Comments on community poems by Tristan Robert Lange

• The Cat Woman (Paul Bell) Paul, this is brilliantly restrained storytelling. The pacing, the...
  May 6th, 2026 08:03
• and when I’m hurt (Demar Desu) “I guess I’ll be fine…” really stayed with me, Demar. That...
  May 6th, 2026 08:03
• Pools (Sorenbarrett) Soren, I really love the philosophical undercurrent running through this...
  May 6th, 2026 08:02
• Beer Garden Blues (8 Months Sober) (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) For me too, Shaun, for me too. There’s a brutal honesty in this that...
  May 6th, 2026 08:00
• Gone With a Smile (Teddy.15) Dearest Teddy, this carries real heart from beginning to end. I especially...
  May 6th, 2026 07:58
• खुश मैं रहता हूँ   (Waiting for Silence) “इक बार कभी तो देखोगी / ये सोच...
  May 6th, 2026 07:57
• AN EMPTY ROOM (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) “The marks where pictures hung” really stayed with me, Norman. Such a...
  May 6th, 2026 07:56
• Musings on a Sowbug (Kevin Hulme) Kevin, this is fantastic honestly...philosophical, playful, and strangely...
  May 6th, 2026 07:55
• Goodbye To Love (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, there’s such emotional range moving through these...
  May 6th, 2026 07:54
• The Lost Soul in the Still Silence (Salvia.S) “What you were looking for — / It was the lost heart you finally...
  May 6th, 2026 07:53
• The envelope (Lorenz) Lorenz, this feels dreamlike and haunted all at once...like wandering...
  May 6th, 2026 07:52
• Inkadelic element (Poetic Dan) Dan, this really struck me…the way it moves with that constant flow,...
  May 5th, 2026 10:35
• My Tender Feral Beast (Thomas W Case) Thomas, this is a great poem…the way it stays intimate and unpredictable...
  May 5th, 2026 10:34
• Little Thunder in the Leaves (Matthew R. Callies) Matthew, I love that image of the tail as a metronome…it really stuck...
  May 5th, 2026 10:33
• Red Star Sunblock Cream (Mutley Ravishes) Mutley, this really hit me…the way it stretches between surface...
  May 5th, 2026 10:31
• meme-ma (Arqios) arqios, this really moved me…the way it holds onto presence through...
  May 5th, 2026 10:29
• With Nothing But Love (lyrics) (Teddy.15) Teddy, I love your lyricism dearest poet/songwriter 🌹...this brought me...
  May 5th, 2026 10:28
• They love to judge you. (Friendship) Very moving, dearest Friendship…there’s a quiet strength here that...
  May 5th, 2026 10:26
• A Heart\'s Beat (Katie B.) Powerful Katie…the way it moves from something familiar and routine into...
  May 5th, 2026 10:25
• Four Quiet Seasons One Loud Man (Neville) Neville, I’ve felt that kind of circling before…where things keep...
  May 5th, 2026 10:19
• A hand full and an eight second ride (Sorenbarrett) Soren, that image of her ambitions casting shadows on the sun…powerful....
  May 5th, 2026 10:16
• PRECIPICIO / PRECIPICIO (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS) Carlos, I’ve felt that tension before…looking at the world and sensing...
  May 5th, 2026 10:14
• ETERNAL WINGS (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Norman, this really moved me…there’s a quiet reverence running through...
  May 5th, 2026 10:13
• Mavericks Awaken (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Shaun, this really hit me…the urgency running through it, especially in...
  May 5th, 2026 10:12
• दोस्त (Waiting for Silence) Vimal, this really moved me…the sincerity of it, especially in how...
  May 5th, 2026 09:54
• When the Cold Fire Burns (Salvia.S) First comment! Yay! Salvia, this carries a soft ache…love slipping away...
  May 4th, 2026 12:54
• The plot (2781) Valiantstar, this carries a hopeful push…letting go, stepping into...
  May 4th, 2026 12:53
• No Choice (Kurt Philip Behm) Reading this, Kurt, I’ve felt that shift you’re pointing to…letting...
  May 4th, 2026 12:52
• Oh no - a repeat! (Orchidee) Orchi…Fido’s barking about “something sensible,” but Popeye’s...
  May 4th, 2026 12:51
• HALO (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS) Carlos, this is beautiful…there’s a softness here that just drifts and...
  May 4th, 2026 12:48
• We’re Going to Be Just Fine (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) Sharon, this carries a strong sense of hope and endurance…through...
  May 4th, 2026 12:47
• Wings of Fire (Matthew R. Callies) Matthew, this carries a real intensity…heat, scale, and something almost...
  May 4th, 2026 12:46
• When you have nothing left, they\'re done with you. (Friendship) Friendship, this carries a heavy truth…people taking while there’s...
