Comments on community poems by Tristan Robert Lange
- New Thunder (Kurt Philip Behm)
Kurt, that image of the violin wrapped in thunder is excellet… it brings...
April 2nd, 2026 09:04 - Obedience (2781)
Valiantstar, this carries real conviction… it doesn’t hesitate, it...
April 2nd, 2026 09:03 - Born to Herd (Matthew R. Callies)
Matthew, that image of the “were-wolf of winter” is what stays with...
April 2nd, 2026 09:02 - I Know This Place (Katie B.)
Katie, reading this felt like touching that place we all recognize but...
April 2nd, 2026 09:01 - thundering in the mountains (Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏)
Demar, I’ve felt that kind of question before… standing in something...
April 2nd, 2026 08:59 - English Weather Is Always Awful (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Shaun, I’ve had days like this where the weather just won’t let up…...
April 2nd, 2026 08:57 - His Love will Pull You Through (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀)
Amen. God\'s love will! Sharon, there’s a clear strength in this…...
April 2nd, 2026 08:56 - keeping peace (Arqios)
arqios, reading this felt like sitting in that place where the world keeps...
April 2nd, 2026 08:54 - White, blue, black (Sorenbarrett)
Soren, reading this felt like being suspended in a place I’ve known…...
April 2nd, 2026 08:53 - Make Use of the Hours (Efrain Cajar)
Efrain, there’s a steadiness here that lingers… especially in how you...
April 2nd, 2026 08:51 - Through a photograph (Allie561)
Allie, there’s a weight in this that stays with me… especially in how...
April 2nd, 2026 08:49 - I’m done asking questions (Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏)
Why?
April 1st, 2026 17:40 - Serene Service (Orchidee)
Orchi, this always hits me…the idea that service isn’t optional,...
April 1st, 2026 17:38 - Troubled Times (Orchidee)
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April 1st, 2026 15:07
Orchi, this is beautifully...
April 1st, 2026 17:34 - Reason Kneels (Kurt Philip Behm)
Kurt, this feels like that space where thinking can only take you so...
April 1st, 2026 17:30 - भारत का भविष्य (Waiting for Silence)
Vimal, this hits with a heavy truth…there’s a sorrow here that...
April 1st, 2026 17:29 - Trickster\'s Morning (Matthew R. Callies)
Matthew, this reminds me of how quickly those moments pass…one second...
April 1st, 2026 17:28 - REFULGENT (Operetta) ♬ (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS)
Carlos, this feels luminous from start to finish…there’s a steady...
April 1st, 2026 17:27 - Believable Eyes (Katie B.)
Katie, this builds a clear, grounded image…strength, devotion, presence,...
April 1st, 2026 17:26 - she’s given me (Arqios)
My friend, loved the she series. This one carries that fragile balance...
April 1st, 2026 17:25 - Every Which Way But Dinosaur (Mutley Ravishes)
Mutley, this carries that playful, offbeat energy…the mix of old-world...
April 1st, 2026 17:23 - A Man Out Of Time? (Part.2) (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Shaun, this carries a lot of direct energy…a pushback against feeling...
April 1st, 2026 17:16 - I FELT SORRY (Michael Edwards)
Michael, this made me laugh…that sharp turn into humor lands clean and...
April 1st, 2026 17:15 - Dear, _ _ _ _ _ _, (Georgia Watson)
This really sticks, Gerogia. That image of a “drag path” from then to...
April 1st, 2026 17:14 - A boy “loves” you (Marissa)
Marissa, I’ve seen how voices can linger…how they echo long after the...
April 1st, 2026 17:12 - You can do it (Allie561)
Allie, I’ve had days like this…where you just need someone to remind...
April 1st, 2026 17:11 - Stepping Stones (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Kurt, there’s a restless, almost hypnotic energy running through...
April 1st, 2026 17:00 - To be or not to bee (Sorenbarrett)
Sore, love this. That image of the wasp on a deserted nest really locks it...
April 1st, 2026 14:17 - Do you have your passport? (Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏)
What one has vs. what one needs...and whether it matters at all. Love this...
April 1st, 2026 14:14 - she asks of me (Arqios)
Arqios, this carries a gentle nostalgia, but it’s more than...
March 31st, 2026 09:32 - Tell Us The Truth (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Shaun, that “Pick and Mix” line really stands out. It flips something...
March 31st, 2026 09:31 - I knew the man (Sorenbarrett)
Soren, this hits hard…there’s no distance here, no softening. It comes...
March 31st, 2026 09:30 - The Principle of Sameness (Neville)
Neville, this hit me hard…there’s a quiet unease running through it...
March 31st, 2026 09:28 - Off to the dentist I go (Allie561)
Allie, this made me smile…there’s such a light, honest humor running...
