Comments on community poems by Tristan Robert Lange

• Prayers👑 (Keyara S Trotman) Yes indeed, Keyara…I know the power of leaning into grace and asking to...
  September 11th, 2025 21:04
• Snapshot Of Us (Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice) Petra, beautifully written…snap by snap, waves, light, laughter...all...
  September 11th, 2025 21:03
• Lay Down Your Tools My Darling (Tony Grannell) Tony, this is tender and elegiac…the lullaby becomes a farewell, and...
  September 11th, 2025 21:02
• between shelves (Arqios) Yes indeed, my friend…I’ve walked those aisles myself, feeling the...
  September 11th, 2025 20:59
• Mud on the floor (Sorenbarrett) My friend, powerful work…the cage, the dust, the broken frame, all swept...
  September 11th, 2025 20:57
• Nine Eleven (Doggerel Dave) Innocent lives dying in any way is a terrible tragedy...war certainly one...
  September 11th, 2025 20:50
• In Silence and Disbelief (Teddy.15) Dearest poet and friend, this is powerful and reverent…you captured the...
  September 11th, 2025 20:32
• My own writing (NinjaGirl) 🥷, powerful work…the blood, the cuts, the crimson ink...all showing...
  September 10th, 2025 18:53
• Harvest maiden (Georgia Watson) Georgia, this is mythic and evocative…the cry of Demeter woven into the...
  September 10th, 2025 18:52
• Image DuJour (Kurt Philip Behm) Excellent. Love the rhyme too! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛
  September 10th, 2025 18:49
• The Choice and Chances of Change. (Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice) Excellent write, my friend! That reflection...“change is born from...
  September 10th, 2025 18:46
• Six (Thomas W Case) Excellent write, Thomas! Love it! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛
  September 10th, 2025 18:44
• Siblings (Haiku) (Priya Tomar) Wonderfully written this Senryu is, my dear friend!...
  September 10th, 2025 18:42
• Meta-verse (2781) Yes, my friend…this is the struggle of our age—creation and...
  September 10th, 2025 18:40
• Of Mongol Blood an\' Kublai Khan (Tony Grannell) Tony, this is masterful…tempest and terror, rescue and tenderness, a...
  September 10th, 2025 18:38
• Journey to My Last Page (Teddy.15) Teddy, this is charming and alive…the muse flits between cloud and...
  September 10th, 2025 18:36
• the river carries her (Arqios) Yes indeed, my dear friend…this carries Faulkner’s ghost, but in your...
  September 10th, 2025 18:34
• Flowering tree (Sorenbarrett) Soren, beautifully written…petals drifting, blossoms fading, fruit...
  September 10th, 2025 18:32
• Dream Clouds Boone Self-Meditation (Keyara S Trotman) Keyara, this is luminous…clouds carrying wishes, forests serene, fantasy...
  September 10th, 2025 18:29
• Coming Back To Poetry (Tom Dylan) Tom, beautifully written…poetry’s return as friend, relief, and...
  September 10th, 2025 18:27
• S(WORDS) (NinjaGirl) Love the word play! 🥷, beautifully done…blood, tears, sword...pain...
  September 10th, 2025 18:25
• For Mary Shelley (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) I am a huge fan of Mary and admire her. My friend, this is powerful…ink,...
  September 10th, 2025 13:57
• Explosive Inspiration (Teddy.15) Truth! 💯 More wise words from a wise soul! A profound and true as it is...
  September 10th, 2025 13:52
• How is it....? (Orchidee) It\'s great,\" Popeye, says. \"How\'s it with you? You know, this reminds...
  September 10th, 2025 09:42
• the old home (Arqios) My friend, this is powerful…each detail...the oaken door, the empty...
  September 10th, 2025 09:39
• To spill one\'s guts (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this is powerful…madness and truth mingling, bitter and sweet in...
  September 10th, 2025 09:34
• Walking My Own Path (Tom Dylan) Yes, Tom…I’ve walked that same way myself, choosing meadows and words...
  September 10th, 2025 09:32
• \'Free Bird\' (Kurt Philip Behm) A poem of paradox makes this a poem of profound truth! Well done here,...
  September 10th, 2025 09:30
• Thar She Blows (Tony Grannell) Tony, this rolls like a true sea song...oars beating, harpoons ready, and...
  September 10th, 2025 09:28
• Valiant Thor (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Calling Shawn from Area 51 (not the State for Lovers 🤣), This poem has...
  September 10th, 2025 09:24
• The Broken Mirror (Rebellion_in_sanity) Yes, my friend…I’ve felt that fracture, when memory and regret cut...
  September 10th, 2025 09:17
• Nobody is mine (Priya Tomar) Priya, this carries such strength…solitude turned into sanctuary, self...
  September 9th, 2025 09:23
• He is a Star ⭐️ (Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice) Yes, Petra…I’ve known people whose light keeps burning no matter the...
