Comments on community poems by Tristan Robert Lange

• Slave Child (Tony Grannell) Tony…hell. A child reduced to suffering, then forgotten, is about as...
  September 29th, 2026 20:26
• Know the things that must be answered. (Butter) Butter, this is twisted in a way I mean as a compliment. Love, guilt,...
  September 29th, 2026 20:25
• Double Whammy 2 (Kevin Hulme) Kevin, two groaners for the price of one…and yes, I laughed at both....
  September 29th, 2026 20:25
• Muse (Jabberwocky) Jabberwocky, yep…that realization stings. Sometimes what keeps us...
  September 29th, 2026 20:24
• Urban dissonance (Lorenz) Lorenz, what a strange trip this was…dark streets, music, lost people,...
  September 29th, 2026 20:23
• Staking Its Claim (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, yep…I’m with you on this. A title can absolutely be the thing...
  September 29th, 2026 20:22
• Chilled (Fränz Müller) Fränz, I love how simple this is. Just that little rush of air and...
  September 29th, 2026 20:21
• Mentioning Mercy (Orchidee) Great write, Orchi, but I fear Popeyeus heard “have mercy on us” and...
  September 29th, 2026 20:20
• Miracles Never Cease (Thomas W Case) Thomas…hell, man. No trumpets needed. You’re here, sober, writing,...
  September 29th, 2026 20:15
• First Day of School (Michael A. McGuire) Michael, this one was just fun to read. School, recess, cartoons, bubble...
  September 29th, 2026 20:13
• Sol Attacked from the Region of Cygnus? (Mutley Ravishes) Mutley, there’s a strange tenderness in this one. The blue sky, the...
  September 29th, 2026 20:12
• welcome to canon hall (Arqios) I felt this, arqios. A lot of worthwhile work happens outside the rooms...
  September 29th, 2026 20:10
• The Pocket Colosseum (Dionysian66) Bro…yeah, this got under my skin. The spectacle never shuts off anymore,...
  September 29th, 2026 20:00
• Cold waters (Sorenbarrett) Soren…damn. This felt like watching someone surrounded by everything...
  September 29th, 2026 19:58
• FINGERTIPS (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Norman, that “garret coffin” image stopped me cold. Bleak as hell, and...
  September 29th, 2026 19:57
• Jesus Christ Bled (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) I felt this, Shaun. Especially knowing how seriously you’ve been taking...
  September 29th, 2026 19:56
• Pitch black ⚫ (Ms.divine) Ms. Divine…whew. This feels like watching people get swallowed by the...
  September 29th, 2026 19:50
• Decision (Boot) James, this put me in a place I didn’t particularly want to...
  September 29th, 2026 19:48
• Line in the Surf (Matthew R. Callies) Matthew, I liked the patience in this one. It made me want to sit...
  September 29th, 2026 19:46
• Junction J (Fränz Müller) Fränz, this one made me laugh and grimace at the same time. That’s a...
  September 29th, 2026 19:44
• Oh that Time Could Retreat… (Doggerel Dave) Dave, ouch. There’s something especially ugly about watching love and...
  September 29th, 2026 19:43
• Drill Baby Drill (Kevin Hulme) Kevin, LOL…you reeled me right into that one. I should have known the...
  September 29th, 2026 19:41
• Rise of the False God (Dionysian66) I felt the hell out of this, my friend. Once people start treating...
  September 29th, 2026 19:38
• Hard Love (Tony Grannell) Tony, this made me smile. There’s such a lived-in warmth to it…hard...
  September 29th, 2026 19:36
• Waters of My Torrent (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS) Carlos, this feels very alive to me…not calm, not tidy, just full of...
  September 29th, 2026 19:35
• Rejoice in His Reign (Orchidee) Orchi, Popeyeus Glug Maximus Solus has heard the Psalm and immediately...
  September 29th, 2026 19:33
• When Anger Shadows the Light (Friendship) Whew, Friendship…this feels familiar. Not excusing the anger, not...
  September 29th, 2026 19:31
• To Stand Alone (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, this got me thinking about how hard it is to actually hear one...
  September 29th, 2026 19:29
• Happy Anniversary (Michael A. McGuire) Michael, this is lovely, my friend...a real celebration of staying,...
  September 28th, 2026 07:03
• hate me (Arqios) My friend, there’s something almost prayerful in this without it needing...
  September 28th, 2026 07:02
• Swan Submerged (Teddy.15) Teddy, I really felt this one. There’s something frightening about...
  September 28th, 2026 07:02
• HAUNTING TIME (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Norman, damn...this feels like the kind of night where you hear one creak...
  September 28th, 2026 07:01
• The flame (2781) Valiantstar, this has a wonderfully hands-on feel to it...the kind of work...
  September 28th, 2026 07:00
• Darkness (Sorenbarrett) Soren, oof...this one is all storm clouds and ache. You made the sadness...
