Comments on community poems by Tristan Robert Lange

• 𝒮𝒽ℴ𝓇𝓉 𝒮𝓉ℴ𝓇𝓎 𝒮𝒽ℴ𝓇𝓉 (Keyara S Trotman) Reading this, Kiki, I felt the ache of needing to keep moving just to stay...
  November 6th, 2025 22:06
• 1 View (NinjaGirl) If you don\'t love and advocate for yourself, who will! Also, I have...
  November 6th, 2025 22:04
• Walking Into Yesterday (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Very nicely done, Kurt! I can relate, for sure! Well done!...
  November 6th, 2025 09:55
• Elevations and Invocations (ElizabethMoroz) Elizabeth, welcome back, my friend…what a return. This piece soars with...
  November 6th, 2025 09:54
• Getting to know each other (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) Taliah\'s back! My friend, this reads wonderfully—warm, genuine, and...
  November 6th, 2025 09:51
• pears in a moonlit orchard (Arqios) It’s classical, textured, and hauntingly calm. You’ve written a living...
  November 6th, 2025 09:50
• Protocol (Paul Bell) My friend, this is comedy gold…deadpan and perfectly timed. The circular...
  November 6th, 2025 09:48
• THE NOT SO SAD STORY OF THE RABBITS (Michael Edwards) And how! For sure! This is another great one, Michael!
  November 6th, 2025 09:47
• Bright Blessings (Orchidee) Beautiful hymn-poem my friend. I\'d put on some sunscreen, but turns out...
  November 6th, 2025 09:45
• Once (Sorenbarrett) It’s irreverent, philosophical, and a little unhinged....the holy...
  November 6th, 2025 09:43
• The Best Quality One Can Possess (Keyara S Trotman) A digital confessional wrapped in aesthetic armor…fun, fierce, and...
  November 6th, 2025 09:40
• in the end (Arqios) It’s spare, honest, and unflinching…a declaration without noise. The...
  November 6th, 2025 09:08
• Christ Crowned (Orchidee) Good write, Orchi. Popeye just said that he had wondered where his...
  November 5th, 2025 16:08
• The shoulders of giants (Georgia Watson) The whole piece glows with elegy and warning...nature, memory, and loss...
  November 4th, 2025 17:43
• Keys To The Kingdom (Kurt Philip Behm) It’s stark, hopeful, and honest. The rhythm of confession meets the...
  November 4th, 2025 15:41
• I Keep Listening (Applecherry) I know that feeling of not turning it off…of listening just to feel...
  November 4th, 2025 15:37
• Comfort and Joy (Paul Bell) The whole thing is a beautiful wreck...dark wit, loss, and release...
  November 4th, 2025 15:34
• the promise of morning (Arqios) The imagery breathes…each line a slow inhale of grace. “Both ache and...
  November 4th, 2025 15:31
• Be as (Sorenbarrett) “Transparent, invisible, it wets but leaves no stain”...what an...
  November 4th, 2025 15:25
• Inclusive Invitation (Orchidee) O most famous poet, No Li. I call to you from the great beyond the...
  November 4th, 2025 15:21
• Chaotic Classics (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) The flows well and would make an excellent spoken word or slam poem! I...
  November 4th, 2025 15:16
• She Stared Back (NinjaGirl) My friend 🥷…this one creeps up quiet and cold. The stillness between...
  November 4th, 2025 15:13
• If the bugs (Georgia Watson) Equal parts unsettling and sublime, this turns death into devotion’s...
  November 3rd, 2025 18:33
• Monday, Monday (Kurt Philip Behm) Three poems, one echoing spirit. Each reads like a small prayer whispered...
  November 3rd, 2025 18:32
• Taliah (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) My friend, as someone who’s witnessed the beauty and exhaustion of...
  November 3rd, 2025 18:28
• the masked \'reader\' (Arqios) Arqios, “Make me hear the sound of grinding steel”...that line rings...
  November 3rd, 2025 18:25
• Sing (Victor Bolshov) Victor, I could feel every clash and tremor in this. The refrain binds it...
  November 3rd, 2025 18:04
• Access to an Advocate (Orchidee) Love it Orchi! What does Popeye’s advocate advocate for? Don’t answer...
  November 3rd, 2025 13:30
• Thief, priest and engineer (Sorenbarrett) This poem hums with gallows humor and precision craftsmanship. A parable,...
  November 3rd, 2025 13:27
• Put It Back (Bella Shepard) My friend, this speaks to me deeply. Letting go isn’t...
  November 2nd, 2025 13:29
• Freedom Awaits (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) That closing line…“the brave and the strong”…lands with quiet...
  November 2nd, 2025 13:27
• I love you (2781) This feels tender and timeless…like a love note caught between...
  November 2nd, 2025 13:24
• trickster in fur (Arqios) Rik, this piece is pure charisma wrapped in fur…a satire, a portrait,...
  November 2nd, 2025 13:23
• 𝒲ℴ𝓇𝓇𝓎 (Keyara S Trotman) Kiki, this is elegant, raw, and celestial. The fonts and flow make it...
