Comments on community poems by Tristan Robert Lange

• If Today Was Your Last Day (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) Sharon, this really touched my heart. There is such sincerity and love...
  June 10th, 2026 08:10
• UNFOLDED / DESDOBLADO (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS) My friend, I think many of us begin to understand this tension more with...
  June 10th, 2026 08:10
• before my time (Arqios) Rik, what a thoughtful and elegant piece. The movement from childhood...
  June 10th, 2026 08:08
• Life Without (Katie B.) Katie, this really hit me hard. The atmosphere is oppressive from the very...
  June 10th, 2026 08:07
• Held Beyond Division (Matthew R. Callies) My friend, I found myself appreciating the generosity of spirit in this....
  June 10th, 2026 08:07
• The perfect nib (Mirela) Mirela, this really charmed me. In just a few lines, you\'ve captured that...
  June 10th, 2026 08:06
• Bath in a cloud (Sorenbarrett) Soren, you got me with this one. The imagery is rich, fluid, and...
  June 10th, 2026 08:05
• Joyce Kilmer: A Reply (Kevin Hulme) Kevin, what a thoughtful and imaginative piece. The extended relationship...
  June 10th, 2026 08:04
• The shadow that never left (Lorena1) What struck me most was the reflection on never knowing when something...
  June 10th, 2026 08:02
• The room next door (Lorena1) My friend, what struck me here is how honestly you capture the perspective...
  June 10th, 2026 07:58
• What To Do When Molehills Become Mountains (Neville) Neville, this really hit me hard. There\'s a righteous fire running...
  June 10th, 2026 07:57
• Contrasting Considerations (Orchidee) Orchi, what a lovely adaptation. The themes of refuge, trust, justice, and...
  June 10th, 2026 07:56
• Heavenly Help (Orchidee) Orchi, this is one heck of a hymn adaptation. The assurance woven...
  June 10th, 2026 07:55
• A Heartbeat Lost (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Shaun, this really moved me. There\'s a deep sadness running through it,...
  June 10th, 2026 07:49
• Showdown In Little Tokyo (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Shaun, what a nostalgic and entertaining piece. Love Brandon Lee! I...
  June 10th, 2026 07:49
• 7:10 (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Shaun, what a charming piece. It captures the simple rhythm of a day well...
  June 10th, 2026 07:46
• Dystopia (Lorenz) Lorenz, this speaks to me. I\'ve always been drawn to works that blur the...
  June 8th, 2026 11:03
• The Vine (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) Sharon, this really moved me. What stays with me is the spirit of...
  June 8th, 2026 11:02
• where he was (Arqios) Arqios, this really moved me. There is a quiet stillness here that feels...
  June 8th, 2026 11:01
• Statute Written in Smoke and Ink (Matthew R. Callies) Matthew, this really hit me. What I appreciate most is the restraint of...
  June 8th, 2026 11:00
• Markings (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this made me smile. There is a playful curiosity running through...
  June 8th, 2026 10:59
• THE LEGACY OF MANKIND (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Norman, what struck me most is the image of eternity blinking an...
  June 8th, 2026 10:59
• Ode To Ian Tyson (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, what struck me most is the line, \"Only the West is my lover.\" It...
  June 8th, 2026 10:57
• The Red Carpet (Fränz Müller) Fränz, this made me smile. There is such warmth and enthusiasm in these...
  June 8th, 2026 10:56
• The Pen (Is) a Problem (Fränz Müller) Fränz, what struck me most is the mirrored structure. By placing the two...
  June 8th, 2026 10:55
• Living in the Light (Orchidee) Orchi, this really moved me. The call to awaken, walk wisely, and make...
  June 8th, 2026 10:53
• That afternoon (Lorena1) Lore, this really moved me. What stays with me is the distinction between...
  June 8th, 2026 10:49
• A Last Time for Everything (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) Sharon, this really moved me. What stays with me is the reminder that so...
  June 8th, 2026 10:48
• Conflicted (2781) Valiantstar, this really moved me. There is a deep sense of spiritual...
  June 7th, 2026 09:16
• AT PEACE (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS) Carlos, what struck me most is the repeated return to place. Not a...
  June 7th, 2026 09:15
• A Day Inside (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Shaun, this speaks to me. We spend so much time being productive, social,...
  June 7th, 2026 09:15
• Iowa Fall (Thomas W Case) Thomas, what struck me most is the progression from sound to silence. The...
  June 7th, 2026 09:08
• Soundbites: 5-7-2026 (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, this really moved me. Though each piece stands on its own, together...
  June 7th, 2026 09:08
• True Power (Paul Bell) Paul, this hit me hard. Four lines, yet it carries the force of something...