  September 28th, 2026 06:59
• VPL (Paul Bell) Paul, this cracked me up. The poor guy is clearly trying to survive the...
  September 28th, 2026 06:58
• Hollywood Is Dead (Part.2) (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Shaun, I hear the frustration in this one...especially with how much of...
  September 28th, 2026 06:46
• The Lady of Ta’if (Matthew R. Callies) Matthew, another history lesson I was happy to take. There’s something...
  September 28th, 2026 06:45
• Upside Down (Sassy Lou) Cassie, damn...this one feels painfully close to the bone. I’m glad the...
  September 28th, 2026 06:44
• Wall Banana (Never be) never be, hahaha...this feels like conceptual art having a nervous...
  September 28th, 2026 06:43
• A flame that drifts in the hollow tides. (Butter) Butter, there’s something eerie moving through this...fire, sea, old...
  September 27th, 2026 16:08
• Misfortune (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, this is brief but heavy. That kind of inherited comparison can rob a...
  September 27th, 2026 16:08
• Breakfast (Jabberwocky) Jabberwocky, this one hurt more than I expected...all that ordinary...
  September 27th, 2026 16:07
• Praise Proclaimed (Orchidee) Orchi, this is properly Divinely Delightful...and I can practically hear...
  September 27th, 2026 16:06
• \"Just be yourself\" (ᴍᴏᴏɴ) Sylva, this one got under my skin, my friend. There is something...
  September 27th, 2026 16:04
• Man in the Room (Thomas W Case) Thomas, damn...this felt quietly hopeful without trying too hard to be....
  September 27th, 2026 16:04
• Predictable Fear (Sigh) (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Shaun, the Run DMC and Jamiroquai bits made me smile, but there’s still...
  September 27th, 2026 16:03
• Peace (Michael A. McGuire) Michael, this has some fire in it...especially that refusal to surrender...
  September 27th, 2026 16:02
• 1 Endless Poem - 1 El poema interminable (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS) Carlos, I enjoyed this very much. There is something peaceful in the way...
  September 27th, 2026 16:01
• Two Mary\'s (Paul Bell) Paul, I lost it at the watertight alibi...and then Linda at the cemetery...
  September 27th, 2026 16:01
• Lost Man Standing (Neville) Oof, Neville...this feels haunted in the most human way. Not by ghosts...
  September 27th, 2026 16:00
• A house divided can not stand (Sorenbarrett) oren, this was brutal to sit with. That kind of division leaves nobody...
  September 27th, 2026 15:59
• AS BELOW (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Norman, this one pulled me right into its darkness. There is something...
  September 27th, 2026 15:58
• The Banner of Colleoni (Matthew R. Callies) Matthew, hahaha...well, that is certainly one way to make sure nobody...
  September 27th, 2026 15:55
• Travel/Travail (Fränz Müller) Fränz, I did not expect the floor to disappear that quickly. 😂 Nicely...
  September 27th, 2026 06:59
• Monkeyman (Never be) never be, hahaha...that went exactly where I hoped it would. 😂 Poor...
  September 27th, 2026 06:58
• The Curriculum of Society’s Cruelty (Dionysian66) Hell yeah, my friend...you really went for the throat with this one. By...
  September 27th, 2026 06:52
• When CERN Opened the Mouth of God (Dionysian66) Dionysian66, good to see you here, my friend. You brought the full...
  September 27th, 2026 06:45
• When does your spaghetti and meatballs become to much? (Friendship) Friendship, as a vegetarian you almost lost me at the meatballs. 😂 But...
  September 27th, 2026 06:43
• With Each Musing (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, I really liked this...that sense that poetry can find its way into...
  September 27th, 2026 06:40
• Once a Soldier (PTSD) (Tony Grannell) Tony, damn…this is brutal. The war may be over, but clearly not for the...
  September 26th, 2026 23:00
• I see (2781) Valiantstar, this made me think. The tension between what we say, what we...
  September 26th, 2026 22:59
• Valentine’s Day Card (Michael A. McGuire) Michael, this made me smile. Sometimes the simplest promises are the ones...
  September 26th, 2026 22:57
• beyond the night (Arqios) Arqios, this gave me a real sense of completion…not just hope, but...
  September 26th, 2026 22:55
• Role model (Jabberwocky) Damn, Jabberwocky…there’s a whole childhood sitting inside those few...
  September 26th, 2026 22:53
• The Don (Sorenbarrett) This cracked me up, Soren. There is nothing quite like fatherly approval...
  September 26th, 2026 22:52
• THE MOMENT SLEEPS (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Norman, I really liked this one. There is a gentleness here that made me...
  September 26th, 2026 22:50
• Bivariably Obvious (Neville) Oof, Neville…there is something painfully intimate about a goodbye both...
