Comments on community poems by Tristan Robert Lange
- Graves (Tony36)
Well done on this, Tony! Bravo! 🌹👏
April 18th, 2025 21:08 - In some African cultures there is no roles of mom dad sister brother grandma grandpa etc. (Demar Desu)
Wow a wonderful cross-cultural poetic musing, bro! Love this! 🌹👏 A...
April 18th, 2025 21:07 - Whispers (Teardrop)
Excellent, teardrop. This one sings like a beautifully haunted song. Well...
April 18th, 2025 21:04 - Chocolate (Mutley Ravishes)
Beautiful, brief write that points to a great cause. Wonderful job, my...
April 18th, 2025 21:01 - Ēostre Or Easter? (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Def a conversation starter, my friend! 🤯 And you’re right—Easter...
April 18th, 2025 16:38 - sleeping pills (Dimpy)
I could feel this one, my friend. Well done! 🌹👏
April 18th, 2025 16:14 - Acts (Sorenbarrett)
An excellent poem that acknowledges the reality that the very animals we...
April 18th, 2025 16:12 - The Good Of Golgotha (Orchidee)
A great write highlighting why Good Friday is actually \"good\". Also,...
April 17th, 2025 15:17 - Forever Lost (Kurt Philip Behm)
A feeling I have had before. Disconcerting. Well written, Kurt. 🌹👏
April 17th, 2025 15:15 - The Streets (Tony36)
Well done, Tony. It shows how harsh life can be and conveys the urgency of...
April 17th, 2025 08:43 - in darkness... (Dimpy)
Wow. Erotic, sensual, mysterious. Love the use of nature to describe the...
April 17th, 2025 08:39 - Muse\'s blood (Sorenbarrett)
Writing has been my life, my saving grace, the way I get to process my...
April 17th, 2025 08:37 - The things you can’t buy… (Demar Desu)
In this world, nothing is without price. Well done, Demar! 🌹👏
April 17th, 2025 08:34 - I Got Burned. (Poetic Licence)
I am not fan of the death penalty. It gives the power to kill/murder to...
April 17th, 2025 08:31 - Do You Believe Katy Perry Went To Space? (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
At least they didn\'t go up in SpaceX 💥 🤣 Ah...the rich and famous....
April 17th, 2025 08:14 - but a flesh wound (Arqios)
Well...now that you worked up my appetite again...I am, well, hungry for...
April 17th, 2025 08:06 - Seeding The Palms (Kurt Philip Behm)
A brief couplet that is deeply profound. Well done on this, Kurt. Hat\'s...
April 16th, 2025 14:41 - Cut Me Some Slack...I Have a Crazy Streak (Cheeky Missy)
My tummy is growling again. Why could that be? 🤣 Wonderful sonnets my...
April 16th, 2025 13:51 - Passover Ponderings (Orchidee)
Wonderfully rendered, Orchi! A most profound and sacred moment just before...
April 16th, 2025 13:49 - Street Rat (Tony36)
A wonderful poem that tells to common of a tale. Excellent write, Tony!...
April 16th, 2025 13:44 - Never Saw it Coming (Thomas W Case)
Raw. I could feel this Thomas. A wonderful write, my friend. 🌹👏
April 16th, 2025 13:43 - faces of the mirrors (Skyler2)
Beautiful rhyme scheme and a most unique form. A fave from me. Welcome to...
April 16th, 2025 13:41 - Redeemer pains through window panes (Sorenbarrett)
A wonderful poem from you on Osiris. Another wonderful poem from Mourgana...
April 16th, 2025 07:27 - pot plants (Arqios)
The mind is a long-twisted path...and when one wanders...beware crushing...
April 16th, 2025 07:24 - O (Mourgana of the Fey)
\"o i am but / a dotted / line\". Wow. 🤯 I have never heard it...
April 16th, 2025 07:22 - Tick Tock. (Poetic Licence)
Great write, dear poet and friend. This one resonated deeply. Tick tock...
April 16th, 2025 07:17 - Immortal Chortles (Mutley Ravishes)
Wow! 🤯🤩 Au contraire, mon ami — je te remercie pour cette...
April 15th, 2025 20:05 - Like, How On Earth? (Cheeky Missy)
These were all a joy to read, Missy—but that last one truly moved me to...
April 15th, 2025 16:27 - Stepford Ice (Kurt Philip Behm)
Wonderful poem. \"Hope frozen— and canned\". Indeed. Love that closing...
April 15th, 2025 16:23 - Pilate\'s Perturbations (Orchidee)
Wonderful rendering of Scripture, my friend—and I especially appreciate...
April 15th, 2025 16:10 - be brave... (NafisaSB)
And we all really do need those notes to ourselves. Wonderful job, my...
April 15th, 2025 08:11 - Go to sleep (Tony36)
A wonderful lullaby, Tony. I could see myself reading this to my children...
