Comments on community poems by Tristan Robert Lange

• 𝕼𝔲𝔢𝔢𝔫 𝔅𝔢𝔢\'𝔰 𝔖𝔱𝔦𝔫𝔤 (Keyara S Trotman) Kiki, Queen Bee’s Sting is pure ritual glam...poison and perfume in...
  October 31st, 2025 20:16
• Let Me Write (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) LET ME WRITE. A-friggin\'-men! Man, I cannot tell you how much I needed to...
  October 31st, 2025 20:11
• Another Day of Solitude (ADarkerMind) Melvin, this is delirious and divine... a fever dream stitched with...
  October 31st, 2025 20:09
• What Darkness Stole (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Milton and all. Well done, Kurt. Loved this! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛
  October 31st, 2025 20:07
• Halloween (2781) Friend, this reads like revelation and lament entwined. A scorched prayer...
  October 31st, 2025 08:28
• closing the distance (Arqios) Rik, what a quiet hymn to gratitude...grounded, tender, and wise. You...
  October 31st, 2025 08:26
• Solo climbing (Sorenbarrett) My friend, I’ve felt that too…that moment when control gives way, and...
  October 31st, 2025 08:25
• ODD AND ODDER (3) (Michael Edwards) Ooh. Neat on the paintings travels! I love it...and I must say, I love...
  October 31st, 2025 08:09
• Phoe-Nix (Mutley Ravishes) Mutley, what a short burst of cosmic wonder...cryptic, rhythmic, and...
  October 31st, 2025 08:07
• 𝔗𝔞𝔦𝔫𝔱𝔢𝔡 𝔇𝔬 𝔜𝔬𝔲𝔯 𝔖𝔢𝔩𝔣 𝔞 𝔉𝔞𝔳𝔬𝔯 (𝔏.𝔬.𝔳.𝔢) (Keyara S Trotman) My friend, I can almost smell the syrup and spark through the...
  October 31st, 2025 08:06
• The Inquiry (Paul Bell) Paul, this is master-class storytelling. Pacing, voice, and irony all in...
  October 31st, 2025 08:03
• License Revoked (+2) (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, these three pieces together burn with wit and precision…each one a...
  October 31st, 2025 08:01
• The last letter (Lore) Lore, this is heartbreak written with grace. It feels like a whisper into...
  October 31st, 2025 07:59
• V.I.P. (Arqios) My friend, I’ve seen that same varnish at work…the way power cloaks...
  October 31st, 2025 07:48
• Modern Philosophy (Teddy.15) Dearest Teddy, this is pure resonance. A love song, a lament, and a quiet...
  October 31st, 2025 07:47
• Tree Soul (Teddy.15) Teddy, this piece feels like a prayer whispered to the forest. It’s...
  October 31st, 2025 07:45
• Rain (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this reads like nature’s lullaby...gentle, protective, and full...
  October 31st, 2025 07:43
• Walking in the Dark (Thomas W Case) Excellent job, Thomas! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛
  October 29th, 2025 21:03
• The Ghost of Babel (Tristan Robert Lange) Hahaha....Mutley. What can I say? I\'m a weirdo. Beside that, I...
  October 29th, 2025 20:54
• A Final Word (Keyara S Trotman) Kiki, this glows with curiosity and confidence. The fonts, emojis, and...
  October 29th, 2025 20:38
• Number Four Lipow Strasse (Neville) Neville, my friend, this poem lingers like smoke from Café...
  October 29th, 2025 20:34
• Hear Ye, Hear Ye..... (Cheeky Missy) Missy, your kitchen is like a chapel. Between brie, bacon, and Barry’s,...
  October 29th, 2025 20:32
• Mad Interlude No.948735272 (Orchidee) Orchi, this reads like a comic soliloquy from some cosmic play. It’s...
  October 29th, 2025 20:28
• Tomato Tomatto (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, this piece captures the peril of charisma…how easily the light...
  October 29th, 2025 20:22
• Circles on the sand (Victor Bolshov) Yes, my friend, I have! That image, “Sand will crack like concrete,...
