Comments on community poems by Tristan Robert Lange

• Born Like This (Thomas W Case) Excellent write, Thomas! Well done, my friend!...
  December 15th, 2025 10:00
• there is a room (Arqios) My dear friend, this reads as a metaphor for the creative mind itself. The...
  December 15th, 2025 08:36
• Land of Opportunity (Doggerel Dave) Message delivers strong as ever my friend. Sounds like the USA…except...
  December 15th, 2025 08:35
• Sing of Salvation (Orchidee) Orchi, this hymn carries real weight. It’s confident, grounded, and...
  December 15th, 2025 08:31
• Wood table (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this lands as a meditation on what we take and what remains. The...
  December 15th, 2025 08:25
• Getting Along Well (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) GenXer, this chapter balances story and reflection well. The practical...
  December 15th, 2025 08:23
• ℜ𝔢𝔫𝔡𝔢𝔯𝔢𝔡 (Keyara S Trotman) Kiki, this is playful, devoted, and emotionally generous all at once. The...
  December 15th, 2025 08:21
• Report (2781) Valiantstar, this is intense and disorienting in a way that feels...
  December 14th, 2025 09:16
• Hanukkah to Me of the stories l was told (Friendship) My friend, this is deeply moving…the family memory, the stubborn flame,...
  December 14th, 2025 09:14
• winter palette (Arqios) My friend, this is beautifully observed…the soft blues, the silver...
  December 14th, 2025 09:12
• 2 shots (Isa kemmy) My friend, this is devastating in its clarity…the drinks, the labels,...
  December 14th, 2025 09:11
• Noisy Neighbours (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) LOL! Fight fire with fire! Great Metallica song! Not sure it\'s wise...
  December 14th, 2025 09:09
• Birds (Sorenbarrett) My friend, this is a striking metaphor…the birds already inhabiting the...
  December 14th, 2025 09:07
• The Greatest Commandments - OT/NT Series 15 (Orchidee) Well done, Orchi Excellent this one be! Who glugs in a pineapple under the...
  December 14th, 2025 08:59
• unpanned memories (Isa kemmy) A wonderful write, Isa! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛
  December 14th, 2025 08:57
• Of Men, Mice, Liver, and Love (Thomas W Case) An excellent poem, my friend. Loved the title too!...
  December 13th, 2025 20:36
• Hope امید (Soheil khodaparasti) Beautiful poem on hope, my friend! A fave! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛
  December 13th, 2025 16:37
• Good And Evil (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) George Washington was a freemason too. I\'m wondering, do freemasons do...
  December 13th, 2025 13:17
• lantana in the clearing (Arqios) arqios, this is quietly devastating…the way beauty turns invasive...
  December 13th, 2025 13:01
• The Twelve days Of Christmas (Paul Bell) Paul, this is unhinged in the best way…the escalation is relentless and...
  December 13th, 2025 12:58
• Dream of the rich, nightmare of the poor (Sorenbarrett) Soren, that turn where people become “only mouths to feed” really...
  December 13th, 2025 12:56
• Special Stone - OT/NT Series 14 (Orchidee) Well done, Orchi! I truly do love these and your are on a roll! I\'ll add...
  December 13th, 2025 12:54
• Paned In Shame (Kurt Philip Behm) Truth bomb! 💣🔥 Love this, Kurt! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛
  December 13th, 2025 12:51
• 𝔉𝔩𝔲𝔱𝔱𝔢𝔯𝔦𝔫𝔤 𝔈𝔰𝔰𝔢𝔫𝔠𝔢 (Keyara S Trotman) My friend, this is gentle and atmospheric…the fluttering refrain, the...
  December 13th, 2025 12:49
• My thoughts (NafisaSB) Safina, this reads with real sincerity…the way you trace thought from...
  December 13th, 2025 12:48
• Seems About a Hundred Years Ago (Mutley Ravishes) My friend, this is clever and quietly prophetic…the rush of technology,...
  December 13th, 2025 12:47
• My body and You (NinjaGirl) 🥷, this is stark and unsettling in the right way. Each section tightens...
  December 12th, 2025 15:00
• To Winston (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Powerful write, my friend! Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛
  December 12th, 2025 11:39
• She walked not like many but rose to shine like few (Narayan Gadagkar) Wow! Such people are an inspiration for sure! Well done, my friend!...
  December 12th, 2025 11:38
• The Joy Is in the Cookies Made (Matthew R. Callies) Could not agree more. I love cookies...so naturally, I showed up. Now my...
  December 12th, 2025 11:03
• A childwood unde apartheid (Mistigris19) Dark, sad, raw, and honest! Powerful poem! Also, welcome to MPS!...
  December 12th, 2025 11:01
• Oh Internet, How You Let Me Down! (Friendship) Friendship, this resonates deeply…the disappointment, the grief, the way...
  December 12th, 2025 09:51
• Interesting Write (Keyara S Trotman) Kiki, I felt the encouragement here…the reminder to keep moving even...
  December 12th, 2025 09:51
• on the border of another day (Arqios) My friend, this is quietly powerful…heat insisting, body moving, not to...