  June 7th, 2026 09:06
• recross (Arqios) Arqios, this speaks to me. There have been people whose paths diverged...
  June 7th, 2026 09:06
• Good guy (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this really moved me. What stays with me is that this isn\'t simply...
  June 7th, 2026 09:05
• THE LAST PERFORMANCE (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Norman, this really moved me. What stays with me is the balance between...
  June 7th, 2026 09:03
• Hope (Teddy.15) Teddy, this speaks to me. Hope has always seemed less about certainty and...
  June 7th, 2026 09:02
• Mimeograph Light (Matthew R. Callies) Matthew, this really moved me. What stays with me is the quiet bravery at...
  June 7th, 2026 08:57
• Shrink Satire (Teddy.15) Teddy, this speaks to something that has always unsettled me...the gap...
  June 7th, 2026 08:56
• Timeline Trauma (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Shaun, what struck me most is the idea of \"timeline trauma.\" Whether...
  June 7th, 2026 07:30
• Two Ways Of Life (Orchidee) Orchi, this really moved me. Psalm 1 has always been one of those passages...
  June 7th, 2026 07:29
• What\'s seen (2781) Valiantstar, this really moved me. There is a sense of conviction running...
  June 7th, 2026 07:28
• Rotors Keep Spinning (+2) (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, this hit me hard. My father flew Hueys in Vietnam, so the moment I...
  June 7th, 2026 07:25
• It Beckons Me (Katie B.) Katie, what struck me most is the contrast between ordinary...
  June 6th, 2026 08:33
• The last time (Lorena1) Lore, this hit me hard. The simplicity of it is what makes it so...
  June 6th, 2026 08:33
• the baron declares (Arqios) Arqios, this really made me smile. The poem captures that wonderful spirit...
  June 6th, 2026 08:31
• Service Engineer (Paul Bell) Paul, you got me with this one. The back-and-forth is absolutely...
  June 6th, 2026 08:29
• OPEN SOULS (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Norman, this hit me hard. There’s a stark humanity running through this...
  June 6th, 2026 08:28
• Next day (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this speaks to something I\'ve always appreciated in contemplative...
  June 6th, 2026 08:27
• Electric Saints (Matthew R. Callies) Matthew, this really moved me. What stays with me is how relentlessly...
  June 6th, 2026 08:27
• An ordinary farm day (NafisaSB) Safina, this really made me smile. You capture the easy rhythm of farm...
  June 6th, 2026 08:26
• Malicious Compliance (Fränz Müller) Fränz, this really moved me. There’s a sincerity here that feels...
  June 6th, 2026 08:24
• Soundbites: 5-5-2026 (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, this is one heck of a collection. What struck me is how each piece...
  June 6th, 2026 08:22
• Your Name (Kevin Michael Bloor) Kevin, this hit me hard. There’s something wonderfully old-fashioned...
  June 6th, 2026 08:21
• What Becomes Public (Matthew R. Callies) Matthew, this really moved me. There’s such a quiet dignity running...
  June 6th, 2026 08:20
• It All Happens Today (Katie B.) Katie, this resonates with me because I\'ve certainly spent days replaying...
  June 5th, 2026 06:32
• let the shadows drift (Arqios) Arqios, I found myself thinking about ideas, communities, and even people...
  June 5th, 2026 06:31
• Chilled (Sorenbarrett) Soren, what a powerful piece. I love how the cold progresses from an...
  June 5th, 2026 06:30
• WOUNDED (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS) Carlos, what a moving poem. The progression from woundedness and despair...
  June 5th, 2026 06:29
• From The South I Rose (Teddy.15) Teddy, what a heartfelt tribute to your city. I love that the poem...
  June 5th, 2026 06:28
• FISH (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS) Carlos, what a fascinating poem. The fish becomes a powerful metaphor for...
  June 4th, 2026 18:25
• हां कब से मैं किसी तो खाना-ए-ख़राब में हूं (Anmol Sinha) Anmol, “तेरे सवाल में हूं और कभी...
  June 4th, 2026 18:21
• The survivor (Lorenz) Lorenz, this reminds me of those late-night thoughts where one idea...
  June 4th, 2026 18:20
• Wasted talents (2781) Valiantstar, “past the guards where no man goes” is one of the...
  June 4th, 2026 18:17
• One More Chance (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, this speaks to that place many of us visit from time to...
  June 4th, 2026 18:15
• I\'m running on empty. (Friendship) Friendship, this really hit me hard. There is such exhaustion in these...
  June 4th, 2026 18:12
• 10-4 coded shouts (Arqios) Arqios, this took me right back to that strange season of life where...