  November 2nd, 2025 13:20
• They came (Sorenbarrett) My friend, this piece walks the line between realism and nightmare so...
  November 2nd, 2025 09:01
• The Unseen (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) And there are MANY OF THEM out there! Well done, Shawn!...
  November 2nd, 2025 08:15
• An Extraordinary Journey (Teddy.15) And what a beautiful discovery that is, dearest Teddy! Glad you did and...
  November 1st, 2025 20:14
• Burnt Green Onions (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, this poem burns with righteous precision…a mirror held to envy...
  November 1st, 2025 20:11
• Judgement (2781) My friend, I’ve wrestled with those same questions of justice and...
  November 1st, 2025 20:10
• should paths recross (Arqios) Arqios, this piece rests at the crossroads of longing and acceptance. You...
  November 1st, 2025 06:03
• A Walk Into Town (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Is that the pic? I want to walk there! LOL! Loved the poem, my friend!...
  November 1st, 2025 06:01
• Empty (Sorenbarrett) Soren, the hollow log becomes a living metaphor for us all...what time,...
  November 1st, 2025 05:59
• Listened to What An Awesome God (Keyara S Trotman) Know the song well and love it. My friend, I love how you fuse sacred awe...
  November 1st, 2025 05:58
• Autumn leaves (NafisaSB) My friend, this is an elegant hymn to transience...each verse gently...
  November 1st, 2025 05:56
• 𝕼𝔲𝔢𝔢𝔫 𝔅𝔢𝔢\'𝔰 𝔖𝔱𝔦𝔫𝔤 (Keyara S Trotman) Kiki, Queen Bee’s Sting is pure ritual glam...poison and perfume in...
  October 31st, 2025 20:16
• Let Me Write (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) LET ME WRITE. A-friggin\'-men! Man, I cannot tell you how much I needed to...
  October 31st, 2025 20:11
• Another Day of Solitude (ADarkerMind) Melvin, this is delirious and divine... a fever dream stitched with...
  October 31st, 2025 20:09
• What Darkness Stole (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Milton and all. Well done, Kurt. Loved this! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛
  October 31st, 2025 20:07
• Halloween (2781) Friend, this reads like revelation and lament entwined. A scorched prayer...
  October 31st, 2025 08:28
• closing the distance (Arqios) Rik, what a quiet hymn to gratitude...grounded, tender, and wise. You...
  October 31st, 2025 08:26
• Solo climbing (Sorenbarrett) My friend, I’ve felt that too…that moment when control gives way, and...
  October 31st, 2025 08:25
• ODD AND ODDER (3) (Michael Edwards) Ooh. Neat on the paintings travels! I love it...and I must say, I love...
  October 31st, 2025 08:09
• Phoe-Nix (Mutley Ravishes) Mutley, what a short burst of cosmic wonder...cryptic, rhythmic, and...
  October 31st, 2025 08:07
• 𝔗𝔞𝔦𝔫𝔱𝔢𝔡 𝔇𝔬 𝔜𝔬𝔲𝔯 𝔖𝔢𝔩𝔣 𝔞 𝔉𝔞𝔳𝔬𝔯 (𝔏.𝔬.𝔳.𝔢) (Keyara S Trotman) My friend, I can almost smell the syrup and spark through the...
  October 31st, 2025 08:06
• The Inquiry (Paul Bell) Paul, this is master-class storytelling. Pacing, voice, and irony all in...
  October 31st, 2025 08:03
• License Revoked (+2) (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, these three pieces together burn with wit and precision…each one a...
  October 31st, 2025 08:01
• The last letter (Lore) Lore, this is heartbreak written with grace. It feels like a whisper into...
  October 31st, 2025 07:59
• V.I.P. (Arqios) My friend, I’ve seen that same varnish at work…the way power cloaks...
  October 31st, 2025 07:48
• Modern Philosophy (Teddy.15) Dearest Teddy, this is pure resonance. A love song, a lament, and a quiet...
  October 31st, 2025 07:47
• Tree Soul (Teddy.15) Teddy, this piece feels like a prayer whispered to the forest. It’s...
  October 31st, 2025 07:45
• Rain (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this reads like nature’s lullaby...gentle, protective, and full...
  October 31st, 2025 07:43
• Walking in the Dark (Thomas W Case) Excellent job, Thomas! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛
  October 29th, 2025 21:03
• The Ghost of Babel (Tristan Robert Lange) Hahaha....Mutley. What can I say? I\'m a weirdo. Beside that, I...
  October 29th, 2025 20:54
• A Final Word (Keyara S Trotman) Kiki, this glows with curiosity and confidence. The fonts, emojis, and...
  October 29th, 2025 20:38
• Number Four Lipow Strasse (Neville) Neville, my friend, this poem lingers like smoke from Café...
  October 29th, 2025 20:34
• Hear Ye, Hear Ye..... (Cheeky Missy) Missy, your kitchen is like a chapel. Between brie, bacon, and Barry’s,...
  October 29th, 2025 20:32
• Mad Interlude No.948735272 (Orchidee) Orchi, this reads like a comic soliloquy from some cosmic play. It’s...