  December 12th, 2025 09:50
• The Mark (Sorenbarrett) My friend, this is sharp and unsettling…the careful probing, the hidden...
  December 12th, 2025 09:48
• Pigeon Diaries (Teddy.15) I have said there are 3 basic ways to end up in a poem. 1) Date/Marry a...
  December 12th, 2025 09:45
• Dead Or Living? - OT/NT Series 13 (Orchidee) Excellent hymn poem, Orchi! I prefer dead of course...beats living to hear...
  December 12th, 2025 09:37
• Train Wreck Women and Whiskey Nights (Thomas W Case) Excellent write, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛
  December 12th, 2025 09:35
• Somewhere Near the Far Side of Insight (Neville) I am not sure how I missed this poem, Neville, but late is better than...
  December 12th, 2025 09:33
• ℑ 𝔇𝔬… 𝔇𝔬𝔫\'𝔱 𝔐𝔦𝔰𝔰 𝔗𝔥𝔢 𝔖𝔥𝔬𝔱 (Keyara S Trotman) Kiki, this pours out with real feeling…the drift, the love, the ache. It...
  December 11th, 2025 10:16
• \"Woven of Earth and Heart\" (Friendship) Friendship, this is gorgeous…the tenderness in every material, every...
  December 11th, 2025 10:16
• fractious fractals (Arqios) You have fractious fractals, me...spacious specters! 🤣 All jokes aside,...
  December 11th, 2025 10:13
• Temple Times - OT/NT Series 12 (Orchidee) Orchi, this is handled with real reverence…the Scripture woven into hymn...
  December 11th, 2025 10:11
• Wandering (Sorenbarrett) My friend, this is powerful…the desert bones, the wet sand, the undertow...
  December 11th, 2025 10:08
• Benighted (NinjaGirl) I’ve known that moment…the wanting to clear what’s settled, but not...
  December 11th, 2025 10:07
• a story from my life or my life\'s story? (NinjaGirl) 🥷, this is powerful…raw and brave in every line. The way you move...
  December 11th, 2025 10:05
• Message For Orchidee (Doggerel Dave) Wait, is this a goodbye message, in the form of a \"take care of KP...
  December 10th, 2025 19:15
• New Rhymes (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Chow Yun Fat! Wow! A name I have not heard in quite some time. Great...
  December 10th, 2025 19:00
• Go Home (Coracaodacripta) My friend, this one hits with a cold clarity…the sickness, the winter,...
  December 10th, 2025 12:15
• Family Tree (Teddy.15) Profound, dearest Teddy. This personally hits me this morning. Thank you...
  December 10th, 2025 09:57
• Songbird (Mutley Ravishes) Mutley, this cracked me up…the punch, the bite, the whole bird metaphor...
  December 10th, 2025 09:56
• of shards and fragments (Arqios) My friend, this is beautifully restrained…the desert, the fragments, the...
  December 10th, 2025 09:55
• Ode to the Wild Tresses (Friendship) My friend, this is powerful…the wild tresses as forest, fire, storm, and...
  December 10th, 2025 09:53
• The Chuckle Brothers (Paul Bell) My friend, this is brilliantly unhinged…the gossip spiraling, identities...
  December 10th, 2025 09:52
• When The Heart Witnessed Love\'s Shadows (Salvia.S) Dearest Salvia, my friend, this is tender and heartbreaking…the...
  December 10th, 2025 09:49
• Poignant Procession - OT/NT Series 11 (Orchidee) This is a poignant hymn-poem Orchi!...Unfortunately, a certain clumb P and...
  December 10th, 2025 09:48
• Aisle twenty four (Sorenbarrett) My friend, this is hilarious…the piling wordplay, the frantic searching,...
  December 10th, 2025 09:45
• LIMERICK 147 (Michael Edwards) Another brilliant limerick, my friend! Thank you for sharing and for the...
  December 10th, 2025 09:43
• Sylvia Plath (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) Donnie Darko is a classic! Love that film! As for being sick...oh no!...
  December 10th, 2025 09:42
• ℋℴ𝓌ℯ𝓋ℯ𝓇 𝒳𝒳𝒳 (Keyara S Trotman) My dearest friend, this piece glows…the softness, the finding of beauty,...
  December 10th, 2025 09:39
• In Winter\'s Depths, I Found Summer (Thomas W Case) Thomas, this one hits deep…the way you move from frostbitten nights to...
  December 10th, 2025 09:38
• Lost In The Moment (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) The last one really speaks to me. Too true! Well done on both of these,...
  December 10th, 2025 09:37
• True Tenderness, (Friendship) Friendship, this whole piece breathes in that soft, unrushed way…the...
  December 9th, 2025 11:30
• a leafy bloom’s pledge (Arqios) Arqios, this unfolds with such gentle gravity…a vow carried in breath...
  December 9th, 2025 11:26
• Mouth And Heart? - OT/NT Series 10 (Orchidee) Excellent hymn-poem, Orchi! Loving this series! And...Mr. P is P\'d...