  September 26th, 2026 22:49
• Windroom Dreams (Matthew R. Callies) Matthew, this was fun as hell. I could feel the rush of that weightless...
  September 26th, 2026 22:47
• Spiritual Darkness (Sassy Lou) Cassie, I’m sorry you know this kind of loss. Some bonds do not...
  September 26th, 2026 22:46
• A Counterfeit Affection (Sassy Lou) Cassie, this hurt. Sometimes knowing you should walk away does absolutely...
  September 25th, 2026 22:33
• Most High (Never be) never be, haha…this gave me a grin. Such a tiny little jab at modern...
  September 25th, 2026 22:32
• Top Seecret (Mutley Ravishes) Mutley, haha…that is a brutally efficient diagnosis. 😂 Ninety-seven...
  September 25th, 2026 22:32
• Herb your Enthusiasm (Kevin Hulme) Kevin, this is wonderfully silly. Healthy eating has rarely sounded this...
  September 25th, 2026 22:30
• Observation (Doggerel Dave) Ha! Dave, this gave me a grin. Between the hat, the coffin nail, and the...
  September 25th, 2026 22:29
• An Eternity of Chapters (Teddy.15) Dearest Teddy, this made me smile. A great love story really does take a...
  September 25th, 2026 22:26
• Healing takes Time (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) Sharon, yes…healing rarely happens on the schedule we would choose for...
  September 25th, 2026 22:24
• Whack-a-Mole (Syd) Syd, this made me laugh and wince at the same time. Life really can feel...
  September 25th, 2026 22:23
• Prairie Echoes (Kurt Philip Behm) I felt this, Kurt. Some places carry memory in a way that is hard to...
  September 25th, 2026 22:21
• The night of the Orionids (Lorenz) I really enjoyed this, Lorenz. There is so much night-sky wonder in it...
  September 25th, 2026 22:20
• Wait a While (Orchidee) Orchi, I enjoyed this one. Trust, waiting, refuge…all very reassuring,...
  September 25th, 2026 22:19
• Spiral of a Happy dog (Matthew R. Callies) Oh, Matthew…this was fun. Anybody who has lived with a happy dog knows...
  September 25th, 2026 22:18
• Fault Line (Michael A. McGuire) Whew…this went everywhere and somehow that feels appropriate. Faith,...
  September 25th, 2026 22:17
• would you leave a note? (Arqios) Arqios, this hit close to something difficult to name. I’ve known...
  September 25th, 2026 22:14
• RECONSIDER (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Norman, I felt the loneliness in this one. Sometimes one word really is...
  September 25th, 2026 22:12
• Children (Sorenbarrett) Soren, I felt the warning in this. Raising something does not mean you get...
  September 25th, 2026 22:12
• 2026 (2781) Valiantstar, I’m with you on this one. There is real comfort in...
  September 24th, 2026 23:39
• Time’s Estranged (Caveman) Caveman, this one stopped me. That sense of having already died somehow...
  September 24th, 2026 23:31
• Said Juliet One Day (Kevin Hulme) Oh, this is fun, Kevin. By the end I was imagining an entire anti-leaping...
  September 24th, 2026 23:30
• Don\'t know (ᴍᴏᴏɴ) Oof, Sylva. I really wanted to reach through the screen and tell you to...
  September 24th, 2026 23:28
• Protected People (Orchidee) Orchi, I see what you’re doing here…while I’ve got murderers,...
  September 24th, 2026 23:25
• Ramblings (Michael A. McGuire) Michael, this is gloriously unhinged in the best way. You sound like...
  September 24th, 2026 23:21
• You were my best friend .why? (Friendship) Damn, Friendship…I’m sorry you’ve had reason to write from this...
  September 24th, 2026 23:20
• Solace, revisited (Arqios) Oh, I loved this, arqios. Quiet without loneliness is such a different...
  September 24th, 2026 23:19
• Lost (Sorenbarrett) Soren, I’ve thought about this before too…all the people history never...
  September 24th, 2026 23:18
• NONE TO BLAME (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Powerful, Norman...there’s no accusation here, just the ache of...
  September 24th, 2026 00:58
• The Long Crawl of Hugh Glass (Matthew R. Callies) Holy wow, Matthew...Hugh Glass’s refusal to die remains almost...
  September 24th, 2026 00:57
• As No one Came Back (Kevin Hulme) Kevin, you went straight into one of the hardest questions any of us...
  September 24th, 2026 00:55
• The Time Had Come (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, this hit me hard...getting older always feels distant until suddenly...
  September 24th, 2026 00:54
• Trusting Times (Orchidee) Strong Scripture and a fitting tune, Orchi...meanwhile, Popeyeus Glug...
  September 24th, 2026 00:51
• The monsters that live among us. (Friendship) Powerful, Friendship...the scariest monsters don’t need disguises...
  September 24th, 2026 00:47