tenderness running through these lines...
  May 18th, 2026 09:37
• ये सपने बहुत अधूरे हैं   (Waiting for Silence) Vimal, this is filled with such aching devotion. The longing here feels...
  May 18th, 2026 09:36
• The Journey to Healing (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) Sharon, this really touched me. There’s such a sincere heart behind...
  May 18th, 2026 09:35
• Sacrifice on the hill (2781) Wonderful write, my friend. What struck me most was “My leanness, my...
  May 18th, 2026 09:34
• Fiery flow (Lorenz) Lorenz, this is one wild and feverish ride. The volcanic imagery feels...
  May 18th, 2026 09:34
• The Present Uncharted (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, this really moved me. There’s such a quiet existential weight...
  May 18th, 2026 09:33
• Deja Vu (Janey_Boo) Janey, this really moved me. That deep ache for something you can almost...
  May 18th, 2026 09:32
• On the Edge of Autumn (Thomas W Case) Thomas, this really hit me hard. The way this moves from fire and...
  May 18th, 2026 09:32
• What to paint? (Friendship) Friendship, this really moved me…and both the poem and painting carry...
  May 18th, 2026 09:28
• A Lesson Or Blessing? (Jerene) J.J., this really moved me…especially the way the poem shifts from...
  May 18th, 2026 08:11
• Diet of Carp (Tristan Robert Lange) Orchi...in advance, yes, there is a Diet of Glug too! And we all know who...
  May 18th, 2026 08:09
• late cup (Arqios) Arqios, this has a wonderfully restrained and observational beauty to it....
  May 17th, 2026 08:05
• Gingerbread men (Sorenbarrett) Soren, I really enjoyed how this balances humor, rhythm, and philosophical...
  May 17th, 2026 08:04
• THIS LONELY STREET (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) My friend, “The silence echoes / So very loud” lands beautifully. It...
  May 17th, 2026 08:04
• Pink Surprise in a Sealed Box (Matthew R. Callies) Matthew, this is delightfully playful and charming. The whole poem carries...
  May 17th, 2026 08:02
• Granny (NafisaSB) Safina, I really connected with how nurturing this feels throughout. The...
  May 17th, 2026 08:02
• Trapped in one\'s mind. (Friendship) Friendship, this reads like a gothic psychological prison built entirely...
  May 17th, 2026 08:01
• The lady of the lake (Lorenz) Lorenz, this carries the ache of vanished seasons, drowned memory, and...
  May 17th, 2026 08:00
• Unnatural Nature (Janey_Boo) Janey, this really moved me. The grief here feels so deeply human because...
  May 17th, 2026 07:59
• WEARINESS (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS) Carlos, this feels crushingly claustrophobic in both content and form. The...
  May 16th, 2026 09:25
• Late Harvest in Progress (Neville) Neville, this has such a lovely mature tenderness to it. Memory, aging,...
  May 16th, 2026 09:23
• a small dismissal (Arqios) Rik, this hurt in such a quiet and recognizable way. The poem understands...
  May 16th, 2026 09:21
• Inside Anxiety (Katie B.) Katie, this has a strong psychological immediacy to it. Overthinking,...
  May 16th, 2026 09:20
• सच्चा मन का, बदक़िस्मत है (Waiting for Silence) Vimal, this reads like a heartfelt confession shaped by loss, tenderness,...
  May 16th, 2026 09:19
• Night\'s bedroom (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this reads like a rain-soaked elegy for the fading day. Mist,...
  May 16th, 2026 09:19
• PREMONITION (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) My friend, “Like a cigarette / Rolled too tight” is such an effective...
  May 16th, 2026 09:18
• Holy cow ( moon & sea) (Poetic Dan) My friend, “At first I was the sun / Arms like gravity / Now I am the...
  May 16th, 2026 09:17
• The Fire of Akhekh (Matthew R. Callies) Matthew, this reads like a true dark fantasy ballad. Fire, scorched sands,...
  May 16th, 2026 09:15
• How inopportune (Allie561) Allie, this has a haunting inevitability to it. Snow, missed interviews,...
  May 16th, 2026 09:14
• NAKED / DESNUDOS (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS) Carlos, this has a lush, almost tidal sensuality to it. Bodies, skin,...
  May 16th, 2026 09:13
• Victory Or Death (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, this collection moves through surrender, resistance, and...
  May 16th, 2026 09:12
• The funeral of poetry (Lorenz) Lorenz, I really enjoyed how the poem keeps mocking poetry and artistic...
  May 16th, 2026 09:11
• When the World Feels Heavy (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) Sharon, this reads like a heartfelt reminder not to let despair settle...
  May 16th, 2026 08:46
• While These Words May Not Be Perfect (Neville) Neville, this has such a gentle dawn-lit tenderness to it. Sleepy...
  May 15th, 2026 09:46
• Tears On A Prayer (Janey_Boo) My friend, “Missing is different than regretting” is such a strong...
  May 15th, 2026 09:45
• Poets (Katie B.) Katie, this has a fragmented, almost manifesto-like quality to it. Short...
  May 15th, 2026 09:44