Comments on community poems by Tristan Robert Lange

• To Them Who... (Tony Grannell) A strong piece, my friend. Feels like a ballad of labor and life, lifting...
  August 19th, 2025 07:45
• Wordless music talks (Poetic Dan) Love Bruce Lee, so that line—“Be water my friend”...really sticks...
  August 19th, 2025 07:37
• Elixir of life (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this one breathes with primal force…void, fire, bone...all moving...
  August 19th, 2025 07:35
• simple sample (Arqios) A powerful piece, my friend. You captured the shift from quiet hope to...
  August 19th, 2025 07:33
• Marching on Bone Spurs (Neville) First, I have to get this out out of the way: OUCH! LOL! That aside...the...
  August 19th, 2025 07:31
• Soup (Teddy.15) Strong piece, Teddy. The Sylvia Plath shadow is right there...dear...
  August 19th, 2025 07:28
• I’d let the world burn for you. (Georgia Watson) Georgia, this poem blazes straight through…love and fire hand in hand....
  August 19th, 2025 07:26
• Burning Letters (Priya Tomar) A powerful piece, Priya. The bangles, anklets, and flute all carry such...
  August 19th, 2025 07:23
• Occam Says ... (Kurt Philip Behm) Occam\'s razor is sharpened on this whetting stone of a poem, my dear...
  August 19th, 2025 07:19
• What Would You Do For A Collar? (Cheeky Missy) I think I\'ve shared my love of Tigger with you before, but that image of...
  August 19th, 2025 07:18
• Top Drawer (Teddy.15) I have several \"drawers\" that way. I know of the magic you speak! 🤣...
  August 19th, 2025 07:14
• We Have All Been There (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) This hit me hard, my friend…the way faith and failure are woven together...
  August 19th, 2025 07:12
• Dead-man\'s Chest (Rebellion_in_sanity) Wow! Brilliant, my friend. That image of white cranes flying…that’s...
  August 19th, 2025 07:10
• Missing Persons Report (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) Beautifully crafted, Hayleigh. The stillness is unnerving…each line...
  August 19th, 2025 07:09
• Trapped. (Friendship) My friend, this carries a raw weight…the kind of truth you can’t just...
  August 19th, 2025 07:05
• Pork Pies (Orchidee) Oh boy. Pork pies. I know some of them had spinach, because well, Popeye...
  August 19th, 2025 07:00
• Facing Empire (Tony Grannell) Tony, my dear friend, this thunders with the cadence of old war...
  August 19th, 2025 06:54
• What is greatness (Sorenbarrett) What struck me here, Soren, is the sharp reminder that greatness doesn’t...
  August 19th, 2025 06:51
• clarity (Arqios) Love the poem text image my friend! Really fits well. Love the poem too. A...
  August 19th, 2025 06:46
• Pretty Skies a Haiku in Flight Mode (Neville) Lovely haiku with beautiful imagery. Sorry, I am so late in dropping by,...
  August 18th, 2025 21:34
• He Knows (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) Amen! God sure does know us. Intimately. Wonderful job, my friend....
  August 18th, 2025 21:29
• I Called My Wild (Rebellion_in_sanity) This one feels heavy with shadow, yet it carries a flicker at the end that...
  August 17th, 2025 19:06
• Ramblings of a mad man (2781) The title reminded me of Ozzy\'s Diary of a Madman. Regardless madmen...
  August 17th, 2025 07:40
• I See All Of Them (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Amen. I think it is safe to say, for both of us, there is only ONE...
  August 17th, 2025 07:37
• week in a wink (Arqios) No scrolling past by me...loved every movement through the week. What a...
  August 17th, 2025 07:35
• Father, God, nation (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this one cuts sharp…father, God, and nation all woven as figures...
  August 17th, 2025 07:33
• There is A Crease in Everything (Neville) Proof that one need not be wordy to convey truth as it is. This poem does...
  August 17th, 2025 07:25
• Finally Numb (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) Another raw and unflinching poem, Hayleigh, which you know I...
  August 17th, 2025 07:20
• We Met in December (Priya Tomar) Priya, This poem moves from tender warmth into heartbreak so...
  August 17th, 2025 07:18
• The Wealth of Youth (Thomas W Case) An excellent poem, my dear friend. Very relatable...it\'s funny how those...
  August 17th, 2025 07:17
• Bye, Honey! (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) Now this is a master class Senryu, Hayleigh and I don\'t say that lightly....
  August 17th, 2025 07:14
• The Best Children\'s Party. (Poetic Licence) Oops! I missed this! My bad, but I do love the final result! I am so...
  August 16th, 2025 17:15
• Fire In My Soul (Teddy.15) My dear, dear Teddy. I could feel this in me as I read it. It hit me deep...