April 15th, 2025 08:08 - $0.00 in my bank account (Demar Desu)
It\'s now 9:05 AM. good morning, sir! May your day rock and your funds...
April 15th, 2025 08:05 - Who died and made you God (Sorenbarrett)
\"Beauty is more than just skin deep\", or so the saying goes. And it is...
April 15th, 2025 08:02 - Mental Breakdown To Spiritual Awakening (Part.2) (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
I live in the state of Hershey! LOL|! A wonderful poem, my friend. Indeed,...
April 15th, 2025 07:57 - Our day (2781)
Wow! What a poem and what an ending. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
April 15th, 2025 07:53 - Change of Heart (Poetic Licence)
Understood. I have been there. You think you\'ve finally figured things...
April 15th, 2025 07:52 - letting go: Anton Ego (Arqios)
Chef\'s kiss! Wonderful narrative poem, one that I could taste, that had a...
April 15th, 2025 07:48 - Don\'t Look Back (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Wonderful and most thought-provoking poem, my friend. For me, those are...
April 14th, 2025 16:23 - Rage-filled Turns (NinjaGirl)
So verrrry cathartic, my friend. Dance...no...not just dance or...
April 14th, 2025 15:33 - Cockerel Crowing (Orchidee)
Those dang cock(erel)s. They ruin it for the conscience every time, I tell...
April 14th, 2025 15:25 - Put On the Kettle and Your Feet Up? (Cheeky Missy)
How can Shredded Wheat, in any form, be too much fun?!?! My tummy is...
April 14th, 2025 15:15 - Abuse (Tony36)
A true and urgent write, Tony. Indeed, abuse happens most by those who are...
April 14th, 2025 15:12 - Differences (Sorenbarrett)
\"We don\'t make love, we feel it.\" On the surface, a literal translation...
April 14th, 2025 07:39 - On A Sunday Morning (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Truth. People often drone on and don\'t give a shit. What else is there to...
April 14th, 2025 07:35 - midnight courage (Arqios)
This is often where I exist, my friend. That liminal space between life an...
April 14th, 2025 07:32 - Pleasing Everyone Else (Poetic Licence)
So true, my friend! So very true! Individually we are all unique and that...
April 14th, 2025 07:26 - Abstract journey (Mourgana of the Fey)
Wonderful and profoundly deep. The short, brief lines almost give the poem...
April 14th, 2025 07:20 - Weeping (2781)
Ooh. I feel the pain in your words my friend. I had a crying/praying...
April 14th, 2025 07:17 - TEETOTAL (Michael Edwards)
Ooh. I am feeling sorry for you too. That\'s no fun. This poem speaks much...
April 14th, 2025 07:13 - Watch Out (Thomas W Case)
This poem hits raw and real. A wonderful write, Thomas!
April 13th, 2025 19:06 - Jailers (NinjaGirl)
And how...they totally are! Well done on this. Loved this! What a...
April 13th, 2025 19:05 - Now, Don\'t Get Any Ideas (Cheeky Missy)
For those with seasonal allergies like mine, forsythia yellow is a warning...
April 13th, 2025 13:38 - Butterfly\'s Wander (Kurt Philip Behm)
Well done. Paints a haunting truth many are in denial of! Well done, Kurt!...
April 13th, 2025 13:35 - Anointing Memorial (Orchidee)
I love this scene as it is presented in Jesus Christ Superstar. Well done...
April 13th, 2025 13:33 - Boogers on paper (Demar Desu)
🤧🤣 This, um, really sticks! Glad everything checked out, bro! Thank...
April 13th, 2025 13:30 - Jousting With The Devil (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
That last part...I concur! Well done, my friend. Wonderful poem with a fun...
April 13th, 2025 13:27 - Passing on (Sorenbarrett)
In this I see the course of one\'s life with, perhaps, death being the...
April 13th, 2025 13:25 - Gallows (Tony36)
Wow! Haunting poem, Tony! Well done!
April 13th, 2025 09:51 - song to the stars (Arqios)
Love the blending of nursery rhyme and metaphor. This feels like a lullaby...
April 13th, 2025 07:41 - Wise Man Say (10). (Poetic Licence)
Much wisdom here, but the latter...many unsolicited \"advisers\" need to...
April 13th, 2025 07:31 - Elphin (Mourgana of the Fey)
This is quite lyrical/musical and feels like a dance as one reads it. The...
April 13th, 2025 07:29 - Jerusalem Journey (Orchidee)
Okay, I have to revisit this, and I am glad I did I never ended up...
April 13th, 2025 07:25 - Till The Music Stops (Kurt Philip Behm)
Wonderful poem with a poignant message! Live your life, while you are...
April 12th, 2025 21:46 - Jerusalem Journey (Orchidee)
A lovely write! Happy Palm Sunday, my friend! 🌹👏
April 12th, 2025 21:43 - Love bounded (Demar Desu)
Hm. Other things as well...indeed. Is love conditional? In some senses...