  October 29th, 2025 20:28
• Tomato Tomatto (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, this piece captures the peril of charisma…how easily the light...
  October 29th, 2025 20:22
• Circles on the sand (Victor Bolshov) Yes, my friend, I have! That image, “Sand will crack like concrete,...
  October 29th, 2025 20:21
• \"the inviolable\" (Arqios) Arqios, this piece is an invocation to hold steady amid collapse. Sparse,...
  October 29th, 2025 09:27
• ODD AND ODDER (2) (Michael Edwards) Vowel movements! I LOVE IT and I love this poem! Excellent job, my friend!...
  October 29th, 2025 09:26
• Enlightenment (Sorenbarrett) Ooh! First comment! Yay! I don\'t mean this in the religious sense, but my...
  October 29th, 2025 09:25
• Solar Wrexus (Mutley Ravishes) Mutley, this is wild brilliance…the dragon as both myth and metaphor for...
  October 29th, 2025 09:21
• Living Souls (Paul Bell) Paul, this reads like a short film...tight dialogue, eerie rhythm, and a...
  October 28th, 2025 18:29
• THE GHOST OF YELLOW-JOHN MATTHEWS (David Welch) David, this is such a fun, full-circle tale...classic sea shanty spirit...
  October 28th, 2025 18:27
• when we thought ourselves lost (Arqios) Rik, this is luminous…quiet revelation in motion. It reads like faith...
  October 28th, 2025 07:47
• ODD AND ODDER (1) (Michael Edwards) Great wordplay my friend! Love it! Can\'t wait to follow the series....
  October 28th, 2025 07:46
• Shine of Overdraft (Rebellion_in_sanity) My friend, I’ve felt that same manufactured rhythm…doing everything...
  October 28th, 2025 07:45
• Goodbye (Sorenbarrett) My condolences, dear friend. This piece carries the weight of love...
  October 28th, 2025 07:44
• Entertwined (Keyara S Trotman) Kiki, this one feels like a drifting heartbeat…soft, reflective, almost...
  October 28th, 2025 07:41
• 𝒞ℴ𝓂ℯ𝓈 𝒜𝓃ℴ𝓉𝒽ℯ𝓇 𝒦𝒾𝓈𝓈 (Keyara S Trotman) My friend, I feel the joy and self-acceptance pulsing through this. Love...
  October 27th, 2025 18:07
• Lord Of Life (Orchidee) Great write, Orchi! When Popeye (dang it, there he is again!) says that he...
  October 27th, 2025 18:05
• ........ (Isa kemmy) Yay! First comment!!! That image—“glued on bitumen”—stuck with me....
  October 27th, 2025 09:48
• Popeye\'s Part (Tristan Robert Lange) Thank you Devender and Missy for your faves. Much appreciated my friends!
  October 27th, 2025 09:40
• 1000 plus one (Rhmn_7) This one burns with resilience…a battle hymn of the spirit. It’s raw,...
  October 27th, 2025 09:26
• dance in the wake (Arqios) You are most welcome, my friend
  October 27th, 2025 09:24
• first light (Arqios) My friend, this is gentle grace in motion…a meditation of breath and...
  October 27th, 2025 09:16
• Tucker’s Meeting (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) GenXer, this feels heartfelt and grounded…a snapshot of care, faith, and...
  October 27th, 2025 09:15
• Epiphany (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Read and read and still need to read. Amen to that! Wonderful write,...
  October 27th, 2025 09:14
• Reaper (Sorenbarrett) Ha! Perfection in my humble opinion. Loved this my friend!...
  October 27th, 2025 09:12
• Another Day of Solitude (ADarkerMind) My friend, I’ve missed seeing your voice here. You write with a...
  October 27th, 2025 09:11
• Ghoulfriend (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) These lyrics have such a haunting pulse...I’d love to hear how they...
  October 27th, 2025 09:08
• The Dark’s Honest Contract (Isa kemmy) Isa, this piece breathes serenity. The rhythm, the natural imagery, the...
  October 27th, 2025 09:05
• Time Walks Away Like a Little Gray Spider (Thomas W Case) Thomas, this cuts straight through…no dressing, no disguise. Grief laid...
  October 27th, 2025 09:03
• The Coming Of The Night (+2) (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, these three pieces together feel like a triptych of soul and...
  October 27th, 2025 09:01
• Rejoicing Refreshment (Orchidee) Great hymn-poem, Orchi! Rejoicing refreshment? Where\'s the Spinach...
  October 27th, 2025 09:00
• Have you ever met anyone who is so shallow ? (Friendship) Friendship, this hit deep…you’ve given voice to that hollow ache of...
  October 27th, 2025 08:54
• herd of words (Arqios) Reading this felt like running with it myself…each poet part of...
  October 27th, 2025 08:53
• The Mural (Paul Bell) Paul, this one’s a riot with a pulse. The humor bites, the sadness...
  October 27th, 2025 08:51
• Corn stalker (Sorenbarrett) Soren, chilling and masterful…folklore, vengeance, and consequence all...
  October 26th, 2025 08:04