Comments on community poems by Tristan Robert Lange

• Cold morning (Sorenbarrett) Soren, what a warm, inviting piece. I could almost smell the bacon,...
  June 25th, 2026 10:48
• Rest (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Shaun, what struck me most here is the quiet simplicity of it all...the...
  June 25th, 2026 10:48
• THE GAP BETWEEN (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Norman, this is a sobering reflection, my friend. The contrast between...
  June 25th, 2026 10:46
• Working man (GoddessEYES) GoddessEYES, what struck me most is how unapologetically you celebrate...
  June 25th, 2026 10:40
• Low self-esteem can literally destroy a human being. (Friendship) Friendship, you ain\'t kidding, my friend. What struck me most is how...
  June 25th, 2026 10:38
• Elevate and Irony (Kevin Hulme) Kevin, this gave me a good laugh! 🤣 The steady build-up makes the final...
  June 25th, 2026 10:37
• Glimpses of Greatness (Orchidee) Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛ Popeyeus...
  June 24th, 2026 13:55
• The Devil\'s Edge (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, what strikes me is that both poems are really about what we carry....
  June 24th, 2026 13:46
• Flytrap (Fränz Müller) Fränz, what struck me most is how you turn a scientific reality into a...
  June 24th, 2026 13:34
• VITAMINS (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS) Carlos, this is one uplifting ride, my friend. The poem radiates...
  June 24th, 2026 13:33
• when said aloud (Arqios) My friend, what struck me most is the tension between ordinary speech and...
  June 24th, 2026 13:32
• Age (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this made me think about how words can carry multiple lives at...
  June 24th, 2026 13:26
• Random Rhyming (Part.9) (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Shaun, this has the feel of somebody letting thoughts fly without worrying...
  June 24th, 2026 13:03
• Know the difference 😉 (GoddessEYES) What resonated with me here is the idea that spiritual growth cannot...
  June 24th, 2026 13:02
• What Gets Let Out of the Sentence (Matthew R. Callies) Matthew, what struck me most is the tension between complexity and...
  June 24th, 2026 12:55
• a suspicious mind conjures its own demons (Demar Desu) Amen. Me too, my friend. Me too! Demar, there is something powerful in the...
  June 24th, 2026 12:49
• Blackout – Subsequent Moments. (Doggerel Dave) Dave, what struck me most is the way the poem mirrors the experience...
  June 24th, 2026 12:48
• Hic Jacet (Kevin Hulme) Kevin, what I admire here is the way the poem presents a life seemingly...
  June 24th, 2026 12:45
• IN POETRY KEPT (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Norman, what struck me most is the contrast between what is visible and...
  June 24th, 2026 12:44
• Hic Jacet (Kevin Hulme) Kevin, what a turn at the end, my friend. The poem spends so much time...
  June 23rd, 2026 22:44
• Refuge Remaining (Orchidee) Orchi, at this rate you’re going to have the entire Psalter stuffed into...
  June 23rd, 2026 22:42
• The Best We Could (Thomas W Case) Thomas, this really struck me. There is so much honesty packed into...
  June 23rd, 2026 22:39
• Fog (Fränz Müller) Fränz, this hit me right away. Three lines, and the atmosphere is...
  June 23rd, 2026 22:38
• This that the other (2781) ValiantStar, this made me smile, my friend. There is a lighthearted,...
  June 23rd, 2026 22:37
• Countdown Time (Paul Bell) Paul, what I enjoyed most here is the pacing. The dialogue moves so...
  June 23rd, 2026 22:36
• Tartan Army`s Arts of War (Mutley Ravishes) Mutley, haha, this one carries some bite! 🤣 The frustration comes...
  June 23rd, 2026 22:34
• bookends of his frame (Arqios) Rik, this really moved me. There is such dignity in the way you honor an...
  June 23rd, 2026 22:33
• FRAGILE (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS) Carlos, the crystal imagery really stayed with me. Something transparent...
  June 23rd, 2026 22:32
• 2:13 (ꜱʏʟᴠᴀ) Sylva, this really moved me. There is something so relatable about lying...
  June 23rd, 2026 22:30
• Uncertainty (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this hit me hard. The tension is palpable from the opening lines...
  June 23rd, 2026 22:29
• WITHOUT A BRIDE (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Norman, this hit me hard. There is a quiet sadness running through it that...
  June 23rd, 2026 22:29
• No Limits On The Freedom Of Expression (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, “If the past is empty inside you / the future will be lost” hit...
  June 23rd, 2026 22:26
• Perks of living alone 😜 (GoddessEYES) GoddessEYES, the repeated return to freedom is what stayed with me. Each...
  June 23rd, 2026 22:23
• The Industry (Part.3) (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Shaun, this certainly doesn’t pull any punches. The whole piece comes at...