  May 4th, 2026 12:45
• Seaworthy (Katie B.) Katie, this really pulled me in…there’s something immersive about it,...
  May 4th, 2026 12:43
• the fade (Arqios) arqios, this is simple but it lands deep…love without a shared language,...
  May 4th, 2026 12:43
• After the fact (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this carries a real weight…layered contradictions stacking up...
  May 4th, 2026 12:42
• A MYSTICAL BREEZE (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Norman, this carries a soft strength…tender, calming, and steady all the...
  May 4th, 2026 12:40
• Random Rhyming (Part.8) (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Shaun, you got me with this one…just rolling from one lane to the next...
  May 4th, 2026 12:39
• मेरी वफ़ा की देवी क्यूँ चुप चाप खड़ी है ? (Waiting for Silence) Vimal, this holds a strong emotional pull…love, pain, and that need to...
  May 4th, 2026 12:38
• The Long Days Journey into Bed (Kevin Hulme) Kevin, this carries a real weight…that endless cycle of noise, conflict,...
  May 4th, 2026 12:38
• pussy for lunch, dinner and brunch?! (Demar Desu) My friend, this caught me off guard… there’s a sharp, biting humor in...
  May 3rd, 2026 17:13
• Proposal (Teddy.15) Teddy, this carries a quiet, grounded truth… something worn, imperfect,...
  May 3rd, 2026 17:11
• Let the Heart Heal What It Feels (Salvia.S) Salvia, this carries a quiet, steady care… letting go, protecting the...
  May 3rd, 2026 17:05
• Sunday Sound Bites (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, this carries a reflective weight… time, identity, and what endures...
  May 3rd, 2026 17:05
• A Whoring they will Go (Thomas W Case) Thomas, this carries a relentless honesty… exposing betrayal, greed, and...
  May 3rd, 2026 17:04
• Zumwalt\'s Iron Arm (Matthew R. Callies) Matthew, this carries a strong, steady energy… a life shaped by...
  May 3rd, 2026 16:59
• May (Katie B.) Katie, this carries a gentle strength… a blessing, a hope, and something...
  May 3rd, 2026 16:56
• They labeled me inappropriate! Then made me out to be the Bitchy-witch. (Friendship) Dearest Friendship, this carries both hurt and resolve… being misread,...
  May 3rd, 2026 16:54
• where your hand was (Arqios) arqios, this is beautifully restrained… a fleeting moment that still...
  May 3rd, 2026 16:53
• Duck (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS) Carlos, this carries a quiet, clumsy sadness that feels very real…...
  May 3rd, 2026 16:51
• Gone (Sorenbarrett) Soren, that sense of carrying something weightless yet present really...
  May 3rd, 2026 16:15
• ऐसा कि टूटने पाए ना (Waiting for Silence) Vimal, I’ve felt that kind of longing and hope intertwined before…...
  May 3rd, 2026 16:14
• The load (2781) Valiantstar, that contrast between descent and rising really stands out…...
  May 3rd, 2026 16:13
• DISTANT WHISPER (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Norman, this carries a gentle, reflective weight… memory, distance, and...
  May 3rd, 2026 16:11
• Silence ain’t weakness (Poetic Dan) Welcome home Dan! This really moved me… there’s a calm strength...
  May 3rd, 2026 16:10
• Random Rhyming (Part.7) (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Shaun, this carries a strong current… that mix of questioning,...
  May 3rd, 2026 16:09
• Poetry\'s Children (Kevin Hulme) Kevin, this is a fun one… you move through the forms with real energy...
  May 3rd, 2026 16:08
• The Hour (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, this feels like those moments where things get stripped down to...
  May 2nd, 2026 11:25
• Blake’s Apology (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) Sharon, this feels like those moments where someone finally chooses...
  May 2nd, 2026 11:24
• VERY SLOWLY / Muy despacio (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS) Carlos, this really moved me…there’s a softness here that feels both...
  May 2nd, 2026 11:21
• Springboard (Mutley Ravishes) Mutley, this is a powerful piece…what stands out is the balance between...
  May 2nd, 2026 11:21
• Letters (Paul Bell) Paul, this feels like watching something fall apart and then rebuild in a...
  May 2nd, 2026 11:19
• Dressed with Might (Katie B.) Katie, that image of “favored feathers of chocolate and superfluous...
  May 2nd, 2026 11:18
• poetical query (Arqios) Rik, that idea of an “inner pyre” is what stays with me…that quiet...
  May 2nd, 2026 11:17
• क़सूर (Waiting for Silence) Vimal, this is a beautiful piece…what stands out is the softness paired...
  May 2nd, 2026 11:13
• God you only gave me ten (or I\'ll never do that again) (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this is a powerful piece…what stands out is the relentless...
