Comments on community poems by Tristan Robert Lange

• We need to Stop the verbal abuse! (Friendship) This is strong and steady, Friendship…naming the abuse, drawing the...
  September 17th, 2025 13:24
• Bright Moon (Devender Kumar) Well done on this Devender! This short poem says so much with so few...
  September 17th, 2025 13:17
• A Thousand Miles (Fina Elara 🌙 -Petra Patrice) My friend, reading this felt like being right there ...the sun, the crowd,...
  September 17th, 2025 11:14
• Who I am (2781) Reading this felt like tracing my own wrestlings…the battlefield of the...
  September 17th, 2025 11:12
• 𝔊𝔬𝔬𝔡 ℜ𝔦𝔡𝔢 (Keyara S Trotman) My friend, this lingers…it’s raw and confessional, but yes, absolutely...
  September 17th, 2025 11:08
• over-shoulder weather (Arqios) Arqios, this lingers like a ghost at your shoulder…the pilgrim with a...
  September 17th, 2025 11:06
• The Unheard Spoken Word (Tom Dylan) Tom, this lingers…the sting of being unheard, the chatty crowd, that one...
  September 17th, 2025 11:04
• A slow fly (Sorenbarrett) My friend, reading this felt like hearing a story told late into the...
  September 17th, 2025 11:03
• Pompous....F (Rebellion_in_sanity)
  September 17th, 2025 10:50
• Pompous....F (Rebellion_in_sanity) My friend, this had me laughing…the thunderclap critiques, the...
  September 17th, 2025 10:50
• Unsung (Teddy.15) Dearest Teddy, this is tender and tragic…the longing of distant love...
  September 17th, 2025 10:44
• Hate\'s Finality (Tristan Robert Lange) Dearest Teddy, this is tender and tragic…the longing of distant love...
  September 17th, 2025 10:40
• Missings (Mario Benedetti) (Vogelfrei) This is haunting, Vogelfrei…absence rendered in rooftops, ceremonies,...
  September 17th, 2025 10:32
• If you had one thing to tell your inner child, (Friendship) My friend, this one cuts straight to the bone…that warning to the child...
  September 17th, 2025 10:28
• Do You remember (Priya Tomar) This is heartfelt, Priya…the mango tree, the garden, the cyclone, all...
  September 16th, 2025 15:39
• The Enchanted Flower (Fina Elara 🌙 -Petra Patrice) This is charming and strong, Petra…the repeated flower imagery grows...
  September 16th, 2025 15:38
• Illness Ill Advised. (NinjaGirl) A raw and powerful piece. The relentlessness in these lines mirrors the...
  September 16th, 2025 15:37
• Hello & Goodbye (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, this hit me deep…the contradictions coil together like riddles,...
  September 16th, 2025 15:36
• Unknown (Keyara S Trotman) This is tender and vivid at once, my friend…gleams, breeze, evergreen,...
  September 16th, 2025 15:34
• The Interloper (Rebellion_in_sanity) My friend, this one made me grin…the self-mockery laced with sharp wit...
  September 16th, 2025 15:31
• Jesus Christ is Lord (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) This is strong and heartfelt, my friend…faith spoken with clarity, the...
  September 16th, 2025 15:27
• homestead knights (Arqios) That moment of “boots steaming in the cool” stays with me…it grounds...
  September 16th, 2025 15:25
• Suicide an twa (Sorenbarrett) This is dark and devastating, my friend…passion mistaken for compassion,...
  September 16th, 2025 15:23
• Give Us Ya Dough (Orchidee) I think we should let loose the Obi Wans of war on them…and give the...
  September 16th, 2025 15:19
• Making My Own Lemonade (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Love me some lemonade…and this poem. Well done, Shawn!...
  September 16th, 2025 15:17
• Fighting Myself (NinjaGirl) Love assonance! A strong and haunting piece, 🥷. The cadence carries the...
  September 16th, 2025 15:14
• The great word (Vicente Huidobro) (Vogelfrei) My friend, this carried me into something vast…the fragments and echoes...
  September 15th, 2025 13:07
• Positivity ( Haiku ) (Priya Tomar) Lovely haiku and fun watching typed in real time! I could feel your...
  September 15th, 2025 13:06
• The Loss Of Dominion (Kurt Philip Behm) As Soren said, for sure! Well done, Kurt! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛
  September 15th, 2025 13:03
• TV Dinner with Chilled Beer (Rebellion_in_sanity) This is haunting, my friend…from the false warmth of routine greetings...
  September 15th, 2025 13:02
• Lover (2781) This is stark and piercing, my friend…politics as betrayal, love as a...
  September 15th, 2025 13:00
• Moonlight and Shadows a love Beyond Sides (Xoxo) This is heartfelt and powerful, my friend…from the moonlit glow to the...
  September 15th, 2025 12:59
• Satisfy your soul, not society. (Keyara S Trotman) Beautifully spoken, Keyara. The rhythm of soul over society, joy over...
  September 15th, 2025 12:59
• Childhood memories . (Friendship) That image of “tiny boats beneath the velvet night” lingers with...