  October 29th, 2025 20:21
• \"the inviolable\" (Arqios) Arqios, this piece is an invocation to hold steady amid collapse. Sparse,...
  October 29th, 2025 09:27
• ODD AND ODDER (2) (Michael Edwards) Vowel movements! I LOVE IT and I love this poem! Excellent job, my friend!...
  October 29th, 2025 09:26
• Enlightenment (Sorenbarrett) Ooh! First comment! Yay! I don\'t mean this in the religious sense, but my...
  October 29th, 2025 09:25
• Solar Wrexus (Mutley Ravishes) Mutley, this is wild brilliance…the dragon as both myth and metaphor for...
  October 29th, 2025 09:21
• Living Souls (Paul Bell) Paul, this reads like a short film...tight dialogue, eerie rhythm, and a...
  October 28th, 2025 18:29
• THE GHOST OF YELLOW-JOHN MATTHEWS (David Welch) David, this is such a fun, full-circle tale...classic sea shanty spirit...
  October 28th, 2025 18:27
• when we thought ourselves lost (Arqios) Rik, this is luminous…quiet revelation in motion. It reads like faith...
  October 28th, 2025 07:47
• ODD AND ODDER (1) (Michael Edwards) Great wordplay my friend! Love it! Can\'t wait to follow the series....
  October 28th, 2025 07:46
• Shine of Overdraft (Rebellion_in_sanity) My friend, I’ve felt that same manufactured rhythm…doing everything...
  October 28th, 2025 07:45
• Goodbye (Sorenbarrett) My condolences, dear friend. This piece carries the weight of love...
  October 28th, 2025 07:44
• Entertwined (Keyara S Trotman) Kiki, this one feels like a drifting heartbeat…soft, reflective, almost...
  October 28th, 2025 07:41
• 𝒞ℴ𝓂ℯ𝓈 𝒜𝓃ℴ𝓉𝒽ℯ𝓇 𝒦𝒾𝓈𝓈 (Keyara S Trotman) My friend, I feel the joy and self-acceptance pulsing through this. Love...
  October 27th, 2025 18:07
• Lord Of Life (Orchidee) Great write, Orchi! When Popeye (dang it, there he is again!) says that he...
  October 27th, 2025 18:05
• ........ (Isa kemmy) Yay! First comment!!! That image—“glued on bitumen”—stuck with me....
  October 27th, 2025 09:48
• Popeye\'s Part (Tristan Robert Lange) Thank you Devender and Missy for your faves. Much appreciated my friends!
  October 27th, 2025 09:40
• 1000 plus one (Rhmn_7) This one burns with resilience…a battle hymn of the spirit. It’s raw,...
  October 27th, 2025 09:26
• dance in the wake (Arqios) You are most welcome, my friend
  October 27th, 2025 09:24
• first light (Arqios) My friend, this is gentle grace in motion…a meditation of breath and...
  October 27th, 2025 09:16
• Tucker’s Meeting (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) GenXer, this feels heartfelt and grounded…a snapshot of care, faith, and...
  October 27th, 2025 09:15
• Epiphany (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Read and read and still need to read. Amen to that! Wonderful write,...
  October 27th, 2025 09:14
• Reaper (Sorenbarrett) Ha! Perfection in my humble opinion. Loved this my friend!...
  October 27th, 2025 09:12
• Another Day of Solitude (ADarkerMind) My friend, I’ve missed seeing your voice here. You write with a...
  October 27th, 2025 09:11
• Ghoulfriend (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) These lyrics have such a haunting pulse...I’d love to hear how they...
  October 27th, 2025 09:08
• The Dark’s Honest Contract (Isa kemmy) Isa, this piece breathes serenity. The rhythm, the natural imagery, the...
  October 27th, 2025 09:05
• Time Walks Away Like a Little Gray Spider (Thomas W Case) Thomas, this cuts straight through…no dressing, no disguise. Grief laid...
  October 27th, 2025 09:03
• The Coming Of The Night (+2) (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, these three pieces together feel like a triptych of soul and...
