Comments on community poems by Tristan Robert Lange
- Proposal (Teddy.15)
Teddy, this carries a quiet, grounded truth… something worn, imperfect,...
May 3rd, 2026 17:11 - Let the Heart Heal What It Feels (Salvia.S)
Salvia, this carries a quiet, steady care… letting go, protecting the...
May 3rd, 2026 17:05 - Sunday Sound Bites (Kurt Philip Behm)
Kurt, this carries a reflective weight… time, identity, and what endures...
May 3rd, 2026 17:05 - A Whoring they will Go (Thomas W Case)
Thomas, this carries a relentless honesty… exposing betrayal, greed, and...
May 3rd, 2026 17:04 - Zumwalt\'s Iron Arm (Matthew R. Callies)
Matthew, this carries a strong, steady energy… a life shaped by...
May 3rd, 2026 16:59 - May (Katie B.)
Katie, this carries a gentle strength… a blessing, a hope, and something...
May 3rd, 2026 16:56 - They labeled me inappropriate! Then made me out to be the Bitchy-witch. (Friendship)
Dearest Friendship, this carries both hurt and resolve… being misread,...
May 3rd, 2026 16:54 - where your hand was (Arqios)
arqios, this is beautifully restrained… a fleeting moment that still...
May 3rd, 2026 16:53 - Duck (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS)
Carlos, this carries a quiet, clumsy sadness that feels very real…...
May 3rd, 2026 16:51 - Gone (Sorenbarrett)
Soren, that sense of carrying something weightless yet present really...
May 3rd, 2026 16:15 - ऐसा कि टूटने पाए ना (Waiting for Silence)
Vimal, I’ve felt that kind of longing and hope intertwined before…...
May 3rd, 2026 16:14 - The load (2781)
Valiantstar, that contrast between descent and rising really stands out…...
May 3rd, 2026 16:13 - DISTANT WHISPER (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
Norman, this carries a gentle, reflective weight… memory, distance, and...
May 3rd, 2026 16:11 - Silence ain’t weakness (Poetic Dan)
Welcome home Dan! This really moved me… there’s a calm strength...
May 3rd, 2026 16:10 - Random Rhyming (Part.7) (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Shaun, this carries a strong current… that mix of questioning,...
May 3rd, 2026 16:09 - Poetry\'s Children (Kevin Hulme)
Kevin, this is a fun one… you move through the forms with real energy...
May 3rd, 2026 16:08 - The Hour (Kurt Philip Behm)
Kurt, this feels like those moments where things get stripped down to...
May 2nd, 2026 11:25 - Blake’s Apology (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀)
Sharon, this feels like those moments where someone finally chooses...
May 2nd, 2026 11:24 - VERY SLOWLY / Muy despacio (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS)
Carlos, this really moved me…there’s a softness here that feels both...
May 2nd, 2026 11:21 - Springboard (Mutley Ravishes)
Mutley, this is a powerful piece…what stands out is the balance between...
May 2nd, 2026 11:21 - Letters (Paul Bell)
Paul, this feels like watching something fall apart and then rebuild in a...
May 2nd, 2026 11:19 - Dressed with Might (Katie B.)
Katie, that image of “favored feathers of chocolate and superfluous...
May 2nd, 2026 11:18 - poetical query (Arqios)
Rik, that idea of an “inner pyre” is what stays with me…that quiet...
May 2nd, 2026 11:17 - क़सूर (Waiting for Silence)
Vimal, this is a beautiful piece…what stands out is the softness paired...
May 2nd, 2026 11:13 - God you only gave me ten (or I\'ll never do that again) (Sorenbarrett)
Soren, this is a powerful piece…what stands out is the relentless...
May 2nd, 2026 11:12 - Boom, Boom, Bap (Part.2) (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Shaun, that “boom, boom, bap” line really anchors the whole...
May 2nd, 2026 11:11 - For There Is Nothing So Perfect (Teddy.15)
Teddy, this is a strong piece…what I keep coming back to is how much it...
May 2nd, 2026 11:05 - THE LONESOME DREAM (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
Norman, this is a powerful piece…what stands out is how restrained it...
May 2nd, 2026 11:04 - What am I meant for? (Demar Desu)
Demar, methinks you answered your own question in one...
May 2nd, 2026 11:02 - On the Crimes of Harvey Weinstein (Matthew R. Callies)
Matthew, this is a powerful piece…what struck me most is how controlled...
May 2nd, 2026 10:49 - प्रतीक्षा (Waiting for Silence)
This carries real strength, Vimal…a steady voice pushing forward even...
May 1st, 2026 08:00 - Now lookie here... (Orchidee)
My friend, I’m telling ya…that shop ain’t a shop…it’s a GLUG...
May 1st, 2026 07:48 - ALONE (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
Norman, I’ve seen moments like this before…those quiet glimpses of...