  June 23rd, 2026 22:22
• Turn It Loud Until It Becomes Air (Matthew R. Callies) Matthew, this is one heck of a poem. It pulses with energy from the first...
  June 23rd, 2026 22:14
• Control the Narrative (Fränz Müller) Fränz, “And not a drop of ink?” made me smile. The whole poem builds...
  June 23rd, 2026 22:12
• in sickness, health and boredom (Demar Desu) Does dark 🍫 count? 🤣
  June 23rd, 2026 22:07
• I Am by Your Side / Estoy a tu lado (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS) Carlos, this reminds me of people who have touched my life and are no...
  June 23rd, 2026 22:05
• Did love die? (Isa kemmy) memory suddenly appears in an ordinary place and catches us completely off...
  June 23rd, 2026 22:04
• Prosperous Places (Orchidee) Orchi, the river imagery is what stayed with me here. There is such...
  June 23rd, 2026 22:02
• FRAGILE (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS) Carlos, this hit me hard. There is such a deep weariness running through...
  June 23rd, 2026 21:54
• I sit listening for sounds around me (Sorenbarrett) Soren, what struck me most is how attentively this listens. Every sound...
  June 23rd, 2026 21:50
• In Solace (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, this really hit me. Each piece stands on its own, but together they...
  June 22nd, 2026 10:30
• You\'re allowed to outgrow the person you used to be. (Friendship) Friendship, this really moved me. There is such a deep sense of permission...
  June 22nd, 2026 10:29
• on the blue ridge (Arqios) My friend, this brought back memories of mountain drives where I found...
  June 22nd, 2026 10:28
• CLOSURE (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Norman, what stayed with me most was the contrast between what once was...
  June 22nd, 2026 10:27
• Semen Retention (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Shaun, this hit me hard. There is a real sense of determination running...
  June 22nd, 2026 10:15
• Brandon\'s Name (Matthew R. Callies) Matthew, this hit me hard. There is a deep sadness here, but also a...
  June 22nd, 2026 10:14
• how I long for her… (Demar Desu) My friend, I think most of us know what it feels like when distance seems...
  June 22nd, 2026 10:13
• Two Bee or Not ... (Kevin Hulme) Kevin, you got me with this one. I read the last line and immediately...
  June 22nd, 2026 10:12
• Rejoicing Reassurance (Orchidee) Orchi, you got me with this one. Part of me is appreciating the...
  June 22nd, 2026 10:10
• Always proud to call you my Dad.❤️ (Friendship) Friendship, this really moved me. Reading your note alongside the poem...
  June 22nd, 2026 10:06
• Only A Poet (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, this really impressed me. There is wit here, conviction here, and...
  June 22nd, 2026 10:05
• Sighs (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS) Carlos, wow...this feels like pure celebration. There is so much warmth...
  June 22nd, 2026 10:04
• Let\'s Avoid the Mirrors (Thomas W Case) Thomas, this hit me hard. There is a raw frustration here that feels...
  June 22nd, 2026 10:03
• TEARS REMAIN (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Norman, this really moved me. There is such a gentle reassurance running...
  June 22nd, 2026 10:02
• open page (Arqios) arqios, this really slowed me down in the best possible way. So much of...
  June 22nd, 2026 10:00
• Growing old (Sorenbarrett) Soren, what caught me most was the progression itself...one moment you\'re...
  June 22nd, 2026 09:55
• The Last Laugh (Neville) Neville, what a wonderful piece. This one made me smile...and then it made...
  June 22nd, 2026 09:55
• Hope (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Shaun, this hit me at just the right moment. There’s something...
  June 22nd, 2026 09:55
• The Note to Burn at Midnight (Salvia.S) Salvia, what a powerful little gut punch. The brevity makes it land even...
  June 21st, 2026 23:08
• Losers vs. Winners (Demar Desu) Demar, interchangeable indeed! Like asking who the winners were at the...
  June 21st, 2026 08:56
• Dreams Undreamed (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, what I admire here is how much weight you\'re able to carry with so...
  June 21st, 2026 08:53
• It was never done right! (Friendship) Friendship, what struck me most is how controlled this remains despite the...
  June 20th, 2026 09:36
• ANIMAL (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS) Carlos, this is one wild ride. It bursts with energy from the opening...
  June 20th, 2026 09:34
• Meuse in late October (Arqios) Arqios, this brought back memories of day trips where the destination...
  June 20th, 2026 09:34
• The Song (Paul Bell) Paul, I\'ve known what it\'s like to have certain thoughts or memories...
  June 20th, 2026 09:33
• EQUAL SHARES (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Norman, this really moved me. There\'s a quiet heaviness here that settles...