  October 27th, 2025 09:01
• Rejoicing Refreshment (Orchidee) Great hymn-poem, Orchi! Rejoicing refreshment? Where\'s the Spinach...
  October 27th, 2025 09:00
• Have you ever met anyone who is so shallow ? (Friendship) Friendship, this hit deep…you’ve given voice to that hollow ache of...
  October 27th, 2025 08:54
• herd of words (Arqios) Reading this felt like running with it myself…each poet part of...
  October 27th, 2025 08:53
• The Mural (Paul Bell) Paul, this one’s a riot with a pulse. The humor bites, the sadness...
  October 27th, 2025 08:51
• Corn stalker (Sorenbarrett) Soren, chilling and masterful…folklore, vengeance, and consequence all...
  October 26th, 2025 08:04
• It\'s Time For Payback (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Soical commentary with a prophetic edge. My cup of tea! Love this Shawn!...
  October 26th, 2025 08:03
• The Intricate Lattice. (Friendship) My friend, this is powerful…not just a poem but a reclamation. You make...
  October 25th, 2025 10:40
• “Nevertheless you said” (Keyara S Trotman) My friend, this feels like a secret whispered between worlds…half prose,...
  October 25th, 2025 10:35
• Saviour.. (September 21st, 2025) (Doggerel Dave) Surely, Shirley will know! As for me, I surely don\'t know Shirley...or do...
  October 25th, 2025 10:24
• Soft dreams (Sorenbarrett) My friend, I’ve walked that same inner weather…rain that doesn’t...
  October 25th, 2025 10:20
• Prayer Piece (Orchidee) Orchi, somehow you keep turning scripture into seaside revival…Ol’ Tom...
  October 25th, 2025 09:53
• You cannot fix what\'s broken! (Friendship) Friendship, heartbreaking and beautiful…you’ve turned despair into...
  October 24th, 2025 20:06
• Societal Morality  (Rebellion_in_sanity) My friend, I’ve wrestled with that same conflict…truth or performance,...
  October 24th, 2025 20:04
• workday residue (Arqios) My friend, haunting in its restraint…the scaffolding, the receipts, the...
  October 24th, 2025 08:13
• The Thing (Paul Bell) Paul, this hit perfectly…the quiet build, the flicker, the way the story...
  October 24th, 2025 08:10
• Halloween (Sorenbarrett) Soren, love this…faith, folklore, and a flicker of fear braided...
  October 24th, 2025 08:09
• Comforter Consolings (Orchidee) Orchi, blessed be this aquatic gospel…Ol’ Tom\'s too tired to swim,...
  October 24th, 2025 08:03
• The Heaviness Of Halloween (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Well written Shawn. Philosophically/Theologically, what would the light be...
  October 24th, 2025 07:53
• a rare sight (NafisaSB) Safina, gentle and mournful all at once…that vision of sparrows and...
  October 24th, 2025 07:45
• John and Jane Adventure (Poetic Licence) Tobani, I see exactly what you were going for here, my friend ...a full-on...
  October 23rd, 2025 19:00
• The Shroud Of Darkness (+2) (Kurt Philip Behm) Friend, this triptych reads like America’s unholy trinity...fame,...
  October 23rd, 2025 18:56
• 𝒞𝒶𝓂ℯ 𝒲𝒾𝓉𝒽 𝒩ℴ 𝒮𝓅𝒶𝒸ℯ 𝒻ℴ𝓇 𝒶 𝒯𝒾𝓉𝓁ℯ (Keyara S Trotman) Kiki, what a digital reliquary...half poem, half incantation. “Heaven...
  October 23rd, 2025 18:54
• Devon Pan (Arqios) This is poetry’s own origin story...Pan’s breath reborn in modern...
  October 23rd, 2025 18:50
• Tyrant (Sorenbarrett) Soren, “Tyrant” moves like thunder with a conscience...nature, God,...
  October 23rd, 2025 18:47
• Shelter Security (Orchidee) Orchi, my friend… this one rests easy on the spirit. “Lead me to the...
  October 23rd, 2025 18:41
• 80s Action (Part.2) (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Idk, there were these whole subcultures of music back then Glam and Hair...