  September 9th, 2025 09:22
• Stay Glowed Up (Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice) Petra, this radiates encouragement…the rhythm pushes forward like a...
  September 9th, 2025 09:21
• Breathe (Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice) Another fave! That volcano image is what struck me most, Petra. It’s...
  September 9th, 2025 09:20
• Lord, Fix Me (Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice) I\'ve been here and have prayed this. Powerful, Petra!...
  September 9th, 2025 09:19
• I Love You (Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice) Petra, beautifully written…each image widens the horizon until love...
  September 9th, 2025 09:18
• One Day (Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice) Wow! Really glad you found me, my friend, because in turn I am glad I have...
  September 9th, 2025 09:17
• Day One (Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice) Petra, yes…I’ve been in that place of trying, crying, and reaching for...
  September 9th, 2025 09:12
• Footsteps in the Night (Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice) Petra, this hit me with suspense…the pounding heart, the frozen moment....
  September 9th, 2025 09:11
• The Perfect Wife (Teddy.15) A-freaking-men. Congregation, you can now go home! Enjoy the rest of your...
  September 8th, 2025 07:17
• The Elated Confessant (My First Holy Confession) (Tony Grannell) Tony, this is ecstatic chaos. From phosphorescent holiness to angels...
  September 8th, 2025 07:12
• Child, ONE CHILD (Arqios) Wow! I’ve walked this tension myself—the in-between, the...
  September 8th, 2025 07:09
• No worries (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this lands with biting humor and bitter truth. The rhymes cut...
  September 8th, 2025 07:06
• 𝔗𝔦𝔱𝔩𝔢𝔡 \"𝔄𝔴𝔞𝔶\" 𝔖𝔱𝔬𝔯𝔶 𝔗𝔦𝔪𝔢 (Keyara S Trotman) My friend, this breathes calm and renewal. Each line unfolds like morning...
  September 8th, 2025 07:02
• A Piece of Paper (NinjaGirl) Wow! I’ve felt life fold in on itself the way you describe here, 🥷....
  September 7th, 2025 18:50
• When the Empath Stops Pleasing Everyone. (Friendship) My friend, this is fierce and freeing…each line strikes like a hammer...
  September 7th, 2025 18:48
• God Was There (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) My friend, this is heartfelt. You trace the hard places with such honesty,...
  September 7th, 2025 18:42
• Don\'t Look Down (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Great write, Kurt!
  September 7th, 2025 18:39
• The Boogie Woogie Lovers (Tony Grannell) Tony, this one’s a delight. The rhythm and dialect carry so much...
  September 7th, 2025 18:39
• The Tangerine Sky (Thomas W Case) Thomas, this is uplifting. The image of the robin catching that gentle...
  September 7th, 2025 18:36
• “south of the equator” (Arqios) Wow, this is immense. From the Southern Cross above the sinks to the tide...
  September 7th, 2025 18:35
• Night spells (Sorenbarrett) Beautifully done, my friend. The rhythm drives each line like an...
  September 7th, 2025 18:33
• This also has to stop (Orchidee) A horse is a horse of course of course...wait, did Mr. Ed eat spinach too?...
  September 7th, 2025 18:29
• Catatonia (Rebellion_in_sanity) My friend, this is searing. The way you set God, Devil, and life in...
  September 7th, 2025 18:28
• On life (NafisaSB) Dear friend, this is so warm and uplifting. Each metaphor opens a window...
  September 7th, 2025 18:26
• Fear of Word Blindness (Neville) Neville, this is striking. The fragility in your images...the shattered...
  September 7th, 2025 18:22
• Before I Became Me (Teddy.15) Did I mention I also love the image you paired? Because I do! 🥰
  September 7th, 2025 18:17
• Before I Became Me (Teddy.15) Dearest Teddy, this is another powerful one from your Raven Collection....
  September 7th, 2025 18:16
• Scarred but Not Broken (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) My friend, this is heartfelt. The way you turn scars from marks of pain...
  September 7th, 2025 18:13
• an ill-fitting halo (Arqios) Arqios, this one hit. That crooked grace, the coin spinning between light...
  September 6th, 2025 10:17
• Why? (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this is intimate and beautifully written. The way you place soul,...
  September 6th, 2025 10:14
• Role Model (NinjaGirl) 🥷, this is raw and powerful. Moving from the little girl to the teen to...
  September 6th, 2025 10:07
• A Whole Heart or Half? (Teddy.15) My friend, this is powerful. The devotion in your lines shines, but that...
  September 6th, 2025 10:05
• Life is a Gift (RSM0812) Beautifully written, my friend. The rhythm of seasons here becomes a...
  September 5th, 2025 10:23
• The Call of The Calling (Rebellion_in_sanity) Yay! First comment! My friend, this is moving. The call slipping in...