  June 4th, 2026 18:11
• A Change of Heart (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) Sharon, this really touched me. There is a quiet assurance running through...
  June 4th, 2026 18:10
• MAGIC CAUGHT (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Norman, this brought back that feeling of encountering someone or...
  June 4th, 2026 18:08
• Generation X (Teddy.15) Hear hear! Me too! Rock on dearest Teddy!🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛
  June 4th, 2026 18:07
• What the Mountain Keeps (Matthew R. Callies) Matthew, I’ve known relationships that seemed to live in that space...
  June 4th, 2026 15:23
• Shapeless Ocean 🌊 (Antra.coree) Antra, this really moved me. There is such a strong sense of self-worth...
  June 4th, 2026 15:21
• The forgotten seed (Antra.coree) Antra, what a powerful metaphor. The contrast between the forgotten seed...
  June 4th, 2026 15:20
• Bruises (Fränz Müller) Fränz, I think many people who have lived through difficult relationships...
  June 4th, 2026 15:19
• In My Simple Clumsy Way (Kevin Hulme) Kevin, this really moved me. I smiled when I reached the ending. After all...
  June 4th, 2026 15:18
• E.J. Hudak: (Poems 18-22) +1 (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, this is one heck of a collection. What impressed me most is the...
  June 4th, 2026 15:15
• Home of the Great South Bay will always be in my heart. (Friendship) Friendship, this really touched me. There is such a deep sense of love for...
  June 4th, 2026 15:12
• STRANGER AT THE STATION (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Norman, I’ve always found train imagery carries a special kind of...
  June 4th, 2026 15:10
• Hushed Lexicons in Neon Rooms (Matthew R. Callies) Matthew, this is one heck of a poem. I love how alive the language feels...
  June 4th, 2026 13:13
• The Sea Churns (Katie B.) Katie, this hit me hard. The grief here feels immense, but what moved me...
  June 4th, 2026 13:12
• the price of looking (Arqios) Arqios, this really moved me. I love how the poem refuses to frame love...
  June 4th, 2026 13:11
• Size (Sorenbarrett) Soren, “Even the prime minister waits for a lorry” is the line that...
  June 4th, 2026 13:09
• Razed Right (Mutley Ravishes) Mutley, this hit me as both cosmic and intimate at the same time. The...
  June 4th, 2026 13:08
• Sacred Child (Paul Bell) Paul, I’ve known poems where grief speaks loudly, but what struck me...
  June 4th, 2026 13:07
• Customer service (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this reminds me of flipping radio stations late at night…snatches...
  June 4th, 2026 13:06
• Will I Ever Find Me (Teddy.15) Teddy, this really moved me. What I love most is how unguarded it...
  June 2nd, 2026 22:04
• Ashtray Memory (Thomas W Case) Thomas, this brought back the feeling of walking into a room long after...
  June 2nd, 2026 22:02
• Leaving The Past (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, what stayed with me most is \"Leaving the past / and its language /...
  June 2nd, 2026 22:01
• Alternate history (Lorenz) Lorenz, this hit me hard. I love how the poem moves effortlessly between...
  June 2nd, 2026 22:00
• Refusing the Fixed Grammar of Self (Matthew R. Callies) Matthew, wow. Extremely moving. I initially read this as a contemporary...
  June 2nd, 2026 21:57
• If for a Moment (Katie B.) Katie, this really speaks to me. The way you capture that brief moment of...
  June 2nd, 2026 21:34
• the shadows that follow (Arqios) Arqios, this really spoke to me. There is something quietly uplifting...
  June 2nd, 2026 21:33
• Look closer (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this hit me hard. I love how the poem refuses to let anything stand...
  June 2nd, 2026 21:32
• जिसका सजदा किया वो ख़ुदा ही न था (Waiting for Silence) Vimal, I\'ve known seasons where certainty slipped through my fingers and...
  June 2nd, 2026 21:30
• जिसका सजदा किया वो ख़ुदा ही न था (Waiting for Silence) Vimal, I\'ve known seasons where certainty slipped through my fingers and...
  June 2nd, 2026 21:30
• Mortal Kombat II (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) This really brought a smile, my friend. I like how you balance your...
  June 2nd, 2026 20:30
• Chasm (Fränz Müller) Fränz, this hit me hard. The struggle here feels painfully...
  June 2nd, 2026 20:24
• A Plea to the Moon (Kevin Hulme) Kevin, this really moved me. There’s something timeless about the way...
  June 2nd, 2026 20:19
• Refuse to let your heart dwell in darkness. (Friendship) Friendship, what struck me most is the sense of invitation running through...
  June 1st, 2026 18:30