  June 20th, 2026 09:32
• Shadow of night (Sorenbarrett) Soren, what I enjoyed most is how the poem keeps balancing opposing...
  June 20th, 2026 09:32
• Can\'t change it! (Orchidee) Orchi, I was following along until the three brain cells. Then Popeyeus...
  June 20th, 2026 09:31
• The Book Of Eli (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Shaun, what I like here is the balance between the physical journey and...
  June 20th, 2026 09:29
• No Fence Can Finish Us (Matthew R. Callies) Matthew, what a powerful piece. The movement, the dust, the horses, the...
  June 20th, 2026 09:28
• Al Fresco (Fränz Müller) Fränz, sometimes a poem doesn\'t need to be complicated. This is fun,...
  June 20th, 2026 09:28
• Living La \'Doric\' Vita (Kevin Hulme) Kevin, this gave me a chuckle and a wince at the same time. The humor is...
  June 20th, 2026 08:57
• The \'\' Jeff\'s coffee\'\' (Lorenz) Lorenz, what I enjoyed most here is the way observation and longing weave...
  June 20th, 2026 08:56
• Baked In The Pudding (Kurt Philip Behm) My friend, \"Words — To Decide / Truth — Zero Sum\" is the part that...
  June 20th, 2026 08:53
• Bold As Love (Mutley Ravishes) Mutley, this one grabbed me immediately. Few words, huge question. I love...
  June 19th, 2026 22:23
• rested quill (Arqios) Arqios, this stayed with me. There’s something quietly beautiful about...
  June 19th, 2026 22:22
• Alliteration\'s addiction (Sorenbarrett) Soren, what a ride. The musicality pulls everything along beautifully, but...
  June 19th, 2026 22:21
• THE PERFUME FADES (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Norman, what a beautifully melancholic piece. The fading light, the worn...
  June 19th, 2026 22:19
• Offline (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) My friend, I’ve caught myself wondering before whether we’d be better...
  June 19th, 2026 22:16
• Donny\'s Price (Matthew R. Callies) Matthew, one thing I’ve appreciated throughout this series is how human...
  June 19th, 2026 21:27
• One for the Road (Kevin Hulme) Kevin, haha, you got me with this one. I spent the first half wondering...
  June 18th, 2026 20:59
• Tears of War (Zafor pathan @ জাফর পাঠান) Zafor, this hit me hard. The human cost of war comes through clearly from...
  June 18th, 2026 20:59
• The Verdict (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, this really moved me. \"The Judgment of Ghosts\" hit especially...
  June 18th, 2026 20:57
• Times Square Musings (Fränz Müller) Fränz, what a powerful piece. I appreciate that it doesn\'t stop at...
  June 18th, 2026 20:56
• Death Tunes (Paul Bell) Paul, this speaks to me. I\'ve found that grief rarely moves in a straight...
  June 18th, 2026 20:55
• I did nothing wrong. (Friendship) Friendship, what a powerful piece. The pain is evident throughout, but...
  June 18th, 2026 20:54
• The Luxury of Living (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS) Carlos, what a beautiful piece. I especially appreciate the tension...
  June 18th, 2026 20:52
• Where Are You From? (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) Sharon, thank you for this heartfelt piece. I especially appreciate how it...
  June 18th, 2026 20:44
• when the heart is heard (Arqios) Arqios, what a lovely piece. I especially enjoy how the poem keeps one...
  June 18th, 2026 20:43
• Life And Death (Heaven Or Hell) (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Shaun, what a thought-provoking piece. I like how it moves from the...
  June 18th, 2026 20:43
• Illusive passion (Sorenbarrett) Wow...so powerful. Soren, \"mortal fingers are not made to cling to a...
  June 18th, 2026 20:42
• Illusive passion (Sorenbarrett) Wow...so powerful. Soren, \"mortal fingers are not made to cling to a...
  June 18th, 2026 20:42
• RACE RIOT UK (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Norman, what a powerful piece. The contrast between everyday scenes and...
  June 18th, 2026 20:40
• A San Francisco Requiem: Elegy for Harvey Milk and George Moscone (Matthew R. Callies) Matthew, this hit me hard. Harvey\'s story has always carried that painful...
  June 18th, 2026 20:30
• Skyline (Fränz Müller) Fränz, what I love here is the reminder that not everything inspiring has...
  June 18th, 2026 20:29
• Crescent (Marissa) Marissa, what a lovely piece. I love the contrast between the passing...
  June 18th, 2026 20:29
• Please Don’t Pretend (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) Sharon, thank you for this. Amen indeed. There is something deeply freeing...
  June 18th, 2026 20:28
• Neurodivergence (Lorenz) Lorenz, this resonated with me. Many creative people eventually discover...
  June 17th, 2026 11:57