  December 9th, 2025 10:38
• Life\'s schooling (Sorenbarrett) Indeed! Brilliantly short, witty, and well...yeah...it lands with a punch!...
  December 9th, 2025 10:28
• I Did.....! (Doggerel Dave) Dave, witty as always…you take a classic anthem of self-will and tilt it...
  December 8th, 2025 21:16
• Seductions of Identification (Mutley Ravishes) My friend, this reads like a quiet revelation. The seed becomes a...
  December 8th, 2025 21:14
• Copper Taste (NinjaGirl) 🥷, this hits like a pulse in the dark…quiet but relentless. The...
  December 8th, 2025 21:12
• Title: Enough. (Keyara S Trotman) Dearest Kiki, the warmth of your opening lines and the imagery that...
  December 8th, 2025 21:11
• First day on the Job (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) GenXer, the pacing, the quiet transformation, the way Uriah works through...
  December 8th, 2025 21:08
• Revelation (2781) Money rules everything, doesn\'t it? The ending also reminds of Jesus...
  December 8th, 2025 21:06
• Mistaken Steps (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, this hits with real intensity…the way you move from pursuit to...
  December 8th, 2025 20:57
• The Falling Snow (Paul Bell) Paul…I know that feeling of seeing things clearly only at the end. Your...
  December 8th, 2025 20:55
• Mama\'s nasal hair, (Friendship) My friend, the blend of playfulness and reverence hits just right…it...
  December 8th, 2025 20:52
• as absence returns (Arqios) My friend, the shifting light, the drifting anchor, the rise of a wordless...
  December 8th, 2025 20:49
• The Bus Ride (Katie B.) Wonderful, heartbreaking...but truly wonderful poem, Katie....
  December 8th, 2025 20:21
• See, Hear, Perceive - OT/NT Series 9 (Orchidee) Great hymn-poem Orchi! Love it! 😍
  December 8th, 2025 20:19
• See, Hear, Perceive - OT/NT Series 9 (Orchidee) See, Hear, Perceive...glug.
  December 8th, 2025 20:18
• Who\'s the fool (Sorenbarrett) Soren, that image of “a dented can, only half a man” really catches...
  December 8th, 2025 20:17
• For Peter (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) Powerful! Very intimate, haunting. Wonderful poem, my friend!...
  December 8th, 2025 13:09
• Double-Edged (Mutley Ravishes) I mean. 💯 wow, man! Flawless all around. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛
  December 8th, 2025 13:07
• Bad Person (NinjaGirl) You are a beautiful soul, my friend! This poem? Beautiful expression of...
  December 8th, 2025 13:06
• 𝒯𝒽ℴ𝓊𝓈𝒶𝓃𝒹 Ways (Keyara S Trotman) Amen! Agreed! Love this insightful piece, dearest Kiki!...
  December 8th, 2025 13:04
• A glitch (2781) Wonderfully fun read, my friend. And true! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛
  December 8th, 2025 13:02
• When The Night is Still (Katie B.) Katie, this feels so peaceful… the way you let night become a refuge is...
  December 7th, 2025 09:21
• still waters stirred (Arqios) My friend, this hits with real force… that moment where the body falters...
  December 7th, 2025 09:20
• What Happened? (Part.2) (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Good question in the opening line. Fun fact, we all know what happened...
  December 7th, 2025 09:13
• Passing shades (Sorenbarrett) Very powerful metaphor that really needs no explaining. Truth, powerful...
  December 7th, 2025 09:08
• No Flowers - Revisited (Orchidee) Great hymn-poem, Orchi! I was almost afraid to read, given the title. I...
  December 7th, 2025 08:47
• Utopia (NafisaSB) Safina, you shape a full arc from longing to invitation. Each couplet...
  December 7th, 2025 08:46
• Ode to 3 Voices (Thomas W Case) Love the Chris Cornell reference, too! Forgot to mention that! LOL!
  December 7th, 2025 08:44
• Ode to 3 Voices (Thomas W Case) I agree with Melvin...brilliant, mate! Great write!...
  December 7th, 2025 08:43
• Ass liquor both ways. (Friendship) Friendship, this is fierce, lyrical, and painfully honest. First, I love...
  December 7th, 2025 08:16
• Resighted (Kurt Philip Behm) Lovely poem with a great flow, my friend! Great job!...
  December 6th, 2025 13:16
• My Shadow Follows You (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) Oof. I absolutely love this, Hayleigh! Gothic as hell! Totally relate!...
  December 6th, 2025 11:50
• Making the Cut? (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) GenXer, the pacing, the intrigue, the quiet emotional beats…all of it...
  December 6th, 2025 11:03
• Mindful (2781) Valiantstar, this piece moves like someone thinking out loud… layered,...
  December 6th, 2025 11:01
• ℳℯ𝒶𝓈𝓊𝓇ℯ (Keyara S Trotman) Dearest Kiki…there’s a quiet courage running through this piece. You...
  December 6th, 2025 11:00
• no flowers (Arqios) My friend, the poem moves with a quiet ache…personal mourning layered...
  December 6th, 2025 10:59