April 12th, 2025 09:30 - Dear Heart (Tony36)
A constant, never-ending message that some have to give to their hearts to...
April 12th, 2025 08:15 - the killing of a conifer (Mourgana of the Fey)
We really do destroy nature, do we not? And, we destroy our own nature and...
April 12th, 2025 08:12 - Daredevil: Born Again (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Thank you for the poetic review. I was kind of wondering how it was. Much...
April 12th, 2025 08:08 - Echos (Teardrop)
I can relate to this. Well done on this expression, my friend. It hit...
April 12th, 2025 08:06 - Seasons pass (Sorenbarrett)
A most excellent and beautiful write on the passing of the seasons....
April 12th, 2025 08:05 - celestial threads (Arqios)
Celestial imagery mixed with the craft of writing verse, the metaphor is...
April 12th, 2025 08:01 - Adventures of Mary and Harry (3) (Poetic Licence)
LOL! These were totally fun...and funny! Well done, my friend. Enjoy the...
April 12th, 2025 07:58 - Lost in the Mud (Thomas W Case)
This is brilliant, Thomas. A fave! Wonderful poem! 🌹👏
April 11th, 2025 20:11 - Storm Ports (Kurt Philip Behm)
A poem about couplets written in couplets, and the message...profoundly...
April 11th, 2025 20:08 - Great Is The Lord (Orchidee)
Amen. Wonderful write, my friend. Love the song you shared too. 🌹👏
April 11th, 2025 20:04 - Big boys don\'t cry (Tony36)
What a lie indeed. More men need to be reading your poetry, Tony! Thanks...
April 11th, 2025 08:20 - Hymn for the hooved (Mourgana of the Fey)
Love this. A beautiful poem rich in imagery in and metaphor. Well done, my...
April 11th, 2025 08:20 - Violin Strings (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Indeed. I love the violin. Powerful instrument. Excellent write! 🌹👏
April 11th, 2025 07:59 - Scent of the past (Sorenbarrett)
I love your use of the sense of smell in this poem, particularly, \"The...
April 11th, 2025 07:55 - Children Have Rights. (Poetic Licence)
This is so true, Tobani. No child asked to be born and those who have...
April 11th, 2025 07:45 - Anton Ego (Arqios)
And I was hungry going into this brilliant metaphor. 🤣 Well done on...
April 11th, 2025 07:42 - Solar Suppression (Mutley Ravishes)
Chortleability (A word now?) is a blessing in such times. Chortle on, my...
April 11th, 2025 07:39 - He pulls the trigger (Tony36)
Powerful message in this dark poem. Wonderfully written, my friend....
April 10th, 2025 17:48 - Driving Dangerously (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Truth.
April 10th, 2025 16:23 - Flower (Sorenbarrett)
Love the font, which really works well for this poem, as well as your use...
April 10th, 2025 16:21 - Once upon a dark moon (Mourgana of the Fey)
Wonderful, my friend. Love the imagery and the way the poem feels almost...
April 10th, 2025 16:16 - d a n c e (Arqios)
Love it my friend...the form and the poem, executed flawlessly. The words...
April 10th, 2025 16:14 - The broken heart cafe (Tony36)
Wonderful Tony. I have been at that café, and the coffee is thick and...
April 9th, 2025 10:15 - How odd is odd (Sorenbarrett)
Indeed. How much difference rattles our bones...and yet, how different are...
April 9th, 2025 10:09 - Reckoning (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Well done, Shaun. It\'s hard to believe after all the warning novels and...
April 9th, 2025 09:53 - Into The Spotlight. (Poetic Licence)
💯 Truth. Over you, behind you, around you...and you will be blind, like...
April 9th, 2025 08:57 - the keening woman (Mourgana of the Fey)
The norse gods and goddesses summoned in a poem that most captivates the...
April 9th, 2025 08:54 - windswept smiles (Arqios)
Indeed. I remember these days myself...and they do bring a smile to my...
April 9th, 2025 08:51 - Inversion (Mutley Ravishes)
Wow. Profound, powerful, true. Indeed, for me, substance abuse was...
April 9th, 2025 08:46 - Let\'s Just Say It IS, Shall We? (Cheeky Missy)
It is Tuesday, April 8...5 days later after you wrote the last sonnet in...
April 8th, 2025 19:20 - Rejoice.... (Orchidee)
Ooh. A choir anthem. Nice! This is so beautiful and one of my all time...
April 8th, 2025 19:15 - Higher Powers (Kurt Philip Behm)
Profound and wise in its simplicity. Beautiful poem. Another fave!
April 8th, 2025 19:12 - I\'m Sorry (Tony36)
Very touching, Tony. I never presume to know whether a poet is writing...
April 8th, 2025 19:10 - On the Road To Insanity. (Poetic Licence)
Wow, I’m honored, my friend—truly. You didn’t “nick” a thing;...
April 8th, 2025 19:01
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