  August 16th, 2025 17:00
• Ukiah At Dawn (Kurt Philip Behm) Wow! Just wow! An easy fave. Short but a sublime poem. Well done!...
  August 16th, 2025 16:56
• You Recall that Childhood Game? (Cheeky Missy) Missy, you’ve woven everyday chaos and weariness into your sonnets with...
  August 16th, 2025 16:54
• Children (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Strong, powerful, and every decent human with a heart will certainly stand...
  August 16th, 2025 16:51
• Fungi Have Feelings Too You Know (Neville) Tell me about it! I literally got ID\'d for buying a trippy mushroom...
  August 16th, 2025 08:08
• 8-days in a gum-leaf blur (Arqios) The kookaburra sits in the old gum tree, or something like that! Rik, this...
  August 16th, 2025 07:28
• Poetic lightning (Sorenbarrett) If people don\'t get this, they probably don\'t belong on this site. They...
  August 16th, 2025 07:24
• Death Wrapped (Tony Grannell) I completely get this. Having worked with senior adults with dementia, I...
  August 16th, 2025 07:11
• Oh, You Know (Cheeky Missy) You had me at Bricohe! Love it! LOL! Loved these sonnets too, my dear...
  August 15th, 2025 20:34
• To The Wind (Kurt Philip Behm) Wonderful job with this poem, Kurt, that says more than what it seems to...
  August 15th, 2025 20:32
• Sweet Forgiveness (Tony Grannell) First comment! Yay! Tony, this carries a gentle light breaking...
  August 15th, 2025 10:16
• Do You Belong? (Rebellion_in_sanity) This felt to me like a drifting meditation between belonging and...
  August 15th, 2025 10:14
• Let it go (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this is steady moral clarity…a call to drop the weight of blame...
  August 15th, 2025 10:09
• Expectations (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) Great job, Hayleigh! Boys seem to play \"men\" more oft\' than not. Is...
  August 15th, 2025 10:07
• the cupboard light (Arqios) This is so tender and quietly cinematic (a quality I truly...
  August 15th, 2025 10:03
• The Keys Of Christ? (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Wonderful flow to this, my friend. Jesus sure was not soft. You didn\'t...
  August 15th, 2025 09:58
• Under a Real Sunset (Teddy.15) Teddy, your poem has such a tender, nostalgic glow…first love painted...
  August 15th, 2025 09:55
• A Forever Friend (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) This is so warm and uplifting…a gentle reminder of where true friendship...
  August 15th, 2025 09:53
• Feeling Turned Around (Kurt Philip Behm) Great job, Kurt!
  August 15th, 2025 09:52
• What could have been (NinjaGirl) 🥷 poet , this is quiet but devastating…each “maybe” pulling me...
  August 15th, 2025 09:51
• Cabbages Rule OK? (Orchidee) Wait, I thought this was about Spinach...😮‍💨 \"Never mind,...
  August 14th, 2025 12:17
• The Best Sparrow Is a Dead Sparrow (Rebellion_in_sanity) A political fable sharpened to a blade…dark, unflinching, and unwilling...
  August 14th, 2025 12:15
• On the Flip Side It\'s Definitely Adventure (Cheeky Missy) More scrumptious sonnets from the serene sonnet sovereign herself! I am...
  August 14th, 2025 12:12
• Blood in the Snow (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) Love this Senryu, Hayleigh! I can feel the emotions in this and its...
  August 14th, 2025 12:10
• Three the Hard Way (Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏) Oooh. Last poem? Why stop? I will miss reading them, for what it is worth,...
  August 14th, 2025 12:07
• \"a former dream\" (Arqios) The reckoning settled in as a read, for real…you really capture what’s...
  August 14th, 2025 12:02
• Sky vine (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this is a quiet parable…two lives twining upward toward the light...
  August 14th, 2025 11:53
• Falling for Icarus #2 (Neville) Neville, I love your wry, knowing touch…turning myth into a moment we...
  August 14th, 2025 11:43
• Of Dogs and Cats and Other Things (Cheeky Missy) These three have your signature scrumptious-sonnet energy you do so well,...
  August 13th, 2025 12:06
• One Final Bow (Kurt Philip Behm) This graceful farewell feels like a quiet triumph…a final bow that’s...
  August 13th, 2025 12:04
• why so poetic? (Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏) Another excellent, thought-provoking piece, my friend. Keep \'em...
  August 13th, 2025 12:02
• No, Mr. Science Guy (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Shawn, I’ve never believed science and faith cancel each other...
  August 13th, 2025 11:23
• Watermarks (Sorenbarrett) What struck me here, Soren, is how the rain you describe doesn’t just...
  August 13th, 2025 11:14
• The Maiden\'s Plight (Tony Grannell) Tony, I love how you can write a ballad that feels passed down in through...
  August 13th, 2025 11:12
• \"unspoken storms\" (Arqios) Rik, this holds such quiet power…like a steady hand over deep waters....