March 31st, 2026 09:27 - Gethsemane Gazing (Orchidee)
Orchi, this carries real reverence…you let the moment breathe without...
March 31st, 2026 09:26 - Cloistered Within (Kurt Philip Behm)
Kurt, that “cloistered within me”…that’s the line that really...
March 30th, 2026 10:11 - Maybe, one day, I’ll be loved. (Georgia Watson)
Georgia, there’s a real vulnerability in this that comes through...
March 30th, 2026 10:11 - Silent Hunt (Matthew R. Callies)
Matthew, this hits clean…there’s a tight, controlled intensity in it...
March 30th, 2026 10:09 - Together (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀)
Sharon, that question “are you sure?” after “we’re in this...
March 30th, 2026 10:09 - What is a de ja vu? (Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏)
Wow. Profound and deep. A mighty fine senryu, my friend. Well done!...
March 30th, 2026 10:08 - Amendment (Doggerel Dave)
Dave, that turn into “No Mad Kings”…that’s the line that really...
March 30th, 2026 10:07 - Wonder (Katie B.)
Katie, this hit me right away…there’s a living energy in it that moves...
March 30th, 2026 10:06 - Sparrow resting (Caring dove)
My friend, there’s a quiet kindness running through this…from the cups...
March 30th, 2026 10:04 - WAVES / OLAS ♪ (Operetta 5) (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS)
Carlos, there’s a continuous flow here that really lands…moving from...
March 30th, 2026 10:03 - antebellum (before the war) (Arqios)
Arqios, that moth hitting the streetlight once and moving on…that’s...
March 30th, 2026 10:02 - Who I Am (Holy Spirit Bomb) (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Shaun, there’s a clear throughline of transformation here…moving from...
March 30th, 2026 10:02 - Dreams of yesterday (Sorenbarrett)
Soren, I’ve felt that pull before…where sleep becomes the only place...
March 30th, 2026 10:01 - Music in the Schools (Efrain Cajar)
Efrain, this is impressive…placing music inside the classroom like this...
March 30th, 2026 10:00 - On Reading Awareness (Efrain Cajar)
Efrain, there’s a real clarity and purpose running through this that...
March 30th, 2026 09:57 - Scream (Vanna)
Vanna, there’s a relentless energy in this that really carries through....
March 30th, 2026 09:56 - Can a Friend Turn Good? (Friendship)
Friendship, there’s a steady grace in this that really lands. The way...
March 30th, 2026 09:46 - Life Is Full of Challenges (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀)
Sharon, there’s a grounded honesty in this that really lands. The way...
March 30th, 2026 09:43 - I hope I never see them again. (Georgia Watson)
Georgia, there’s a real strength in this…you’re owning what happened...
March 30th, 2026 09:14 - More please (Allie561)
Been there, done that! 🤣 Well done on this my friend....
March 30th, 2026 09:12 - Simon\'s Sifting (Orchidee)
Orchi, there’s a real steadiness to this…you carry the weight of the...
March 30th, 2026 09:11 - The Relighting (Kurt Philip Behm)
Kurt, this hit me right away…there’s a sincerity here that feels open...
March 29th, 2026 09:50 - Sonnet to Rebirth (Thomas W Case)
Excellent write, Thomas! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 29th, 2026 09:50 - trans allegheny lunatic asylum (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱)
Hayleigh, there’s a haunting calm in this that really lingers. The dust,...
March 29th, 2026 09:49 - It\'s you (2781)
Valiantstar, this carries a strong sense of devotion…there’s a...
March 29th, 2026 09:47 - Two Love Tropes with a Metaphor Twist (Jerry Reynolds)
Jerry, there’s a strong contrast here that really lands. The first piece...
March 29th, 2026 09:46 - Who Rules You (Katie B.)
Katie, that “pool of obligations / vat of expectations”…that’s the...
March 29th, 2026 09:45 - My Great Oak (Teddy.15)
Dearest Teddy, this is beautiful…there’s such a steady, heartfelt...
March 29th, 2026 09:44 - hail to embark (Arqios)
Arqios, there’s a quiet weight in this that really lingers. That...
March 29th, 2026 09:43 - AILES DE L’ÂME 𝄞 Operetta (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS)
Carlos, this is beautiful…there’s a calm, uplifting current running...
March 29th, 2026 09:43 - Hidden Boss (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Shaun, there’s a strong tension running through this…rooted,...
March 29th, 2026 09:42 - Muladhara Deliveries (Mutley Ravishes)
Mutley, this hit me hard…there’s a tension in it that feels...
March 29th, 2026 09:39 - Stories (Sorenbarrett)
Soren, there’s a sharp edge running through this that I really respect....