May 1st, 2026 07:38 - Sunset by the sea (NafisaSB)
Safina, this really moved me…there’s a gentle, steady calm running...
May 1st, 2026 07:36 - Mmmmm distractions (Demar Desu)
Demar, I’ve felt that same kind of overload…where everything is...
May 1st, 2026 07:33 - God, Save Me From Hellfire (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Save me too, dear Lord…but if you show up looking like that dude in the...
May 1st, 2026 05:55 - Don\'t Ever Underestimate a Butterfly (Teddy.15)
Dearest Teddy, this really moved me…there’s a quiet peace in this...
May 1st, 2026 05:47 - Please stop! (Friendship)
Dearest Friendship, that contrast of offering peace and receiving stone...
May 1st, 2026 05:46 - The Mystical Flute (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Shaun, this one grabbed me right away…there’s a playful setup that...
April 29th, 2026 23:37 - STONES (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS)
Carlos, this feels like more than just material…it reads like something...
April 29th, 2026 23:36 - On a Road to Knossos (Neville)
Neville, there’s a gentle immersion here…the way the place unfolds...
April 29th, 2026 23:34 - Dearest Liz ... (Kurt Philip Behm)
Kurt, there’s a brutal honesty here…and knowing it reflects what you...
April 29th, 2026 23:32 - The Bible in Shadow (Matthew R. Callies)
Matthew, there’s a strong sense of tension running through this…the...
April 29th, 2026 23:27 - curtain call (Arqios)
arqios, that image of a space left imperfect…still bearing the marks of...
April 29th, 2026 23:26 - Bliss\' home (Sorenbarrett)
Soren, this one pulled me in instantly…there’s a warmth to it that...
April 29th, 2026 23:24 - हलचल (Waiting for Silence)
Vimal, there’s something deeply moving here…the way everything shifts...
April 29th, 2026 23:22 - waiting room. tap. tap. tap. (Fibonacci Poetry - 3) (DeadRose)
A great example of a Fibonacci sequence. Having written them myself, they...
April 29th, 2026 23:19 - Haiku (an ode to grief) (Teddy.15)
Profound, my friend. This metaphor, though brief, has much to say. Well...
April 29th, 2026 18:10 - rest in peace to my cat (Demar Desu)
Awww. Sorry to hear, my friend. It sounds like this happened in the past,...
April 29th, 2026 06:23 - One Days (Mutley Ravishes)
Mutley, this hit me hard…there’s something compressed here, like three...
April 28th, 2026 06:13 - slope (Arqios)
Arqios, there’s a quiet power in this that doesn’t need to announce...
April 28th, 2026 06:12 - King of the world (Sorenbarrett)
Soren, there’s a fierce confidence here that carries straight...
April 28th, 2026 06:12 - मेरी क़लम चला दो (Waiting for Silence)
Vimal, there’s a real longing here that doesn’t let go…the desire to...
April 28th, 2026 06:11 - Who? (Boot)
James, there’s a real edge to this that keeps moving…like something...
April 28th, 2026 06:10 - Haiku (an ode to spring) (Teddy.15)
Teddy, there’s a gentle energy in this that really lands…the movement,...
April 28th, 2026 06:08 - This Arrangement (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
My friend, there’s a real urgency in this…like you’re trying to wake...
April 28th, 2026 06:07 - SPIDER / ARAÑA (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS)
Carlos, this carries a steady thread from memory into creation…that...
April 28th, 2026 05:42 - A LONELY RIVER (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
Norman, this carries a steady, reflective current…those questions about...
April 28th, 2026 05:40 - The King with Stolen Papers (Matthew R. Callies)
Matthew, this carries a blend of charm and unraveling…a man stepping...
April 28th, 2026 05:32 - with pulp please (Demar Desu)
Coconut water with the pulp...the only way! Love Thai, my friend. Hope you...
April 28th, 2026 05:31 - A little pale note of blues (Lorenz)
Lorenz, I’ve always connected with that Sagan sense of scale…how small...
April 27th, 2026 12:50 - Monday, Monday ... (Kurt Philip Behm)
Kurt, this carries a throughline that moves from sensory memory into...
April 27th, 2026 12:47 - Iron in the Velvet. (Friendship)
My friend, that “iron in velvet” image really stays with...
April 27th, 2026 07:53 - a carrying forward (Arqios)
Arqios, this hit me hard…there’s a quiet, steady presence here that...
April 27th, 2026 06:18 - Word reeds (Sorenbarrett)
Soren, Word Reeds really brings the metaphor together…something growing...
April 27th, 2026 06:17 - Bob It (Paul Bell)
Paul, this walks that line between comedy and something more uncomfortable...
April 27th, 2026 06:16 - A BROKEN SOUL (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
Norman, this carries a steady, lingering weight…from that lonely dawn...