  September 15th, 2025 12:58
• ochre ledge against folding sky (Arqios) Major fave! This is stunning, arqios…the fractures, the moths, the seam...
  September 15th, 2025 12:56
• Fallen honor (Sorenbarrett) There is so much shit on this statue everything is starting to look a...
  September 15th, 2025 12:53
• This\'ll Cheer Ya Up - Not! (Orchidee) There once was this jolly ol\' chap, Who lived just a bit down the...
  September 15th, 2025 12:43
• Hard And Bitter (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Love this, mate! A fun read! 🌹🖤🕯️🙏🐦‍⬛
  September 15th, 2025 12:39
• Hi & Bye (Fina Elara 🌙 -Petra Patrice) Powerful piece. The repetition of “I earned that shit” anchors it with...
  September 15th, 2025 12:36
• Augury (Teddy.15) Wonderful, dearest Teddy! Love this and all your raven collection I’ve...
  September 15th, 2025 12:35
• Painting the Perfect Picture (Fina Elara 🌙 -Petra Patrice) My friend, this is beautifully done…the pencil and pen imagery grounds...
  September 15th, 2025 12:32
• The encouragement from true friend. (Friendship) You’ve captured the moment where advice becomes action…that rare,...
  September 15th, 2025 12:19
• Haikus (Priya Tomar) Love these haikus, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛
  September 15th, 2025 12:17
• Give Pause to Reflect (Bella Shepard) Yess!!!! Exactly! Wonderfully wise! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛
  September 15th, 2025 12:16
• \"weekend headline remix\" (happy poems weekend suite) (Arqios) Arqios, I love this…doomscroll undone, tulip-bombs planted, a sandwich...
  September 15th, 2025 12:14
• Lost paper thoughts (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this lands heavy—the idea of memory’s assassination by fire is...
  September 15th, 2025 12:12
• My kind of Philosophy (Teddy.15) This is wisdom, pure and simple, dearest Teddy!...
  September 15th, 2025 12:10
• The Games Some People Play… (Doggerel Dave) If it\'s the truth, its the truth. This is the truth.💯 Well done, Dave!...
  September 14th, 2025 17:29
• Bye-Bye Time (Thomas W Case) The poem is so sad...but I am happy the title was...well...not referring...
  September 14th, 2025 01:21
• I Believe In God (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) Your faith exudes as a beacon, a light, for the dark world to see. What a...
  September 14th, 2025 01:18
• Haikus (Priya Tomar) perfect...and I do mean flawlessly perfect, haikus, my friend! Hands down....
  September 14th, 2025 01:12
• And now a joke - argh! (Orchidee) \"If you hate pentameter wotsits, steer clear of Alexandrine or Trochaic...
  September 14th, 2025 01:08
• Little Prince (Fina Elara 🌙 -Petra Patrice) Petra, this piece glows with affection...playful rhymes, pet names, and a...
  September 14th, 2025 01:06
• Particularly Any in Particular (Keyara S Trotman) Keyara, this piece is a glowing midnight neon prayer...playful script,...
  September 14th, 2025 01:04
• To the wait of the darkness (Alejandra Pizarnik) (Vogelfrei) Alejandra, this wrecks me…innocence holding terror, swallows falling,...
  September 14th, 2025 01:01
• of resonances (Arqios) Arqios, this is both hymn and hurricane...voice, marrow, and music forged...
  September 13th, 2025 14:58
• Break-Fast (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) TRUTH..TRUTH. VERITAS. Ja! Sí! Yes! Did I affirm this enough, yet?...
  September 13th, 2025 14:55
• MISSING PHOTOS (Michael Edwards) Michael, this poem breathes with absence...sepia silence, forgotten faces,...
  September 13th, 2025 14:53
• Read (Sorenbarrett) Oh...and very fun to \"Read\". Sorry. I couldn\'t resist!...
  September 13th, 2025 14:51
• Read (Sorenbarrett) My God, just the rhyming alone. Did this just flow out or take some time?...
  September 13th, 2025 14:50
• This Room Has No Crowd (Teddy.15) You know my love for you, your poetry and this collection. This one, dear...
  September 13th, 2025 14:46
• Monkey See, Monkey Do (NinjaGirl) Dearest 🥷, this lands with weight ...he aliens on screen, the kids with...
  September 12th, 2025 14:57
• To Charlie Kirk\'s shooter. (Friendship) While I don’t share Charlie’s politics, I connect with the heart here:...
  September 12th, 2025 14:40
• Haiku (Priya Tomar) Priya, these haiku feel like little windows into stillness...the peacock...
  September 12th, 2025 14:36
• 𝔜𝔬𝔲𝔯 𝔉𝔦𝔯𝔰𝔱 𝔓𝔬𝔢𝔪 (Keyara S Trotman) My friend, this feels like a dream-song...playful, chaotic, yet deeply...
  September 12th, 2025 09:47
• Back At It Again (Fina Elara 🌙 -Petra Patrice) My friend, reading this felt like those moments when you’re face-to-face...