  August 13th, 2025 11:08
• Rubbish? (Orchidee) Pure Orchiliciousness (now a word, soon to be found in Oxford\'s...
  August 13th, 2025 10:29
• So Damn Bright and Above it All (Teddy.15) Wow! Amen. Hell yes. Damn I am feeling very humbled and, quite...
  August 13th, 2025 10:19
• All He’s Done For Me (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) GenXer, this feels like an open-heart testimony poured straight from lived...
  August 12th, 2025 17:21
• Low End of Middle-class (Rebellion_in_sanity) My friend, this poem walks a fine, painful line between self-awareness and...
  August 12th, 2025 17:19
• Anything for a Drink (Thomas W Case) Thomas, this is a raw, lived-in honesty that doesn’t flinch or tidy the...
  August 12th, 2025 17:17
• Now Is Forever (Kurt Philip Behm) My friend, this one feels like holding a firefly in cupped...
  August 12th, 2025 10:10
• Ask Me Tomorrow (Cheeky Missy) Missy, your trio here is a playful stroll through three very different...
  August 12th, 2025 10:08
• Sunrise (Damaso) Damaso, this feels like catching a wild, fleeting dream in your...
  August 12th, 2025 10:06
• \"Sticks and stones may break my bones, but words will never hurt me.\" (A.N.) 💯💯 Yup. That\'s 200% true! Well done, my friend! A fave!
  August 12th, 2025 10:04
• The Sweet Track (Neville) Neville, you’ve given this piece the feel of a guided walk through...
  August 12th, 2025 10:03
• Glass (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) Hayleigh, this one cuts sharp and clean—just like the glass in its...
  August 12th, 2025 10:02
• \"our poetic sides\" (Arqios) Arqios, this is like tracing the constellations of our little poetic...
  August 12th, 2025 09:57
• \'Twas Always Thus (Tony Grannell) Tony, I think you know my love of poetic mirrors, and this is a grim...
  August 12th, 2025 09:55
• The poet (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this one rides (pun intended) hard and true. You’ve caught the...
  August 12th, 2025 09:53
• Alchemy Of The Answers (ElizabethMoroz) Elizabeth, this is a full sweep of the world in motion...war and peace,...
  August 12th, 2025 09:50
• Fido Ruling The Roost? (Orchidee) Orchi, Fido’s got you right where he wants you…pipe, slippers, and...
  August 12th, 2025 09:47
• The light within us (Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏) `Amen. A profoundly powerful witness to a universal spiritual truth. Well...
  August 12th, 2025 09:43
• Life With Trash (Teddy.15) Powerful, pointed, and purely true. Well done, dear Teddy!...
  August 12th, 2025 09:36
• Harmless (NinjaGirl) My friend, this is raw and stripped of any false comfort, which you do so...
  August 11th, 2025 20:01
• His Gift (Kurt Philip Behm) Wonderfully written Kurt. Well done!
  August 11th, 2025 19:59
• If I Knew The Answer to That... (Cheeky Missy) Missy, only you could weave wreckage, cabbage, spicy sausage, and Panera...
  August 11th, 2025 19:58
• Is it all true? (Orchidee) Orchi, KP, Fido, Botox Land…but no Popeye! Let me guess, he’s eating...
  August 11th, 2025 19:56
• His Love Is Deep (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) My friend, you’ve captured the persistence of God’s love so well...
  August 11th, 2025 19:52
• Ode to Your Memory (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) Hayleigh, this carries the weight of love and loss in every stanza. The...
  August 11th, 2025 19:50
• Today (NafisaSB) My friend, this is warm and overflowing with care. Each wish feels like a...
  August 11th, 2025 19:38
• The Colour Rhyme (Priya Tomar) Priya, this reads like a fable wrapped in vivid threads. The colors pull...
  August 11th, 2025 19:37
• Poems of Passion (Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏) Another wise one my friend. Beautiful job! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛
  August 11th, 2025 19:35
• a poetic lullaby (Arqios) Rik, this is gorgeous in its honesty. You’ve caught that restless space...
  August 11th, 2025 19:33
• Glimpses (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this moves like a slow turn toward the sun. The light feels earned...
  August 11th, 2025 19:30
• Prayer 🙏 (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) My friend, this speaks straight to the heart. You’ve put into words what...
  August 10th, 2025 08:12
• Sunday Fun-Day: \"Dawn\" (Arqios) Arqios, this breathes fresh air right through the screen to a guy in need...
  August 10th, 2025 08:09
• Sand in a bottle (Sorenbarrett) This gem is stripped to the bone…lean, direct, and all the stronger for...
  August 10th, 2025 08:08
• Intelligence (Rebellion_in_sanity) My friend, this is chilling in its precision. You’ve built the tension...
  August 10th, 2025 07:53