April 27th, 2026 06:14 - Tock-Tick (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Shaun, that final clock line really sticks…there’s urgency in it, like...
April 27th, 2026 06:10 - The Rot (Katie B.)
Katie, that “merry go round of prized horses…not on my high horse”...
April 27th, 2026 06:06 - Ghosts of Normandy (Matthew R. Callies)
Matthew, this carries a quiet weight…that sense of something once...
April 27th, 2026 06:06 - Another Fine Mess (Kevin Hulme)
Kevin, this hit me hard…there’s a sharp edge to it that doesn’t try...
April 26th, 2026 21:15 - Ostia beach (Lorenz)
Lorenz, this feels like a full collision…that beast, the city, Babylon,...
April 26th, 2026 21:15 - The Elixir (Thomas W Case)
Thomas, there’s a strong movement here…from trying to control and...
April 26th, 2026 21:12 - The Old Gang Together Again (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀)
Sharon, the story continues and this installment carries a nice...
April 26th, 2026 09:29 - Sunday Sound Bites (Kurt Philip Behm)
Kurt, these hit me hard…there’s a thread running through all of them...
April 26th, 2026 09:27 - creekside picnic (Arqios)
My friend, tthe blanket lifting and settling again really stays with me....
April 26th, 2026 09:26 - and here we are strange together (Demar Desu)
Shout out right back atch, bro! Love being strange together! Let\'s get...
April 26th, 2026 09:25 - A DROP OF LIFE (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS)
Carlos, this hit me hard…there’s something quietly humbling in this....
April 26th, 2026 09:19 - Expedition 33 (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Shaun, that mention of Lumiere falling into something darker really...
April 26th, 2026 09:17 - Tiny Blue Moments (Neville)
Neville, there’s a quiet intimacy running through this…built out of...
April 26th, 2026 09:16 - HOUSE (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
Norman, I know a house can breathe. This is excellent. There’s a slow,...
April 26th, 2026 09:14 - Hardening (Sorenbarrett)
Soren, a quiet weight runs through this…time settling in, shaping...
April 26th, 2026 09:12 - मेरा जीवन – मेरा अनुभव (Waiting for Silence)
My friend, this reads like a life gathered into reflection…every step,...
April 26th, 2026 09:10 - मेरा जीवन – मेरा अनुभव (Waiting for Silence)
Vimal, my friend, this reads like a life gathered into reflection…every...
April 26th, 2026 09:09 - Red Brother at the Crossroads (Matthew R. Callies)
Matthew, this hit me hard…bringing Esau into focus like this makes it...
April 26th, 2026 09:07 - The death valley (Lorenz)
Lorenz, this is a full-on collision of nostalgia and chaos…childhood...
April 25th, 2026 15:07 - Inherence (Kurt Philip Behm)
Kurt, there’s a real balance in this…between what’s created and...
April 25th, 2026 15:06 - The man who loved all, ❤️but was misunderstood. (Friendship)
Dearest Friendship, there’s a deep quiet in this…the kind that carries...
April 25th, 2026 15:04 - The Little Kitten Catalina (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS)
Carlos, this carries such a soft, lasting love…the kind that doesn’t...
April 25th, 2026 15:03 - Spread peace (NafisaSB)
Safina, there’s a real heaviness running through this…the fear, the...
April 25th, 2026 15:02 - being an adult (Demar Desu)
Well, some of us do...tell stories of hope, anyway. But yeah...adulthood...
April 25th, 2026 09:09 - Unstruck (Mutley Ravishes)
Mutley, this moves like a spark…spiritual, physical, and urgent all at...
April 25th, 2026 06:51 - Is this the best you got? (Sorenbarrett)
Soren, well damn…you came in swinging on this one...and I love it!...
April 25th, 2026 06:48 - A POETS EYES (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
Norman, this moves between memory and present ache…old wounds, quiet...
April 25th, 2026 06:47 - पुकार (Waiting for Silence)
Vimal, this comes through with a strong sense of urgency…like a call...
April 25th, 2026 06:46 - Feathers of Honor (Matthew R. Callies)
My friend, this moves with reverence and purpose…memory, responsibility,...
April 25th, 2026 06:46 - The Power of Faith (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀)
Sharon, I’m really enjoying this story…there’s something warm and...
April 25th, 2026 06:44 - Friday Quad (Kurt Philip Behm)
Kurt, this moves through failure, instinct, perspective, and ultimately...
April 24th, 2026 12:38 - UNDEFINED (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS)
Carlos, this moves like a meditation…light, breath, and feeling all...
April 24th, 2026 12:38 - Aces without Apology (Matthew R. Callies)
Matthew, this builds tension without ever raising its voice…calculation,...
April 24th, 2026 12:37
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