  October 23rd, 2025 18:35
• With Only Nine Trees Left (Neville) Neville, my friend… brutal truth beautifully spoken. “Only nine trees...
  October 23rd, 2025 18:29
• Tomorrow is no promise. (Friendship) Friendship, this one glows from within. “Tomorrow is a hazy shore” and...
  October 23rd, 2025 18:26
• Trusted Feathers (Teddy.15) A wonderful introduction to your beautiful Raven collection, indeed,...
  October 22nd, 2025 20:37
• 𝒜𝓈 𝒾𝓉𝓈 𝓌𝓇𝒾𝓉𝓉ℯ𝓃: ℳ𝒶𝓁𝒾ℊ𝓃𝒶𝓃𝓉 ℰ𝓃𝒸𝓇𝓎𝓅𝓉ℯ𝒹 (Keyara S Trotman) This is alchemy on the page...grief, risk, and lust blending into a...
  October 22nd, 2025 20:35
• To fly, is to fall (Georgia Watson) This reads like a confession echoing off canyon walls...failure reframed...
  October 22nd, 2025 20:33
• Diamonds (Paul Bell) This is seduction as ceremony...diamonds not just as adornment, but as...
  October 22nd, 2025 20:31
• In My Crosshairs (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Well, too civilized looking to be a politician at least. He\'s a bit...
  October 22nd, 2025 20:30
• Insomnia of life (Sorenbarrett) This is a poem of beautiful unease. Sleep and death blur into one gentle...
  October 22nd, 2025 20:26
• Fret Not Nor Fear (Orchidee) Another beautiful hymn, Orchi...meanwhile, in the back pew, Scooby’s...
  October 22nd, 2025 20:22
• ~~~~~~~~𝔍𝔲𝔰𝔱 𝔱𝔬 (𝕼𝔲𝔬𝔱𝔢) \"𝔅𝔢𝔰𝔱 --- 𝔖𝔢𝔩𝔩𝔦𝔫𝔤\" (Keyara S Trotman) Kiki, this feels like a spell in motion…half love letter, half lightning...
  October 22nd, 2025 13:52
• English Sunset (Georgia Watson) This reads like a sunset caught mid-breath…tender, luminous, and...
  October 22nd, 2025 13:49
• Paper sits (Caring dove) Excellent write, my friend. Great metaphor! 🖤🙏
  October 22nd, 2025 13:47
• Why Nothing Falls Together (Neville) That phrase...“a union occurs somewhere between my memories, perceptions...
  October 21st, 2025 07:22
• weapons of mass distraction (Arqios) This is prophecy dressed in poetry. You hold up a mirror and make us see...
  October 21st, 2025 07:21
• The Crows (Paul Bell) This reads like a gothic echo...two mourners, one presence, grief as...
  October 21st, 2025 07:20
• Scattered (Sorenbarrett) My friend, I’ve seen how time always exhumes what’s been hidden. You...
  October 21st, 2025 07:18
• Focus On Feet (Orchidee) A touching hymn-poem, Orchi...faithful and grounded. Then again, if Popeye...
  October 21st, 2025 07:16
• Bottling It (Tom Dylan) That image...“like Sangria, or the local cerveza”...is perfect. It...
  October 21st, 2025 07:13
• Unchanged (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) My friend, I know that tug-of-war between needing help and needing to...
  October 21st, 2025 07:11
• 𝒟ℯ𝓈𝒸𝒾𝓅𝓁ℯ𝓈𝒽𝒾𝓅 (Keyara S Trotman) This feels both prayer and commission...steady, heartfelt, and true. You...
  October 21st, 2025 07:10
• Answer me! (NinjaGirl) This piece is prayer stripped to bone. No artifice, no sermon…just the...
  October 20th, 2025 21:40
• Until Heaven (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) This is devotion wrapped in dread, a prayer that doesn’t flinch. You...
  October 20th, 2025 10:57
• dance in the wake (Arqios) Arqios, this is breathtaking…grief and grace woven together until...
  October 20th, 2025 10:55