March 29th, 2026 09:38 - IF I AM (Michael Edwards)
Michael, there’s something deceptively simple here that carries real...
March 29th, 2026 09:37 - Luther v. Borden (Matthew R. Callies)
Matthew, that refrain is what stays with me…“Who claims the right to...
March 29th, 2026 09:36 - what is satisfaction? (Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏)
Yeah. This tracks and hits exactly as it should. Bravo!...
March 29th, 2026 09:35 - They say no kings, but what about queens? (Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏)
Ha! I had Freddy Mercury and Queen in mind at first when I saw the title...
March 29th, 2026 09:34 - Palms of Peace (Orchidee)
Beautiful, Orchi! Happy gluggy Week.
😤
Now...Popeye...this is...
March 29th, 2026 09:27 - Saturday Threesome (Kurt Philip Behm)
Kurt, this hits with a dark, steady weight…each piece feels like it’s...
March 28th, 2026 11:40 - Unheard (Vanna)
Vanna, this comes through loud and urgent…like a chant that refuses to...
March 28th, 2026 11:38 - Losing it (2781)
Valiantstar, this has a sharp, almost playful edge to it…like it’s...
March 28th, 2026 11:37 - Angered (Mutley Ravishes)
Mutley, this carries a quiet tension that builds in just a few...
March 28th, 2026 11:36 - WINGS OF THE SOUL - Operetta ♬ (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS)
Carlos, this feels expansive…like something meant to be breathed in...
March 28th, 2026 11:35 - Jay-Z: Damage Control (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Reading this feels like those moments where trust in public figures just...
March 28th, 2026 11:33 - May it be Spoken (Katie B.)
Katie, this feels like a call spoken with purpose…steady, intentional,...
March 28th, 2026 11:31 - this is not goodbye (Arqios)
Reading this felt like those stretches where words just don’t come…not...
March 28th, 2026 11:31 - Haiku (an ode to the sky) (Teddy.15)
That picture is serene...and no, not the actual picture (though it is);...
March 28th, 2026 11:28 - Ritual (Sorenbarrett)
Love this Soren! “altars of enamel” is the line that locks in for me....
March 28th, 2026 11:26 - Ode to James Tolkan (From a Slacker) (Matthew R. Callies)
My friend, this balances humor and tribute really well…you let that...
March 28th, 2026 11:17 - Night time tales (NafisaSB)
Safina, this feels like slipping into the quiet pulse of night…there’s...
March 28th, 2026 11:15 - Reasons (Allie561)
Allie, this hits with that blunt, quiet emptiness…like you’re staring...
March 28th, 2026 11:15 - Slaughter (Vanna)
Vanna, there’s real force in this…a repeated cry that builds and...
March 28th, 2026 11:14 - When the Heart Knits Its Own Wound (Friendship)
Friendship, this hit me hard…there’s such a quiet ache here that never...
March 28th, 2026 11:13 - Sound Bites 3-27-2026 (Kurt Philip Behm)
Kurt, this carries real weight…short forms, but nothing light about...
March 28th, 2026 11:12 - Sauronic (Mutley Ravishes)
Mutley, this blends confrontation and reflection… the voice, the...
March 27th, 2026 09:37 - Crossroads (Katie B.)
Katie, “I gave myself away / But I buy myself back” stands out… that...
March 27th, 2026 09:34 - soul-trained (Arqios)
arqios, this holds space in a way that feels real… the repetition, the...
March 27th, 2026 09:34 - Trusting Truly (Orchidee)
Orchi, this holds both reverence and rhythm… it walks like a hymn but...
March 27th, 2026 09:33 - Sorry God (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Shaun, this speaks to that place where you know forgiveness is there…...
March 27th, 2026 09:21 - Rich men (Sorenbarrett)
Soren, this balances allure and critique… the atmosphere draws you in,...
March 27th, 2026 09:19 - An Ode to the Great Moon (Teddy.15)
Teddy, “night time’s orchestra” stands out… that phrase carries...
March 27th, 2026 09:16 - Vending Machine Vendetta (Matthew R. Callies)
Matthew, this speaks to that unease when trust is broken at a fundamental...
March 27th, 2026 09:13 - The Theatre (Efrain Cajar)
Efrain, this hit me hard… there’s a reverence running through this...
March 27th, 2026 09:12 - The Truth of the Matter (Kevin Hulme)
Kevin, this carries a hard truth… the idea that absence might bring...
March 27th, 2026 09:11 - Fall (Vanna)
Vanna, this holds that conflict between control and longing… what begins...
March 27th, 2026 09:06 - Hidden Like Rubbish (Friendship)
Friendship, this carries both hurt and resolve… what’s hidden and...
March 27th, 2026 09:05
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