  September 12th, 2025 09:45
• The Open Window (Rebellion_in_sanity) Dear friend, this lingers like a dream-walk...light and breeze as...
  September 12th, 2025 08:55
• foment in the firmament (Arqios) Yes indeed, dearest Rik…I know that charged stillness before the storm,...
  September 12th, 2025 08:41
• Waves against a lighthouse (Sorenbarrett) Soren, powerful work…the ocean of passion, the tides of storm, and the...
  September 12th, 2025 08:40
• Shopping List (Teddy.15) Teddy, beautifully done…an IBAN, the world’s money, and in the end...
  September 12th, 2025 08:38
• Comershells (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) They\'ll really sell you anything if you\'re buying. Fun read my friend.
  September 12th, 2025 08:33
• Argh! No More Poems Yet (Orchidee) But don\'t delete all the spinach I sent you! And don\'t for get about...
  September 12th, 2025 08:31
• Black Swan (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) Remember the film and wow, you do so very well in capturing the mood and...
  September 12th, 2025 08:29
• A day of violence (NinjaGirl) Yes indeed, 🥷…I’ve asked those same questions, how humanity can...
  September 11th, 2025 21:10
• Truth (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) My friend, this is powerful…truth as love, as risk, as faith in action....
  September 11th, 2025 21:08
• Perception(Haiku) (Priya Tomar) Lovely and profound! Wonderful job, Priya! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛
  September 11th, 2025 21:07
• Who\'ll Be Next (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Yes indeed, Kurt…your words capture two poles of human experience:...
  September 11th, 2025 21:05
• Prayers👑 (Keyara S Trotman) Yes indeed, Keyara…I know the power of leaning into grace and asking to...
  September 11th, 2025 21:04
• Snapshot Of Us (Fina Elara 🌙 -Petra Patrice) Petra, beautifully written…snap by snap, waves, light, laughter...all...
  September 11th, 2025 21:03
• Lay Down Your Tools My Darling (Tony Grannell) Tony, this is tender and elegiac…the lullaby becomes a farewell, and...
  September 11th, 2025 21:02
• between shelves (Arqios) Yes indeed, my friend…I’ve walked those aisles myself, feeling the...
  September 11th, 2025 20:59
• Mud on the floor (Sorenbarrett) My friend, powerful work…the cage, the dust, the broken frame, all swept...
  September 11th, 2025 20:57
• Nine Eleven (Doggerel Dave) Innocent lives dying in any way is a terrible tragedy...war certainly one...
  September 11th, 2025 20:50
• In Silence and Disbelief (Teddy.15) Dearest poet and friend, this is powerful and reverent…you captured the...
  September 11th, 2025 20:32
• My own writing (NinjaGirl) 🥷, powerful work…the blood, the cuts, the crimson ink...all showing...
  September 10th, 2025 18:53
• Harvest maiden (Georgia Watson) Georgia, this is mythic and evocative…the cry of Demeter woven into the...
  September 10th, 2025 18:52
• Image DuJour (Kurt Philip Behm) Excellent. Love the rhyme too! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛
  September 10th, 2025 18:49
• The Choice and Chances of Change. (Fina Elara 🌙 -Petra Patrice) Excellent write, my friend! That reflection...“change is born from...
  September 10th, 2025 18:46
• Six (Thomas W Case) Excellent write, Thomas! Love it! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛
  September 10th, 2025 18:44
• Siblings (Haiku) (Priya Tomar) Wonderfully written this Senryu is, my dear friend!...
  September 10th, 2025 18:42
• Meta-verse (2781) Yes, my friend…this is the struggle of our age—creation and...
  September 10th, 2025 18:40
• Of Mongol Blood an\' Kublai Khan (Tony Grannell) Tony, this is masterful…tempest and terror, rescue and tenderness, a...
  September 10th, 2025 18:38
• Journey to My Last Page (Teddy.15) Teddy, this is charming and alive…the muse flits between cloud and...
  September 10th, 2025 18:36
• the river carries her (Arqios) Yes indeed, my dear friend…this carries Faulkner’s ghost, but in your...
  September 10th, 2025 18:34
• Flowering tree (Sorenbarrett) Soren, beautifully written…petals drifting, blossoms fading, fruit...
  September 10th, 2025 18:32
• Dream Clouds Boone Self-Meditation (Keyara S Trotman) Keyara, this is luminous…clouds carrying wishes, forests serene, fantasy...
  September 10th, 2025 18:29
• Coming Back To Poetry (Tom Dylan) Tom, beautifully written…poetry’s return as friend, relief, and...
  September 10th, 2025 18:27
• S(WORDS) (NinjaGirl) Love the word play! 🥷, beautifully done…blood, tears, sword...pain...
  September 10th, 2025 18:25
• For Mary Shelley (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) I am a huge fan of Mary and admire her. My friend, this is powerful…ink,...
  September 10th, 2025 13:57
• Explosive Inspiration (Teddy.15) Truth! 💯 More wise words from a wise soul! A profound and true as it is...
  September 10th, 2025 13:52