  May 2nd, 2026 11:12
• Boom, Boom, Bap (Part.2) (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Shaun, that “boom, boom, bap” line really anchors the whole...
  May 2nd, 2026 11:11
• For There Is Nothing So Perfect (Teddy.15) Teddy, this is a strong piece…what I keep coming back to is how much it...
  May 2nd, 2026 11:05
• THE LONESOME DREAM (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Norman, this is a powerful piece…what stands out is how restrained it...
  May 2nd, 2026 11:04
• What am I meant for? (Demar Desu) Demar, methinks you answered your own question in one...
  May 2nd, 2026 11:02
• On the Crimes of Harvey Weinstein (Matthew R. Callies) Matthew, this is a powerful piece…what struck me most is how controlled...
  May 2nd, 2026 10:49
• प्रतीक्षा (Waiting for Silence) This carries real strength, Vimal…a steady voice pushing forward even...
  May 1st, 2026 08:00
• Now lookie here... (Orchidee) My friend, I’m telling ya…that shop ain’t a shop…it’s a GLUG...
  May 1st, 2026 07:48
• ALONE (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Norman, I’ve seen moments like this before…those quiet glimpses of...
  May 1st, 2026 07:38
• Sunset by the sea (NafisaSB) Safina, this really moved me…there’s a gentle, steady calm running...
  May 1st, 2026 07:36
• Mmmmm distractions (Demar Desu) Demar, I’ve felt that same kind of overload…where everything is...
  May 1st, 2026 07:33
• God, Save Me From Hellfire (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Save me too, dear Lord…but if you show up looking like that dude in the...
  May 1st, 2026 05:55
• Don\'t Ever Underestimate a Butterfly (Teddy.15) Dearest Teddy, this really moved me…there’s a quiet peace in this...
  May 1st, 2026 05:47
• Please stop! (Friendship) Dearest Friendship, that contrast of offering peace and receiving stone...
  May 1st, 2026 05:46
• The Mystical Flute (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Shaun, this one grabbed me right away…there’s a playful setup that...
  April 29th, 2026 23:37
• STONES (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS) Carlos, this feels like more than just material…it reads like something...
  April 29th, 2026 23:36
• On a Road to Knossos (Neville) Neville, there’s a gentle immersion here…the way the place unfolds...
  April 29th, 2026 23:34
• Dearest Liz ... (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, there’s a brutal honesty here…and knowing it reflects what you...
  April 29th, 2026 23:32
• The Bible in Shadow (Matthew R. Callies) Matthew, there’s a strong sense of tension running through this…the...
  April 29th, 2026 23:27
• curtain call (Arqios) arqios, that image of a space left imperfect…still bearing the marks of...
  April 29th, 2026 23:26
• Bliss\' home (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this one pulled me in instantly…there’s a warmth to it that...
  April 29th, 2026 23:24
• हलचल (Waiting for Silence) Vimal, there’s something deeply moving here…the way everything shifts...
  April 29th, 2026 23:22
• waiting room. tap. tap. tap. (Fibonacci Poetry - 3) (DeadRose) A great example of a Fibonacci sequence. Having written them myself, they...
  April 29th, 2026 23:19
• Haiku (an ode to grief) (Teddy.15) Profound, my friend. This metaphor, though brief, has much to say. Well...
  April 29th, 2026 18:10
• rest in peace to my cat (Demar Desu) Awww. Sorry to hear, my friend. It sounds like this happened in the past,...
  April 29th, 2026 06:23
• One Days (Mutley Ravishes) Mutley, this hit me hard…there’s something compressed here, like three...
  April 28th, 2026 06:13
• slope (Arqios) Arqios, there’s a quiet power in this that doesn’t need to announce...
  April 28th, 2026 06:12
• King of the world (Sorenbarrett) Soren, there’s a fierce confidence here that carries straight...
  April 28th, 2026 06:12
• मेरी क़लम चला दो (Waiting for Silence) Vimal, there’s a real longing here that doesn’t let go…the desire to...
  April 28th, 2026 06:11
• Who? (Boot) James, there’s a real edge to this that keeps moving…like something...
  April 28th, 2026 06:10
• Haiku (an ode to spring) (Teddy.15) Teddy, there’s a gentle energy in this that really lands…the movement,...
  April 28th, 2026 06:08
• This Arrangement (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) My friend, there’s a real urgency in this…like you’re trying to wake...
  April 28th, 2026 06:07
• SPIDER / ARAÑA (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS) Carlos, this carries a steady thread from memory into creation…that...
  April 28th, 2026 05:42
• A LONELY RIVER (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Norman, this carries a steady, reflective current…those questions about...
  April 28th, 2026 05:40
• The King with Stolen Papers (Matthew R. Callies) Matthew, this carries a blend of charm and unraveling…a man stepping...
  April 28th, 2026 05:32