  September 5th, 2025 10:18
• Forever Now (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Well written Kurt! Enjoyed! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛
  September 5th, 2025 10:16
• My words are consistently misconstrued? (Friendship) My friend, this is powerful. The strength in your voice comes through...
  September 5th, 2025 10:09
• Cleaver of Devil’s Kitchen (Arqios) Wow! Dear poet and friend, this is immense. The Cleaver speaks with the...
  September 5th, 2025 10:00
• Styles (Sorenbarrett) Soren, I like how each line puts on a different “style” and then...
  September 5th, 2025 09:52
• If Money Didn\'t Exist (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Truth...though, whether it is paper...or goods (barter/trade)...humans...
  September 5th, 2025 09:42
• Iambic Wotsit (Orchidee) Whosits, whatsits, nowsits, there... Pent-up pentameter\'s growling...
  September 5th, 2025 09:36
• Handprints (NinjaGirl) Powerful piece, 🥷. You turned something simple into a timeline of...
  September 4th, 2025 17:18
• Feathered Stone (Thomas W Case) Excellent write, Thomas!!! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛
  September 4th, 2025 17:15
• A Father\'s Lesson on Trust (Friendship) My friend, this is heartfelt. A father’s wisdom passed down with love...
  September 4th, 2025 17:12
• Love It Or Lose It (Kurt Philip Behm) Well done, Kurt! And ain\'t it near impossible, though?...
  September 4th, 2025 17:11
• “Lovin’ where I live” (Arqios) My friend, this is luminous and I love it. The parched wind, cracked soil,...
  September 4th, 2025 17:09
• Fear myths of the unknown (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this one is stark. The cage, the beaten dog, the tyrant we still...
  September 4th, 2025 17:06
• Devil’s Medical Plan (Rebellion_in_sanity) My friend, this one hit sharp. Dark wit runs through every stanza...queues...
  September 4th, 2025 17:03
• my world. (Friendship) My friend, this is haunting. The loneliness breathes through every line,...
  September 4th, 2025 16:28
• The Blood of a Self-Sacrifice (NinjaGirl) Beautifully done, 🥷. The repetition works like an echo of...
  September 4th, 2025 16:27
• This has to stop (Orchidee) Does Fido like spinach? 🤮🤪 Me suggests you feed \'im bones! 🦴
  September 4th, 2025 16:22
• The Perfect Meet-Cute (Teddy.15) Wow! Stunning photo, Teddy...paired with a stunning Senryu! Powerfully...
  September 4th, 2025 11:15
• Firewall (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, this carries weight. The spark, the flame, the blaze...all stack...
  September 3rd, 2025 11:38
• we met again, mid-sentence (Arqios) My friend, this is luminous. The pause becomes punctuation, silence agreed...
  September 3rd, 2025 11:36
• Read till your eyes bleed (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this one sparkles with bite. The pearls, the roses, the hoarded...
  September 3rd, 2025 11:31
• On This Special Day (Tom Dylan) Tom, this is tender. The love comes through in the small rituals...bad...
  September 3rd, 2025 11:27
• Sovereign Citizen (Doggerel Dave) My friend, this hits sharp. “Capitalism doesn’t make you...
  September 3rd, 2025 10:57
• My Morning Routine (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) Hayleigh, wonderful write. The ritual and the mirror build to that...
  September 3rd, 2025 10:53
• Callous Contemplation (NinjaGirl) Dearest 🥷, this one hit me deep. The stillness around those thoughts...
  September 3rd, 2025 10:50
• One Time Only (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Wonderful poem, Kurt! The artist/poet should definitely get this. Well...
  September 2nd, 2025 10:11
• Our Story (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) My friend, this is tender. The love of God woven into shared story and...
  September 2nd, 2025 10:07
• the quill\'s nocturne (Arqios) My friend, this is haunting. The orchard of ink, the moth on the...
  September 2nd, 2025 10:03
• Plastic legacy (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this is sharp. The images stack heavy...plastic plants, asphalt...
  September 2nd, 2025 09:24
• Driving Offence (Tom Dylan) Tom, this cracked me up. The chaos of traffic and swearing builds so...
  September 2nd, 2025 09:20
• An Ode To Grief (Teddy.15) My friend, I’ve walked with grief in its many forms too…and the way...
  September 2nd, 2025 09:19
• The Keeper of The Flame (KnightOfCups) Wonderfully written and a powerful metaphore. Love lighthouses too. So,...
  September 1st, 2025 14:21
• Scratching the Surface of a Woman\'s Smile (Teddy.15) Only the guilty would feel need to defend! LOL! Besides, being manly is...
  September 1st, 2025 14:20
• what else is there to say? (NinjaGirl) Oh.........my...........fucking............damn.. This poem deserves to...
  September 1st, 2025 14:06
• Three For Monday (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Monday\'s triumphant triptych, that closing line in “Betwixt &...
  September 1st, 2025 14:01